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hawkfrost (k) Declined

[[File:Hawkit.png]] this one is my frist charart so any comments? Iceyfang 21:27, December 23, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

This is not a current image, at the top of the page it says that we need to do current images.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:28, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Please do not delete sections from the page. This needs to be declined and archived. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:38, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Okay. For your next image you need to choose a cat that is not on someone else's current projects and who needs an image. Make sure to add shading (there are some tutorials on the project page under the 'mentorship guidelines. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:41, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Violet(lo)- Declined

[[File:Violet(lo).png]] oh no...am I exceeding the limit again*facepalm* sorry. how's violet? I'm using the Birchfall stripes again Constructments?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 05:57, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Well, it's very beautiful Bracken. But wouldn't Violet be considered a rogue? Her brother Snake has a rogue image, and Barley quit being a rogue when he left BloodClan to go live in the barn. But Violet never left with Barley. She became a kittypet. So, shouldn't she have a rogue blank, instead of a loner one?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:58, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I would think that Violet is a kittypet, but before she was a kittypet I think she was a rouge too.--Echoheart 12:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

The correct blank would be kittypet, since that's her current position, but since we don't have any kittypet blanks, the blank to make her image on would be rogue. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 14:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Are there any other loners this could be? Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:07, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I already reserved her as a rogue!Hawkfire gave it to me to post up when she left.It's on the main page that i reserved violet.I have already made her,and I am currently waiting for a spot to pu her in FirePelt 17:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

AGGH, it's spelled rogue! R-O-G-U-E, rogue. Rouge is some kind of make up from France. I'm sorry, but I do so hate that common mispelling. Anyway, I don't know of any other loners this could be, and if Fire has already been working on a rogue version, this should probably be taken down. Sorry, Bracken, it's a really good image, but I don't think it'll work unless you find a cat with a similar description and make some color tweakings. Tinselclaw 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

you can try to turn it gray. They're alot of gray tabbys.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:18, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Lol, Bramble! Bracken, if you decide to make this gray and keep this awesome image, you can go in pixlr, click on the sponge tool, go to desaturate and put it at 100%, and eventually it will turn the image to gray. You'd have to redo the ear pink and eye color, but it would save the shading and highlights. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:30, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Rouge is french for red.MaplefernHi!13:47, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

When will we get a final say on her?I'm waiting to put mine up.Thanks. FirePelt 22:03, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt. This will either become another grey loner or it will be declined. You can put up your rogue version but please wait until the page goes down to 35 images. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 22:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

icould change this into chrip-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 05:09, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

That would work, but Mosspath has him up for approval on this page already--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 06:48, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I guessI'd have to withdraw this then,,,-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 17:30, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

it is a beautiful image,Nice job.Hopefully,you can do something else with her. FirePelt 00:16, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

isn't she a yellow tabby?? but great!!--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 10:19, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Declined. Sorry, but this is taking up space. When you've decided what to do Bracken, you can resubmit or whatever. =( Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:33, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

So i can post up my violet now?sorry bracken! FirePelt 21:18, December 23, 2009 (UTC)


Husker (Lo) - Temporarily Declined

[[File:Husker.Lo.2.png]] I think this is my best image ever! --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 21:22, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Uh, some spots seem to have not shading, like the belly.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 23:19, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Mosspath is right. His belly needs shading, not his back. And if you want highlights, use the dodge tool and mark the shoulder and haunch. Blur too.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 03:19, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, the yellow fur on his head looks, weird. I don't own any of the Graystripe manga books, but I've read them in Barnes and Noble. I saw Huskar's picture, and the hay colored fur on his head isn't behind his ears. I know this might be difficult to do, but I would suggest drawing a little tuft of fur on his head, and color it in ginger. And delete the one behind the ears--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:36, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

The mangas are gray. Does it ever even say anywhere that the tuft of fur on his head is hay-colored? If it were me, it would make it a patch of either light or darker gray. --Tinselclaw 22:23, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

It does say on his page that he has hay colored fur on his head. --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 23:10, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

