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Dawncloud (Q) ~ For Approval
Boom. All colors colorpicked from the elder that Jayie has for approval. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:06, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe lighten the shading on her belly a bit (I know it's artist's choice but it seems a little too dark), and I don't think her stripes really match the other images, but that might just be me ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:04, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I can't do anything with the stripes. I copied from the elder best I could. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:26, July 29, 2014 (UTC)
It could just be me, but the base coat looks a little light. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:21 PM, Tue Jul 29, 2014
I think it's because of the highlights. Maybe dull them some? Wow... *o* ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:26 Tue Jul 29
the stripes don't match, possible add more. -Ducksauce 01:07, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
The stripes are too thin, and there should be striping on the head. I think the highlighting might be a little too bright as well compared to the other Dawncloud images, but that might be up to artist preference, not sure. Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:10, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Dulled the highlights, thickened the stripes, and lightened the face shading so you could see the face stripes. I matched the stripes the best I could, and spent about two hours on them. I even pasted the Elder on another layer to use as reference. Queens' bellies are stretched, so so is the pattern, to be fair. (And Duck, adding more stripes probably won't make it match more, because she never had more stripes then this in the first place) Pls don't kill meShinxy Blitz and Melody 09:08, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
Does she have texture, or is that just the way you've done the shading? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 11:35, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
It's shading. I smudged rather then blurred. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:05, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
Actually, if you look at her StarClanner, she does have more stripes than this facing this way, adding more, would make it match more. -Ducksauce 17:47, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. OK, Shinx confirmed for derp. Added some more stripes, although I don't have room for any more. If someone complains, I'll just redo them. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:37, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a bit its desaturating her colors. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith22:45 Wed Jul 30 2014
There's waste under the belly and on the front leg farthest to us. Brick 09:33, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded.Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:58, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
sharpen the stripes a bit -Ducksauce 19:11, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Shinxy Blitz and Melody 09:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Darken the shading just a teeny bit. This is lovely. *.* —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
Re-uploaded Thank you! Shinx Blitz and Melody 20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
make the stripes more pixel-y -Ducksauce 18:31, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
I'm afraid I can't, I tried. Shinx Blitz and Melody 09:53, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
You can't unblur them? —Jayce(17:21, 8/9/2014)
Nope. I used the sharpen tool, and it won't work any more. Shinx Blitz and Melody 19:17, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
Sunfish (Q) - For Approval
fish fish fish fish fish >(,·) Atelda insert vague subtext here 17:24, July 30, 2014 (UTC)\
dull the earpink a bit? fish fish fishy fish fish User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:10 PM, Wed Jul 30, 2014
>)))),·) Atelda insert vague subtext here 19:19, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
The leg shading is a bit flat... Shinxy Blitz and Melody 21:38, July 30, 2014 (UTC)
><((("> Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:06, July 31, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out her leg and chest shading, and define the light on her legs ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:25, August 1, 2014 (UTC)
<º)))>< Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:08, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Define the depth in the belly shading. Teldy x fish —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
Sandstorm (Alt Q) ~ For Approval
let's see if I can get this approved by august 7th (holiday c:)! Comments? Changes are here ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 23:38, August 1, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading. —Jayce(02:55, 8/2/2014)
Reups changes ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 13:07, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
Shading looks blotchy on some areas of the belly and hind leg that's lifted. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:32 Sun Aug 3
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 00:14, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a bit? —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
Reups change I also darkened it a bit ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:41, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Wind (Q) ~ For Approval
File:Wind.queen.png ehhh, comments? Queen Beebs 02:24, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
