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Rowanstar - Widthdrawn

[[File:Rowanstar.png]] note to lay of patched cats**Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 23:39, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Add some more shading, blur it and add some highlights too if you already haven't! Otherwise, it looks.........alright. --PandasongProud Owner of a Imaginary Panda! 00:21, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

He Looks awesome. All I can see is maybe add some highlights? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:43, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

HIGHLIGHTS AREN'T MANDATORY! Pandasong, the shading is blended to the best of my ability.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 01:34, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Highlights are not necessary, that is true. A shaded cat without highlights is both simple and approvable. Swallow, you just need to blend the transition between your patches, darken the ear pink and make it less smudgy, and that's about it. He looks very nice. --Bramble My Realm 02:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just take the patch on his chest and connect it with the other brown patch on his leg; it looks a little unatural right now. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:06, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded made the ear pink darker and redder, connected the patches and blended to the best of my ability without it looking smudged.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 16:01, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - It looks great! Just add shading to the bottem of his tail and this should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:55, September 19, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is that better?*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 22:03, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

Much better. All he needs now is you need to blend that patch right near his mouth, because it's just hard line where the transition is, and make the ear pink a more dark pink color than purple. Also, on his right (our right) ear, move the ear pink inside the ear a bit more, and make it more triangular. --Bramble My Realm 01:53, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry that I haven't been on much. I think my latin teacher likes it when we fail.*Swallowtip * EMBRACE THE TIP! 03:46, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Lol, I know what you mean. I think this is ready. Comments before approval in 24 hours? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:38, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

^_^ The changes I mentioned above still need to be made. Then it should be ready. --Bramble-san 19:12, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Oh, Sorry! I didn't relize she hadn't uploaded a new file when she posted that. @_@ Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:10, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Lol Moss. It's fine. Yes, though, Swallow, you forgot to upload the new image on the 26. :) --Bramble-san 20:18, September 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I forgot. Better now?

Make the ear pink this color: File:EarColor.png and make it a more fine triangular shape, keeping it inside the ear. On the right ear especially, you can that the ear pink has gone out of the ear and onto the temple area. --Bramble-san 00:05, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Softpaw blanks - Withdrawn

[[File:SFFS.png]][[File:SFMS.png]][[File:SPFS.png]][[File:SPMS.png]]So I was surfing thought this site and low and behold, I find my old blanks. I forget what I wanted them used for, but I took them and molded them to this. Could someone give me a diagram or a face I could put on them? You would think that by a cats' third blank they would be good.Minnowclaw 00:11, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Not bad! How did you do your lineart so it looks so natural? I mean, I can't see the pixels or anything...it's kindof creepy...xP Anways, nice blanks! Try splitting the paws so they have toes on them right now, and the way the tail curls around the body looks...akward. Try curving it more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:07, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Thank Mosswhikser! I use a program called Paint.net for blanks and I start with a sketch I do at home, scan it. Then make as many layors I want while going over it until I like it. On my final stage, I forgot to start it with a white background so when I filled it in, it eareased all the grayish pixels. Well, I did my best to seporate the toes, fix the tail and I added my own face.Minnowclaw 22:47, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

The line under the chin should be more in. But these look awesome! --Rainwhisker09 01:26, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

They look really good, don't get me wrong... but my problem is that they don't really fit in with the more realistic style we have for the other blanks. Try making them more in proportion. The noses need to be less pointy and the limbs look very, i can't think of the word... puffy - like they would be stumbling around. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:03, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

I can't fix them, widthdrawn.Minnowclaw 00:36, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Mothpelt - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Mothpelt_warrior.png]] I'm listening to opera. Don't ask. And I'm back to WWiki.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 20:08, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, this looks very pretty! The only thing I can say is that the highlights in the middle of the fur look...webby, if you get what I mean. (sorry, I couldn't find a better word than webby.) Otherwise, this looks great! Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:38, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Add more black.Minnowclaw 23:27, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail. But, otherwise, this is great!--Hawktalon 19:26, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, opening GIMP. :D PS> I use GIMP instead of Pixlr now. :)--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 19:53, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

...ugh. Why does it keep smudging like that? Stupid auto filters when I save, probably... Can someone fix for me and erase it because it'll do it again if I re-upload it on GIMP or Pixlr. Ugh. >>--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 22:49, October 2, 2009 (UTC)

