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Sunfish (Q) ~ Declined
So like, apparently you can have a redone queen AND something else for approval now? I did not know this. Buuut here. All colors from the Warrior.
If I messed this up in any way feel free to shoot me Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:46, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading and light on all four legs. Queen Beebs 16:57, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:16, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define tail and belly shading. Brick 19:10, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
lighten her up a bit -Ducksauce 23:21, June 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 07:46, June 28, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on that hind leg furthest to us - there'd be ligh tni that position. Queen Beebs 14:12, July 2, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 08:46, July 3, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail a little bit, and perhaps make the light on the belly a little more visible? Ah, I wish Sunfish had gotten more screen time, I like her. ;-; —Jayce(05:00, 7/5/2014)
Re-uploaded. I agree, she should have had more time V_V. In case changes don't show, have a link. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:26, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading a bit more on the belly.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:31, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Changes. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:36, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
lighten the shading a tad? it's throwing off the color -Ducksauce 15:22, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I darkened it on the face, though, because I could hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:42, July 9, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 17:48, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Thin out the shading. Rainlegs 19:01, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I don't understand what that means..? Make it so that there's a bit less shading...? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 23:08, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
^^ It basically means make the highlights larger. Even out the shading darkness and define your light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:08, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 13:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the back and facial shading. It appears rather dark. —Jayce(13:20, 7/21/2014)
I'm not sure where your light source is- the face and tail say above, but the legs say from just off the the right of the face. Could you possibly settle on one source? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:28, 07/21/2014
Re-uploaded I have a feeling this is going to be declined because of that one month rule o_o Shinxy Blitz and Melody 16:06, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Wouldn't there be light on the top of the tail? —Jayce(15:48, 7/23/2014)
Re-upped This image is getting annoying at this point. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:24, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Making light-colored cats without stripes can be frustrating. Trust me, I made Sunfish's warrior image. You have your light-source coming from two different directions, with everything on her left lit but the belly on her right lit up as well, which is confusing. I'd advise picking a light coming from in front of her or to her right (your left). Go for minimal shading with a really light opacity and blend it until you can barely see where the shadows start and the light ends. Be patient and don't give up and upload it until you think it's perfect. Shelly For a limited time only 04:36, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Declined due to the one month limit- sorry, Shinx. ;-; —Jayce(16:21, 7/28/2014)
It's OK, I'll just find another queen to do once this is archived. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 19:52, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Petalnose (Q) ~ CBA
Here's the new version Whew, first charart in ages. It's probably for the best that I chose something simple since it's been awhile xD. Anyways, comments? Silverhmm 17:03, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
The shading leaks away from the lineart on her belly User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:27, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
I cleared all of the outside shading twice to make sure it was gone, so there shouldn't be any. Silverhmm 17:35, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
No... I didn't mean outside of the lineart. Along her belly in just one little spot I can see white where there should be shading. Sorry to confuse you! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 17:38, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded It's ok! I didn't notice that at first. Pixlr always makes the stomach shading leak away from the lineart sometimes Silverhmm 18:01, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. Good work :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 04:39, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded and thank you C: Silverhmm 21:58, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
define the light on the tail. -Ducksauce 22:22, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:35, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
The belly shading seems a bit gray. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:29, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded It needed to be lightened, so that's why I did. Silverhmm 22:43, July 8, 2014 (UTC)