Very nice shading on the face. :) Maybe have a bit more shadow on the >>>> side of her belly, and have some highlight on her chest. This looks really good. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:40, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
The chest wouldn't have any light hitting it at this position, so I think it's fine, as well as the belly, since it's trying to make the belly look round and all o3o Queen Beebs 17:05, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
thin out the cheekbone shadow, unless she has some really really defined cheekbones it wouldn't be that big -Ducksauce 19:13, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
She could have some really defined ones or not - why should we assume? I think it's fine because of said reason. (ahh i hope this doesn't come off as laziness because it's not) Queen Beebs 19:15, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
I don't think it would hurt to do what Duck suggested. I saw it at first and thought it was unblurred/unsmudged shading. And it kinda is coming off as laziness, dear. =P —Jayce(20:42, 8/2/2014)
re-up Queen Beebs 20:50, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
make the earpink more visible in -> ear please? Nice job. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:17 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014
Smooth out the main body shading just a bit more. —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
re-up Queen Beebs 23:39, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Oakfur (Alt. A) - CBA
bleh… ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 20:45, August 2, 2014 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I can't tall where the light source is. The head, tail, and three of the legs suggest it's from the back, the chest and front leg furthest from us suggest from the front, and the back suggests from the top? Shinxy Blitz and Melody
Re-uploaded Jet-lagged Scar really shouldn't be shading cats… ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:29, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
I don't think changes are showing...??? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:26 Mon Aug 4
Sorry but when I compare both images they look the same. (To me, anyway... It could just be that wikia is being a butt). ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:52 Mon Aug 4
Maybe upload the changes to iaza? I kinda can't tell either, and it's been a good couple days. —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
Scarly deserves a CBA for another lovely image~ —Jayce(20:13, 8/8/2014)
Pikepaw (MO) (Ki) - For Approval
Pulled all colors and opacities from the apprentice. comments? -Ducksauce 17:10, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the paws. He's cute! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:20 Sun Aug 3
Re-uploaded Thanks~ c: -Ducksauce 21:57, August 3, 2014 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink? I'm having a hard time seeing it. cuteeeee!! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:15 AM, Wed Aug 6, 2014
The shading on the tail suggest the light is coming from a different way than the body shading. On the body the light comes from the left but on the tail the light comes from the right. Brick 19:17, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Define the depth in the shading just a little bit. —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
re-uploaded however, I didn't change my lightsource because I've used this for years on all of my kits -Ducksauce 18:34, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
Thorn (Alt. Ro 2) ~ For Approval
She was described with Dew's description and gender, and according the the characters needing art page, that warrants an alt? Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:55, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
I believe the file should be named Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Also, some of the bits of fur sticking up going along the spine, the lines on them look a little bit thinner than they should, could you just add a few pixels to them so they match the rest of the lines? Brick 14:35, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Would you like Dew's lineart? You may use it if you wish. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot17:24 Mon Aug 4
Yes please, Hawkie. ^_^ Shinxy Blitz and Melody 19:17, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Here you go! ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:16 Mon Aug 4
TY, I'll re-upload ASAP. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 20:57, August 4, 2014 (UTC)
Re-upped Shinxy Blitz and Melody 00:19, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
The file's still named incorrectly, it should be Thorn.rogue.alt2.png. Brick 11:26, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
I know that, however I have no ability to change it. Shinx Blitz and Melody 18:00, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Yeah you can, just re-upload it to File:Thorn.rouge.alt2.png User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:11 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014
That'd leave this file just floating around, being SPAM. I'd rather wait and ask someone to please rename it? Shinx Blitz and Melody 18:23, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
- you'd just mark the file for deletion. But anyway works I suppose... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:25 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014
Thank you for not wanting to create more images for deletion, Shinx. I've renamed the file for you. =) —Jayce(20:06, 8/6/2014)
Thank you! Shinx Blitz and Melody 20:21, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading a little bit. —Jayce(22:30, 8/6/2014)
