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Lionblaze (Alt. Warrior) ~ CBA

First time I've truly loved how my texture came out (thank you for the tutorial, Ferk). Comments? Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:07, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

His eyes should be amber, like his other images. Also blur/smudge the shading (whatever your preference is) so it's a bit smoother. Could you also smudge or smooth out the texture a bit more too? All in all (I'm being nitpicky), this is really good. .o. —Jayce(21:14, 10/6/2014)

Reuploaded. I didn't realize the eyes had to match even if it's an alt. And thanks. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 21:26, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Hey no problem! I'm sorry I never got around to that other one.... Oops. Anyway, friend, the texture on the tail should curve with the tail. It looks like it's all going one way. I wanna know how everyone gets their texture to look feathery like this. Please tell me how. Mine looks blocky and lame. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 22:04, 10/6/2014

It looks like you've got a blank spot of shading on the back. Did you mean to do that? Ferk, try blurring your texture. That's how I get mine to look somewhat normal. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:14 PM, Mon Oct 6, 2014

Reuploaded. Basicly, I put the texture layer on multiply and added the texture. Then, I blur it (using blur tool), and used the smudge tool at a size of 05 (Gimp). I set the layer opacity and then duplicated it (mostly to give it definition). And yes, I meant to do that. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:22, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. —Jayce(23:16, 10/8/2014)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 23:39, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and feet, and blur (and possibly expand) the tail shading, mainly around the base of the tail. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 06:39, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:48, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

No comments in a while, and I like this, so CBA? ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}14:44 Sun Oct 12

Sorry, but the shading on the side by the haunch is blotchy with a light patch surrounded by shadows. Also, you might want to curve the shading edges a bit more and blur it. And slightly nit-picking, but the shading is receding from the lineart on the back of the cat. Atelda _{_{insert vague subtext here}} 01:47, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. I've used this style of shading before (see Mistystar's Alt Warrior image), and no one commented on it before. As for the receding shading, it's actually the texture, and I can't really fix it. However, I'll change it if someone else agrees. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:59, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Atelda. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:47, 10/14/2014

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 00:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Remove the patch of light on the flank by filling it in with shading. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}1:22 Tue Oct 14

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:07, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out your shading a bit. It seems really really dark in some spots and then really really light in other spots. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:08, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shading is not required to be the same darkness throughout the entire image. While we're on the topic of shading, would you mind extending it and maybe adding some light, as I kinda did here? Red is where I think it could be expanded, and the blue would be the light. I also remember hearing that not all the back feet would be in shading unless the cat is sitting awkwardly- but I could be mistaken about that, and someone else is more than allowed to contradict me on that note. —Jayce(18:09, 10/15/2014)

Reuploaded. I redid the shading. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:42, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading in the center of the body, darken the tail shading, define the head shading, and on the back leg closest to us, flip the shading and the light. It is backwards since your lightsource would have the light on top and the shading on the bottom. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 19:56, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I honestly think it's fine. Like I said before, I've used this style and lightsource before (the lightsource is coming from the top left corner), and it was never commented on. Also, I can see all of the shading just fine, and if I lighten the shading in the center of the body, I'll probably just be told to darken it again. However, if others agree, I'll change it. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think your shading is fine. Beautiful job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:34 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Define the shading on the tail, and the shading and light on the feet. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:29, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is about as defined as it can get. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 19:58, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading a tad on the tail and body, it looks a bit too dark. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}1:14 Tue Oct 21

Reuploaded. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 12:53, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Perhaps define the shading on the back leg closest to us? This is pretty Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly15:19 Wed Oct 22

I think it's fine. However, if others agree, I'll change it. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:37, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

I agree with Amber. It does appear kinda flat. —Jayce(18:39, 10/22/2014)

Reuploaded. Changes [1]. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 18:55, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

CBA? —Jayce(20:23, 10/23/2014)

Grasspelt (Star) - For Approval

-sobs- More dying kittehs! Tiger ^Sunny ^days 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded Tiger ^Sunny ^days 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body. And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.

