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Grasspaw (A) ~ For Approval
File:Grasspaw.apprentice.pngAnother pale brown tabby. :3 Added a thin texture. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 12:25, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Add some light to the far back paw, and possibly the back? I think there would probably be some light there with your source. (If you don't use highlights, ignore me.)) ~Shinx Blitz and Melody 15:24, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up ~ Added some highlights on the paw and a bit on the end of her back. Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 17:33, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Can you define the ear pink on ----> side just a bit? Silverhmm 19:54, August 29, 2014 (UTC)
Could you make her look a bit less green-ish. Tinting your shading brown/red might work. Also, for pale brown cats, I tend to use #9c6442 as a nice pale brown shade, but that's totally up to you if you want to do that. Queen Beebs 01:58, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink by removing a little bit of the shading, and made the shading brownish. :3 Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 10:08, August 30, 2014 (UTC)
Earpink still needs to be define in the ---> ear. Looking good:) Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:56, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Try shifting your earpink layer around a bit... User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:49 PM, Thu Sep 4, 2014
Re-up ~ Defined the ear pink a bit again. :3 Sorry for being late, school is starting again and I'm busy with my own wiki. And what do you mean with shifting the earpink layer around? Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 14:39, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
It still looks a tad green...perhaps try making the base coat more reddish, or use the hex code I gave above for it?? if you chose to use the hex code, then you should also set the stripe layer to multiply as well. I think that'd do the trick o3o Queen Beebs 22:01, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
I mean moving the ear pink layer over/under some layers of shading if it's on its own layer. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:41 PM, Sun Sep 7, 2014
The earpink is fine as-is. I can see it clearly, and not everyone has shading on the earpink. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:18 Tue Sep 9
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(15:16, 9/10/2014)
Re-up ~ Made the fur color a little more reddish. Hope it's better now. c: Maanhart Speaking quietly ☽︎☾ 17:23, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the feets a tad more and I think this'll be ready. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:50, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Spikepaw (A) ~ For Approval
File:Spikepaw.apprentice.pngI'm on a roll. First time I've been happy with texture. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:15, September 1, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the fur into the earpink a bit more.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 04:00, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 20:08, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on all four paws. Looks pretty! Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:27, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Is that supposed to be texture? I can't tell, and it fades into the shading. Could you define that a lot? —Jayce(01:29, 9/5/2014)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:40, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Try smudging the texture more - it looks like it's markings/stripes on the body. Queen Beebs 18:34, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:43, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
I can't see it at all on the tail now. Define that? Also, the texture should flow with the direction of the fur, so on the haunch, it should go down the leg toward the foot. If that makes any sense. If you need a demo, message me, and I can teach you. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 18:57, 09/6/2014
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(20:54, 9/12/2014)
Reuploaded. I removed the texture. I'm going get more practice on it before I put it on an official image. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:28, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading. It also appears to creep away from the lineart in various places around the image, like the haunch. —Jayce(20:55, 9/14/2014)
Snowpaw (OTS) (A) ~ CBA
File:Snowpaw (OTS).apprentice.png First charart, so it's not brilliant. Colourpicked from his kit image. Not entirely sure how Evaluation differs from Approval, but it's to do with being a kit. So, evaluation? EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:11, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Remove the waste around the charart and blur the shading on the tail and back leg a tiny bit more. This is good ofr a first charart c: Silverhmm 10:32, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Is that better? Does it still need more blurring? EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:49, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading and add more around the haunch. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:07, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Changes aren't showing yet but I'll do another re-up of they don't in the next few minutes. EosOfTheDawn (talk) 14:47, September 2, 2014 (UTC)
I fixed the charart alignment for you. Define the shading slightly? Good job on your first charart. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:03 PM, Tue Sep 2, 2014
Blur the shading- also you don't need to mention fixing the charart alignment, just do it. =P —Jayce(20:09, 9/2/2014)
