Sorreltail (A) - Declined

[[File:Sorreltail (A).png]]Well here is my first tortie. tell me how bad it is. CharmPaw 21:55, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad at all! But the tortoiseshell patches aren't like her warrior image. [[File:Sorreltail.warrior.png]] MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 21:59, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is really beautiful Charmpaw!! All I see is maybe add either more shading or highlights.


22:02, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

The white part on the tail should be on the inside.--Nightshine 22:04, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Maple. Make the patches more like one her warrior's image.


22:05, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I would say just add some more black. The patches wouldn't be exactly the same on both sides of the cat. it's your call though.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 22:09, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

Eekkk, i hate it. is this any better? CharmPaw 23:41, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, this is coming along very well! But the ear pink is a little hard to see, perhaps find a way to define it more? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:44, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Yep just darken the ear pink a bit--Nightshine 02:49, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

It needs to look more like her warrior image which is show above.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:17, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

How do I define it CharmPaw 21:18, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what they mean by "define it" but the major difference I see between her warrior image and yours is that the shading on the warrior's image makes it pop-out and 3-D looking. Maybe darken the shading then?HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:44, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

To define the ear pink, make it a little brighter and contrasting with her pelt color, then blur it. Also, like Moss said, add a lot more shading, because I can't really see any- I agree with Ashshadow though that the patches don't have to match since it's her other side. -slow realization that when I've been making apprentice images for warriors I've done just that without realizing- insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 23:46, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? CharmPaw 00:24, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading just a little bit more. HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 15:54, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is very pale, almost baby-pink. Make it darker and a little more reddish. ✐SaNdY 12:08, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 20:05, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

She is away for two days She forgot to tell you AngelPaw 21:09, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I have her image. should I post It for her AngelPaw 21:09, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

If that's okay with her then go ahead. ✐SaNdY 22:36, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I'm declining this. It's now 5 days on and nothing has happened... ✐SaNdY 20:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Webfoot (R) - For Approval

[[File:Webfoot (R).png]] I tried to imitate the tabby markings on his elder charart, but they didn't turn out as well as I hoped they would. Gοlδεn pαω 03:55, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tabby markings more blackish. There are a few lighter pixels can you fill them in?--Nightshine 04:04, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

When was he a rogue?HaikageAsh's Talk 15:33, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I was just about to ask that. Goldenpaw, Webfoot was never a rogue. We first see him as an apprentice, then a warrior, and then an elder. So, you could find a different rogue to use this as. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 18:13, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I never noticed that! *face palm* I don't think there is another rouge that looks like this. But I like the image anyway:)--Nightshine 00:44, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Heavypaw (A) - Declined

Sorry if I don't remember all of the charart rules, I am new at it. I don't know where the reservation page is. I'm not on the project yet, but I asked to be added at the bottom of the Sharpclaw blank chat thing.

I made this piccy of Heavypaw.


Does this look good? Or should I put his foot back to normal, and keep the leg like that? I made him a little fatter by changing his back, I hope thats okay. His discription said he was thick. -Owlblaze

What did you do to his leg!? It looks like a frog :D. Sign after your message with four of ~. It's good for a first try! I don't think you need to make him fatter.Why do you have two accounts? Owlheart and Owlblaze?--Nightshine 02:51, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Wait you have three accounts! Oakstar, Owlheart and Owlblaze!--Nightshine 02:52, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind, he has a deformed leg. You need to reserve this and you aren't even part of the project.--Nightshine 02:53, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Aww, nightfall didn't add me yet. :(. Can you point me to the reservation page? And yeah, lol. I made Owlblaze, forgot the pass. I tried the retreive pass, it didn't work. And when I try and log into Owlheart it freezes up my comp. So I made Oakstar. Its the only one I can log into. -Owlblaze (Oakstar) 03:04, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh okay! You can find the reservation place on the Project Character Art main page.--Nightshine 03:06, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, thank you! I will go make a reservation. Wow, a warrior! May I see some of your charart? -Owlblaze Oakstar 03:09, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I found the reservation part. I am not sure now. It says to just make a new posting here to offer charart. Halp? What do I need to do to reserve him? -Owlblaze Oakstar 03:14, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

What, what the heck? You have three user names? Which one do I put you up as?--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:19, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wait. Never mind. But I think this will have to be declined because you haven't joined yet, and you didn't reserve him.--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:21, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, you're now an apprentice, welcome to the PCA! But, I still think this might have to be declined, I'm Sorry!--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:23, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Hurrah! Oh, do you think you could put after oakstar: (owlblaze). Because I can't log into that acc, but I love that name. So should I just make a new posting on this page with the piccy again? (I'm not sure how to reserve Heavypaw) **EDIT** Lol forgot siggy -Owlblaze Oakstar 07:08, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