Define the earpink and the face shading. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all. ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re Uploaded People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. Tiger ^Sunny ^days 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

Re re uploaded. I brightened up the earpink. Tiger ^Sunny ^days 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs and tail? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:56, 10/14/2014

Add and define the shading along the edges.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Add some depth to the shading, too. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better. ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reupped I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. Tiger ^Sunny ^days 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

It's not always optional. On some blanks it can be necessary, especially on these. Define the light on the paws and tail, and then lighten your shading a bit and blur it. I still see receding shading around the haunch and around the tail tip. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:00, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Pretty sure it's optional tbh but anyhoo I don't think changes are showing (for anyone) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:31 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

It is not mandatory on any blank, Darkfrost. That's a very common and quite annoying PCA rumor among members that needs to stop. You can blur the ear pink (as I used to do and sometimes still do) and get the same desired results. Also, no, the changes don't seem to be showing for me either. —Jayce(18:04, 10/15/2014)

Re upped If the changes aren't showing, notify me at once. Tiger ^Sunny ^days 22:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

The shading is receding from the lineart on the stomach around where the tailtip is. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly15:36 Sun Oct 19

Re upped Tiger ^Sunny ^days 15:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the base to about #A06F44, Tiger. This is a little bit too dark for being a light brown cat. —Jayce(00:36, 10/21/2014)

I will re upload sometime today or tomorrow. Tiger ^Sunny ^days 13:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:35 Thu Oct 23

Just letting you know, Tiger, that you have until Sunday to reupload, since we only allow one week without uploads before declining an image. —Jayce(20:22, 10/23/2014)

Tangleburr (Ki) ~ For Approval

Breeze withdrew Tangle so... hehe. I was working on Tangle during my vacation cause I was bored ._. anywho, :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 02:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading and lighten it some. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:03, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Also, would you like the file for the apprentice, so you can get the colors right? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 13:50, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere, and IDK if its just me or the waste, but the lineart seems blurred? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Waste will be the death of me xD Vixy Memento Mori... 14:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Work on the texture a bit. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014

The file should be named Tangleburr.kit, not Tangleburr (KI). Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 15:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Fixed nameing and tried to texture it. Vixy Memento Mori... 15:51, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail - she's so cute! ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thank you :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 16:11, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

This looks good. :) Just shift that chin shading down slightly so it's below the chin. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 16:39, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Ah hold up I had to fix some waste I didn't see Reups Vixy Memento Mori... 16:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

The file name is still wrong, it should be Tangleburr.kit. As for the image, try blurring the shading on the front paws a bit? Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 18:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Renamed it correct finally sorry about that ugh I feel so n00bish... Vixy Memento Mori... 19:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

There's some waste around the feet. Also, I feel bad for pestering you so much about this, but I think it should be in lowercase, so .kit instead of .Kit but i'm not sure because i'm not sure if the wikia is caps-sensitive or not so it might not matter. Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 20:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Don't feel bad. I'd rater do it the right way than the wrong. Vixy Memento Mori... 20:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the paws. This is pretty, Vixy. =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 15:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks :D Vixy Memento Mori... 19:48, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shapren the texture a bit to match the other images. Nice job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:30 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Reuploaded Thankes :DDD I'm so proud of her so far :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 13:47, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Expand your shading a bit. And smudge/blur your shading a little after that. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:00, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 15:24, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Might just be my eyes, but I can see some waste around the head. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 21:04, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded There was a tiny bit so I erased it. Thanks! ^^ Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 02:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

Comments? Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 10:35, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Expand the shading on the back Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 16:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the back shading a little, I can't really see the pattern through it. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:05, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I can see it just fine- perhaps it's the brightness on your screen? I know each monitor shows different things. Blur the neck shading just a bit, Vixen, if you don't mind? —Jayce(20:12, 10/23/2014)

Reuploaded I blurred the neck :3 Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 22:16, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Half Moon (Ancient) - For Approval

meh. — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 00:52, 10/15/2014

Smooth out the shading on the tail and perhaps brighten up the entire left (our left) side of her, especially on the head. There's a lot of shading and that looks really gray. —Jayce(02:23, 10/15/2014)

