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Sunfish (Q) ~ For Approval
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.
If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading and light on all four legs. Queen Beebs 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
lighten her up a bit -Ducksauce 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. Queen Beebs 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-; —Jayce(05:00, 7/5/2014)
Re-uploaded. I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more on the belly.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Changes. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
lighten the shading a tad? it's throwing off the color -Ducksauce 15:22, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I darkened it on the face, though, because I could hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:42, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:48, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Thin out the shading. Rainlegs 19:01, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I don't understand what that means..? Make it so that there's a bit less shading...? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 23:08, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
^^ It basically means make the highlights larger. Even out the shading darkness and define your light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:08, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 13:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the back and facial shading. It appears rather dark. —Jayce(13:20, 7/21/2014)
I'm not sure where your light source is- the face and tail say above, but the legs say from just off the the right of the face. Could you possibly settle on one source? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:28, 07/21/2014
Re-uploaded I have a feeling this is going to be declined because of that one month rule o_o Shinxy Blitz and Melody 16:06, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Wouldn't there be light on the top of the tail? —Jayce(15:48, 7/23/2014)
Re-upped This image is getting annoying at this point. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:24, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Pikepaw (MO) (A) - For Approval
i like this comments? -Ducksauce 18:19, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
Could you make his markings look more fish-like? Queen Beebs 18:30, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
well, i tried already, this is a pike. that's what i tried to base this off of, and in other images the spots are bigger, basically there's not to great of a consistent pattern in the mottles in northern pikes, which is what i want to base this off of because of his name. -Ducksauce 18:35, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
Could you make them vary in size, though? I love pike and it's kinda cool we got his gender confirmed —Jayce(18:39, 7/1/2014)
Blur the shadong some? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 22:05, 07/1/2014
Re-uploaded I didn't erase any of the mottles I had but i added a new layer and added smaller mottles in a new layer -Ducksauce 22:57, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:07 Thu Jul 3
Define the facial shading.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
re-uploaded -Ducksauce 14:13, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
anything else?? -Ducksauce 21:33, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Blur your shading- it's way too hard-edged. Try to avoid using gaussian blur, which will give you the over-blurred, undefined look, and go for using a large, super fuzzy smudge tool to feather out certain areas. Shading will be softer on cuirved, plump areas, like on the haunch, tail, and belly, but it'll be a little sharper on bonier regions. Rainlegs 02:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
re-uploaded i redid and tried something new witht the shading -Ducksauce 05:27, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail shading; I can't see it at all. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
re-uploaded -Ducksauce 05:55, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Thin out the shading a bit. Rainlegs 23:43, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(18:23, 7/18/2014)
yeah sorry re-uploaded -Ducksauce 01:34, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
There's waste or...something by the tail. o.O Also is he intentionally supposed to be blue-looking? —Jayce(20:36, 7/21/2014)
re-uploaded yeah he's supposed to be a bit blu-ish (i always pictured him blue-gray like mistystar and bluestar) the shading is tinted blue and there is an pale blue overlay layer at 10% opacity on top. -Ducksauce 21:47, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Uh, well, unless he's called blue-gray, I don't think it should be obvious... idk, it seems kinda like an assumption that he's blue-gray, despite only being called dark gray? Could you maybe lessen it up a bit? Tinting and all is fine, but maybe lighten up the overlay juuuust a bit? —Jayce(15:46, 7/23/2014)
re-uploaded i tweaked the overlay but it honestly makes very little, if any, difference. but then I set one of my shading layers on multiply and that seemed to help. but tbh I can clearly see that he's not blue gray. -Ducksauce 16:53, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Fallowfern (Q) - CBA
Hey. [1] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:53, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
Define the overall shading and light on her legs. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:54, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
[2] Re-ups User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 16:04, July 4, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the edges of the belly shading, and darken it while you're at it. —Jayce(04:31, 7/5/2014)