Re-uploaded Wiki's not showing the changes so look here: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=2me7g3p&s=8#.VAbt39tQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:28, September 3, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten up that shading just a tick and define it (put a layer over it on the edges and blur is slightly less but set the layer opacity to the same as the original shading.} User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:16 PM, Wed Sep 3, 2014
Also if you use gimp I recommend the airbrush for your shading. That way it puts on a nice layer that is easily manageable and you can darken or lighten it to your liking. ;) nice job! Frosty ☾Supernatural 12:44, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
Thanks for the tips! Is this better? I think it might still be too dark: http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=f1xreu&s=8#.VAi29NtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 18:57, September 4, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe another tick of two on the opacity layer for all of your shading. Looking nice, Eos. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:46 PM, Thu Sep 4, 2014
Thanks! changes http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=aebrqb&s=8#.VAmlldtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 11:56, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Did you colour pick the eyes? I'm not sure if it's just me, but they're looking a bit red on my screen. Brick 20:05, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
^^same here^^ Maybe define the eye depth a bit and lighten them just a tick? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:21 PM, Fri Sep 5, 2014
I think the eyes are fine as they are. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:00 Fri Sep 5
The eyes are colourpicked. That's how they are on his kit image so I don't think I should change them.--EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:24, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Blur/smudge the shading a little bit? It's looking pretty sharp. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 17:32, 09/6/2014
changes wasn't much blurring to do, I have to say. http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=aebrqb&s=8#.VAmlldtQAVY --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 10:05, September 7, 2014 (UTC)
Not bad for a first. Add some light to the front of the far back paw, and possibly add some depth to the torso shading? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:32, September 7, 2014 (UTC)
Shading could still be blurred some. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 22:21, 09/8/2014
The only shading that I think could be blurred is the head shading. Everything else looks fine to me. —Jayce(20:17, 9/9/2014)
Also, there's a huge block of waste. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:59, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Sorry for the wait! --EosOfTheDawn (talk) 11:04, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
CBA? david 🌈 11:45, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Featherpaw (A) - For Approval
File:Featherpaw (WC).app.png I did my best. Tigerbird-The-Great 01:03, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Can you darken/define the shading? And tone the earpink down some, it looks a little bright. You can just run the burn tool over it a few times, and that should do the trick. I like those eyes. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot1:13 Fri Sep 5
Smear a bit of the fur into the ears ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded.Tigerbird-The-Great 01:19, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge some more fur into the ears. Still looks a bit solid. Frosty ☾Supernatural 04:31, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Oh and define the light on all four paws^^ Frosty ☾Supernatural 19:45, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe lighten she shading just a tick? The stripes are getting a little lost. Nice job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:00 PM, Sat Sep 6, 2014
This is beautiful! I feel so proud right now Define the light on the lower part of the tail, and possibly the shading on the tailtip? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:39, September 7, 2014 (UTC)
Still working? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:48, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
I will update soon. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I cannot smudge any fur into the ears. I need opinions. Tigerbird-The-Great 00:51, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Add more stripes. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:27, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Tigerbird-The-Great 21:07, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Is it possible to make the pattern look more natural? If you look at other tabby chararts or a real life tabby, that'd be a good reference. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:52, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Toadstep (SC) - For Approval
-gross sobbing- My poor baby! Also, I will fix the waste in the next reupload. Iveh Yo! 19:06, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the fur into the ear a bit more and define the shading a bit ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 19:08, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Try blurring/smudgning the earpink a bit more. The white on the right paw is higher than on the left paw, and the chest white could do with a bit more blurring plus a bit of defining on the shading. Also, the file should be named Toadstep.star.png. Brick 20:02, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading on >>>> paw a bit, too.Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:09, September 5, 2014 (UTC)
The shoulder should be black, not white. Jayie Unwritten words~ 03:24, September 6, 2014 (UTC)
Blur/smudge the shading a little? Everywhere except for the haunch and face. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 17:43, 09/6/2014
Try making his eyes a bit more pale.
