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Pebbleheart - withdrawn


I know this breaks the image number, but there are some that are getting approved, so... yeah. But I will say that I am not very fond of my work on this image (Except the ear and herbs, :D). Mossflight 06:22, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The background is showing up gray. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:48, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

It looks very good, I can't see anything wrong with the Shadding. Just made the fur a little bit darker. Holly!

Looks great! But I think that the ear pink should be more dull, as it looks very bright right now. --Rainwhisker09 23:01, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Nice =) Blur the tabby stripes slightly though; they look like they're painted on. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 19:46, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing tis. I want to focus on my Briarpaw more, and I want to learn how to do better highlights. ChristmasforChelseaFC 00:20, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Aw, I really liked this image. :( Archiving. --EchomistTalkContribs 00:38, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Birdy - Declined

[[File:Birdy.png]] Yep, I finally did her. Constructive criticism is welcome, and remember, if I don't respond right away, even for a week, DON'T remove. GB57 17:27, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - There are dark gray dots inside of the middle patch, and I can't see any shading. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:40, September 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink looks... circular. --Rainwhisker09 23:41, September 21, 2009 (UTC)

GB, I don’t know how much allowance I can give you… the image can’t just remain here while others are declined when they aren’t worked on in a week. It isn’t fair to others. I’ll give you two weeks at the most; after that I don’t think it can stay up any more if you haven’t worked on it. --Bramble-san 21:04, September 25, 2009 (UTC)

I agree: two weeks is fair because he can only get on every other week. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 18:04, September 26, 2009 (UTC)

Back. God, I hate life when it makes you busy. Anyway, I'll get on this before the weekend ends, but I have other stuff I need to catch up on, as well. GB57 15:01, October 3, 2009 (UTC)

Better? I blurred the darker spots in. GB57 15:45, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

Yes, that's better. The ear pink needs to be slightly less circular though (I know it's hard with the kits but make it a bit taller) and a less purpley colour. Then darken all the shading.Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 16:02, October 4, 2009 (UTC)

I forgot to do the ear pink. I'll get to it this weekend. Ugh, sorry I'm gone so often. And thanks to my dad's new stupid work schedule, it's going to get slightly worse. Grrr. GB57 02:45, October 16, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry to hear that, Grocery :(. On the image: it's great, but could you darken the eyes a bit? They are so light I can't really tell what color they are. Sparrowsong 00:29, October 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I've improved her. How is she? GB57 21:56, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Great! I don't see anything wrong :D. You did a pretty nice job. Sparrowsong 18:31, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink needs to be less circular and the shading needs to be darkened. --Hallow's Eve09 21:50, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Blackclaw. Also, maybe try blurring the stomach-patch just a tad more. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 23:48, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do the patch, but the ear pink has already been made less circular. GB57 15:23, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

The only thing I see wrong is that darker shading is needed. That's all. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:59, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry it's taking so long, guys, but I won't be able to get to this for another week. Believe me, I'll do this when I get the chance. GB57 03:23, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

Alright, re-uploaded. GB57 16:26, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

The white part of the pelt needs shading. Once you do that, this should be ready. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 16:33, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I suggest that you use burn highlights on 12(maybe) on the white parts of her body. Thats what I do and it works really well.--AshshadowMy Clan 23:01, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

This has been up since mid-September. This will seem unfair, but I feel that if the image can't be approved in two months, it should be taken down. I'll give you another week to get this approved, GB, but then I'm declining it. --Bramble-san 01:32, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Declined. --Bramble-san 02:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks - Declined

[[File:Kittypet_Blank_Long_Female.png]] [[File:Kittypet_Blank_Long_Male.png]][[File:Kittypet_Blank_Short_Female.png]] [[File:Kittypet_Blank_Short_Male.png]]

(M) - Not much to say about these. First blank I've made where you can see both sides of the face and such, and probably the last blank I'll do for a long time. Will make a colored version over the weekend. (Maybe.) Constructments? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:51, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

Very cute. But their bellies and legs look.. weird.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 23:44, October 21, 2009 (UTC)

A few things though...What i think could be improved[[File:Red_circle.png]] How I would do it..... [[File:REDline.png]] Feel free to remove this or disregard it if i'm wrong, but its lineart looks a bit odd only in this area. Summary of it: The arm has odd, unnecicary lines, the showing hind leg goes a bit up, or thick, the stomach area is oddly shaped, and the eye is a bit odd... But its fabulous in the rest.--♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 00:21, October 22, 2009 (UTC)