ok honestly this looks way too white, you can actualy tell shes even a grey cat tbh. maybe change that? 12:20, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
I color picked the colors from her warrior image, so unless someone else thinks her color is too white I'm not going to change it. Silverhmm 01:09, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Darken it; she's gonna end up being tweaked anyways. —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 18:30, July 12, 2014 (UTC)
Define the head shading, and perhaps the foreleg shading too? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 22:29, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 18:02, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the pelt into the earpink and define the light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:06, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded I just redid the shading to look like another queen's charart I saw. Hopefully the light source is clear on this one. I'm going to kill the tail shading though. Silverhmm 13:20, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the overall shading and define the light on the tail. —Jayce(13:17, 7/21/2014)
Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:47, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit- it appears slightly blotchy, especially on the body. —Jayce(15:50, 7/23/2014)
Can I get some serious help with the shading please? I'm having a lot of trouble with it no matter what program I use. (At first I used pixlr but now I'm using photoshop) Silverhmm 23:08, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
shading with light colored cats is tough. I think blurring it tons would help, and also remember, the shading doesn't have to be overly dark, it just needs to be visible so really light shading with a more defined edge can, in some instances, be better than darker, defined shading. c: (idk if i helped any lol) -Ducksauce 15:38, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks to the help of Skye and Duck I hope this looks better. Silverhmm 18:10, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
looks great silver, just define the light on the front paws -Ducksauce 20:49, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you Duck C: Silverhmm 21:18, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Deerleap (Star) - For Approval
Colorpicked from the elder image. I don't really like the way this turned out but oh well. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:56, July 11, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the white, and define it on the tail a bit. Woah, this is nice. .o. —Jayce(04:27, 7/12/2014)
I'm changing this heading to for approval, and making you an apprentice as well, since it's obvious you know what you're doing and you have more than a basic grasp of chararts. =P —Jayce(14:21, 7/12/2014)
Re-uploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 00:10, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
I love the stripes :P Define the facial shading, and define the light on the tail.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 07:28, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define your light source and I wish my first charart had been this good :o ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:50, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. (Thank you!! <3) Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 22:47, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Her dorsal stripe seems a bit hard-edged. Maybe smudge it a touch? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:02, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 17:19, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the stripes a little bit (they appear to be softer and not as hard-edged on the warrior and elder) and define the light on the tail. —Jayce(18:20, 7/18/2014)
Reuploaded. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 18:16, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
can you blur the stripes a bit more? -Ducksauce 21:05, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Reuped. Eɢʀᴇᴛᴛ 21:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
I'm not sure if the tip of the tail is grey or if it's shading.... If it's shading, can you blur it a bit? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 03:12, 07/24/2014
Still working? —Jayce(20:52, 7/27/2014)
Nightwhisper (Lo) ~ For Approval
my first loner; changes are here. Comments? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:48, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the neck, face, and tail a little more, and blur the haunch shading a tiny bit more. Rainlegs 23:34, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:05, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the body shading and maybe lighten it a touch. —Jayce(18:16, 7/18/2014)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:41, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
Define the facial shading and ear pink, please. —Jayce(20:53, 7/21/2014)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:02, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading/light on the tail? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 04:08, 07/24/2014
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:48, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading just a bit on the body and the completely visible back leg. —Jayce(17:24, 7/27/2014)
Runningbrook (Star) - CBA
Since Palebird got declined, I did Runningbrook instead, since it got confirmed that she's in StarClan. Jayie Unwritten words~ 23:58, July 13, 2014 (UTC)
Darken/define the shading a tough? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:43 Mon Jul 14