An official confirmation. Husker's article is not official. It is very likely that some person just thought hay-colored fur, and put it in. Many people put in false descriptions. Unless you find somewhere a colored official picture of Husker, or a confirmation from Victoria Holmes, then turn the head tuft dark or light gray. Tinselclaw 01:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 21:20, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Right now the shading is too dark and needs to be blurred more as well as the highlights.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:29, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded, how's this? ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 13:02, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Still, the highlights need to be blurred more. --PandastormPanda Love 14:23, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

How's this? If it still is not blurred enough, please show me how much to blur it, because pixlr.com won't let me blur them more. ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 14:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC) its a bit blurred...--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 06:47, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

You need to blur more. I'd advise you take out the highlights and just add more shading. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:05, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

A few things: 1) I can barely see the patch of gray, 2) The ear pink is too bright, make it more rosy, but less pink.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 20:02, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this, I got rid of the highlights, and added shading. Please don't get rid of this image! I will be going awqay on a trip for a week or two and won't have access to a computer. I promise, If there is something wrong with the image, I will fix it when I get back!!! Please don't take down this image! I like it! My best image ever! ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 18:42, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 21:55, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

I know you said not to take this down Nightwhisker, but we can't really have it sat on the page for two weeks without being touched. Therefore, I'm going to temporarily decline this and when you get back, just resubmit it. =) It's not because the image is bad, but because you won't be here. Sorry Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:46, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Hareflight(W) - Withdrawing

[[File:Hareflight(W).png]]

I know this is over the limit but there are more than 3 cats with "Comments before approval". Please take this out if it way over the limit . Comments?Hidden-jingle ♪ 16:30, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Should I withdraw this because I'm going to go on a small christmas vacation and I won't be able to go on teh computer this whole week. But when I come back I will put her back up again.Hidden-jingle ♪ 22:44, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Hidden, but it would be much better if you would withdraw this, that way it would make room for other images to be put up and then approved while you were gone. Thanks so much, and you can put it back up as soon as you get back. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 22:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Ice- Temporarily Withdrawing

[[File:Ice.rogue.png]] I know I'm exceeding the image limit, but I've been waiting a couple of days now for it to go down, and it hasn't. But since one image is in the "24-Hour-Stage" I thought it would be okay for me to post. Constructments? --AngelstarSilver Bells 17:07, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

This is great, just add some shading on the back on the rear leg and make the claws and teeth go in different directions and not all in one. It just makes it look a little better, if you don't want to do it, then it's fine.--Minnowclaw 17:53, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

It's no problem. =) I love doing Charart, so you can tell me to do whatever you want me to do to the image, and I won't mind. ;) --AngelstarSilver Bells 18:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Maybe blur the shading? Also do what Minnow says and I think this is ready. :) --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:33, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Add a highlight or move the shading back.--Minnowclaw 02:52, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry, guys; I'll work on him as soon as I can. The internet is down right now on my computer (I'm on my mom's laptop), so I can't work on him. =( But I'll work on him over the weekend; I'm pretty sure our internet will be fixed by then. --AngelstarSilver Bells 20:54, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I'm going to go ahead and withdraw this. My parents still haven't been able to fix the internet, so as soon as it starts working again, I'll re-post this. --AngelstarSilver Bells 16:18, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Okay Honey, thank you =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 17:31, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Oatwisker (E)- Declined

[[File:Lowbranch.png]]

what do you think? rainpelt 11:54, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Rainpelt, Lowbranch doesn't even have a description. We need to do cats with descriptions--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 19:45, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

look at the image summary. names are in a way, descriptions. Branch for one. and eyes often come from the mother. rainpelt 22:01, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

This is true but you still can't be sure.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:14, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainpelt, but without a known description we can't just give her an assumed one. Unless you can find another cat with a known description for this image, consider it declined. --Tinselclaw 22:31, December 15, 2009 (UTC)

made it into an elder using same colors. rainpelt 00:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is very bumpy and uneven, please even it out. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 00:21, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed that. rainpelt 00:37, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare in his eye is blue, it needs to be white--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 00:40, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOAGED added glare and ear pink. rainpelt 00:43, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