Reuploaded — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 05:15, 10/18/2014

Smooth out the shading some more on the face. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:13 Sat Oct 18

Still working? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Yeah sorry. Reup — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 20:08, 10/24/2014

Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval

File:Graywing (WC).ancient.png I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail. ikr xD Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think. —Jayce(17:04, 10/19/2014)

Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the tail, and try to give a little more of a curve to the shading. Look at some of the other images for examples of what I mean. It doesn't really go with the body as well as I think it could. The body shading kinda seems like a straight line.. or something along those lines. I can't phrase things correctly, my apologies. x.x —Jayce(18:58, 10/22/2014)

Reupload I've added a bit more shading at the tip of his tail and base of his tail. I've done a highlight around the tail facing away from the body and I've blurred the overall shading a bit. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:37 Thu Oct 23

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Maybe make the tongue more pink? Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 13:35, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:38, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Cloudspots (Ancient) ~ For Approval

File:Cloudspots.ancient.png Squee~! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:26 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

The white on the chest is not so smudged on the other images. Also, define the shading a bit, please. Another lovely charart, Rocket. Blue star ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:59, October 15, 2014 (UTC)

reup Redid the chest white. Thanks, Bluestar! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:09 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014

his nose should be black, I think. david ^🌈 00:52, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading; he's lovely damn I wanted him ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 14:35, October 16, 2014 (UTC)

reup :) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:49 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014

Smudge all the white like the chest? It seems a little odd that the chest is smudged one way and they rest of the white is smudged another. And personally I like the way the chest looks. =) this is pretty. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 04:02, October 17, 2014 (UTC)

did I do it? frank wu frosteh! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:28 PM, Sat Oct 18, 2014

Yo wehcom. I don't think changes are showing though, mind giving an external link? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:34, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

I hate my computer so much. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:33 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:34 PM, Wed Oct 22, 2014

Brighten the white on the ears and paws, and I think this'll be good for CBA'ing and stuffs. —Jayce(18:55, 10/22/2014)

:) Okay I'll have it re-upped tomorrow at some point. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:56 PM, Wed Oct 22, 2014

I'm sorry if I sound nit-picky, but if you want, could you darken the shading? Stoneclaw 06:51,10/23/2014

reup You're fine, Stoneclaw :) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:53 PM, Thu Oct 23, 2014

Hawk Swoop (Ancient Tribe) - Withdrawn

comments? I haven't done these for a while —User:Diablo./Sig Sun Oct 19 00:37

This looks great. :) Maybe a bit more shading on that left (higher) paw, and that nose and muzzle? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 01:28, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

reups thank you c: —User:Diablo./Sig Sun Oct 19 01:47

Wow it's beautiful. Could you possibly blur the stripes? ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 19:51, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The stripes aren't really blurred on her other images, which this one has to match. —Jayce(19:58, 10/20/2014)

I used SAI for this one, so the brush left a sharp edge on them anyway. I think they are fine. but if someone else says something I'll tinker them. —User:Diablo./Sig Tue Oct 21 04:57

i think they could be blurred the tinest bit, theyre slightly softer looking on the other images. david ^🌈 01:05, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail. Words can't describe this beautiful image. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:41 Thu Oct 23

Smudge/blur the shading. I like this. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:02, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

yea i probably won't be able to work on this due to school. —User:Diablo./Sig Fri Oct 24 21:35

I'd like to take over on this Queen Beebs 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Silver Frost (Ancient) ~ For Evaluation

Well this is it i love her eyes.Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 16:46, October 19, 2014 (UTC)

The patches need to match her other images and she shading looks a bit blotchy and sourceless. Also the file needs to be named File:Silver Frost.ancient.png, so please fix that. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:29 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014

Reups.--Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 02:41, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The patches should be solid not smudged. Are changes showing? Try uploading to ezimba.com . User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:37 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