Reuploaded. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:13, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading right of the muzzle a tad? holy crap this is amazing Bramble (talk) 19:38, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
The pale parts kinda look white..mind darkening them a bit? —Jayce(19:41, 7/14/2014)
Wait, why darken the pale parts. Aren't they supposed to be white? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:41, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the earpink a tad, to match the other images. I didn't know she got a cite, but now I'm happy. And being happy is good. And good things lead to less death. Brick 19:45, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
No, they're not supposed to be white. Pale parts are allowed on a tabby, yes, but they can't be white. Pale isn't white, and I don't think Breezey used white when she made Runningbrook's images. Jayie, we had this long before you came along, and someone tried to say that pale and white were the same thing, when they're not. —Jayce(19:50, 7/14/2014)
Oh, okay. :) I must've pulled the wrong color off the other chararts. I pulled it off the lightest part of her belly, 'cause I thought the rest was just dark because of the shading, but maybe I pulled it off of too light a pixel. I'll play around with the colors again. Sorry for the misunderstanding. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:56, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Does that work better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
Much better. ^^ Possibly blur the paw shading just a bit? —Jayce(22:46, 7/17/2014)
Thanks. :) Reuploaded, paw shading is blurred, and I removed some waste that I noticed. Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:15, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
There hasn't been many comments for a few days; how about a CBA? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:05, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Sorry but can you blur the shading of chest that's paler and if that is the pale chest it should be larger. -Ducksauce 21:50, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:02, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
it should be bigger, judging by the position of this blank it should fill up almost all of where it is now down. -Ducksauce 21:04, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Theres a stripe running across the lower part of her chest - that's not all shading. She has that stripe on her other images. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
well if that is the stripe, this it out a tad and define the pale chest below the stripe, because her warrior has it all of the way down. -Ducksauce 03:20, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
I thinned out the stripe, but it's pretty low on her chest in the other images, so I think it works where it is. You can see the pale fur of the belly under the stripe, it's just a bit darker because of the shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:15, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Couple days without comments, so let's try a CBA again. —Jayce(17:26, 7/27/2014)
Mosspelt (Q) - CBA
Here are the changes if they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140714C/ezimba13931894448400.png Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:59, July 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define and darken the overall shading everywhere but the belly. —Jayce(04:25, 7/15/2014)
Reuploaded. Also realized that I'd forgotten to fill in the ear pink. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:26, July 15, 2014 (UTC)
Define the earpink some more. Also, define the shading and light on all four legs.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:45, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 12:42, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Now, correct me if I'm wrong (which I could be), wouldn't the shading on that leg basically under/behind the belly (where we can really only see part of it) be a bit darker? If I'm wrong, disregard me. Nice job in matching her pattern. o.o —Jayce(22:48, 7/17/2014)
Reuploaded, I darkened the shading on that leg. And thanks. :) Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:11, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
sorry but all of her white looks extremely gray. -Ducksauce 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:01, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
it still looks really gray -Ducksauce 21:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Honestly, i think it looks fine. I can plainly see that its white. Theres shading in those places, so of course its going to look a little gray.~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:48, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
The only part that really looks darker is the belly/stomach, but considering it's basically on the lower half of the cat, I can see why it's so dark. Everywhere else is fine, and I think it should be Jayie's choice whether or not she thinks it's too dark. —Jayce(00:50, 7/24/2014)
I lightened the white on the belly a bit, but I think lightening it any more would take away from the shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:14, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
I agree with Jaye and Skye. Nice job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 22:32 Fri Jul 25
River (Ki) - For Approval
