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Stormcloud (KP) ~ For Approval

Is it possible for me to get the whole set later? I already have the others finished, I just need this approved. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 15:52, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his hip a bit, and define the earpink, it's hard to see. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 22:07, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

For the hundrenth time, my shading is always smudged. AKA no, I won't blur it. Re-upped for earpink tho. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 23:02, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Can you smudge the shading some more? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:31 Tue Aug 26 23:31, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Tbh, I can't tell it's smudged, and I would have made the same mistake Jayie did. Don't get snippy- it's honestly hard to see that it's smudged shading. Also, what's up with the tail stripes? I can't tell they're there because of the shading. —Jayce(23:40, 8/26/2014)

..Did I come across as rude? I'm sorry, that wasn't my intention V_V Anyway, the tail stripes are rings. Should I make them more visible? ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 00:03, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Could you please, Shinx? That would be lovely. ^.^ —Jayce(00:23, 8/27/2014)

Lighten the ear pink a bit, or at least make it more visible. Also, he kind of looks blind with the eyes so dull like that...perhaps lighten them up or sumtin'....Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 01:34, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the eye depth while you're lightening his eyes. Also, even though the shading is smudged it still looks way too dark and awkward on this cat so if you would please blur it down some that'd be nice. You'll see if you go up and look at Littlebird , me and Cloudy(Jayce)I'm old lol were telling Ducksplash the same thing.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 14:32, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups I'm sorry, but no, I won't blur it. I tried just now, it makes it look strange to me. I can lighten it if you want, or change to blurred shading (which I'd rather not do if I don't have to), or put a layer of blurred shading on top, but I can't blur the shading that's already smudged. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 14:49, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Hmm, why not try both methods that you just suggested, and upload them to tinypic or something, and let me see what each version looks like? —Jayce(21:15, 8/27/2014)

http://i60.tinypic.com/qn5mo0.png http://i60.tinypic.com/15heo3m.png Here ya go. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 22:28, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

I like the first link better personally.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 00:10, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

That's the blurred shading, and again, I REALLY don't want to switch to it if I don't have to. If more then one person tells me to, I guess I can do it, but I don't like using blurred shading much. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 09:58, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

I think if you just smudge it more itll turn out right. david ^🌈 10:00, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Smudged the shading more, and added a bit of texture. I can remove it if you want. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 15:00, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is very odd please expand it, blur it, and then define it to soften it. (protip: you can both smudge and blur shading wow) -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}21:29 Fri Aug 29 2014

I'll go define it and stuff, but as I said before (read up a bit), I've tried blurring it, it looks strange. o_o ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 21:36, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Then try a different tint, or even black, if you're not using it. Still trying to figure out what people have against using black shading; I like it. Changing what you're shading with can have amazing results. —Jayce(12:22, 8/30/2014)

Reups Redid the shading. It was black to begin with. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 15:28, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Since we don't have a specific shade of gray for him, would you mind making him a more neutral shade of gray? You don't have to go much darker, but perhaps try between #C1C1C1 and #A1A1A1? —Jayce(20:42, 8/31/2014)

Re-upped Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:06, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Yes, I'm aware this is artist's choice, but could you lighten up the shading a bit? It looks a tad too dark. Also, define the eye depth. Queen Beebs 14:56, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

It's only artist's choice when it's not obnoxiously dark, making the pattern hard to see, ect. You're allowed to ask someone to lighten the shading- artist's choice is nonsense sometimes, and only applies to smaller things. —Jayce(15:17, 9/2/2014)

The shading is fine. I can see the patter clearly, so imo, it doesn't need to be lightned. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:00, 09/4/2014

Well, I'm having issues seeing parts of it, and I think lowering the opacity...maybe between 5 and 15 percent (depends on how you have your shading and stuff) on the bar would possibly do the trick. Try around 15 at first, and if that's a bit too much, go back to what you had, and then lower it by, say, 11 or 12, and then keep doing the same thing. —Jayce(03:41, 9/4/2014)

