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Snowfur (Q) - Declined

Thar she blows! I wanted to do a white cat because I haven't done one since.. Whiteberry. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:04 Fri Nov 8

Define the shading. Pretty! —Jayce(19:28, 11/8/2013)

Define the eye depth a bit, too? Queen Beebs 21:16, November 8, 2013 (UTC)

Reups! Thanks! ѼAMBERѼ P U M P K I N V S O R E O11:31 Sun Nov 10

I think her eyes still need to be defined better. Maybe make her black pupils wider? Amazing job, Amber! --User:Brightpool/Sig 19:28, November 10, 2013 (UTC)

Could you smooth out the shading on the upper chest just a bit? It's a bit blotched. Great job! Splook ^sweet ^{^creature} 00:41 Tue Nov 12

Reups! Hi. Thank yooou, ѼAMBERѼ P U M P K I N V S O R E O18:40 Tue Nov 12

recheck your lightsource _{use a sig sub page maooo >;c} User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:08 Fri Nov 15

Could you specify what you mean? Just saying that is extremely vague and not really helpful at all, imho. —Jayce(04:39, 11/16/2013)

Lol you're right. The tail and belly read that the light coming from our right, and the hind leg off the ground as well as the face read coming from the left, and the other legs are too flat to read. I'll make a tutorial and put it up on a subpage of mine, I'm working on it. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{18:33 Sat Nov 16}

Could you smooth out the shading on the chest? It's starting to get a tad blotchy. Queen Beebs 23:29, November 18, 2013 (UTC)

I think the ear <--- this way needs a bit more gray. Arcticblizzard ^{Booyakasha Shredhead!}

Reups Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:07 Wed Nov 20

Where's your light source coming from? Rain legs 00:40, November 21, 2013 (UTC)

Wow, that's great, Amber! Her pupils need to be more wider. *Swanflutter* Warriors is my life~ 06:18, November 22, 2013 (UTC)

Eye style is artist's choice Swan. Paleh Send help 09:14,11/23/2013

Still working? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:05, November 27, 2013 (UTC)

The top left sorry I've been ill Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly17:32 Thu Nov 28

Can you smudge the gray on the ear tips maybe a bit, as it looks a bit hard-edged at this moment. Stoneclaw 00:13,11/30/2013

Still working? Queen Beebs 20:22, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Reups It's been a month tomorrow *wails* Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:27 Fri Dec 6

CBA? —Jayce(20:13, 12/9/2013)

Sorry to interrupt, but could you smooth out and define the tail shading some, and define the light on the furthest hind foot? Queen Beebs 20:48, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Also, have the shading run along this >> side of the belly, as it's throwing off the light source? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{02:01 Wed Dec 11}

Reups Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:19 Thu Dec 12

Smooth out the back shading - it appears a bit blotchy. Also, thin out the shading on the tail's tip - it looks a bit too gray. Queen Beebs 21:47, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

I think you may have forgotten to have the shading run along the side of the belly with the shoulder, rather than the thigh, which is where you currently have it. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{03:48 Fri Dec 13}

Define the shading. This is amazing! --User:Glitterpelt/Sig 01:24, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, honestly. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{08:53 Sun Dec 15}

I disagree. I think it should be defined along the legs, and I believe the tail should be given more light on it. She's also looking slightly gray, but not too gray where it becomes an issue. —Jayce(08:55, 12/15/2013)

Define the gray on our right ear.. it seems a lot lighter than our left one. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 21:41, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Queen Beebs 19:44, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, but it'd been a week and this has been up for more than a month. Declined ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:28, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Mothflight (Kit) - For Approval

File:Mothflight.kit.png Comments? -Feather 17:16, November 30, 2013 (UTC)

Define and expand the shading. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:35 Sat Nov 30

I think the body shading itself is fine and doesn't need to be expanded, but it does on the feet and maybe on the tail. —Jayce(18:49, 12/1/2013)

Thicken the shading along her side/back. Rain legs 20:41, December 1, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Feather 16:33, December 3, 2013 (UTC)

Define the leg shading just a bit, and her back paw looks a bit flat. Maybe darken the shading around the edges? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:24, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Feather 11:46, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

There's waste around the paws. Also, assuming your light source is coming from, you should probably erase some shading on/add a highlight to the tail. Daz zy 13:21, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Feather 15:58, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(20:17, 12/9/2013)