File:River.kit.png I tried my best ;;-;; Brick 06:35, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the front legs and tail shading. Nice charart :)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 06:41, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, thanks! http://i57.tinypic.com/9pp01y.png Brick 16:47, July 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the front leg closer to the tail. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:51, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, http://i60.tinypic.com/1z30xow.png Brick 06:32, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Define the overall shading and blur the stripes a bit. —Jayce(20:40, 7/21/2014)
The shading on the right side is fine- it's the chest, trail, and leg shading that needs defining imo. Great job on this, Trunk. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:21, 07/22/2014
Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2i0qhxf.png . Brick 09:31, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on both visible legs. —Jayce(19:20, 7/24/2014)
Re-ups, http://i58.tinypic.com/2ql8wti.png Brick 12:16, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
Would you like the file for this, now that I'm back? Queen Beebs 17:28, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
No thanks, I could only see myself needing the file if the colours looked off. but maybe they do my monitor is a bit poop Brick 20:16, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Thin out the space between the stripes on his forehead some - on his other images, it's wider than that. Queen Beebs 17:25, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, tried to make it match the leader image and also fiddled with the earpink a little bit. http://i59.tinypic.com/9kas06.png Brick 19:53, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail shading a bit, as well as the left leg (our left) — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:22, 07/27/2014
Re-ups, http://i59.tinypic.com/2jeplys.png Brick 05:14, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Oakfur (Alt. A) ~ For Approval
I hate apprentices so much, so why do I keep taking them? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 10:49, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Define the ear pink a tad and possibly smudge it a bit. Silverhmm 23:08, July 17, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading and possibly lighten it a little bit? It seems just a little too dark, but maybe blurring it would solve that. —Jayce(18:14, 7/18/2014)
Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 15:35, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
it looks kinda cream as it is now. -Ducksauce 21:51, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Colorpicked off a real cat. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:16, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a little and define the light on the tail? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:15, 07/22/2014
Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:45, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
So sorry for the lack of comments, Shinx. What's the space of darker area on his face? Is that supposed to be shading? Also, you do mind making this a little more brown and less yellow-ish? This is the light brown alt, correct..? —Jayce(17:29, 7/27/2014)
Yes, it is the light brown alt. I'll re-up in a second, and lighten the shading some. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 19:03, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploadedShinxy Blitz and Melody 13:07, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Define, not darken, the shading on his face and tail. Jayie Unwritten words~ 13:49, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
david 🌈 02:35, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
The unshaded part looks flat. Maybe add a highlight or something? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot2:44 Fri Jul 18
IDK if it's just me, but the shading doesn't look blurred /at all/. If you do your shading like that, then it's fine by me, but if not... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 18:10 Fri Jul 18 My computer screen is probably really out of whack too, but the other images look fine, so....
David doesn't blur his shading and hasn't for quite a while. Blurring it isn't mandatory, and there are other styles of shading. Maybe extend the shading, if possible? idk. —Jayce(18:13, 7/18/2014)
I'm not sure if extending the shading will add any depth, though. Perhaps add a little more of a gradient? It should get gradually darker to show that the image isn't entirely flat. Rainlegs 19:42, July 18, 2014 (UTC)
Also, perhaps you should add some shading on the shoulder behind (well, next to) the head? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:28, 07/21/2014
re-uploaded ayyyyy lmao david 🌈 01:16, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
there we go. but, i just noticed, could you add some chest shading? that would help to give the chest shape... it looks flat. ouo;;; — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 01:28, 07/25/2014
Tansy (Cat) (Q) - CBA
File:Tansy (Cat).queen.png Ohai. Snowy got approved (yay!), so here I am with another long hair queen. Changes be here if needed. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 14:37 Sat Jul 19
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Define and add some depth to the shading. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:45, July 19, 2014 (UTC)
re-ups User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:39 Sat Jul 19
Define the shading on the legs and the tail. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 14:34, 07/21/2014
Tail and legs are fine, imho. I can't see the shoulder shading, though. —Jayce(20:39, 7/21/2014)
Oh, and could you define the earpink a bit? I'm having issues seeing it. ouo — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 15:11, 07/22/2014
Re-up. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:50 Tue Jul 22
Define the chest shading. —Jayce(15:52, 7/23/2014)
