Hawkheart (W)- Declined


Well, here's my first Charart.I had some trouble with the ear pink and highlighting but other than that I think it looks pretty good.Well you can go ahead and tell me how horrible it looks but,since this is my first charart I think it looks pretty good.I used Nightshine's tutorials and Bluestar's tutorials to learn how to do everything so I'd like to thank them. Flamewolf15 00:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Err, where is it? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:13, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Did you upload the file and need help linking it, or have you not uploaded it yet? --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 00:20, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the image for you--Nightshine 00:24, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

This is good for your first image but the lineart is thin in some places and you need to blur the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:38, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Well,I edited it and reuploaded it, but I can't figure out how to insert it into my post. Flamewolf15 01:01, February 22, 2010 (UTC)Well when you edit the section there is an option at the top that allows you to add images to the page. also reupload with the same image name. It saves space on the wiki.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:04, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted it again--Nightshine 01:05, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks to Nightshine for inserting the image.I thickened the line art in some places and tried to blur the shadowing some more.It'd help if you told specific areas that need blurring. Flamewolf15 01:09, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Thats because it all needed blurring. The lineart is still thin mostly on the chest, I could fix it if you'd like.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:14, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I thickened the line art on the chest and between the hanch and the front leg I also blurred everything again and it seems that no matter how many times I try to upload an image it never shows up. Flamewolf 03:32, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I inserted the file for you. Next time dont take it off the page, just click on it and then upload a new version. HaikageAsh's Talk 11:40, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Okay,well is there any other lineart that needs to be thicker?Is there anymore blurring I need to do?And is there anything else that needs improvement or does he look fine the way he is? Flamewolf 21:54, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart needs to look like this: File:Warriorshortm.gif. The shading on the back is still too thick and I don't see much shading anywhere else.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:11, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:Is this any better?The shading on the back is darking than the rest because he's facing toward the light source and because that's the way it looked after I blurred it in the editor. Flamewolf 03:44, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

He looks very pink. He needs to be more brown like his Medicine cat image - GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:45, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, a lot.Darkhallows 15:30, February 23, 2010 (UTC) ^

So, blur the shading and thinin it, (smooth it too) and make it more brown like | (I fail at making arrows. SaintIce 02:08, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

My oppinion is that the brown color you picked out looks a little pink or a little purple and the shading along its back needs to be blurred. Moonpelt1786 04:57, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

He needs to be blurred and his pelt is marroon. :) ♫ Misty ♫ [[File:Mistyheart.png|60px]] 12:10, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his back needs to be blurred some more, and Misty's right, his pelt is maroon. Make it a little browner. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:50, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark and thick, and needs blurring. His pelt is maroon, he needs to be mottled, and his eyes are yellow, and they are supposed to be amber. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:33, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 04:17, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I am currently working on him and apologize for the amount of time it is taking.I have a few more things to work on and I will reupload him as soon as he is

finished.Flamewolf 04:11, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. He looks like his back is just a darker colour. And he's STILL MAROON! Fix that, please!Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:25, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Like I said,I am currently working on him and I am trying to fix everything that needs to be fixed.Flamewolf 23:18, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a week, please work on this or it will be declined GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 23:55, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has been up for way too long with no improvements; we have to keep the rules fair for everyone. Declining. Please resubmit when you've made your improvements and have more time to work on him. ✐SaNdY 18:24, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) - Declined

[[File:0wleyes.png]]I'm sorry about the hassel with Feathertail but I got Owleyes (also Owlstar) of the the page you gave me so any crittisism???{{subst:User:Moonpelt 1786/sig}} 23:41, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. After you post please sign with four of ~. Blur the shading--Nightshine 02:47, February 23, 2010 (UTC)


How does that look??? Moonpelt1786 04:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

More blurring.Darkhallows 15:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks...bumpy. Get the brush tool size 3, and smooth the shading in. Icestorm 21:38, February 23, 2010 (UTC)\

Ok thanks!!! Moonpelt1786 02:01, February 24, 2010 (UTC)


The lineart is blurred in some places, especially the haunch, and the shading still looks strange. Blur it more without blurring the lineart. Also darken the ear pink, and erase the small black dot underneath his chin. (: Bat 22:17, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok thanks Bat! Moonpelt1786 04:04, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re did the shading and I earsed the black dot and I changed ear color any comments or critism now???