The glare has to be white Rain, right now it's gray--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:00, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

it is. rainpelt 01:03, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

For future reference, the "glare" is the highlight (that's what we call it) and it is white, Nightfall. Rain (is it ok if I call you that?), just add shading on the chest, in between the legs, and under the tail. --Rainwhisker09 01:16, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded. fixing other stuff as some guy in yougomaglaslafia speaks :p rainpelt 01:39, December 16, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. I see that now. When you look at my computer screen from a certain angle, it makes everything darker, and it looked gray then.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:48, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

You need to change the file name and his page says he is a tabby.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I have already reserved Oatwhisker,and I am almost ready to put him up for approval. FirePelt 21:11, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

this has been up for a while Firepelt and I think Rainpelt had him first.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:16, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh........Then I'll delete mine,the stripes are turning out horrible anyways.If you are going to have a cat for oatwhisker Rainpelt,Change the file name and add the tabby stripes. FirePelt 21:22, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I think he needs more stripes and they need to be blurred some more.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:36, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Ashshadow,needs more stripes and they need blurred,and PLEASE change the file name from Lowbranch to Oatwhisker. FirePelt 01:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

add mor tabby markings.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 10:17, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

PLEASE CHANGE THE FILE NAME FROM LOWBRANCH TO OATWHISKER. FirePelt 03:41, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Please do not shout FirePelt; it is bad etiquette. Rainpelt, please work on this or it will be declined. And yes, you do need to hange the file name. Just reupload under another name: perhaps Oatwhisker.elder.png or something similar that clearly outlines the purpose of the image. =) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:40, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I aasnt shouting.I didnt know caps lock was on. FirePelt 15:47, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

That is what the preview button is for ;) Declining due to lack of work. Sorry Rainpelt. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:18, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Half Moon (TB) - Temporarily Declined

well here she is!--Echopaw 21:03, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw, please put this as a full size image; it is hard to see. Also, this has too many images on it now. When some get approved, you may put this back up. --MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I really don't know how to do that this is meh first charrie!--Echopaw 22:02, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

On the project page click on the image before saving it. This isnt bad for your first charart either.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:05, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

[[File:FemaleShortToBe.png]] Here. Try re-doing it again. Also, approval is spelled wrong. I fixed the title for you. Also sign with the four tildes ~ like that but four and nothing else. :) --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:09, December 17, 2009 (UTC)


REUPLOADED okay here she is!

Okay, just a quick q...what program do you use? I don't see any shading/highlights, and if it's Paint, there are no tools to make shading/highlights.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 22:32, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

Pixlr.comEchopaw 22:34, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

I thought I had Half Moon Reserved?--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 00:37, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Ohh i didn't see:'C- Echopaw 01:35, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw had Half Moon on her list first, actually. You need to blur the shading, but other than that the image is well done. Tinselclaw 01:42, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here she is i blured the shadings!:) --[[User:Echopaw|<span style="font-family:Tempus Sans ITC; background:green; border:2px solid; -moz-border-raiuds: 1em; color:red;">:D Santapaw ♥</span>]][[User talk:Echopaw |<sup><span style="color:yellow">'Have a great Christmas!</span></sup>]] 03:52, December 18, 2009 (UTC)


good!!,but you need a siggie.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 09:14, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Me and my stupid siggy >:D --Echopaw 12:52, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw you dont need to upload a new version of the image each time. Also there are some gray spots in the background.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:43, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Okay i h8 saying reuploaded so here she is for the...4 time...IDK oh well any thing wrong with here? because this charrie being approved near christmas could be the best gift you could give(but charries and siggys would be nice but this would be better!) did i say to much? moving on is she okay!--Echopaw 17:09, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

Blur the shading again, mostly near the front right leg (her right) and there's some gray on the image, but I don't know if that's just my computer. If you don't mind, I can erase the gray spots for you. --Rainwhisker09 00:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I'm lazy but thank you blackclaw!':) I would not mind you doing that --Santaclaws is here! 15:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Half moon diagram.png]] Ok, the red's where the lineart's blurred, the blue is where the shading needs blurred, the yellow is where shading is needed and the green is where highlights are needed. Hope this helps! --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:56, December 20, 2009 (UTC)


