Smudge (KP) - Withdrawn

[[File:Smudge.png]]nobody has him up plus i really wanted to do him so please don't decline this! Echopaw 15:09, January

16, 2010 (UTC)

He looks nothing like his picture in Cats of the Clans.Look at that for a refrence.And theres no need for ear pink on the farthest ear.Also,it's to dark and looks more like a acute triangle,amke it alittle smaller and blur it. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 15:16, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't matter whether you really wanted to do him or not, Shruggy (Brambleclaw14) has him on his current projects. I am going to decline this, sorry. People 'reserve characters because they really want to do them, and if you want to put characters up either add them to your own list before anyone else does, or discuss it with the person who has it reserved before you post. Declined for said reasons.

Note: nobody has him up because the blanks have been approved not 5 minutes ago.

Also - approval has an 'a' not an 'e' ;)Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 15:32, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy Echopaw can do him. the thing I use for making then isn't working (nothing is working :[ )  Brambleclaw14 Talk 15:48, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, back up for approval. Sorry to hear that Shruggy. Echo - just remember for next time Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 15:55, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on the patches looks odd to me, or is it supposed to be like that?--MossI'm Up There! 19:03, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good, but i think it could use some more shading, and also, blur the patches a lot. The edges look rough now. ⓘⓝⓢⓐⓝⓔⓤⓛⓐⓡ 19:40, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, that's not exactly fair. I reserved him, and I thought nobody can take your reservation. Plus: I did him earlier, see? I thought I did a good job too. :( Swiftpelt 19:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

When you reserved him Brambleclaw14 had him first.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleclaw's reservation wasn't on there before the new Character thing. When I put it up there, nobody had it. Oh well.... :'( SwiftpeltHow's the prey running? 19:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Shruggy definitely had him first because I checked when I removed him from your current projects. Sorry Swiftpelt. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:57, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Echopaw,he looks nothing like his image in cats of the clans.In it,he's a black cat with small white spots on various places.Look in that book for a refrence once again. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 22:29, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

FirePelt: Give him/her a chance - it's only been a couple of hours; you can't expect everyone to edit an image that quickly. Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 22:30, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I know,but still.For some reason I get paranoid on things like this.I want them to be as accurate as possible.Also,his eyes are supposed to be amber. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Have a happy Valentineღ 22 22:33, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

thanks sandy and im a she! Echopaw 22:42, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, and Cats of the Clans it terribly inaccurate in some images. I never pictured Smudge like he was portrayed in that book. But our chararts don't really have to look like their images in Cats of the Clans. Take Heathertail for example. She looks nothing like she's supposed to in Cats of the clans, she's orange with purply eyes. But her charart was done beautifully, the way she was described in the book. So, I don't think that should be an issue --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:51, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Unfortunately, Smudge's base color is black. I guess you can replace the white with black, and the black with white.--Quail!Jack in the Box 23:20, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well wait a minute, we don't know that. There are so many mistakes in that book that we can't be sure. I think it's fine if we just keep it white with black patches.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:27, January 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think we need to go on written evidence as we cannot be sure the pictures are entirely correct seeing as they were an artist's own impression of the characters and not Erin Hunter's own work. As long as the image fits the book descriptions we have of him, I think it'll be okay Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 11:26, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, as for the image. The eyes do need to be amber, as that's been cited from the book. The ear pink looks too purple, make it more reddish like this -- Bone -- Blur the patches more, and add some more shading to the head --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED sorry well here he is Echopaw 22:51, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

The patches and earpink need to be blurred more.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED here is he any better? Echopaw 14:57, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

Right now it looks like there's lineart around the patches, it needs to be blended between the black and white to be a gray-ish color. For examples, look at Patchpelt, Mousewhisker, Toadstep, Crowfrost, Cloudspots, Smoky, Floss, Fritz, or Splash. --Icy-chan 15:56, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 16:35, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

The patches still need to be blurred a lot, and so does the ear pink. Also, there needs to be ear pink on his right ear also --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:51, January 18, 2010 (UTC)

No NIght, that ear is turned away from us. Blur the shading on his head. IcestormHi There! 18:20, January 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be a lot smaller, so it fits inside the ear. Blur as well, like Night says, on all the shading. Bramble-sama 02:08, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

reuploaded Echopaw 21:01, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is still purple. Look at Splash to get the right color, and then really blur it. Also, the shading on his head still needs to be blurred a lot. --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:29, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better! Echopaw 23:26, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Swiftpelt i took down your smudge cause it was really confusing me! Echopaw 00:39, January 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks very purple to me , and the shading needs blending ✐+ᖱ = 11:56, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 13:44, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little more. Also lighten the shading on his head. The ear pink looks very purple. Perhaps make it like Whitestorm. IcestormHi There! 01:16, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think that the ear looks really purple. Does anyone else agree? Maybe you should try and change the colour completely? You could also make the pink (purple) ear smaller? Fawnstorm 19:32, January 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink, and blue the shading, not that it's really needed. Apart from that, you're good to go! Birchy 17:32, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐+ᖱ = 10:56, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Uhh School work hard! so hard! ganna die! any ways here he is! the first part explains every thing;) style="font-family:Papyrus;border:2px solid; color:darkgreen;">echo paw 13:50, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Now the earpink is too bright. Try getting the color from another black cat since the ear is black.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 16:20, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 16:43, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks really weird.....maybe shrink it and then blur some more.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:40, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:40, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Echopaw 19:57, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink looks a tad too purple.--Shaf Girl 20:47, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's still way to purple. It's way to big, and it doesn't even look like you blurred, just smudged it a lot. Look at an approved kittypet for an example on how to do the ear pink. - Jigsaw, Seville, Princess--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:46, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Well most of it is the shading Echopaw 00:20, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