The earpink is too big and should be either more redish or grayish. The shading isn't quite right either. Try looking at some of the tutorials or other approved warriors.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:54, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Moonpelt but he looks a bit blind. Copy the eyes from Icethroat's tutorial or an approved image.
Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:44, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I darkend the ear color to a mor reddish color and I changed the eyes but I want to keep the shading because I want it to be a little bit diffrent from the others. Moonpelt1786 04:12, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

What you do is modify a shading stlye and make it your own. I'm not sure if he'll get approved with the shading like this.HaikageAsh's Talk 04:23, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changed shading! Moonpelt1786 16:36, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading at all. There are a few gray pixels on his nose. Can you fill them in with black?--Nightshine 19:58, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made the shading look more like shading! {{subst:User:Moonpelt 1786/sig}} 23:42, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading. It looks like some line art on his back is a little blurred. Can you fix it?--Nightshine 23:51, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you extended the whisker. Could you fix that too?--Nightshine 23:57, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I changed the whiskers and yes they were wrong thanks Nightshine!!! Moonpelt1786 04:04, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. Right now it looks kinda smudged.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:14, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think his fur needs to be a bit lighter, like the leader image... Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:44, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes a tiny bit lighter and darken the shading. make the ear pink lighter and blur it--Nightshine 00:23, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Made fur lighter and different ear color and bured earpink. MoOnPeLt 05:55, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more, then thicken the shading. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:37, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, IcyInvading the fire 20:26, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:26, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 18:30, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (E)- Declined

[[File:Tallpoppy.elder.png|thumb]]This is my Tallpoppy image as an elder. Questions? Comments? Concerns?

Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:26, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but Hawktalon has this reserved.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

How do you reserve an image? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:31, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

On the main page for the project. there is a section that says current projects. Add your name to the templete and reserve your image. Just make sure no one else has it reserved.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:33, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:57, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsepaw (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Gorsepaw-Kit.png]] - I'm pretty sure this is the 35th Image, if It isn't, I'm super sorry!
But yeah, I'm not sure what to think of this, it's my second and my first ginger. I attempted to model the ginger spots off the apprentice image, but I'm not sure if they turned out the way I wanted them to... xD
-Awaits the critique eagerly-
Antoinette 02:13, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

It's pretty good! Blur the ginger spots a lot more though GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:18, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Oh, wow, I just epically failed in my attempt to re-upload this. xD
But I re-uploaded it, blurred the ginger spots, fixed a line near the chest... yeah, does it still need blurring? =D
Shistar Mai Talk Page 02:25, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'd say a bit more, and blur the shading a lot too. Also, I'd lighten the spots with the dodge tool a little GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 02:37, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Do the spots still need blurring? Shistar Mai Talk Page 02:43, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Blurred Ear Pink slightly, and shading on the left side (Gorsepaw's right). Is that any better for the shading? Shistar Mai Talk Page 12:38, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

A tad more for blending the shading.Troutleap 01:55, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Is that any better? =D Shistar Mai Talk Page 02:19, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the earpink on the ear with the ginger top. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:39, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Is that Better? Shistar Mai Talk Page 12:40, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

The spots should still be lightened a bit more (they're too dark compared to the spots on the warrior version), blur the shading and spots a bit more, and perhaps darken the shading or add highlights, as I can't see it very well. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:28, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Shistar is no good at Highlights. xP
So instead I darkened the shading. Better? ^_^ Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:38, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is better, but I think that the patches should be lightned some more. --Icy-chan says hello! 03:07, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Lightened Spots. Better? Shistar Mai Talk Page 12:22, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur them a bit more. They look a bit pixely.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:09, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Shistar Mai Talk Page 15:32, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

His white parts need to be whiter; he looks very grey. ✐SaNdY 18:31, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Shistar Mai Talk Page 19:33, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

You may need to redo the ginger patches. They look kinda dissolved.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:39, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Re-do the spots? Meh... I think I may just take this down... But thanks for the critique, everyone. ^_^ Shistar Mai Talk Page 20:08, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:29, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rusty- Declined

[[File:Rusty.png|thumb|left|Rusty]] This is Rusty.... I used a picture that you had on the other page, and I made this! Do you like it?