I won't be doing it any time soon cause of christmas! :'(--HI 13:13, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

I'll probally start working back on heron new years eve sorry!--HI 13:09, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, I hope you don't mind, but I fixed those things for you. (: [[File:Half moon.png]] --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 23:29, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Uhh....could you please delete all o the pictures except for the one that you actually have up for approval? I can't tell which one is for approval, and also, please reupload onto the same image each time instead of having a new file each time. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:45, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

I just noticed you said you'd be back New Year's Eve so I'm going to decline this temporarily because it's taking up space. Sandy! 22:14, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Snapper(R)-Withdrawn by user

[[File:Snapper.png]] this is my frist charart what do you think? Iceyfang 00:40, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Iceyfang... Please do not delete sections. All you need to do is click "Edit" next to the sections name and add your message to the bottom. --Quiet!... 00:48, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i've got some things that you need to improve-


1. The image needs shading

2. The ear pink should only be on one ear, the one closest to us (His right)

3. The eye looks kinda creepy, add a pupil and eye white

5. His coloring doesn't look right. I don't think that cream or pink can be on a tortoiseshell. Look at, Redtail or Sorreltail for help on coloring

6. The patches of ginger look yellow, make them more orangish

7. All the patches of color need to be smudged into the pelt and then blurred

8. The scarrs look very strange, try making them more irregular, and a little farther a part

Okay, I'm done with my rambling--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:03, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded Iceyfang 01:26, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

comments before approval? Iceyfang 02:22, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Iceyfang you dont have the power to put that and he still dosent really look tortiseshell to me. his base pelt color needs to be black or dark brown and then add markings.It still needs shading and theres some kind of design on hes pelt--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 02:26, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Look at my tutorials for an example of tortoiseshell. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:29, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ash is right, only senior warriors, Bramble, or Sandy can approve pictures. And Ice has some very useful tutorials on her page. Plus, (I don't mean to sound rude) but the image itself is kinda freakin me out... I think it's the eye--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 02:47, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

i fixed the eyes Iceyfang 03:03, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

He still doesn't look like a tortoiseshell- not realistic at all. Cats do not have perfect circles or straight lines on their pelts.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 04:27, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

And Ash is right about the base color. It needs to be either black or dark brown--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 05:45, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Ash and Night,the fur base color needs to be black or dark brown.Also,I cant even see the scars.Look at Sorreltail for and example of a tortishell and white cat.The ear isn't even torn for him,like his description says. FirePelt 14:35, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

i reuploaded it so the scars and the ear should be better Iceyfang 14:53, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

You colored the thumbnail version. You should've colored the full size version: . Fix that first. --Rainwhisker09 15:40, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

It looked like when you made the picture, you painted it. You don't paint it. You use the pencil icon and choose the right size and just color it in that way. Hope that helps when you have to redo it on your new full-sized blank. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

how does this look? Iceyfang 16:17, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

I'm sorry icey,but the ear loks more like it has a odd circle.I cant see the mose,and the scars are a little to clear.Also,some of the lineart is blurred. FirePelt 16:33, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Icey, please do not delete this section. If you don't want to work on this, you can just withdraw it. (: This still needs to be archived, though, regardless. --Quiet!... 17:50, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

okay im going to withdraw this charart. Iceyfang 18:17, December 27, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Maybe next time icey. FirePelt 19:00, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Icicle - Declined

[[File:Icicle_Kit.png]] I know it needs work but I've stared at it so long I don't know what. ~Mistpelt~ 18:53, December 19, 2009 (UTC) i think its nice but i think you need to make the eyes brighter ~iceyfang

White chest is too bright. MaplefernHi!22:22, December 19, 2009 (UTC)

I know that she is a pale gray she-cat, but right no she looks white. Darken the whole thing a bit.--Minnowclaw 02:49, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined Sandy! 22:15, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Declined Sandy! 22:29, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Violet(R)-Withdrawn by user

[[File:Violet(R).png]]