Sorry to interrupt, but there's some light from the chest leaking into the haunch area. Fill that part in, and I'll re-CBA. Queen Beebs 20:51, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -Feather 18:26, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Blur her shading a little more- it looks blotchy almost, in some sections. Smooth it all out, so the transition is less choppy. Rain legs 05:18, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:15, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading altogether. x.x -Feather 18:34, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out the chest highlight some, and add some depth to the shading. Queen Beebs 19:44, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Mitzi (KP) (Q) ~ For Approval

Evrett's a lazy bum and didn't feel like making the image himself. xD He says she's also got darker patches so Imma go fix that now. —Jayce(00:47, 12/2/2013)

Re-uploaded. <internal screaming because pattern> —Jayce(00:58, 12/2/2013)

The white looks a bit gray, mostly on the face, belly and tail. Absolutley sponetaneous❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:46, December 2, 2013 (UTC)

It's not white, Sorrel. It's supposed to be gray. —Jayce(17:55, 12/2/2013)

Blur or lighten up the stomach shading a tad? It makes it look like a different color compared to the rest of the gray. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:23, December 5, 2013 (UTC)

I don't actually get what you mean? It looks to be the same color to me... —Jayce(01:30, 12/6/2013)

I think the stomach shading is fine as well, since it's shading, but some of it is leaking where it meets the arm ouo Queen Beebs 20:52, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shsding on the tail a bit? david ^🌈 02:29, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. "shsding"? What's that? =P —Jayce(18:30, 12/10/2013)

Remove a little of her forehead shading, and sharpen your shoulder shading a touch more. Rain legs 05:18, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Huzzah. —Jayce(05:23, 12/12/2013)

Are the changes showing? Rain legs 00:11, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

They should be? I removed some of the forehead shading and sharped the other shading like I was told.. —Jayce(04:34, 12/14/2013)

Looks fine to me, CBA? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:48, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

You wanted a reminder so here it is. Remove a little more forehead shading, like described in the Skype thing. Rain legs 03:21, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Eh. —Jayce(20:23, 12/20/2013)

Cloud (KM) (Q) - For Approval

-phew- c: Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 23:59, December 3, 2013 (UTC)

Ooh, purty! Smuge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more and maybe thin the shading a bit on the legs ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 00:05, December 4, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light on the back leg closest to us. Love the eyes! Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:32 Fri Dec 6

Reuploaded. wheee. Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 00:31, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Why are the mudspots on the belly paler and more blurred? Or is that my monitor? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{03:21 Wed Dec 11}

I think the mudspots look fine. The shading looks a tad bit harsh, could you lighten it or tint the shading more? Iveh Yo ! 18:25, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The mudspots are paler because of shading and the smear of mud probably shouldn't be consistent. I lightened it slightly but some of the depth has been sacrificed. c: Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 21:41, December 15, 2013 (UTC)

Can you darken it just a teeny-tiny bit more? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{04:04 Mon Dec 16}

Alder (Ki) ~ For Approval

hi changes are here and I'll do stuff when I get home from work. —Jayce(20:36, 12/7/2013)

Smudge the gray some more? Queen Beebs 20:44, December 7, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I don't want to smudge it too terribly much, I hope you don't mind. —Jayce(17:50, 12/8/2013)

Mind defining the shading on the paws a little more? I like this a lot. c: Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 22:16, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine for now, but if others agree with you, I'll go ahead and do it. —Jayce(22:17, 12/8/2013)

Just a little more. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:10 Mon Dec 9

Re-uploaded. i redid it again because my layers merged ;-; plus I like this —Jayce(06:10, 12/9/2013)

Define the shading? This is sooo cute o.o ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:54, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Hmm —Jayce(20:11, 12/9/2013)

Mind telling me which direction the light source is coming from? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:49, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Looks like to me it's coming from the upper right ouo. Could you define the tail shading, perhaps? I have to squint to see it. Queen Beebs 20:53, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Ah! That would make more sense. Thanks, Beebs. cx Cloudy, may you define the tail shading please? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:58, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

I know white pattern realism isn't something that's enforced, so it's your choice, but I'd still strongly recommend using a more realistic white pattern. This one's fairly unrealistic, and I think the image would look better as a whole with a more plausible pattern. But as I said, it's up to you since it's not an enforced rule or requirement. Paleh Send help 00:49,12/10/2013

