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This archive contains those offers of character art that have been declined for use on the site.

Squirrelflight - Declined

[[File:Squirrelpaw.PNG|left]] (IMAGE REMOVED)  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 12:34, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Not very detailed but Squrrielflight isnt very detailed anyways.--Tallstar 04:40, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

There's enough info on the character for shading to be something that SHOULD be in the pixel, and markings known for the character are definitely missing.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 00:10, 14 May 2008 (UTC)

Squirrelflight - Declined

[[File:Squirrelflight.gif|right]] (IMAGE REMOVED)  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 12:34, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

I've tried creating a new version of Squirrelflight, this one has slightly more texture. Does anyone know of any specific things that are missing? (such as birthmarks, scars, ect.) I could easily add them and reupload the picture if need be. ~ Bella Swan 14:08, 23 June 2008 (UTC)


Shading would be nice.... --Nightwing8 19:23, 24 June 2008 (UTC)

The texture looks too much like markings, perhaps some blending would take care of that... Shading is definitely needed. and I believe the character has a white paw.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 02:38, 26 June 2008 (UTC)

She also has a squirrel tail. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Redflare (talkcontribs) 10:35, 28 June 2008

Provide a book citation, please. Including volume and page number. I hadn't noticed any indication she was longhaired in the past, but I do have a terrible memory.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:14, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
It said that at the end of Firestar's quest. --Redflare 16:47, 28 June 2008 (UTC)Redflare
Pagenumber please. I don't have time to go trolling through the book for one sentence.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:50, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
One of the pages in the epilouge of Firestar's quest.--Redflare 19:59, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
I have to run now, but I'll find the specific page when I get back. Eu(Talk!Contribs) 20:33, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
Epilogue, Page 509, US hardback edition. Eu(Talk!Contribs) 20:51, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
Yes! Thats it--Redflare 23:03, 28 June 2008 (UTC)
Verified fluffy tail means this one was done on the wrong base, then... and should be using the longhaired base... Shorthaired cats simply don't have fluffy tails...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:01, 29 June 2008 (UTC)
I also remember reading that she has a white paw on her front legs. Though its not sure which paw it is.--Shim 20:45, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Cloudtail - Declined

[[File:Cloudtail.PNG|right]] (IMAGE REMOVED) Cloudtail isnt very detailed either but hey someone has to do him and until they make a template for Clan leaders and Medicine cats I cant make Leopardstar, Tallstar, or Leafpool...or Littlecloud anyway yeah its Cloudtail.--Tallstar 04:54, 12 May 2008 (UTC)

Needs shading. Just because the cat is solid doesn't excuse a flat color.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 00:12, 14 May 2008 (UTC)

I think the fur looks good, but that doesn't look pure white. It has a silver tinge. GB 03:11, 28 July 2008 (UTC)

Pure white will almost never be used in making graphics. You can't get highlights when you use it.. and considering nothing in nature is pure, unnatural white... I'm not going to refuse it based on something like that. Declining this one officially, since the user in question hasn't touched it in months. Will archive in a few days if they don't reply again saying they're working on improving it.

Thornclaw - Removed by User

Here's my attempt at Thornclaw. Feel free to comment, I appreciate it. —Preceding unsigned comment added by FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever (talkcontribs) 16:16, 31 July 2008

Flat colors are never accepted. Time and time again Gorse and I have stressed shading... and considering this cat is a tabby... well there's definitely going to have to be work done on it.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:20, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
  • shakes head* First of all, PLEASE sign all your comments by putting four "~"s at the end of each post, or clicking the signature button. Second, this can't be accepted. No tabby markings, and no shading. Tabby markings can be hard, I know. They're the one things I honestly feel I'm unable to do at this point. But we still need them if the cat is a tabby. Anyway, work on the markings and the shading, then submit it again and well see how it looks then. Gorse 16:27, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
Hmmm...this cat almost looks like Thornclaw, but it's missing the tabby markings, and I might be wrong, but it looks like he's missing his eyes! GB(Grocery store) 17:58, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
Honestly this was my 1st draft, I wanted to know what you think...I'm going to take him off, attempt to do tabby, and, yes, GB, I WILL put in his eye. —Preceding unsigned comment added by FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever (talkcontribs) 02:52, 1 August 2008
Any time a pixel is posted here it will be looked at critically with an eye towards pushing the quality up to the level expected for use on the articles. It's not really the ideal place to air a first draft unless you're prepared for the reaction you're going to get placing an unfinished work in a place orientated towards perfected finished (or near finished) ones.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:07, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Medicine Cat Pixel Blank - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Elder_blank.gif|left]] Here is my attempt to draw a Medicine cat - this is Male Longhaired. —Preceding unsigned comment added by FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever (talkcontribs) 13:21, 5 August 2008

