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Grasspelt (Star) - For Approval
-sobs- More dying kittehs! Tiger Sunny days 01:21, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading, and define it on the paws. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 06:57, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re Uploaded Tiger Sunny days 14:22, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the fur into the earpink, define the lightsource as the tail tells me it's coming from one direction and the rest of the body tells me another direction. And the body shading is leaking away from the lineart and where the tail is on the body. And wouldn't this have to be under the old post or at least the old post archived before this being reposted? Not sure, maybe someone can give second opinion? Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:31, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
I think Tiger's fine with it being here- she was told in chat to just make a new section and the old post would be archived. I also think that smudging the earpink is optional? But I reccomend it, especially on these blanks.
Define the earpink and the face shading. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:04, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Could you possibly brighten the earpink? It looks as though it blends completely and that there is no earpink at all. ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 21:36, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re Uploaded People on the chat said the lightsource and "leaking" line art was fine so I didn't change it. Tiger Sunny days 23:07, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
Re re uploaded. I brightened up the earpink. Tiger Sunny days 23:33, October 13, 2014 (UTC)
It would be shaded fully behind the tail. The shading shapes around it at the moment. At least shade that over. Frosty ☾Supernatural 00:49, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the legs and tail? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 00:56, 10/14/2014
Add and define the shading along the edges.--~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 01:24, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Add some depth to the shading, too. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:33, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
The ears are beautiful. Good job Tigerbird with brightening them up. I don't know if you could make it any better. ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 11:15, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Smear the fur into the earpink a bit more. I also think there is receding shading on the side, around the tail tip. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:02, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reupped I think smearing fur is optional but I did everything ya'll suggested. Tiger Sunny days 00:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
It's not always optional. On some blanks it can be necessary, especially on these. Define the light on the paws and tail, and then lighten your shading a bit and blur it. I still see receding shading around the haunch and around the tail tip. Frosty ☾Supernatural 16:00, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Pretty sure it's optional tbh but anyhoo I don't think changes are showing (for anyone) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:31 PM, Wed Oct 15, 2014
It is not mandatory on any blank, Darkfrost. That's a very common and quite annoying PCA rumor among members that needs to stop. You can blur the ear pink (as I used to do and sometimes still do) and get the same desired results. Also, no, the changes don't seem to be showing for me either. —Jayce(18:04, 10/15/2014)
Re upped If the changes aren't showing, notify me at once. Tiger Sunny days 22:13, October 17, 2014 (UTC)
The shading is receding from the lineart on the stomach around where the tailtip is. Amber The One and Only15:36 Sun Oct 19
Re upped Tiger Sunny days 15:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the base to about #A06F44, Tiger. This is a little bit too dark for being a light brown cat. —Jayce(00:36, 10/21/2014)
I will re upload sometime today or tomorrow. Tiger Sunny days 13:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the face Amber The One and Only16:35 Thu Oct 23
Just letting you know, Tiger, that you have until Sunday to reupload, since we only allow one week without uploads before declining an image. —Jayce(20:22, 10/23/2014)
Re upped There is a block of waste and I can't get rid of it. Tiger Sunny days 15:39, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Take a size 1 hard edged eraser to it, being careful not to touch the lineart, and it'll be gone in a jiffy. Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:50, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Re upped I additionally defined the tail shading. Tiger Sunny days 18:38, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Try adding some shading to the neck, I think the head would cast some shadow over it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:41, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
We agreed on the chat to leave it as it is. Tiger Sunny days 20:17, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Re upped Tiger Sunny days 20:46, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Tangleburr (Ki) ~ For Approval