I fixed it right up for you, Warrior♥! I hope that's alright with you. --Hawktalon 15:38, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you so much, Hawktalon! -hug---Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:12, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

What's with the weird silvery streaks? If they're highlights then they just don't look... right. Sorry if this sounds harsh. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 13:41, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

...There highlights. But I'll go take them out.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 15:26, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Blur the texture alot more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:59, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is very sumged.Minnowclaw 12:14, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I'm withdrawing. I don't have time anymore for Mothpelt. ^;^--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 14:55, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Night of No Stars - Declined

[[Image:NightOfNoStars(To-Be).png]] This is my first submission on here, so.....anything need fixing? ♥~Mistpelt~♥ 23:31, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

Well, the color is way too dark. But she's very good besides that! HAWKFIRE98 23:53, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

The image is very good, but Night was never a to-be in the books. We also decided that we'd do current ranks and not past ranks. Mist, if you'd like to submit with another to-be, please feel free to do so. The image is very good, but it's not needed. --Bramble-san 02:26, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Gooot it! =) ♥~Mistpelt~♥ 10:41, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be declined now?Minnowclaw 14:09, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, sorry. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:58, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Willowshine (MC) - Withdrawn

[[File:Willowshine.medicinecat.png]]

Well, I'm still not that great on tabbies, but I really wanted to try a medicine cat, and I couldn't seem to have much luck at finding one who wasn't a tabby. So, how does she look? Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:50, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

SHe's really dark, I amagined her lighter. Kinda like Feathertails color. Mossflight 21:57, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She should be light enough now. What about the tabby stripes? Do they look okay? Icethroat21Enter at risk 23:34, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look fine, but wasn't she like a silver color? I'll check.Minnowclaw 01:23, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Her page says dark gray and the book says gray. Icethroat21Enter at risk 20:01, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, in that case, darken the shading a bit.Minnowclaw 20:31, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the shading. How does it look now? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:37, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the body and blend it. Also, add some more shading to the bottom of the herbs.-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 14:50, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, darkened the shading. Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:28, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I feel bad becuase I haven't commented on this in days. Sorry Icethroat. With the pic, I love it. This should be approved.Minnowclaw 00:52, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay, Minnowclaw. :) I've been meaning to ask, is it just mr, or does the shape of the ear pink look strange? Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:59, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

I know it looks odd, but that is if this was on a real cat, some of it would be covered up with hair. So that's probably why it looks odd, but it's good.Minnowclaw 23:41, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

It's almost there, you just need to work on the shading, especially the line going from between the forelegs to connect with the back shading- this looks really obvious and thin at the moment. Try thickening it slightly towards the back and blending it more. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:22, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to blur the shading, but it still doesn't look right... Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:36, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the shading connecting the forelegs with the shading look strange? Icethroat21 15:41, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think you've blurred the stripes too... try and define them a little. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:49, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

How do I define them? Icethroat21 19:40, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Draw over them and don't blur so much Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:15, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've tried to fix it, but I still can't get it to look right... Icethroat21 02:01, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've tried to fix it again, but I'm not sure if it's any better or not. Every time I lightened the shading and blurred the tabby stripes, the stripes would blur into the shading, so it took a while to get it...does it look any better? Icethroat21 21:26, October 8, 2009 (UTC)

This is very blurred.Minnowclaw 12:20, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Do you know how to fix that? Icethroat21 16:11, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

No sorry.Minnowclaw 23:24, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink color is too... bright. Try a different color. --Hallow's Eve09 22:59, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It's more of a darker pink now. Look better? Icethroat21 23:35, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like it needs more red. Like a reddish pink. I can show you the color if you need me to. --Hallow's Eve09 12:25, October 14, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, I just don't have enough time to work on this right now. Could someone please tell me how to withdraw this? Icethroat21 20:13, October 15, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Okay. Will archive later. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:22, October 16, 2009 (UTC)


Sharpclaw Blanks - Withdrawn

[[File:Sharpclaw_female_longhair.png]][[File:Sharpclaw_male_longhair.png]][[File:Sharpclaw_female_shorthair.png]][[File:Sharpclaw_male_shorthair.png]]

My first blanks! I'm pretty happy with the way they look. I made an example, Rusty, and I didn't have any problems with it. The only issue is their tiny size - does anyone know how to make them bigger without completely re-doing them?-- Echomist Hear the Echo... 23:39, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