Did you modify the Warrior pixel? Because if you did, you'll need to track down the original artist (I've got their ID on Devart, I believe) and get permission to modify it. Currently we have permission for pixel creation with it, not alterations to the lineart. Now, onto actual art concerns, rather than copyright ones... The nose seems... off... Thre's just something weird about it. And the tail is... Abnormally small compared to the body... and seems to be growing from the hip, rather than the rump...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 15:54, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Sorreltail - Declined

[[File:Sorreltailgif.GIF|left]] Here's a picture of Sorreltail. What do you guys think? Sonia 1000 19:40, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Nice work,but it kinda looks funny.--Jayfeather113 21:02, 6 May 2008 (UTC)
Actually, it looks rather nice, I think. My only suggestion would be maybe some shading and again maybe some working to make a more fur-like texture... but other than that it looks very good. Hmmm... As for approval, though, I think it's fine. Anyone disagree? Gorse 21:47, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Ok I'll work on it a little bit more, and then maybe I'll put it up if Gorse approves Sonia 1000 21:59, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Just curious, but what program do you use to do these? Eu(Talk!Contribs) 23:17, 6 May 2008 (UTC)

Here, I uploaded a better version of Sorreltail. It's still horrible...but at least it's an improvement :) !! I'm not sure if I'm done yet though...please tell me your thoughts. Gorse, what do you think? Sonia 1000 02:01, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

I like it. For some reason, my computer's colors are permanently wacko, so I can't see any deatils on the Tawnypelt pic', but I can see this one perfectly. It looks pretty good, but honestly, I liked the old one better. This one looks....blurry, to me. *shrugs*, maybe it just looks furry :p Eu(Talk!Contribs) 13:48, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

Well, i was trying to get a furry look...I used MS Paint for this. Should I put it on the page, Gorse?Sonia 1000 00:31, 13 May 2008 (UTC)

I like it. 9/10! Good job, Sonia 1000! GB 00:06, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

I think it looks how a Sorreltail should look. Pretty tortoiseshell. I like it. --Bramble 18:31, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

What do you think, Gorse? Is it Wiki material? GB 18:36, 29 July 2008 (UTC)

Actually... I can't say that it is, entirely. If you look closely, you'll see a lot of tiny color distortions, with odd little shades that shouldn't be there. I'd compare this to my early days with Photoshop Elements, when I would overuse the "Sharpen" tool. It would add in all kinds of colors that weren't in the picture before, making it look slightly unnatural. Unless the colors are fixed, I can't fairly accept it. Gorse 04:39, 30 July 2008 (UTC)

It's got a furry look,but I agree with Gorse.It also is blurry.--JayfeatherSong of Storms~ 15:44, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

I really like it!--JKO 17:08, 31 July 2008 (UTC)

Hmmm...now that you point it out, it does look a little chalky. And dusty. But the color's still good! GB(Grocery store) 20:01, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

Declining this one because band ate Gorse ;) and Sonia hasn't touched it in months.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:07, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Right now Sonia is in India.I doubt she can go on,cause she never goes on Clans of the Wild,her site.--JayfeatherSong of Storms 01:33, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Just because she's away dosen't mean we're going to let clutter sit on this page. Once she's back, she can resubmit and have another go at getting it approved, but right now it's been sitting for months, and the time has come to decline it based on lack of progress regardless of the reason for the lack of progress. This isn't a storage joint, it's a place for approvals. We can't approve that image as it stands.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:11, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

Crowfeather - Withdrawn by user

[[File:Crowfeather4.PNG|right]]
I did this one of Crowfeather. I know its not much since Crowfeather doesn't have much detail. --Shim 20:41, 21 July 2008 (UTC)

