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Snowfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Thar she blows! I wanted to do a white cat because I haven't done one since.. Whiteberry. Amber The One and Only16:04 Fri Nov 8
Define the shading. Pretty! —Jayce(19:28, 11/8/2013)
Define the eye depth a bit, too? Queen Beebs 21:16, November 8, 2013 (UTC)
Reups! Thanks! ѼAMBERѼPUMPKIN VS OREO11:31 Sun Nov 10
I think her eyes still need to be defined better. Maybe make her black pupils wider? Amazing job, Amber! --User:Brightpool/Sig 19:28, November 10, 2013 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the shading on the upper chest just a bit? It's a bit blotched. Great job! Splook sweet creature 00:41 Tue Nov 12
Reups! Hi. Thank yooou, ѼAMBERѼPUMPKIN VS OREO18:40 Tue Nov 12
recheck your lightsource use a sig sub page maooo >;c User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:08 Fri Nov 15
Could you specify what you mean? Just saying that is extremely vague and not really helpful at all, imho. —Jayce(04:39, 11/16/2013)
Lol you're right. The tail and belly read that the light coming from our right, and the hind leg off the ground as well as the face read coming from the left, and the other legs are too flat to read. I'll make a tutorial and put it up on a subpage of mine, I'm working on it. User:Kelpsey/Sig 18:33 Sat Nov 16
Could you smooth out the shading on the chest? It's starting to get a tad blotchy. Queen Beebs 23:29, November 18, 2013 (UTC)
I think the ear <--- this way needs a bit more gray. ArcticblizzardBooyakasha Shredhead!
Reups Amber The One and Only16:07 Wed Nov 20
Where's your light source coming from? Rainlegs 00:40, November 21, 2013 (UTC)
Wow, that's great, Amber! Her pupils need to be more wider. *Swanflutter* Warriors is my life~ 06:18, November 22, 2013 (UTC)
Eye style is artist's choice Swan. Paleh Send help 09:14,11/23/2013
Still working? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:05, November 27, 2013 (UTC)
The top left sorry I've been ill Amber The One and Only17:32 Thu Nov 28
Can you smudge the gray on the ear tips maybe a bit, as it looks a bit hard-edged at this moment. Stoneclaw 00:13,11/30/2013
Still working? Queen Beebs 20:22, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
Reups It's been a month tomorrow *wails* Amber The One and Only16:27 Fri Dec 6
Sorry to interrupt, but could you smooth out and define the tail shading some, and define the light on the furthest hind foot? Queen Beebs 20:48, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Also, have the shading run along this >> side of the belly, as it's throwing off the light source? User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:01 Wed Dec 11
Reups Amber The One and Only16:19 Thu Dec 12
Smooth out the back shading - it appears a bit blotchy. Also, thin out the shading on the tail's tip - it looks a bit too gray. Queen Beebs 21:47, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
I think you may have forgotten to have the shading run along the side of the belly with the shoulder, rather than the thigh, which is where you currently have it. User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:48 Fri Dec 13
Define the shading. This is amazing! --User:Glitterpelt/Sig 01:24, December 14, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine, honestly. User:Kelpsey/Sig 08:53 Sun Dec 15
I disagree. I think it should be defined along the legs, and I believe the tail should be given more light on it. She's also looking slightly gray, but not too gray where it becomes an issue. —Jayce(08:55, 12/15/2013)
Define the gray on our right ear.. it seems a lot lighter than our left one. Frosty ☾Supernatural 21:41, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? Queen Beebs 19:44, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, but it'd been a week and this has been up for more than a month. Declined ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:28, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
I'll take over. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot4:45 Sat Dec 21
Re-uploaded. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:50 Sat Dec 21
Add a tiny bit of depth to the shading, so that it all isn't simply one flat shade, and I think you're alright. Rainlegs 22:47, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I hope the shading's not too gray now. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:26 Sun Dec 22
Smooth out the << side facial highlight a bit. Pretty! Queen Beebs 20:18, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank youuuu c: ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:13 Sun Dec 22
Lighten the shading around her belly just a tad, to be consistent with the rest of the body, and smooth out where the >> chest shading meets the highlight. Queen Beebs 00:34, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot2:54 Mon Dec 23
The shading around the belly looks a little on the gray side; maybe make the highlight a bit larger? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:18, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Mothflight (Kit) - For Approval
File:Mothflight.kit.png Comments? -Feather 17:16, November 30, 2013 (UTC)
Define and expand the shading. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:35 Sat Nov 30
I think the body shading itself is fine and doesn't need to be expanded, but it does on the feet and maybe on the tail. —Jayce(18:49, 12/1/2013)