These are good! You need to make them bigger so that it will be easier to draw. Also, with the tuffs of fur on their feet, it looks like they're on high heels.Minnowclaw 23:44, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Echo, but Mosswhisker had these on her current projects long before you did. They do look pretty good, maybe you can turn them into something else and put them up. I would hate for them to go to waste. If so, just change the name on this section and put for approval in place of declined. --Bramble-san 01:50, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe they could be Kits? then the size is all right.  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:49, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

What kind of kits? We already have kit blanks. How about ancients? Increase the size maybe...––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:27, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Stupid me, I didn't see Mosswhisker's reservation. >.< I changed them to sharpclaw blanks and got rid of the collars. Also, how do you make their size bigger without doing them over? Frankly, I have no idea... -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:40, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

Kitypet kits :) But they are Shatpclaws now  Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:19, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

We're only having one set of kit blanks as all kits look the same. My first reaction to these is that they look very scrawny, especially on the legs. Thicken them up a bit and give them some strong sharpclaw muscles! Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:05, October 1, 2009 (UTC)


I think the backs look too....... flat MorningleafFox CubWolf Pup 21:22, October 1, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Morningleaf, the backs need to be curved out some. Icethroat21 02:24, October 3, 2009 (UTC)


Redlined it for you [[File:Sharclawredline.PNG]], well green lined... Anyway, thicken the legs and curve the back.-- Darkhallows  My den 07:44, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

These have been up for more than a week. --Rainwhisker09 01:21, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Rains right, 9 days.Minnowclaw 12:13, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I know; my life is pretty hectic right now, and I won't be able to get on the computer much. Please don't decline these. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 15:18, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, guys, but I'm going to withdraw these. I tried to fix them up and I couldn't; I don't think my talents lie with making blanks. Lol. I'm just gonna stick to coloring in cats from now on. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:26, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Molepelt (MC) - Declined

[[File:Molepelt.png]]<br /> My first image. Criticism welcome. Also, I'm not going to be on much these days, so please do not decline this.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:53, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

I think the ear pink is to big, and maybe to dark fur?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 12:07, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

yES LIGHTEN THE FUR TO MAKE TO MAKE THE EYE STAND OUT (Oops caps)--Stonestar 14:37, September 13, 2009 (UTC)Stonestar

Lighten the herbs and perhaps make them more of a green colour - I'm not sure a medicine cats is likely to use withered plants... Lighten the fur a little and make sure to add a pupil and highlight into the eye. Look at some approved images for reference. The ineart is blurred and there is colour outside of it in places. When you've sorted that, then we'll talk shading. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 14:47, September 13, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? I tried adding the pupil, but I don't know if it's right.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 06:21, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
I think this is a lot more good, I can see the whiskers now :) I'm not sure but I think the eye colour sould be more big?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:43, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
Meaning?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:45, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

I've not done a medcat, so I'm not sure if the eye can be biger or not :/ but I mean I can't see the pupil but maybe if you did more colour in the eye you could make the pupil biger, (sorry I'm so bad at spelling)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 10:06, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

Ah, wait a bit.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:13, September 14, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Anything else? Sandy, how much shading is needed?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 10:41, September 14, 2009 (UTC)

perhaps make the eye colour brighter-- ☆Brackenstorm☆ X3 04:00, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Needs a highlight in the eye. Just put a white pixel on the left side of the pupil. --Rainwhisker09 20:59, October 7, 2009 (UTC) 12:14, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better?––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 13:47, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Blend the shading a lot more, and also, look at Brambleclaw's deputy charart, for example, to see how the eye needs to be done. Otherwise, it looks good. Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:20, September 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:35, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Thin the shading out a bit and make sure it extends all the way down his back. Also, can you use the dodge tool (um... the one that looks like a circle on a stick) to add a highlight to the top of the herbs. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:03, September 17, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. What else? Impatience is the new life,(lol) so how much time does it take for an average image to be approved? I've uploaded this around 10 times. Do not take this statement very seriously.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:35, September 18, 2009 (UTC)

'Patience is a virtue' - I forget who said that. It takes as long as it takes. That's better but now to the same with the other shading on the chest and hindleg curve and then blend! blend! blend! Careful not to smudge the lineart. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 17:32, September 18, 2009 (UTC)