Define the overall shading while your at it.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 18:52, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
Can you blur the white on his chest? It looks a bit hard edged. Poor Toadstep. Tigerbird-The-Great 23:40, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded I'm not changing the design on his paws, because it matches his other chararts,and his design is based off of my real cat, so uneven socks on the paws is realistic. Iveh Yo! 17:40, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
There's some waste around the image. —Jayce(03:35, 9/10/2014)
Perhaps just make the eyes a tad bit more of a paler green to match his other images, and also either blur or smudge (Whatever they used on his other images) the white parts just a tad. --~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Okay! And since I use Sai and it has a really unreliable selection tool, I'm having a hard time removing waste without it removing lineart. Does anyone else use Sai and have a "true" way of selecting the binary region instead of it being feathered? I feel like a dumb and I'm sorryIveh Yo! 16:02, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
If I were to make a reccomendation on removing waste on SAI, it would be select outside on the lineart layer on default settings, using working layer only settings, and going through each layer doing CTRL+X. That should work. Brick 20:48, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Owlwhisker (Star) ~ For Approval
Another StarClanner :3 SziriXxX (talk) 14:41, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
Define the overall shading. This is good c:~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 15:16, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the stripes on his back a bit.--crow!!!! 15:18, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
The stripes don't need to be smudged. They have to match his other images, Crow. —Jayce(15:20, 9/8/2014)
Re-ups Thanks Breezy c: SziriXxX (talk) 17:56, September 8, 2014 (UTC)
Extend the shoulder highlight farther up and add some shading on the bottom of the chest. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith15:54 Tue Sep 9 2014
Re-upsSziriXxX (talk) 19:10, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the stripes just a tad. Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:01, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 15:57, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Define the leg shading. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:28, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups SziriXxX (talk) 17:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Lilyheart (Alt A) ~ For Approval
She was described as tortoiseshell-and-white in the allegiances of BS, so she gets this, right? ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:07 Mon Sep 8
Can you brighten up the white just a little bit? —Jayce(16:19, 9/10/2014)
Lighten the tail shading a bit, define the earpink some more, and mind defining the ginger flecks a tad more? They seem pale and not too noticible. This looks nice. Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:04, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot20:44 Wed Sep 10
Brighten the belly white just a bit and this'll be perfect. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:44, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
I'm scared that if I do that the shading will look flat... ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot22:53 Thu Sep 11
I don't think it would, Hawky, go ahead and do that ^_^ The image is beautiful. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:37, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Foxleap (Star) - For Approval
I haven't done this in ages. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith5:42 Tue Sep 9 2014
Because its not loading here. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith5:47 Tue Sep 9 2014
This is beautiful O_O. Define the tail shading a tad? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Pikachushinx (talk • contribs) 08:56 10 Sep 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. -Rustle it takes a leap of faith14:53 Wed Sep 10 2014
Define the shading on the arm closest to us a bit; he's very handsome I liked him why did he have to die? :/ ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:46, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Petalfur (Q) - For Approval
Comments? — Fez talk 18:12, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:48, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
Personally I think it's fine. It's rather clear, and defining it any more will make it look too dark. — Fez talk 20:04, September 9, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading and thicken it a bit around the belly and define it on the face and on her lifted forleg. I think there's also some waste on her back ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:24, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the tail shading, and I agree with Shinx- I think it could use some definition. —Jayce(03:34, 9/10/2014)
Smudge the earpink into the fur or vice versa. and if you have no clue what vice versa means don't sweat it. It is Latin--I think--literally meaning other way around. It currently looks too neat for a long furred cat. Keep it up! Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:21, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Smudging the ear pink is not required on these blanks. I don't smudge them on mine, and I know a couple others that don't either. Plus, it already looks like Feather smudged it- it's just not extravagant. —Jayce(17:24, 9/10/2014)
Re-uploaded. — Fez talk 17:52, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
She's looking a teensy bit cross eyed. Well done! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Thicken the shading on the belly and add depth all around. Define the light on the lifted forepaw 04:42, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Whitewing (Queen) - For Approval
hi changes are here —Jayce(03:47, 9/10/2014)
It might just be my phone, but her eyes look blue in this picture, and they should be green. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:02, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Wrong layer was showing, oops. —Jayce(04:08, 9/10/2014)
Gotcha. ^^ Give the eyes more depth, and darken the shading a tiny bit. It looks good. :D Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:19, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(04:25, 9/10/2014)
Define the shading on the front legs a tiny bit - she's beaauttiful ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:06, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(16:18, 9/10/2014)
Define the shading more on the face: like put some shading where her eyes are to define the mouth and nose. And the tail: make the shading curve more to the shape of the tail. Very pretty!! Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:29, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I did not add any shading where her eyes are, since that kind of depth and things of that nature isn't something we have to do. It's optional and I opt not to do it. It's not part of the basic shading- it's there to give some extra shape to the image and people have just been doing it more frequently. I did extend the bottom facial shading a bit, though. Also, the tail shading does curve, but the highlight kinda goofed it up lol. —Jayce(17:37, 9/10/2014)