Thicken the shading along her side/back. Rainlegs 20:41, December 1, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Feather 16:33, December 3, 2013 (UTC)
Define the leg shading just a bit, and her back paw looks a bit flat. Maybe darken the shading around the edges? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 19:24, December 5, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Feather 11:46, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
There's waste around the paws. Also, assuming your light source is coming from, you should probably erase some shading on/add a highlight to the tail. Dazzy 13:21, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Feather 15:58, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but there's some light from the chest leaking into the haunch area. Fill that part in, and I'll re-CBA. Queen Beebs 20:51, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. -Feather 18:26, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Blur her shading a little more- it looks blotchy almost, in some sections. Smooth it all out, so the transition is less choppy. Rainlegs 05:18, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:15, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I re-did the shading altogether. x.x -Feather 18:34, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
Smooth out the chest highlight some, and add some depth to the shading. Queen Beebs 19:44, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Define the light on the face and add a bit more depth in the shading ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:19, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Cloud (KM) (Q) - For Approval
-phew- c: Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:59, December 3, 2013 (UTC)
Ooh, purty! Smuge the pelt into the ear-pink a bit more and maybe thin the shading a bit on the legs ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 00:05, December 4, 2013 (UTC)
Define the light on the back leg closest to us. Love the eyes! Amber The One and Only16:32 Fri Dec 6
Reuploaded. wheee. Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:31, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Why are the mudspots on the belly paler and more blurred? Or is that my monitor? User:Kelpsey/Sig 03:21 Wed Dec 11
I think the mudspots look fine. The shading looks a tad bit harsh, could you lighten it or tint the shading more? Iveh Yo! 18:25, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. The mudspots are paler because of shading and the smear of mud probably shouldn't be consistent. I lightened it slightly but some of the depth has been sacrificed. c: Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:41, December 15, 2013 (UTC)
Can you darken it just a teeny-tiny bit more? User:Kelpsey/Sig 04:04 Mon Dec 16
The mud looks a bit too pixel-like, particularly in the spot by her shoulder. I believe it may just be the lighter lines running horizontally across it? Could just be my screen. Rainlegs 22:45, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Still working ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:19, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Alder (Ki) ~ CBA
hi changes are here and I'll do stuff when I get home from work. —Jayce(20:36, 12/7/2013)
Smudge the gray some more? Queen Beebs 20:44, December 7, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I don't want to smudge it too terribly much, I hope you don't mind. —Jayce(17:50, 12/8/2013)
Mind defining the shading on the paws a little more? I like this a lot. c: Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:16, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine for now, but if others agree with you, I'll go ahead and do it. —Jayce(22:17, 12/8/2013)
Just a little more. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:10 Mon Dec 9
Re-uploaded. i redid it again because my layers merged ;-; plus I like this —Jayce(06:10, 12/9/2013)
Define the shading? This is sooo cute o.o ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:54, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Hmm —Jayce(20:11, 12/9/2013)
Mind telling me which direction the light source is coming from? Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:49, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Looks like to me it's coming from the upper right ouo. Could you define the tail shading, perhaps? I have to squint to see it. Queen Beebs 20:53, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Ah! That would make more sense. Thanks, Beebs. cx Cloudy, may you define the tail shading please? Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:58, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
I know white pattern realism isn't something that's enforced, so it's your choice, but I'd still strongly recommend using a more realistic white pattern. This one's fairly unrealistic, and I think the image would look better as a whole with a more plausible pattern. But as I said, it's up to you since it's not an enforced rule or requirement. Paleh Send help 00:49,12/10/2013
Darkfrost, please don't repeat Beebs' comment. Also, Paleh, I'll go ahead and fix it up a bit since I'm really not in the mood to have the image nominated or a dozen comments telling me to change it. —Jayce(05:48, 12/10/2013)
The only reason I repeated, is because I thought you'd say that the tail shading was fine, when it definitely wasn't. So, my apologizes. Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:08, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Okay can you try and not be offensive, please? Perhaps next time, you could phrase it a little nicer? ._. Anyways, re-uploaded and I basically just went back to the other pattern I had with a few fixes. —Jayce(18:27, 12/10/2013)