You altered the leg and tail in a funny way. This couldn't be approved. I don't know if it's your computer or you did it, but please don't mess around with the lineart. I know thathe has a deformed leg, but I still don't think this will be approved.Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 10:29, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

Quailflight: It is perfectly acceptable to edit the lineart for the purpose of addig specific characteristics (see Cinderpelt, Oddfoot and Kinkfur). Oakstar: I think by editing the back lineart he looks fat rather than thick-set... perhaps edit that back to the original and try and create the effect with shading instead. ✐+ᖱ = 19:14, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good, just add more shading, and maybe erase a little of the top of the deformed leg because it looks like it goes up too far, if you took off a little of how far it goes it might look more natural...? (Do you get what I mean? I know it sounds odd :P) insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 20:35, February 3, 2010 (UTC)

He looks really fat. --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:54, February 6, 2010 (UTC)

I really like it but the leg is very..... strange. EcHoPaW 70px 17:08, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Hm... I don't think I editted the tail. Do you see anything different? Hm.. Okay, so I added more shading, and fixed the length of the leg, and I also make him a bit more skinny. (He tried Jenny cat, and it worked! :D lol) what do you think now:

Owlblaze Oakstar 06:03, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

You need to erase the line that makes the paw thats usually hidden look round. Sorry if it's not making sencAshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:42, February 8, 2010 (UTC)e

It looks as if you completely re-did the lineart for some reason. His back looks very lumpy, his belly looks fat, and, kinda weird--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:58, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thats odd. Here is a comparation below. I circles the parts that I eddited Also, the only reason you can see his back foot more is because bent his other foot down, so you can see behind it. I eddited him a bit (I fixed the belly!) and re-uploaded it:

Sorry for this being too long! -Owlblaze Oakstar 08:14, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

His hind leg looks funny, you're messing with the lineart. Use the apprentice blank, and don't change the lineart. Copy and paste this to or whatever you are using, and then color it in, do the tabby stripes, earpink, and the shading. --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:24, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisker, it's okay to change the lineart for a special purpose, but I have to say that the leg looks odd. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 23:22, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to redo the leg, then compare them side by side. I will edit in a min or two with the new pic. **EDIT** Here they are:

Old and New (Respectivly):

I think the first one got squished a bit when it uploaded. 0_o.

-Owlblaze Oakstar 02:39, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

I got rid of all the unnecessary images; and Oakstar, you need to just reupload using the same file name. Call your image Heavypaw, and just upload on that name every time you update the image. Bramble 19:30, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Bramble(star?) Sorry. Here, the most improved piccy so far Edit: Removed second image link - see image at top of section ✐SaNdY 12:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

What do you all think? I think that his leg isn't bent/deformed enough now. :/. Do you guys think it bent enough? -Owlblaze Oakstar 04:45, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think his leg looks good now. The ear pink needs to be darker and blended though and the whole pelt looks very messy - make the tabby stripes longer and thinner and more clean-cut. Add some shading and blend it in nicely. ✐SaNdY 12:00, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I blended the ear more. I havn't fixed the stripes yet. The elder picture shows the stripes very much like mine, Thick and rounded. Can you give me an example stripe for me to get an idea of what you want? :) -Owlblaze Oakstar 03:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Rippletail(W).png]] [[File:Raggedstar.leader.png]] [[File:Heavystep.png]] ✐SaNdY 11:04, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Could you move the tail up? It looks attached to the butt :p.Darkhallows 15:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 20:00, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work ✐SaNdY 15:35, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (W)- Withdrawn by User

[[File:GoldenflowerW.png]]Okay, so there's 36 topics but two of them are unrelated, so this is technically the 35th topic :3 But you can take it down if it's over, somehow. Here's Goldenflower as a warrior, with nicked ear and all. Is she a tad shiny? I've just looked at her elder and queen

images and realised that she's quite pale on those... Comments? Brightfrost 17:16, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is very good, just blur the shading on her back more. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 12:04, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to blur the back shading as much as I could. And thanks :D Brightfrost 17:16, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!!! Try and blur the shading under her chin a bit more - I can't see anyhting else that needs improving. :D Mistyheart 17:21, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, blurred the chin shading a bit more :) Thanks Misty! Brightfrost 18:27, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

