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FlameTail - Declined

[[File:FlameTail.png]] anything to say? anything to say its my first!

Sorry but Flametail already has a medicine cat apprentice charart--NightshineÜ 03:14, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above. --Bramble 03:36, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Petal (KP) - Declined

[[File:PetalKP.png]]
I need to know how to shade this. Other than that, comments? Critique? Critiquents? My fourth image, and first kittypet. ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 10:35, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

Just like you said the shading otherwise its pretty good! Moonpelt1786 14:22, February 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure what you mean by saying you need to know how to shade it, but I'll explain two different ways.

  • Using the burn tool, set the range on highlights, and it will show up on white.
  • Run the tool along the back, the legs, the edges of the head, and the bottom of the tail.

Does that help? Bramble 17:41, February 22, 2010 (UTC)
Is that the shading? It looks like she has stripes. The shading needs to touch the lineart, and to be blurred more GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:54, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Yes if your shading this dark most of the time you need to blur it with the blur tool. Moonpelt1786 04:52, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

ReuploadedҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 10:06, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is still really really dark, try lightening it and blurring. Look at some other kittypets to see how they're shaded as this style isn't very connected.HaikageAsh's Talk 11:35, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the shading and make it more smooth and connected as the others said. For an example of what a light colored kittypet's shading should look like, try Snowdrop. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 03:56, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't look anything like her queen image, as a matter of fact, she doesn't look like her description either. She looks white, not pale gray. And the shading still looks like stripes. Make her pale gray, and lighten and blur the shading a lot. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 03:59, February 25, 2010 (UTC)

I copied the pale gray colour from the queen image. Will reupload on Tuesday.ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 06:30, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Rubeupluboadubed lol. Reuploaded.ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 05:04, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink is too bright, and there needs to be more shading near the base of the tail. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:36, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, her earpink is HOTPINK. Make it a little paler. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and Crystalpaw, instead of typing "Crystalpaw *glimmer*" just type ~~~~ ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 07:45, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Very good Lightning! Make the ear pink like Whitestorm's and the shading needs a tad more blending. (: IcyInvading the fire 20:27, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 05:14, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more and make it smaller. Can you also add more shading?--NightshineÜ 05:41, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 09:31, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still isn't right. try the style used on Snowdrop , Cloudtail's kittypet image, or Lily. HaikageAsh's Talk 20:38, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this can only be reuploaded after a couple of days as my PC got formatted, and Photoshop is gone. ҖѬ ѳѥ ѯ 04:51, March 10, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart on the top of the head is blurred. OMpath3rd Place! 14:56, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Are you going to be able to update this anytime soon? If not you can always put it back up later.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:35, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's been four days since Ashshadow's warning. Sorry, Grayravenpaw, but I'm gonna have to decline this. Will archive later NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:12, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight - Declined

i mean briarlight as a warrior?

If no one else has it reserved than you can do it. Also please stop making a new section each time you need something and sign with 4(~).HaikageAsh's Talk 00:16, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:100px-Warriorshortf.gif|thumb|BriarLight]]anything to say for Briarpaw as a warrior (BriarLight and i messed up on the eyes?....LionClaw132 00:26, March 24, 2010 (UTC)LionClaw132

The whole thing is too small. try remaking it with this: [[File:Warriorshortf.gif]]HaikageAsh's Talk 00:44, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

ok ill try it! thnx! its my first one anyone acually noticed!