Darkfrost, please don't repeat Beebs' comment. Also, Paleh, I'll go ahead and fix it up a bit since I'm really not in the mood to have the image nominated or a dozen comments telling me to change it. —Jayce(05:48, 12/10/2013)

The only reason I repeated, is because I thought you'd say that the tail shading was fine, when it definitely wasn't. So, my apologizes. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 13:08, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Okay can you try and not be offensive, please? Perhaps next time, you could phrase it a little nicer? ._. Anyways, re-uploaded and I basically just went back to the other pattern I had with a few fixes. —Jayce(18:27, 12/10/2013)

I wasn't being offensive? I'm sorry if it sounded like that, but it really wasn't. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 23:56, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

"...because I thought you'd say that the tail shading was fine, when it {definitely wasn't}."_{brackets inserted by me} seems a little offensive imho, just for future reference. Moving on, smudge the markings a teensy tiny bit more? This is cute! OuO User:Kelpsey/Sig _{01:54 Wed Dec 11}

I'd rather not smudge them but if someone else agrees then I guess I'll do it? —Jayce(07:03, 12/11/2013)

Smudge the white marking a little more, because she's in a long-haired blank and her fur would be a touch more crazy. x3 Rain legs 05:14, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Beep. —Jayce(05:19, 12/12/2013)

Sorry if I sound rude, but the way you smudged the patches doesn't flow with the fur. Like, at the top (I guess the white is kind of shaped like a cross, so) under the extended parts at the sides, it's smudged downwards, but at the lower part, its smudged side-to-side. Either have the majority of it side to side (with a little curve when necessary) or Down (which is probably more realistic)? I'm sorry if I sound offensive. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{09:07 Thu Dec 12}

White placement isn't an enforced part of the whole "realism thing", which I still think we're getting far too out of hand with that, and I'd think smudging would apply to that. Honestly, I think it's fine, and it's not that bad... —Jayce(12:22, 12/12/2013)

I think it should be smudged a little more, as she's long-haired and a kitten. It'd look a bit scrappy, and trust me, you won't be over-smudging it right now. Rain legs 00:10, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Oversmudged to one person isn't the same to another. —Jayce(00:55, 12/16/2013)

Darken the shading a touch more? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:49, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

I'd rather not, actually. It clashes too much with the white, and makes the gray look really bad. —Jayce(04:55, 12/17/2013)

Then shall we go CBA? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 23:35, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt, but the shading should be on the other side of the face. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{02:18 Thu Dec 19}

I've shaded like this on other images before, and I've been told it's fine. I'd rather another opinion before I change it. —Jayce(03:52, 12/19/2013)

Kelpsey's right, and the shading should be switched on the tail, too. Or you could leave those the same and switch what side of the body its on. Your choice, but the first option would be easiest ouo Rain legs 04:24, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

cackles and I redid the pattern again. Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:21, 12/20/2013)

Owl Eyes (Ki) ~ For Approval

this is little owl eyes please rate --Velvetmoon (talk) 00:06, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

The lineart seems to be a different color than black. Also, define/add shading, the image looks choppy, and the eyes look cross-eyed. Also, please remove the alignment. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:50 Sun Dec 8

I'm pretty sure there's no citation for Owl Eyes as a kit? Daz zy 02:49, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Yes there is in Thunder Rising. --Neverendingmoon (talk) 02:57, December 8, 2013 (UTC)Neverendingmoon

Yes, he's Turtle Tail's kit. Is the lineart blurred, or is it my screen?❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 03:02, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

My bad, I don't own that book. He already has a kit image, so a SW will have to decline this, I'm afraid. Daz zy 03:03, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

But they're not confirmed to be the same, Dazzle, no matter what the similarity - we'll have to wait for it to be confirmed. Until then, he gets this. This should be named 'Owl Eyes.kit.png', upload it over Amber's old version.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 03:19, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

I fixed cross eyes and all the line arts there and no blured line art. --Velvetmoon (talk) 09:49, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading? I can't see any. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 22:15, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Currently the image is a .jpg, could you please upload it as a .png? Also, there appears to be a background, that needs to be made transparent. Shim mer♫ 23:19, 12/8/2013

Eyes need to be enlarged, since those are what he's named for. Also there's waste everywhere. If you're not already, try using layers in your image. Daz zy 12:22, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry about all the problems I fixed what I could so theres that --Velvetmoon (talk) 23:51, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