Every time I hear it I like the phrase 'the character doesn't have much detail' less and less every time I hear it. The character being a solid color does not excuse lack of shading! Please take the time to go back and shade it, just like every person who has submitted a flat-colored image has been told to do.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 21:30, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
I'm so sorry Kitsu and I share that same peeve so I know how you feel. I redid Crowfeather and added shading to him. What do you think of him now?--Shim 21:54, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
. . . If it's a pet peeve of yours, why on earth did you offer up an image guilty of it? Anyways... The edges of the shading are really, really hard... Maybe soften them up a bit so they look smoother...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 00:28, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
I soften the edges the best I can. I don't have photoshop so I find ways to do pictures on paint an blibs.com. I'll fix Squirrelflight soon.--Shim 03:38, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
Because of the hard-line between the colors it looks like a black cat with a black stripe on his back... Unfortunately, paint and websites aren't suited to doing high quality graphics... You can, but you pretty much have to shade pixel-by-pixel to create the gradients and proper shading.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 12:21, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
I took the advice at downloading that program you mention. I smooth him out and personally I like this version better than the rest. He's smoother and you can't see the black outline that was on his back anymore.--Shim 21:51, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
I was talking just about the colors on his back... The colors that make up the pelt... not the outline itself... He looks blurry... Like I'm wearing beer-glasses or have my contacts out or something...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:15, 23 July 2008 (UTC)
I don't know about this one. It looks to dusty. I give it a 3/10. Sorry, Shim. If you want to get that score up, however, make him look less blurry and dusty. I do think you did a good job on the color! GB 04:22, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
I'd like to decline my own picture because I have to restart on Crowfeather. It should probably take me a day or such, but I also don't like the idea of the page being a storage system. With school this is really ruining my work O_o. --Shim 22:51, 9 August 2008 (UTC)

Yellowfang - Withdrawn by user

[[File:Yellowfang_1.gif|right]] Here's Yellowfang. I used the Female Longhair warrior blank, since there is no medicine cat blank, but I think it still looks like her. FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:56, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Because the incorrect blank is used, it won't be accepted. Blanks will be made, I've started filling in holes in the collection. But there's also the issue of all the blurring. While pixels need blending, the outlines need to be cripst, while the shading edges should be soft.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:35, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Hmm...I think it's pretty good! What do you think, Gorse? GB(Grocery store) 15:09, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

I'm repeating what Kitsu said, because it's true. Blanks are currently being worked on for all the ranked positions that don't have them yet, but until then, we can't accept pixels for any character in those positions. Yellowfang will simply have to wait for a correct pixel. Also, the edges of the pixels seem rather blurred in any case. You want the coloring to be blurred together so it looks smoother, but not the actual base itself. Gorse 16:31, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
Now that I think of it, Yellowfang look's a little smeared. GB(Grocery store) 18:44, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Me too.It's smeared/blurry,but to smeared/blurry.It's nice though!--JayfeatherSong of Storms 14:57, 8 August 2008 (UTC)

In a few days I'm going to take this off of the page. Yellowfang will never get approved w/ the warrior base. For now this is withdrawn. FxC The Waterfall 13:15, 26 August 2008 (UTC)

Brought this back to the talk-page; I think Gorse and Kitsu are supposed to put this in the declined archive when they get the chance, FxC. GB 16:19, 13 September 2008 (UTC)

Blossomkit - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Blossomkit_(TC).PNG|left]] First image, any constructive criticism appreciated. I used brown for the background so her white and black patches wouldn't blend in. GB 02:23, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

The patches just need to be...well, smoother, and the eyes need to be done, as well as some blurring and shading, and a transparent background. But this is way better than my first try. FxC **The Waterfall** 13:34, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blossomkit. I smoothed some of her patches, as well as changed the background color and attempted some shading. GB 15:58, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Use the bluretool.--Redflare 16:23, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Actually Redflare, my program doesn't have a blurtool. I've tried looking for it. GB 16:39, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