IDK if it's necessary, but add some shading around her shoulder, too? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:29, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Re-Ups [3]. I'll add shading around the shoulder if someone else asks me to. It looks okay to me, but, then again, I'm a newbie User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:43, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Yeah, go ahead and do that. I think you'd need it with your source anyways. —Jayce(14:46, 7/5/2014)
Re-Ups [4] I really hope it's shaped okay. This image is actually really, /really/ fun. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:06, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Remove that bit of shading right by the chest since it doesn't belong there. And you might want to get a second opinion on this, but can you define the earpink a bit? Also blur the stomach shading a tad. Silverhmm 16:34, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups. Ehhhhhhh... okay. The earpink is under the shading layers, I'll re-do it if someone else agrees, mainly because it took a few tries to get them right without seemind, well, neon-ish. [5] also the shading is strange on her leg i know but that's the only way I could include the shoulder and not the chest. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:36, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
By shoulder I meant that line between the belly and the head, but okay... Darken the shading on the legs slightly, maybe? And there's waste by her chest. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 18:57, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Re-Up. Better? I've got 13 layers of shading on this one cat... how did this happen?User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 20:42, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail and facial shading; also, define the earpink a bit. i can barely see it, especially in the <--- ear.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:37, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-Ups [6]. I moved the earpink so it was above all the shading. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:03, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on her tail ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:44, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Re-Up. Sorry it took so long, I've been working and away from GIMP. [7] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:13, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:44, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the hindleg furthest from us; there would be light there.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:39, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
There is light there, on the inside closest to her belly. If I try to add more, it'll throw off the shading I already have, because the original shading (where the light is) is connected to the original shading on her belly, face, legs, and tail. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:49, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Re up. [8] i am so done with this shading tbh. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 15:58, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the belly shading. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
re-up. [9] User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:21, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:10 Tue Jul 15
Add some depth in the shading ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:06, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the earpink.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:50, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140717C/ezimba17991054259200.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:56 Wed Jul 16
Comments? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:26 Sat Jul 19
Blur the shading a bit. —Jayce(13:18, 7/21/2014)
Re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140723C/ezimba17991047380500.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:51 Tue Jul 22
Petalnose (Q) ~ For Approval
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? Silverhmm 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. Silverhmm 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
No... I didn't mean outside of the lineart. Along her belly in just one little spot I can see white where there should be shading. Sorry to confuse you! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:38, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded It's ok! I didn't notice that at first. Pixlr always makes the stomach shading leak away from the lineart sometimes Silverhmm 18:01, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. Good work :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:39, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded and thank you C: Silverhmm 21:58, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
define the light on the tail. -Ducksauce 22:22, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
The belly shading seems a bit gray. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded It needed to be lightened, so that's why I did. Silverhmm 22:43, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
ok honestly this looks way too white, you can actualy tell shes even a grey cat tbh. maybe change that? 12:20, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
I color picked the colors from her warrior image, so unless someone else thinks her color is too white I'm not going to change it. Silverhmm 01:09, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Darken it; she's gonna end up being tweaked anyways. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 18:30, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Define the head shading, and perhaps the foreleg shading too? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 22:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 18:02, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink and define the light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:06, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded I just redid the shading to look like another queen's charart I saw. Hopefully the light source is clear on this one. I'm going to kill the tail shading though. Silverhmm 13:20, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the overall shading and define the light on the tail. —Jayce(13:17, 7/21/2014)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:47, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit- it appears slightly blotchy, especially on the body. —Jayce(15:50, 7/23/2014)
