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Appledusk (Star) ~ For Approval
What a traitor. —Ivy ☆ 21:22, April 18, 2015 (UTC)
I never read MV yet, so I can't agree with you xD Define the light on his tail-tip? User:StormSongz/Sig 01:44, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
I think you could define the shading on the legs and define the ear pink just a little. Yes, Appledusk is a big mouse-brain and I was like too bad when he died - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 05:08, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 12:21, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
There should be light on his chest, and I think the shading could be defined and blurred/smudged more. Tiger Sunny days 17:45, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 18:34, April 19, 2015 (UTC)
I think the shading is leaking on his tail-tip? User:StormSongz/Sig 14:08, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
Exactly I didn't read MV yet but when I saw he was killed my Mapleshade I went like "Beautiful job girl" blur the shading below the chin and the shading is leaking on the shoulder ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 15:05, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped The shading was leaking in several other spots, too. —Ivy ☆ 20:33, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
I really hate this and I want to do something else, so I'm withdrawing. —Ivy ☆ 23:39, April 20, 2015 (UTC)
Even though im not officially in the PCA, can i take over? Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 23:19, April 21, 2015 (UTC)
You don't need to ask just reserve it
-ReUpped Ok, my turn. Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 03:59, April 22, 2015 (UTC)
Blur/smudge the shading way more and change the heading please - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 07:51, April 22, 2015 (UTC)
Darken his pelt color. User:StormSongz/Sig 18:56, April 22, 2015 (UTC)
Define the earpink a bit, please. —Ivy ☆ 23:29, April 22, 2015 (UTC)
here is the base colour for the warrior image. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 04:27, April 23, 2015 (UTC)
'-ReUpped' Thanks for the colour, Stealthfire :) Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 01:34, April 24, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading a lot more until it blends perfectly with the pelt - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 01:40, April 24, 2015 (UTC)
-ReUpped Thankfully i was still online Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 01:48, April 24, 2015 (UTC)
You've got to blur the shading way more than that. Try to use a hard-edged blur tool with the rate of 100 (if you're using GIMP) and blur the edges only. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 14:19, April 24, 2015 (UTC)
Smudge the earpink and define it on the other ear ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:27, April 24, 2015 (UTC)
The shading looks cut off at the edges (by that I mean there's space between the shading and lineart). Fix that, please. Also, blur the shading a lot more. V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 21:36 Fri Apr 24
-ReUpped I tried texture too Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 15:01, April 25, 2015 (UTC)
You'll need to remove the texture, sorry. His warrior image doesn't have it, and you need to match that. —Jayce(22:14, 4/25/2015)
Expand the ear-pink in --> this ear and blur/smooth the shading inside the ear ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 17:40, April 26, 2015 (UTC)
Both of the earpinks need to be expanded. The earpink on this blank usually is literally the whole ear. And the shading is leaking a lot around his pelt. User:StormSongz/Sig 00:52, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
The ear pink doesn't need to be in the whole ear- that's just a preference that many of us do. —Jayce(01:05, 4/27/2015)
-ReUpped Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 23:49, April 27, 2015 (UTC)
Shading is still leaking in quite a few places User:StormSongz/Sig 00:57, April 28, 2015 (UTC)
Storm, please try to be more specific when you're commenting. I'd say the shading on the part where the stomach meets the leg, and the neck are leaking away from the liner art. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:53, April 28, 2015 (UTC)
It's also leaking on the stomach on <-- side of the tail-tip. —Ivy ☆ 19:56, April 29, 2015 (UTC)
-ReUpped Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 23:55, April 29, 2015 (UTC)
Its still leaking a liiittle bit on the shoulder by the underbelly and under the chin User:StormSongz/Sig 00:04, April 30, 2015 (UTC)
Can you blur the shading A LOT more on the neck and face area? (Im not trying to sound rude :3 ) ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 01:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)
Not on the face please. Only on the neck. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 02:41, May 1, 2015 (UTC)
You need alot more shading on the neck and face area, as Brambleshade said. And, is the black by the ear 'supposed' to be there? Flamestar22 19:00, May 2, 2015 (UTC)
The facial shading is fine, tbh. I'm sure the black on the earpink is just shading. Anyway, this image is looking good, but could you blur the shading on ---> leg? —Ivy ☆ 17:42, May 3, 2015 (UTC)
-ReUpped Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 22:46, May 3, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the chest shading. —Jayce(00:17, 5/5/2015)
Shading is still leaking under the chin User:StormSongz/Sig 21:34, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the tail-tip shading, please. —Ivy ☆ 23:43, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
-ReUpped Yawn Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 18:39, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Shading is still leaking under the chin by the back not literally under the chin. User:StormSongz/Sig 20:16, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Define/add shading on the head? ~Skiddley Riddley ♫ ♪ 05:36, May 10, 2015 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(08:55, 5/13/2015)