Fernpebble 01:44, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

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Are you a member of the project? If not would you like to join. Rusty already has an image but this isnt bad.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:46, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry you aren't a member. I made his charart :)--NightshineÜ 01:47, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. Sorry, Fernpebble. But Nightshine's right, One) You have to be a member to make chararts 2) He alrady has this image, Nightshine made it. But Ashshadow's right, this is pretty good! GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 01:53, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing/Mothkit (KIT FORM) Declined

Ummm.... I don't know if this is very good..... This is only my second time doing this so here's Mothkit. I hope you like it![[File:Mothkit.png|thumb|Mothkit]]



WHOOPS! I clicked the "Save Pagebutton too many time.... (I edited this.)"

Sorry but this image is already up for approval and this doesnt match her discription.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:33, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Fernpebble, this image is already up for approval.


[[File:Bumbleflight.warrior.png|thumb|Bumbleflight as a Warrior]]My first try. I hope you like it.MelissatheInu 22:58, March 15, 2010 (UTC)MelissatheInu

It's not a bad image but you're not a member of the project and were not posting Fading Echoes characters until the book is relised.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:01, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cloudspots (W) - Declined

[[File:Cloudspots.png]]It says two images up at a time... so here is Cloudspots! My first two-coloured cat! I think I did okay with him. Comments? ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:38, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Awh, he's great! All I can think of to do are a few minor edits, maybe neatening up the white ears a tad around the uneven white and blurring the other white areas as much as you can? And maybe highlight the body some more like the med cat image? This is so cute ^^ Brightfrostof SunClan...[[File:Brightfrost1.png|60px]] 17:44, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Warning Mistyheart: don't copy the med cat image. It sucks (and before you ask, yes it is one of mine) - at least on't copy the shading. ✐SaNdY 18:44, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Misty. Each user is only allowed one image up at a time. You already have Mothwing's kit image up.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:24, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Forgot that I could do this. Declined until Mothkit is approved. once she's approved feel free to resubmit this.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:39, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Argh, sorry! I swear it used to be two images. Really sorry. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 08:26, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

It didn't Misty. Silverthistle had to take Ivytail (W) down when she put Shadepelt (A) up. Which one do you want to keep? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:14, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

It used to be... the page was so cluttered that we changed it to one.Darkhallows 17:28, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

You can put the image back up for aproval under a new section once your other image is approved, but for now I'm going to archive this. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:35, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) Declined

Has anybody reserved Tigerstar as an apprentice? Can I call him? If so, I call him!

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Look on the main page where the current projects table is. Use Ctrl F and type in the name of a character to see if it's reserved or not and then you can add him to your list.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:03, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Okay. This may be over 35 (andI'm sorry if it is) and just forget the Ravenpaw kit thing, and be HAPPY! However I would like to put this up for approval now. [[File: Tigerpaw no.3.png]]

I'm not sure whether or not he had the scars as an apprentice, but I think I did a pretty good job on him. Comments? Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:25, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit--Nightshine 00:31, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

>_<*sighs* Must you always put me down, Night? I'll wait, as long as it doesn't get declined. I really worked hard on this!