Floss (Q) - For Approval
New lineart, new charart. Colorpicked from her loner image. this was fun c: Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 22:04 Sat Jul 5
Define the shading and possibly add more white spots on her belly, tail, and legs. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 22:08, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. I decided to use pure white because the shading was making it gray. hope this is better Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 22:11 Sat Jul 5
Re-up. Added highlights, since it might help lighten the belly. They're too bright, though, imo. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 22:21 Sat Jul 5
Define the overall shading. Try tinting it, so it doesn't make the white look gray?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:40, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I don't think you have to tint shading, so I decided not to. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 10:11 Sun Jul 6
the white is looking very gray, it almost blends in with the other gray as it is now. I'd suggest lessening the shading a bit,a nd I think a tint might help. -Ducksauce 22:23, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:24 Mon Jul 7
I'm not sure, but is there waste around the image? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:27, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
It looks a little fuzzy around the edges, so either waste or blurred lineart.User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:15, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. i hate waste tbh Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:35 Tue Jul 8
smudge the earpink upwards? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:02, July 10, 2014 (UTC)
I decided not to smudge the earpink, since I sort of like the earpink as is, and I can't smudge it without not being able to blur it again. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 00:19 Fri Jul 11
I agree with rocket, I can't even see that it's smudged. also, the white looks very gray. -Ducksauce 00:41, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Smudging ear pink is not mandatory and it is solely a preference. The ear pink is fine as it currently is. —Jayce(03:42, 7/11/2014)
Re-up. Something's being blurred around the lineart. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 10:57 Sun Jul 13
Define the shading ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:52, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:35, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:57 Sun Jul 13
Add a bit of light on the tail, the shading's a bit flat there, and add some shadow to the face ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the front leg closest to us.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:49, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
The shading on the back leg farthest from us looks a bit flat... Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:25, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 14:30 Sat Jul 19
Define the shading/light on the tail? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:38, 07/21/2014
Cinderfur (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from apprentice image. 'Nuff said. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:05 Sat Jul 5
Define the light on the tail and I'm having issues seeing the light source. The body says it's coming from the top left, while the forelegs says it's coming from the bottom left. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:21 Sat Jul 5
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 00:11 Sun Jul 6
Make the nose color pink. His kit image has a pink nose, and i think his others do aswell.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:42, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. i've got to blur that belly shading soon ._. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 10:11 Sun Jul 6
Put some light on the front of those legs, they look a bit flat since they're totally in shadow. Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:34, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe lighten all the shading a tad, too? Except on the tail? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Define the earpink. i love dem eyes Brick 15:24, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Add/define the tail light ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:40, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Sorry, I had day camp and I had to go home at 5:00, then I had other things. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:24 Mon Jul 7
I see some waste near the tail. Queen Beebs 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:35 Tue Jul 8
Add some light around the paws? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:53, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 00:19 Fri Jul 11
The shading on the paws are way to dark, and also there is alot of waste near the paws aswell. Maybe changing your light source would help, so that both paws have light on them. The way you have it now makes it look flat.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:37, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. oopsies Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 01:02 Sat Jul 12
Re-up. Redid all the shading, since it was really tough to do. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 10:45 Sat Jul 12
Define the paw shading. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Re-up. Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 22:33 Sat Jul 12
