This is Berrynose as a loner!


A few things: 1)Don't link. 2) The title should be 'Character Name--For Approval'. Know for next time. MaplefernHi everyone! 00:44, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad but it's over the limit(see note at the top of page).As for the image the shading is a bit dark.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:51, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I was talking to Sandy on the IRC and she and I talked about it and she said that Berrynose, Mousewhisker, and Hazeltail don't need loner images because they were kits when they were loners. I'm sorry D: insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular

Declined for reasons above. --Bramble-sama 01:23, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Willowshine (Ki) - Declined


I have star comments before vlah blah so--.--:) Ivy Hi there!! 06:57, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is still over the limit and more than one up for approval; declined. Put her up later.Darkhallows 08:04, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'll leave this up for now until I get back home from school (I decided to check my email before I left since I had time) so that you can see it, but while you wait to repost it blur all of the shading in some more and color in the nose pink. --Icy-chan 12:04, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Also - comments before approval status is not yet approved. One image per user please. Archiving. ✐+ᖱ = 18:11, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Back up for approval now page has gone down and Star has bene approved. Just remember for next time. ✐+ᖱ = 19:13, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

You still have Sasha (Q) up for approval, so doesn't this still need to wait some more before being put up onto the page? --Icy-chan 21:30, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blimey, you're right Icy - sorry for not double checking. I guess I assumed nobody would have the audacity to post a 3rd image when the limit is 1... Back in the declined archive it goes. Sorry for the confusion. ✐+ᖱ = 21:39, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlepaw (A) - Writhdrawing by user

[[File:Nettlepaw_apprentice_5.png]]My first charart! he needs ALOT of work, but i don't know what to do! help? --♥Shinestar♥ 23:41, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

A few things 1) The backgroud is black, it needs to be transparent 2)The image needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail 3)I can't see any shading 4)The ear pink only needs to be on the ear closest to us (His left ear) and it needs to be me of a reddish color--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 23:47, December 5, 2009 (UTC)

well this was the biggest size it gave me, and, how do you make the background transparent? --♥Shinestar♥ 00:03, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Click on the image on the main page before saving it to your computer. After you've fixed that, I can turn it transparent for you. --Tinselclaw 00:37, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

Ear pink is WAY too bright. Make it a more salmony color- run the burn tool over it a few times.--:) Jingletalon Christmas is on the way!!! 04:34, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, which main page? i thought this was the main page! --♥Shinestar♥ 14:38, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

wait, so you mean go back onto pixrl and color the background white? --♥Shinestar♥ 14:41, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

No, it means you start over on pixlr. I did the same thing. Save the base on your computer, go to pixlr and open a file. You might notice that the background is checkered. That is a transparent background, which is what Wiki needs. Maplefern 14:57, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

but when i did him it had a checked backround! when i had saved it and opened it again, it had a black backround! so i have to do it all over again? ={ --♥Shinestar♥ 15:22, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

I think what the problem is is you saved the image on a jpg file. Redo him and then save it on a png file. --SilverbellsMerry Xmas! 15:44, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

ok, i put the new one up, but i CANNOT fix the eye and whiskers! also, this is the biggest i can get, which annoys me because all the others are WAY bigger! can someone help? --♥Shinestar♥ 22:00, December 6, 2009 (UTC)

[[File:Apprenticeshortm.gif]] Here. Try re-doing him again. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 20:42, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

It is at its full size. Maplefern 22:11, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

The blank is. The Charart is not. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 22:33, December 9, 2009 (UTC)

Did you remove the '120 px'in front of it? Maplefern 12:08, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

re-uploaded now he still needs alot more help, but THANK YOU ICESTORM! your blank made ti so the eye was correct and the whiskers, and i didn't have to spend 15 mins going over the white spots like in my old blank. Help? --♥Shinestar♥ 19:54, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

You missed a spot whan you were coloring(his hind leg) and tabby stripes are usually darker than the base pelt color, darken them some. otherwise this is much better.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:07, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

reuploaded again. Now? --User:Shinestar♥Shine]]star♥ 20:57, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes thicker. Also, save over the former photo. You don't need the older versions.--Maplefern 22:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Maplefern is right, Try re-doing the tabby stripes with a size 3 brush. Look at Graystripe's apprentice picture for help. :D Jinglestorm ♥'Merry Purry Christmas! 23:37, December 13, 2009 (UTC)