What program? If it i MS paint then it would be best to download one with it.--Redflare 16:49, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Let me just say that, if you're learning graphic art and using a low powered program you haven't got a bad start. Unfortunately, though, I do have to hold you to the same standards as everyone else, including those with graphic programs a million times more flexible. This means that there is a long way to go before this is acceptable. Not having blurtool does not mean we'll lower our expectations and let an un-blended image through. This means you'll have to hand-create the blend effect pixel by pixel. There's a reason people don't use MS Paint to do things like this. I'll just start at the beginning and go from there. The eyes really do need to be done, and that's just the first thing that popped for me, those creepy staring white spots. The outline is white. And it should be black. If you did it to keep the outline separate from the black patches, I suggest instead of true black on the character, you use a very dark gray. I know that's what I do, and I have a feeling that's the trick others use. The outline does need to be black. And then we get to the coat... Right now they need to be blended together some, so that it looks like one cohesive furry pelt rather than a flat-colored collection of patches. The image also needs to be shaded.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:32, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this, since she needs some major improvements, which I'd need to work on. I withdrew Redtail too. The others I'll work on.

Redtail - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Redtail.PNG|left]] Drew Redtail. Any constructive criticism is appreciated! Also, like Jay said above, this page needs to be archived; I'm going to wait to upload any more pics until it is. GB 23:10, 14 September 2008 (UTC)

Redtail is a deputy.--Redflare 19:45, 15 September 2008 (UTC)

Please wait until a few of your current pending works are completely resolved before adding more. Now... Yes, Redtail is a deputy. In fact, he never appeared as a warrior anywhere in the series that I can think of... We literately don't need a warrior pixel for him...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 17:00, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

I've decided to withdraw this, sence we don't have the blanks yet. GB 00:08, 18 September 2008 (UTC)

Clovertail - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Clovertail.gif|left]] Ok, this is my first try at Charart, and criticism is appreciated. I will try to improve it if needed, but I tried my hardest. Also, can I join the project?--JKO 23:10, 7 September 2008 (UTC)

That better than what I can do,but does Clovertail have the white fur near the bottom?--JayfeatherSheikah 21:24, 8 September 2008 (UTC)

I added a more cleaned up version, with Jayfeather's white at the bottom.--JKO 21:53, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

Much better, but mabye you could lighten up the back line. But its not up to me.--Redflare 23:11, 9 September 2008 (UTC)

For a first timer, I think this looks nice, Jakko. But about her white underbelly, I think that should be lowered a little bit. And by the way, can anyone tell me how to create images? GB 23:19, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

GB, you use a paint program such as GIMP or photoshop. I use ms paint then transfer it to photoshop. I can't wait until Foxpaw is a warrior I have the perfect thing in mind.--Redflare 23:29, 10 September 2008 (UTC)

Jakko, this is really good. Blur the shading and it'll be great. All i suggest is maybe a bit of shading between the front leg and flank. --FxC **The Waterfall** 23:13, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

A very nice start, Jakko. Particularly for a first go at this. I do have a few points for improvement before it can be approved, though. To start with we'll talk about the shading, which looks incomplete. The head, neck and underside could all use some work to make the character look less flat. Then we have to talk about blending, because this needs it badly. The markings all look drawn on, rather than a part of the coat. Specifically on the belly, where I can tell you used a 75 or 100 px brush and just went 'click' *wink* Some blending and work to make it look more natural will fix that right up. All of the shading needs blending, too. All in all, an extremely nice start.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:17, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

Alright, I accidentally ruined the whole picture while trying to blend it. I used the Blend tool on GIMP, and now it's just a tiny part of the fur. I will need to redo the whole thing, so it might take a little while.--JKO 20:21, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

If you'd like, I can decline this version, and we can start fresh with the new version. The learning curve on the more advanced programs can be pretty brutal. Just stick with it.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 23:57, 16 September 2008 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this.--JKO 20:26, 19 September 2008 (UTC)

Frostfur - Declined

[[File:Frostfur_3.gif|left]] This is my shot at Frostfur. I appreciate any constructive criticism. FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 02:30, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