You shouldn't shade part of the earpink. Either shade that side of the face or leave it a single color. try looking at some other Kittypets.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:56, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow is right, and I think you should completely redo the ear pink. It looks smudged, not blurred. It needs to be smaller, and it's way to purple--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:14, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED any better? i tried my best! Echopaw 00:30, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit big. --AngelPaw 00:32, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's very bright pink. Make it darker and more discreet--MINNOWCLAW 00:03, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED <span style="font-family:Papyrus;border:2px solid; color:darkgreen;">[[User:Echopaw|<span style="background:chocolate; color:lavender;">echo</span>]][[User Talk:Echopaw|<span style="background:chocolate; color:red;"> paw</span>]] 00:48, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink is still way to big. Look at Jigsaw--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:21, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look strange, maybe make them bigger.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 17:48, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Stupid ear pink!!! some one help me with the ear pink! EcHoPaW 70px 17:43, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I've done the ear pink for you.

I feel really bad saying this but the shading and highlights are a complete mess as soon as you blow it up a few hundred times. I did my best to blend them a little for you... Also, most of the lineart is blurred and some is missing. I think you may be better starting over on this. ✐+ᖱ = 20:06, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy thank you and i redid the whole thing. EcHoPaW 70px 21:48, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

You need to color his nose and the shading on the white parts of him is too dark.--AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:16, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add nose color.--Nightshine 02:55, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Does Smudge need the disc on his collar coloured in? I wasn't sure if it was necessary, only the other kittypets had coloured collor discs. I think it needs colouring in. Really good! :D Mistyheart 16:35, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Im coming with all this! EcHoPaW 70px 21:13, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

hh i want to withdraw this i want to do diesel. EcHoPaW 70px 00:17, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving, then. Bramble 01:49, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wolfheart(W)-Withdrawn by User

[[File:Wolfheart(W).png]]My first warrior! Comments? There are 2 discussions, so this should be equal to 35. §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

Blur the shading, it looks pretty uneven.--Shaf Girl 23:38, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood.

Its blended well, but the shading looks bumpy. Even it out some more. --ChelseaFC 05:12, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, and there isn't any earpink. ChelseaFC 05:13, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I need to re-do the shading again, just tell me.§₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 12:43, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Your shading and highlights need a lot of attention with the blend tool. ✐+ᖱ = 15:52, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I redid the image with a new shading technique I made. Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 17:40, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, Swifty, this is great for your first warrior! But the highlights look a tad bright, and the shading a little dark... blur it all alot, and it should help tone it down. Be careful not to blur lineart, 'cause I see you have a little on the front leg. ßąէωïиց 18:32, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Any better? §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 18:59, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and highlighta are far too concentrated, look at [[File:TutorialCatsie.png]] for reference. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 21:19, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

In her kit picture, the shading is really dark §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 23:37, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Well, that doesn't necessarily mean that her warrior image should have dark shading. Lighten it, it looks way to dark NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:09, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 22:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks very blurred in some places, and she needs ear pink--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 22:54, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks blurred along the back and on the tail, it seems there is a thin line of white pixles. She also needs ear pink. Also, the shading & high

lights need blurred, alot. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 23:45, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm just no good at gray cats. I'll do another, please decline this. §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 02:36, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

You sure? If you are, then type at the top, withdrawn by user, and I'll delcline it--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:43, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyfern (A)- Declined

This is Honeyfern as an apprentice, please don't put up for deleation! I've already had enough stress today! Just give me some tips! Silverthistle 21:14, February 1, 2010 (UTC) [[File:Honeyfern_A.png]]

This is pretty good for a first time, but could you make it a little more golden like her warrior image? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:16, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes cover the lineart in some places.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 23:35, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't look much like the warrior verisionHoneyfern.warrior, take the stripes off her chest and make her more golden.Darkhallows 04:43, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

You asked for this not to be declined Silverthistle, but in order for that to happen you either have to work on this or give a reasonable reason why you can't (and prior to actually being away). This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please do so or it will be declined. ✐+ᖱ = 16:05, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry. I was very very busy that week, and you may decline it. Silverthistle 03:55, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it won't be declined if you work on it. You have about another two or three days to reupload NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:04, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 02:37, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Hollyleaf (A)- Declined

[[File:Hollyleaf.app321.png]] Pretty good, huh? LovefireValentines Day '10 02:58, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

It's a little hard to see the shading, either darken it or if it's already too black to darken more maybe add some highlights so that it shows more. Also blur the earpink a tad more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 03:13, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Uh, guys? Hollyleaf has an apprentice image already. It's great to see you Hawkfire! Maybe you could turn her into a different apprentice? If you made her a tom by erasing the eyelash, then turning the eye blue, this could be Reedwhisker's apprentice image--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:07, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