Also, maybe darken the earpink a bit. It is a bit bright. TinselfernHave yourself a merry little Leaf-bare!14:53, December 14, 2009 (UTC)

oh my star clan! i am soo annoyed! i can't find my nettlepaw file on my computer! --♥Shinestar♥ 21:53, December 23, 2009 (UTC)

Did you try a search? --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 16:33, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

ya --♥Shinestar♥ 17:56, December 24, 2009 (UTC)

Can't you just copy and paste the image from here?--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 18:10, December 24, 2009 (UTC) could just save the image to your computer again. (i think that's what Ashshadow meant.) --SilversnowIcethroat says Happy Holidays! 03:16, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

Yeah it is sorry I wasn't clear.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 03:21, December 25, 2009 (UTC)

I tried doing that but it comes out all blurry! --♥Shinestar♥ 15:58, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Sorry but it sounds like you'll have to start over.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 17:14, December 27, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I'm already trying, just give me a little while to get a new one --♥Shinestar♥ 15:12, December 28, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, heres my new nettlepaw, now he needs more work but at least i have something to work WITH. Comments? --♥Shinestar♥ 15:56, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Make the eye like on my tutorials, and add shading, if it's there I can't see it. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 16:51, December 30, 2009 (UTC)

Ok, i'll get on that soon, my big sis is on the desktop right now. and also, on this computer the tabby stripes look all bad, and icethroat, do you think i should redo my tabby stripes the way it says so on your tutorials, or the way it is already? and it sort of confuses me on the eye thing on your tutorials. --♥Shinestar♥ 00:19, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

please work on this or it will be declined--Echopaw 01:21, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Echopaw what are you talking about it was just updated.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 01:30, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

No, your stripes are fine! I'm not very good at those type of stripes, so I didn't bother making a tutorial for them, that's all. and the eye thing, each block is like a pixel, if that helps any. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 02:03, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Ya, i'll get on it soon, its just that i'm at my cousins for New Years and i'm sleeping over there so my work is on my computer at home. I'll get back on him soon though! --♥Shinestar♥ 16:23, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Also, ice, when i do my new shading, (cause mine you CANNOT see) should i just do it over the tabby stripes or remove them, shade, then put them back on? --♥Shinestar♥ 16:35, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

Go over the tabby stripes. The shading should be on both the stripes and the fur. --Icethroat21Happy New Years! 18:53, December 31, 2009 (UTC)

ya, i'm working on it, its just really hard for me to do the eyes! i'll have a new one up soon though! promise! --♥Shinestar♥ 17:28, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

I am SO sorry i haven't been on! i just keep getting BOATLOADS of homework! and we have a science project, but i promise to work on him when i have time! (and i have sewing and CDD and science club, and well you get the point) SO sorry! --♥Shinestar♥ 12:49, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too red, and I can't see the eye color.--Darkhallows 14:23, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

you might be right about the ear pink but the eye color for my computer is a very bright blue. Is it dark for anyone eles? --♥Shinestar♥ 18:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, now I see it, make it a little larger.--Darkhallows 18:47, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

k, i made the eye like in icestorm's tutorials, and i made the ear more pink. How is it now? --♥Shinestar♥ 21:43, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the changes, upload it under a new file (Nettlepaw.A.png) and then put {{Delete}} on the old image. --Icy-chan 21:55, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

bangs head on table* i am so dumb! i put up the same file as before! ok, so HERE is my new file! --♥Shinestar♥ 22:08, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Much better! :D Just make the ear pink smaller and blur the tabby markings. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 22:10, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Shinestar there's no shading, please add some--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:50, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

ok, i THINK i fixed it. Now? --♥Shinestar♥ 00:19, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm, it might just be my computer, but I still don't see any shading at all. Look at an approved apprentice picture, or a tutorial for shading--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:26, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

I have a few things to fix =)

  1. The ear pink is too bright and needs blending - look at Rockpaw, Bouncepaw and Tinypaw
  2. The tabby stripes need thickening
  3. Night is right also - more shading is needed. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 21:14, January 16, 2010 (UTC) ok, i'm on it ♥Shinestar♥ 15:36, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --Icy-chan 15:35, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

um weird, we commented at the same time but all the same i'm working on him. ♥Shinestar♥ 15:38, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

ok, i messed up on the tabby stripes BIG TIME but i couldn't undo them cause i had already put in all those lines on the tail. Please help! He looks awful! ♥Shinestar♥ 17:28, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

also, i think you can barely see my shading. DX ♥Shinestar♥ 18:45, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is better I just think this color is a bit strange for a cat. The earpink is to small and needs to be blured some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 18:50, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

k i fixed the ear pink but i don't think i should change his color. Anything eles? ♥Shinestar♥ 19:17, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

ok, something happened. The writing around my picture is all huge. Can someone help with that? ♥Shinestar♥ 19:22, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

I didnt mean to change the color, sorry if thats how it sounded. blur the earpink some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:24, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

k, now? ♥Shinestar♥ 19:30, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't really see much shading. I don't want to be rude, but maybe you could consider taking this down? It's not really anywhere near approval...

