star that shines on water (star) - Declined


the poor cat who sharptooth killed..comments??--*Ivy spring!!* 05:32, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

It needs more earpink.--Echoheart 12:29, January 4, 2010 (UTC)Echoheart

Blur the shading on the top of her head. --IcestormHI! 13:07, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

She's very good, but her highlights need to be blurred some more. I love the color! :o HawkeyC'mon 2010! 14:52, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

She needs mudsteaks. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to the fact that you already have two images up, Ivy. --Bramble-sama 00:46, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Shellheart(D)-For approval

[[File:Shellharty.png]] My first official Char art. I like the way he turned out. Pretty Pretty c: Ready for approval! Comments? --Rainstripe c: 17:17, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

is it me or do i see a gray blurr on its chest ~iceyfang

Looks good! I would blur the shading, though, and the eyes need to have a glare and pupil. See Icethroat's tutorials for info on how to do the eye. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 18:08, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

I agree with Bluestar1776.Blur the shading.I did the eye for you.(sorry if you get mad,I wanted to help you!) FirePelt 18:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

FirePelt, you need to give users a chance to improve for themselves; this is Rainstripe's first charart afterall. Rainstripe and Iceyfang, please sign with ~~~~. As for the image, it needs ear pink. Take a look at some tutorials for how to do this if you are stuck. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 18:38, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re-uploaded with ear pink and more blur. --Rainstripe c: 18:55, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

This is very good, Ranstripe:D But, the ear pink should only be on one ear (the one that is on the side of the head that is facing us). --HawktalonMerry Xmas! 19:09, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded fixed ear pink. Ready for approval!!--Rainstripe c: 19:15, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

i still see gray on his chest Iceyfang 19:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Its shading. Durr --Rainstripe c: 19:31, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

No, I think I see it too, a paler grey - the shading should reach the lineart. Also, the ear pink needs to be smaller and a more rosy/salmon colour. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 19:34, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded. Fixed

Please remember to sign all of your posts with the four tildes(~). I see a shadow behind him. It shouldn't be there.--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 21:28, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Re uploaded P: --Rainstripe c: 22:46, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

His back looks faded and that gray patch is still on the front of him.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 22:48, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Whole image redone. --Rainstripe c: 23:11, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

the eyes seem yo be life less can give the eyes a puil Iceyfang 23:59, December 20, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

Check Icethroat21's tutorial for eye diagrams. The spots look . . . circular. Make them more uneven and natural, like on Brambleberry. The ear pink is way too large. Make it smaller and darker and blur it.--:) JingletalonI've been dreaming of a Warriors Christmas 15:44, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Raineh 20:20, December 22, 2009 (UTC)

i think theres some gray in the open spots or it might be me Iceyfang 22:23, December 23, 2009 (UTC)iceyfang

I see it too. Fix that and I think he'll be ready.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 00:13, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

I dont understand. Mabie could you explain it more? --Raineh 13:44, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

The space between his front and back legs is light gray. It needs to be transparent or atleast white.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 16:28, December 26, 2009 (UTC)

Please work on this or 'twill be declined... Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:49, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this was close to approval, but declined due to lack of work Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:36, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) - Declined


All the credit goes to the original creator, I just decided to add the spiky fur that goes with his description. I hope I didn't do something wrong by posting this. WoodClan 23:40, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

This looks very good but maybe you should ask Bramble the creator.--Stonestar 23:46, January 7, 2010 (UTC)Stonestar

If the warrior image in being changed to "spiky fur" should the kit and apprentice images look that way?--NightshineLet it snow! 00:45, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

WoodClan, you cannot post this yet as you haven;t had your first image approved yet, you will have to wait.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 03:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, Mousetalon is right. This will have to be declined, until you can get Stonefur's kit image approved.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:07, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Declined because you already have one image up, and need to get your first approved before you can up your limit to two. Also, get permission from Bramble: This may have to wait until a future Tweak Week. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 12:24, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (deputy, yay my first deputy!!) - Declined

