Contents 1 Weedwhisker - Withdrawn 2 Tadpole (Ki) - Withdrawn 3 Birchstar (SC) (L) - Withdrawn 4 Bone - Declined 5 Marshscar-Declined 6 Cloversplash - Declined 7 Moonflower(W)- Declined 8 Cave gaurd blanks- withdrawn by owner 9 Ivystar - Declined 10 Foxheart (D): Withdrawn 11 Tigerstar (L) - Declined 12 Mist Where Sunlight Shimmers - Withdrawing 13 Stonepelt (E)- Declined 14 Whiskerpaw (A) - Withdrawn 15 Violet - Declined

Weedwhisker - Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Weedwhisker.png]]

.Mossflight 20:40, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, but try to make the dots more irregular and different shapes and sizes.--Minnowclaw ^{Enter at own risk...} 21:40, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Im withdrawing until I'm done being grounded. Mossflight 23:07, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

That’s a good reason. :) Archiving. --Bramble-san 23:14, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

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[[File:Weedwhisker_(e).png]]...--<big>*Minnowclaw*</big> 02:00, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Way better than mine by a long shot. Just blend the shading on the thigh and he will be good. Mossflight 02:47, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

Better?--*Minnowclaw* 02:55, November 18, 2009 (UTC)

the flecks look a little....weird, if you know what i mean. i'm sure Weedwhisker is hard, it's the 2nd already, huh? Maybe just make them like Ferncloud's spots.--Honeyrose34 01:00, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

I acually really like the spots. I would put like, I don't know, one or two more on his head or face, it looks a little blank up there. And then I would put a few on his back, like half-showing, so we know they're up there(Sorry if that doesn't make sense)--Nightfall101 22:06, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawn--*Minnowclaw* 00:59, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki) - Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Tadpole1.kit.png]]= Well, here it is. Mossflight 21:49, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

So cute! Just darken the shading a little, and maybe make the nose a bit duller; right now it's bright pink. --♫Echomist^{Talk/Contribs} 22:37, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink our left is good, but make the right one the same color.--Minnowclaw ^{Enter at own risk...} 22:05, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

Darkened Shading, fixed ear pink. Mossflight 19:35, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The nose pink is too bright right now. Try dulling it down a bit.--Minnowclaw ^{Enter at own risk...} 01:47, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

Fixed. Mossflight 21:28, October 27, 2009 (UTC)

The only problem I can see is that the shading is barely visible, especially along the left of the image, the legs and the neck. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 16:30, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. See my Weedwhisker for the reason. Mossflight 23:09, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Birchstar (SC) (L) - Withdrawn Edit

[[Image:Birchstar(SC).png]] I attempted the shading style Quiet used on Dawnstar but not nearly to the sae quality, partly because of my lesser artistic skills and partly I think to the colour of the cat. Anyway, I'm working alphabetically down a list so here's Birchstar the third or w/e. Constructments? Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 19:53, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I don't see the shading hardly at all on my computer. Although I don't see shading on hardly any of the cats on here so it could just be my monitor. Also I'd make the spots a little more random, right now they look like a polka-dot pattern. :) Looks great otherwise! Goldencloud 20:01, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

two Edit conflict (looks at Goldencloud XD) I can't see a lot of shading. welcome back Goldencloud :) not that I know you :)  Brambleclaw14 ^Talk 20:04, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I can see the shading, the color's just too similar to the base color (so just darken the shading, in other words). Also, the link in the title of this section didn't go anywere (the "SC" had to have parenthases around them), so I fixed it up for you, if you don't mind:3. --Hawktalon^Talk 21:01, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

I can see the shading, but I have to look very closely. You need to darken it.--*Minnowclaw* 22:58, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I fixed the shading and randomised the 'flecks' or w/e you want to call them. Thank you Hawktalon =) OT: Wow... you need a nickname and so does Mosspath as I already have Hawkey and Moss as Hawkfire and Mosswhisker... hmm... Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 19:55, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Sandy (Can I call you Sandy) you can call me Mossy.--Mossy SC 20:02, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

lol cool =) Of course you can Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 20:41, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I can't really say as I haven't read Code of the Clans yet, but didn't we decide that there wasn't actually a description of her in there? That was why my Birchstar had to be declined. -- Dawnfeather  _talk! 21:46, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about that, but if not, can you add some highlights and blur the shading more?--*Minnowclaw* 22:06, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