[[File:BriarLight.gif]]

alright there it is! it sucks! :-(LionClaw132 00:50, March 24, 2010 (UTC)lionclaw

question????how do you make the picture go above the writing like you do and not on the side like mine?LionClaw132 00:52, March 24, 2010 (UTC)LionClaw132

Sorry but Fawnstorm already has Briarlight reserved. You don't need a new topic everytime you want to post something--NightshineÜ 00:53, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

NOOO i cant do anything becuase evrything is taken! i may as well wait for 6 months for the next bookc! or 10!LionClaw132 00:59, March 24, 2010 (UTC)LionClaw

Snowtuft (W)- Declined

[[File:Snowtuft.png]]

He is my very first one.. OH THE FAIL... Constructments for my failure? Brightmoon Night Whispers,and Sign of the Moon! 19:22, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well, he's supposed to be all white, not white and gray. If that's shading, it needs to be lightened and blurred a lot. He needs eye color, I would suggest blue, amber, or green. He also needs ear pink NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:36, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I have him reserved, and I was about to post him. This will have to be declined, I'm sorry... insaneular Talk 20:01, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well, declined for above reasons. ✐SaNdY 20:38, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (W) - Declined

My first tortie!! I tried to copy her apprentice image..--≈៛₪¥ -§₰₪₥≈ 13:01, March 26, 2010 (UTC) [[File:Blossomfall.png]]

Ivypool, please don't remove sections from the page. Everything must be archived. I archived this here because if you had left it on the page it would be declined. This is declined because someone else already had it on their current projects. --Icy-chan says hello! 14:45, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - Declined

[[File:Dawncloud.Apprentice.gif]] Any suggestions? :> MelissatheInu 01:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC) MelJoInuChan

It's pretty good, but you forgot to color her underbelly, it should be brown like the rest of her pelt NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 01:56, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There I fixed the belly. MelissatheInu 02:21, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The eye needs to be fixed. See here or here to find out how--NightshineÜ 03:37, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't seem to have any shading. Click on one of the tutorial links that Nightshine posted above, to see how to do shading NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 08:55, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

And the stripes need to be blurred some more. Hawkfirelikes to PARTAY!! 16:40, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to fix the shading but it wouldn't let me.MelissatheInu 02:07, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's not that there was shading before that needed fixing, but there isn't any at all that I see atleast. If there is some there, then darken and blur it NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:47, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look too regular and need to be a bit more varied. Also, there are big gaps where you haven't added any stripes so add some markings in and blur them all a little. Shading is needed as I can't see any. ✐SaNdY 16:39, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 18:20, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 16:52, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Petalnose (KP) -declined

[[File:Petalnosekp.png]]no this does not looks good...i need help >.< any improvements?Pebble2Pineow 04:05, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! But, I reserved her kittypet image first, sorry! NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:12, March 27, 2010 (UTC)


D: sorry night i didnt recognize petal(kp) at first :( i guess ill do somethin else then24.87.9.47 21:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)


removed

Firestar (W) - Declined

[[File:Firestar6.warrior.png]]This is Firestar as a warrior. Questions? Comments? Concerns? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

His pelt color isn't quite right and he looks very smudgy. Alos you need to define the tabby stripes on his back more.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:05, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Do you want me to make it darker? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Not exactly. He needs to be redder like this: [[File:Firestar(L).png]] . Yours is more orange.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:17, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, I'm an apprentice here. How do I do that? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 20:27, March 14, 2010 (UTC)
I say, to fill in the pelt color with that pelt color, (upload the image, open it, click the dropper tool, click the pelt, click your image, fill it in). Then do the tabby stripes with the same color as the tabby stripes on his leader image. Add shading, then blur it all together, then do the eye, shown here IcyInvading the fire 20:50, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Like this? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:18, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yep. (: Just add ear pink, and blue the highlights. --IcyInvading the fire 21:19, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is it good? This is my first ever pic. Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:23, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for your first pic. Just blur the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:26, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I brightened it a bit as well. What do you think? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:58, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

The color is good but I cant really see the shading anymore. Also add a few stripes to the tail and blur all of the stripes more HaikageAsh's Talk 22:08, March 15, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make him more orangey? He pretty red right now--NightshineÜ 00:41, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made him more orange, brightened it, contrasted it a little, made the shading better. Questions? Comments? Concerns? Is it ready? Echostar~ May StarClan Light Your Path 21:11, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and shading. --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 21:56, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