Tangle so... hehe. I was working on Tangle during my vacation cause I was bored ._. anywho, :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 02:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Expand the shading and lighten it some. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:03, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Also, would you like the file for the apprentice, so you can get the colors right? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:09, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Vixy Memento Mori... 13:50, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
There's waste everywhere, and IDK if its just me or the waste, but the lineart seems blurred? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:54, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Waste will be the death of me xD Vixy Memento Mori... 14:00, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Work on the texture a bit. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:16 PM, Tue Oct 14, 2014
The file should be named Tangleburr.kit, not Tangleburr (KI). Brick The Bite of '87 15:29, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Fixed nameing and tried to texture it. Vixy Memento Mori... 15:51, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail - she's so cute! ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:01, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thank you :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 16:11, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
This looks good. :) Just shift that chin shading down slightly so it's below the chin. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:32, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 16:39, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Ah hold up I had to fix some waste I didn't see Reups Vixy Memento Mori... 16:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
The file name is still wrong, it should be Tangleburr.kit. As for the image, try blurring the shading on the front paws a bit? Brick The Bite of '87 18:46, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Renamed it correct finally sorry about that ugh I feel so n00bish... Vixy Memento Mori... 19:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
There's some waste around the feet. Also, I feel bad for pestering you so much about this, but I think it should be in lowercase, so .kit instead of .Kit but i'm not sure because i'm not sure if the wikia is caps-sensitive or not so it might not matter. Brick The Bite of '87 20:13, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Don't feel bad. I'd rater do it the right way than the wrong. Vixy Memento Mori... 20:52, October 14, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the paws. This is pretty, Vixy. =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:56, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Thanks :D Vixy Memento Mori... 19:48, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Shapren the texture a bit to match the other images. Nice job! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 1:30 PM, Thu Oct 16, 2014
Reuploaded Thankes :DDD I'm so proud of her so far :3 Vixy Memento Mori... 13:47, October 16, 2014 (UTC)
Expand your shading a bit. And smudge/blur your shading a little after that. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:00, October 17, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 15:24, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
Might just be my eyes, but I can see some waste around the head. THIS IS SO BEAUTIFUL. — ☆ paper · finches ★ 21:04, October 18, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded There was a tiny bit so I erased it. Thanks! ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 02:58, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
Comments? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 10:35, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Expand the shading on the back Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 16:16, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the back shading a little, I can't really see the pattern through it. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:05, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I can see it just fine- perhaps it's the brightness on your screen? I know each monitor shows different things. Blur the neck shading just a bit, Vixen, if you don't mind? —Jayce(20:12, 10/23/2014)
Reuploaded I blurred the neck :3 Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 22:16, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I can't really see the texture through the neck shading. It's almost like it's been overblurred. Perhaps define the texture under it and and lighten the shading a tad? Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:54, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 23:31, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Half Moon (Ancient) - For Approval
meh. — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 00:52, 10/15/2014
Smooth out the shading on the tail and perhaps brighten up the entire left (our left) side of her, especially on the head. There's a lot of shading and that looks really gray. —Jayce(02:23, 10/15/2014)
Reuploaded — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 05:15, 10/18/2014
Smooth out the shading some more on the face. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:13 Sat Oct 18
Still working? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:08, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Yeah sorry. Reup — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:08, 10/24/2014
I think the tail shading could be smoothed out a little more, and the light expanded on it. —Jayce(07:31, 10/26/2014)
reup — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 08:00, 10/26/2014