The hind leg looks a little disproportionate--AutumnSky 02:26, October 22, 2009 (UTC) [[File:Firestar.ex.png]] I made a example and changed up the lineart a little bit.  Ghostfire  Happy Halloween! 15:44, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Just to let everyone know, I'm still working on these. Please don't decline. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 23:18, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The arm showing looks either too thin or too long, and the showing hind looks to high or thick.♥Shadowedheart♥ 01:09, November 3, 2009 (UTC) I really wanna see these improved, so if you need help re-lining them, i made this. [[File:Kittypet_blankhelp.png]] And a colored version of my cat, speedy.The colored version looks terrible because i didnt shade it. Dont criticize it...[[File:Kittypet_Blank_Long_Malespeedy.png]]♥Shadowedheart♥ 22:03, October 26, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploded. What else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:44, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

This might sound weird... but the stomachs look like kangaroos in that they have a kind of pouch... I think it's the way the lineart seems to overlap. Also, there are a lot of little lines that are kind of unecessary and will make colouring difficult. Try and simplify them a little without losing too much important detail. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 23:01, October 31, 2009 (UTC)

I think it would be easier to add ear pink if the line in the ear that is closest to us was taken out, but thats just my opinion. --Spottedwing 02:36, November 1, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Well, now I'm sick. Nothing like H1N1 or anything, but my sinuses are all congested. D: Anyways, Snady could you be more specic on the lines that can be taken out and how they look like kangaroos? As for Spottedwing, I was wondering about that. While it makes blurring difficult, the leader blanks have the same kind of lines and they help define where to place the ear pink... what do you guys think? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:48, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with you, Moss. Since the leader blanks are like that as well...I personally like the ears as they are, it helps define them better, as you said. Also, I hope you feel better soon! --Icethroat21Enter at risk 00:51, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Jus forget my comment; they don't look like it anymore. I think my computer was being funny about showing image updates but it seems to be fixed now. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 10:24, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. I think Icethroat is right: keep the lines as it defines the ear shape more. There are some smaller lines such as on the chest that make the image hard to colour though as they get blurred when blurring shading. They also look very... rough so maybe you could try and simplify some of the busier areas of the blanks somewhat - they don't have to be complicated to look good (look at the warrior blanks) and the object is to make them easy to colour. Also, the paw that is lifted, the elbow looks floppy like it has no bone in it. The pose is great though =) These are the best kittypet blanks I think I've seen Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 21:32, November 8, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Fixed fur and got rid of the gray lines on the edges. As for the elbows, I'm not sure how to fix them; any ideas? Just make them pointer? Also, I'm afraid to mess with the fur due to the fact that it took me forever to get it right. Plus, the fur's like my loner blanks, so I'm trying to keep to that style. Anyways, what can I fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:22, November 9, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Moss, I'm not sure if I can call you tonight, so I'll comment here. On the long-haired's tails, the fur is pointing the wrong direction. It should be falling, but not pointed backwards. Definetely getting better, though. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:09, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Hey guys, I'm going to work on these tomorrow. *sweat drop* Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 00:26, November 17, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - Reuploaded. I fixed the fur on the tails. Wow, that was mousebrained of me... Anyways, what else do I need to fix? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 02:14, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

The elbow looks a little kinda flappy. Maybe stretch it out a little?--Nightfall101 02:35, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - I'm not sure about the elbow; as you can see from one of my reference kitties here the elbow's not very long or pointy. Any suggestions on how to fix this so the elbow doesn't look so flappy? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:22, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Aw the kitty looks just like Hawkey. :) And on the elbow, try adding a tuft of fur on the elbow. HawkfireTalk! 14:34, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

I hate to do this, but blanks really require a lot of work and effort that we need focused on our actual art for now. These are only fractions of the main characters; most are warriors. Kit-mothers, soft paws, and kittypets can wait for a while. Let’s hold off on blanks until we can get more art approved; I will post an announcement on the talk page. Bramble-san 02:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Kit-Mother Blanks ~ Declined

[[File:KitMotherBlankS.png]][[File:KitMotherBlankL.png]]<br> [[File:KitMotherBlankS3.png]][[File:KitMotherBlankL2.png]]