There is shading now, but it needs to be blurred, and maybe darkened? And add more stripes. Darkhallows 07:34, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Also, make the ear pink darker and smaller. IcestormHi There! 18:22, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

i am so sorry! but i really don't have enough time to work on him, CCD, sewing, sci club, lacross, ect. But good news, i found the old files of the nettlepaw's i worked on so i can just go back to the one i did before the shading, do new shading, and then work from there, but i would have to repost him in a while! sorry i haven't been on! also, how do i decline it, do i delete the section, write decline over "for approval" or does one of the sr. warriors decline it? I don't know, i just know that i don't have time for nettlepaw right now. srry i gtg to bed, 10 on a school night, i wake up EARLY, k bye! really srry! ♥Shinestar♥ 03:06, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

What you do is change the heading up top from "for approval" to "withdrawn" or "withdrawing" and then Sandy, Bramble, me, or one of the other senior warriors will archive it in the declined section. --Icy-chan 03:22, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm asuming by this that you want to withdraw this? ✐+ᖱ = 18:00, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nightfur (W) Declined

[[File:Nightfur.earfix.10.png]]I know this is over the image limit, but there are 10 with comments before approval (including Husker *Smiles*) and one problem thingy. So technically, this is 33 or 34... anyways... comments? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 14:13, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

I am so stupid! I forgot to shade it! ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 14:20, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you can't lighten his fur even the tiniest bit? It's so dark I can't see the outline. Example: Blackclaw SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

To lighten it, I suggest you redo the image and color it a really dark gray that isn't so dark like the one you have. Then you can run the burn tool over it to make it look black. --Happy New Year!09 15:05, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Run the Burn Tool over the whole image? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 15:12, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, Blackclaw means (I think) That you should make the base color of the fur a dark gray, so you can still shade it, but it still looks close to black. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 15:51, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh... I got it now...----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 18:09, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- this better? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:22, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too thick. Thin it. Also, darken ear pink. WetstarTaylor Swift! 01:00, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 20:29, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks weird, it's gray. Try making it the color of the following- Molewhisker, Blackclaw, Hollyleaf, or Nightcloud NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:32, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 14:39, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

How's This? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 17:48, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, now I can't really see it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:06, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The back shading is too thick. Thin it and blur it. IcestormHi There! 18:17, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐+ᖱ = 11:54, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry Nightwhisker!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:25, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Ki) Declined


Please approve my charart of Brackenfur (Ki).


This is over the limit. There is already a pic. of Brackenfur as a kit up for approval. Did you try using the siggy I made you?--Nightshine 02:11, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Beewing, but Nightshine's right. And I already tried to tell you that Swiftpelt has Brackenkit up for approval. I'm really sorry, but this is gonna have to be declined. --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:31, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

And you can only have one image up at a time. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:MothxMouse.png|60px]] 03:08, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:12, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Stonefur (K)-- Declined


I finally have a picture and uploaded it but the picture won't appear. What do I do? WoodClan 19:21, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

1. Because it says Image instead of File.

2, xcf is not a um thing. Example png. Save it under png. --IcyLet's Go 2010! 19:27, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

My first Charart at last! I did this one because Stonefur appears as a kit in BP. What do you think? (Thanks for the help in uploading the image) WoodClan 20:18, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think he's a little to blue. Try to match the color of his warrior image.--AshshadowHappy Holidays! 20:48, January 1, 2010 (UTC) I agree with Ashshadow. He needs to be blue-gray, like on his warrior image. (see here. The chest shading also looks smudged. --♪ Ravenstar ♫ :P 20:51, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

Better. The title needs to say '(Character name)--For Approval'. Just so you know.Happy New Year!22:42, January 1, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too bright and purplish. Make it a more reddish colour and blur. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 16:12, January 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color WoodClan 21:43, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

It still is too bright- see Stonefur--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 21:55, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-changed ear color. How is it? WoodClan 22:46, January 3, 2010 (UTC)