I wasn't being offensive? I'm sorry if it sounded like that, but it really wasn't. Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:56, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
"...because I thought you'd say that the tail shading was fine, when it {definitely wasn't}."brackets inserted by me seems a little offensive imho, just for future reference. Moving on, smudge the markings a teensy tiny bit more? This is cute! OuO User:Kelpsey/Sig 01:54 Wed Dec 11
I'd rather not smudge them but if someone else agrees then I guess I'll do it? —Jayce(07:03, 12/11/2013)
Smudge the white marking a little more, because she's in a long-haired blank and her fur would be a touch more crazy. x3 Rainlegs 05:14, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Beep. —Jayce(05:19, 12/12/2013)
Sorry if I sound rude, but the way you smudged the patches doesn't flow with the fur. Like, at the top (I guess the white is kind of shaped like a cross, so) under the extended parts at the sides, it's smudged downwards, but at the lower part, its smudged side-to-side. Either have the majority of it side to side (with a little curve when necessary) or Down (which is probably more realistic)? I'm sorry if I sound offensive. User:Kelpsey/Sig 09:07 Thu Dec 12
White placement isn't an enforced part of the whole "realism thing", which I still think we're getting far too out of hand with that, and I'd think smudging would apply to that. Honestly, I think it's fine, and it's not that bad... —Jayce(12:22, 12/12/2013)
I think it should be smudged a little more, as she's long-haired and a kitten. It'd look a bit scrappy, and trust me, you won't be over-smudging it right now. Rainlegs 00:10, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Oversmudged to one person isn't the same to another. —Jayce(00:55, 12/16/2013)
Darken the shading a touch more? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:49, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
I'd rather not, actually. It clashes too much with the white, and makes the gray look really bad. —Jayce(04:55, 12/17/2013)
Then shall we go CBA? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:35, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but the shading should be on the other side of the face. User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:18 Thu Dec 19
I've shaded like this on other images before, and I've been told it's fine. I'd rather another opinion before I change it. —Jayce(03:52, 12/19/2013)
- Kelpsey's right, and the shading should be switched on the tail, too. Or you could leave those the same and switch what side of the body its on. Your choice, but the first option would be easiest ouo Rainlegs 04:24, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
cackles and I redid the pattern again. Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:21, 12/20/2013)
The smudging on the chest seems a bit too clumpy. See how smooth the transition is on the tail-tip? Aim for that, to an extent. Rainlegs 22:44, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(07:07, 12/22/2013)
CBA? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:20, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Owl Eyes (Ki) ~ For Approval
this is little owl eyes please rate --Velvetmoon (talk) 00:06, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
The lineart seems to be a different color than black. Also, define/add shading, the image looks choppy, and the eyes look cross-eyed. Also, please remove the alignment. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:50 Sun Dec 8
I'm pretty sure there's no citation for Owl Eyes as a kit? Dazzy 02:49, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Yes there is in Thunder Rising. --Neverendingmoon (talk) 02:57, December 8, 2013 (UTC)Neverendingmoon
Yes, he's Turtle Tail's kit. Is the lineart blurred, or is it my screen?❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 03:02, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
My bad, I don't own that book. He already has a kit image, so a SW will have to decline this, I'm afraid. Dazzy 03:03, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
But they're not confirmed to be the same, Dazzle, no matter what the similarity - we'll have to wait for it to be confirmed. Until then, he gets this. This should be named 'Owl Eyes.kit.png', upload it over Amber's old version.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 03:19, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
I fixed cross eyes and all the line arts there and no blured line art. --Velvetmoon (talk) 09:49, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Define the shading? I can't see any. Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:15, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Currently the image is a .jpg, could you please upload it as a .png? Also, there appears to be a background, that needs to be made transparent. Shimmer♫ 23:19, 12/8/2013
Eyes need to be enlarged, since those are what he's named for. Also there's waste everywhere. If you're not already, try using layers in your image. Dazzy 12:22, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry about all the problems I fixed what I could so theres that --Velvetmoon (talk) 23:51, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