Lolz. Impatience is the new life is the punchline of an internet company.. Reuploaded. Did the same to the chest and the hind leg. ––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 07:13, September 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is good but move the hind leg curve shading closer to the leg.Minnowclaw 01:38, September 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:36, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

Go back and blur it.Minnowclaw 00:57, September 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 09:48, September 30, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, so sorry for not commenting Lightning (I'm a rubbish mentor at the moment - same goes for you Hawkey - I'll try and be around more). As for the image, there are just a few things that need sorting. Make the ear pink ore triagular and definitely a darker colour as he's a black cat and the ear pink shouldn't show up so much. Look at some approved black cats for reference (I'd reccomend Nightcloud, Whitethroat, oh there are loads now!) Then you need to work on the shading a bit more. It looks like you've used the smudge tool - try and make sure the consistency of the shading is the same all over and then blend the edges carefully towards the middle of the pelt a bit with the blur tool. Be careful again not to hit the lineart. One last little thig - the eye is very bright green, could you possibly find a slightly more leafy green? Something not so similar to the herbs perhaps. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:50, October 1, 2009 (UTC)
Reuploaded.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:56, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think you should blur the hind leg's shading more. --Rainwhisker09 20:59, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This hasn't been worked on in over a week. Please work on this soon or it will be declined. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:29, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, this hasn't been worked on in 12 days so I'm forced to decline it. Lightning: do as Rainwhisker said and blend the shading more. You also need to add some on the legs and between the front and rear legs (look at some approved warriors if you're stuck as to where to add shading). Make the ear pink more reddish and it should be ready. When you've updated this image please feel free to resubmit him. Will archive in 24 hours so this message has a chance to be read by you Lightning. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:24, October 18, 2009 (UTC)


[[File:Molepelt.png]] Well, I'm sorry everybody. I was in hospital, I was sick, and discharged just yesterday. So, here is Molepelt again.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:49, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

There's a couple of pixels on the face that should be dark-gray like the fur instead of green, and shading is too dark. It needs to have different colors along the way from the outside to the inside of the cat. Black, really dark gray, dark gray, fur color, and then blend, or something along those lines. Right now the shading is really messy, and too dark on the outside of the shading. Also, I hope you're feeling better now. We're glad to have you back. Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:41, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I know you've been sick, Graypaw, but I really can't allow this more than a week. Please try and work on it soon, or it will be declined in 24 hours. And if you know that you won't be able to update at least somewhat periodically, don't put the image up. --Bramble-san 04:21, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Sory, Bramble, but I can't work on this until Tuesday. If it can be kept until then, then that's alright. If not, then well...I'm okay to it being declined before that. Also, if it's kept, and I don't work on it, then decline it if you want to. No offense.––Σ ãliãs G.r.pawRR 11:06, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Perhaps you can try working with Sandy on your shading, and put him up for approval again when you have more time? For now, I'm going to have to decline this. --Bramble-san 23:08, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Pebblepaw (Ki) - Withdrawing

[[File:Pebblekit.png]] Comments/critisism? Hopefully this will turn out better than my cave-guard blanks... --Rainwhisker09 01:18, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Soo cute! I love it! But the shading needs to be blurred a little more, and it looks slightly dark HAWKFIRE98 22:33, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Alright. --Rainwhisker09 01:23, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened and shading is blurred. Any other comments? --Hallow's Eve09 23:07, October 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the pelt looks extremely unnatural, even for a mottled cat. It looks like a big huge swirl of lights or something. See Pebblepaw's apprentice pic for the idea of how he should look. GB57 17:33, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

Ok. And I did use Pebblepaw's apprentice pic as a reference. --Hallow's Eve09 02:08, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

I doesn't really look like it. It looks like you moved all of the darker gray up to the head, and put the lighter gray, light-swirls all over the rest of his body. GB57 15:07, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

Better? --Hallow's Eve09 22:16, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Actually, I've decided to withdraw this because I lost interest in this charart and I would rather do Screech right now. Plus, the Pebblepaw article already has a charart, and I just feel that I really don't want to keep working on this. So... I'm withdrawing it. --Hallow's Eve09 22:20, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Foxleap (W) -Withdrawn, not out yet

[[File:Foxleap.png]] Comments? --♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 22:01, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful! All I have to say is that there are some blurred sections on the tail. --Hallow's Eve09 22:39, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