Define the light on the legs and tail. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:51, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the fur into the ear pink a little more.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. ^^you two keep spamming my chararts lmao Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 23:57 Sun Jul 13
Define the light on the tail and maybe add a small highlight to the chest ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:04, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
I think it's fine, tbh Cloud 9 The Clock is TICKING! 14:30 Sat Jul 19
I'm gonna slide in and agree with Scarlet. The shading does appear rather flat, so I think adding the highlight to the chest-area could possibly help a bit. —Jayce(03:24, 7/20/2014)
I think defining the light on the tail would help too -Ducksauce 21:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Tallpoppy (Alt Q) - For Approval
Hello —Jayce(18:33, 7/11/2014)
Define the shading. Queen Beebs 01:23, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I stole and tweaked Velvet's texture. —Jayce(04:26, 7/12/2014)
Okay, Leggy's beating me with a stick, so I'm gonna redo this texture and reupload in a bit. —Jayce(23:41, 7/13/2014)
Re-uploaded. Got rid of the texture since it didn't like me and basically redid it. —Jayce(13:34, 7/14/2014)
Re-uploaded. After some encouragement, I tried to at least do something and brought back what I worked on last night. —Jayce(14:06, 7/14/2014)
Define the shading a bit more around her belly and shoulder ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:03, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front leg closest to us. Wow, this is really good, Snow.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:48, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(15:00, 7/16/2014)
Define the shading on the hind leg that we can see all of? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:51, 07/21/2014
lol, finally a comment. Reuploaded. Can we maybe please not go like five days without saying anything???? Couple days is fine, but there's also other work to be done. —Jayce(20:31, 7/21/2014)
Curve the texture between he belly and the back? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:22, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
It is curved, and I think it's pretty okay how it is, but I'll see what I can do if more people agree. —Jayce(12:52, 7/22/2014)
define the light a smidge on the top of the tail. lovin the texture! -Ducksauce 21:06, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you~ —Jayce(15:40, 7/23/2014)
Deerleap (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from the elder image. I don't really like the way this turned out but oh well. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:56, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the white, and define it on the tail a bit. Woah, this is nice. .o. —Jayce(04:27, 7/12/2014)
I'm changing this heading to for approval, and making you an apprentice as well, since it's obvious you know what you're doing and you have more than a basic grasp of chararts. =P —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Re-uploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 00:10, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
I love the stripes :P Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:28, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define your light source and I wish my first charart had been this good :o ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:50, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. (Thank you!! <3) Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:47, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Her dorsal stripe seems a bit hard-edged. Maybe smudge it a touch? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 17:19, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the stripes a little bit (they appear to be softer and not as hard-edged on the warrior and elder) and define the light on the tail. —Jayce(18:20, 7/18/2014)
Reuploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 18:16, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
can you blur the stripes a bit more? -Ducksauce 21:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Reuped. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 21:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Cherrytail (Q) - CBA
i've always loved this pattern. comments? -Ducksauce 05:56, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
This is really good :) The giner patch on her face is supposed to extend to the top of her nose. (Her apprentice and Kittypet images have it) so it'll match her other images. Also, define the facial shading a tad bit.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:24, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded thanks Breezeheart! c: -Ducksauce 13:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Could you try smudging the patches (like on her rump and legs) a little bit more on a lower setting brush? This is really nice, Duck. Probably one of your better chararts. —Jayce(19:48, 7/13/2014)
Define the shading a bit? This is purrtty ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:49, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Her patches seem a bit more yellow then the ones on her other images, maybe make them a tad more orangish? She's gorgous! ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:01, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
thanks guys. re-uploaded -Ducksauce 01:33, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
Define the facial and belly shading. Also, are the paws supposed to be white? I can't tell. —Jayce(20:55, 7/21/2014)
re-uploaded yeah they're white and I can tell fine but Ii added a highlight so they'll show better. -Ducksauce 21:49, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Nightwhisper (Lo) ~ For Approval
my first loner; changes are here. Comments? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:48, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the neck, face, and tail a little more, and blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more. Rainlegs 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the body shading and maybe lighten it a touch. —Jayce(18:16, 7/18/2014)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:41, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