I still don't ssee any shading. If you'd like, I could send you a charart tutorial video to your email. It will help you get a basic understanding..If you want me to, let me know your email and I'll send it once I finish the video. Also, your lineart is blurred/shaded over with colors other thaan black. Frosty ☾Supernatural 00:18, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Eyes need to be amber instead of yellow.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:13, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Withdrawn--Velvetmoon (talk) 23:32, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Well, I'm not sure how big his eyes should be. Let me know if they should be bigger. Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:12, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
Define the eye depth and define the light source. I think this would be a good example of a light source that makes sense. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:24 Wed Dec 11
Smudge the earpink. Dazzy 09:48, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(00:58, 12/16/2013)
Yes I am..I'm re-uploading tonight. Instead, it's only been 5 days..I thought you only remind when it's been 6?? Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:11, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Usually between four and six days is when /I/ remind people. What others do is their choice. Only giving them a day warning seems too harsh, so I normally give a "still working" come the fourth or early fifth day. ^^ —Jayce(01:25, 12/17/2013)
Re-uploaded. Lol sorry, that's totally understandable. I was just a bit curious. I tried the shading style, Hawky, and I hope it worked out fine. Frosty ☾Supernatural 04:09, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Define your light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:50, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Err I don't think Wikia is showing changes, because my light source works now, and it's not showing me the changes. [1] Here is the ezimba link.. Frosty ☾Supernatural 05:06, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Remove the upper >>> leg shading, where it meets the chest. Also, some shading is leaking on >> rear, where it meets the leg. Queen Beebs 19:58, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Sorry, Beebs, but I'm not sure what you mean? May someone help me understand please? Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:48, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
I'm not sure how to interpret the arrows. Anyways, blur the chest highlight, and define the highlights on his legs. Remove the highlight along his back, too, kind of to our left of his front legs. Very pretty! Rainlegs 22:43, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Leggo, >>> means right, while <<< means left. ouo Queen Beebs 14:57, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you, Leggo! c: Also, I figured out what you meant Beebs. Leggo pretty much covered some of the spots you were talking about, and it made it all click. Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:06, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Could you possibly lighten the base by no more than three shades, if that? He's starting to look a teeny bit black. Well done, Dark. You've improved greatly and I'm very impressed. —Jayce(23:27, 12/24/2013)
Ferncloud (Alt Q) ~ CBA
Comments? Queen Beebs 19:24, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Nice work! I would say define the shading on the tail, it's a bit hard to see. ✪GINGER✪ 22:03, Dec. 9, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine, unless someone else disagrees ouo Queen Beebs 19:14, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
I don't think it needs defined..maybe add more depth to it? Looks pretty, Beebs. c: Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:15, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
The depth itself is fine, I think. Although since she is dark gray, would you object to adding a little bit of light in the non-shaded areas so it doesn't appear to be all in shading? If you add the lighter parts (but not all that light), that might make it seem a little more... "depth-y" for lack of a better word? —Jayce(19:18, 12/9/2013)
re-up Queen Beebs 19:26, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
The face's highlights, particularly on her left cheek, seem a bit bright for the light coming behind her. The head would block most light, especially on that side of the face, causing no shading. Hawk Swoop is an example of what I'm trying to describe..her light is coming form behind her and a little to her right, so you'd get thin, narrow highlights on one side of her face. Rainlegs 05:10, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
re-up I removed that highlight but that's it - I don't think her face highlights aren't that bright, imo ouo Queen Beebs 20:18, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
Remember that your light is coming from behind her rear- her forehead, that is, if she has one, will block most of the light. You're working with a 3D shape, therefore, there will be parts covered entirely by things that block the light from reaching that point. Trust me on this. Rainlegs 00:09, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
re-up mkay Queen Beebs 00:24, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