There's a bit of waste at the top of the tail. Amber The One and Only09:04 Sun Oct 26
reup — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 09:08, 10/26/2014
Graywing (WC) (Ancient) ~ For Approval
File:Graywing (WC).ancient.png I've added to the table now. --Stealthfire star (talk) 02:44, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
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Lighten the shading, and then define it everywhere. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:36, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Also, the wiki is case-sensitive, the file should be named Graywing (WC).ancient.png, not Graywing_(WC).Ancient.png. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:55, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Shouldn't he have a ripped eartip? RaisuRice (talk) 14:12, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
I don't think so, because when he was in the tribe, he didn't have the ripped ear tip. Define the light on his forepaws. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 14:31, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Try to give the shading more shape. You could use some shading on his shoulder, have it line the inner edge of his tail instead of just being in the tip, more shading higher up on the neck, and shading along his cheek. Jayie Unwritten words~ 16:09, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Reupload I've redone the shading and renamed the file. I have already checked when Graywing got the ripped ear tip and it was in The First Battle I believe so he had no ripped ear tip as an ancient tribe member. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
I know this sounds weird but define the tongue shading lmao. Frosty ☾Supernatural 21:45, October 15, 2014 (UTC)
Reupload this is a really new template XD --Stealthfire star (talk) 00:57, October 16, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail. ikr xD Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:07, October 17, 2014 (UTC)
Reupload I thought I'd change the eye as well. How he looked directly towards us looks a bit creepy, and his not a creepy cat. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:51, October 17, 2014 (UTC)
I think the haunch shading should be extended and up towards the back. It would kinda look like a "C", I think. —Jayce(17:04, 10/19/2014)
Reupload Like that? --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
The left front paw and chest seem very dark. Maybe lighten it up a bit? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 17:38, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the leg underneath the paw? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:17 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014
Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:30, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail, and try to give a little more of a curve to the shading. Look at some of the other images for examples of what I mean. It doesn't really go with the body as well as I think it could. The body shading kinda seems like a straight line.. or something along those lines. I can't phrase things correctly, my apologies. x.x —Jayce(18:58, 10/22/2014)
Reupload I've added a bit more shading at the tip of his tail and base of his tail. I've done a highlight around the tail facing away from the body and I've blurred the overall shading a bit. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the legs Amber The One and Only16:37 Thu Oct 23
Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Maybe make the tongue more pink? Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 13:35, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Reupload --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:38, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the paws, and it appears the body shading is leaking away from the lineart. This is looking very nice! Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:57, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
The paws are just shading and I don't know how to deal with shading leaking away from the lineart. and Thankyou! --Stealthfire star (talk) 20:25, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Add more shading near the lineart and only blur part of it (the part that's away from the lineart) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:33 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014
Reupload Thanks! --Stealthfire star (talk) 06:28, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Add more shading to the haunch/back leg/hip/whatever it is and define the light on the tail. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:31 AM, Sun Oct 26, 2014
Reupload I think it's his side, belly to back. --Stealthfire star (talk) 07:04, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
I'm sure that there would be some light on the paws, though. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:14, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Reupload I've added a bit to his right paw. --Stealthfire star (talk) 21:44, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Hawk Swoop (Ancient Tribe) - For Approval
comments? I haven't done these for a while —User:Diablo./Sig Sun Oct 19 00:37
This looks great. :) Maybe a bit more shading on that left (higher) paw, and that nose and muzzle? Jayie Unwritten words~ 01:28, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
reups thank you c: —User:Diablo./Sig Sun Oct 19 01:47
Wow it's beautiful. Could you possibly blur the stripes? ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 19:51, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