I still think the color isn't quite right, he looks too bright. Not the shading, just his general pelt color looks bright reddish orange NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 09:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too bright, the shading isn't blurred enough.Darkhallows 18:01, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Tha stripes and the shading are way off. Also the stripes are way to bright like Dark hallows said. And last the stripes look kind of....sloppy. But that could be my opinion. MooNPelT 02:48, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look as if you took the burn tool and used that for the stripes. Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 13:37, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Echopaw: There's nothing wrong with using the burn tool for stripes... Echostar: The shading needs blending and the stripes need neatening up and darkening. ✐SaNdY 16:36, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:24, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 22:29, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (D) - Declined

[[File:Gorsestar-Deputy.png]] Hopefully this is better than Gorsepaw as a kit... Shistar Mai Talk Page 21:02, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

I know you were trying to make him like the leader image, but his upper body looks really empty without a tabby stripe there. Upper-left chest area, I mean.--Shaf Girl 23:46, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... so what should I do? Do you think it'd be alright to slip in another stripe? Shistar Mai Talk Page 00:54, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes extend longer toward the chest and add another stripe on the neck and tail. Also darken the shading and ear pink--NightshineÜ 05:09, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Guys, I think Ashshadow had this reserved first GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 08:37, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops... another epic fail on my part. Sorry Ashshadow! D= Shistar Mai Talk Page 14:06, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

I never reserved this so it's ok. Maybe you thought this was stonestar? Either way you should add him to your current projects.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:41, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm... I probably should. xD

So... would it be alright to slip in another stripe on the chest? (And yes, I just realized I forgot to blur the shading.. I'll do that soon. xD) Shistar Mai Talk Page 16:48, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Either that or make some of his stripes a bit longer. Darken the shading a bit too.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:52, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading then blur it. And make the stripes a bit shorter. IcyInvading the fire 20:58, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been working on this... There was a blackout and I lost all my work. >_>

But am I making the stripes shorter or longer? LOL. xD Ring Ring Banana Phone! 23:10, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well he does have pretty long stripes on his leader version. Maybe just leave them that size and adjust the placement.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:17, March 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Sorry for the delay... Pixlr was being mean yesterday. xD

But yeah, I blurred the shading, ear pink, some stripes... added a tiny one to the chest, and went over some lineart with a black pencil. ^_^ Ring Ring Banana Phone! 16:14, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

There's still a vacant place on his upper chest/lower neck area. But I may just be nitpicking about that. In any case, blur the existing stripes more.--Shaf Girl 02:41, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:21, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 08:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt(W) - Declined

[[File:PatchpeltW.png]]im not sure but are we still allowed to hve 2 images up? Pebble2Pineow 22:50, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

No. You are not. At least I don't think. LOL. Brightmoon Night Whispers,and Sign of the Moon! 22:52, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, and Patchpelt has a warrior image.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:54, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Patchpelt already has a warrior image, and this is your second image up on the page. Declined ✐SaNdY 08:53, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight (W) - Declined

[[File:Briarlight.png]]

Briarlight as a warrior!

It's my first image, so please be gentle!

You've fogotton to sign, always do that after you leave a message. You are not a member of this project, but I could add you as an apprentice if you'd like. But, I'm sorry, Fawnstorm already reserved Briarlight's warrior image, you can't do her. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:02, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Lol Night you forgot to sign also :D. I thought Brightfrost reserved Molekit?--NightshineÜ 05:01, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

That was really stupid of me XD Sorry, I meant Fawnstorm NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:02, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

But, this is really good, do you want me to add you to the project? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:03, March 28, 2010 (UTC) Yes, Brightfrost has already reserved this,so this should be declined. Agreed? ☮Quail will rescue Haiti!☮We are the World... 05:07, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, that was my bad; Fawnstorm reserved her, not Brightfrost. I'll archive this tomorrow NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 05:22, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declining for the above reasons. ✐SaNdY 08:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reedwhisker (D) - Declined