Re-upp(ing, my internet's taking forever to load it)ed I kinda like dark shading, but yeah, it did need lightening. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:03, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Would maybe adding another thinner tail ring be acceptable? Like, between the last two on the tail? Between the one on the tail tip and the one after that. —Jayce(13:20, 9/6/2014)

That'd be very much acceptable, I'll do it when I get home. Hopefully the reupload page for Petalfur's kit will be loaded by then. Stupid internet >< Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:35, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Due to computer issues, I've lost the file. Please be patient while I redo V_V Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:26, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Finally reupped Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:47, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten that shading up, especially on the leg/haunch and back. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:11 PM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

It looks fine to me. It's already on a very low opacity, if I lighten it much more, I can't see it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:53, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

I agree wit Rocket- the whole "artist's choice" thing only goes so far. Please lighten it. —Jayce(13:59, 9/10/2014)

I know it does, I honestly dont give a crap about artist's choice. The opacity is literally like, twelve, and at least on my PC (Mind you, it's old and not really made for art) I could barely see it. I can lighten it, I suppose, when I'm not on mobile. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:00, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

It's making it hard for me to see the strips so if you would lighten it, that would be helpful. You don't need to get irritated. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:06 PM, Wed Sep 10, 2014

Re-upped I wasn't getting irritated, just stating why I didn't feel the need to lighten it. Anyway, I lightened the whole image, because the colors were bordering on dark grey. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:38, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

blur/smudge the haunch and front leg shading a bit more then it should be redy for CBa. david ^🌈 07:05, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-upped Shinxy used Thunderbolt!

Hmm, before I CBA this, think you could break up the stripes a bit more to make them more tabby looking? If not, that's totally fine. Queen Beebs 22:53, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Grasspaw (A) ~ For Approval

File:Grasspaw.apprentice.pngAnother pale brown tabby. :3 Added a thin texture. Maanhart ^{Speaking quietly ☽︎}☾ 12:25, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Add some light to the far back paw, and possibly the back? I think there would probably be some light there with your source. (If you don't use highlights, ignore me.)) ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 15:24, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Added some highlights on the paw and a bit on the end of her back. Maanhart ^{Speaking quietly ☽︎}☾ 17:33, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Can you define the ear pink on ----> side just a bit? ^Sil_ver^hmm 19:54, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Could you make her look a bit less green-ish. Tinting your shading brown/red might work. Also, for pale brown cats, I tend to use #9c6442 as a nice pale brown shade, but that's totally up to you if you want to do that. Queen Beebs 01:58, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink by removing a little bit of the shading, and made the shading brownish. :3 Maanhart ^{Speaking quietly ☽︎}☾ 10:08, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Earpink still needs to be define in the ---> ear. Looking good:)  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 13:56, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Try shifting your earpink layer around a bit... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:49 PM, Thu Sep 4, 2014

Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink a bit again. :3 Sorry for being late, school is starting again and I'm busy with my own wiki. And what do you mean with shifting the earpink layer around? Maanhart ^{Speaking quietly ☽︎}☾ 14:39, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

It still looks a tad green...perhaps try making the base coat more reddish, or use the hex code I gave above for it?? if you chose to use the hex code, then you should also set the stripe layer to multiply as well. I think that'd do the trick o3o Queen Beebs 22:01, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

I mean moving the ear pink layer over/under some layers of shading if it's on its own layer. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:41 PM, Sun Sep 7, 2014

The earpink is fine as-is. I can see it clearly, and not everyone has shading on the earpink. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:18 Tue Sep 9

Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(15:16, 9/10/2014)

Re-up ~ Made the fur color a little more reddish. Hope it's better now. c: Maanhart ^{Speaking quietly ☽︎}☾ 17:23, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the feets a tad more and I think this'll be ready. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:50, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Spikepaw (A) ~ For Approval

File:Spikepaw.apprentice.pngI'm on a roll. First time I've been happy with texture. Comments? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:15, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink a bit more.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 04:00, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:08, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on all four paws. Looks pretty!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 01:27, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Is that supposed to be texture? I can't tell, and it fades into the shading. Could you define that a lot? —Jayce(01:29, 9/5/2014)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 01:40, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try smudging the texture more - it looks like it's markings/stripes on the body. Queen Beebs 18:34, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:43, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see it at all on the tail now. Define that? Also, the texture should flow with the direction of the fur, so on the haunch, it should go down the leg toward the foot. If that makes any sense. If you need a demo, message me, and I can teach you. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 18:57, 09/6/2014

Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(20:54, 9/12/2014)

Reuploaded. I removed the texture. I'm going get more practice on it before I put it on an official image. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:28, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Snowpaw (OTS) (A) ~ For Evaluation

File:Snowpaw (OTS).apprentice.png First charart, so it's not brilliant. Colourpicked from his kit image. Not entirely sure how Evaluation differs from Approval, but it's to do with being a kit. So, evaluation? EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:11, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the waste around the charart and blur the shading on the tail and back leg a tiny bit more. This is good ofr a first charart c: ^Sil_ver^hmm 10:32, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Is that better? Does it still need more blurring? EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:49, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add more around the haunch. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:07, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet but I'll do another re-up of they don't in the next few minutes. EosOfTheDawn (talk) 14:47, September 2, 2014 (UTC)

I fixed the charart alignment for you. Define the shading slightly? Good job on your first charart. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:03 PM, Tue Sep 2, 2014

Blur the shading- also you don't need to mention fixing the charart alignment, just do it. =P —Jayce(20:09, 9/2/2014)

Re-uploaded Wiki's not showing the changes so look here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2me7g3p&s=8#.VAbt39tQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:28, September 3, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up that shading just a tick and define it (put a layer over it on the edges and blur is slightly less but set the layer opacity to the same as the original shading.} User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:16 PM, Wed Sep 3, 2014

Also if you use gimp I recommend the airbrush for your shading. That way it puts on a nice layer that is easily manageable and you can darken or lighten it to your liking. ;) nice job!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 12:44, September 4, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks for the tips! Is this better? I think it might still be too dark: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=f1xreu&s=8#.VAi29NtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 18:57, September 4, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe another tick of two on the opacity layer for all of your shading. Looking nice, Eos. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:46 PM, Thu Sep 4, 2014

Thanks! changes http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=aebrqb&s=8#.VAmlldtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 11:56, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Did you colour pick the eyes? I'm not sure if it's just me, but they're looking a bit red on my screen. Brick 20:05, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

^^same here^^ Maybe define the eye depth a bit and lighten them just a tick? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:21 PM, Fri Sep 5, 2014

I think the eyes are fine as they are. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:00 Fri Sep 5

The eyes are colourpicked. That's how they are on his kit image so I don't think I should change them.--EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:24, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little bit? It's looking pretty sharp. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 17:32, 09/6/2014

changes wasn't much blurring to do, I have to say. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=aebrqb&s=8#.VAmlldtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:05, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Not bad for a first. Add some light to the front of the far back paw, and possibly add some depth to the torso shading? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:32, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Shading could still be blurred some. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 22:21, 09/8/2014

The only shading that I think could be blurred is the head shading. Everything else looks fine to me. —Jayce(20:17, 9/9/2014)

Also, there's a huge block of waste. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:59, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Featherpaw (A) - For Approval

File:Featherpaw.app.png I did my best. Tigerbird-The-Great 01:03, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Can you darken/define the shading? And tone the earpink down some, it looks a little bright. You can just run the burn tool over it a few times, and that should do the trick. I like those eyes. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}1:13 Fri Sep 5

Smear a bit of the fur into the ears ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 18:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Tigerbird-The-Great 01:19, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge some more fur into the ears. Still looks a bit solid.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 04:31, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Oh and define the light on all four paws^^  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 19:45, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe lighten she shading just a tick? The stripes are getting a little lost. Nice job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:00 PM, Sat Sep 6, 2014

This is beautiful! I feel so proud right now Define the light on the lower part of the tail, and possibly the shading on the tailtip? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:39, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Still working? ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:48, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I will update soon. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I cannot smudge any fur into the ears. I need opinions. Tigerbird-The-Great 00:51, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Toadstep (SC) - For Approval

-gross sobbing- My poor baby! Also, I will fix the waste in the next reupload. Iveh Yo! 19:06, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the ear a bit more and define the shading a bit ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:08, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Try blurring/smudgning the earpink a bit more. The white on the right paw is higher than on the left paw, and the chest white could do with a bit more blurring plus a bit of defining on the shading. Also, the file should be named Toadstep.star.png. Brick 20:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading on >>>> paw a bit, too.Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:09, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

The shoulder should be black, not white. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 03:24, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the shading a little? Everywhere except for the haunch and face. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 17:43, 09/6/2014 Try making his eyes a bit more pale.