[[File:Grayst10.png]] Graystipe! FIRST DEPUTY, LONG HAIRED CAT, AND GRAY CAT!! What do you think? Took me HOURS! Like 2, or so. XD Swiftpelt 04:07, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Okay four things. First of all, when you upload an image, it needs to be on the page. Not on a link. Second of all, Evanphoto already has a Graystripe deputy up for approval, I'm sorry. It's up near the top of the page. Third, this is really exceeding the page limit. I know that there are a handful of images in the 24 hour stage, but this is too much. Lastly, you have to have one image approved before you put up another one. Sorry, but this will have to be declined. After you get Brackenkit approved, maybe you can reupload this as another character --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:40, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I uploaded it onto the page, but it still has to be declined--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:48, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

SO, when is this going to get declined? -_- Evanphoto 12:59, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Evanphoto, I'm getting there! Declined for the reasons outlined above. Archiving Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:42, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Graystipe (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Graystripe_(K).png]] It said up to 2 images for approval for a user at a time so... Here's GRAYKIT! :D SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Sorry, Swiftpelt, but you can only have one image for approval until you get one approved. This will have to be declined. --Happy New Year!09 01:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

And for the future, Graystripe was never seen as a kit, so he can't have a charart for a kit version. (See the purple notice at the top of the page) And I already explained that you can only have one image up for approval on your deputy version of Graystripe--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:49, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The green says: PLEASE NOTE I'm cutting down on the image number again. There are only able to be two images (or blanks) up by the same user at the same time. Also, I didn't know that was what It meant. Could I change it to a different long furred tom? SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Yes, but for new users you can only have one image up for approval. --Happy New Year!09 01:58, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftpelt, no you can't. You can after Brackenkit is approved. And it does say in the green notice that new users have to wait until they have one image approved before they can upload two on the page.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:59, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh, I get it now......... So, It's declined? :( SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

Probably, sorry :( Also, this is the 45th image, even with some near approval, that's WAY over the limit. Keep that in mind when posting images in the future, please. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 02:24, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yep, it's declined. Sorry. Let me explain the reasons for the rules. The two image per user rule is designed so that all users have a chance to post images, so one member cannot dominate the page. The one image for users with no images approved is so people do not spread themselves too thinly while still learning. Focus on making your first image the best it can be and the rest will follow more easily. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 13:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Oakheart_(W).png]] Take this down if it is past the limit. There are discussions, and other things with "comments before approval?" or getting approved. Other than that the title says it all. WetstarTaylor Swift! 22:34, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

All of the shading needs blurred some more, and the shading on the midriff needs thickened. --Icy-chan 23:06, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Icy! Well, the ear pink also needs blurring.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 03:50, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading a lot. Maybe add a few highlights? Also, the ear pink needs darkened and blurred - I can barely see it. ßąէωïиց 20:36, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, working on it. Bluestar: I did add highlights. WetstarTaylor Swift! 20:49, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Then you need to darken them. I can't see any on the haunch, tail and forehead. ßąէωïиց 22:42, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the overall body color more of a darker red like his deputy picture WoodClan 00:16, January 13, 2010 (UTC) [[Image:Oakheart.deputy.png]]

I think the coloring is fine, maybe darken the shading a little though?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:17, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? Is the changes showing? WetstarTaylor Swift! 01:01, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:35, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! Highlights too? WetstarTaylor Swift! 23:11, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yup, a tad.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:23, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Working on it. And WoodClan, I copied the pelt color from Echo's image. I think it's just the highlights that's bothering you. ;) (It happens to be A LOT) WetstarTaylor Swift! 21:56, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Too much highlights on the tail.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

How do I get rid of them? But anyways Reuploaded. Are the changes showing up? WetstarTaylor Swift! 00:45, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I wanna put Patchkit up. IcestormHi There! 23:01, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Millie(Q)- Withdrawn

[[File:Millie2.png]]-- ok since whitewing is approved i thought i'd put up Millie. she is my first tabby! and i am quite proud of her. comments? Santamoon Merry Christmas!