It's alright. I know Frostfur is white, but it looks a little too white. Cats live in the wild, and they get dirty. Also a little bit more shading would be nice, but that's just an opinion. It's actually not bad.--JKO The Jakkolantern 03:03, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
Yes I agree. A bit more shading and make the lines smoother too. I learned this alot while I'm making Squirrelflight and Crowfeather.--Shim 03:08, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
As the others have said, the shading need works and the white is just a bit too pristine. But Frostfur is an Elder, also. It won't hurt to have a Warrior Pixel, but just don't be surprised when we have another pixel made later (Eventually I'd like to see articles have pixels for each rank the character has held during the course of the books).  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:45, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
I did more shading, and added some on her chest. FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:21, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
Blurtool. The edges of the shading are very, very harsh, and need to be blending into the pelt so they don't look like markings the way they do now.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 15:57, 5 August 2008 (UTC)
I used the Blurtool. How does it look now?FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:21, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
The line between base-color and shading is still really really hard... Take a look at the archive of approved stuff... You'll see that blending between the colors is needed.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 13:23, 6 August 2008 (UTC)
Complaint still stands. Going to have to start declining these old ones if we don't start seeing work soon.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:42, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
You have my permission to decline this, Kitsu. FxC **The Waterfall** 13:05, 19 September 2008 (UTC)
Allrighty. Declining it now. I'll archive it later, since I have a billion things to take far of.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 12:49, 20 September 2008 (UTC)

Rainwhisker - Declined

[[File:Rainwhisker3.gif|left]]I did this one for Rainwhisker. Hope you guys like it. Eaglebranch 14:42, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

I like it, Eagle(can i call you that?), but Rainwhisker is kind of a darker gray than this shade. But other than that, the shading's good and he rocks! --Bramble 15:05, 2 August 2008 (UTC)
First off, the character is dark, rather than mediume gray so the shade will need to adjusted. Then there's the shading, which is in need of a bit of work. The character still looks very flat and the edges of the shaded areas are very very distinct rather than blended as they should be. It's a nice start, but needs some work.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 15:12, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Kitsu's right about the shading and color, but I think you did a great job on the fur! GB(Grocery store) 15:14, 2 August 2008 (UTC)


Like this? Eaglebranch 18:34, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Much better! GB(Grocery store) 18:40, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

While the shade is better... There's not a halo-effect around the darker (correct) color, creating a pale-gray line all the way around the body color section. That's not much better, It's just about even up with where it was. Eaglebranch, You'll need to fix that pale line around the edges and then shade it.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 20:22, 2 August 2008 (UTC)

Right, I got rid of the halo and then shaded so that he would look rounder on the edges. I think it looks better. Eaglebranch 14:53, 3 August 2008 (UTC)

Definitely improved. But the shading could be intensified (reference some other, accepted, pixels). Right now it on the minimal side and isn't fully giving dept the to the image.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:15, 4 August 2008 (UTC)

Version number 4. I took your advice Kitsu and bumped up the shading. Whadya guys think? EaglebranchTalk 15:36, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

I say that you could just add a little more shading and blur it together. Other than that, I think its great. --Shim 02:04, 17 August 2008 (UTC)
Thanks Shim! Whadda you think Gorse?. Eaglebranch(Talk) 13:00, 15 September 2008 (UTC)
Gorse has been crazy-busy of late. But I do still have issues... Namely, that the shading is still all really hard-edged. Which is very inconsistent with the style the other finished pieces are using...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:40, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Declining due to lack of progress for a month on the piece, despite requests for updates. Will be archived tomorrow.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:36, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Declining

[[File:Mistyfoot_4.gif|left]]I drew Mistyfoot, how do you guys like it?FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:13, 7 August 2008 (UTC)


Please sign your username when you offer up an image. I think it looks good. Maybe a little more shading in the front. Other than that, it looks fine. The fact that she's a deputy though makes me wonder. EaglebranchTalk 19:14, 6 August 2008 (UTC)


Asides the fact that I think Mistyfoot has short fur, her color looks about right and she looks good. The shading also needs to be blurred a bit. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 22:27, 6 August 2008 (UTC)

I did the longhair base and used Blurtool. Now what do you think?FeathertailxCrowfeather 4ever 13:13, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Just curious, what is Blurtool? EaglebranchTalk 20:49, 7 August 2008 (UTC)