It's the other ear thats nicked in her elder picture.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:25, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice! Just blur the shading on the haunch, back, chest and forehead, and blur all of the highlights a smidge. Darken and blur the ear pink, and, as Ashshadow said, it's the other ear that's nicked in the elder image. This is very good! Batwing 21:10, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Just blur the ear pink and shading some more.--Nightshine 02:45, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tried to fix the shading and the ear pink but the ear looks a bit.. yeah. And I'm pretty sure it's not her other ear nicked in the elder image:

Goldenflower.elderSurely if she's facing the opposite way in this, then in the warrior image her nicked ear will be the 'front' ear? Thank you for your comments :) Brightfrost 07:40, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Brightfrost is right, the ear nick is the right way round because it's on the back ear when Goldenflower is facing this way > in her elder image, si it must be on the front ear when she is facing this way < in her warrior image. Now for comments: brilliant, but maybe blur the shading on her back some more. :) 16:13, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Brightfrost! I LOVE Goldenflower! Yeah her ear is on the correct side! XD I love the ear to! But try and delete the little black bit that goes onto the ear pink! Also the ear pink looks a bit far down the ear! Love it though! XD Fawnstorm 16:36, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yea sorry about the ear i saw a mirror image of the elder image. The earpink is oddly shaped. Try making it more centered.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:22, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, fixed the ear. Not sure about the back shading, it's giving me some grief. -sigh- Anyways, comments? Brightfrost 07:52, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe make the fur darker so it looks like her elder image? Evanphoto 13:01, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all of the shading and highlights.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 14:10, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating above, and also, the ear pink looks dark. Can you lighten it to look more like her elder version?HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:39, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened the ear pink and blurred a bit- any better? And by the way, I was made a lovely siggy (it's on my talk page) but I'm unsure on how to use it as my siggy, exactly ;3 Brightfrost 16:47, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on her haunch looks too bright. Darken and blur it a bit.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 17:02, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Having a bit of a problem darkening the haunch highlight, I've tried burning over the top of it but it makes it look a tad green, like this:

Her highlight is now green.... ✐SaNdY 19:03, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

That's what I mean, I'm trying to darken that highlight but it goes green. It's a separate file though, I haven't saved over the current picture. (At the top) I was just showing everyone what it looks like when I try and darken it. -kicks stupid haunch- Why do you have to be so bright? D: Brightfrost 19:15, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

We've decided to not reserve characters that have not been shown in books yet, and that goes for ranks too. It wouldn't be fair. LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 00:46, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if you used the dodge tool to create the highlight then using the burn tool should reverse this. If it really won't work, paint over it and do it again. ✐SaNdY 11:42, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

I like it, but the highlights are green :( BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:17, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

They're not, that's just an example of what happens when I use burn to try and darken the stupid highlights. -kicks haunch again- Brightfrost 13:20, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-tried to completely redo that annoying haunch. Any better? Does it still need to go a tad darker? Brightfrost 13:30, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is good Frosty! But the Shding on her head is really dark! Could you sort it out? XD! No offence! Fawnstorm 13:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded! Lightened the head shading a bit as well as the haunch, just a tad. Hehe, no problem Fawny ^^ Thanks for telling me. Love the sig, by the way! Someone made me a lovely one but I'm unsure on how to get the coding from that and use it as my sig :3 Brightfrost 22:03, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Icestorm 17:13, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

again this is good but she still looks a little green. XD! Fawnstorm 10:05, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blending a little. ✐SaNdY 11:59, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, tried to blend the shading a little more, though I must say it hasn't made much of a difference to my eyes x3 ^^, Brightfrostof SunClan...[[File:Brightfrost1.png|60px]] 19:01, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

The shading seems a bit dark. Lighten it a little if you can.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:58, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I've had a go at lightening the shading, but it looks a bit...dodgy, and the shading is quite dark in contrast to the pale ginger on the elder image. :/ Brightfrostof SunClan...[[File:Brightfrost1.png|60px]] 20:14, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Try redoing the shading. If the highlights won't clean up with the burn tool, that is pretty much your only option. (Unless one of you Gimp people have some magic tool?) MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

If I'm honest, I don't see anything wrong with the shading. Why is everyone saying it needs lightening? I see nothing wrong with this image. :)♫ Misty ♫ [[File:Mistyheart.png|60px]] 17:50, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not saying that there is anything wrong but the shading needs lighteing. Sorry Frosty but its a little dark around the back and legs. I understand why you want her to look like you explained though (real-life) like the warrrior image lighter because of her....youngness (If that is even a word). Just have a good go at lightening the shading. And it will now seem like I'm going on but the Ear Pink looks a bit baby pink? If you see what I mean? XD Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 17:57, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comments, but I think I'm going to take her down. I'm so busy at the mo with school problems and such, I don't have the time to sit down and redo the whole shading. Sorry! Brightfrostof SunClan...[[File:Brightfrost1.png|60px]] 17:04, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Okay Frosty. I understand. XD! Are you going put it up get sorted out? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:04, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I changed 'for approval' to 'withdrawn' for you. Hope you get less busy soon Brightfrost. ✐SaNdY 09:39, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Icicle (ki) - Declined