Looks good. The thing is, The stripes should be thinner --Rainstripe c: 16:33, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Okay, discounting the 3 discussion sections this just fits nto 35 images. The stripes need to be less cartoony; look at some aproved tabbies for reference. There are a few different styles you can try. Sandy wishes you a great Christmas! 16:44, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

The ears are too dark and need blurring. Sandy's right. The tabby markings are too thick, and could do with more blurring. --Birchy (I don't know how to get a signature!!)

The tabby stripes need to look more like Millie's stripes on her warrior image. --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 17:51, December 20, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, the ear pink needs blurred, and fix the color; make it more like the color in Millie's warrior image. You don't need ear pink on the ear farthest from us (the left ear), so get rid of that. You need to make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image, and then blur the stripes. --SnowstarLeaf-bare is here! 15:38, December 21, 2009 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like Millie's warrior image,please.Blur the ear pink,fix color,like her warrior image.Delete the farthest ear pink,it's not needed.I can see your proud to,everyone is for there first's of anything!-- FirePelt 02:12, December 24, 2009 (UTC)FirePelt

ok with these comments i will redo her completely. she should be reuploaded in around 2 days,Santamoon Merry Christmas!

This needs to be worked on or it will have to be declined. Also, please sign with ~~~~ so the timestamp will be displayed. Thanks Sandy! 14:14, December 29, 2009 (UTC)

Reuploadedeven more proud!--Santamoon Merry Christmas! 17:43, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

The stripes look much better but they're to dark. Lighten them some.--AshshadowRawr :3 23:39, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:25, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

how do i liten the stripes without lightning the pic?--Santamoon Merry Christmas!17:23, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Change the size of the brush on the dodge tool. --Icy-chan 22:22, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

kk. just gimme a day or 2. my teacher is giving me so much home work that i rarely get on. =( Santamoon Merry Christmas!18:27, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Hi Darkmoon - I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to put a 24 hour limit on this staying on the page. Please work on it, or it will have to be declined. There are just too many people unable to post their work because images like this that aren't being worked on are keeping the image number up. Sorry. If you don't have time at the moment, it might be best not to be working on this image - perhaps repost her when you do have time to give the image the attention it needs to become approval standard. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 17:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Actually Sandy I'm going to temporarily withdraw this anyways. My life is just tooooo busy so i cant get on much. ill just re submit this when i can properly work on it. ill keep it on my reserves and resubmit this some-other time. Santamoon Merry Christmas! =)

Flametail(MC)- Withdrawn by User

[[File:FLametail(MC).png]]tried to get it to look the same as the apprentice even tried same shading style ( i failed ) oh well...comments?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 04:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is insanely good! But, does he really need a full medicine cat blank? Jayfeather didn't get one until Leafpool stepped down and he was named full medicine cat. Same with Kestrelflight and Willowshine. What do the rest of you think?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Even though he has his full name, he is not a full medicine cat until Littlecloud steps down or dies.--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 13:48, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is a really good image, but I think Mouse and Night are right - he's still listed as an app, name or no name so I guess he should be treated as such, therefore he doesn't need this image. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 15:33, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

k I'll withdraw this then :3 my bad-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 23:12, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Bracken. Keep it on your cp - we may have need for it yet ;) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:28, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Bella(KP) - Declined

[[File:93px-Kittypet Blanks FemaleLong.png]]

Here's Bella! Constructive critism wanted! :D Tinselbreeze ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 04:44, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I hate to break it to you, but Grayravenpaw already had this reserved, so you'll either have to ask him if you can have it, or, withdraw it. ☛ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ☚ 04:46, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Insane's right, and on top of that, did you even look at her description? She's not white, she's brown tabby with a white chest and amber eyes. Next time, you need to look at the cat's description before you make a charart. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:30, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any coloring on this other than the eyes, ear pink and collar. The picture is way too small.--Nightshine ★ 05:31, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, no. This needs to be declined. Grayraven had this reserved first NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:32, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Please also use the correctly sized blanks (click on them before saving) and name your files something more appropriate in future such as Bella(KP) or Bella.kittypet etc If Lightning says you can have it, then you need to redo the image according to the comments you've had above, and resubmit. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whoever did this archiving stuck it in the middle of another section. Also made all the links dead somehow... ✐+ᖱ = 16:41, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose(KP)- Declined

I know I got ALOT to fix. Raineh 01:36, January 18, 2010 (UTC)


Hmm, okay you've got to change her eyes some how. They look like they're glowing... And then, there are a lot of shadows around her, the background needs to be transparent. But, the shading is very nice! Blur the highlights a lot more though NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:38, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

As Night said, just change the outlines of the eyes back to black, and erase the gray around her. Aside from that, this is very good for a first image. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 01:45, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is the 47th image up for approval, and there are only about 6 images in the approval stage. This is way overboard.