  • facepalm* I'm such an IDIOT! Well, that's fifteen minutes of my life wasted. Just decline this, then. LovefireValentines Day '10 15:52, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Declined by a confused Sandy who doesn't know whether Hawkfire is a part of this project or has quit anymore... ✐+ᖱ = 16:38, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarpaw (A) - Declined


This is my first charart so it's not that good. ^^; How can I improve it? Lotusfire 17:08, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is a really good charart for your first one,but,which ever Cinderpaw this is,they both have a apprentice charart.Im sorry. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 17:39, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

FirePelt is right. Perhaps take the pixels from the eye and change the eye colour to amber and this can be Cedarheart's app pic? ✐+ᖱ = 17:53, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, good idea Sandy :) Try that Lotus! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:01, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

I agree.But s/he might have to change the pelt color,seeing as it is darker than the elder and warrior image. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ Valentineღ 22 20:13, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nothing the dodge tool cant fix.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:21, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

In case you didn't know, the dodge tool is like the shading tool, except it lightens. It looks like a little microphone. Get a large brush size and just run over the image a few times, and erase a few of the pixels of the eye to make it look masculine. That's about it. --Bramble-sama 02:04, January 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I changed it, it might not be blurred enough, but how is it? Lotusfire 03:20, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

It still needs to be lightened a bit. Look at Cedarheart's elder and warrior images to get an idea of how light it should be - Cedarheart --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:23, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's lighter now, I'm still a compy art noob. >.<;;; Lotusfire 03:38, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks fine to me now. Just blend the shading and highlights Lotus. ✐+ᖱ = 11:57, January 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I blurred more. Lotusfire 01:59, January 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's kind of hard to see the ear pink. Maybe make it more of a reddish color, like his elder image. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:44, January 26, 2010 (UTC)

There is a little shadow under his tail.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:43, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in over a week. Please reupload soon, or it will be declined--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:08, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lotus asked me to repost this for her. Is it better? insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:23, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Her neck shading is very big. Make it a little smaller--MINNOWCLAW 00:04, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Cedarheart is a tom, not a sh-cat--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:20, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

  • Hits herself on the head* Gosh sorry, when I see c...paw I think Cinderpaw.*hits herself again and falls in the snow.*MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:15, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The neck shading still needs to be smaller, as well as the far hind leg/belly area shading lightened. Also add a little shading on the shoulder. Bramble 22:58, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 19:33, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Diesel (Lo)- Declined

[[File:Deisel.png]]Ahh the handsome Deisel, how is he? comments? Well i know im over page limit but there are 2 disscutions. Lovepaw My Talk! 00:59, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his back look more like patches.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:02, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Diesel is a kittypet, isn't he? ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 01:05, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

nevermind well umm he said he was a loner...Lovepaw My Talk! 01:09, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, he was a kittypet. I don't have the book, but I read it in Barnes and Noble and that's what it looked like. And I thought that Moss and Stealth had this reserved--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:21, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

i had him resureved a long time ago Lovepaw My Talk! 01:26, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - I never reserved this. You must have been thinking of a different user. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:29, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Echo! Man I'm such a Mousebrain! As for the image, he did say he was a loner, but wasn't he classified as a kittypet? On his page under names, it says, Kittypet: Diesel --LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Well, true. But I haven't read a lot of books so I don't know. For the image, make the stripes thiner. Ice Happy Valentines! 01:59, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, also blur and thicken the shading.

When i read the manga, it looked to me like he was more pale brown, almost like Longtail, but a little darker... rather than this brown. But if other people don't have an issue with the color then it's fine. Also, repeating what others said, thicken the shading and blur the stripes. Not bad though. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 15:05, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I believe I was the other user. :/ I had reserved him as a kittypet. --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 15:41, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

As far as I remember he is a kittypet, not a loner. ✐SaNdY 16:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declining due to the fact he's a kittypet; he takes food from Twolegs and lives with them, so I'm pretty sure that classfies him as a kittypet. Echopaw, if you want to do his kittypet version, talk with Mumble about it, as she wants to do it as well. Not here; on your respective talk pages. --Bramble 16:34, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L) - For aproval

[[File:Furled_Bracken.png]]Well, there are over 2 in approval stage, so... Evanphoto 05:17, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I'll have to decline this. Nothing over 35.--Darkhallows 05:27, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mothpelt (L) - Declined

[[File:MothstarL.png]]There are 7 with CBA and 1 disscussion, so I'm preety sure this is not over the limit. If it is, take it down... well, my first Leader, Comments? --∑✐ᖱ ᶊ⍶ᵰ∑♪ᗫᎽ 18:48, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more. Icestorm 19:04, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and ear pink, and I can't really see the nose color. Bat 20:48, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisker dont you already have Patch up? You're only allowed one image up at a time.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:53, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ash is correct. Declined for above reason. ✐SaNdY 21:08, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

He never became a leader! Echo Rocks! My Talk! 00:46, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Night, that was misleading though, on his article it said; Names: Leader: Mothpelt. So don't feel bad, but that was just a mistake--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:50, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sasha (KP) - Declined