I feel so sorry for Icicle. She loves Ravenpaw like he is her kin and now she has to watch her real kin try to kill them and take over their home. Anyway, how bad is she?MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:08, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Somebody has this up. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 17:09, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

There is already an Icicle (Ki) up for approval Minnow. Sorry. ✐SaNdY 17:11, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I must have spelled icicle wrong when I used the Ctrl + F thing. Sorry Icethroat!MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:13, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur (A) - Declined


Okay. feel free to comment on this however you like, I think it sucks too. How can I improve it? (This is my first time doing this kind of thing, so please excuse me if I put this in the wrong place) Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:52, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Why won't the picture show up?

I fixed it. You need to upload the image then put the link here. ✐SaNdY 16:57, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

And please sign with ~~~~ ✐SaNdY 16:57, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I put the image up for you. You need to darken the shading, add eye color and ear pink.--Nightshine 21:09, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

>_< I reserved this! Evanphoto 21:16, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah Evanphoto did.--Nightshine 21:21, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declining--Darkhallows 00:15, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:46, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Ki) up for Approval

[[File: Ravenpaw kit.png]] Okay. my first one, hope it isn't reserved etcetera, how bad is it? Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:34, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry you already have Mousefur up for approval. This will be declined--Nightshine 00:27, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

My mistake. It looks like you put that up by accident--Nightshine 00:28, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if he was seen as a kit but you need to add the white dash on his chest and the white tail-tip.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:34, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I don't believe he was seen as a kit. This will probably have to be declined--Nightshine 01:37, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:16, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenfur (A) declined

[[File:Brackenpaw6.png]]hi this is beewing culd u plz approve my brackenpaw? thx

BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

The color isnt quite right make him more brown and Make his stripes more distinct if that makes sense.AshshadowI'm a she~cat.Rawr :3 20:39, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... You need ear colour. And Ashshadow's right. Too golden... Lavenderi 22:07, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

Also, you always need to sign with the four ~ --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:16, February 5, 2010 (UTC)

He is too yellow. You should work on it or else it will get declined--Nightshine 02:50, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been 4 days. Give her alittle while onger, seeing as she also has a life. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ [[File:FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png|30px]] 00:25, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

Wait! she allready has one up on the bottem! Lovepaw My Talk! 02:00, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Brackenpaw improved!

BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice but i have to say that this is over the limit, also please look at Brackenfur warrior image. Lovepaw My Talk! 01:59, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Beewing, as Echopaw said this is over the limt and you already put him up for approval in another place on this page. You need to use the same thing over again until what you want approved is approved. Please put this is your other Brackenfur (A) for approval.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 02:04, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

Moving this to its proper section; Beewing; next time, just upload over the old image with changes, and post in the same section. --Bramble 02:32, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

how about now?

BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks pretty yellow. His warrior image is more brown -

And also, please sign with the four ~ --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:01, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

How about this? and nightfall what do u mean by signing with the four?

BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that's much better. And I mean type four of these ~ after whatever you've typed. If you do that, your siggie will show up after whatever you've typed. (Or click the siggie button on the edit bar)--NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:34, February 11, 2010 (UTC)

ok, but i dont have a siggie well nightshine made 1 for me but i'm not sure how to make it appear on my posts even if i do type four ~'s but is brackenpaw approved?

Not yet. He looks too redish now and his earpink is too pink. Also reupload images over the same file name.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:27, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

OMG. I love it! Thats very much how a imagine Brakenfur (I didn't know he was tabby though)! I just said it near the beginning of this post bit, but I love it! -Owlblaze Oakstar 09:32, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow has said it all. And Owlblaze, I'm not getting on to you at all, I just wanted to tell you that whenever you leave a comment on someone's charart, be sure to leave some critique too. It makes everyone feel good when someone says they love their work, but they also need to know how to improve it. Again, I'm not getting on to you :) --NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 17:55, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

OK. Well, I would change the stripe a bit on his head that looks like an eyebrow. It matches the warrior piccy, but in my opinion, it looks kinda.... odd. Just my opinion though. -Owlblaze Oakstar 04:30, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, how about this time?

BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 02:08, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Beewing i removed the ones that or not for approval and put the newly done one up there. Echo Rocks! My Talk! 19:05, February 15, 2010 (UTC)


BeewingBuzz Like A Bee 21:29, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

This looks much better. Just make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and then it should be good. Also, upload on the same file name instead of uploading on a new name each time, it helps to save space on the wiki. --Icy-chanOlympics of 2010!! 22:16, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedBeewingBuzz Like A Bee 22:46, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the hind leg farthest from us LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 05:01, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

the earpink color still bothers me. Make it more of a reddish color.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:45, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined... ✐SaNdY 09:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Wow. I should've seen this ages ago. Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 23:47, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Rose (KP) - Declined

[[File:Rose(KP).png]] Well, tell me how bad this is. AngelPaw 11:58, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's not bad at all! Fill in the white pixel (on her neck), and blur the highlights. MaplefernMay StarClan light your pathHow's the Prey running? 13:07, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is beatiful! Lovepaw My Talk! 13:45, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

It's very nice! Well done! Just fill that white pixel. Wetty What do you mean they only had 31 flavors?! 14:29, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! However, the markings on the front and back legs are way different in length. Shorten and blur the front leg markings ( 06:03, February 14, 2010 (UTC)

Um the markings are similar to the markings on Lily but I will fix the white pixel tomorrow. AngelPaw 21:58, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights then blur them. (Or you could smudge them out then blur them, I call that the Fuzzy Efect. XD) Icestorm 17:09, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights need to be a bit bigger.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:18, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Better? AngelPaw 13:12, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the left part of her back some more--Nightshine 17:46, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe bring the dark bits on the hind legs up a bit. If she stood up then only her back paws would be brown. Fawny [[File:Fawnstorm.png|60px]] 16:55, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think the ear is too hot pink.--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 08:29, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 09:41, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work in two days. Bramble 23:51, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Diesel (KP) ~ Declined


I liked how he turned out. ^-^ Comments? --GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 23:55, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice :) Just remove the earpink from the right ear (it's facing away from us, so it doesn't need pink), and the pupils look a bit odd. I really like the stripes, though! ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 23:56, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

This is great! Blur the shading a little bit. And fix the ear pink as Insane said. The eyes are cool!--Nightshine 23:59, February 17, 2010 (UTC)

His stripes are wicked cool. The right eye looks a little strange thought but really good job otherwise :) --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 01:15, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

This is just in my opinoin but make his pelt lighter. Echo Rocks! My Talk! 00:02, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, I really like his pelt color. The only thing I see is that the ear pink should be removed from the right ear--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 01:47, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. ARG!!! I'M REALLY DUMB NOW! Dx I THOUGHT HE WAS DELETED! Can someone delete the double post? I've lost my MIND xP GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 23:09, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

I deleted the second one--Nightshine 23:17, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, night. ^-^ GOT REINDEER?Mumble! 23:53, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the pupil, as it isn't solid. This is amazing otherwise, though. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:53, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

This looks great!--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 08:30, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 14:47, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 23:53, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Oatwhisker (W) - Declined


O god this is terible :(. Sorry about icicle Icethroat! I checked this like five hundred times and I bet that someone still has this. Is her okay. Oh and he's windclan.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:37, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

It's not terrible :) Just darken the shading, and there are two stripes on his neck that overlap with the lineart. insaneular Talk 18:42, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

It is good. Just blur the earpink and what insane said. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 19:28, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I thought he had an elder picture, which this doesnt look much like as far as I can remember. Maybe I just imagined it or it got declined. if i'm wrong ( which I probably am) darken the earpink a smidge.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:56, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow, that was the other Oatwhisker; there are two. This one has no image as of yet. insaneular Talk 00:58, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Was this one declined?[[File:Oatwhisker(WC)(E).png]]I'm not sure but I know that I saw it before.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:04, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

That is this Oatwhisker's image and it was done by Bramble and approved about a week ago. X3 insaneular Talk 01:05, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Um, now I'm really confused... I can't find that image in the approved or declined archives, and I don't know what happened to it... I would have thought it was this Oatwhisker's image but... *goes to ask Bramble* insaneular Talk 01:09, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

I just want you all to know. This is the WINDCLAN one just so no one gets confused. I know I drove myself in circles with my old apprentice doing cinderpaw. I always forgot if it was Cinderpelt or Cinderheart. I'll get to lthis as soon as I can. --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT

Sorry Min, but Oatwhisker was never seen as a warrior. He was only in the allegiances of Dawn as an elder, then he vanished. Unless you can find another cat to use this as, consider it declined. Sorry. --Bramble 01:27, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Minnow. If you turn him gray and tweak the markings a bit it could be Webfoot if no one already has him.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:28, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Decline it then. I can't find anything.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 02:21, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Declining. Bramble 23:55, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Snapper (R) - Declined

[[File:Snapper.png]]hes done it took me a long time but he is done Iceyfang 17:35, February 18, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

You need to get the rouge blank again, and click on the blank so it makes it full size, then you need to blur the scars and earpink and make the scars and earpink darker. also, color in his eye, and add shading and highlights. (highlights are optional though...) Sorry about my speeling XD --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 17:44, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, do everything that Nightwhisker said. But, didn't Hiddensun have this reserved?--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:41, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think she did but she isn't on the table anymore.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:31, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, that's odd. But Iceyfang, you totally messed up the lineart. There is a big chunk missing out of his head, his eye and whiskers are all, blobbish, and scars are not that color. Scars are acually pretty subtle. And yes, Nighthwhisker's right. I think you're gonna have to re-do it again since you colored the thumbnail size instead of the full size, sorry LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 04:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Hiddensun may have had her reserved but I removed a load of projects that had been up for too long or didn't have dates etc ✐SaNdY 20:45, February 19, 2010 (UTC) have b

She doesn't have to redo, I resized it.

[[file:snf.png]]Darkhallows 14:34, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

where his ear is there is no pink, there is some next to it. --♥Shinestar♥ 20:29, February 20, 2010 (UTC)

i did the ear pink Iceyfang 01:06, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

But it's not even in the ear. It's right under it. You need to darken it, and make it higher. And by the way, I don't have Shattered Peace, but I've read it, and we have a picture reference for Snapper (although I don't remember what he looks like in the book) Just making sure, but does this look like him? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

fixed i also added the torn ear Iceyfang 01:51, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

It still looks too pink. Make it more of a red pink, not pink red. The scars are too pink, look at Yellowfang for scar color reference. -

Also, the head color looks weird, blur where it connects with the neck GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

From what I saw in the browse inside, snapper has a white face, underbelly, and tail. His legs weren't white.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:02, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

fixed Iceyfang 02:21, February 21, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The lineart on his head is missing, you need to blur the ear pink, and I seriously think you did something to the eye... GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 20:05, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Don't make his whole head white just his face. He doesn't really look like a tortoiseshell.--Nightshine 23:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

He is supposed to be a calico, not a tortie... look at the book.Darkhallows 11:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I don't have any of the manga/haven't read any.:( But aren't calico and tortie the same thing?--Nightshine 01:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Calico is the same as tortoiseshell and white, but it's not the same as jsut tortoiseshell. Tortoisshell is the dark pelt with ginger markings, and tortoiseshell and white is usually white with ginger and black markings along their back and side. I agree though, this doesn't really look tortoiseshell and white to me GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:05, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

They aren't the same thing... or, well it depends on where you live. But this is a calico, this is a tortioseshell 00:30, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I remember Viki saying something about calicos and tortoiseshells not being the same if you lived in the UK, on a chat. Either way, this doesn't really look like a tortoiseshell and white, or a calico GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:09, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

i fixed it by the he does have white legs if you look at the cover at 3rd manga of the ravenpaw sreies then you can see he has white legs Iceyfang 19:38, February 24, 2010 (UTC)iceyfang

The Erins are known for inconsistencies. From what I could tell in the first book he didn't have white legs, however, this could've changed. Either way his head isn't completely white and there are still flecks of color on his legs.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:32, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The scars are kind of obscuring the face. I don't know if you want to fix that...--Quail!People+Money+Time+Care=Haiti Rebuilt. 08:32, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:30, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't mean to sound rude but has this ever been reuploaded? Cause if it hasn't then it hasen't been worked on. Just asking. Fawnstorm 19:53, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work ✐SaNdY 19:15, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (W)-- Declined

[[File:Briarlight(W).png]] Here she is! My first warrior! This is the 34th post because there are 4 conversations. How is she?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 01:29, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, but other than that, it's pretty good! :) Shistar Mai Talk Page 01:31, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading. Anything else?--Snowflight1Happy V-Day!! 01:39, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I started from the bottom so this is a repeat of what I said for mistystar. It's not up to me though, maybe wait for Bramble or Sandy to comment.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:44, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Wait until the book comes out.