Better =) Just bur the shading and highlights and this looks good Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 19:31, January 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-blurred the shading and highlights some more. Is it ready now? WoodClan 01:16, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his front leg still needs more blurring.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 01:18, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the shading and tints for the front legs WoodClan 20:26, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look good, but they need to be blurred some more. ChelseaFC 23:01, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the highlights WoodClan 23:37, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the highlights and shading need to be blurred--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:00, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

And the ear pink looks too hot pink, try making it a little more of a reddish color like his warrior image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:47, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-altered the shading again, the ear color is identical to Stonefurs warrior picture WoodClan 18:08, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more and instead of altering the highlights blur this time. Sometimes after altering the color it blurs more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:07, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-blurred ear pink, what now? WoodClan 02:33, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his chest is too bright-try darkening it some. Also, blur the ear pink a bit more. --Icy-chan 15:40, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please work on this soon or it will have to be declined. --Icy-chan 21:17, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Declined ✐+ᖱ = 17:55, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Graystripe (Lo) - Declined


Very hastily done. I know this is real bad. Oh, and this is second outside the limit, and there are two discussions, and one withdrawn.– – Grayravenpaw – – ScourgeRedtailGraystripeCinderpelt 10:30, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe should reach all the way to the top of his head, see Graystripe.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 15:48, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe should reach the head,in some places it does not reach the lineart,the shading seems patchy and it dosent reach the lineart in some places, theres other stuff , but im to lazy to put it. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ [[File:FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png|30px]] 00:41, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Helpful FirePelt... Well, I'm not feeling particularly lazy right now, so on top of what's already been said, the shading needs thikening slightly and needs to be more even. It also needs blending in to the pelt. Aso, add some shading to the chest and make sure the shading and the stripe hug the lineart a little more as there are gaps of lighter colour. ✐+ᖱ = 17:48, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lightning - you already have Rock up for approval. This will have to be declined as the limit is one image per user. ✐+ᖱ = 17:57, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hawktalon made Rock.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:54, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I know. I meant the other Rock which Lightning has up for approval. ✐+ᖱ = 19:58, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

opps forgot about him. Sorry.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:00, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:41, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Snowdrop(KP)- Declined

[[File:Snowdrop(KP).png]]there's snowdrop! XD I'm pretty proud of this image so....comments?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 23:37, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

You spelled Snowdrop wrong, but overall, pretty good! The only thing is I have to say is..nothing! I'm speechless! I love the shading!--Quail!Jack in the Box 23:46, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is amazing! But blur that little part of shading that's right on top of her muzzle --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:17, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded -- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 02:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a little weird on the left of her back and the top of her shoulder. Maybe blur it some more.----Nightshine 03:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The right ear (our right) shouldn't have ear pink. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 21:21, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Well acually, the right ear should have ear pink. Because the cat is facing us. The fronts of both ears are facing us also. I think the ear pink looks fine --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:43, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

I guess that makes sense. Never mind, then:) --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 17:54, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I just checked the For Approval section for the kittypet blanks, and Quietstep said that the right ear (our right) is turned away from us, so it shouldn't have ear pink. --Hд₩₭₮д£O₦ 23:39, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

But, that kinda doesn't make sense. The ear doesn't look as if it's turned at all. It's facing straight at us. Maybe we should ask Quiet?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:20, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

See the curve in the blanks right ear (our right)? Does it appear in the left? MaplefernHi everyone! 12:38, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

er...I guess I'll let you decide on that first and I'll fix the shading now -Bracken-(not signed in)

any bstter?-- Pebble2Pineow> *poke* hai! 02:15, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. But there is a little part right uner her collar tag that looks strange to me. It's solid gray. Make it white, and just darken the shading in that part--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:19, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week, please reupload soon or this will be declined--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:07, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Declined ✐+ᖱ = 16:53, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hutch - for approval

[[File:Hutch.png]]Please criticize till you drop down I don't think it's good at all >P Do we still do these types of tabby stripes?--Minnowclaw 00:07, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I'm sorry Minnow, but Echoheart has had Hutch reserved for longer than you. You'll have to ask him/her if you can have him... It's a good image though. :( insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 00:09, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darnit, I thought I looked, :( K I'll find a different one. That's actualy good, because I don't like this one... --Minnowclaw 00:15, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Tadpole (Ki)- Declined

[[File:Tad5.png]]So this is my first cat up for approval. Any suggestions?--QuailflightTheCat 00:13, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Good job for your first charart! But the lineart seems kind of blurred... try doing it again with this blank: File:KitShortMa.png The shading looks great though! --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 00:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. That's probably my horrible shading. 8)--Quail 01:01, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

No, the shading's great! Tell me if you need any help with it. I'm fairly good at black cats. And you've took on a hard one for your first charart! Black and white cats are the hardest to shade - trust me, I know! Snowfur was my first cat! --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 01:06, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I know too. Before it switched to Kestrelflight, that section was Hollyleaf-who I'm thinking of reposting.Snowfern Snow!