So, there are two discussions, and I withdrew Hawkfrost, so here's his mom, Sasha. Yes, I know the collar tag is green. I tried to make it look like her collar in Into the Woods. Comments? Bat 14:12, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good but I think the darker parts of her fur need to be a darker color. Just a tad. Good job.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 15:10, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

OK sorrry Blue but I just saw Sasha 's KP image already up. It's the 2nd pic, sorry.  :( --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 15:42, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

OK forget the last 2 comments, they are taking it down (I think). This is really good. Her collar looks a little weird but its not bad. also, like i said before I think the dark fur needs to be a little darker.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:04, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Actually the Sasha thats the second image has been up since January, Blue didn't reserve her until yesterday. In all fairness Firepelt did have her first.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:35, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Sorry Blue, but FirePelt has had this on the page for ages... ✐SaNdY 21:19, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker(MCA) - Declined

[[File:Featherwhisker.png]] I know it says it's the 40th, but five of the messages are unrelated to the chararts, making mine the 35th. Well, what do you think? It's my very first Charart! It was really hard, but I think it's ok. I wasn't sure if the herbs looked ok, so I put them like that. Just a little question, say someone said change the herbs to green, I edit it, and then what? Do I upload the new one? Anyway, comments?

Edit: Everytime I upload it, it's pixelated. I don't know how to change it without doing it again, and making it pixelated.Birchy 18:09, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ok when you reupload it go to File:Featherwhisker.jpg then go down and you should see upload new file os something like that cick it and then upload the new character art, I'll say something about the pic but I've got to eat frist :)  Brambleclaw14 Talk 18:18, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thanks Bramble! Birchy 18:19, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Back :) on the pic yep I think you should make the herbs green look at Jayfeather you get the color :) also call me Shruggy as Bramble is called Bramble :) and good character art  Brambleclaw14 Talk 19:07, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Ok then. And, by the comment, do you mean call you Shruggy on the Bramble14 account, and Bramble, on the Bramble account? Birchy 19:20, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Birchy 19:28, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble and Brambleclaw14 (aka Shruggy) are two different users. ✐+ᖱ = 20:32, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

It looks pixlated. That is because you saved as a JPG. Redo the image as a PNG. MaplefernHi everyone! 21:25, January 29, 2010 (UTC)

So, do I need to redo the image? Birchy 10:05, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I decided to do it again. It didn't take long, besides, I don't know how to change it from JPEG, to PNG. Birchy 10:28, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and add a highlight to the herbs.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:30, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid it again, because it looked strange. my pixel problem is solved: I just need to remember to put png. Birchy 15:10, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blend the shading. ✐+ᖱ = 20:37, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't get it blurred without blurring the lineart. Birchy 21:41, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

The way to not blur lineart is by using layers. The way to do it in most image programs is the same. First, open up your image, then, use the wand select tool to select all the lineart. Then Cut it (Control/Command+X) and make a new layer on the image, then paste the lineart into that layer, now you can do the color separately from the lineart. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 15:27, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐+ᖱ = 11:28, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. NEVER GET AN EVIL COMPUTER!! I would have worked on it, but my stupid computer wouldn't let me on Pixlr. GRR! Anyways, I blurred the shading. I can't get the layers to work. It either doesn't work at all, or it blurs the lineart. 11:50, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading. Darken it/lighten highlights (one or both) and maybe add a highlight to the top of the head?--HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:05, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ✐SaNdY 11:07, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work ✐SaNdY 21:27, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (A) - Withdrawn By User


Gawd, my worst attempt at copying an image ever. Alright, so, I looked at Hawkfrost's picture, and I'm like "OMG How can such an evil cat look so awesome???" So I decided to make his apprentice image. I have two versions, the first one is the best in my opinion. So, which do you guys think is better? Comments? Batwing 21:21, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I like the first one, but I think you should make the white underbelly go higher up, you can barely see it. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:32, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

So, make it go up as high as #2, or lower than that? Batwing 22:01, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

AS high as #2 sounds good. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:03, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good. Can you make the earpink a little bit smaller.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:49, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Not a fail at all! Yes, the first one, and adding to above comments: either darken the shading a little or add a little highlight along the middle of his pelt. He looks awesome!HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 17:20, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

All right, first one it is. I'll make the ear pink smaller, make the white underbelly go up higher, and add a highlight to the middle of the pelt. Batwing 19:15, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - How is he now? Batwing 19:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good! i think the white should come up more towards his back a little more.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

So you mean the white near the haunch should come up more? Batwing 15:00, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

OK, I got GIMP and I'm going to re-do him. (: Bat 15:43, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

This needs serious work; withdrawing. Bat 02:51, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Ivytail_Warrior.png]] Now, no madder what, I don't want this deleted. I will work on this one, instead of quititing like before. Silverthistle 21:14, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

not bad but you need to put for approval in the title and A stands for apprentice not warrior. Either fix that or change the blank.The arm looks a bit odd, try connectin the color.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 21:18, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I've fixed the header. (: This is good, but your patches look a bit strange, and the white on the chest needs to be blurred. I also don't see much shading. Batwing 21:24, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, she looks nothing like her queen image. You chose a pale yellow color for the tortoiseshell parts instead of ginger. And the white part is way to big, it needs to be smaller - [[File:Ivytail2.png]]