Define the facial shading and ear pink, please. —Jayce(20:53, 7/21/2014)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:02, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Stonepelt (Star) ~ CBA
Here's Stoney! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:03 Sun Jul 13
Define the facial and tail shading. I love the stripes :)--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:30, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank you. c: ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot0:29 Mon Jul 14
Define the scar just a bit? I'm having a rough time seeing it. —Jayce(04:26, 7/15/2014)
Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:02 Tue Jul 15
Define the shading on the visible legs.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:46, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Honestly, I think it's fine. I'll change it if someone else agrees. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:27 Wed Jul 16
I think the left one (our left) could be darkened a tiny bit more especially toward the edge of the lineart. The right paw is fine. ((this is going by our angle not the casts so the left is << and the right is >>)) — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 17:36, 07/16/2014
Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:10 Wed Jul 16
Could you possibly define the ear pink just a bit? Sorry for the couple of days without comments, dear. I hadn't noticed! =( —Jayce(03:22, 7/20/2014)
Re-uploaded. idk if it's too bright now. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot16:28 Sun Jul 20
Runningbrook (Star) - For Approval
Since Palebird got declined, I did Runningbrook instead, since it got confirmed that she's in StarClan. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:58, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Darken/define the shading a tough? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:43 Mon Jul 14
Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:13, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading right of the muzzle a tad? holy crap this is amazing Bramble (talk) 19:38, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
The pale parts kinda look white..mind darkening them a bit? —Jayce(19:41, 7/14/2014)
Wait, why darken the pale parts. Aren't they supposed to be white? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:41, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the earpink a tad, to match the other images. I didn't know she got a cite, but now I'm happy. And being happy is good. And good things lead to less death. Brick 19:45, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
No, they're not supposed to be white. Pale parts are allowed on a tabby, yes, but they can't be white. Pale isn't white, and I don't think Breezey used white when she made Runningbrook's images. Jayie, we had this long before you came along, and someone tried to say that pale and white were the same thing, when they're not. —Jayce(19:50, 7/14/2014)
Oh, okay. :) I must've pulled the wrong color off the other chararts. I pulled it off the lightest part of her belly, 'cause I thought the rest was just dark because of the shading, but maybe I pulled it off of too light a pixel. I'll play around with the colors again. Sorry for the misunderstanding. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:56, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Does that work better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
Much better. ^^ Possibly blur the paw shading just a bit? —Jayce(22:46, 7/17/2014)
Thanks. :) Reuploaded, paw shading is blurred, and I removed some waste that I noticed. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:15, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
There hasn't been many comments for a few days; how about a CBA? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:05, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Sorry but can you blur the shading of chest that's paler and if that is the pale chest it should be larger. -Ducksauce 21:50, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:02, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
it should be bigger, judging by the position of this blank it should fill up almost all of where it is now down. -Ducksauce 21:04, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Theres a stripe running across the lower part of her chest - that's not all shading. She has that stripe on her other images. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Mosspelt (Q) - For Approval
Here are the changes if they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140714C/ezimba13931894448400.png Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:59, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define and darken the overall shading everywhere but the belly. —Jayce(04:25, 7/15/2014)
Reuploaded. Also realized that I'd forgotten to fill in the ear pink. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
Define the earpink some more. Also, define the shading and light on all four legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:45, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Now, correct me if I'm wrong (which I could be), wouldn't the shading on that leg basically under/behind the belly (where we can really only see part of it) be a bit darker? If I'm wrong, disregard me. Nice job in matching her pattern. o.o —Jayce(22:48, 7/17/2014)
Reuploaded, I darkened the shading on that leg. And thanks. :) Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
sorry but all of her white looks extremely gray. -Ducksauce 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:01, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
it still looks really gray -Ducksauce 21:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Poppydawn (Alt. Q) - For Approval
not sure whether or not she'd get a graying muzzle ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:51, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