Crop the space around the image so that it is more of similar size to the other images. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 17:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the tail shading too. —Jayce(16:56, 10/23/2014)

I'm gonna rename this for you, since the images won't show right on the articles without it. —Jayce(20:19, 10/23/2014)

Sandypaw (App) - For Approval

File:Sandypaw.apprentice.png I actually did this a while back, just to practice texture. Now that Sandypaw's gender has been confirmed, it fit. Thoughts? Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 18:33, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Finally! Gorgeous! Maybe just define the light on the legs? ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 18:48, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Thanks. :) Defined. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 19:16, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge/blur the shading on the chest. This is purrty! =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 15:15, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Reuploaded. And thanks. :) Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 00:10, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Bright Stream (Ancient tribe) ~ For Approval

Soooo I used Jayie's shading tutorial to make this, so neither smudged nor blurred shading this time, whoo. Anyway, colors shouldnt need shifting any as theyre taken directly from the starclanners file. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:10, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Try to blur the stripes on the tail. And which way is the light coming from? ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 19:54, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

The light is coming from our right, and and the top. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:59, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

I'm going to say define the shading since I know Jay doesn't blurr or smudge and so I won't get repremanded for using the wrong term again. So, I think the shading needs to be defined, it seems a bit lost to me. Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 12:54, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

I've never complained to you, though..? If I did, I was probably talkin' to someone else. Anyway, Re-ups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:14, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Um,I see the heading(is that what it's called?),and it's supposed to be (Ancient),not (Ancient Tribe) RaisuRice (talk) 23:11, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

I can make the heading whatever I want it to be. I could make the heading "Bright Stream - (Old tribe of rushing water) ~ For Approval" if I wanted to. That makes literally no difference to the image. There aint no rule as to what the heading should be. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:26, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Okay no need to get mad. Raisu is a newer member and wouldn't know if that was the right heading or not. Before going off on her, perhaps explain it in a nicer manner of wording rather than getting snippy with her(if you are a girl xD not sure I hope so if not I'm sorry, Raisu). Um may you lighten the ear shading a bit? I can't really see the earpink too well through it, and maybe smudge the facial shading a tad more? I like this =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 15:13, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

*Sighs* I like how you always assume every time I try and explain anything that I'm being "snippy" or getting mad. The only times I get mad here are when someone repeatedly makes a mistake after it gets explained to them multiple times. It does, however, irritate me a bit that ya'll always assume I'm trying to be rude- If I was, I'd use capslock a lot, and probably use at least minor cusses. Anyway, re-ups. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:23, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Darkfrost, Shinx was not being mean, rude, or snippy. She was explaining that she can make the heading whatever she wants it to be. Basically as long as the name and rank are there, it can be whatever you want it to be lmao. Please stop assuming people are mad and then trying to lecture them on it- it's basically mini-modding and really needs to stop. If I see this kind of behavior from anyone, I will start to decline images. —Jayce(18:29, 10/22/2014)

Ah, new blanks they look awesome! I think that you could blur the shading around the chest and shoulder area. I like the style. Tbh darkfrost didn't really say anything wrong other than her opinion, and honestly, it's hard to say what people mean without... talking in person and seeing facial expression, ect., so she might've had the wrong impression of what Shinx was feeling or saying, for lack of better word. Mistakes happen. Stoneclaw 06:50,10/23/2014

Can we please not turn this into an argument? (reups, it looks like im emphasizing that XD) Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:33, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Moon Shadow (Ancient) ~ For Approval

eh idk comments? —.neha^{it's that gloom boy season.} 20:14, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

Define the shading. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 13:06, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm not gonna define it anymore, otherwise it'll start to look really weird. —.neha^{it's that gloom boy season.} 20:17, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Sharp Hail (Ancient) ~ Withdrawn

I imagine him as a longhair so that's what y'all get. Comments? Queen Beebs 20:29, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:32 Tue Oct 21

re-up Queen Beebs 21:36, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

re-up, forgot texture Queen Beebs 21:39, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

re-up did a thing with the tail Queen Beebs 21:45, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