Define the overall shading while your at it.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:52, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Can you blur the white on his chest? It looks a bit hard edged. Poor Toadstep. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:40, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not changing the design on his paws, because it matches his other chararts,and his design is based off of my real cat, so uneven socks on the paws is realistic. Iveh Yo! 17:40, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the image. —Jayce(03:35, 9/10/2014)

Perhaps just make the eyes a tad bit more of a paler green to match his other images, and also either blur or smudge (Whatever they used on his other images) the white parts just a tad. --~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Shrewfoot (Star) ~ For Approval

 So, heres Shrewfoot.  I rushed on the shading; it looks insanely dark, so i will re-do it on the next upload. Comments?~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:39, September 5, 2014 (UTC)

The main part of the shading is pretty good- I'd say it just needs to be blurred a fair bit, and maybe lightened ever so slightly. —Jayce(21:42, 9/5/2014)

Add nosepink unless that was intentional. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:16 PM, Fri Sep 5, 2014

there is nosepink its just grey. david ^🌈 01:26, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Blur the shading and lighten it? Poor Shrewfoot, I liked her.--EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:27, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redid the shading; i just added a red tint, since the black made it look dark. Also, blurred it some more. Better?--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 23:44, September 6, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading with the black was fine, imho. You could lower the opacity of the black shading... also, blur this shading a lot, please, and lower the opacity of it, as it looks a bit too hardedged. why does everyone diss black shading nowadays???? .-. —Jayce(00:11, 9/7/2014)

Re-uploaded. Uh, i never said i was dissing black shading..? But okay. Blurred shading even more. (I've basically overly blurred this about 20 times) Is that better?--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 03:43, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

I said that, because a lot of people seem to be against shading with black..no matter the pelt color. And since her warrior was shaded with black, I think it's only fair to keep the same coloring, that way you don't get told to change the color. Idk, tint's not required to match, but the shade you've chosen appears to slightly throw off the color. The black didn't make it look too dark, and lowering the opacity probably would have fixed that... Also, define the lighter areas on the paws and tail, and blur the back shading (or whatever we're calling that idk anymore- I'm tired) —Jayce(04:28, 9/7/2014)

The shading is very dark, lighten it a tad? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:35, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made shading black again, and lightened it.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:25, September 7, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. —Jayce(15:53, 9/9/2014)

Your light source is off. Either add shading on the <-- end of the haunches and add a shadow on the back for the head or switch the side of the shading on the head and add some to the chest. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}15:57 Tue Sep 9 2014

I see nothing wrong with the light source. I've used this source on all of my Starclanners, and no one has complained before. Unless someone else agrees, i'd rather not change it. I will reupload later for the tail.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 12:10, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

And I think it's off too. Just because you used it on other images doesn't make it accurate. I get told that all the time. Usually, if Breezey comments, it's something important, and she's not someone you easily disagree with when it comes to chararts- she's a former lead, and a very amazing artist. She knows what she's talking about, and she made these blanks, so she knows the sources possible for this better than anyone, and if she says it's off, it probably is. This "unless someone else agrees" thing has become far too common for the whole of PCA. —Jayce(14:04, 9/10/2014)

Re-uploaded. I just extended her back shading going up the side so the light source would be coming from -->. Also, defined light on the tail and blurred shading some more. Better?--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 23:52, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it up. It looks too dark for the pelt color. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:03 Fri Sep 12

Owlwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval

Another StarClanner :3 SziriXxX (talk) 14:41, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the overall shading. This is good c:~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 15:16, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes on his back a bit.--crow!!!! 15:18, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes don't need to be smudged. They have to match his other images, Crow. —Jayce(15:20, 9/8/2014)

Re-ups Thanks Breezy c: SziriXxX (talk) 17:56, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

Extend the shoulder highlight farther up and add some shading on the bottom of the chest. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}15:54 Tue Sep 9 2014

Re-upsSziriXxX (talk) 19:10, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the stripes just a tad.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:01, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 15:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lilyheart (Alt A) ~ For Approval

She was described as tortoiseshell-and-white in the allegiances of BS, so she gets this, right? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:07 Mon Sep 8

Can you brighten up the white just a little bit? —Jayce(16:19, 9/10/2014)

Lighten the tail shading a bit, define the earpink some more, and mind defining the ginger flecks a tad more? They seem pale and not too noticible. This looks nice.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:04, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:44 Wed Sep 10

Brighten the belly white just a bit and this'll be perfect. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:44, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I'm scared that if I do that the shading will look flat... ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:53 Thu Sep 11

Shimmerpelt (Alt. W) ~ CBA

File:Shimmerpelt (BS).warrior.alt.png !!! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:40 PM, Mon Sep 8, 2014

Remove the waste between the legs and define the shading on both legs that are furthest from us. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 21:45, 09/8/2014

reup User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:49 PM, Mon Sep 8, 2014

darn i wanted it… enlarge and blur the ear-pink ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:13, September 8, 2014 (UTC)

the earpink's size is fine to be honest — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 22:19, 09/8/2014

I think it's fine as is. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:22 PM, Mon Sep 8, 2014

Blur the ear pink, and define the lighter areas. I can't see anything but almost solid black. Try a base of between #191919 and #121212 and see what you get. I can't see the lineart, or anything like that, at all...and coming from me, who loves darker colors on black cats, that's saying something o.O —Jayce(05:51, 9/9/2014)

I can see the lineart just fine... But when I get home I'll blur the earpink a bit more User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:43 AM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

At least add some highlights or something to brighten up some of the cat a little bit? I've had to do that with my black cats, and I really am having trouble seeing it. —Jayce(15:29, 9/9/2014)

Yeah she's so dark she looks flat. Lighten her a bit. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}15:51 Tue Sep 9 2014

I already added highlights, do you want me to just try to lighten those? As for the base, yes, I will lighten it a couple notches on the lightness scale. Although I can't quite see how she's flat... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:02 PM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

She's flat as in shading doesn't show up for her because she's so close to pure black. She looks like she's all one color. You don't need to take it as a personal offense. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}16:07 Tue Sep 9 2014

I was not taking it personally. I was just wondering how it looked flat, I can see the shading, highlights, and base just fine on my computer, but I will lighten it when I get home. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:09 PM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

Rocket, different monitors have different color levels, thus showing slightly different results. I know on mine, and on Breezey's, the base can be lightened a few shades- this will more than likely solve your "issue" of the image appearing a tad bit flat. Black cats are my favorite to make, and I know it's not as easy as it seems how to get the shading/highlights/base to work together. You gotta get it juuuuust the right shade in order to work. Otherwise it's slightly too dark, or dark gray. —Jayce(16:15, 9/9/2014)

I get that. Like I said above, I will fix it when I get home. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:16 PM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

reup User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:41 PM, Tue Sep 9, 2014

Lighten it some more, Rocket. I still see solid black. Hm try #333333 that will make the cat much more visible. ;)  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:09, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

It's fine at the darkenss it is. #333333 is much too light and appears dark gray. Dark gray and black are not the same thing. That is a good color for a stable dark gray cat, like Ferncloud's one alt, but for a black cat, it's way too light. Seeing all the lineart is not required, and the pelt she's got now is good. —Jayce(17:13, 9/10/2014)

CBA? david ^🌈 07:02, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Foxleap (Star) - For Approval

I haven't done this in ages. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}5:42 Tue Sep 9 2014

Because its not loading here. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}5:47 Tue Sep 9 2014