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 01:03, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Calm down, Crystal. All Night pointed out was that this is over the limit, but only by a few images. Some are close to approval. If this is declined it won't be for long. You can put it up as soon as there is only 34 pictures on the page (or less). As for the image, the shading will need some more blurring, and I don;t think he had his scars as an apprentice...he might have since Thistleclaw was training him, but I never read Bluestar's Prophecy so I wouldn't know. Vancouverpath 01:28, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I second that, Mosspath. Crystal (if you don't care if I call you that) you'r art work is gorgous! But still, it is over the limit. Nightshine mean't nothing against you, and nore do I. But all I'm saying is don't pick fight's with people online, it can get pretty nasty... (I know first hand) ♣Silverthistle 03:17, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

There's room now, but in future all you need do is check and see if there are 35 sections with 'For Approval' after them to see if you can put one up. The image is very good, but he needs ear pink, and his pupil needs to be in the middle of his eyes. The tabby stripes need to go further onto his pelt, and the shading needs to be blurred. Bramble 23:58, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

He needs more stripes on his haunch, his head and his arms--Nightshine 00:05, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay! All the changes should be done by Saturday or sooner, right now I'm in a rush so I don't have time! And sorry, Night. Just a little frustrated.

Crystalpaw *glimmer* 00:21, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think this is okay. I just don't know how to put it in the right place, that's why it's over there... Crystalpaw *glimmer* 22:56, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. As for the image make the earpink smaller and blur it more.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:47, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks, and the changes are done, but I don't know if they'll show up. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 16:33, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Would he have had scars as an apprentice? ✐SaNdY 18:53, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I doubt it, but on the other hand Thistleclaw was quite a brutal mentor. What do you guys think? GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 19:40, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think he should have scars. Evanphoto 11:14, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I have mixed feelings of whether he should have the scars on his apprentice image or not. Does the apprentice image represent him as an apprentice near the beginning or end of his apprenticeship? If near the end, then scars would be fine, but near the beginning I doubt yeah, I'm not sure. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eye needs to be fixed. I think maybe he can have one scar and that's it, because he probably got most of his scars as a warrior--Nightshine 23:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to say get rid of the scars. I don't think he had any scars when he was an apprentice. ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 08:17, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

The changes will be made every Saturday, because I have homework, but I'll get it done! Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:40, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

His stripes aren't right, they should look like this: File:Tigerclaw.warrior.3.pngDarkhallows 18:24, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Crystal. I know you're buzy but it's been a week and this wasnt reuploaded on Saturday like you said. To keep it fair for everyone I'm going to have to say work on this or it will be declined.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:01, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's been three days since Ash's warning, Crystal. I'm sorry but this will have to be declined. But you can resubmit this when you get the time to work on it. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 07:39, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W)-Withdrawn by User

[[File:Yellowgfang.warrior.png]]Here she is! I know she dosen't look much like her Medicine Cat image but I'll happily improve it! Her eyes are copied directly off her medicince cat image and her scars are in the same places (thanks for your advice on that topic guys!). The Featherstar thing is a disscusion thingy so this is the 35th image. Comments? Fawny 60px 14:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I actually think that this is the 36th image. If it's not you should lighten her pelt a little.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:37, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I got the colour from her Medicine Cat image. And Timberfur has got CBA so shall I keep it on or take it of? Fawny 60px 14:59, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Well I would say take it off because as far as I can tell Bramble doesn't want more than 35 images on the page( the message at the top of the page). I'm not really sure though.HaikageAsh's Talk 15:03, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ruby's got CBA as well, so I'd think it could stay. Image-wise, the eye is freaking me out, and you need to darken the ear pink/scars and blend the highlights more. Bat 15:13, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

There are a good amout of images that would be taken off later today, i'm just going by the notice. It's not my call so image-wise there is a white pixel on her chest.HaikageAsh's Talk 15:16, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, Ashshadow, Fawny's right. The Featherstar section is a discussion, so this should be kept. Also, Swiftpelt withdrew Tallpoppy, so this technically is the 34th image. Anyway, I think her pelt could be lighter, as she is dark gray. You can take the pelt colors from the medicine cat version. Rainwhisker 16:19, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I took the pelt colour from her Medicine Cat image though and her eyes to. Fawny 60px 16:25, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred her ear and scars but didn't change the eyes. It was like that on the med cat image. I took the pelt colour from that as well. I know she's a dark grey cat (fave) but I did get it from on there. Fawny 60px 16:31, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