Define the light on the face ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine, unless someone disagrees, since it shouldn't be too bright for this light source Queen Beebs 19:21, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
The highlight should be stretched out along the side of her right cheek, as the light is coming from behind. There would also be a small highlight on her right lip, and up the side of that ear. Does she have earpink? Rainlegs 01:33, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
re-up whoops, I forgot it Queen Beebs 02:12, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:51, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Stretch out that highlight summore- it should be running up and down, right along the lineart of her cheek. Rainlegs 01:55, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
re-up Queen Beebs 01:59, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Are the changes showing? Rainlegs 04:25, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Yup, they are, for me. Queen Beebs 19:16, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Define the light a bit more on the face. Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:47, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
Again, I think it's fine, since it shouldn't be too bright - or else I'd be told to dull it. Queen Beebs 19:35, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
The cheek highlight should be running up and down, not in a circle. Think of a line, parallel to her cheek lineart, but smushed up right along the edge. Would an example to a diagram be helpful? Rainlegs 22:42, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Yup, that'd be helpful ouo Queen Beebs 20:09, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
re-up thanks man Queen Beebs 14:58, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
CBA? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:21, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Ashfoot (Q) ~ For Approval
She's purrty. c: Comment away~ Frosty ☾Supernatural 22:12, December 8, 2013 (UTC)
Smooth out and define the shading on the belly. The defining only needs a little bit though. Nice job, Frosty! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:09 Mon Dec 9
Re-uploaded. Thank you, Hawky! c: Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:08, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Define the overall shading, especially on the tail and all four legs/paws, and perhaps darken it a little bit as well. —Jayce(19:19, 12/9/2013)
Errr..I hope you don't mind me saying no to that? I looked over the deputy for shading strategy, colors, etc. And this shading is how light and defined the deputy's shading is. Unless there is a certain part that doesn't match up the deputy's shading, then tell me what part.. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:43, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Very well, I defined it a teensy bit more. I wish not to touch the shading anymore, because I wish to keep it like this. Frosty ☾Supernatural 21:10, December 9, 2013 (UTC)
Facial shading looks rather blotchy; smooth it out a little?❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:38, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
Darkfrost, different blanks have different shading needs. Just gonna point this out, but what works on one image, like the deputy blanks, might not work on another image. I actually am gonna ask you to define the shading on <-- back leg, as it appears rather flat. —Jayce(18:42, 12/10/2013)
Re-uploaded. Frosty ☾Supernatural 00:09, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
Blur the shading in the shoulder tons, as well as the belly. User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:04 Wed Dec 11
Define your light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
I think the light source is visible enough, but define the shadow a little on the face and erase some shading near the left side of the shoulder. And actually, instead of just the shoulder and the belly can you blur everything in general generously? User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:59 Mon Dec 16
Re-uploaded. Frosty ☾Supernatural 04:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
It looks like you have two light sources on her; her face and tail say it's coming from this --> side but the belly says it's coming somewhere between here <-- and behind her ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:52, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I hope the belly shading works more with my light source now. Frosty ☾Supernatural 05:02, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Here [2] if wikia is not showing my changes..because I don't see them. Frosty ☾Supernatural 05:11, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Kommentare? [That's German for "Comments?" xD] Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:08, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
Shading appears blotchy on the face. —Jayce(19:48, 12/20/2013)
Re-uploaded. Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:15, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Enlarge the highlight on the face and add more depth in the shading around the neck and head ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:22, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Mosspelt (Alt Q)~ For Approval
I don't know if this should be for approval or evaluation since Alder got declined, but here she is anyway. Click here if the wiki is being a butt.