The stripes aren't really blurred on her other images, which this one has to match. —Jayce(19:58, 10/20/2014)
I used SAI for this one, so the brush left a sharp edge on them anyway. I think they are fine. but if someone else says something I'll tinker them. —User:Diablo./Sig Tue Oct 21 04:57
i think they could be blurred the tinest bit, theyre slightly softer looking on the other images. david 🌈 01:05, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail. Words can't describe this beautiful image. Amber The One and Only16:41 Thu Oct 23
Smudge/blur the shading. I like this. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:02, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
yea i probably won't be able to work on this due to school. —User:Diablo./Sig Fri Oct 24 21:35
I'd like to take over on this Queen Beebs 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
re-up ik ik i didn't give her much justice ;; Queen Beebs 16:08, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Perhaps blur the stripes on the shoulder? They seem more hard-edged than the rest. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot23:40 Sat Oct 25
They're supposed to be smudged lightly, actually, as that's what Leggo told me how they were done ;; Queen Beebs 23:45, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
re-up did some things Queen Beebs 13:02, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Silver Frost (Ancient) ~ For Evaluation
Well this is it i love her eyes.Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 16:46, October 19, 2014 (UTC)
The patches need to match her other images and she shading looks a bit blotchy and sourceless. Also the file needs to be named File:Silver Frost.ancient.png, so please fix that. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:29 PM, Sun Oct 19, 2014
Reups.--Warriorsbutterminecraft (talk) 02:41, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
The patches should be solid not smudged. Are changes showing? Try uploading to ezimba.com . User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:37 PM, Mon Oct 20, 2014
Crop the space around the image so that it is more of similar size to the other images. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:40, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Define the tail shading too. —Jayce(16:56, 10/23/2014)
I'm gonna rename this for you, since the images won't show right on the articles without it. —Jayce(20:19, 10/23/2014)
Is this still being worked on? —Jayce(07:29, 10/26/2014)
Sandypaw (App) - CBA
File:Sandypaw.apprentice.png I actually did this a while back, just to practice texture. Now that Sandypaw's gender has been confirmed, it fit. Thoughts? Jayie Unwritten words~ 18:33, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Finally! Gorgeous! Maybe just define the light on the legs? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 18:48, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Thanks. :) Defined. Jayie Unwritten words~ 19:16, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge/blur the shading on the chest. This is purrty! =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:15, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Reuploaded. And thanks. :) Jayie Unwritten words~ 00:10, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Define the light on the tail? —Jayce(21:14, 10/25/2014)
Reuploaded. Jayie Unwritten words~ 22:22, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
CBA? ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:17, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Bright Stream (Ancient tribe) ~ CBA
Soooo I used Jayie's shading tutorial to make this, so neither smudged nor blurred shading this time, whoo. Anyway, colors shouldnt need shifting any as theyre taken directly from the starclanners file. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:10, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Try to blur the stripes on the tail. And which way is the light coming from? ☯ S P O T T E H K A T ☯ 19:54, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
The light is coming from our right, and and the top. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:59, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
I'm going to say define the shading since I know Jay doesn't blurr or smudge and so I won't get repremanded for using the wrong term again. So, I think the shading needs to be defined, it seems a bit lost to me. Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 12:54, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
I've never complained to you, though..? If I did, I was probably talkin' to someone else. Anyway, Re-ups Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:14, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Um,I see the heading(is that what it's called?),and it's supposed to be (Ancient),not (Ancient Tribe) RaisuRice (talk) 23:11, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
I can make the heading whatever I want it to be. I could make the heading "Bright Stream - (Old tribe of rushing water) ~ For Approval" if I wanted to. That makes literally no difference to the image. There aint no rule as to what the heading should be. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:26, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Okay no need to get mad. Raisu is a newer member and wouldn't know if that was the right heading or not. Before going off on her, perhaps explain it in a nicer manner of wording rather than getting snippy with her(if you are a girl xD not sure I hope so if not I'm sorry, Raisu). Um may you lighten the ear shading a bit? I can't really see the earpink too well through it, and maybe smudge the facial shading a tad more? I like this =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:13, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