You're right Dawn. Curse my poor memory i've made a list you see of all the cats needing charart and I'm just working down in alphabetical order. I trust the wiki pages too much for something anyone can edit; even with so many great users things seem to slip through. Withdrawing. I'll try and do something' with the image... If I do use it again then i'll sort the shading and add highlights Minnow - thanks x Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 22:24, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

That's a shame couse this is really good! T.T--Mossy SC 23:04, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Bone - Declined Edit

[[File:Bone.rogue.png]] He. Killed. Whitestorm. >=( Anyway, constructments? --Honeyfur^{Bob's Your Uncle!} 23:00, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

This is pretty good! I feel the same way about him. LOL. For the image, his stomach looks bare. Try giving him a small patch.--*Minnowclaw* 23:11, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

How dare he kill Whitey!!! T.T Anyways, do as Minnow says, and I can't really see the shading on the black patches...or is it just my eyes.--Mossy SC 23:53, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Happy to know we all love Whitestorm! =) But if anyone happens to not like him, I dare them to say so. *Hiss* Okay, awkward moment. Anyway, is this better? --Honeyfur^{Bob's Your Uncle!} 00:11, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now I see the shading, great job! Mossy SC 00:18, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I now that I said small patch, but can you make it a little bigger? 'Cause it still looks better. Also, I dare any of y'all to say that they like clawface. (Sorry about the y'all. My sister is watching Hannah Montanan.)--*Minnowclaw* 00:28, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

(lol) Eww Clawface! Yuck. Yeah, Minnowclaw says it all! --Mossy SC 00:30, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this, y'all? ;) --Honeyfur^{Bob's Your Uncle!} 00:32, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

lol. A bit bigger. Make it so that it goes above the leg line art.--*Minnowclaw* 22:02, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to say this but, Shimmerpool already reserved Bone. --Hawktalon^Talk 22:27, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Honeyfur, maybe you can talk to Shimerpool.--*Minnowclaw* 23:00, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

That's so weird; I checked all the reservations before I started him. I guess I must have missed Shimmerpool's. But it's okay; Shimmerpool can do him. =) --Honeyfur^{Bob's Your Uncle!} 23:58, November 3, 2009 (UTC)

Pity, because this is really good. If there's any other black-and-white rogues you can find, feel free to resubmit as another character. --Bramble-san 04:17, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Marshscar-Declined Edit

[[File:Marshscar FULL.png]]My first cat, comments?--AutumnSky 01:47, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

The background needs to be transparent, there need to be a few more scars, the ear pink needs to be more in the ear, the shading needs blurred, the ear pink will also need to be blurred, and the eye needs colored in. Also, the battle scars that you have right now are too bright, and need to be blurred thoroughly. And there is lineart missing in some places, and extra lineart was added in some other parts. The shading also needs to be thickened and darkened. And since his page doesn't say what color his eye is, sometimes you just have to guess. For Marshscar...I'd say give him amber eyes, since his name is Marshscar. Good job for your first charart! --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 02:56, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

Icethroat covered it all, except the bg is gray. I have a guide to simple charart on my page if you need help.--Darkhallows 03:43, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

I changed the bg to white for you, AutumnSky (unless you would prefer to be called something else). Hallow's Eve⁰⁹ 00:51, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

Autumnsky, this hasn't been worked on in a week, please work on it or it will have to be declined.--*Minnowclaw* 01:46, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.--*Minnowclaw* 01:22, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Cloversplash - Declined Edit

[[File:Cloversplash.png]] While going through the code of the clans cats, trying to find one which had a description. (hey, about that, if you find a cat who doesn't have a description (say, Hayberry or Greenflower) what do we do? Make one up in consideration to what is most likely? (Hayberry - ginger, and Greenflower - green eyes)????) So I made Cloversplash. Constructments? -- Dawnfeather  _talk! 12:11, October 28, 2009 (UTC)

It says that she has a white spot on her nose. Could you maybe move it down a little, or is it too hard?--Minnowclaw ^{Enter at own risk...} 01:48, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please work on this Dawnfeather.--*Minnowclaw* 01:47, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Please resubmit this soon.--*Minnowclaw* 01:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Moonflower(W)- Declined Edit