re-up http://www.ezimba.com/work/140724C/ezimba17991021946600.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:53 Wed Jul 23
define the tail shading a bit? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 03:21, 07/24/2014
Waste around the chest/left leg bit. Brick 19:12, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Thanks Brick! (and Ferk to :) ) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:48 Thu Jul 24
Comments plez? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:32 Sun Jul 27
Blur the shading just a little bit. —Jayce(17:30, 7/27/2014)
Re-up. Hit it with Guassian once on each layer of shading. Me likey. c: User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 18:50 Sun Jul 27
Morningflower (Q) - For Approval
eh.i didn't have much to work with in terms of matching the stomach. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 18:02, 07/21/2014
Blur the patches a bit. They're not as hard-edges on her other images and they're smoother, for lack of a better work. —Jayce(18:23, 7/21/2014)
reuploaded also i added shading on the shoulder because i forgot it — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 19:13, 07/21/2014
Define the shading on the chest and darken it a bit. —Jayce(20:38, 7/21/2014)
'reuploaded ok i'm really proud of this — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 02:38, 07/22/2014
Define the shoulder shading a little bit. I know it's there, but I can't really see it. —Jayce(19:14, 7/24/2014)
reuploaded — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 18:52, 07/26/2014
Blur the feet shading. —Jayce(17:31, 7/27/2014)
Mapleshade (A) - For Approval
ew. im not totally happy with this. but. here it is. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:48, 07/21/2014
the spiky fur on her back looks a bit out of place, perhaps remove a few of the spikes. -Ducksauce 21:53, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
I think it's fine to be honest. It takes away from the look that she is actually ragged... I'd rather not remove it unless more people agree. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 22:21, 07/21/2014
I gotta agree with Duck. Maybe if they went up the back a little more? They kinda..just stop when they probably should continue up the spine.. —Jayce(22:25, 7/21/2014)
Maybe look at the other Mapleshade apprentice image to get an idea about how to do the spikes? Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:27, July 21, 2014 (UTC)
reuploaded — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 23:06, 07/21/2014
Her muzzle and chest look really gray. —Jayce(20:45, 7/24/2014)
The light is coming from her bum, so it will look that grey... I don't see how I can lighten it without being told to define it again. :/ — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 13:46, 07/25/2014
It is still very possible to lighten the shading and have it visible. I can see it just fine, but it's making the white look too gray right now. I'm not telling you to make it at like 0% opacity or anything, just enough so I don't have to squint to tell it's honestly white. —Jayce(15:22, 7/25/2014)
reuploaded — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:08, 07/26/2014
I'm sorry, I know it must be frustrating but the shading is lost on me. Also, to keep the muzzle, chest, or whatever looking whiter, just erase that part of the shading with the eraser at a low opacity. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:26, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Frost (Star) ~ For Approval
He needed a StarClan image. Since shading tint doesnt have to match, i made the shading have a slightly blueish tint. Also, this is my first time doing texture, so its not the best. =P Colorpicked from his Rogue image. ~Breezeheart~ (talk) 02:07, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
His eyes look almost black. Can you please lighten up the color a bit so I can see it? Color-picked or not, on the rogue, the eyes are smaller, so you can get away with darker colors much easier. Also, blur the lower back shading, and darken the texture a bit. —Jayce(02:11, 7/22/2014)
Re-up. Lightened the eye color to a lighter blue, darkened the texture a bit, and blurred the shading. is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 03:01, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the texture more. Comparing it to the rogue, this is still too light. Nice job on the texture too, btw. —Jayce(03:07, 7/22/2014)
Define the shading. Brick 05:15, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Darkened texture again, and defined the shading. I tried my best at darkening it; if you think its still too light, ill redo the texture. Is that better?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 08:12, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
His eyes still look really dark, maybe try making a gradient fron light to dark going up? I'd say don't lighten the bottom too much, but if you have it lightened, expand? One thing I've noticed always helps is the dodge and burn tools. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 21:12 Tue Jul 22
It is going from light on the bottom to dark. I think its fine, unless someone else agrees.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 23:25, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
The eyes look fine to me/look fine on my computer. Blur the stomach shading. Silverhmm 12:30, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Nah, I still think they're still a liiiiittle too dark and there's not much depth to them. With this image, you have a little more freedom with the eyes, and you don't have to use the same like two-four pixels of color that are used on the rogue (as long as they're looking the same, but with the eyes on the rogue being small as hell, you can't tell tbh), but you can add a little more light to his eyes without it being too light/too dark/ect. —Jayce(15:43, 7/23/2014)