To Rainwhisker: Ruby was archived and approved after I made that comment. The earpink is rectangular make it a bit more triangular.HaikageAsh's Talk 17:56, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hey Fawny! ^^ To get the darker grey colour, maybe add some more highlights on the body, tail and face, like on the med cat image? And then smudge the body ones together if need be. The tail highlights look great on black cats if they're used like on the med cat image. I love the scars! ^^ Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 19:12, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks very black to me, lighten the pelt more GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 22:17, February 21, 2010 (UTC)

I am going to withdraw her guys. Sorry. Misty says that Yellowfang was never a warrior in the books so she said I should. I will carry on if anyone disagrees but I don't think you will. Sorry again. Fawny 60px 19:53, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Well she might not have been seen as a warrior but it was mentioned in BP that she was a warrior before becoming a medicine cat.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:06, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, and Flamewolf is doing Hawkheart's warrior image, but he was never shown as a warrior, just mentioned to be one. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 00:58, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

So what should I do? Fawny 60px 10:06, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah! Ravenpaw was never seen a kit, but was mentioned as one! Yeah! Unfourtunately, I don't care anymore. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:37, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't say she was never a warrior and I didn't say she should be taken down. I just wanted to know when she was mentioned as a warrior (Thanks Ash!) She's really good, but the eyes look strange. I know you copied them from the med cat image, but I think you should use Icethroat's tutorial for eyes. :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 12:55, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I'll change the eyes! Fawny 60px 12:59, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did the entire thing. She's now a dark grey, got the right eyes, her Ear Pink is less rectanglar. Anything else I missed? Fawny 60px 16:28, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You missed a white pixel near her neck :) Otherwise I see nothing wrong :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 16:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

I have redone it but it won't let me reupload her without keeping the white pixel which I changed. Fawny 60px 17:17, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded did it. Comments? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:02, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Also please take note to the message on my user page. Thanx Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:41, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her scars need to be a darker pink to match her medicine cat image. File:Yellowfang.medcat.pngAlso, her pelt should be more ragged, but this is very good. :) ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 12:14, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too pale for a dark grey cat. Either make it a darker redish colour or make it more of a greyish-pink colour. Reddish is probably easier. ✐SaNdY 15:38, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more :D ♫ Misty ♫ 60px 17:45, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

How do I do that? I'll darken the ear pink, I see what you mean, Sandy, thanks? Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 18:09, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make her eye color more orange-like. Do you think you could make her fur textured like her meddie cat image?--Nightshine 20:00, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I had a go at making her look more textured. Dosen't look that good though. -sigh- I will withdraw her if you think I should Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 16:29, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Don't be so hard on yourself. I like the way you textured her fur. As for the Image try to blur the earpink some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:36, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

I'll give it a go. I think her med cat image was done on GIMP and I use Pixlr. Thats why it looks weird and dementated. Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 10:04, March 2, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:41, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the smudges and the ear pink. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:31, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

All I can say is maybe make the ear pink that weird grey-pink from the med cat image and blur a bit? Apart from that, she looks great! The raggedy-grey on her pelt looks great :D Brightfrostof SunClan...60px 19:08, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I have re-dne her but I can't reupload her. -sigh- I will try later. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:38, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally! I have blurred the Ear Pink and Smudges and I have also made the Ear Pink more grey-pink. XD! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 17:19, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Commets? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 12:03, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I hate this. Thats why I am whitdrawing it. I don't use GIMP which means that I can't do the ragged pelt the same way as her med. cat image. But I'm not that bothered about her being withdrawn. It's like horse-riding. You are a good rider if you never fall off. You're a better rider if you do fall of because you can learn from you're mistake. :D I will learn. I'm not going to make the same mistake as this one by picking a Charart that I know I won't be able to do. Any way I don't want the Wikia to have bad Chararts. Few! Glad thats over! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:35, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) Declined