--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:19, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

If you're using pixlr, use colordropper. oh,and i'm doing Ivytail's apprentice version, so you know, be mistaken or something. ≈Ivy-sama≈ 03:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I used that image when I made the charart! Geese, what did I do?! Why don't you tell me how to make it then? Ah? Silverthistle 21:14, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, there's no need to lose your temper. You need to use the eye dropper tool to make the patches the same color as the queen version; also make them smaller and more separated. Shrink the white on her belly a bit and blur it. We'll go from there. --Bramble 22:21, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ahh... ok. I'm using Icethroats Tortishell 2 on her tutorial, is that ok? I'm sorry, but Nightfall just makes me angry. Please don't let him/her comment about this. Oh, and thanks. Im editing it now.Silverthistle 02:07, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think it's alot more better. I just need to smudge the colors a bit, right? Silverthistle 03:01, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

You dont need the yellowish color for patches and you forgot to add the earpink.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 03:27, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded They're. I like it, but I think I should smudge them a bit. Should I? (Yes's or no's?) Silverthistle 05:50, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur them, not smudge them LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 09:13, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I said I didn't want any of your comments on here, Nightfall! errr... I did what I thought I needed. And yes I did blur them, are you pleased Lovefall? Who's Nightfall. Silverthistle 15:22, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Night: The should look somewhat smudged. silverthistle: You put work up for everyone to comment on. Imagewise the color of her patches still looks too yellow to me.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 16:41, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, calm down, Silverthistle. Nightfall did nothing to you, no need to harrass her. And Ashshadow's right, you put up images for everyone to comment on. Image-wise, there seem to be a bit too many patches, or the patches are too big. Batwing 17:41, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Enough. I have struck the attacks against Nightfall and don't expect to see any more. If you don't like her fine, but there's no need for disrespect or a disregard for her comments.

As for the image - I think it's lacking the smooth finish of the queen version. You need to blow it up to about 800% and take the blur tool and very carefully blend all the patches and shading. Also, I don't think you've quite got the brownish-orange right. ✐SaNdY 17:52, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

What in the world did I say to make you so mad? I meant absolutely no offence at all! And Ashshadow is right, I'am just trying to help you get the image approved LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 21:25, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Silverthistle,for the color of the orange patches,use color dropper near the bottom of the block,and make the patches smaller.I'll show you my apprentice picture,if you like.≈Ivy-sama≈ 10:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't harass her. If I did, I would have: caused extreme and/or countiueous annoyence or threats. Which I did neither. I do think you deserve a proper apolige Nightfall, so I am deeply sorry for my awful behavior. Do you accept? *holds breath* Silverthistle 17:35, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I accept :) --LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 21:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, and you're back in the room. Back to the image now =) The patches look like they're painted on rather than a part of her pelt. You need to use the blur tool to blend them in. Same goes for the white fur transition. ✐SaNdY 10:56, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

The line art looks a bit strange.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:34, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, fix the lineart, blur the patches, make the ear pink bigger and blur the white fur transition. Icestorm 17:11, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Adding to Icestorm's comment, darken the yellow patches. XD ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 18:19, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ok, and I have a simple question. How do you people answer back and comment so quickly? I mean like, the main charart people. Sandy and Bramble. Silverthistle 18:47, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

What do you mean how? I'm here every day if that's what you mean... I just spend a lot of time going through images ^_^ ✐SaNdY 21:33, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, then you anwsered my question! Also, how do I add myself to the reserved charart list on the project main page? Or could you do it, please? ♣Silverthistle 00:55, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I added you :) LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 05:00, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights and smudge the edges of the patches ^^ ♫ Mistyheart ♫ 60px 10:03, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Misty, add Highlights, I can't see any! XD! Fawnstorm 10:27, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Only add highlights if you want too but you need to darken the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:37, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded 'Smudged the stuff, and added highlights!' ♣Silverthistle 15:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Withdrawn ✐SaNdY 16:05, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar (W)- Withdrawn

[[File:Blackstar(W).png]]. 1 discussion so this is within the limit. Comments?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think the black on the paws should extend a bit further up is front leg, and the black on his hind paws too. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 20:29, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I compared it to his deputy image and onlt the back paw closest to us would need to be made a bit longer. What does everyone else think?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:56, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's fine, it goes the same length as on the deputy image, rogue image, and leader image. This looks really good, but the ear pink looks a tiny bit purple-ish. Jist fix that and it should be good. --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 21:04, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I got the color from the leader version. Should I use the color from the deputy version?HaikageAsh's Talk 21:07, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 21:34, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded . HaikageAsh's Talk 21:39, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Um, we never saw him as a warrior, did we? Only deputy, rogue, and leader, right? Maybe it's just slipping my mind... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I guess i mistook one of his appearences as deputy as one as a warrior. Unless he was seen as a warrior in BP, I guess I'll have to withdraw this. Can someone check please.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:10, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, he didn't appear at all in BP :( Sorry, I wasn't trying to be mean, but I was just pointing it out. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 22:12, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