[[File:Moonflowerwarrior2.png]] I did her as long haired because I didn't know if she was short haired or long. but I guessed cause stormtail is short. So where does bluestars long fur come from? anyway Contructments =)--Darkmoon25 15:51, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry Darkmoon, but new members are only allowed one image at a time until their first one gets approved.--Ashstar ^{My Clan} 17:15, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Ashshadow is right. You need to concentrate on getting Whitewing approved and then you can resubmit this. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 21:28, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Archiving. (Again, if I'm not supposed to archive images, tell me.) --Rainwhisker⁰⁹ 02:30, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

You can but only 15 to a page please as now I have to move them over. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 19:50, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

Cave gaurd blanks- withdrawn by owner Edit

[[File:CavegaurdMaShort.png]][[File:CavegaurdFeShort.png]][[File:CavegaurdMaLong.png]][[File:CavegaurdFeLong.png]] Comments? My 1st blanks!--♥Shadowedheart♥ 00:50, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Double all of the line art and make the ears less pointy.--*Minnowclaw* 01:18, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

These are a good start. Make the ear closest to us much smaller though so it's in proporton and some of the joints looks a bit cartoony... such as the shoulder. Try and make it look as realistic as possible. Also, the tails are not quite right. Try and make them more realistic too. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 19:56, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded and redid Ugh, I hope these are better!--♥Shadowedheart♥ 22:03, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

The forepaws look kind of weird, try changing them to look like our approved blank's paws. --Rainwhisker⁰⁹ 22:14, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

Thicken the lines a bit so that they're more like the other blanks.--Mosspath of Skyclan 22:17, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

There should be a curve on the hind leg where the heel is. Right now, it's too flat. --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 21:47, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened and thickened lines, also rounded feet more.--Shadowedheart 21:48, November 4, 2009 (UTC)

Should they be bigger?  Brambleclaw14 ^Talk 12:46, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Maybe make their tails thicker on the shorthaired? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:32, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Dont delete these if I don't respond. School EATS everything...--Shadowedheart 11:53, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry! I can't get to these because of school, so I'm going to keep them on reserve 'till I can, but for now I'll stick to charcats.Shadowedheart 23:50, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

Ivystar - Declined Edit

[[File:Ivystar.png]] Comments? She had no description besides a she-cat, so I gave her one.--Shadowedheart 12:11, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good Shadow (is it alright if I call you that?), but I don't think we're doing cats without descriptions yet. --Hawktalon^Talk 13:36, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Cats with no description have no description. Thus we shall not give her one. The noimage sign is better than a made up image of the cat. --Bramble-san 17:11, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Ok! I understand. Thanks! :) Oh, and Shadow is fine.--Shadowedheart 22:34, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Foxheart (D): Withdrawn Edit

This is Foxheart, one of Raggedstar's deputies. She had no eye color on her description, so I gave her amber eyes:

[[File:Foxheart.png]]

--Bluestar1776 18:44, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a lot, and put some of the shading in the scruff on the chest, right now there isn't any.--Mossy SC 21:43, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Also, I don't see any highlights--Nightfall101 22:01, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Okie doke, I officially CANNOT do highlights. They just look like big blobs of lightness. I will leave Foxheart to someone else. --Bluestar1776 22:04, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Bluestar, this doesn't have to be withdrawn. Highlights aren't mandatory, you don't have to do them. So keep this up, just work on the shading. Mossflight 23:07, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerstar (L) - Declined Edit

Ok, I HATE Tigerstar, but I'm actually pretty proud of this image:

[[File:Tigerstar.png]]

Comments?

--Bluestar1776 19:12, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Tigerstar has alrady been reserved by Shigura. And, as I said before, until your Foxheart has been approved, you can only have one image up for approval because you are new to PCA (see the "Please Note" notice at the top of this page). -- Hawktalon^Talk 19:28, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, Mr. Expert Dude, what I'D like to know is how I'M supposed to know who has what reserved. Cause I've looked for a list. Before I made Tigerstar, I LOOKED. Nothing! So I made it. And furthermore, I don't understand all this reserving crap. Does it really matter who makes it as long as it looks good? So big deal if you don't get to make Tigerstar. At least he has an image! --Bluestar1776 19:32, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Only 2 things wrong with that picture. 1: the slit is on the wrong ear. 2: I can't see Tigerstars tabby stripes Otherwise the shading and color is very good.