Can you fix that then? Not only does it not look like it's following the curve of the tail, but it looks like it could possibly need a bit more smudging. Not sure if it's the highlight doing that though. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 21:14, 09/10/2014
Re-uploaded. I had tried to on the previous upload, but I think my layers got mixed up. I just redid the shading. —Jayce(20:37, 9/11/2014)
can you define the shading on the back leg closest to us? david 🌈 07:01, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:59, 9/12/2014)
Define the tail shadingShinxy used Thunderbolt! 22:11, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(20:58, 9/14/2014)
Duskfur (Q) ~ For Approval
Changes are here; I have a valid reason for the smudged shading being bad, it's my first ever smudged shading. Comments? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:50, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
Define the stripes a bit more and brighten the yellow in ---> this eye to match the other. Define the eye depth a bit while you're at it. This is very pretty Sorrel!! is it hard? I'm gonna try smudged shading on my next image. Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:33, September 10, 2014 (UTC)
I can't see the pale parts on her tail and belly, and her warrior has them. —Jayce(17:38, 9/10/2014)
Reups I can't really define the pale of the tail much more because of that pesky tail smudged shading. I can attempt to, though - changes be here ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:41, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
I can't see any shading, did you hide one of your layers by mistake? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:40 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014
It is there, I've probably got the opacity too low. I'll define the shading in a bit. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 20:56, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Reups there we go, changes should be up soon ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 21:17, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
It could just be my phone, but I can't really see must shading on her tail. Could you define it a bit? she looks so beautiful ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 01:21 Sat Sep 13
Reups that tail is extremely annoying; if I try defining the shading, the pale part starts vanishing. thank you Berry ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:51, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Ferretclaw (Alt W) - For Approval
Since this guy had an Alt needing to be done and the description made me think of something, I decided to snatch it up. He was called black and gray, so I gave him a smoke pattern. I'm really really happy with how it turned out. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:20, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
WOAH DUDE Define the back shading? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:52 PM, Thu Sep 11, 2014
Reuploaded, shading has been defined, and ear pink has been added since I realized I forgot about it before. :P Jayie Unwritten words~ 20:42, September 11, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a tad. Can't really see the texture through it. This is amazing!! Frosty ☾Supernatural 02:02, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
I played around with it a bit. Better? Jayie Unwritten words~ 02:30, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Much better!! ^.^ define the light some on the paws. I know it's difficult to define light on shaded black paws, but if you use something like the highlight on the muzzle, I think it'll blend nicely. Frosty ☾Supernatural 04:47, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Would you mind darkening the black and gray a shade? I think he was called dark gray and black, and this seems to be a bit lighter. If you'd rather not, I'm cool with that, and this is still stunning. *.* —Jayce(04:51, 9/12/2014)
It said on the trivia on his page that he was just gray and black, but I'll darken it a bit, since it was probably a simplification. :) And thanks! Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:58, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Ah, nevermind, I confused him with Heronwing, apologies. I still think the black could be darkened just a bit, though. He was called just gray and black, my bad. x.x —Jayce(05:03, 9/12/2014)
Wait, do you want the black or the gray darkened? And cool. ^^ Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:04, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
The black. However, I think darkening the leg shading might do the same thing. I'm sorry if I'm making no sense, I'm so tired —Jayce(05:09, 9/12/2014)
Nah, it's alright, I see what you mean. ^^ I'll see how dark I can push the black, and play around with the leg shading. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:10, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:16, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Also changed a bit of stuff with texture. Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:06, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Sedgewhisker (Q) - For Approval
meh ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading more, especially on the face and belly. Jayie Unwritten words~ 04:43, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
I think the belly shading is good, but perhaps define the shading on the front legs? —Jayce(04:52, 9/12/2014)
Match ----> this eye to the other please. I see what you tried to do but it looks a bit odd. If you shade <---- sides of the eyes you'll get the same effect you're looking for and still have the color match. This is beautiful, Scar!! Frosty ☾Supernatural 04:57, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
And it looks a bit cross-eyed. Maybe try moving >>>> pupil around? Jayie Unwritten words~ 05:21, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded The eyes are fine. I do all my eyes like this and I'm not changing it ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 03:59, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Crouchfoot (Ki) ~ For Approval
i hate kits ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 05:46 Fri Sep 12
define the shading on the head slightly? david 🌈 11:48, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Benny (Alt KP) ~ For Approval
this was too much fun omg. Comments? Queen Beebs 20:37, September 12, 2014 (UTC)
The pattern gets lost in the shading. Very beautiful! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:13, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
i can see it just fine tbh.. david 🌈 01:16, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Agreeing with Tigerbird.. Lighten the shading a tad. Frosty ☾Supernatural 01:52, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