-ReUpped Jinx ϟ I'm coming for you! 15:16, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Pelt color is leaking in <=== that ear. ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:46, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
Still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:38, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
-ReUpped {{SUBST:|User:Jinxiy/Sig}} 22:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Add more shadow under his chin above his chest Storm♫ 22:21, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading around the neck —Ivy ☆ 01:35, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Curlfeather (K) ~ For Approval
My first character art, I'm so nervous even though there's nothing to be nevervous about! I might redo the brindling on the face (or whatever you'd call that) I'm not sure if I like it. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
You must reserve this on the main page of PCA. I'll do it for you this time. Define the shading on the legs and the tail, this looks good. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:16, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
My apologies, thank you for letting me know and adding me to the list. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
This should be 'For Evaluation' since you're new. You're not on the project member list, only the table. Are you sure you asked to join beforehand? If not, then you're not allowed to make charart. (I did look first) User:StormSongz/Sig 02:30, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Anyone can make images, regardless of project membership. That is not required. If they're on the table, then they can make whatever their heart wants, regardless of whether or not they're in the project "member list". As long as it's reserved on the table, then they're fine. .-. —Jayce(02:39, 5/5/2015)
Define the shading overall, not just on the legs and tail. Amazing job for your first that texture is much better than my first attempt. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 12:32, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
If I'm correct, the rules say you don't have to be a part of the project to submit art like Snow said. I just put in a request to join regardless, so no worries! P.S. I'll fix and reup it once I'm on my main computer. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:59, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Please darken the shading. And sorry about that earlier User:StormSongz/Sig 21:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 22:39, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on her head just a bit? It might just be my monitor... Looks good! Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 23:37, May 5, 2015 (UTC)
Try to mach File:Curlfeather.warrior.png. I can ask Darkfire to send you the xcf. if you want. ~Sunstream ☽☾ *Ruler of Darkness* 00:49, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
I did use it as a reference, but I'll try and edit it so it looks closer to it. I use SAI for my drawings, so the GIMP file wouldn't really work. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:11, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 01:21, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the back paw - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:00, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Honestly, I love this shading. Could you define the shading on ---> leg? ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 08:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 20:50, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Soften and expand the shading on the legs - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:49, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Define the facial shading User:StormSongz/Sig 14:51, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Also add some shading on the bottom back <==== this side of her tail User:StormSongz/Sig 20:19, May 9, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 20:41, May 11, 2015 (UTC)
Add some shading where the back paw meets the body ( on >>> this side of the image in the corner) and define it there, seen as with your light source, there should be a shdow there (not much, but a shadow nontheless). Also, blur the shading at the base of the tail. I love this image. :) ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:16 Mon May 11
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:51, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Can you dull down your highlights a bit? The warrior image is not that bright. ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:48, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:45, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
I know there is probably just light on her, but can you darken up this cutie a tad? -☽Sunstream ✼ Quarter Quell Time!☾ 23:16, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on the forelegs. —Ivy ☆ 20:16, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(22:27, 5/18/2015)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 00:41, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Lighten the edges of the shading. Its getting really dark Very nice! ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 19:02, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 19:04, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Aw man, I know you were just told to define the shading on the forelegs, but I think you can get away with lightening the shading in that area to almost match the rest of the darker shading. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:44, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Nah, it was actually a mistake. I lightened up all the other layers of shading but it seems I didn't lighten up that layer, so thanks for pointing that out! The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 18:57, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Rippletail (SC) (K) ~For Approval
File:Rippletail (SC).kit.png I dont know if I named this file correctly.... These blanks are so tiny But the shading looks like crap. ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?!