Declined. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:51, March 6, 2010 (UTC)


[[File:MistyfootL.png]]Iceh Help me on it. So what do you guys think? B-Day-Kitty! :D 01:37, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It's great! But we haven't seen her as a leader yet have we? The highlights look too patchy and the ear pink needs more blurring--Nightshine 01:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

If you go to it should show you to browse through the book. Well it said Mistystar alot. and i will get right on it!;) B-Day-Kitty! :D 01:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

In the browse inside of Fading Echoes, she was Mistystar. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:43, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? B-Day-Kitty! :D 01:44, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more to cover more of the ear and make the shading more even--Nightshine 01:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Um. I thought nobody was allowed to reserve Mistystar because of the fact that about every single user wants to do her? Sandy and Bramble and Icestorm and I had discussed some ways of choosing randomly, to be fair... I dunno.... also, does this mean we're allowed to reserve other characters from the browse inside? insaneular Talk 01:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I personally think its too early to post images from fading echos. It doesn't come out for about 2 weeks and I think we waited until closer to the release date with TFA.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:42, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It's been disscussed, no characters untill the BOOK is released.Darkhallows 03:55, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, sorry Echo! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:55, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Mudclaw (D) - Declined


I'm probably doing something incorrectly... I just have a feeling that i'm doing something stupid, but I tried to do a Mudclaw deputy CharArt... it sucks, but here you go.Jmiles 06:01, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad! Darken the shading--Nightshine 06:03, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Insaneular reserved this :(. It will have to be declined--Nightshine 06:08, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but Nightshine's right, she has him posted up for approval on this page. You might be able to find another cat to use this as GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:31, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Oops! See, I knew I was doing something dumb! That's fine, my bad. Should have checked. Anyone else this could pass as besides duputy mudclaw? And how can I reserve a cat for the project? (Oh, also, thank you, Nightshine, for saying it was good. That was nice of you!) Jmiles 05:03, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Declined by user request. ✐SaNdY 19:14, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Patch (KP) Withdrawn By User

[[File:Patchkp.png]]Here's Patch. I used Mousetalon's Tutorial for the shading, and used another approved image for the eyes. Constructments? --Nightwhisker98Rawr!

This is good! Make the ear pink smaller and blur the patches on the tail some more--Nightshine 22:30, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 23:39, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

What? When was Patch a kittypet? He was a rogue, then a warrior of SkyClan. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:54, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is patch from Tigerstar and Sasha. This is really good Nightwhisker. Maybe darken the nose a little bit.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:59, February 7, 2010 (UTC)

(M) - The eyes look very pixelated. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:53, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! *face palm* Sorry Nightwhisker, I completely fogot about him! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:07, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

I'm glad my tutorials helped! Maybe blur the black patch on the head more. ♥Mouse♥♥Heart♥[[File:Pinkheart.png|60px]] 16:43, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this ok? I tried to fix the eyes, but I don't know if they're ok now... --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 20:32, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs blending. ✐+ᖱ = 20:57, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

He's nice! Blur the shading on the collar, and as Mosswhisker said, the eyes look very pixelated. Make the different colours of the eye pixels more similar. Also, I see a patch on the left haunch (the one we can't see) that is completely white, while the rest of the white fur is gray. Darken the shading there. I love your patches, maybe add one or two more to the top of the tail and the tail-tip? It's not nessicary, though; this is very good! Batwing 21:13, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Aside from what Bluestar said, all I can see is that there's an odd patch of gray on the top of his right (for us) haunch. insanTASTE THE RAINBOWeular 21:15, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Patch's image in the manga doesn't look like this- he was black and had a white belly, paws, and tail-tip. I have the book. Rainwhisker 22:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look kinda dark, you have to cncentrate on them to find the pupils, and they stad out a lot. Maybe brighten them a tad?HeartpathLove, Jaggedclaw! 23:30, February 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Rainwhisker, then should I start over? --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 20:45, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Don't start over, just make the eyes a lighter shade of green. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ [[File:FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png|30px]]

No, about the problem of him being black with a white underbelly, paws, and and tail-tip, i can fix the eyes... --Nightwhisker98Rawr! 22:51, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, only because we have an actual picture reference.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 23:04, February 9, 2010 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry about that. ღ♥Fire-Heart♥ღ [[File:FirePelt(L)_Sunny.png|30px]] 00:22, February 10, 2010 (UTC)

The transition from white and black needs to be blurred as well as the ear pink also I dont see any shading.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 01:07, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

In addiion to Ash's comment, the ear pink needs blending and the eyes look a little dark ✐+ᖱ = 14:41, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur in his white points! XD! Fawnstorm 16:39, February 12, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights and blur the transitions. Also, the ear pink looks a bit wonky, if you could blur that and make it neater. XD Mistyheart 14:52, February 13, 2010 (UTC)