[[File:Reedwhisker_(D).png]] - Er, I dunno if he appeared in the book as a deputy, but I dunno. -shrugs- Anyways, construments? IceSpring is here! 15:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well... can you find out then? ^_^ ✐SaNdY 16:00, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll find out. IceSpring is here! 16:05, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Erm... -shifts- He doesn't appear in the book at all :/. Mistystar never mentions a deputy (why, I dunno).Darkhallows 17:11, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Then... will this have to be declined until her deputy is confirmed? I was shocked that she didn't say who it was, too. insaneular Talk 17:30, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I guess so. We don't want a repeat of Oatwhisker if we approve this so early. But wasnt it confirmed in an Erin hunter chat/ Can we go by that?HaikageAsh's Talk 17:34, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. But if it won't work, decline it, please. IceSpring is here! 22:33, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declining, then. Save it for later, Ice; there's a possibility you can use it for when Night Whispers comes out. --Bramble 23:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Frostfur_kit.png]]My best eveh! My first kit also! How bad is she? Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 00:07, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good :) I added you back on the chart, but it's strange that you were removed... anyway. I would darken the ear pink a bit, and thicken and lighten the shading NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:09, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

It says on top if you are gone for a period of time you get removed anywho im on it! Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 00:15, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

I would redo the shading because... it doesn't relly look like shading. It looks like stripes on the side. Try redoing it or bluring it. Moonpelt01:28, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

Echo: if your using GIMP, I suggest clicking the blur tool and at the left, set it on too 100 %. And BLUR. Also darken the ear pink. --SaintIceHappy Saint Patrick's Day 22:08, March 19, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is really dark, like Moonpelt said its looks a bit like stripes. Darken the Ear Pink, but this is good! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 09:25, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP is awesome!! This is my best eveh! Echo-Wave Hi kitteh! 16:20, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ha, I agree. Shading needs to be thicken and blurred more. Another than that it's awesome. :) -- IceSpring is here! 17:07, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Great! But the shading needs to be more spread away from the body, you kn ow what I mean? It's really close and dark near the edge opf the fur now but yopu need to bring it out some. Other then that its amazing!--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:54, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 08:35, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Feel free to resubmit after the changes have been made and you have more time to work on this image. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:29, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Brambleberry(K) - Declined

File:BrambleberryK.png
Ok, since my attempt at Dawncloud as an apprentice failed I disiced to attempt something alittle bit easier, a basic black spotted white cat, and seeing how nobody had done Brambleberry's kit or apprentice forms I decided I would attempt her in those forms. So here is my attempt at her as a Kit. Suggestions are welcome. MelissatheInu 16:17, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but we never see Brambleberry as a kit or apprentice in the books, so we don't need a kit image or an apprentice image of her. --Icy-chan says hello! 16:24, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I had just figured that she had to of been a kit sometime, because, yeah, cats are born as kittens. xD MelissatheInu 16:26, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Melissa, rules here are if a cat isn't seen as, say an apprentice, then they aren't done. If they were an apprentice, then the image is allowed. Sorry, it'll have to be taken down. Nice job though! BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:37, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Melissa, but we only need images for ranks we've seen cats at. If you're stuck for ideas then I have a list here. Declining. ✐SaNdY 17:50, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. 24.186.167.60 00:14, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, that was me. Forgot to log in. Rainwhisker 00:15, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Molekit - Declined

[[File:Molekit.jpg|thumb|Charcat by Duststar]] Here's my Molekit. Duststar 19:20, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

A few things:

  • Brightfrost is already doing Molekit's charart so you can't do him, sorry. See here to see a list of Current Projects
  • Charart is best saved as either a .png or a .gif (preferably the first, but .gif is accepted also) for the simple reason of quality. A .jpeg image is often fuzzy and pixelated and not to the standard we want here.
  • To upload an image go to Special:Upload

✐SaNdY 19:28, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Thanks. How did I do with him? Duststar 20:08, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Well, pretty good. But it'll have to be declined for the reason Sandy stated above. Brightfrost already has Molekit reserved. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:42, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) - Declined