*Sighs* I like how you always assume every time I try and explain anything that I'm being "snippy" or getting mad. The only times I get mad here are when someone repeatedly makes a mistake after it gets explained to them multiple times. It does, however, irritate me a bit that ya'll always assume I'm trying to be rude- If I was, I'd use capslock a lot, and probably use at least minor cusses. Anyway, re-ups. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:23, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Darkfrost, Shinx was not being mean, rude, or snippy. She was explaining that she can make the heading whatever she wants it to be. Basically as long as the name and rank are there, it can be whatever you want it to be lmao. Please stop assuming people are mad and then trying to lecture them on it- it's basically mini-modding and really needs to stop. If I see this kind of behavior from anyone, I will start to decline images. —Jayce(18:29, 10/22/2014)
Ah, new blanks they look awesome! I think that you could blur the shading around the chest and shoulder area. I like the style. Tbh darkfrost didn't really say anything wrong other than her opinion, and honestly, it's hard to say what people mean without... talking in person and seeing facial expression, ect., so she might've had the wrong impression of what Shinx was feeling or saying, for lack of better word. Mistakes happen. Stoneclaw 06:50,10/23/2014
Can we please not turn this into an argument? (reups, it looks like im emphasizing that XD) Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:33, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I know it's not been three days //exactly//, but comments, please? I sound so impatient >< Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:25, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
I was gonna CBA this earlier and probably should have so let's do it now. 8D —Jayce(07:28, 10/26/2014)
Moon Shadow (Ancient) ~ CBA
eh idk comments? —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:14, October 20, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading. Frosty ☾Supernatural 13:06, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I'm not gonna define it anymore, otherwise it'll start to look really weird. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:17, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
CBA? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:26, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Sharp Hail (Ancient) - CBA
I imagine him as a longhair so that's what y'all get. Comments? Queen Beebs 20:29, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
Blur the shading. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:32 Tue Oct 21
re-up Queen Beebs 21:36, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
re-up, forgot texture Queen Beebs 21:39, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
re-up did a thing with the tail Queen Beebs 21:45, October 21, 2014 (UTC)
The body shading looks a little like a rectangle. Could you manipulate it a bit to make it look more natural? This is pretty! Frosty ☾Supernatural 15:17, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
re-up Queen Beebs 19:03, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Withdrawing for something else Queen Beebs 21:39, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
I'm taking over on this one because his name is cool. —Jayce(21:42, 10/24/2014)
Re-uploaded. Okay, I like this one a lot more than I did Clear Sky's image. —Jayce(23:52, 10/24/2014)
Can I just kinda CBA this? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Swallowtail (WC) (Star) ~ For Approval
I can't get enough of character art, making! I enjoyed making this simple but she's very pretty. o3o ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:21, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Please remove the texture; none of her other images have it, therefore this shouldn't either. —Jayce(18:24, 10/22/2014)
Re-uploaded - removed the texture, got a little to carried away with this one. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 18:31, October 22, 2014 (UTC)
Those eyes are beautiful. :) Lighten the shading on the top of the shoulder, and darken the shading on the right side of the chest. Jayie Unwritten words~ 17:07, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Thank you, Jayie! I've lightened the shading on the closest shoulder and attempted to darken the right side of the chest. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 23:43, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading? — ferk my name is BLURRYFΛCE 20:09, 10/24/2014
Re-uploaded - I tried x3 --ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє
Remember to sign with four tildes (~)! Anyway, blur the shoulder and body shading (and expand the body shading some, perhaps), and define the shading depth on the chest, legs, and tail. There's also waste by one of the paws ^_^ Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:37, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
I'll work on it, in a few hours. ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 15:18, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - okay I lied one hour then.ｷﾉ尺尺乇ﾚ í'm nσt rαndσm, чσu just cαn't thínk αs fαst αs mє 16:32, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Tornear (Kit) - For Approval
Um... This is my first try. Took so long on it, the pattern was kind of hard to match.