Hawkfire gave me Violet to work on,improve,and fishish about 2 minutes before she eft.I did the shading,ect. and now Im putting her up for approval.Comments?Questions?help?critique? FirePelt 05:04, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

It's very good Fire! But, she looks very yellow. She's supposed to be orange, with thin darker orange stripes. I'm not sure if there's a way to change the color without starting over... oh, maybe you could try running the burn tool over her a couple of times? What do you guys think?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 08:45, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

A couple of times over with the saturate tool should do the trick, but remember to put her ear pink and eye olour back in. I also feel that the shading is too rigid and doesn't look like shadows at all - try thickening and blurring it (use the faded out burn tool to add shading and then blur) Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 10:23, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Kk.I'll work on it as soon as I come back from shopping,prob wont be able to work on it till about,4 o' clock,eastern standered time. FirePelt 18:52, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Also, since she was apart of BloodClan (was she? I don't have Cats of the Clans or whatever book it might have been comfirmed in) add claws and a BloodClan cats. --:D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:55, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

She as not part of bloodclan.She lived with barley in a park. FirePelt 01:41, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?The shding,im un-shure about.I did the best I can not to mess it up wth the saturate tool. FirePelt 02:28, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Try looking at the shading on other approved rogues or lighten it.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:19, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

She still looks yellow... I think you should try for the colour used on her Loner version (see declined art) Sandy! 22:16, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I'll try to,but the only problem is,that hawky gave me this with the color and stripes.I added the eyes,nose,feet,and shading,and if I do something to the color,the whole thing will mess up,but I'll do my best! FirePelt 23:53, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Fixed the shading,did all I could for the color.But I cant figure out how to make it orange with redoing it. FirePelt 00:05, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Run the burn tool over the entire image.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 04:30, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else?thanks mousetalon ! FirePelt 14:21, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

The color is better but the shading seems thick. tyr bluring it some more.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:16, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Anything else? FirePelt 22:31, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

The shading is a little off. It's supposed to be right on the lineart, but you've made it more towards the middle with a big space of normal coloring in between.--Shaf Girl 02:08, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded.I think i've fixed what your talking about. FirePelt 03:46, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I dunno.......there's still some spaces on the back that might need some work.--Shaf Girl 01:43, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Im gonna with draw this,since I got some kit mother blanks I would like to put up.maybe bracken can put his back up? FirePelt 03:51, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

kittypet blanks - Declined

hey i know i'm over page limit but idk if some are in 24 hour stage so ya but i'm saving half moon for awhile i may put her up VERY soon so what do you think!oh and if t you want to help me do on my talk page!;)--Echopaw 16:03, December 29, 2009 (UTC)[[File:Kittypet_blanks.jpg]]

There are already kittypet blanks up for approval.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 16:37, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Yes there are - You'll have to withdraw these I'm afraid as it goes against project etiquette to post the same image/blanks as another user already has. Sandy! 17:36, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Even though you will have to withdraw these, just a hint next time do not save them in the .jpg file extension as this makes them very pixely and no one would be able to color them. ;)-- Shim-ShimNewGladiator! 22:23, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Tadpole (K) -- Declined

[[File:Tadpole -2.png]] Hey, Tadpole's back! Since he still didn't have an image and Rainpelt's verson left, I thought i have a go at him. Comments? Hopefully, no concerns!! :) --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Maybe add some highlights,the lineart is a little hard to see.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 23:04, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

well, i was actually gonna post it again as i have become active here again, but i wont go ohez noez a lot, so no worries from me. i cant see shading, so make it darker, and add a bit more green to the eyes. [[user:rainpelt|rainpelt]] 01:31, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

I'm not seeing much eye color... --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 12:01, December 11, 2009 (UTC)

Um, Rainpelt, his eyes are supposed to be amber. Not green.--RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Reuploaded -- Don't know if the changes showed up... --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

his eyes gotta be hazel from what i see. hazel is a greenish brown rainpelt 00:16, December 12, 2009 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright, make it more of a deep red, and blur it a lot.--MossScrooge Bahumbug! 21:16, December 17, 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a while. Please update soon, or it'll have to be declined--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 07:38, December 18, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry. I've been busy with homework and stuff. BTW, how can i make hazel colored eyes when on pixlr, I can only do a single color. Help!! --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