No need to worry I'm not mad at you, just wish I knew this before I posted this. I might check to see if there is a cat I could change this too if I remove the black paws.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:17, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to switch the blank and eye color and turn this into Mothflight.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Mothflight has a warrior image. Icestorm 22:26, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Icestorm. I'm withdrawing this now.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:36, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

this looks kool how do i make??? 1------littletigress10---------

Withdrawn LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 06:56, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (K) Withdrawn


Hi! This is my first charart. It's Icicle the kit from the Ravenpaw's Path Manga series. Please leave comments and stuff so I can fix it. Also, as an apprintice I want to say Bluestar's tutorial was very helpful. Thank you Bluestar! I had no clue what to do! This isn't very good but like I said, it's my first cat. Tell me what to do and thanks! May StarClan light your path!Artimas Hunter 19:14, January 8, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay, first of all in needs to be full size, right now it's thumb nail. Second, I see you've saved it in jpg format. It's a way better idea to save it in either png. or gif. Third, the background needs to be transparent right now it's black. Fourth, the eyes need eye white. Look at this for help--User:Icethroat21/Tutorials. Fifth, the ear pink is to hot pink, make it lighter and then blur. Sixth, she's supposed to be pale gray, with a white stripe on her forhead, a white chest, see here -Icicle She just looks white. Darken the gray on her pelt, and blend the spots where it's supposed to be white--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:23, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Glad I could help! Ok, go back and save it in your image program, but save it as a PNG, so the background will be transparent. You need to make the white mark very, very pale gray, and darken the pelt color. The ear pink looks too hot pink - see the chart on my tutorials for reference. He needs highlights, and the shading needs to be darkened/thickened. The eyes also need a glare (little white dot). See Icethroat's tutorials on how to do the eye. --★ Batwing ☽ ⋆Deputy⋆ 23:09, January 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for your edits! I changed it so it fits both of your suggestions!Artimas Hunter 17:11, January 9, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Better. Now blur the white parts.--:) Mousetalon Meow to me! 19:04, January 9, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Artimas Hunter 20:02, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

This looks good =) You need to blur the white a bit more though - try looking at some other patched cats to see how much to blur. Also, the shading needs to be a bit thicker and blended in more. Look at Applefur's kit version for an example as to how I would shade a kit. Be careful not to blur the lineart though. This is a great start to a first image =) Ѕд₦₫y ♪ 20:30, January 10, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you so much! I think it turned out okay too. :D Is this better?Artimas Hunter 21:01, January 10, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

This is really good but, darken the earpink a tad.--AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 21:09, January 11, 2010 (UTC)

Do you think this is better? I'm so excited for it to be approved! I hope it's soon!00:05, January 12, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay sorry if this goes into another chart, my computer's got a problem, anyways here is Icicle again for approval. Comment back! I think she's almost ready for approval but I am kinda biased on the opinion!  :D Artimas Hunter 21:42, January 13, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Hi! I know I'm being really impatient but I'm bored and no one has comented for days. Would someone have mercy and comment PLEASE??!! I want her to be approved cause I made 2 other chararts that are ready to go when she gets approved.Artimas Hunter 22:10, January 14, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

The highlight looks too bright Icecloud33 00:25, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think you're looking at the white chest and think theyre highlights. The earpink color still isnt quite right, try a color like Tess or Husker and blur it.The font is actin up on me T.T AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:42, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you soooooooooooo much for commenting! i think I was about to explode!  :D I see what you mean aboutt the font.....anyways, here is Icicle revised! Ashshadow is right, she has a white chest not highlights but if those were highlights they would be WAY to bright! What do you think? I'm so excited!Artimas Hunter 01:28, January 15, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

File:Hollykit(NP).png - Okay, I know this is my own image and I don't normally give them as examples, but you need to make the shading thicker and darker and blurred. You could also use File:Wolfkit.2.pngЅд₦₫y ♪ 18:29, January 15, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better?Artimas Hunter 23:50, January 15, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Blur the shading some more.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 02:07, January 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?Artimas Hunter 20:28, January 18, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Getting there =) Add some shading under the neck and on the face ✐+ᖱ = 19:11, January 20, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Thanks, I hope I get done soon! It's turning out way better then I thought it would!Artimas Hunter 22:11, January 21, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

Okay, now blend the shading ✐+ᖱ = 20:38, January 23, 2010 (UTC)

Better? It's not blurring well biut that might just be me. Do you think it needs more?Artimas Hunter 00:05, January 25, 2010 (UTC)Artimas Hunter

A little more. Also - you seem to have hit the lineart in places. ✐+ᖱ = 15:15, January 30, 2010 (UTC)

I did it. It's not blurring well, I think I burned it too much. Do you think I should start over?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:54, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I would say so only because the lineart would be hard to fix.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 19:28, January 31, 2010 (UTC)

I urned it andblurred it too sloppily. I'm going to go redo it now. Thanks. --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 00:47, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, the redone Icicle! She's a lot better with the blurring and shading!--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:02, February 1, 2010 (UTC)

I cant see the shading.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:51, February 2, 2010 (UTC)

Can you see it now?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 00:52, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

yes but make it darker.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:59, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Dark enough?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 22:29, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlights a lot.--MINNOWCLAW 00:01, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Better?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 22:58, February 4, 2010 (UTC)