How do you like my suckish artwork? xD Gawd, I need a tablet... The example is better than the blanks: [[File:Example1.png]]<BR> Comment/Suggestios? (Suggestions OTHER than leaving the drawing to experts? xD)--MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:15, October 24, 2009 (UTC) IS SO CUTE! I love the way she's staring at you like "I'm not fat!" The only thing I could say is that the head looks, a bit small--♥Shade♥Meow/Prey 15:18, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Thank you! :) I'll make the head a little bit bigger. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:26, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Heads are bigger by a tad. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 15:44, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

it look a bit odd..what is she doing?  Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:52, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know if Apprentices are allowed to critique, and I love the blanks, but there are a few spots that look a bit... out of place. XD The paw near the Kit-Mother's head looks a bit flat, and the tails could be a smidge wider, but that's all I see. (: Shigura Mah Talk Page 21:53, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Shigura: Everyone's aloud to critique. That's part of the learning experience, being able to say what's wrong with a picture. :) Mumble: I agree with Shigura, the paw looks flat, and the tail could be a small bit wider. And also, the tail on the shorthair could maybe brought to the left a little bit, so the bottom of the lineart on the tail is at the same curve as the bottom lineart of the tail on the longhair, giving a curve that makes it more natural. Otherwise, great job, Mumble! Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:18, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

She looks good, but the muzzle is a little thick, that shouldn't be too hard, methinks. You put queen blanks up a while ago, right? You've really improved ^^.--Darkhallows 07:34, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

The neck looks fat.--Minnowclaw Enter at own risk... 12:46, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Darkhollows: Yes, I did. :) I think I tryed a freindly blanks war with melon! xD Thank you! ^-^
Bramble: She's laying down while looking at you. :P Yeah, not very well-thought-out position...
Everyone who offered suggestions: I'll do that. How would I make the paw look less flat? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 18:11, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make the paw more curved, like she's trying to swat the air? Shistar BOO! 18:14, October 25, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - The tip of the short haired looks pointy. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 11:42, October 29, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do all of those ASAP, but I'm unable to get on very often since school is eating up my free time. Please do not delete these. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 21:44, November 2, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - XP I meant their tails looked pointy. I guess I forgot to type tails! Oops. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 12:42, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

lol. I've REUPLOADED the originals, and also have modified and saved two without paws so we can see which is better. I'll do the rouder tails with the next editing section, as well as making a new colored in example. --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 00:35, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one without the paw better but, maybe you could change the position of the head a little.--Ashstar My Clan 03:10, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I like the one without the paw, but maybe make the neck a little thicker, especialy on the long haired one--Nightfall101 04:27, November 7, 2009 (UTC)

I personally like the one with the paw, because the one without the paw looks kind of weird, like the cat's paw was cut off or something. But that's just my opinion. --Rainwhisker09 23:57, November 10, 2009 (UTC)

kk. I sorta do too. Any other comments before I edit again? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 16:16, November 11, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - First, the forelegs are pointing different directions; fix that. Also, maybe you could make the long-haired's leg look furrier? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:12, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

I'll do the furry leg and non-pointy tail ASAP, but I don't know what you mean by the forlegs look like they're pointing in different dirrections. Can you please clarify? --MUMBLE785MAN-EATING KITTEHS! 20:36, November 15, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I have no idea how to do a diagram, but I'll ask Moss later. The longhaired's leg isn't reaching as far. Can anyone who sees it please do a diagram? Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:16, November 16, 2009 (UTC)

[[File: KitMotherBlanklong_haired_diagram.png]] [[File:KitMotherBlankS3_Diagram.png]]

I just circled where the leg didn't reach as far as the shorthair blank--Nightfall101 00:10, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

(M)- The tails look like they're being held in the air; I made an example for you. (On the example the tails are way too small compared to the body, but you get the picture.) Also, the faces look... I dunno, twisted. Maybe just try moving them around a bit.


Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 21:49, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, Mosswhisker's tail looks better--Nightfall101 22:56, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Declined; see reason in kittypet section. --Bramble-san 02:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Soft Paw Blanks- Declined

[[File:Softpawblanks.PNG]], I don't really like them xD.--Darkhallows 03:56, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

  • literally dies of awsomeness* WOW!--Shadowedheart 11:24, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Wow, these look great! Only one thing - the front paws look a bit... round. I know that they're supposed to be tucked in, but could you make a line inside the curve, just so that you can see where the paw is? (Sorry if that didn't make any sense - I can't explain it any better.) --EchomistTalkContribs 13:56, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - Love the pose! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 17:39, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

Thanks you guys. || Is the paw/leg any better?--Darkhallows 19:06, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

These are really good. The only thing is they each need their own file like the other blanks. --Ashstar My Clan 21:03, November 5, 2009 (UTC)

The paws still look odd and they look very skinny, try making them fatter.--*Minnowclaw* 01:17, November 6, 2009 (UTC)

(S) - I don't think they're that skinny. I mean, they're not kittypets! Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 18:26, November 12, 2009 (UTC)

These are good! But maybe you could show part of the tail-tip near the head (if you know what I mean)? --Rainwhisker09 01:57, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I exist! I don't think that they are too skinny. They are feral, after all. As for the paws? They are a little annoying to play with, so I changed the first one. Better? worse? And I would Blackclaw, but the tail would look way too long then.--Darkhallows 09:55, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like the other paws better. Perhaps give them a couple of claws or something, or make them slightly less rounded though. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 22:10, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

I like the other paws better, like the one on the male longhair (the one on the upper right hand corner). I don't know how you would fix this, but the paws on the shorthairs look the lineart is thicker or something. Try to make the paws on the shorthairs look more like the paws on the longhairs. Also, as said before, these all need their own file for each, not just one file for all four of them. --Icethroat21Enter at risk 22:34, November 14, 2009 (UTC)

Done. They have their own files, and I will switch it once the 24 hours starts. This is for simplicity of editing.--Darkhallows 11:51, November 21, 2009 (UTC)

I atually think these are ready. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:41, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

I don't know about these. They just don't look right to me. Their whole anatomy seems not right. Maybe they look better when colored. Would someone mind doing a colored sample? --Bramble-san 02:35, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

The shading and the image itself isn't very good, and I definitely did not color in the eye right, but here's an example of Dove's Wing: [[File:SoftpawTest.png]] --Icy-chan 03:09, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

They do look weird. I played with the longhaired female. Better, worse? It'd help if I knew exactaly what to change.--Darkhallows 04:13, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I tried to color one too, and it was very difficult--Nightfall101 07:46, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

-facepalm- Would you mind telling which part was hard? It's not much help just saying that is was. I only had trouble on V1's eyes [[File:Sfpex.png]]...

[[File:Softpaw_example.png]] I had no problem coloring and shading the cat. The only part that was troubling was the ears and the eyes, the others were fine. Oh and I colored the background because i had to erase the other 3 cats, and I was bored so I just decided to do the background. Mossflight 18:00, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

It was just the eyes and ears--Nightfall101 22:32, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

Fair point, Shady. :) Ya gotta tell someone how to make it better or nothing's fixed. Basically, it just looks like the cat is curved too far backwards and the tail and far hind leg look scrunched up and unnatural. It just doesn't look good. If you can, perhaps you can make the blanks more like this model: click (sorry, was the only thing I could find that moderately explained what I was talking about) --Bramble-san 23:15, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

The first one's eyes look diffrent (spelled wrong) from the others. :) Icestorm ♥ Leave me a meow! 01:29, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Declined; see reason in kittypet section. Bramble-san 02:36, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Daisyheart (D) - Declined


I think this actually might be one of my best images I've ever did. Now that I think I can do highlights normally now. So comments? ChelseaFC 06:47, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

It's beautiful! But, who reserved Daisyheart first, you or Honeyrose?--Nightfall101 07:27, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Sandwich, you can quite clearly see that Honeyrose has already posted Daisyheart and it goes against project etiquette to post the same character as another user. Do I really have to go through the history to see who reserved her first or can you remember? Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 11:57, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

I thought Honeyrose already had this. Warriors808 14:00, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

It is a very nice image, Sandwich. But Honeyrose had this long before you did; you only changed the CP section a while ago, whereas she'd had her image on the page for a while now. If you can find another orange and white deputy, please feel free to resubmit. Or if the other is declined, you can put the image up as Daisyheart. --Bramble-san 15:05, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Uggh, I didn't even know! of course decline this, she had hers first. I fell kinda stupid :(. ChelseaFC 17:57, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather(k)- Declined