Make the highlights less bright, and define the unshaded parts on the front legs. I believe she would get this. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot2:11 Tue Dec 10
Reups I think the highlights are fine, personally, but I'll lower the opacity if others agree. Here if wikia is being a butt again Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:03, December 10, 2013 (UTC)
I agree. However, I don't think you should lower the opacity, just make it an orangey color and set it on overlay, that should do the trick. User:Kelpsey/Sig 01:11 Wed Dec 11
Reups I can do zat Emberpoppy7 (talk) 21:08, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
They're still a little bright. Layer mode>Multiply, then colorize if you use GIMP. Not sure what to do if you don't, though. User:Kelpsey/Sig 23:47 Wed Dec 11
I use photoshop elements. I'll see what I can do though. Reups Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:53, December 11, 2013 (UTC)
If the texture is supposed to be tabby stripes, perhaps define their shape a little? They look almost like darker tortie patches, which they shouldn't be. If it's texture, then thin it out, so that it looks like lines of hair instead of giant patches. Rainlegs 05:08, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
This better? Emberpoppy7 (talk) 13:31, December 12, 2013 (UTC)
Are they stripes or texture? Rainlegs 00:07, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
Texture. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 01:55, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
It was still crappy so I changed it. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 02:14, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
Since it's texture, smudge it to go a bit more with the direction of the fur, so it looks like fur. Cinderpelt and several other images are good examples of this, if a reference would be helpful. Rainlegs 04:57, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
Oh god that took forever I couldn't get it to look right so I completely redid the texture. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 23:18, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
Very good! Curve it a little more along her belly, so it makes a super lop-sided 'u' shape, almost. Just a touch of an upwards curve on our left side. Rainlegs 01:54, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
That better? Emberpoppy7 (talk) 21:11, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Comments? Emberpoppy7 (talk) 22:22, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Yes, just like that! Stretch the highlight on the foreleg closest to us all the way to the base of her paw, and add a highlight along the front of both her hind legs. Rainlegs 22:40, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Reups I didn't add a highlight to her other leg because in my opinion it looked silly. Emberpoppy7 (talk) 01:28, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Maybe add a tiny one? That leg has nothing in front of it, so it would have a tiny highlight along its front, right below the belly lineart. Rainlegs 18:04, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Make the belly highlight curve with the lineart ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:24, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Mapleshade (Alt A) ~ For Approval
I'd believe she'd get this, since she was depicted as ginger-and-white in The Ultimate Guide, and was described as an apprentice. Comments? Queen Beebs 22:54, December 13, 2013 (UTC)
In the ear on our right, the earpink has a gap at the left side of the ear. Fill that? Sorry if I sound confusing lol User:Kelpsey/Sig 19:34 Sun Dec 15
It's fine, imo - that was how the earpink was smudged ouo Queen Beebs 19:35, December 15, 2013 (UTC)
She's pretty! The chest, belly, and the patch on the hindquarter look a bit gray.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:37, December 15, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine as well - it's the shading that causes it, so of course it'd be darker than normal o3o Queen Beebs 19:46, December 15, 2013 (UTC)
Actually, can you tint it orange the very, very slightest? If it's slight enough, it won't blend with the ginger, I promise, and it won't look gray anymore. User:Kelpsey/Sig 04:07 Mon Dec 16
Sharpen the white on the forehead ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:20, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine, honestly User:Kelpsey/Sig 04:47 Mon Dec 16
re-up Queen Beebs 19:32, December 16, 2013 (UTC)
Did you smudge her base ginger? It's not smudged on the other images, but it looks like it is on here. —Jayce(04:55, 12/17/2013)
Yep. Queen version is. And it's and alt anyways. User:Kelpsey/Sig 05:34 Tue Dec 17
So? These are alts that are supposed to match. Regardless, it really shouldn't be smudged, since it's matching the alt warrior, and that's not smudged. —Jayce(05:39, 12/17/2013)
It is. Would you mind if I blurred those smudged parts some, then? Queen Beebs 19:17, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Blur them a lot more. There shouldn't be a smudged look. Rainlegs 01:49, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
re-up then wouldn't the alt queen get tweaked to have blurred parts, rather than smudged? Queen Beebs 01:52, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Yeah, she'll have to be. Define the shading along her haunch and middle, particularly any in her ginger areas. Rainlegs 22:38, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
I think it's fine; they're plenty visible to me, the haunch shading is supposed to be on the << edge (where the white just so happens to be), and on the ginger, I think it's defined just enough, but I'll define it if someone else disagrees. Queen Beebs 20:10, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
re-up oh nevermind Queen Beebs 21:56, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
The white on the forehead is turning orangish from the shading tint; sharpen it a touch? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:16, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
River (K) - for approval