Im not completely sure; But i think Poppydawn wasnt an elder yet when she was a queen, so shes not supposed to have the gray muzzle... someone correct me if im wrong.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
I dunno, I kinda disagree with the above comment. Being a warrior/queen doesn't mean you have to be young. Being an elder is only a named rank, so I think a queen could still have a graying muzzle. But I may just be incredibly tired and spitting up nonsense. Also, her warrior alt has it, sooo....? Brick 16:40, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Her alt images show it, but her normal queen doesnt. I say add it, if anyonne else aggrees. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:14 Fri Jul 18
This is why we check references. Judging by what's shown in the references, she was called brown as a queen in the allegiances of Yellowfang's Secret, which is long before she retires. Therefore, she would not get the gray muzzle, as she was said to have had it when she retired, and we don't add things from before citations. So, we wouldn't add it if she got an apprentice image or something along those lines. The alt warrior gets it since it went along with that description, and the same can be said for her elder image, StarClan image, ect. —Jayce(02:57, 7/18/2014)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit? I can barely see it. Perhaps blur it a bit, the edges also look a bit too sharp... But it could be me. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:31, 07/19/2014
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:56, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
I'm kinda having an issue seeing the ear pink. Mind defining it? —Jayce(20:51, 7/21/2014)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:07, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
River (Ki) - For Approval
File:River.kit.png I tried my best ;;-;; Brick 06:35, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the front legs and tail shading. Nice charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:41, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, thanks! http://i57.tinypic.com/9pp01y.png Brick 16:47, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front leg closer to the tail. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:51, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/1z30xow.png Brick 06:32, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Define the overall shading and blur the stripes a bit. —Jayce(20:40, 7/21/2014)
The shading on the right side is fine- it's the chest, trail, and leg shading that needs defining imo. Great job on this, Trunk. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:21, 07/22/2014
Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2i0qhxf.png . Brick 09:31, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Oakfur (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
I hate apprentices so much, so why do I keep taking them? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:49, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Define the ear pink a tad and possibly smudge it a bit. Silverhmm 23:08, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading and possibly lighten it a little bit? It seems just a little too dark, but maybe blurring it would solve that. —Jayce(18:14, 7/18/2014)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:35, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
it looks kinda cream as it is now. -Ducksauce 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Colorpicked off a real cat. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:16, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a little and define the light on the tail? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:15, 07/22/2014
Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
david 🌈 02:35, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
The unshaded part looks flat. Maybe add a highlight or something? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot2:44 Fri Jul 18
IDK if it's just me, but the shading doesn't look blurred /at all/. If you do your shading like that, then it's fine by me, but if not... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 18:10 Fri Jul 18 My computer screen is probably really out of whack too, but the other images look fine, so....
David doesn't blur his shading and hasn't for quite a while. Blurring it isn't mandatory, and there are other styles of shading. Maybe extend the shading, if possible? idk. —Jayce(18:13, 7/18/2014)
I'm not sure if extending the shading will add any depth, though. Perhaps add a little more of a gradient? It should get gradually darker to show that the image isn't entirely flat. Rainlegs 19:42, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Also, perhaps you should add some shading on the shoulder behind (well, next to) the head? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:28, 07/21/2014
Stormfur (Alt Ki) - For Approval
My adorable little bundle of fur was called silver, which warrants an alt since silver is sorta a pale gray and they're more than two shades apart. —Jayce(03:23, 7/19/2014)
Blur/smudge the facial shading, the chest shading (the lower half, the part above the leg) and the shading on the left leg. He's gorgeous omg — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:22, 07/19/2014
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(14:28, 7/19/2014)
blur the texture a tad -Ducksauce 01:50, July 20, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(03:26, 7/20/2014)
Maybe define the eye depth? If not, that's fine he's so freaking cute I just want to cuddle him ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:04, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
I don't have much to work with, and it's actually pretty defined. o.O —Jayce(13:13, 7/21/2014)
The eye depth is fine. There's only what, two pixels, to work with? It looks good to me tbh. Nicely done, Jayce. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:30, 07/21/2014