But anyway, the ear pink is too big. Shrink it, and do the rest stated above. Snowfall09 02:58, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

I'm taking this down for now, 47 is WAY to many. Put it up later.Darkhallows 05:02, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt (W)- declined

[[File:Patchpelt.warrior.png]] Well, I wanted to do a black-and-white-cat. I tried to copy the elder image. Constructments? HawkeyRawr! LOL 03:11, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink and blur the patches a tiny bit more. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 03:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh, this is really good coming from my horrible elder image. :) Anyway, thicken the shading on the white fur, and the ear pink doesn't need darkened, it actually needs lightened just a little bit, and made the some color as the elder image. --Icy-chan 03:19, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Hawkey! Okay, right on his chest, there is a very straight, white line that runs down into the black patch on his chest. Turn the part of it that's on the patch black. Also, darken the shading a little bit more on the white parts of him--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:20, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkey this hasnt been worked on in a week. Imagewise add shading on the white leg farthest from us.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:00, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawkey, normally I'd be able to wait longer before putting a rush on this, but because of all of the images on the page, please work on this soon or it will have to be decined. --Icy-chan 02:34, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble-sama 04:13, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Icecloud (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Icecloud_kit.gif]]This is my first charart. It's Icecloud, as a kit. I saw that it said that we could do any cat. even if they already had a charart. Someone [I forget who] reserved Icecloud as a warrior, so I did her as a kit. How did I do?--Rage♥♥ 21:05, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first try, but it needs shading. There are lots of tutorials that will tell you how (found here). And don't forget to blur the ear pink. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 21:31, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I added the shading and blurred the ear pink.

The shading should be darker and when you reupload the image please reupload over the same file name. --AshshadowRawr :3 21:56, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Two things about the eyes, first of all they look teal. Icecloud has bright blue. Second of all, the overall design of the eyes is bothering me. Look at one of Icethroat's tutorials for help on how to do them--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:44, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made the shading slightly darker. Thanks Ashshadow, I didn't know that. Sorry. I made the eye color bright blue, and changed how I made the eyes.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes are much better! But there is a lot of lineart blurred, mainly on the sides of her head, and down around her legs and paws--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:49, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. I fixed the lineart, along with any other blurred lineart.--Rage♥♥ 00:59, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading should still be darker. I can't really see it.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:27, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened Shading. Also fixed the ears-they are now the same color and size.--Rage♥♥ 13:12, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to be honest and say I don't see a whole lot of shading, until I move my screen. And it doesn't look much like shading, just random lines across the image. Look at some kits and try to mimic the shading.--Darkhallows 14:37, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Darkhollows, I don't know what you mean. I followed the shading rule sin the tutorials for white cats...--Rage♥♥ 17:10, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Darkhallows is right. I can hardly see the shading. It just looks like very thin, light, lines against the lineart. Just try and make it bigger, and make it a lot darker, then blur.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:45, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the lineart and blurred it.--Rage♥♥ 13:11, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm still having trouble seeing the shading on the right side of the body. Also blur the earpink some more.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:46, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred ear and darkened shading to a darker gray shade--Rage♥♥ 21:56, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks too thick -- Icecloud33 23:06, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

You've got to make the shading bigger. It just looks like a very thin dark gray line right next to the lineart. Be sure to use the correct brush size, I use the 3 or 5 sized square.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:11, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in 9 days. Please reupload soon or it will have to be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:18, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble-sama 02:38, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Violet (R)- Declined