1db9e8 was the lighter colour used and 0a576f was the darker that I used for the rogue btw david 🌈 00:15, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. Lightened eyes, and defined them. Also blurred the belly shading. Is that better?--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:30, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps define the light everywhere but the main part of the body. So, it would be the chest, face, tail, and paws/legs. —Jayce(20:44, 7/24/2014)
Okay. Ill reupload this as soon as i get a new monitor. It shouldnt be longer than a few days/a week before i can reupload this. ^^'--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 05:20, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
I actually think the light is fine, except for maybe on the tail. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:31 Sun Jul 27
Again, sorry about the lack of uploads the past few days. i am still active with this, since i dont want this to get declined. Ill reupload this as soon as i can after i get a new screen.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:22, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Silverstream (Q) ~ For Approval
ew what have I done? Changes are here and I'll remove the white pixel in her toe on the next upload ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:43, July 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the backlegs, and define the shading on the front legs. Also, define the earpink some. This is really good ^-^~Breezeheart~ (talk) 09:56, July 23, 2014 (UTC)
Define the belly shading a tiny bit... It might be my screen and the fact that it's 11 at night and I'm tired that I can't see it well, however, so you might not need to... But for now, unless someone can speak up and tell me I'm blind, I can't see the belly shading as well as the shading on the bum idk but wow good job bruh — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 03:04, 07/24/2014
I think both are pretty defined, but the facial shading could be defined and darkend a smidge. —Jayce(03:13, 7/24/2014)
Reups thank you so much guys ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:13, July 24, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading. Queen Beebs 21:12, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
I know it's the shading, but you might want to think about lightening up the earpink so it show more color through the shading. Also, she looks a bit cross-eyed. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:19, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Reups I don't think she looks cross-eyed, imho. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed
Maybe just move the pupil on the right way over to the right a smidge. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:12, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Acorn Fur (Ro) ~ For Approval
david 🌈 01:36, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
Define the leg shading. —Jayce(17:32, 7/27/2014)
Dawnflower (Q) - For Approval
Beep. —Jayce(17:05, 7/25/2014)
Define the tail and belly shading. Brick 09:25, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(02:55, 7/27/2014)
Misty (Q) - For Approval
All colors are from her rogue. Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 22:04, July 25, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded waste ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:34, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the tail shading, and is the white tail tip there? I can't see it because I'm blind as a bat and my eyes are terrible. —Jayce(17:33, 7/27/2014)
Re-uploaded you're not going blind, Cloudy. Her tail underside is supposed to be white but me, being a derp, forgot to erase some of the shading so it'll actually show xP ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 21:21, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
This is just a suggestion, I know you don't have to add highlights, but maybe add some on the cheeks right under her eyes? It would give some depth to the shading on the face. Jayie Unwritten words~ 21:57, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:10, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Cherrypaw (TC) (W) ~ For Approval
I have always wanted to do her warrior picture and tada! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:27 Sat Jul 26
Re-uploaded. Whoops forgot to blur. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:45 Sat Jul 26
Can you darken the opacity on the stripes a bit and blur the shading? —Jayce(17:35, 7/27/2014)
Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:08 Sun Jul 27
Molepaw (OTS) (W) - For Approval
i love him and his sister -Ducksauce 01:43, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the legs and tail. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:46 Sat Jul 26
re-uploaded -Ducksauce 20:47, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
The other images don't appear to be blurred/smudged as much as you have it where the cream and brown meet. —Jayce(21:11, 7/26/2014)
re-uploaded -Ducksauce 21:45, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Darken or add a little more shading to the back of the tail and spine. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:16, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
re-uplaoded -Ducksauce 16:17, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading. —Jayce(16:19, 7/28/2014)
Speckle (Q) - For Approval
Who am I to deny the needy? (in need of a new blank, that is...) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:42 Sat Jul 26