Thanks, Batwing. I'm going to re-upload it, and make sure it looks better. I didn't use any highlighting, oh yeah, something's wrong with my siggy! :( 8|--Quail! Meow! 01:53, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Okay, I re did it. Hopefully this is a little better.--Quail! Meow! 03:00, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, I think Blackclaw had this reserved first, but I'm not positive. I'll check the history--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:22, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually Quail, I don't even see your siggie on the current project list. Did you even reserve Tadpole?--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 03:24, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

I did. At the bottom. Sorry for any problem, Snowfall. --Quail! Meow! 03:31, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well it looks as if Blackclaw reserved Tadpole under the status as a rogue, however Tadpole was seen as a rogue kitten. You may have reserved him later on under the right blank I believe, but Blackclaw did reserve Tadpole first even if it wasn't under the right status. I'm not a senior warrior anymore so I think we might have to ask Sandy or Bramble about this...or maybe Blackclaw will let you keep the image up.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 03:55, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm....I didn't see Blackclaw's name on the reserve list, and no Tadpole, it should be okay.--Quail! Meow! 04:02, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, you only reserved Tadpole after I told you you weren't on the list. Anyway, Shimmerpool's right. Ask Bramble, Sandy, or Blackclaw--SnowfallLet it snow, let it snow! 04:04, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw is under a different name as they changed their for the holidays. It is Rainwhisker and the 6th user on the page. Check for yourself and click the link and it will take you to Blackclaw's page. I for one only have to hover over a person's name to see what userpage it will take me too.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 06:17, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

Talk to Rainwhisker about it, Quailflight. I'm going to stay out of this one, because of her doing a rogue version when he's just a kitten. --Bramble-sama 22:54, January 4, 2010 (UTC)

You can keep this up for approval, since I reserved him in the wrong blank and you got him up first, so keep it. I'll remove him from my reservations (current projects list). --Happy New Year!09 00:09, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks really strange, it's lighter than the pelt. The shading is supposed to be darker the pelt, not lighter. Also, darken and blur the ear pink. There are some white pixels on his front left paw, and the eyes don't really look right. Look at Icethroat's tutorials to see how to do the kits's eyes--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:53, January 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Blackclaw let me keep the image, so I reuploaded it. The file is Tad5.--Quail! Meow! 06:54, January 7, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink and nose need to be a bit darker. People usually choose Rippletail as a good color. Also try to make the earpink as close to the same size as possible, right now his left ear is bigger than the right.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 03:30, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I changed the ear and nose colors. Anything else?--Quail! Meow! 00:48, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay...I'm pretty happy with my charart....but I'll reupload it...--QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 10:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-It doesn't look like I did much, but I was trying to make the ears a little lighter, and balance out the highlights. Any suggestions?----QuailflightTheAVATAR!Give me a mouse. NOW! 10:27, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'd personally advise you get rid of the highlights and just use shading on a kit. Thicken the neck shading and blend. Make the ear pink smaller and get a tiny size 3 brush to blur slightly. Also - take a darker reddish-pink colour such as on Crowtail or my awful image of Cloudspots ^_^ Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 18:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-lightened ears and nose, and got rid of highlights, as Sandy said.--Quail!Jack in the Box 21:00, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks too hot pink to me.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:26, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it looks more purple to me. Make it more like this- Blackclaw NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I tried to make the ears a little better.--Quail!Jack in the Box 03:26, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a redish color. IcestormHi There! 20:02, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-used more red in ears.--Quail!Jack in the Box 22:20, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's some lineart missing on the paws - check the kit blanks and replace it. The ear pink needs blending slightly (be carfeul not to blur the lineart) and the shading needs to be darker. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:48, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I redid the whole image, even though I think this is worst.--Quail!Jack in the Box 23:56, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a lot more, and thicken all of the shading a bit more. --Icy-chan 15:44, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred and thickened.Quail!Jack in the Box 05:31, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs blending and the ear pink/nose is too red. Make it a paler reddish-pink like Morningflower or Blackclaw OR a greyish-pink like Darkstar. ✐+ᖱ = 19:52, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yep what sandy said. IcestormHi There! 13:08, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐+ᖱ = 15:14, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work ✐+ᖱ = 10:48, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Timberfur (W) - Withdrawn By User