Blurtool is an editing tool in quality paint programs that lets you blur areas of the image. FxC, it could use a bit more shading, to make the image more dynamic... and there's also the issue of Mistyfoot being a Deputy... We don't have a Deputy Blank yet...  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:25, 8 August 2008 (UTC)
I was thinking...you made Brambleclaw with a warrior base. Well, you said you wanted pixels for every rank the character has held, and for pretty much all of the OS Mistyfoot was a warrior. FxC 12:56, 11 August 2008 (UTC)
Brambleclaw was made before he was a deputy. That was the most current rank for him at the time. As for wanting the ranks.. yes. Eventually we'll want that. But currently the priority needs to be on producing with the current rank-image. We can likely forgive it being the wrong base since we do want past images, but I just want to stress that we should work in the currents and focus on characters we have bases for rather than making back images at this juncture.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 22:53, 14 August 2008 (UTC)
Bramble is right about the need for some blending on that shading.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 03:43, 16 September 2008 (UTC)
Hey, I'm currently searching for another gray she-cat I can submit this as. --FxC **The Waterfall** 13:17, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
Declining. Previous comments on shading stand if it's re-submitted as another character. Will be archived tomorrow.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:37, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

Sorreltail- Declined

[[File:Sorreltail.jpg]]My first try at char art go ahead and critique--Redflare 00:27, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Sorreltail isn't brown and red, she's just black, white, and orange. The inside of her ear is completely orange, not pink. She has amber eyes, not green. She could also use a little more shading. GB 00:33, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Oh woops didn't realize the ear, I'll fix it tommorrow too lazy today. And currently my photoshop is acting up, so i'm using MS paint, but I will do phtoshop.--Redflare 00:41, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I just noticed that the background isn't quite transparent, but that can be fixed. You might want to blend the markings together, because now they look like markings, not fur.--JKO 20:18, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

The orange markings on the pelt are very distinct, like some paint was used to make them. Swifty{ASTRX} 20:30, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I added another version its not done, but if I don't put it now I never will. I will add blenging later.--Redflare 22:52, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

She looks like there's dust coming off of her. The shading is hard to see, and the eyes are... weird. They should be amber, not a squinty kind of white. Also, that red mark shouldn't be there. GB 23:28, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

Could you try using a different file format? --Spottedleaf x firestar 23:36, 26 September 2008 (UTC)

Sxf, what you're asking for isn't required, and is a lot harder than you think. That would take about a day to change the format. The format Redflare is using is fine, as far as I know. GB 00:45, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

It is NOT hard. All she has to do is open it in Gimp, which I have, and save it as a different file and format. I could do it. Want me to do it, Redflare?--Spottedleaf x firestar 15:49, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

WHATEVA i fixed it already. Want me to post it? It's still the same image, only fixed.--Spottedleaf x firestar 16:57, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Sxf, I don't think you're even allowed to "fix" other people's images. Probably best that you don't upload it. There's no reason Redflare has to change his file format! —Preceding unsigned comment added by GroceryBag (talkcontribs)

I forgot to tell you, i didn't need to change the format after all. Grocery Bag, I don't think YOU'RE allowed to speak for Redflare when it's HER image we're talking about!!! I THOUGHT we were supposed to ask!!!! Redflare, what do you say? :-)

That was an un-needed attack on me, Sxf. Please don't do that again. Redflare is a guy. As far as I know, Redflare does not need to change the file format. GB 17:20, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

sry... sry.... i was kinda stressed.... sry.. oh yah, sorry, Redflare, I guess it's bcuz most of the warriors fans i know are girls.. hey! i know how to settle this!! I'll make my OWN Sorreltail!! i sooo smart.

Acually I am a guy and a girl we are two siblings using this acount. Right now it is the guy speaking and doing the charart. I do need to change the format its a jpg which I did by accident, but I don't have time now so I will do it later. But SxF(Love your name!) I want to fix it myself. I'm getting a new photoshop disc this week then I will add shading. Also SXF is right the format is very needed to be changed and also guys can you not spam up this page I want it to be easy to follow. and that was an un-needed attack on GB so please stop.--Redflare 20:39, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Redflare, no offense but the image looks a little...warped, if you know what I mean. FxC **The Waterfall** 22:32, 18 October 2008 (UTC)

No improvements have been made for around a month. So I'm declining to clear up clutter. Will be archived tomorrow.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 14:52, 28 October 2008 (UTC)

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