What do you mean you can only do a single color? In pixlr, click on the color boxes, and you can change the colors with a lot of variety. (Does that make any sense?) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 15:16, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, it makes sense but I can't get like a hazel color, being that it's a tan+green color, and I don't think you can get that on pixlr. If I'm wrong, then I'm wasteing some space on here. Anyone know what I should do? --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

Just make it a brownish color with green in it if possible. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 00:51, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Fixed it. Don't know if it's too green. --RoseyHappy Leaf-bare!

It's okay, but make the ear pink more of a reddish color. Also, the entire image is too dark, lighten it up a bit. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 19:34, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 20:29, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble-sama 18:49, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Fallowtail- Declined

[[File:Fallowtail.jpg|left]] It's one of my first chararts and I'll be willing to take any comments on it. --Echoheart 12:12, December 21, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Their are highlights above her paw, I don't know if their suppose to be their if so blur them if not get rid of them. Darken the ear pink and maybe thicken the shading. --PandastormPanda Love 12:56, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Add shading near her belly.MaplefernHi!13:06, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

It looks pixelated, and this is because you saved it on a jpg file. Unfortunately, you have to redo it and then save it on a png file. --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 15:04, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

I don't think you have to redo it now. Just run the sharpen tool over it once or twice and save it as png.--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:46, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

This might just be me being picky, but I don't really think the color is quite right. Her description says "light brown" this is like, golden-yellow.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 01:14, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded--Echoheart 12:28, December 23, 2009 (UTC)Echoheart

Warrior, the sharpen tool makes it look more pixelated, not less.. Right now the image is already pixelated a bit, and its still a jpg. The background needs to be transparent, and it should be a png or even a gif to keep the transparency and quality. Unfortunately, I think you might need to redo this to do that though, like Hawk said earlier... --Quiet!... 21:03, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. --Bramble-sama 18:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Declined. Bramble-sama 18:58, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blank - Declined

[[File:Kblank.png]] Here's a kittypet blank. Any crits? --CandyCaneWolf 20:42, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Well, two things

1. This is above the image limit (But since there are a couple of images in the 24 hour stage, I don't think that's a problem)

2. There has to be more blanks. Two short haired males and Two short haired females; Two long haired males and two long haired females--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:16, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I guess this means we're taking blanks again? Anywho, the lineart should be thicker, like the rest of the blanks, in addition to what Nightfall said. --Quiet!... 21:53, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Yes we are Quiet - see the purple message =) Sandy! 21:56, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with quiet and night.You need 2 female,(l&s)and 2 males (l&s).Also,the lineart needs to be thicker.

FirePelt, you forgot to sign. As for the blank, thicken the lineart. ConfettifernAnd a happy Leaf-bare! 22:06, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Im so Forgetful!XD.Thanks! FirePelt 22:09, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

The rear doesn't look realistic, and it doesn't look slightly similar to the other blanks.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 23:24, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

its good , but the eye is kinda big,and we need male short,fmaleshort,mlong,fmlong.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 03:45, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Well, this is good for a first effort, but it looks way to cartoony. You need to make it more realistic.--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:14, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

It's okay that you didn't know, but this has to be declined for now because as a new user who hasn't had an image approved yet, you're only allowed one image up at a time. Stonestar was up first, so I'm declining this. Sorry for the inconvenience. --Bramble-sama 19:07, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Dapplenose (E) - Declined

[[File:Dapplenose.elder.png]] ...Haven't done of these in three months, so don't be too hard. It's horrible, I know. By the way, my birthday's tomorrow! Yay me. ^^--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:59, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

Happpy birthday! Anyway, the whisker is blurred. Maplefern

Add ear pink --Icecloud33 01:52, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Good, but Dapplenose is mottled. She looks more like solid gray in this picture--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:38, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Weird. It looks are blurry but it isn't on my computer. O.o I'll go fix it. -.-;--Warrior♥Warrior's Den 16:20, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Her front paws don't seem to have shading on them. --Quiet!... 21:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Put shading on her front paws,and put ear pink on her. FirePelt 21:56, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Needs ear pink.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:16, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this, or it will have to be declined--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 22:38, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