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Define the shading on the face and around the front legs. The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 21:37, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading as well —Ivy ☆ 22:59, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Define your light source - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:31, May 6, 2015 (UTC)
Nope, it wasn't named right, so I'll go ahead and fix that for you. ^.^ —Jayce(23:39, 5/6/2015)
Define the light on the tail User:StormSongz/Sig 14:53, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
re-up woot woot ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 20:50, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the back paw User:StormSongz/Sig 20:52, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Blue the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 09:40, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
You mean blur, right? Also, maybe lighten it a few ticks? ~Snow~ 22:25, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
If I lighten it, its gonna look like there isn't any shading. So Im .. not going to do that :/ ~ ☾Bramble where's the hot sauce?! 22:04, May 10, 2015 (UTC)
Actually, all you need to do it lighten it jussst a tiny bit, by 2 or 3 pixels on the opacity bar and you should be okay. Also, blur the shading on the head. ☽➸ Hawky Void Shadowshot21:19 Mon May 11
I'm sorry, but I have to decline this. It's been over a week without uploads. —Jayce(06:50, 5/15/2015)
I'll take over. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 15:43, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Reups changes be here. I like this. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 12:02, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
Can you lighten up the shading just a couple ticks? Not too much. —Jayce(08:38, 5/19/2015)
Reups ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:21, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Cloverfoot (Ki) - Declined
I literally didn't try. Tiger Sunny days 01:38, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading on the neck - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:47, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Her back paw looks white. Maybe darken it please? User: Dewdrops56/ talk 13:37, May, 7, 2015
Define the shading on the face and legs, also maybe add some lighting to it? (It's more of a style choice.) The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:41, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Her back paw doesn't look white. It's just because there's no shadow where you're looking. I think it looks fine. Maybe blur the shading on the tail User:StormSongz/Sig 14:54, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped Tiger Sunny days 22:45, May 7, 2015 (UTC)
Blur the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:51, May 8, 2015 (UTC)
Still working? —Jayce(08:59, 5/13/2015)
The shadow on the back paw should be switched to the other end, I believe, with your light source. Cute! ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:12, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Sorry for lack of work Tiger Sunny days 22:24, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
IDK but she looks a little cross-eyed to me... And define the shading on <== that leg - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:11, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
lmao I see it too. Could you define the shading on <==== that leg, and maybe smooth out the neck/chest shading a bit? ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 02:55, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
Again, Tiger, you still working on this? —Jayce(22:29, 5/18/2015)
Sorry, Tiger. I have to decline this, due to lack of work. —Jayce(01:46, 5/21/2015)
Birch (Ro) ~ For Approval
ah yes only i can ever 100% match my patterns correctly Queen Beebs 22:26, May 11, 2015 (UTC)
Nice, please unsmudge the stripes in the middle of his side? Like you can see two lines there. If you get what I mean... If not I can circle them ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 07:24, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
the stripes on his kit were smudged similarly so i'll let this slide o3o Queen Beebs 09:56, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
These two lines only I meant. =) ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:13, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
can you shade the nose or something? it looks odd being so bright with the shading as it is. 19:43, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
i've tried throwing the nose under the shading layer but i'd be told to make it more visible because it'd look thesame as the pale markings under there, therefore i think it's okay, but i'll re-up w/ the stripes Queen Beebs 18:48, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
re-up Queen Beebs 19:29, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
You don't have to put it under that shading layer. Just make a new one that only shades the nose. —Jayce(06:48, 5/15/2015)
re-up Queen Beebs 14:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
I still see those two smudge lines in the middle of his side- did you not get those when Bramblesnow pointed them out? They really stand out and it kinda bugs me. —Jayce(02:37, 5/18/2015)
re-up Queen Beebs 10:17, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
The two lines are gone, but I see some other lines 0.0 might just be me. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