This is beautiful O_O. Define the tail shading a tad? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Pikachushinx (talk • contribs) 08:56 10 Sep 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}14:53 Wed Sep 10 2014

Define the shading on the arm closest to us a bit; he's very handsome I liked him why did he have to die? :/ ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:46, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Petalfur (Q) - For Approval

Comments? — Fez   ^talk  18:12, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:48, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Personally I think it's fine. It's rather clear, and defining it any more will make it look too dark. — Fez   ^talk  20:04, September 9, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading and thicken it a bit around the belly and define it on the face and on her lifted forleg. I think there's also some waste on her back ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:24, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading, and I agree with Shinx- I think it could use some definition. —Jayce(03:34, 9/10/2014)

Smudge the earpink into the fur or vice versa. and if you have no clue what vice versa means don't sweat it. It is Latin--I think--literally meaning other way around. It currently looks too neat for a long furred cat. Keep it up!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:21, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Smudging the ear pink is not required on these blanks. I don't smudge them on mine, and I know a couple others that don't either. Plus, it already looks like Feather smudged it- it's just not extravagant. —Jayce(17:24, 9/10/2014)

Re-uploaded. — Fez   ^talk  17:52, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

She's looking a teensy bit cross eyed. Well done! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Riga (KP) - For Approval

Wee I love black kitties and I probably should choose something other than purple for collar colors but I do not care. —Jayce(20:25, 9/9/2014)

Wee~ Purdy... c: Stretch the ear-pink a touch more and maybe define the light a touch more on the tail ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:26, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(03:33, 9/10/2014)

Pretty:) lighten the black a shade and define the texture a bit.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:22, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

As I have already explained on Shimmerpelt, the black is fine as it is. The coloring I've used is approximately the same one Rocket has used, and if it's lightened much more, he will begin to turn dark gray, and they are not the same thing. If you would like me to shift around some highlights or something along that nature, I will, but his base is already light enough (without the texture, it's much too light, hence why I added it) and seeing all lineart is not mandatory or required by PCA. As for the texutre, I do think it's defined enough, and I was actually expecting to get told to smooth it out some, but since texture is not my strong point, I would like to wait for a second opinion on that, just based on the fact some of the other senior users in the project know a fair bit more than you or I do (not calling you inexperienced, just they've been doing it much longer than we have). —Jayce(17:30, 9/10/2014)

The texture gets lost on the tail. Define it a little? — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 20:05, 09/10/2014

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:35, 9/11/2014)

Squirrelflight (Q) ~ For Approval

File:Squirrelflight.queen.png still not happy about her being a queen but what can you do david ^🌈 01:07, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the marking a bit more. She's cute c; ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:13, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded thanks man david ^🌈 14:12, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe brighten up the earpink a bit?--crow!!!! 14:37, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

I think the ear pink matches her other images...which that's not very bright to begin with. —Jayce(14:40, 9/10/2014)

Define the shading on the hind leg farthest from us. Very neat!!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:25, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

re-uploaded i lightened the ear pink slightly, now i wont touch it anymore or it wont be the same colour david ^🌈 06:29, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Whitewing (Queen) - For Approval

hi changes are here —Jayce(03:47, 9/10/2014)

It might just be my phone, but her eyes look blue in this picture, and they should be green. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:02, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Wrong layer was showing, oops. —Jayce(04:08, 9/10/2014)

Gotcha. ^^ Give the eyes more depth, and darken the shading a tiny bit. It looks good. :D Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:19, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(04:25, 9/10/2014)

Define the shading on the front legs a tiny bit - she's beaauttiful ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 16:06, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:18, 9/10/2014)

Define the shading more on the face: like put some shading where her eyes are to define the mouth and nose. And the tail: make the shading curve more to the shape of the tail. Very pretty!!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:29, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did not add any shading where her eyes are, since that kind of depth and things of that nature isn't something we have to do. It's optional and I opt not to do it. It's not part of the basic shading- it's there to give some extra shape to the image and people have just been doing it more frequently. I did extend the bottom facial shading a bit, though. Also, the tail shading does curve, but the highlight kinda goofed it up lol. —Jayce(17:37, 9/10/2014)