[[File:Goldenflower_A.png]]I was so proud of my Shadepelt as an apprentice! So I decided to go on doing solid color cats! Like it, or love it? I think it would look better without shading also. And I think I went over 35, but... Don't take this down! Please! Take someother useless message down! ♣Silverthistle 05:22, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading quite a bit! Fawny 60px 10:07, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Silverthistle, you didn't go over the limit. But please don't call the other chararts and discussion parts on here useless. As for the image, Fawn's right about blurring the shading, and she needs eye white GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 10:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear was nicked as an apprentice so should she have a nicked ear in the image?HaikageAsh's Talk 11:51, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Do you all think i'll get it approved soon? Blurred shading ,don't think nick is needed and I don't know how to make a nick on an apprentice, also crossed out words ♣Silverthistle 14:08, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

She really does need the nicked ear..--Darkhallows 14:26, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added nicked ear ♣Silverthistle 15:28, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the nicked ear. --Icy-chanHappy St. Patrick's Day! 21:19, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thickened nick ♣Silverthistle 03:34, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

CBA? ✐SaNdY 19:52, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Silver but the shading on her chest is really dark.Lighten it a bit or blur it. Fawny 60px 19:55, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened shading ♣Silverthistle 22:03, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink is still a bit dark. I can't see it that well. Fawny 60px

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink and made more visible ♣Silverthistle 22:40, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry again Silver but could you make the ear pinka bit lighter? Really sorry! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 09:11, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

I swear my screen resolution is messed up as I seem to be seeing things differently from everyone else on a lot of images recently. Sorry for the premature CBA call (again). I'll try and sort that out... ✐SaNdY 09:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Its okay Sandy! I just saw it when you put CBA up! Sorry! Fawnstorm 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 13:50, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened ear pink. Also, I will be gone from the dates March 5th-March 13th, so don't expect me to do anything between and on thoose dates. ♣Silverthistle 16:23, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I can't comment below Snady's comment. I should have noticed what I said earlier. Fawny 11:21, February 16, 2010 (UTC) 12:09, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

No need for you to apologise. 'twas my fault. ✐SaNdY 15:55, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:38, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

By the looks of it the light source is coming from us. Apply some more shading to the legs behind the other legs. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:21, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 18:33, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading a bit more--NightshineÜ 04:51, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good Silver, but you need to work on it or it will have to be declined. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:23, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but with the dates you've given us, you've been back for a week and haven't worked on this.HaikageAsh's Talk 13:57, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W)- Declined


I'm pleased with this....Comments? ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 21:06, February 28, 2010 (UTC)Featherblaze

Sorry this is over the limit :(--Nightshine 21:07, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good =) You need to add ear-pink and some of the stripes look a little cramped. ✐SaNdY

Okay, I'm on it. ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 21:12, February 28, 2010 (UTC)Featherblaze

Has the new one come up yet? ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 21:46, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't this over the limit?--Nightshine 21:49, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

You didn't upload the picture properly. You need to upload it on warriors wiki not a picture sharing site--Nightshine 21:53, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I fixed it--Nightshine 21:56, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

I reuploaded a second's not showing..... ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 22:14, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm. Try doing it again. And here's a tutorial if you need help--Nightshine 22:20, February 28, 2010 (UTC)

Please resubmit this after the image number has gone down; Nightshine is correct that this is over the 35 image limit. Will archive momentarily. --Bramble 00:10, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

DON'T TAKE THIS DOWN! *gasps after running after breath* There is another picture that is declined and not for being over the limit so it's technicaly the 35th. --MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT

It's all good Min. Featherblaze, due to other images being declined, this section is fine now, but in future please be mindful of the image limit. As to the image; the whole thing is blurry, as if it's been stretched. That needs to be fixed before anything else can be done. --Bramble 01:29, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 18:07, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit wobbly, try making them straighter. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:19, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'll get on it. ♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 16:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. IcyInvading the fire 20:24, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a little more than a week, please work on it or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:51, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this was really good. You can put this back up when you have time to work on him, declined due to lack of work.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:03, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge (KP)-Declined

Here is my Smudge sample!Hop[[File:Smudge.png|thumb]]e you like it,whoever is reading this.Are the ears okay?I kind of messed up on them,I don't really know!