[[File:TimberFUR.png]]The section says it all. BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 02:34, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add a lot more shading, and blur it, also blur his ear pink. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 02:35, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Btw nice sig Insane. :) BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 02:43, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to his chest, and blur it as much as you can--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded. BlackyOMG 2010 IS ON IT'S WAY! 16:09, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

better, just add shading under his chin, and round out the shading on his haunch, it's sorta oddly shaped. Also make his ear pink a little bigger. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:31, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. BlacktailTalk! 00:25, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shadin a lot. And make the ear pink more of a reddish-pink color--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:43, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Eh, BlacktailTalk! 21:23, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

You want to withdraw this?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:28, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Mistyfoot (L)- Declined

[[File:Mistyfoot_2.png|thumb]] This is Mistyfoot as future leader. I would like an helpful suggestions on how to reupload and fix any of my mistakes. I would also like a tutorial on making the ear pink, I did an awful job. Silverthistle 20:21, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This is a very nice image, but I don't think you can do her as a leader until it actually happens, Sorry... insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:24, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

No you can't. If you do it won't be fair for the other people who want to do her (me.)--Nightshine 20:26, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Wait until the book comes out. ✐+ᖱ = 20:31, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (A) Declined

This is my 2nd try on making an apprentice, I don't think I did too well on shading but, what the hay! Silverthistle 20:37, February 2, 2010 (UTC) [[File:Sootfur_A.png]]

The shading looks lighter than the main pelt color. It should be darker AngelPaw 20:38, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and can't you only have one image up for approval at a time. You already have Honeyfern up don't you? AngelPaw 20:40, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Please take this down. You can only have one image up. Sorry. Birchy 20:47, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:59, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsetail(W)- Declined

[[File:Gorsetail_warrior2.png]] —Preceding unsigned comment added by Featherblaze (talkcontribs)

Beautiful! Just make the ear pink and add a pupil to the eyes.Hidden-Valentine ღ 18:43, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is great =) It doesn't look anything like her queen version though... ✐+ᖱ = 18:47, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

How's this?

I redid it. *post below* Featherblaze 18:58, January 24, 2010 (UTC)Featherblaze

Reopload an image over the same name and don't make a new section each time as this is over the limit.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:00, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, this is right on the limit, as one of the sections is a disscusion. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

I just merged the two sections and archived the discussion. The patches need to be more defined. ✐+ᖱ = 19:38, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Her queen image is short-haired. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:20, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is too bright. Would she need an alternate image since she is mentioned as a tom in TFA or just keep her a she-cat?AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 18:01, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

hmmm She had kits for StarClan's sake! Why can't the Erins just remember that? I don't think an alternative version is appropriate unless her appearance also changes because changing the gender is just one pixel in the eye... nobody looking at her pae will really notice so we can just say in her article that she was referred to as male in TFA. That's PC though ✐+ᖱ = 18:05, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

But what Mousetalon pointed out is right. Her queen image is short-haired NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:59, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy on the alternate version thing, but as for the actual image, I think the patches need to be more solid, and lighter, so it looks more like her queen image. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:21, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐+ᖱ = 11:03, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble-sama 01:23, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A)- Declined

Hi, this is Beewing. I've just finished my first charart. I'm not sure if it's bad or good, but do you approve of it? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Beewing (talkcontribs)


First things first, I removed the thumbnail, and put in the Full sized image. Also, you did the wrong eye. See the Apprentice tutorials for the right eyes. SwiftyHow's the prey running?

The line art looks strange. Blur the ear pink some more--Nightshine 01:45, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

I know why too Nightshine, she saved it as JPEG. From now on Beewing, try to save it as PNG. SwiftyHow's the prey running? [[File:Swiftpelt bluestar.png|60px]]

Also, this is the 36th image, and the page limit is 35, in the future, please be wary of the page limit. This is quite good for a first Charart, though. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 01:58, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blackclaw at the top is being withdrawn though.--Nightshine 02:03, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The eye is huge. Save Ashfur's apprentice image, upload it onto your art program and zoom in on the eye. Then copy the eye design from that--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:34, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