I still don't ssee any shading. If you'd like, I could send you a charart tutorial video to your email. It will help you get a basic understanding..If you want me to, let me know your email and I'll send it once I finish the video. Also, your lineart is blurred/shaded over with colors other thaan black. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 00:18, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Eyes need to be amber instead of yellow.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:13, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawn--Velvetmoon (talk) 23:32, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Well, I'm not sure how big his eyes should be. Let me know if they should be bigger. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 01:12, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

Define the eye depth and define the light source. I think this would be a good example of a light source that makes sense. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}1:24 Wed Dec 11

Smudge the earpink. Daz zy 09:48, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? —Jayce(00:58, 12/16/2013)

Yes I am..I'm re-uploading tonight. Instead, it's only been 5 days..I thought you only remind when it's been 6?? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 01:11, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Usually between four and six days is when /I/ remind people. What others do is their choice. Only giving them a day warning seems too harsh, so I normally give a "still working" come the fourth or early fifth day. ^^ —Jayce(01:25, 12/17/2013)

Re-uploaded. Lol sorry, that's totally understandable. I was just a bit curious. I tried the shading style, Hawky, and I hope it worked out fine. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 04:09, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Define your light source ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:50, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Err I don't think Wikia is showing changes, because my light source works now, and it's not showing me the changes. [1] Here is the ezimba link.. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 05:06, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Remove the upper >>> leg shading, where it meets the chest. Also, some shading is leaking on >> rear, where it meets the leg. Queen Beebs 19:58, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, Beebs, but I'm not sure what you mean? May someone help me understand please? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:48, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Alt Q) ~ For Approval

Comments? Queen Beebs 19:24, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Nice work! I would say define the shading on the tail, it's a bit hard to see. ✪GINGER✪ 22:03, Dec. 9, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone else disagrees ouo Queen Beebs 19:14, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think it needs defined..maybe add more depth to it? Looks pretty, Beebs. c: Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 19:15, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

The depth itself is fine, I think. Although since she is dark gray, would you object to adding a little bit of light in the non-shaded areas so it doesn't appear to be all in shading? If you add the lighter parts (but not all that light), that might make it seem a little more... "depth-y" for lack of a better word? —Jayce(19:18, 12/9/2013)

re-up Queen Beebs 19:26, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

The face's highlights, particularly on her left cheek, seem a bit bright for the light coming behind her. The head would block most light, especially on that side of the face, causing no shading. Hawk Swoop is an example of what I'm trying to describe..her light is coming form behind her and a little to her right, so you'd get thin, narrow highlights on one side of her face. Rain legs 05:10, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

re-up I removed that highlight but that's it - I don't think her face highlights aren't that bright, imo ouo Queen Beebs 20:18, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Remember that your light is coming from behind her rear- her forehead, that is, if she has one, will block most of the light. You're working with a 3D shape, therefore, there will be parts covered entirely by things that block the light from reaching that point. Trust me on this. Rain legs 00:09, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

re-up mkay Queen Beebs 00:24, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light on the face ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since it shouldn't be too bright for this light source Queen Beebs 19:21, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

The highlight should be stretched out along the side of her right cheek, as the light is coming from behind. There would also be a small highlight on her right lip, and up the side of that ear. Does she have earpink? Rain legs 01:33, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

re-up whoops, I forgot it Queen Beebs 02:12, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:51, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Stretch out that highlight summore- it should be running up and down, right along the lineart of her cheek. Rain legs 01:55, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 01:59, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Are the changes showing? Rain legs 04:25, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Yup, they are, for me. Queen Beebs 19:16, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Define the light a bit more on the face. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:47, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Again, I think it's fine, since it shouldn't be too bright - or else I'd be told to dull it. Queen Beebs 19:35, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Ashfoot (Q) ~ For Approval

She's purrty. c: Comment away~ Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 22:12, December 8, 2013 (UTC)

Smooth out and define the shading on the belly. The defining only needs a little bit though. Nice job, Frosty! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:09 Mon Dec 9

Re-uploaded. Thank you, Hawky! c: Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:08, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, especially on the tail and all four legs/paws, and perhaps darken it a little bit as well. —Jayce(19:19, 12/9/2013)

Errr..I hope you don't mind me saying no to that? I looked over the deputy for shading strategy, colors, etc. And this shading is how light and defined the deputy's shading is. Unless there is a certain part that doesn't match up the deputy's shading, then tell me what part.. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:43, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Very well, I defined it a teensy bit more. I wish not to touch the shading anymore, because I wish to keep it like this. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 21:10, December 9, 2013 (UTC)