File:River.kit.pngRiver's kit image! I'll try to have this reuploaded on Wednesday, since that's the next day I have off. How can I improve on this? Iveh Yo! 19:06, December 14, 2013 (UTC)
Would you like .xcf? The stripes could be sharpened some. Queen Beebs 19:11, December 14, 2013 (UTC)
Please! Iveh Yo! 19:15, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you! Iveh Yo! 19:51, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Add a few more stripes to his hind foot, and the bottom of his rear. Queen Beebs 20:14, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded Ok there you go, but I cannot add any more because of the limited space, and it would become crowded with anymore. Iveh Yo! 20:18, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Add some darker areas to the shading, so it all isn't just one darkness and shade. Very pretty! The stripes look fine to me. Rainlegs 22:37, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:19, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Dawncloud (E) - Declined
Comments? --User:Wildd Side/Sig 09:32 Sun Dec 15
Thicken the stripes just a teeny bit? User:Kelpsey/Sig 19:23 Sun Dec 15
I think they're thick enough, honestly. This is very pretty *.* —Jayce(00:59, 12/16/2013)
I think the ones that have forks in them (Y-shaped, if you will) should just be thickened a teeny, tiny bit more, so the contrast between them and the plain straight ones is more prominent- they're thicker than the straight ones on the apprentice image. Rainlegs 01:45, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? Queen Beebs 15:09, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
It's been a week; Declined ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:19, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Ferncloud (Q) - For Approval
*sighs* With a heavy heart, my one last image. Comments? User:Kelpsey/Sig 02:52 Mon Dec 16
Scootch the chest highlight to our right a little more, as the shoulder would shade the area it's currently in. Rainlegs 01:31, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
Do you think it'd be better if I just eliminated it altogether? User:Kelpsey/Sig 05:35 Tue Dec 17
Yes, and the one on her left cheek. Rainlegs 01:43, December 18, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. It looked really flat when I tried so I moved both "highlights". User:Kelpsey/Sig 00:31 Fri Dec 20
Alright, that's fine. Darken her tail shading and the front of her legs to match the darkness of her chest and the side of her belly. Rainlegs 22:36, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Lighten her a little bit and blur the markings not smudge. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith1:53 Mon Dec 23 2013
Define the light on the face ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:20, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Dawnstripe (Q) ~ For Approval
idk if she should have the scar or not david 🌈 07:42, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
I don't think so, because she wasn't described with it in BotC, which I believe is set before the part in TR? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:44, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
I'd believe she'd have it, as Crookedstar is a kit around the time the ShadowClan battle happens, and Willowkit and Graykit are not mentioned at the time. Queen Beebs 19:16, December 17, 2013 (UTC)
There are two unfilled pixels above the eyelash and under the ear. Incredible! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:13 Tue Dec 17
Re-uploaded. david 🌈 01:41, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Add a teeny bit of shading along her chest, to show that it curves a bit. Fantastic job on matching the pattern. Rainlegs 22:32, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. david 🌈 07:20, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Define the shading just touch? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith1:51 Mon Dec 23 2013
Mapleshade (Kit) - For Approval
Ewewewewew this is what happens when you rush yourself all of a sudden x.x Comments? Dazzy 14:04, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Define the earpink a little? This is fantastic. Rainlegs 22:33, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Still working? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 05:22, December 25, 2013 (UTC)
Cinders (Q) - For Approval
Colors taken from the grayscaled old queen version, because that one is a bit easier to work with. Wheee revisiting old chararts and bringing them back to life is fun! Iveh Yo! 20:50, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Woo~ Pretty! Blur the shading and define the depth in the eyes ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:08, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
I think the eyes are fine, imho. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:08 Sun Dec 22
Do you mind dulling the white a bit? Looking at her picture in the graphic novel she's in, she's actually not shown with white; it's more of an offwhite/pale gray, so would you mind changing that a little bit so it doesn't appear white? The same should be said for the loner, but I think that one's okay. —Jayce(05:38, 12/23/2013)
Minty (Q) ~ For Approval
File:Minty.queen.png ew ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:19, December 19, 2013 (UTC)
Reups just redid the shading - I prefer this a lot more now ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:11, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Blur/soften the edge of the shading more. It's pretty hard-edged to be that dark. Rainlegs 22:31, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
I don't want to do that, it might make it flat. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:58, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
It's too hard-edged right now though, and doesn't look 3D. Look at how a typical sphere is shaded, and note how the transition in shading should be rather soft from light to dark, in a gradual transition. The belly of this cat is virtually a giant, slightly oblong sphere, along with the rest of the cat's body. Rainlegs 07:02, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Sorrel, I'll have to agree with Leggy. May I ask how you blur? (With what tool?) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:07 Sun Dec 22