I think the pattern is fine as well - my reasoning being that if I lighten the shading, it'll seem flat, and then you'll tell me to darken/define it =P Queen Beebs 01:54, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Yup, looks good to me. Define the tail light - what a handsome kitty. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 09:33, September 13, 2014 (UTC)©
re-up Queen Beebs 14:15, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Olivenose (Star) ~ For Approval
what are torties? comments? —User:Diablo./Sig Sat Sep 13 00:26
I can't see the earpink or the tail shading. She is very lovely! Tigerbird-The-Great 01:11, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Blur/smudge the shading on the paw furthest from us a bit. This is /gorgeous/. .o. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 01:23 Sat Sep 13
Give just some more earpink, just so it is visible, because it looks like her ears are very fluffy, covering them. -- ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 13:32, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Lizardpaw (A) ~ For Approval
I love playing with texture c: Shading is dark on purpose to be defined and it is smudged so no blurring here. Frosty ☾Supernatural 03:44, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Blur and shicken the shading on the back and define your light source ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 04:40, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Or if you won't blur it, smudge it a bit more. It also causes the texture to get lost in it, so perhaps tweak the coloring of the shading a bit? —Jayce(04:41, 9/13/2014)
Re-uploaded. Lightened the shading a smidge, and smudged the back shading more. I also defined the texture under the shading some more so it'd be more visible, and I unshaded and shaded some things to make the light source more obvious. Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:46, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
It's probably just my phone screen but the shading is throwing off the colour a bit (making the image look a strange colour where it is). Maybe try tinting it? Dark red and dark blue with the layer on multply usually work well. however if it /is/ just me feel free to let me know/ignore this comment. ★ Berry ★ Midnight Monster's Parade! 14:43 Sat Sep 13
I think it looks fine. But I'll look at it closely when I do another upload and check it out but to me it works with the color well. Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:59, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
What source are you using? I'm comparing it to the sources for multiple apprentice images, and I can't seem to find what source you're using. Enlighten me, if you don't mind? pun intended I think there'd be more shading on the haunch, and the back shading wouldn't be so thick. —Jayce(21:03, 9/14/2014)
Lol. Um I visioned this light source like the apprentice is on top of a hill watching the sunset. So it'd be almost straight at him but downwards a bit if ya get me. So I might need a bit more shading on the haunch and the tail so let me add those and then you tell me what ya think. Frosty ☾Supernatural 23:22, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Pouncetail (SC) W) ~ For Approval
File:Pouncetail (SC).warrior.png hmm, he's not bad. Changes be here; comments? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:45, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading some. He looks purdy, Sorrel Queen Beebs 14:47, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Reups changes obrigado Beebs ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:53, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
Define the earpink just a smidge. This is one handsome kitteh =D Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:02, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
It kinda looks like the pattern gets lost in the shading a bit, especially on the main part of the body. Maybe tweak your shading color a bit? —Jayce(16:36, 9/13/2014)
Reups I just decided to lighten the shading a tiny bit; I usually have two layers of shading for definition, the second one's opacity is lightened so it isn't too dark, so I lighten the opacity a little. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:19, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Whitetail (WC) (E) ~ For Approval
Sooper happeh with how this came out, minus the earpink. Any help on that would be greatly appreicated. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:34 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014
Make the shading more defined, I think it blurs out into the white a bit too much, it's looking a little gray. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:46, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
reup User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:01 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014
Define the tail shading. Nice job! Tigerbird-The-Great 21:03, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
#thanx User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:16 PM, Sat Sep 13, 2014
Define the depth of the shading some more. This is nice Rocket!! :) Frosty ☾Supernatural 21:28, September 13, 2014 (UTC)
I think the shading depth looks fine. Define the light on the tail? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:28, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
:) did a little bit of both. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:18 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014
Expand the light on the tail- I'd think there would be at least some there, that way it doesn't look all gray. —Jayce(17:19, 9/14/2014)
ship it never thought that onexwhite would be a couple so here have some tail white someone please kill tail shading forever thanx User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:50 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014
Blur the light on the tail. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:36, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
blurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:55 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014
(I'msorry) Define the light on the front paws? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:08, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
sooper (it'sokay) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:20 AM, Mon Sep 15, 2014
Larkwing (BS) (Kit) ~ For Approval
File:Larkwing (BS).kit.pngThis was fun c: Comments?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 17:04, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the pale markings more, and define the shading. Queen Beebs 17:08, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Smudged pale markings some more, and defined shading. Better?~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 17:38, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. I can't see it at all. —Jayce(21:00, 9/14/2014)
Shrewfoot (Star) - For Approval
hello —Jayce(21:00, 9/14/2014)
Stormcloud (W) ~ For Approval
Ewwww Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:44, September 14, 2014 (UTC)
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