Not really, it just looks lie a white blob on her head and chest. Maybe darken the highlight a bit and then blur. Just a thought.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 16:08, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I'm trying to blur it as much as I can and I do't know if this is any better. Is it good? Sorry :( --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:43, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The white chest is blurred good but make the mark on her head more stripe like. Also darken/add shading on the legs.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 00:17, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Is this done well enough?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:18, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

You're gonna hate me for this but you need to darken the shading. Also make the earpink a little bit bigger.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:35, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Aw. I don't hate you! Is this dark enough?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:09, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Now thicken it some.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:16, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

And blur it too.HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 02:06, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I don't really get what you mean by thickening it but is this right?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 14:54, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Not exactly. I left a message on your talk page about it cause it was kinda long. For the image can you make the earpink a little bit bigger and blur it some more.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 15:05, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Ash. Is this far out enough?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 15:23, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

yes just darken and blur.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 15:25, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is this dark/blurred well enough? Happy Valentines Day to all!--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:13, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Have mercy and comment!!!!!! I'm going insane!!!!!--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 15:11, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart on her back is very blurred LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 05:03, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I also see a lack of shading under the chin and on the face... make it just as thick and dark as the body shading you have, and blend it all a little more. ✐SaNdY 12:50, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy, is this done correctly? Night, I dont know what you mean, the back ;looks fine to mme. Thanks.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 22:49, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I meant the shading there looks very bumpy--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:07, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry guys, you are all being a great help but everytime I try to fix her she looks horrible! I' going to try something easier for my first charart perhaps. Thank you all so much for being paitent with me and all. —Preceding unsigned comment added by Artimas Hunter (talkcontribs)

Archiving. --Bramble 16:52, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Scourge (KP) - Withdrawn


I love Scourge! "Gasp!" I hear you exclaim. "Are you a nutcase?" I hear you ask. No, I am no nut, let alone a case of one. Scourge had a rough kithood, the way I felt about him changed forever when I read The Rise of Scourge. And, he did rid the world of Tigerstar. "Hoorah!" I hear you call. That's more like it. "Enough of my craziness!" I yell in response. "Here is Scourge, back when he was an adorable kittypet named Tiny." Comments? Bat 21:07, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is good but does he need an adult kittypet picture? if he does I think the white paw hould be hidden.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:09, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Socks and Ruby have KP pics. As for the paw, his rogue image was turned to the left and his front paw was white, so this paw would be white. Anything else? Bat 21:25, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but Socks and Ruby grew up as kittypets, and Scourge ran away as a kit. Personally, I don't think he needs this image, but it's not my place to say for sure... ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 21:26, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Insane. As for the paw it should be black because it's his right paw.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:29, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry Blue. This is wonderful, but he was never a kittypet as an adult--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:39, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the title for you from 'For Approval" to declined. Can I do that? Icestorm 21:03, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Let's give Blue another day or two to decide what she wants to do with this. If she doesn't respond, or chooses to withdraw, then this can be declined--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:51, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

No, there's really nothing else I can use this for. ): Bat 17:20, February 20, 2010 (UTC)


[[File:Tallpoppy.eldershort.png]]Ta-da! Like? §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 22:25, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes dont look much like the ones on her queen version and you need to blur the shading and highlights more.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 22:28, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes some more. The ear pink should be in the center of her ear.--Nightshine 22:41, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. The ear pink needs moved, the stripes don't look like her queen version, and the shading needs to be darker than the stripes. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ 30px 22:58, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

And the eyes need to be more yellow, like her queen version. ChelseaFC 23:00, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you never blured it,Lovepaw My Talk! 23:38, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 01:36, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the bits where you have used dodge, and fix the earpink like Nightshine said. This is good though. XD Mistyheart 16:14, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Remember that when you use the dodge tool, spread it out so it isn't too concentrated. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 23:26, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes I agree. I might still only be an apprentice, but I think u need 2 spread out the dodge tool more (try the blurry size 70 thats what i use a lot) BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

It doesnt look like you changed anything.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:42, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I did do the dodge tool like that Mouseheart. Reuploaded §₩1ƒ₮¥Mice taste goooood. 12:38, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights still look pretty concentrated, and also, it looks like the stripes are soming off the shading, cna you make the shading darker than the stripes?HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Also you need to center the earpink.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 15:45, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

(I missed this) And the little dash on the chest is blurred a lot. HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:49, February 12, 2010 (UTC

Really good Swifty! No offence or anything but she looks a bit like she has a plastic covering on!?! XD! Fawnstorm 16:52, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur th highlights to the max, thinin the tabby stripes and could you fix the blurred lineart? Ice Happy Valentines! 15:58, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Use dodge tool size 70 or 50 (the blurry ones; not the regular circle ones, if u know what im talking about)BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:11, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Icestorm 16:39, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Not quite yet it won't. You have today and tomorrow to reupload as 12 + 7 = 19. Then another 24 hours before this will be archived. ✐SaNdY 11:58, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. Icestorm 18:03, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still needs to be fixed--Nightshine 23:07, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now you need to work on this or it'll have to be declined. ✐SaNdY 22:36, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Take it down. See why on my user page. §₩1ƒ₮¥Happy St. Patrick's Day! 14:15, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the title from from approval to withdrawn for you.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:46, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Molepaw (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Molepaw.kit.png]] Well, this one is... bad. Constructments? ✐SaNdY 13:58, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a touch. This is amazing Sandy! MaplefernCarrying the torch... 13:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Maple. Reuploaded - I braved the horrors of GIMP and it's blur tool for this. ✐SaNdY 14:19, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Lol, "horrors of GIMP"? I'm making a GIMP how-to today so everyone stops ragging on it. It's an awesome program, if confusing at first :) Awesome image, though, can't see anything wrong. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 15:33, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

lol - I just can't use it. I'm getting better though. ✐SaNdY 15:35, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