Iceleap 14:36, March 19, 2010 (UTC)Iceleap

P.S.And I have no idea if I'm in Project Charart!So I don't know if this will be acceptable!

Im sorry but Smudge is already up for appreovel. Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 15:32, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Iceleap. Will archive later.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:36, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I've added you as an apprentice, welcome to the project! I'm sorry about Smudge, but if you'll notice Jmiles already has him up for approval towards the top of the page. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:49, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Snowy (Q) - Withdrawn

[[File:SnowyQueen.png]]My first! Her description is shorthaired, but her rogue picture is longhaired, so I followed the pic :/ Should I do a shorthair one? silversquid {meow!} 20:31, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

This isn't bad! But Moonpelt already had Snowy (Q) up for approval--NightshineÜ 20:36, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Nightshine's right. It's not far up the page. But, you can find a different queen to use this as NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:37, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I've checked, and there doesn't seem to be a white she-cat that needs a queen image. However, if you darkened it a lot; making it gray, added stripes, this could be Graymist's queen image NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:39, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Scratch that, Graymist is shorthaired NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:41, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oops. I didn't see it on current projects list. Oh well. silversquid {meow!} 21:15, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it should be on the current project lists, but it's on this page. Scroll up, Moonpelt has it up for approval NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:17, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

My first charart, Diesel! Declined

Ok ok tell me how bad it is but this is my first one! This is diesel the kitty pet and in my opinion, it's good for a first timer. I suck at shading so don't say anything if it's about shading ok well bye! P.S. I worked from 9-12 a.m. on this! Snowstorm Deputy of LightClan!

I'm sorry Snowstorm, but this has already been reserved by Jmiles. It's a good image, but it will have to be declined. Will archive later NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:22, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay Nightfall =( At least I know I tried my best *sigh* ok well what does archive later mean? And how can I reserve one? Thanks Plz awnser![[File:Kittypet_Blanks_MaleShort.jpg|thumb]]

Spottedpelt (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Spottedpelt_(Ki).png]]My first tortie. All right, go ahead. Tell me how horrible it is. Construcments? --IcyInvading the fire 21:31, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten up your black spots a bit, and make your highlights a bit brighter. You can also color the whole thing with the sponge tool to make a brighter, slightly darker color. That's what I did for Firestar (W) Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 22:02, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, Echo, there's no highlights. --IcyInvading the fire 22:09, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink.--NightshineÜ 00:52, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darken shading and ear pink. --IcyInvading the fire 00:57, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the parts that are supposed to be white lighter--NightshineÜ 01:08, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made the white transitions lighter. --IcyInvading the fire 01:10, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

The spots look too small compared to her warrior image. And I can't see the ear pink very well.Darkhallows 17:31, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I can't make the spots any bigger, because the kit blank is smaller. Spots get bigger once the cat grows up. -right?- I'll re-do the ear pink. --IcyInvading the fire 20:33, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

On her warrior picture her ears are black and the white on her right(our left) should go up farther. I think Shady ment that the spots are more patchish on her warrior pic.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:38, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --IcyInvading the fire 22:49, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Put the ear pink in the middle of the ears, and color in the nose pink. This looks really good, though! --Icy-chan says hello! 21:43, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

It looks kind of fuzzy. Can you define the patches more? And the patches are more grey than black. Raven Randomness! 21:55, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

I did what Icy said. And raven, I copied the color patches from the warrior image. It looks fuzzy because GIMP's awesome blur tool blurs so much it makes the entire image fuzzy. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 22:09, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The white on her right leg still needs to go up higher.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Just make the entire hind paw white, and the patches are still blurred too much. --Icy-chan says hello! 22:36, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the white parts lighter--NightshineÜ 22:37, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Made white parts lighter. I got permission from Icy to do this--NightshineÜ 02:00, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! The only thing I see, is to define and darken the black parts more. Also, lighten the ear pink NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 02:08, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Nighteh, (nightshine) And thanks again, night! I will work on this after school. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 12:12, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 23:37, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