As Hawktalon said you are only allowed one image up. as for the reservations they are on the project page. If you come in through the menu that will be the page you first come to. It dosen't matter who makes the image but thats why we reserve them, so we know who's doing what. Maybe you should talk to your mentor about this.--Ashshadow ^{My Clan} 20:54, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Comments before approval??? --Nightwhisker98 21:03, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

sorry siggie screwed up

--Nightwhisker98 21:05, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

GRRRRRRR

Nightwhisker98 21:25, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

You can't approve images Nightwhisker. Only SR. warriors/deputy/leader can. Plus, this image was reserved by someone else. I think it should be declined or something. --Mossy SC 21:33, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Stop! Nightwhisker, as Mossy said, only seniro warriors, Sandy, and myself have the power to set the 24 hours. Please stop leaving your picture every time you sign. Ashie and Hawktalon; we prefer to call them current projects; they're not reservations, the longest they can be kept up is two weeks (am working on that) Bluestar; the reason for them is to prevent mass chaos from the large amount of users doing the same image and then fighting over which one should be approved and who's is who's and so forth. And there was no call for you to be rude. Both users were trying to help you, and that's no reason to lose your temper. Go here and scroll down to find the list of current projects. You can add your own, as well (max of 3) --Bramble-san 21:51, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Mist Where Sunlight Shimmers - Withdrawing Edit

[[File:MistWhereSunlightShimmers.PH.png]] I'm not proud of this image. At all. I couldn't get the mud streaks to work. Suggestions? --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 22:45, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Well she's good but isn't she only a light grayshe-cat without the mud streaks?★Hiddensun^Talk 23:16, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

I thought all Tribe cats had mud streaks, do they not? --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 00:02, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

well i don't know if they're suppose to have them on teh chararts.I'm not sure.★Hiddensun^Talk 01:08, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

On the others they have them. (ex. Wing Shadow over Water and Storm Clouds at Dusk.) --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 01:48, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

ok then sorry-nevermind. She's great!!★Hiddensun^Talk 01:54, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

maybe make the mud streaks thicker-- ☆Pebble☆ ^X3 05:29, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I thickened the mud streaks on the highlights, I figured that they had shrunk in size because of the highlights. Better? --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 15:35, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

maybe make them even thicker(try size 5 or 9).....or just make them ...longer, it makes it seem less like stripes, and maybe make them even more ...messy-- ☆Pebble☆ ^X3 16:08, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any Better? --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 18:42, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

To me, the mud streaks look like they're part of the cat's fur.--Shaf Girl 19:53, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

How would I fix that? --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 20:26, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

...try smudging it so it doesn't look like they're stripes. That's all the advice I can give you. --Rainwhisker⁰⁹ 02:41, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. When I tried smudging it, there was hardly any gray left in the pelt. So I tried blurring it a lot more, but now it's blurred to the ultimate max, and still doesn't look any better... --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 03:22, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I think the problem might be that the streaks are too regular. Try making them more of a random pattern (eg. different lengths and maybe one slightly thicker, make them start and end in different places...) maybe. I'll try and do an example on a clean blank to illustrate my point as I don't think I've said it very well. [[Image:mudstreaks.png]] Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 18:21, November 8, 2009 (UTC) Okay, so my image is just a little rubbish but you get the idea. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 18:28, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm not sure if this looks any better or not... --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 18:48, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

Pretty good, but I think it would help if the paws weren't solid brown. It makes them look like their fur color is that way, not muddy. Put a little streak on them, but not the full paw. --Bramble-san 17:23, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not sure if this looks any better or not... --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 23:22, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. If anyone wants to use this, they can. Tribe cats aren't for me, I'll stick to cats with just two colors, one color, or tabbies for now. Tribe cats aren't where my abilites lay at the moment, I'll try another one some time once I get better and more comfortable with tabbies. Sorry, --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 22:59, November 13, 2009 (UTC)

Archiving. --Rainwhisker⁰⁹ 01:58, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Stonepelt (E)- Declined Edit

[[File:Stonepeltelder.png]] My first tabby! the scar was hard. but other than that i am confident he will work out. Plz do not remove because i am now a member and allowed 2 images. Construcments? Darkmoon25