His stripes /are/ smudged on the kit, so keep that in mind. Queen Beebs 23:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Bluestar (Alt. Apprentice) ~ For Approval
File:Bluestar.alt.apprentice.png Tell me if it needs the nick! Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
There's waste by the head area. It needs the nick, since it's the alt image, and it has the nick anyway. Also, you need silver on the tail-tip and muzzle, as it has to match the other images. ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 22:36, May 12, 2015 (UTC)
Reups!: Better? Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
If this is the one for TUG then it shouldn't have the nick, as she's shown without it... —Jayce(02:39, 5/13/2015)
Darken and define the shading - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:52, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
I'll fix the shading, but please make up you're mind about the nick Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
No, she doesn't get the nick. Please remove it. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:18, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Ok, I have to redo her do... Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
No you don't, just overlay the linear art over the old one, on a new layer. then fill in the gaps - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 22:33, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
I lost the file I what I mean...Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
Withdrawing lel, I cant do her right... Russet: The fun has been bubbled! LMFAO...
I'll take over. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:01, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. The colors are all from the queen alt. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 21:17, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the legs ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:28, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Darken the shading a bit, please. —Jayce(18:42, 5/19/2015)
Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:43, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Flowerpaw (A) ~ For Approval
File:Flowerpaw.apprentice.png I suppose I can post this now. She was so fun to do! ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 15:03, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Define the tail shading? She's as pretty as her name suggests! ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 22:14, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Can you define the most visible hind paw's shading? Tiger Sunny days 22:26, May 13, 2015 (UTC)
Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 01:06, May 14, 2015 (UTC)
Define the depth of the shading- it appears flat. —Jayce(07:35, 5/15/2015)
Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 16:42, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Switch the shading on the tail to the other side of it, to match the rest of your light source. ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 02:27, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Reups ~ Stormsong Let it storm♫ 02:34, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Define the tail shading, as I can't see it. —Jayce(18:41, 5/19/2015)
I'd like a second opinion on that as I can see it just fine. Storm♫ 21:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Yes I agree with Cloudy, please either add depth or maybe tinting it would help. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Reups Cannot define it anymore or else whole tail will be shadow. Storm♫ 01:53, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Owl Eyes (Ro) ~ For Approval
Yay, it's my birthday! :D I honestly think he could be darkened if he is dark grey. User:Burntclaw/Sig 07:59, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Happy birthday, Burnt!! =) This is a lovely image. Could you smooth out the shading just a tiny bit, though? —Jayce(08:11, 5/15/2015)
Re-upped thank you =P User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:20, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Happy birthday! Hope you have a great day. Anyway, smudge/blur the tail shading a tiny bit, and possibly define the eye depth? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:12, May 15, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped Thanks :) User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:23, May 16, 2015 (UTC)
Maybe darken the eyes more orange- Amber like the kit? User: Dewdrops56/talk 14:00, May, 19, 2015
The eyes seem to me to be the same color as the kit's, so I think it's fine. —Ivy ☆ 20:11, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Agreed with Icebreeze. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:06, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Berryheart (K) ~ For Approval
wee~ Probably won't be able to upload on weekdays but I /can/ update on Fridays. <: V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 14:23, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
It needs a white neck like the other images. And define the light on the legs, and tail Storm♫ 14:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
oh god it's disgusting ;; V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 14:33, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light on the legs, tail, and the chest please you forgot those Storm♫ 14:41, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
it's still horrible V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 14:57, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