Define and add depth the shading, and I think the flecks disappear under it a bit. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:45, July 26, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. I blurred the shading more and lowered the opacity on both layers to about 68... but I'm not sure about defining it/darkening it because I don't know how to get the flecks to not disappear on her belly. which sucks because I really want to darken that shading up more. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 23:51 Sat Jul 26
Darken, define, and expand the shading, and sharpen the flecks some. Queen Beebs 00:20, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 00:30 Sun Jul 27
Some of the flecks still get lost in her belly/cheek/lower tail shading. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:04, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
You can always tint the shading more towards a black or alternative color that's not as similar to her pelt color. And darken, define, and expand the shading some more too. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:15, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
If you're going to use a color that does stay close to her base, then you could use the "multiply" layer option as another alternative. That should decrease the amount of flecks that appear to fade away. =) —Jayce(01:27, 7/28/2014)
re-up. I did pure black shading like Alteda suggested, and I set the layers on Multiply. The opacities for the three layers are 59, 59, and 13, and I Gaussian blurred 8 times, then 4, then 2. Thanks guys. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 13:31 Mon Jul 28
Fallowtail (Q) - For Approval
- pulled all the colors from her old queen image. changes here Comments? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:28, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define and add a bit more depth to her shading ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:04, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Darken it a smidge too. —Jayce(01:16, 7/28/2014)
Re-uploaded ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:09, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Make the facial highlights a bit larger. Rainlegs 20:40, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Sandstorm (Q) ~ For Approval
Color picked off her warrior image. I've always wanted to make her an image, and it seems that fate has led me here... ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:05 Sun Jul 27
Aww what a pretty kitty. Define the light on the back leg furthest from us, maybe? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:03, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thank youu c: ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:04 Mon Jul 28
Take a tiny bit off the shading, darkness-wise. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:13, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:19 Mon Jul 28
Sharpen the shading, especially on the face. Rainlegs 20:40, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Thorn (Alt Ro) - For Approval
File:Thorn.rogue.alt.png Okay, basically what "mottling fur" is.. well, it's basically saying a cat's fur is shedding, which is quite comment enough in animals and I'm not sure how to depict that on this image. She was called a tom, so I'm using the male blank, and you're not seeing things. —Jayce(19:14, 7/27/2014)
Define the nose and earpink. Queen Beebs 19:15, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Friendly reminder that I do not like ear pink or nose pink and they can gtfo. —Jayce(19:18, 7/27/2014)
Cinderfur (Star) ~ For Approval
Beep beep. Queen Beebs 19:29, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading a tick? maybe this'll finally get approved after how many tries? dem eyes tho O.O User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 19:59 Sun Jul 27
Add/define the chest shading. Again, there's that odd thing where it looks like a pale chest... —Jayce(20:01, 7/27/2014)
There is chest shading, but I'll try defining it. The "pale chest" is a large chest highlight. Again, I'll define it in the next upload. Queen Beebs 20:56, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
re-up Queen Beebs 21:00, July 27, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the chest shading and make it a larger gradient perhaps. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:10, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Dulling the chest highlight might actually do the trick, Beebs. —Jayce(01:15, 7/28/2014)
re-up just messed with the chest shading a bit, since dulling the highlight would make the chest appear "flat" to some. Queen Beebs 01:17, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
I've told you before, you can still dull it and give it some depth.. It really does look like you gave him a pale chest, even though you've said it's a large highlight. —Jayce(01:20, 7/28/2014)
re-up Queen Beebs 01:25, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
What opacity is the highlight on? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 13:22 Mon Jul 28
None - it's an unshaded area of the kitty that has light. Queen Beebs 13:27, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
Is there a way to make a gradient then, like Alteda suggested? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 13:33 Mon Jul 28
No, because 1) I don't know how you make one, and 2) tbh, it wouldn't help much because it's just a gradient, so it wouldn't define the shading any more than normal defintion would, so I think it's fine =P Queen Beebs 13:35, July 28, 2014 (UTC)
The chest looks pretty good to me, just add more shading to this >>>> edge of the chest, it'll show the light direction a bit better. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:10, July 28, 2014 (UTC)