Yes, you are a member now, but your first image still hasn't been approved yet. Also, there are already 35 images up for approval on the page, at the top in the green box that says "Please Note" it will say that the limit is 35. But for the image itself, the scar and the ear pink need lightened, and the pupil needs to be white, not the same color as the rest of the eye. --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 18:06, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes, make the pupil white, and make the ear pink/scar more of a pale pink. --Bluestar1776 19:01, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I'm really sorry Darkmoon, but we have rules for a reason and it isn't really fair to let you bend them by having two images up before your first is approved whilst other new members are restricted to one. For that reason I'm forced to decline this, but take on board the comments you've been given and please resubit this when Whitewing is approved. Sorry. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 21:46, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Whiskerpaw (A) - Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Whiskerpaw.jpg]] Here's Whiskerpaw. My 1st cat! I know, i didn't do shading, but you can tell me how. Anyway, other comments? -- Honeyrose34 00:10, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

It looks like a lot of lineart is missing. Aside from the lineart, here's how you do shading: Get the burn tool at about 50%, change the brush size to about 5 or 7, and run it along the lineart. Then, get the blur tool, and blur that into the pelt. Then, you can add highlights if you want.

Also, the ear pink needs blurred, and the entire image looks pixely, try saving the image as png next time. To replace the lineart, you'll have to ask Bramble, I'm not good at that. Sorry. --Icy-chan 01:19, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

What I do to replace the line art is to take the base again and make the inside transparent, copy it on to the image you have and make it right over the missing line art. Also, the eye needs a pupil.--*Minnowclaw* 01:31, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I did the backround by hand so that's why the lines are missing. I didn't know how to do it else wise so i just did the best i could. Minnowclaw, i don't know what you mean, maybe it would be easier if i could maybe redo it. i don't think i could easily fix the lines. if maybe you could decline this or something 'cause i can't really add on to this easily. i know that was stupid of me not to ask you guys.sorry!!! --Honeyrose34 00:18, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

I could fix the lineart if you want.--Ashshadow^{My Clan} 00:21, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

If you could do that for me Ashshadow, it would be the greatest thing in the world right now. But if you're going to do such a thing, just do Whiskerpaw yourself, i have another cat i'm working on to replace Whiskerpaw when he's approved, so you can have him if you want. i got a lot on my hands right now. i could never fix the line art good enough, i'm been trying for while, i'll just decline this myself so i can get rid of it for you. if you don't want him, tell me by tommorrow, i'll decline this then. --Honeyrose34 00:57, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Next time you do a charart, you can use the paint bucket to make the background all-white--Nightfall101 00:58, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

I'm declining this myself because i let Ashshadow take him. Also, Nightfall, i tried the paint bucket, it didn't work very good. I'll be reserving anoyher cat today in place of Whiskerpaw. Sorry about my poor work on him!! --Honeyrose34 01:09, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Instead of declining it yourself, you just change the top from "for approval" to "withdrawn" or "withdrawing". I changed it for you, hope you don't mind. --Icy-chan 01:39, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Nope, don't mind, i'll reserve another cat now. --Honeyrose34 23:30, November 19, 2009 (UTC)

Violet - Declined Edit

[[File:Violet.png]]Wow...I haven't done a real charart in like, forever and a day. I do apologize for my inactivity - with WCWiki, my stories, charart requests, and school for me to worry about, I haven't had much time for the PCA. Anyway, here's Violet as a BloodClan cat. Sparrowsong 21:47, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Darken the shading some. --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 23:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

This is great! Just a couple of things:

• The ear pink should be more pink instead of the purpley (is that a word?) color you have.
• Blur the stripes more.
• Color the nose a pinkish color.

--Rainwhisker⁰⁹ 02:39, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

I know it's only been a week, but this hasn't been worked on in a while... --Icethroat21^{Enter at risk} 00:17, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

You're right Icethroat. Normally I'd say to give it some leeway beacause everyone's been busy lately, but the page has reached its capacity so I'm going to have to say, Sparrowsong, please work on this or it will have to be declined. Sorry. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 16:11, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

Whoops, sorry! I'll get on it tomorrow, I promise. Sparrowsong 04:48, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

I'm really sorry Sparrowsong, but this has been up to long with no improvement. Please feel free to work on her and resubmit when you have the time to dedicate to the image. Sandy^{~Dragonkit's Forest} 18:07, November 20, 2009 (UTC)