[[File:Violet.rogue.png]] Guess who's back? Don't ask why I'm on here today. Anyway, I couldn't see this image go into waist so comments? HawkeyC'mon 2010! 14:59, January 4, 2010 (UTC) still looks more yellow than orange, but using the sponge tool on saturate a couple of times should fix that. ;) Also, the ear pink needs blurred some more. Otherwise, this looks really awesome. :D --Icy-chan 15:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploadedeh! Mwar the highlights look yellow now! T.T Oh well, she looks oranger. :) HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Yah, looks awesome. The only thing I can see now is that I can barely see the ear pink, make it more of a reddish color. Also, I think I see blurred lineart in a couple of spots near the lineart in the highlights. --Icy-chan 15:20, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:30, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a little bit wider, and it should be good. --Icy-chan 15:34, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! HawkeyRawr! LOL 15:50, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I still think she is a little to bright.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 20:33, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more ginger-orange. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 22:18, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make her more a ginger color and the shading looks like a sun is hanging over her.Make the shading darker and add it to the needed spots.Also make the ear pink alittle smaller. FirePeltRAWRZ!!!! 23:13, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The backround is light gray; make it transparent Evanphoto 22:55, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The tail tip looks too yellow, maybe burn it a little?--Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 03:53, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been touched in a week. Please work on it, I don't want it to be declined!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:30, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawkey, but Nightfall's right. Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --Icy-chan 22:51, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkey, if you don't work on this, Sandy and Bramble will decline it! I can't bear to watch!QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 09:35, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I redid the whole image. 00:40, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

That looks better! But darken the shading because I don't see any. Darken and blur the stripes a little more, and her white paws look to cream colored. Make them more white NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:34, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

The paws look yellow,and she looks more like a light brown cat than a ginger color. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 23:41, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfire I'm really sorry, but if you don't work on this it will have to be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:59, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Hawkey ✐+ᖱ = 16:40, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail(A)- Declined

[[File:Whitetail_Apprentice.png]]I know, over the limit, but there are 5 images I have counted up for approval so far, so here we go. I've had her reserved forever, and she's just taking up space. Comments? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 16:35, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

To me she seems sorta,pinkish.But that just me. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Gimme a Valentine Mouse 22 16:38, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from her warrior image.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 16:40, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I know that Princess is almost ready but is it ok to have this up when the limit is one image up per user.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:46, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I dont think it's right.This image should be taken down,seeing as Princess is still up, no matter how close she is to being approved. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Gimme a Valentine Mouse 22 16:49, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

No. The page is already 5 images over limit whether some are in the approval stages or not. This is your second image which I am declining. You can post her again once Princess has actually been approved ✐+ᖱ = 16:52, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Millie (KP)- Declined

[[File:Millie_Kittypet.png]] There's like five CBAed and are in the 24 hour stage, and Bramble said I could put this up so here's Millie! Don't say I need to finish Tadpole! I repeat:I had permission from Bramble.Suggestions?--Quail!Jack in the Box 08:57, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit. But this is beatiful. MaplefernHi everyone! 11:19, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Quail this is great but I had already reserved her.Hidden-Valentine ღ 14:51, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Actually Sunny I think Quail did have her first. Quail when you talked to Bramble did she say you could reserve it or put it up because its not fair if you can have two images when everyone else can only have one.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 15:03, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok. Is there another kittypet imgae that's a tabby because i don't want the image ai did go to waste.Hidden-Valentine ღ 15:10, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I read the comment on Quail's talk page and Bramble said that Quail could put Millie up on her current projects, but never said anything about putting her up on the page. So unless Bramble or Sandy says otherwise, this'll probably have to be declined for now. --Icy-chan 16:57, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Page is over the limit and Icey's right - this hasn't been authorised from what I can see. Get Tadpole approved first, then repost this. ✐+ᖱ = 17:04, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A)-Declined

[[File:Jayfeather.jpg]] heres JAYFEATHER! my favoirite of the 3 and theres like 1,000,000 things saying CBA, yes im lazy! but here he is! Echopaw 15:34, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Echopaw but you already have Smudge up. Also this dosent look much like his other versions.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 15:36, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Echopaw, but Ashshadow's right. This'll be declined for now. After Smudge is approved, you can reupload this. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)