[[File:Jayfeather(K).png]] Um, am I allowed to do this? But this is my first charcat. Jayfeather: a tough guy, kitten days. Fur all soft and lighter. Comments? FaithlarkTalk :) 22:15, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - This is great! Just see if you can blur the ear pink a bit more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 22:31, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Awsome! But maybe make the eyes a darker shade of blue--Nightfall101 22:36, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good but can you make him longhaired. His apprentice pic has long hair.--AshshadowMy Clan 22:49, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Remember, we have a Jayfeather image, please try to keep to no imaged cats. You can keep him up, though.--Darkhallows 23:39, November 22, 2009 (UTC)

Remember what Darky told you. Also, darken the pelt and don't darken the eye color, becasue he is blind and has light grayish eyes.--*Minnowclaw* 00:52, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

He looks like a silver tabby. Try darkening the pelt color. HawkfireTalk! 01:59, November 23, 2009 (UTC)

It think the color is fine, he doesn't look too silver.--Darkhallows 11:14, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. --Bramble-san 17:04, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Feel free to resubmit with changes. --Tinselclaw 22:11, November 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ivypaw (A)~withdrawn


I used the same tabby stripe style as her kit version, but I think they look... IDK--*Minnowclaw* 22:32, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

She looks amazing, but maybe do the tabby stripes bigger.HiddensunTalk 22:36, November 24, 2009 (UTC)

For the image, maybe make the amount of silver bigger so you have more room to make the tabby stripes bigger. But the current appearance for Ivypaw, as listed in TFA, is "white tabby she-cat", which would be a white cat with silver tabby stripes (I think). But as to which description you should use...I don't know. I think that should be Sandy or Bramble's decision. Lots of cats keep having apperance and gender changes almost every book (lol), so it's hard to keep track of descriptions, as well as which ones to use on the character pages. --Icy-chan 22:20, November 25, 2009 (UTC)

lol Minnow. The tabby stripes on the kit version are small because she's a kit - they would get bigger as she got older - theyre just 'y' shaped markings, old style. Description... hmm... My opinion is that you should use the current TFA description as that is where she is mentioned as an app. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:01, November 26, 2009 (UTC)

I'm starting agian, so give me a second.--*Minnowclaw* 02:03, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

ugggg...--*Minnowclaw* 02:15, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

She shouldn't be white with grey, that color doesn't really exist. Color her like the kit version.--Darkhallows 11:24, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

The image itself looks fine, but it doesn't really match Ivypaw's description and kit versison. She needs to be white with gray tabby patches. Look at her kit version here: Ivypaw (TC) --IRavenpawTalk

Widthdrawing. And I just wan't to say for darkey and bluestar. I had it like that before, but I was told to change it.

Archiving. --Icy-chan 02:09, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Stormfur (CG) - Withdrawn

[[File:Stormfur(CG).png]] he too dark?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 00:50, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Much too dark. Try doing more of a blue-gray, like Stonefur's fur. Also, no more than 35 images can be up at a time. This is number 36; please take it down and wait until another image has been approved, then you can put it back up. --IRavenpawTalk

No, don't to blue-gray. It clearly says he is dark gray like Graystripe. But I agree it's too dark--Nightfall101 02:36, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfal's right, keep it to a gray color, like Stormfur's apprentice image. It's not the fur color that's too dark, it's the shading. The shading is way too dark. Also, make the ear pink more of a reddish color rather than a pink color. --Icy-chan 03:45, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded -- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 16:32, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is far too bright. Run the burn tool over it a few times and blur it. Might want to make it smaller too. [[:) Mousetalon Call Me Mousey!!!]]

Some pixels of the tail- and leglineart seem to be blurred and there are some white pixels on the tails ground. The shadding looks great by the way. --Holly...leaf or berry?

The mudstreaks look really unnatural and the ear pink needs to be a slightly more reddish colour. Sandy~Dragonkit's Forest 12:38, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

can i withdraw this? i don't hink i'm that good at the mud streaks...I might work on him sometime when i'm better...-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 03:43, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

I suppose so, but this was really coming along well--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:50, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yup, you can. Don't worry, I can't get the mudstreaks to work either, I undestand where you're coming from. Archiving. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:20, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Screech of Angry Owl withdrawn by user

[[File:Screech_of_angry_owl-tobe-tribe_of_rushing_water.png]]This is my second Charcat that I have made.I know the ear pink is a little to messed up,I can't get it just right.Comments?Help?sugestions?--Firepelt 01:59, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Screech of Angry Owl already has a charart.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Awww!(hangs head and droops tail) Can this one still be approved,I worked hard on it even though the ear pink needs blended more.--Firepelt 02:04, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