On his article, it says he has amber eyes. Should't his image have amber eyes?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:42, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Depends... can it be referenced? I don't remember any colour being mentioned at all... He was only ever seen as a young kit. I'll happily change both this and his apprentice image if a reference can be found. ✐SaNdY 20:47, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

There couldn't have possibly been a reference, as we only ever saw him with his eyes closed. Unless Viki told someone in an Erin Hunter Chat--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:46, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I don't remember it. I'm going to remove amber from his page as it can't be cited. If you don't mind, I'd rather keep them blue as both Cinderheart and Poppyfrost have blue, as well as his Grandparents Whitestorm and Willowpelt... ✐SaNdY 17:47, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that's true. I say keep them blue (That rymes XD) Okay, as for the image I'd blur the shading more, especially under the chin LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:03, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

There are a few white pixels near his right paw. Fill those in--Nightshine 23:06, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Sandy, I noticed something. I was flipping through Sunset to cite Molepaw's description, and I can't find where it says he's gray. Is it in any of the books, or did Viki comfirm it? LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:50, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Night, you're right. I checked through the whole of Sunset and Insane looked at Twilight for me. Nowhere does it give his description, except to say he was the large (which I have cited). Withdrawing for these reasons. Will archive later. ✐SaNdY 14:29, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Smoky (KP) - Declined

[[File:SmokyKP.png]] Swiftpelt just withdrew Tallpoppy, so I figured it was ok to put Smoky up. If this is over the limit, feel free to take this down. Comments/Criticism? --Rainwhisker 16:16, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think it might be 36th but this is amazing! Just how I imagined him! Make his Ear Pink a bit more solid, the top is lighter than the bottom. Fawny 60px 16:33, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, was Smoky even a Kittypet? I thought he was a loner and that is what his current image is...........Fawny 60px 16:34, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

His page doesn't say anything about him being a kittypet. I think he was just a barn cat.HaikageAsh's Talk 17:58, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Same. Unless being fed by Twolegs counts as being a kittypet? Fawny 60px 18:04, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, he was classified as a loner, his article says nothing about kittypet GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 20:00, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yes; I'll have to decline this due to reasons above. He isn't a kittypet so much as a loner, he doesn't have a collar, and he and his family fend mostly for themselves, without the twolegs. --Bramble 20:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oh sorry! I thought since he was being fed by Twolegs he was a kittypet. Can I archive this or will you? Rainwhisker 21:20, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get it. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:38, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudberry (W)-withdrawn

[[File:CloudberryW.png]]welll this is terrible so any suggestions? Echo Rocks! My Talk! 10:59, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Firstly blur all the shading, it's really dark. The eyes look a bit weird and make the pink ear a bit less....bright. It looks sort of baby pink, if you see were I'm coming from? Fawny 60px 11:26, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

You should also blur the earpink after you do everything Fawny said. And I don't see any shading on the stomach. Echoheart 11:49, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

re-uploaded Echo Rocks! My Talk! 12:06, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink looks a bit purple. Fawny 60px 12:10, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is really dark. lighten and blur it some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 12:30, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks strange. Like she is blind. Can you fix it?--Nightshine 22:17, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think if your going to make the shading that dark you should definetly blur it and I agree it looks like she is blind. Moonpelt1786 04:49, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Moonpelt, it's good to comment on other's images but there isn't a point on commenting on an image that is withdrawn.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:38, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:21, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderheart (A)- Declined


This is Cinderheart as an apprentice for approval. I've been working on it with Minnowclaw (my mentor) for awhile now and I'd love for all sorts of comments. Thanks! SpottedheartHappy Valentine’s Day! 17:53, February 15 2010 (UTC)

Run the brush tool over the tabby stropes then blur, darken shading then blur, fix the eye and blurred lineart. Then do the eye like here Icestorm 17:56, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cover the little strip of fur not shaded on the back.--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 20:17, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks a bit small and is also the 36th image. NVMAshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:23, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Really beautiful Spotty!! Just do what all teh other users said and maybe blur teh ear pink a bit more. Other than that I love it!


21:14, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Add eye white, and she doesn't have a white underbelly, it's gray--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:15, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't the right size it should be. It looks too blurry--Nightshine 22:39, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's thumbnail sized. And it does look blurry. Bat 01:02, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Apprenticelongf Save this to your computer and redo the image in the full size. Be really careful not to blur the lineart. ✐SaNdY 15:45, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sandy's right. But, this image looks very familiar. And I mean, really familiar..... --LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 04:27, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

It probably looks familiar because Spottedhead put it up before.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:36, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. --Bramble 17:28, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 16:53, February 25, 2010 (UTC)