Facial shading looks rather blotchy; smooth it out a little?❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:38, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Darkfrost, different blanks have different shading needs. Just gonna point this out, but what works on one image, like the deputy blanks, might not work on another image. I actually am gonna ask you to define the shading on <-- back leg, as it appears rather flat. —Jayce(18:42, 12/10/2013)

Re-uploaded. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 00:09, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

Blur the shading in the shoulder tons, as well as the belly. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{02:04 Wed Dec 11}

Define your light source ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think the light source is visible enough, but define the shadow a little on the face and erase some shading near the left side of the shoulder. And actually, instead of just the shoulder and the belly can you blur everything in general generously? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{23:59 Mon Dec 16}

Re-uploaded. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 04:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

It looks like you have two light sources on her; her face and tail say it's coming from this --> side but the belly says it's coming somewhere between here <-- and behind her ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:52, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I hope the belly shading works more with my light source now. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 05:02, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Here [2] if wikia is not showing my changes..because I don't see them. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 05:11, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Kommentare? [That's German for "Comments?" xD] Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 14:08, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Shading appears blotchy on the face. —Jayce(19:48, 12/20/2013)

Mosspelt (Alt Q)~ For Approval

I don't know if this should be for approval or evaluation since Alder got declined, but here she is anyway. Click here if the wiki is being a butt.

Make the highlights less bright, and define the unshaded parts on the front legs. I believe she would get this. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}2:11 Tue Dec 10

Reups I think the highlights are fine, personally, but I'll lower the opacity if others agree. Here if wikia is being a butt again Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:03, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

I agree. However, I don't think you should lower the opacity, just make it an orangey color and set it on overlay, that should do the trick. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{01:11 Wed Dec 11}

Reups I can do zat Emberpoppy7 (talk) 21:08, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

They're still a little bright. Layer mode>Multiply, then colorize if you use GIMP. Not sure what to do if you don't, though. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{23:47 Wed Dec 11}

I use photoshop elements. I'll see what I can do though. Reups Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:53, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

If the texture is supposed to be tabby stripes, perhaps define their shape a little? They look almost like darker tortie patches, which they shouldn't be. If it's texture, then thin it out, so that it looks like lines of hair instead of giant patches. Rain legs 05:08, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

This better? Emberpoppy7 (talk) 13:31, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Are they stripes or texture? Rain legs 00:07, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Texture. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 01:55, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

It was still crappy so I changed it. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 02:14, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Since it's texture, smudge it to go a bit more with the direction of the fur, so it looks like fur. Cinderpelt and several other images are good examples of this, if a reference would be helpful. Rain legs 04:57, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Oh god that took forever I couldn't get it to look right so I completely redid the texture. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Very good! Curve it a little more along her belly, so it makes a super lop-sided 'u' shape, almost. Just a touch of an upwards curve on our left side. Rain legs 01:54, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

That better? Emberpoppy7 (talk) 21:11, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt Q) ~ Withdrawn

Let's try this again; I'm sure this is alright now❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:20, December 10, 2013 (UTC)

Can you tint the shading to more of a reddish-brown? Iveh Yo ! 18:13, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

Looks fine to me.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:39, December 11, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy... the shading is kind of blotchy on the belly. Smooth it out? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:44 Wed Dec 11

Reups redid the shading.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:43, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

The shading needs to cover a bit more of the belly, on the half closer to her tail. Her chest and entire front would cover most of the light, and the roundness of her belly would provide more of a shadow. Think of a sphere, as that's virtually what you're working with. Rain legs 00:07, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Reups❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:22, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

Even out your shading and define your light source ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:19, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Do you mean blur the shading by 'even out'?❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:33, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

That might be what she means... but in case she doesn't, would you mind blurring the shading a bit? —Jayce(00:01, 12/17/2013)

I have no clue what "even out" means, and I think light source is fine, but blur the belly shading a bit, maybe? darn you snow edit conflicts User:Kelpsey/Sig _{00:04 Tue Dec 17}

That's basically repeating what Skye said, 'blur the shading'. Please do not repeat in future.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:50, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Reups I'm not blurring the shading no more, otherwise it'll look flat. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:53, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Shading's leaking off the side of her belly and along her rump, and it should be sharpened overall. Rain legs 01:53, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reups redid it ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:49, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawn, this is bugging me and I want to work on something else ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 23:37, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