Can you fix that then? Not only does it not look like it's following the curve of the tail, but it looks like it could possibly need a bit more smudging. Not sure if it's the highlight doing that though. — ferk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 21:14, 09/10/2014

Re-uploaded. I had tried to on the previous upload, but I think my layers got mixed up. I just redid the shading. —Jayce(20:37, 9/11/2014)

can you define the shading on the back leg closest to us? david ^🌈 07:01, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:59, 9/12/2014)

Duskfur (Q) ~ For Approval

Changes are here; I have a valid reason for the smudged shading being bad, it's my first ever smudged shading. Comments? ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:50, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit more and brighten the yellow in ---> this eye to match the other. Define the eye depth a bit while you're at it. This is very pretty Sorrel!! is it hard? I'm gonna try smudged shading on my next image.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 17:33, September 10, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see the pale parts on her tail and belly, and her warrior has them. —Jayce(17:38, 9/10/2014)

Reups I can't really define the pale of the tail much more because of that pesky tail smudged shading. I can attempt to, though - changes be here ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 15:41, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

I can't see any shading, did you hide one of your layers by mistake? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:40 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014

It is there, I've probably got the opacity too low. I'll define the shading in a bit. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 20:56, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Reups there we go, changes should be up soon ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:17, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Ferretclaw (Alt W) - For Approval

Since this guy had an Alt needing to be done and the description made me think of something, I decided to snatch it up. He was called black and gray, so I gave him a smoke pattern. I'm really really happy with how it turned out. Thoughts? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 19:20, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

WOAH DUDE Define the back shading? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:52 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014

Reuploaded, shading has been defined, and ear pink has been added since I realized I forgot about it before. :P Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 20:42, September 11, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad. Can't really see the texture through it. This is amazing!!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 02:02, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

I played around with it a bit. Better? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 02:30, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Much better!! ^.^ define the light some on the paws. I know it's difficult to define light on shaded black paws, but if you use something like the highlight on the muzzle, I think it'll blend nicely.  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 04:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Would you mind darkening the black and gray a shade? I think he was called dark gray and black, and this seems to be a bit lighter. If you'd rather not, I'm cool with that, and this is still stunning. *.* —Jayce(04:51, 9/12/2014)

It said on the trivia on his page that he was just gray and black, but I'll darken it a bit, since it was probably a simplification. :) And thanks! Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:58, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Ah, nevermind, I confused him with Heronwing, apologies. I still think the black could be darkened just a bit, though. He was called just gray and black, my bad. x.x —Jayce(05:03, 9/12/2014)

Wait, do you want the black or the gray darkened? And cool. ^^ Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:04, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

The black. However, I think darkening the leg shading might do the same thing. I'm sorry if I'm making no sense, I'm so tired —Jayce(05:09, 9/12/2014)

Nah, it's alright, I see what you mean. ^^ I'll see how dark I can push the black, and play around with the leg shading. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:10, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:16, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Also changed a bit of stuff with texture. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 18:06, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Sedgewhisker (Q) - For Approval

meh ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading more, especially on the face and belly. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 04:43, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

I think the belly shading is good, but perhaps define the shading on the front legs? —Jayce(04:52, 9/12/2014)

Match ----> this eye to the other please. I see what you tried to do but it looks a bit odd. If you shade <---- sides of the eyes you'll get the same effect you're looking for and still have the color match. This is beautiful, Scar!!  Frosty ^{☾Supernatural} 04:57, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

And it looks a bit cross-eyed. Maybe try moving >>>> pupil around? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:21, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

Crouchfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval

i hate kits ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 05:46 Fri Sep 12

Benny (Alt KP) ~ For Approval

this was too much fun omg. Comments? Queen Beebs 20:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)

The pattern gets lost in the shading. Very beautiful! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:13, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

i can see it just fine tbh.. david ^🌈 01:16, September 13, 2014 (UTC)

Olivenose (Star) ~ For Approval

what are torties? comments? —User:Diablo./Sig Sat Sep 13 00:26

I can't see the earpink or the tail shading. She is very lovely! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:11, September 13, 2014 (UTC)