There are also eye diagrams on the tutorials. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:MothxMouse.png|60px]] 03:06, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Also, it's a JPEG. When you save it, there's a bar that says, 'JPEG: Good for most pictures', with a down arrow by it. Click it, and make it, 'PNG: Transparent, good- quality'. That will fix the problem. Try to remember that. I do it too. Birchy 17:39, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

After fixing the eye and file type, just blur the ear pink a little more, this is quite well done for a first image. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:29, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

the eyes look scary fix them Iceyfang 20:26, February 1, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

Please work on this, or it will be declined.--Darkhallows 05:58, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Declined ✐+ᖱ = 22:36, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Sootfur_kit19.png]] I know this is the 41st one, but there are 1 or 2 join requests and like 4 with a comments before approval on them. So here is one of my favorite ThunderClan cats as a kit! ------Night whisker98Merry Leaf-bare! 21:36, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shding alot more please. ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 22:12, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Better? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:16, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

abit more.And the shading near the left side of the head looks weird to me. ☮★Fire★☮ Starclan watchs over me★ 23:46, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and darken ear pink. --IcestormI LIKE TACO BELL!!! 01:50, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, how's this? And FirePelt, what do you mean by it looks weird. If you could help me, that would be great. ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 14:24, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good, but the lineart is a little patchy, and the ear pink is hardly visible.--Darkhallows 14:31, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Patchy how? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 15:32, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

It looks blurred in some places.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded... Anything else? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 14:02, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, the ear pink is too large and barely visible, and theres no dodging. Otherwise, it's great! :D SwiftpeltHow's the prey running?

I'm not sure about this, but highlights aren't required, although shading is, also I have blurred the shading to the max on pixlr, If you wanted to help me with the shading, that would be awesome, and about the earpink, what color should it be? ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:22, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

You're right about highlights, they're not required. And as for the ear pink, look at his warrior image for help on the color- Sootfur--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:45, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Soory, but uploads are disabled. I fixed the ear pink color though. ----Nightwhisker98Rawr! 20:33, January 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuloaded. better now? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 20:24, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading on his hind foot.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:41, January 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐+ᖱ = 19:12, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this ok? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:16, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the lineart for you, as you'd distorted it a quite bit... other than that, all I really see is that the hind paw needs a little more shading on it's far end, and to blur the existing shading. Also, don't upload a new file each time; just upload over the old file name. --Bramble-sama 02:35, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eyes. They look scary.Quail!Jack in the Box 06:43, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Scary How? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 13:46, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I think what Quaily means is that the eyes look sort of orange. I think. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 20:21, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading under the chin. ✐+ᖱ = 20:39, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I used his warrior image's eye color, but i'll fix it. --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 21:22, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

How would i fix the eyes? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 19:48, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Also add shading under the chin. ♥Ice♥♥storm♥[[File:Icestorm.deputy.png|60px]] 22:34, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Move the highlight on top of the pupil ✐+ᖱ = 15:16, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a tad gray.--Darkhallows 06:53, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me. Try to blur the shading on his paws some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:34, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐+ᖱ = 20:40, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, declined due to lack of work ✐+ᖱ = 10:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Rose(KP)- Declined

Well I tried to do her but she needs alot of work.Echoheart 14:00, January 24, 2010 (UTC)


Didn't I have her reserved, or did Echo have her first? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 15:23, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Mouse: you have Mistyfoot and Whitetail? Echoheart has Rose from what I can see ✐+ᖱ = 15:27, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

face palm* I had her reserved, but then I edited hger out. *another face palm* Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 15:42, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well, for the image Echoheart: The shading seems to be lighter than the pelt colour... you need to use the burn tool to shade. ✐+ᖱ = 16:20, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I personally think that she still needs alot of work.Echoheart 17:28, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too purplish, and she looks nothing like her sister, Lily. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 18:59, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Two cats wouldn't look exactly the same.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:02, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too purplish. Also, the shading is still lighter than the pelt and needs blending ✐+ᖱ = 19:05, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe it's just me, but her fur looks almost... greenish? Maybe make it more cream colored? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 19:21, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

I thought Nightfall had reseved this?Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 00:27, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I reserved it the day the kittypet blanks were approved. But I decided that I wanted somebody else to be able to do Rose, cuz in my opinion, doing Lily was fun. But I only had her reserved for a day or two. But Insaneular is right about her fur, it looks very green on my computer--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:10, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. To me, she looks ALOT better than before. Anything else?Echoheart 11:23, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

She looks better but there are bits of color outside of the lineart and places where the brown doesn't touch the lineart.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:11, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks very sudden in places. Blur it. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:MothxMouse.png|60px]] 00:06, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else?Echoheart 11:30, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