I'll take over. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:09 Sat Dec 21

Nettlespot (Q) - For Approval

All colors came from her warrior and old queen. Comments? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:22, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Add a little more light to the tail? It seems to be all in shadow... either that or it's just dark. —Jayce(04:51, 12/12/2013)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:54, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

The shadow behind the head and along the shoulder seems to just provide a ring around the head, and it looks kind of funny. Perhaps round it out to show that there's a shoulder there, and that the belly itself is very round and prominent? (This is hard to word, sorry D:) Rain legs 05:06, December 12, 2013 (UTC)

Expand the shading where the belly is lowest. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{03:35 Fri Dec 13}

Re-uploaded I'd rather not touch the belly shading because it'll throw my light source ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 05:09, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Kelps on this one. Just expand it a little more towards the shoulder shading. Looks pretty. c: Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 04:19, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

I'm gonna side with Scar on this one... It seems perfectly fine to me. o.o —Jayce(04:46, 12/17/2013)

Imho, it confuses the light source the way she has it now. Maybe could she darken the belly shading? to show it's coming from the right? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 04:53, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

I still think it's fine and if I darken the shading much more, the whole thing's just gonna start looking reddish brown and I'll lose the spots ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:58, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Could you enlarge some of the spots? Just in the super clumped areas. Rain legs 01:51, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:04, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt A) ~ For Approval

I'd believe she'd get this, since she was depicted as ginger-and-white in The Ultimate Guide, and was described as an apprentice. Comments? Queen Beebs 22:54, December 13, 2013 (UTC)

In the ear on our right, the earpink has a gap at the left side of the ear. Fill that? Sorry if I sound confusing lol User:Kelpsey/Sig _{19:34 Sun Dec 15}

It's fine, imo - that was how the earpink was smudged ouo Queen Beebs 19:35, December 15, 2013 (UTC)

She's pretty! The chest, belly, and the patch on the hindquarter look a bit gray.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 19:37, December 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine as well - it's the shading that causes it, so of course it'd be darker than normal o3o Queen Beebs 19:46, December 15, 2013 (UTC)

Actually, can you tint it orange the very, very slightest? If it's slight enough, it won't blend with the ginger, I promise, and it won't look gray anymore. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{04:07 Mon Dec 16}

Sharpen the white on the forehead ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:20, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think it's fine, honestly User:Kelpsey/Sig _{04:47 Mon Dec 16}

re-up Queen Beebs 19:32, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Did you smudge her base ginger? It's not smudged on the other images, but it looks like it is on here. —Jayce(04:55, 12/17/2013)

Yep. Queen version is. And it's and alt anyways. User:Kelpsey/Sig _{05:34 Tue Dec 17}

So? These are alts that are supposed to match. Regardless, it really shouldn't be smudged, since it's matching the alt warrior, and that's not smudged. —Jayce(05:39, 12/17/2013)

It is. Would you mind if I blurred those smudged parts some, then? Queen Beebs 19:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Blur them a lot more. There shouldn't be a smudged look. Rain legs 01:49, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

re-up then wouldn't the alt queen get tweaked to have blurred parts, rather than smudged? Queen Beebs 01:52, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Cinderfur (Star) - For Evaluation

Here's Cinderfur for PCA. Comments? ✪GINGER✪ 02:10 14 Dec 2013 (UTC)

Define the facial shading some. Nice for your first charart, Griff! Queen Beebs 02:19, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

Define the overall shading, actually, not just the facial. —Jayce(03:58, 12/14/2013)

Define the tail and forepaw light.❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:47, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Still working? Queen Beebs 19:18, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

River (K) - for approval

File:River.kit.pngRiver's kit image! I'll try to have this reuploaded on Wednesday, since that's the next day I have off. How can I improve on this? Iveh Yo ! 19:06, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

Would you like .xcf? The stripes could be sharpened some. Queen Beebs 19:11, December 14, 2013 (UTC)

Please! Iveh Yo ! 19:15, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you! Iveh Yo ! 19:51, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Add a few more stripes to his hind foot, and the bottom of his rear. Queen Beebs 20:14, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok there you go, but I cannot add any more because of the limited space, and it would become crowded with anymore. Iveh Yo ! 20:18, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Bess (Q) ~ For Approval

ayy lmao david ^🌈 01:46, December 15, 2013 (UTC)