It's only been 5 days Nightfall. Sandy! 22:53, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. The little calender on my laptop is broken--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:07, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

The whisker is blurred.GrayravenpawScourgeRedtailBluestarTigerstarCrookedstarGraystripe 12:27, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Sandy! 13:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

add ear pink.--*Ivy jingle jingle!!* 02:50, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble-sama 04:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(MC)- Declined

[[File:Pebbleheart(MC).png]] I was bored so ya i allways loved him and i know i'm over the page limit but i saw a lot of"comments before approvel" so i think i'm okay! style="font-family:Papyrus;border:2px solid; color:darkgreen;">[[User:Echopaw|<span style="background:chocolate; color:lavender;">echo</span>]][[User Talk:Echopaw|<span style="background:chocolate; color:red;"> paw< 16:50, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart is already up for approval.--AshshadowRawr :3 16:57, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Ashshadow is correct, there is already a Pebbleheart for approval above. Is there anything else this could work for? --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 17:31, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ash and Bluey(may I call you that? )Are right.There is a pebbleheart already up.Please take this down. FirePeltHow's the prey running? 17:56, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also, you first image hasn't been approved. You need you first image approved then you can put up another image. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 18:06, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Declined for the above reasons. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:11, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Hutch(w)-Declined

[[File:Brambleclaw_(W).png]]I know this is over the page limit, (37 or somthing,) I saw lots with Comments before approval, so I thought I'd put him up. I Finally did find a use for the old Tigerheart image I tried! ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 21:27, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

This is really good, I love your stripes! But the shading really needs to be blurred--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 21:38, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

You also need to change the file name.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 21:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

This looks like the tabby on Icethroat21's tutorial . . .--:) Mousetalon And A Mousey New Year!!!!! 22:17, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

[[Image:TabbiesII.png]] Just wanted to see them side by side. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Mouse is right - it looks like exactly the same cat with the eye colour changed Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:22, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Wasn't this posted on the wiki before Icethroat did the tutorial? I dont really know but I thought it was.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:26, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Copied from the declined archive: '[[File:Brambleclaw_(W).png]]I noticed Brambleclaw has no Warrior images, and I made one. Thanks For the Tutorial Icethroat! It really Helped! So, comments or advice, (or both) --Nightwhisker98Merry Christmas :D 21:18, December 9, 2009 (UTC)' - This was later changed to Tigerheart and now Hutch. From the above comment, I think it is safe to assume the tutorial cae first... Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:29, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Okay strange I didnt notice that when it was Brambleclaw--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:33, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Will this be handed over to Bramble?Happy New Year!22:36, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Well, as far as I'm concerned, it looks like the same image to me, but yes, Bramble will have final say on the matter - unless Nightwhisker can prove it is her own image... or unless Icey reveals that she got the image from Nightwhisker. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:44, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

The tutorial came first, and I definitely made the image myself. I agree, this does look a lot like the tutorial. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 00:52, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I put this back on the page. Night, you never remove sections of the talk page. Especially not to hide something you did wrong. The image you uploaded is an exact duplicate of Icethroat's except for the eye color. You did not give credit to her for the image and claimed it as your own; same as stealing. Don't do this again. This will be archived in the declined section in 24 hours. Bramble-sama 01:57, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Bramble.It is an exact copy of icy's image.and why does it say Brambleclaw for the image name. FirePelt and a Firey new year!^.^ 02:50, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (FSL)-for approval

[[File:Firestar.png|thumb|This is Firestar]] --Firestar123 15:40, January 4, 2010 (UTC)


Tell me if I can make it better!!!

No, Firestar already has a leader image. Firestar does not need anymore images. Plus you didn't even ask to join. -.- HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:44, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I did

I'm sorry but I'm gonna have to decline this. Look at Firestar. He already has a leader image. Declining. HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:51, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

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