hm the shading looks slightly flat to me, could you expand i tjust a smidge. -Ducksauce 21:52, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Uh, it's not flat, but okay. o.O Re-uploaded. —Jayce(22:04, 7/21/2014)
Tansy (Cat) (Q) - For Approval
File:Tansy (Cat).queen.png Ohai. Snowy got approved (yay!), so here I am with another long hair queen. Changes be here if needed. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:37 Sat Jul 19
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Define and add some depth to the shading. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:45, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
re-ups User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:39 Sat Jul 19
Define the shading on the legs and the tail. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:34, 07/21/2014
Tail and legs are fine, imho. I can't see the shoulder shading, though. —Jayce(20:39, 7/21/2014)
Oh, and could you define the earpink a bit? I'm having issues seeing it. ouo — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:11, 07/22/2014
Re-up. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:50 Tue Jul 22
Define the chest shading. —Jayce(15:52, 7/23/2014)
re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140724C/ezimba17991021946600.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:53 Wed Jul 23
Morningflower (Q) - For Approval
eh.i didn't have much to work with in terms of matching the stomach. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 18:02, 07/21/2014
Blur the patches a bit. They're not as hard-edges on her other images and they're smoother, for lack of a better work. —Jayce(18:23, 7/21/2014)
reuploaded also i added shading on the shoulder because i forgot it — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:13, 07/21/2014
Define the shading on the chest and darken it a bit. —Jayce(20:38, 7/21/2014)
'reuploaded ok i'm really proud of this — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:38, 07/22/2014
Reedfeather (W) - For Approval
- all colors and opacities are the same as the deputy. Stripe and texture layers are exactly the same as deputy (just laid over warrior blank) Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:29, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Define that pesky tail shading. I hate shading tails on short-haired cats omg. —Jayce(20:37, 7/21/2014)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:12, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Mapleshade (A) - For Approval
ew. im not totally happy with this. but. here it is. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:48, 07/21/2014
the spiky fur on her back looks a bit out of place, perhaps remove a few of the spikes. -Ducksauce 21:53, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
I think it's fine to be honest. It takes away from the look that she is actually ragged... I'd rather not remove it unless more people agree. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 22:21, 07/21/2014
I gotta agree with Duck. Maybe if they went up the back a little more? They kinda..just stop when they probably should continue up the spine.. —Jayce(22:25, 7/21/2014)
Maybe look at the other Mapleshade apprentice image to get an idea about how to do the spikes? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:27, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
reuploaded — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:06, 07/21/2014
Frost (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Since shading tint doesnt have to match, i made the shading have a slightly blueish tint. Also, this is my first time doing texture, so its not the best. =P Colorpicked from his Rogue image. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
His eyes look almost black. Can you please lighten up the color a bit so I can see it? Color-picked or not, on the rogue, the eyes are smaller, so you can get away with darker colors much easier. Also, blur the lower back shading, and darken the texture a bit. —Jayce(02:11, 7/22/2014)
Re-up. Lightened the eye color to a lighter blue, darkened the texture a bit, and blurred the shading. is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the texture more. Comparing it to the rogue, this is still too light. Nice job on the texture too, btw. —Jayce(03:07, 7/22/2014)
Define the shading. Brick 05:15, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Darkened texture again, and defined the shading. I tried my best at darkening it; if you think its still too light, ill redo the texture. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 08:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
His eyes still look really dark, maybe try making a gradient fron light to dark going up? I'd say don't lighten the bottom too much, but if you have it lightened, expand? One thing I've noticed always helps is the dodge and burn tools. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:12 Tue Jul 22
It is going from light on the bottom to dark. I think its fine, unless someone else agrees.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:25, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
The eyes look fine to me/look fine on my computer. Blur the stomach shading. Silverhmm 12:30, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Nah, I still think they're still a liiiiittle too dark and there's not much depth to them. With this image, you have a little more freedom with the eyes, and you don't have to use the same like two-four pixels of color that are used on the rogue (as long as they're looking the same, but with the eyes on the rogue being small as hell, you can't tell tbh), but you can add a little more light to his eyes without it being too light/too dark/ect. —Jayce(15:43, 7/23/2014)
Silverstream (Q) ~ For Approval
ew what have I done? Changes are here and I'll remove the white pixel in her toe on the next upload ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:43, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the backlegs, and define the shading on the front legs. Also, define the earpink some. This is really good ^-^~Breezeheart~ (talk) 09:56, July 23, 2014 (UTC)