The body shading looks a little like a rectangle. Could you manipulate it a bit to make it look more natural? This is pretty! Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 15:17, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

re-up Queen Beebs 19:03, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Withdrawing for something else Queen Beebs 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

I'm taking over on this one because his name is cool. —Jayce(21:42, 10/24/2014)

Misty Water (Ancient) ~ For Approval

Nope. No way. This doesn't even match at all. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:32 Tue Oct 21

If it's not showing and there is a redlink: Here. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:35 Tue Oct 21

The tongue should have more pink to it. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 01:33, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten her a shade to match her other image(s). (I only looked at the elder so I have no clue if there are others lol) I love this Hawky=) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 16:35, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thank you. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:30 Wed Oct 22

Quick Water (Ancient) ~ For Approval

fun fact: other than the neck shading none of her shading is smudged or blurred david ^🌈 08:30, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Lol. =) Define the earpink just a tad more. This is amazing! Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 17:51, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

i can see it just fine plus its the colour of her rogues. david ^🌈 23:24, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval

I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either. —Jayce(18:24, 10/22/2014)

Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)

Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ^{í'm nσt rαndσm,} чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading? — fe rk ^{my name is BLURRYFΛCE} 20:09, 10/24/2014

Tornear (Kit) - For Approval

Um... This is my first try. Took so long on it, the pattern was kind of hard to match.

The Fox Girl (talk) 10:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

You need to reserve it, and you weren't on the table, so I added it in for you. Define the shading- very pretty for a first try, I must say. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:09, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:29, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the stripes very good for a first try Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:47 Thu Oct 23

Define the earpink. This is really nice! =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 17:47, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks guys :) The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna promote you to an apprentice (that's something I'm allowed to do, according to the guidelines?), since you seem to know what you're doing. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:25, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Robinwing (RC) (Star) - For Approval

I like torties :3 Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 15:55, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I love dem eyes *.* define the earpink some more. I love this. =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 17:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The file should be named Robingwing (RC).star.png, also, can you lighten the chest shading a bit as it's making the white look grey this is beautiful ahh Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 19:30, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

I'm gonna go ahead and rename this for you, Sziri. ^^ All I had to do was add a space in the file name. —Jayce(20:17, 10/23/2014)

Re-ups Thanks all of you=) Sziri^{the goat sails away ツ} 09:48, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Falling Feather (Ancient) ~ For Approval

See the changes here; what did I do. ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 16:04, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

You did something beautiful :) smudge/blur the shading on the tail Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:49 Thu Oct 23

I actually think the tail shading looks fine. If Sorrel blurred/smudged it it would need defining again. Define the tongue shading a bit. This is lovely, Sorrel! =) Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 17:44, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups changes I already reuped with the blurred tail before you commented, Frost, and besides, I think it could have used a blur. Thank you both~ ❄Sorrel _It's _{everything I} _dreamed 17:50, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval

this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly19:33 Thu Oct 23

Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy ^{It's spooky Out Here!} 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, thanks Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly19:40 Thu Oct 23

Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)

The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring. —Jayce(20:15, 10/23/2014)

Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D Amber ^{The One}^and ^On ^ly16:28 Fri Oct 24

Harespring (Ki) ~ For Approval

File:Harespring.kit.png Whatever you all do, don't ask me to define the tail shading..x3 lmao. Comments? Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:41, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

Smudge the patches a little more. They're kinda done in a circular swirling motion. —Jayce(20:44, 10/24/2014)

Re-uploaded. I'm having trouble figuring out the opacity to swirl them on..but I think 60 did the trick. Frosty^☾Sup^erna^tural 20:57, October 24, 2014 (UTC)

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 Lol. =) Define the earpink just a tad more. This is amazing! {{User:Darkfrost14/Sig}} 17:51, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
+i can see it just fine plus its the colour of her rogues. {{User:.Trollsky/Sig}} 23:24, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
 ==[[Swallowtail_(WC)|Swallowtail (WC)]] (Star) ~ For Approval==

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