Well, since I'm an apprentice and it's not up to me, I can't say whether it can be approved or not. I would think not, since Screech already has a picture, and we don't really have need for this. This is good though. However yes, the ear pink needs to be blurred and the shading needs to be blurred and darkened.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:14, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Firepelt. It's a good image, but we've really already done all the to'bes that need doing. Try working on a warrior. Sandy has made a whole list of cats that need charart. See her user page. But please take this down. Don't decline it, just delete. --Tinselclaw 02:16, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Whatever....thanks anyways(growls under breath)My computer wont let me fully color in the warrior fully,then for some reason,it blurs the whole edge when i didnt touch a button.I'm declinging it even though I dont have the authority. --Firepelt 02:20, December 6, 2009 (UTC)Firepelt

Then you can just say withdrawn. If the warrior doesn't work for you, you can try some of the other blanks. There's a lot of chararts needing done. Don't feel bad about this one. --Tinselclaw 02:30, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Star That Shines On Water (CG) Declined

[[File:Star_that_Shines_on_Water.PNG.png]] This is my first Charart. EPIC FAIL on my part... so... comments? --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 21:32, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

You're not supposed to change the size on the blank so the image is too big.Also the eye dosent look fully colored--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:36, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded, how's this? --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 21:45, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now it looks pixely and small. Make it bigger. Blur the shading and highlights and earpink. :) Jinglestorm ♥ Merry Purry Christmas! 21:48, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 22:08, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Now it just looks large,try re-doing this and the shading isn't blurred.Add highlights with the dodge tool. The shading looks un-even try smudging the shading toward the lineart with (Be careful not to hit it) with the smudge tool. Jinglestorm'Merry Purry Christmas ! 22:14, December 3, 2009 (UTC)

Also,add mud streaks :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:56, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Just start over like Icestorm said. The pixel needs to be its original size, or it won't work. --:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 19:12, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

let me guess you use MC paint well 1 tip don't make any picture you finished and saved big it will mess it up and question in general i thought Star was a nursing queen and she was silver not brown unless erin hunter said or as she appered it said a BROWN cat came i would get it! --Echopaw 22:48, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

I looked it up. She is brown but Echopaw is right she is a kit-mother. Sorry--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:03, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

it said on her page that she would return to her duties aas a CAVE GUARD once her kits were grown, so I made her in her cave guard form thingy... --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 01:17, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

But it said she died.Idk maybe her page is wrong--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 01:23, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

why not ad a nursing queen but if you don't want to that is fine and add mud blended on her fur --Echopaw 01:49, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, Star was the one that was taken and presumably eaten by Sharptooth. (I swear my heart broke in two when I read that part) She died as a kit-mother, so her blank should be a kit-mother--SNOWFALLLet it snow, let it snow! 03:45, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

Since Star was only a kit-mother in the short time we saw her, I'm declining. It was a nice first try; keep up the good work. --Tinselclaw 01:42, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Crag where eagles nest (CG) - Declined

[[File:Cragwhereeaglesnest3.png]] Contsructive critisism?--Evanphoto 18:20, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - He looks rather...bumpy. Try blurring him more. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:23, November 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Evanphoto 00:28, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

I think you accidentally erased part of the mouth line, and the eye needs a highlight. And blur the shading/highlights more. Good job! --Rainwhisker09 14:57, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Evanphoto 16:41, November 28, 2009 (UTC)

(M) - The spance in between the legs should be colored, and he needs mud streaks. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 19:12, November 29, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a while. Please update soon. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 00:54, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

The shading on his chest looks bumpy, try blurring it more.--Nightfall101 06:47, December 4, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, this hasn't been worked on it at least a week. I'd get to work on it if I were you--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:32, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Nightfall and Icestorm are both right. Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 04:33, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

This has been sat here for 8 days without work despite reminders on the 4th and 6th of december. Please feel free to resubmit when you have more time to work on this. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 11:15, December 6, 2009 (UTC)


[[File:Crowfeather-Windclan-kit.png]]This is crowfeather as a kit.Comments?Help?advice?critisium?--Firepelt 18:13, December 6, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

We never see crowfeather as a kit, Fire. He doesn't need a kit pixel. Try focusing on cats who don't have any images, please. --Tinselclaw 18:59, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

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