There's literally still no light on the legs/paws. get rid of some shadow Storm♫ 15:02, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Shrink the white on her front paws, please. They only look that way on the queen because of how long her legs are. —Jayce(15:03, 5/17/2015)
Better? V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 15:26, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Can you define and add depth to the shading? The image is looking kind of flat. Good job on this though! —Ivy ☆ 15:35, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
Ice, when you say "The image looks flat", you mean define the shading everywhere, right? Because I think that needs a bit more work upon touching :) Good job with smudging. Very nice. ❀ mei ❀ GOGOBEBE 18:36, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
I hate shading ;_; V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 19:11, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
You are still forgetting to put light on the legs. Define the light on the chest and tail and define the shading on the side of her face... This charart is literally all shading. Define the light everywhere. Storm♫ 22:37, May 17, 2015 (UTC)
The white is looking a little grey on my screen… maybe lighten it? Idk whether it is only my phone ~Snow~ 06:56, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
It isn't just your screen, it's really gray, add some highlights? Are you using pure white? - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 11:48, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
I used pure white on her queen, which is the first image in the set, so you'll need to do the same. —Jayce(22:31, 5/18/2015)
She did use pure white, but it's literally all shading. Adding to my comment earlier, get rid of some shadow. Storm♫ 23:02, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
Latte, check this out ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 12:00, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Yes, I'll remove shading, but I'll do it on Friday. Sorry. V̵͘͜͠I̵̸͡B̡Ŕ̷͟A̛҉̀Ņ̶̨̨͞T̶͞P̴͞A̴̶̢̢͡S͜҉S̵̛͢͡͠I̵͘͢͞͡Ò̶͞͞Ņ̨͞͞ W̡AS ̷I̷T M̵E̵? 21:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Ferntail (Ki) ~ For Approval
Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:09, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
Add some shading between the tummy and on the leg as well. Looking good Storm♫ 16:13, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on the head, and the light on the back paw. Cutie! ❄Sorrel It's everything I dreamed 17:19, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
It could be defined everywhere - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:33, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
The leg, tail, and paw shading is fine, tbh. —Jayce(08:36, 5/19/2015)
done there already was shading on the leg and tummy, Storm, so I defined it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 11:17, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Maybe possibly darken the shading a few ticks? Storm♫ 03:28, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Jaywing (K) ~ For Approval
His name sounds too much like Jay's Wing. Me + texture = no —Ivy ☆ 23:20, May 18, 2015 (UTC)
She looks a little dark to me. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 00:24, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped He does to me, too. Hopefully this is better, but if it's not I'll gladly lighten it further. —Ivy ☆ 00:59, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on the legs? And maybe get rid of that shadow to the left on the chest/neck as it shouldn't be there with your light source. Storm♫ 03:29, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Re-upped —Ivy ☆ 20:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Bluestar (Alt K) ~ For Approval
File:Bluestar.kit.alt3.png okay. I misnamed the file by accident- ill rename it in the next upload.~☯ Breeze Five Nights at Freddys 00:21, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
No, please don't reupload with a different filename. It's more crap for me to delete. I'll rename it for you. Also, smooth out the shading. This would actually be kit.alt3 because she already has two other alts. —Jayce(01:23, 5/19/2015)
Smooth out the shading on the tail a bit and/or define it? Storm♫ 01:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Curlfeather (W) - For Approval
I tried??? I also color-picked from the kit. —Jayce(01:19, 5/19/2015)
I love this Snowy! Define the shading on the tail and the back leg closest to us? Storm♫ 01:22, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
May just be my screen but this looks slightly lighter than the kit, perhaps it's just the shading or something, so if you think it's all right, disregard me. Back leg shading looks fine though. Pretty! —Ivy ☆ 01:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
You know I think it is just the shading. Just ignore my above comment. —Ivy ☆ 01:32, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
It's just the shading- the kit's is darker, and mine is tinted a brown-ish color. Anyways, re-uploaded. —Jayce(01:35, 5/19/2015)
Holy crap the texture is so good >.> Define shading overall, love this^^ ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:55, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Don't worry about the kit being darker, the original warrior was darker so I darkened the kit to match, but I'm going to lighten it back up to match this one because I don't like the dark color. (And I can do that now that the original warrior was declined) The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 13:51, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Raven you're not allowed to tweak images even if its yours. Only warriors are allowed to. Storm♫ 14:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