I'm not sure if it was intentional, but there appears to be a patch of... Blue on the face/neck. Brick 22:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
It's the shading tint, I assume? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:16 Wed Aug 6
Re-upped It's a tint, I tried toning it down some. And I smudge my shading, not blur it, but I smudged it a bit more. Shinx Blitz and Melody 00:07, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
Dew (Alt Ro) - For Approval
Figured I'd try a rogue blank. Dew was described with Thorn's description at one point, so that warranted an alt. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:29, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
If I remember correctly, Dew was also described as female here, so this should be the female blank. Also, maybe define the tail shading a bit? I wish I was this good. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:32, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded, changed the blank, lightened the eyes a bit, defined the tail shading, and tweaked the ear shading. And thanks. :D Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:27, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Here's the changes in case they aren't showing up: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931897993700.png Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:28, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Could you blur the shading just a bit? —Jayce(22:30, 8/6/2014)
Does this work? Here are the changes: http://www.ezimba.com/work/140807C/ezimba13931841642100.png Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:42, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Loudbelly (Star) - For Approval
Rumble rumble Brick 12:57, August 5, 2014 (UTC)
Can you define the shading? Appledash the light of honor 13:53, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/2hrel4m.png, rumble rumble Brick 19:15, August 6, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the highlights, and define the shading a bit more. —Jayce(20:16, 8/6/2014)
Re-ups, http://i61.tinypic.com/3305kbr.png Rumble rumble rumble Brick 18:44, August 7, 2014 (UTC)
Duskfur (Q) - For Approval
Changes are here. —Jayce(22:29, 8/6/2014)
define the belly, tail, and chest shading a tick? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:27 PM, Wed Aug 6, 2014
Re-uploaded. Redid the shading since I didn't like the first one and shading this isn't as easy as it looks. —Jayce(23:35, 8/6/2014)
Try making the stripes curve some more. Queen Beebs 01:41, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
They don't curve at all on the warrior. If I made them curve, I think it would divert from the original pattern. Pregnant or not, I don't want to teeter too far away from the pattern Twee made, and they don't curve very much on the original queen image or warrior (I was trying to match the warrior and queen both tbh), so unless someone else agrees, I'd really rather not change it. —Jayce(18:31, 8/8/2014)
Yes, but just because of the perspective, I think they should bend like (((( a bit, because if she's coming towards you the stripes would bend that way, as would the belly. It's less about the pregnancy and more about the perspective. Jayie Unwritten words~ 15:48, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
Perspective over pattern. Makes sense. Re-uploaded. Changes. —Jayce(17:28, 8/9/2014)
Wrenflight (Q) ~ For Approval
File:Wrenflight.queen.png Hawky thinks she did a good job. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:26 Thu Aug 7
Blur the tail shading a tad. Brick thinks Hawky did a good job. Brick 13:44, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
I smudged the shading so I'd rather not. Thank you, though. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot18:24 Sat Aug 9
Red (SD) (Ki) ~ For Approval
david 🌈 02:37, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
I can't really see the ear pink. I want this plz Imma steal it from you. —Jayce(17:04, 8/9/2014)
Bumble (Lo) ~ For Approval
Um, did she still have a collar when she became loner? I didn't read the book. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 16:00, August 8, 2014 (UTC)
She didn't have one that I can recall, but since I'm not sure, I think you should probably put one on her just in case. —Jayce(17:01, 8/9/2014)
Frost (StarClan) - For Evaluation
File:Frost.StarClan.PNG.pngDid I do a good job? Tigerbird-The-Great 16:59, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
He needs to be short-furred, needs a texture, and the image isn't the right size. For the texture, I recommend asking David, the artist of Frost's rogue image, how he made his. —Jayce(17:03, 8/9/2014)
On Frost's page, It says he's thick furred. Tigerbird-The-Great 17:11, August 9, 2014 (UTC)
Thick fur does not mean long-haired. I have thicker hair, but it wasn't always as long as it is. I used to have it fairly shorter when I was younger, and it was pretty dang thick. The thickness refers to the density of the fur, not the length. Plus, you have an an image to match, and David uses the short-furred blank. —Jayce(17:20, 8/9/2014)
Define and darken the shading a tick, and blur the earpink. Very nice job on this. If it helps, for thick furred cats, to make the shading look less flat, I do two layers of dark blue shading, instead of black. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:43 PM, Sat Aug 9, 2014
Hazelwing (Q) ~ For Approval
I tried. This doesn't match at all, does it? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot19:36 Sat Aug 9
Changes. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot19:37 Sat Aug 9
Nice work! Maybe try and shorten the strokes of the texture and blur it a touch. Also, maybe add one more layer of defined shading on the face? ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 19:50, August 9, 2014 (UTC)