REuploaded Fixed smears!!!--♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 00:44, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

We haven't seen Foxleap yet, we should probably wait until Fading Echos comes out to do a Foxleap image.-- Darkhallows  My den 16:28, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I'll withdraw then.--♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 20:53, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

It shows him as a warrior in the browse inside for The Fourth Apprentice. But dont worry Shadowheart, you only have to withdraw him for 4 weeks, then you can put him backc up. Mossflight 21:33, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Screech(To-be) - Declined

[[File:Screech(TB).png]]

Yup, Screech, Pebble' s brother ...Constructments?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 01:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Wow! Amazing! The only thing wrong is that between the hind legs, there's a gap that's colored in dark gray - it should probably be white, or transparent, like the background. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 12:24, October 19, 2009 (UTC).

Great job, Bracken! All I can see is what Echomist said, and that something happened to the lineart on the eye. Icethroat21Enter at risk 21:17, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Just one other thing - if you look on his page, is says that he has a black pelt. It might just be my computer, but this pic looks like a dark gray rather than black. Darken the pelt color a bit (I'd recommend using the burn tool, biggest size, and just running over the image once or twice to make it darker.) --EchomistTalk/Contribs 16:45, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

No your not wroung Echo. It does look gray.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:06, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Wait, I thought I had Screech reserved? --Hallow's Eve09 22:19, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

so, should I withdraw this?-- ☆Pebble☆ X3 02:00, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, as Blackclaw already was doing him and is getting ready to put the new version up. Keep up the good work though, the image is very nice. --Bramble-san 22:09, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail- Withdrawn

[[File:Fallowtail.png]] Wasn't home for a few days.-- Darkhallows  My den 10:49, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Beutiful Darky!Minnowclaw 14:06, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

I agree, she's wonderful! But, there seems to be a couple light colored pixels on her far cheek and the nose needs to be pink. Also, the ear pink seems to be more circular than triangular. Fix these, and she might be approved! --Hawktalon 19:35, October 12, 2009 (UTC)

Fix'd.-- Darkhallows  My den 12:49, October 13, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The eyes look... strange. Look at some of the approved queen's eyes. Then she should be good. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:34, October 16, 2009 (UTC)


It seems silly, seeing as I just fixed her eyes, but I think I'm going to withdraw her for now. I'm just not fond of the image. -shrug---Darkhallows 18:53, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Shame Shady =( I really like it. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 20:04, October 23, 2009 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks

[[File:Blank1_KLF.PNG]][[File:Blank1_KLM.PNG]][[File:Blank1_KSF.PNG]][[File:Blank1_KSM.PNG]]

I got bored and made these. I figured that there were reserves on most blanks, so I'm just offering these up to use for whatever. If there's an extra blank needed for something, and whatnot. I'd like to see what everyone thinks they should be, because I've got no idea. Suggestions on editing welcome. ;3 --Sandiwolf 02:46, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

do we have To-Be blanks? or something? they should have whiskers :) and maybe a line going in from the nick? I'm newsh so...  Brambleclaw14 Talk 04:48, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

And I think the eye is a bit big, maybe the cat is to big as well?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 08:27, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think that the only blanks that aren't reserved by anyone are softpaw blanks. Icethroat21 16:36, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Add some fur to the cat, or else it looks flat. --PandasongPanda-Love 16:40, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I think Minnowclaw has the soft-paw blanks reserved. Maybe they could be kit-mothers?

Oh and yes they need whiskers. --Rainwhisker09 21:14, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, I forgot that Minnowclaw had the softpaw's reserved. But these look too small to be kit-mothers. They look more like young cats. I don't think there are any other blanks that aren'y reserved besides the kit-mothers, though... Icethroat21 22:29, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

I can add whiskers to them. If there's nothing you can do with them now, you could use them for something later. More cats might show up in the future series.--Sandiwolf 19:42, October 5, 2009 (UTC)

Sandiwolf, this can't just be Use for whatever blanks. You need to chose something or take them down. What about sharp claws?Minnowclaw 22:59, October 6, 2009 (UTC)

Or cave-guards, unless someone else reserved them already? I could check if someone reserved the sharpclaw blanks right now. --Rainwhisker09 01:31, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

Shoot, sorry. There is already something up for that.Minnowclaw 22:49, October 7, 2009 (UTC)