[[File:Frostfur_(A).png]]i'm back! This is Frostfur as a apprentice. How is she? And I got BP today, and I also got Sunrise. (finally) --BlacktailTalk! 19:39, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! Lighten the shading a bit around the chest and arms and darken the ear pink a bit--NightshineÜ 19:46, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Nighteh! Reuploaded. BlacktailTalk! 21:18, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Um, I have Frostfur (A) reserved and I checked and you don't...--LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 01:02, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Moonflight but this has been up since the 20th and you didn't reserve her until the 22nd. You have to check the PCA talk page first sometimes because some users change their reservations as soon as they put an image up. As for the image blur the shading and highlights together more.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:07, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my bad Ash. Sorry Blacktail. As for Frostfur, there seems to be a faint square of white on her chest. You might want to fix that :) --LuckflightHappy St. Patty's Day! 01:11, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 17:56, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

Declined for the 31st. ✐SaNdY 21:38, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Snapper (R) - Declined

[[File:SNAPPER.png]]

Now I know that I haven't been on in a while, but I really hope that I didn't forget all of my training. This is my first tortie, and I really hope that this is good, or even okay. I'm not too sure about the shading or the scars, is he okay?--MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 22:55, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darn, I just saw that rainwhisker had already had him up, I must have missed rainwhiskers reservation on the page, my search thing must not be working. Please don't take this down, I am looking for another cat this could be.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 23:02, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

( Never mind, I can't find anything. Would Bramble, Sandy or a senior warrior take this down, unless someone knows who this can be.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 23:07, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Keep working hard, Minnow, it's a great image, despite the fact that another's already been put up. Archiving. --Bramble 21:48, April 1, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (E) - Declined

OMG this is appsalutly terrible anyways this was originly longtail but i with drew him and put this up this was a very fast char art! and does any one know how to shade? plz tell me!LionClaw132 01:10, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I know he was elder age but was he ever seen as an elder? For shading if you use pixlr use the burn tool. It looks like a hand. Also the lineart is too thick.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:14, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Ash is right. Try using a tutorial to help--NightshineÜ 01:17, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if you saved it over the elder blank. Please create a new file for this--NightshineÜ 01:19, March 25, 2010 (UTC)


ok i did what you said and here it is!(btw dont say anything about the eyes i personaly love them!LionClaw132 01:45, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of the thumbnail and frame. You don't need a new section every time.--NightshineÜ 01:54, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

ok thnx but any thing else about i or is it fit enough to go on Cinderfur's page as a pixle?LionClaw132 01:56, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Not yet. Some of the lineart is weird. You need to add shading and fix the eye--NightshineÜ 02:03, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

When I tried making this small again it turned into the elder lineart. Don't use that file to color save it and rename the file as your own--NightshineÜ 02:04, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

There is no color~ NOWHERE Cinderfur is gray~ Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 02:29, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

shes right~NOWHERE!LionClaw132 02:36, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

Did you look at the tutorials? I took it out of thumbnail and frame again--NightshineÜ 03:00, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

He was never seen as an elder so this will have to be declined. Sorry--NightshineÜ 03:04, March 25, 2010

yes he was look at hes page and it says he was a elder!(into the wild!)

Okay. You can keep this then. You need to re-do his image so the lineart is the right size.

Here: [[File:Eldermaleshort3.png]] Start over with that--NightshineÜ 03:13, March 25, 2010 (UTC

ok fineLionClaw132 03:20, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

ok there you go!LionClaw132 15:22, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

The background is black, it needs to be transparent. There are some white pixels on his paws, his eyes need to be colored in, he needs ear pink, and there's no shading NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:46, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I can make his background transparent if you want me too. -- IceSpring is here! 23:12, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

That's so nice, Ice! (lol, that rymes) But does the image look squashed? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:02, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yea, it does look a bit squished. Can you cut out some of the extre space around the image, It's kinda big.HaikageAsh's Talk 02:40, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

No, you need to start over using the one Nightshine gave you as yours is only 120px not full size thus making it distorted in both size and shape. ✐SaNdY 08:43, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on him or he will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:55, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 09:35, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

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