She's rather dark now. Lighten her a little and blur the earpink. This is really good.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:48, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I lighten the image, but I have to wait for the changes to show up. Once they show up, I will blur her earpink. And thanks, Ash. :) --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 23:49, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 23:58, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Make the eye colour more amberish: I can't see it. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 00:15, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Edit thirty nine. xD thefore, reuploaded. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 21:18, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Theres a dark spot on her right foot. I still think the white on her right leg should go up higher. if you look at her warrior image almost the entire leg is white.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:34, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 22:25, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Her two front paws look too white... add some shading to them. ✐SaNdY 16:37, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Make the paws very pale grey instead of white, so that the shading will show up ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:44, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I will do it soon. And it is pale gray, I'll darken it. -- IceSpring is here! 18:51, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

When I said that almost the whole leg was white I only ment the right one. I thought I said that but I guess i didnt.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:27, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah you did. Make the white go all the way up her right leg and add shading to both arms.--NightshineÜ 20:30, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. -- IceSpring is here! 23:43, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

She looks more brown than her warrior her warrior image, she didn't have brown spots. And maybe smudge some spots, especially the ones on her chest. Right now they look too circular. OMpath3rd Place! 22:18, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, I'm withdrawing this. -- IceSpring is here! 23:07, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (SC) (A) - Withdrawn

[[File:Ivytail.SC.apprentice.png]] My fail attempt at her apprentice image, which one should I keep up for approval: the one with the patches sort of blurred (left), or epicly blurred (right)? I noticed that the shading on the white fur needs lightened, I'll lighten it once I decide which one to keep up for approval. Also, I have to admit, this is probably one of my worst images ever. :) Comments and suggestions? --Icy-chan says hello! 14:45, March 19, 2010 (UTC)
I like the second, but could you smudge the patches a litthe? Or make them less round?Darkhallows 18:54, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ice this is really good! I like the second one too. Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 18:57, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I like the second one best. Just do what Darkhallows said.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:38, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Really good, Icy. I like the second one, for that do what Shady said. As for the first one, if you decide to keep it up, you can blur the patches some more. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 21:14, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'll upload it to just the second upload when I upload the changes. When I tried smudging the patches, it didn't work at all and looked really horrible. How should I make the patches less circular? (Normally I use the smudge tool to smudge, but this time I tried it and it looked really bad...) --Icy-chan says hello! 00:06, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

The Ear Pink looks a bit red. And its a little far down on the Ear. This is amazing though! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:21, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, the earpink on Ivytail's queen image is red, Fawnstorm. ☼ Misty ☼Here comes the summer... 16:54, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Why so formal Mistyheart? But this looks very red. FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:44, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reguardless, it's still too red. Darkhallows 21:29, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Uh, if it's okay, I'd like to withdraw this. This image just isn't working out, and I can't get to look much like the queen image. I should have smudged the patches before adding highlights, but now when I try to smudge it it looks horrible, so the only option I would have would be to start over, and I'd much rather work on another image (an FE image if I get to). Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. --Icy-chan says hello! 23:02, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe (W) - Withdrawn by User


There are 3 discussions, so this should be good.

His stripes on his rogue image were awesome. The cat, however, is not...

"Darkstripe is neither young nor pretty..."

LOL. Comments? Batteh 23:37, March 22, 2010 (UTC)!

I think you should make the stripes more circular and highlight thge tail a tiny bit~LionClaw~fight from with in

It's very good, Batty, but make the stripes more like the rogue image, and at the end of the tail, split the stripe in half. Then it would look good! Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 23:57, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I love this, Bat. Smudge the stripes, so they look less blurred. Once again, I love this! -- IceSpring is here! 00:09, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, the stripes are too blurry compared to his rouge image. Add more smaller stripes around his neck--NightshineÜ 00:24, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Any suggestions on how to "un-blur" the stripes? Batteh 20:28, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

Use the sharpening tool, maybe. I think it's located next to the blur tool. It should look like a triangle on pixlr. Also, darken the shading a little, it is hard to see.OMpath3rd Place! 22:28, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Never mind. I'm going to withdraw this so I can get Bumbleflight up and work on it in the meantime. Batteh 22:48, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

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