I saw no rules against it, Minnowclaw. Correct me if I am wrong. But, I can take them down if there is no use for them. --Sandiwolf 17:08, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

No, your not wrong. There is no rule agianst it in my mind, but think about it, if it gets approved and we don't have anything for them, what do we do?Minnowclaw 12:10, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Echo has the sharpclaws up, and Ice said they're too small to be kit-mothers, and the only thing left is cave-guards, which I'm not sure someone had reserved. --Hallow's Eve09 17:44, October 10, 2009 (UTC)

Well there is a point in time I'm sure that we all will be looking for a time to maybe to improve some of our blanks. Maybe you can start looking ahead in that...-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 19:00, October 17, 2009 (UTC)

I withdrew my sharpclaws... these could be sharpclaws, if you want. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 13:34, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

On the shorthaired versions, the lineart behind the ear doesn't connect. Its too straight. These would look good as sharpclaws, though.--♥Shadowedheart♥ 19:49, October 18, 2009 (UTC)

They look like they've been lifted up from the front, if you know what I mean... maybe make the front legs longer, so that they touch the ground. -- Echomist Hear the Echo... 00:26, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

They look very dog-like. Try making them a bit more delicate: smaller paws, less pointy muzzle and you need to sort the tails so they look more feline too. If these are going to be sharpclaws you need to replace 'Use-for-whatever blanks' with 'sharpclaw blanks' Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:08, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on these soon or they will be declined. --Bramble-san 23:20, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble-san 01:39, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Leopardstar - Withdrawn

[[File:Leopardstar_Le.png]]I'm honestly not sure whether this image looks good or horrible. *gulps* Comments? --EchomistTalkContribs 22:56, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

She needs tabby stripes. Ashshadow 00:00, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean; she's a spotted tabby, look at her description. --EchomistTalkContribs 00:17, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I thought they still had some form of stripe. Ashshadow 00:30, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I just basically made her the way she looks on the Code of the Clans cover. Should I change the spots to tabby stripes? --EchomistTalkContribs 00:33, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

No. I thought spotted tabbies had stripes and spots. Don't mind me if they don't. Ashshadow 00:37, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Her fur is too bright...darken it some.-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 01:13, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

~Reuploaded.~ Darkened fur. --EchomistTalkContribs 12:47, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

She doesn't really look like a spotted tabby. [1]They have stripes on the heads, tails and legs. --Darkhallows 17:08, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to withdraw this. I'm really not that fond of the image. Maybe I'll make some changes and put it up later. --EchomistTalkContribs 21:58, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Lizardfang - Withdrawn

[[File:Lizardfang.png]] What do you think? My second tabby elder in a row! Do I have the tabby stripes right?--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 22:12, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are good, but the image looks more golden than light brown. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 03:00, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Better? Also, like my new sig?--♥Halloweenclaw 20:44, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

It looks more golden-brown now than light brown. A good example of light brown would be Leafpool's med cat charart. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:32, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Better?--♥Halloweenclaw 00:13, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Minnow, but I think all you're doing is darkening the gold until it becomes brown, but it's not working. Besides, when you do get there, it'll be dark brown, not light brown. I don't know of any other way to fix a color except for redoing the image. Sorry, Minnowclaw. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:37, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try to fix it, but give me a day or two.--♥Halloweenclaw 01:17, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

I don't love her and I'm going to focus on leopardstar. Withdrawn--♥Halloweenclaw 22:10, October 30, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry to hear that. I loved the image. I put in "Withdrawn" for you at the top in replacement of "for approval" for you. I hope that's okay. (am I aloud to do that?) --Icethroat21Enter at risk 01:26, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

O ya, thanks, I forgot to put it up. I'll redo this when my leopardstar is approved.--♥Halloweenclaw 01:38, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Cora (R) - Widthdrawn

[[File:Cora.rouge.png]] Here she is? Comments?  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 01:57, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

This is very nice, Hawkfire! Although, you could thicken and darken the shading; I can barely see it. Also, the ear pink is much too bright for a black cat and could be blurred some more. It looks great, otherwise! --HawktalonTalk 19:49, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

This has been up for more than a week, please work on this or it will be taken down.--♥Halloweenclaw 20:55, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

I don't have time to work on this. Withdrawing.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 21:41, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that Hawky.--♥Halloweenclaw 21:49, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

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