The image hasn't been approved yet, so I can still make changes to it. -looks up- The Stylish Ravenpelt I'm too hot! (Hot damn!) 15:14, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
My bad, thought it was approved already. As for the image Snowy, maybe darken the shading a bit? Storm♫ 15:16, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(18:35, 5/19/2015)
Could you blur/smudge the body shading just a bit? —.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. —Jayce(19:04, 5/19/2015)
Define the shading ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 06:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Sparrow Fur (Alt. Ro) - For Approval
File:Sparrow Fur.rogue.alt.pngShe was called brown in AFD, so here's the little beauty :3 (there's slightly darker fur on her head, back, legs and tail, not misplaced shading ^.^; I can remove it if I need to) Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 02:42, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
OMFG I cannot do this O.O If you can, maybe you should define the tail shading. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:46, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
I agree with Foxy!!! you all know how terrible I am with texture x.x Define light on /her/ right front leg, beautiful!^^ ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:56, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
There's some waste at the top of the image above her tail. Also expand the shading on the tail as it appears cut off to me. Looking wonderful sunjaw! Storm♫ 03:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
reupped Thanks all ^.^ I ended up redoing the tail shading and defined the highlights a little bit so hopefully that helps Sun Man, that man is nonstop♣• 12:18, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Brackenpelt (Ki) ~ For Approval
- Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 04:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Oh how lovely 0.0 Smooth out earpink, tail shading and the shading on her side? This is sooo cute XDDD ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 11:58, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 12:34, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
want the xcf for this? Queen Beebs 18:27, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Redone to match 100% - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 08:32, May 20, 2015 (UTC)
Sloefur (Mc) ~ For Approval
File:Sloefur.mc.pngSziri the goat sails away ツ 19:44, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
Define the shading on the herbs and possibly define the ear pink - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 23:27, May 19, 2015 (UTC)
You have an image to match, in terms of darkness. Lighten the image up, please. —Jayce(01:32, 5/21/2015)
Ivypool (Alt. W) - For Approval
- she was called gray and white in Dovewing's Silence ~Scarletwind"Time to go home Flap." 01:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
gray and white is pretty much silver and white if you ask me, are you sure they weren't just briefly describing her without saying her as a tabby? I might be wrong though. I love the texture!^^ Maybe lighten the front leg shading, and define the source on her hind leg, pretty! ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 07:38, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Gray and silver are separate shades. - Fox 僕たちはひとつの光 10:27, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Gray-and-white is not silver-and-white. —Jayce(11:04, 5/21/2015)
Hootwhisker (W) ~ For Evaluation
Ermegersh IT LOOKS SO WEIRD!
I could redo it pretty soon, but for now, I'll use this.
PoppyShine (talk) 04:23, May 21, 2015 (UTC)PoppyShine
Hey, it's gotta match Hootwhisker's apprentice if I recall correctly..--Nachtide The Wikian Squad 07:04, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
You misnamed it, it should be named Hootwhisker.warrior.png. Other than that, match his apprentice image as Nachtide said, smooth out the shading, clear the waste, blur the earpink and define light on the legs. ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 07:35, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Don't align your images. It messes up the page. There is also texture to match. Define and darken your shading. This should also be titled 'For Evaluation' instead of 'For Approval' since its your first image. Storm♫ 11:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
He also doesnt appear to have a pupil... Define eye depth as well Storm♫ 12:53, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Sparrowtail (W) ~ For Approval
He has no specific color, but he's shown in the list of characters needing art so... Yep. I love the name Sparrowtail yay :D I actually came up with it before ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 09:26, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
he has an image that needs ti be matched. its not that hard ti check his page. ._. david 🌈 09:54, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Omg I'm so dumb I swear I clicked on his page multiple times but I didn't realize it I'll upload it very soon ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 10:14, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Ugh it doesn't match ~ Cheryl Champagne Problems 🍷 () 12:45, May 21, 2015 (UTC)
Define the light/shading on the legs/paws? It looks wonderful silver! Storm♫ 12:52, May 21, 2015 (UTC)