I have no idea what wonky means, so I tried to fix the earpink the best I could. Reuploaded. Is this better? --LuckwhiskerI can feel the clouds beneath my paws!! 15:09, February 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.AshshadowI'm blue da ba dee da ba di 20:37, February 16, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 18:18, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a bit strange, like the overall shape of it. Try filling in that little chunk of black with pink. (I'll make a diagram if you need me too)--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 22:58, February 18, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better Night? --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 20:14, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yep :) But his pelt looks kinda purpleish, especially on his face. I'd run the burn tool over all the black parts of his body a few times--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 20:17, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Purplish How? And I can't seem to fix it on pixlr... can you help me Nightfall?--NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 21:25, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry Night. No that I'am on a different computer, it looks fine. But darken the shading more on the face, and lighten the eyes--LoveFallCan you feel the love tonight? 23:54, February 19, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if the changes are showing up? But is this better? --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 18:42, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I was reading Escape from the forest, and I noticed that the white part of his belly stretches up to his face. I'll see if I can find you an image online... GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:33, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, I couldn't find one online. But the white stretches up to his face like Leafpool's does GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 00:14, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the collar. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:10, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed the shading... Anything else? --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 15:18, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

His colar on the top looks smudged and blur the head shading a bit more.--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 17:39, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, not sure if it's supposed to be that way (Just ignore me if it is) but Patch's left eye (our right) has a little black smudge or something underneath it. Once again, really sorry if that's the way it's supposed to be. x3 Shistar Mai Talk Page 23:57, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the top of the head more.--Shaf Girl 16:30, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Guys, I'm withdrawing him. There's too much wrong with him, and I can't get on alot, so I guess I'll free up the page. --NightyMeh kitteh is hoplessley confused... 17:00, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Base- Declined


I was thinking we could use this as a sharpclaw base. I'll make 3 more if you wanna use it. Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 01:32, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but I have this reserved already.--NightshineÜ 01:39, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

You took the head from the to-be blank, the body from the cave-guard and drew a paw. And Nightshine's reserved them. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 02:07, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Night and maple are right. One, you've got to make sure no one has reserved something before doint it. And plus, you've got to acually draw them yourself, not merge two together. That's just strange. This will have to be declined, I'm sorry! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:42, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpclaw Base- Declined

[[File:Short.sharpclaw.png|thumb]]This is my sharpclaw base. If you like it, I will make 3 more. Comments? Questions? Concerns? Make the head bigger, modify the tail, and put that leg on the ground; oh, and remember to sign your name. Evanphoto 12:26, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a minute, this is the same one that got declined!-_- Evanphoto 12:29, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Yes Evan it is. B-Day-Kitty! :D 12:30, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Declining says Shady.Darkhallows 15:50, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Also the lines need to be the same Raffyjack123 17:14, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

DECLINED. I'm sorry Echostar, these can't be used. One, you're not even a member of this project. Two, you need to reserve something before putting it up for approval, in this case Nightshine had this reserved first. And three, you've got to acually draw it yourself, not merge two together and take credit for it yourself. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 17:36, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar (W)--Withdrawn By User

[[File:Leafdapple.warrior2.png]] Well? How aweful is it? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 23:14, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think it's actually pretty good! But I think the yellow on the head needs to blend more. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:32, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Not aweful at all. Darken the shading a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:50, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Before I do that, which one looks better or more like her leader image? MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:18, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The one on the right.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:22, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The right one. Make the stripes thinner and more Y shaped. Some of the stripes need to be blurred on the right one--Nightshine 00:25, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The rigt one is better,but like nightshine said,make it thinner,(make it brush 1 if you use pixlr,the smallest brush in GIMP.)--!!≈Ivy-sama≈ 10:11, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

No doubt the right one better. Just work on the stripes like Night said. Also, make the ear pink just the slightest bit darker. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 02:55, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the head a little more Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:09, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

When I tried to do it in size one, it didn't turn out well. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 01:00, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Shrunk stripes. Have you ever noticed how a leader is on the cover of every super edition? Firestar, Bluestar, and now Leafstar. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:47, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I did notice that. Blur the stripes on the top of her head and on the tail. Can you make them more y-shaped?--Nightshine 22:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred head and tail stripes. LOL, I like Leafstar. I don't know why. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes in the middle of the pelt and on the haunch still need to be more y-shaped like on the leader and rogue images. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:49, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I can't do it. Withdrawing. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:43, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Withdrawing GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:34, March 12, 2010 (UTC)