The brown still isnt touching the line art in some places. mostly the tail and front leg.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:19, January 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Do I need anything else?--Echoheart 12:10, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurred a lot more--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:50, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

The image looks very smudged. --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:18, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in over a week, please reupload soon or it will have to be declined--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:36, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work ✐+ᖱ = 11:27, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Blanks - Declined


Ok here are the Sharpclaw blanks from left to right it short hair male, short hair female, long hair male and long hair female. What do you think? AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 01:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

These are great! Maybe for the long haired you could make the face a bit shaggy.Nightshine 01:13, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Do you mean like add couple lines like what on the chest to show the fur? AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 01:17, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah.Nightshine 01:43, January 14, 2010 (UTC)
Reuploaded how is that? AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 02:50, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wait, these are really good, but I think Hawktalon (Or Flamingomom) had these reserved first. The date says Jan. 11 NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:02, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's great! But I guess Hawtalon did reserve it first. Maybe these could be something else? But there is nothing elseNightshine 03:03, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I guess you could ask Hawktalon if you could keep these. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:05, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Shot I looked but I guess I missed her. I spoke to her know I'm waiting to hear back. AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 03:34, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I kinda dought Hawktalon's on right now. You might have to wait until tomorrow NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:28, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

i heard back from Hawktalon she said that i could have it : ) AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 21:44, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thickin the line art for the features such as eyes and nose.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:46, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Really good! But maybe thicken the pupil in all the eyes. WetstarTaylor Swift! 22:13, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok before I edit all of them here is what one looks with thicker lines on the featues and thicker puplis does it look better? [[File:Sharpclaw_female_long_hair_editing.png]]Personaly I like the first ones better AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 22:19, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure about the pupils but I think the features look better.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:28, January 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've got a few things. First of all, they all look kinda sad, like their whiskers are all droopy and their eyes are flat. Both the ears and paws are too round. Sharpen the ears some, and as for the paws, make them a little more flat on the bottom. And then their elbows look a little too flappy, make them a little straighter NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:13, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

ok how is this? [[File:Sharpclaw_female_long_hair_editing2.png]] AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 00:33, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the "eyelashes" on the females should be at a more horizontal angle--Nightshine 00:43, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded like that? AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 00:55, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

That's better!--Nightshine 00:58, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add a line at where the muzzle begins, like on the leader images.Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 23:02, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Their backs should not be one equal slope, there should a small bump where the shoulder is after going down a little, then it down in the slope of the rest of thier back. You can look at sitting cat pictures for examples, such as this one: Link I know he's facing a different direction, but it's the same basic idea. Bramble-sama 02:14, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble's right about their backs. But also, could you upload the changes you made onto all of the blanks? It's getting kind of confusing--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:12, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Here is an example I made.[[File:Sharpclaw_Example.png]] Could you please add the muzzle line like I did? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 20:47, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

These are really good but it's been 10 days. Please work on them.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:34, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah sorry my computer had a virus and it took forever to get it taken care of AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 02:27, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded i replaced the orginal one with the latest version of themAkikoTokamo ~kyuu 02:40, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

The elbows on the shorthaired ones look kinda weird. Make them like the ones on the longhaired blanks--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:47, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded forgot to fix their elbows when i fixed the longhair's AkikoTokamo ~kyuu 03:20, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The front leg farthest from us looks a little fat compared to the other one. Maybe, make it a bit thinner?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:47, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

(Owlblaze ish speakin)Hi people, I kinda wanted to make sharpclaw blankes to see if they get approved. I hope you don't mind if I put them here. If you do, you can remove them: <img src="">

I made the shorthairs a little scruffy since I assumed the sharpclaws were not as well taken care of as warriors. (Owlblaze ish done speakin)

Umm, I'm sorry Owlheart but you're not even a member of this project. If yo want, I could add you on as an apprentice, but Akiko already has Sharpclaw blanks for approval. Even if you did join, you'd have to do something besides Sharpclaw blanks--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:23, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

That would be great Nightfall! I made a Heavypaw charart. I am going to post it below! And GL on getting your blanks approved Akiko! -Owlblaze (Oops, accidentally put Owlheart before! lol)

I like the second features better, actually. The eyes in the first feature look kinda weird.--Shaf Girl 02:46, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declinedMINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:12, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Feel free to resubmit after changes, Akiko. --Bramble 23:00, February 8, 2010 (UTC)