CBA? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:59, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little more? Rain legs 01:46, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded david ^🌈 06:30, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Dawncloud (E) - For Approval

Comments? --User:Wildd Side/Sig 09:32 Sun Dec 15

Thicken the stripes just a teeny bit? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{19:23 Sun Dec 15}

I think they're thick enough, honestly. This is very pretty *.* —Jayce(00:59, 12/16/2013)

I think the ones that have forks in them (Y-shaped, if you will) should just be thickened a teeny, tiny bit more, so the contrast between them and the plain straight ones is more prominent- they're thicker than the straight ones on the apprentice image. Rain legs 01:45, December 18, 2013 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Q) - For Approval

*sighs* With a heavy heart, my one last image. Comments? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{02:52 Mon Dec 16}

Scootch the chest highlight to our right a little more, as the shoulder would shade the area it's currently in. Rain legs 01:31, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

Do you think it'd be better if I just eliminated it altogether? User:Kelpsey/Sig _{05:35 Tue Dec 17}

Yes, and the one on her left cheek. Rain legs 01:43, December 18, 2013 (UTC) Reuploaded. It looked really flat when I tried so I moved both "highlights". User:Kelpsey/Sig _{00:31 Fri Dec 20}

Tawnypelt (Q) ~ For Approval

This was fun to make. I adjusted the earpink color so it isn't neon pink, and if enough people have an issue with it, then I will go with the original color, but I'd much rather prefer to leave it this way. Rain legs 04:41, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Add more shading on the left side of the belly as well as under it, and on the face as well. Beautiful, Legs! User:Kelpsey/Sig _{04:45 Mon Dec 16}

Her light is coming from right into her face, so it's not entirely from the right side. Therefore, especially with the size of her belly, most of her face and her belly would be in light. Rain legs 04:53, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

Maybe make the patches just a little more similar to her other images? I know they don't have to be perfectly identical but these patches look a little too...abundant, if that makes sense, as in there's a lot less of the blue showing. Daz zy 07:02, December 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think they're fine. None of the other images show that side and the general style is still the same. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}1:47 Wed Dec 18 2013

Any further comments? Rain legs 00:00, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Is there intentionally supposed to be no shading on --> side of the chest closest to the lineart? If that's part of your light source then ignore me; still learning this one. —Jayce(00:03, 12/21/2013)

Yes, as the light's coming from right in front of it. Rain legs 01:08, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Q) ~ For Approval

idk if she should have the scar or not david ^🌈 07:42, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

I don't think so, because she wasn't described with it in BotC, which I believe is set before the part in TR? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 15:44, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

I'd believe she'd have it, as Crookedstar is a kit around the time the ShadowClan battle happens, and Willowkit and Graykit are not mentioned at the time. Queen Beebs 19:16, December 17, 2013 (UTC)

There are two unfilled pixels above the eyelash and under the ear. Incredible! ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:13 Tue Dec 17

Re-uploaded. david ^🌈 01:41, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Kit) - For Approval

Ewewewewew this is what happens when you rush yourself all of a sudden x.x Comments? Daz zy 14:04, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Cinders (Q) - For Approval

Colors taken from the grayscaled old queen version, because that one is a bit easier to work with. Wheee revisiting old chararts and bringing them back to life is fun! Iveh Yo ! 20:50, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Woo~ Pretty! Blur the shading and define the depth in the eyes ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:08, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Minty (Q) ~ For Approval

File:Minty.queen.png ew ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 21:19, December 19, 2013 (UTC)

Reups just redid the shading - I prefer this a lot more now ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 02:11, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Hal (Ro) ~ For Approval

I know it doesn't match 103%, but this was a tough pattern. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:53 Fri Dec 20

Sunfish (Q) ~ For approval

http://www.ezimba.com/work/131221C/ezimba19209212822000.png I got all the colours from her Warrior image, comments? Tiny ^{Forever And Always ♫} 18:56, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading. Rain legs 00:03, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Songbird (Q) ~ For Approval

I quite like this ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 23:48, December 20, 2013 (UTC)

Point the stripe tips a bit, they look a touch paintbrushy ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 02:20, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

Splashnose (Q) - For Approval

meh... Trying the same thing I did with Honeyfern's pattern. Changes Comments? ~Scarlet wind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:27, December 21, 2013 (UTC)

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