I Gaussian blur.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:12, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
I can recommend using the blur tool and changing the opacity to 100%. If you use GIMP, you can do that by going to the bottom of the tool options side and there will be a bar that says "Opacity". Drag that to 100, and you can blur select areas without having to worry about the edges fading away. This being an example. This should solve the problem. ;) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:53 Sun Dec 22
Reups this is as blurred as it can get without being flat. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:41, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Gaussian blur is good if you're trying to get a base to start with, although most areas to make something look 3D have to be blurred at different rates in different areas. For rounder shapes, it has to be blurred a lot more, while sharper angles, like behind a shoulder or the cheekbones on a face, have sharper lines of shading. On GIMP, for this, I take the fuzziest smudge tool I can get, at about a size of 30 or so, and then smudge the shading slightly, to make it flare out more. Give that a shot, because the last blurring you just did didn't really do much to add to the shape. Rainlegs 17:56, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Reups I hope this is what you envisioned ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:51, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Are you using the super fuzzy brush? The one that looks the most blurry? If you're using the right tool at the right size it won't look like that; it'll look like you blurred it and smeared it a bit. Rainlegs 00:57, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
It's not working out at all. I see nothing wrong with the last version... ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:33, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Can I get some advice on the shading? I thought it was fine the way it was, and the suggestion isn't working out.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:08, December 24, 2013 (UTC)
Hal (Ro) ~ For Approval
I know it doesn't match 103%, but this was a tough pattern. Comments? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:53 Fri Dec 20
Wow, impressive. .o. Define the edge of the lighter portion of the face. Rainlegs 22:31, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Define the tail shading some. Queen Beebs 22:35, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you c: ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:48 Sat Dec 21
Sunfish (Q) ~ For approval
http://www.ezimba.com/work/131221C/ezimba19209212822000.png I got all the colours from her Warrior image, comments? Tiny Forever And Always ♫ 18:56, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
Add some depth to the shading. Rainlegs 00:03, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Some of the earpink is leaking out of both ears. Queen Beebs 22:34, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Reuploaded. http://www.ezimba.com/work/131223C/ezimba19209292879300.png Tiny Forever And Always ♫ 16:04, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
Songbird (Q) ~ For Approval
I quite like this ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:48, December 20, 2013 (UTC)
Point the stripe tips a bit, they look a touch paintbrushy ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:20, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Reups I decided to redo the stripes ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:01, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Thicken the stripe that splits apart on the belly by maybe two pixels or so on each side before it splits. It's pretty thin compared to the StarClan version. —Jayce(17:12, 12/21/2013)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:31, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
The shading, if covering the shoulder, should cover the entire shoulder, and be equally bold up to the left side (our left) of the lineart defining it, right before the belly. Right now it's lighter along that edge, and gets darker towards a central point. Rainlegs 22:30, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
I don't get what exactly it is you are asking me to do...❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:16, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
The entire shoulder section should be covered in shading of equal darkness. Right now, it begins to fade out before it reaches the end of the shoulder. (The thin line separating the foreleg from her belly) There's a super dark spot in the middle of the shoulder right now, and if you're going that dark, then the color needs to be consistent throughout that area. Rainlegs 23:19, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:59, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Curve the stripes around hte belly more and make it less of a Y-tabby. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith1:50 Mon Dec 23 2013
Reups I've curved the stripes, but I'm not changing the pattern due to the StarClanner's.❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:46, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Splashnose (Q) - For Approval
meh... Trying the same thing I did with Honeyfern's pattern. Changes Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:27, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Add a little depth to the shading. Very pretty! Rainlegs 22:28, December 21, 2013 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 02:46, December 22, 2013 (UTC)
The markings get a little lost in the shading? Try to define them or maybe try a multiply layer on the shading? -Rustle it takes a leap of faith1:49 Mon Dec 23 2013
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:38, December 23, 2013 (UTC)
Poppydawn (Q) - For Approval
maow c: changes ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:34, December 23, 2013 (UTC)