The Fox Girl (talk) 10:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
You need to reserve it, and you weren't on the table, so I added it in for you. Define the shading- very pretty for a first try, I must say. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:09, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. Thanks :) The Fox Girl (talk) 11:29, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge or blur the stripes very good for a first try Amber The One and Only16:47 Thu Oct 23
Define the earpink. This is really nice! =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:47, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Thanks guys :) The Fox Girl (talk) 08:09, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
I think I'm gonna promote you to an apprentice (that's something I'm allowed to do, according to the guidelines?), since you seem to know what you're doing. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:25, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded removed a bit of waste and thanks shinx :)
Robinwing (RC) (Star) - For Approval
I like torties :3 Sziri the goat sails away ツ 15:55, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I love dem eyes *.* define the earpink some more. I love this. =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:46, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
The file should be named Robingwing (RC).star.png, also, can you lighten the chest shading a bit as it's making the white look grey this is beautiful ahh Brick The Bite of '87 19:30, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
I'm gonna go ahead and rename this for you, Sziri. ^^ All I had to do was add a space in the file name. —Jayce(20:17, 10/23/2014)
Re-ups Thanks all of you=) Sziri the goat sails away ツ 09:48, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading everywhere but the belly. Nice job :) User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:03 PM, Sun Oct 26, 2014
I think s/he only really needs to define it on the chest and legs- You can see it just fine on the face and tail. This is really pretty, though. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:57, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Re-ups Thanks:3 Sziri the goat sails away ツ 18:52, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Falling Feather (Ancient) ~ CBA
See the changes here; what did I do. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 16:04, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
You did something beautiful :) smudge/blur the shading on the tail Amber The One and Only16:49 Thu Oct 23
I actually think the tail shading looks fine. If Sorrel blurred/smudged it it would need defining again. Define the tongue shading a bit. This is lovely, Sorrel! =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 17:44, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Reups changes I already reuped with the blurred tail before you commented, Frost, and besides, I think it could have used a blur. Thank you both~ ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:50, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
CBA? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:28, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Larkwing (BS) (W) ~ For Approval
this is rubbish. Sooooo rubbish. Amber The One and Only19:33 Thu Oct 23
Lighten up the front paws a bit and the shading. It's fine ^^ Vixy It's spooky Out Here! 19:34, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
Reups, thanks Amber The One and Only19:40 Thu Oct 23
Lol did you forget the earpink? I don't see a trace of it anywhere. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:00, October 23, 2014 (UTC)
The base color appears to be a little bit darker than her kit and apprentice (both of which I made), so have a screenshot of an unshaded head from the apprentice for the coloring. —Jayce(20:15, 10/23/2014)
Blur the shading some, it looks blotchy. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:26, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Reups, I kinda like this.....I accidently deleted the ear-pink layer before I saved :'D Amber The One and Only16:28 Fri Oct 24
I'd say to add a little more earpink. Its really nice, though ^^ ♎ giaria time on my side 16:47, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Nah I think she has enough on there. A lot of images have been approved with that type of earpink style. Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:10, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Reups You saw it when it had been reuploaded, Frosty lmao Amber The One and Only18:19 Sat Oct 25
Define the shading depth a tad, and I think the shading is receding from the lineart in some places. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Reups, changes might be showing, or they could be not. IDK Amber The One and Only17:39 Sun Oct 26
Harespring (Ki) ~ For Approval
File:Harespring.kit.png Whatever you all do, don't ask me to define the tail shading..x3 lmao. Comments? Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:41, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Smudge the patches a little more. They're kinda done in a circular swirling motion. —Jayce(20:44, 10/24/2014)
Re-uploaded. I'm having trouble figuring out the opacity to swirl them on..but I think 60 did the trick. Frosty ☾Supernatural 20:57, October 24, 2014 (UTC)
Hmmm... try un-smudging them and swirl them again. This pattern is madness. On the paw one, it's more uneven shaped. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:01 PM, Sun Oct 26, 2014
Re-uploaded. Haha I know. Ughh it's so hard to do on this tiny blank, so I hope this matches more. Frosty ☾Supernatural 18:12, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Clear Sky (Ancient) ~ For Approval
File:Clear Sky.ancient.png Jayce withdrew him, so here he is~ everyone's favorite territory-greedy kitty c:~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 03:21, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Define the shading and shading depth. This is purrty =) Frosty ☾Supernatural 14:06, October 25, 2014 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. ~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 14:23, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Pebblefoot (Elder) - For Approval
I do not like these dapples. Dapple matching is pain. Brick The Bite of '87 12:56, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten the ear pink, as it doesn't really match. I like this. Amber The One and Only14:40 Sun Oct 26
Stoatfur (BS) (Alt A) ~ For Approval
File:Stoatfur (BS).apprentice.alt.png ok lets try this again david 🌈 22:53, October 26, 2014 (UTC)
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Quiet Rain (Ancient) - For Approval
…those spots looked a lot more smudged in photoshop… ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 23:24, October 26, 2014 (UTC)