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Bumblestripe (W) - Withdrawn

[[File:Bumblestripe.warrior.png]]

I temporarily withdrew Darkstripe until I could figure out how to make him less blurry. So, here's the newly named Bumblestripe. Yay, first Fading Echoes character for approval! :D Comments? Batteh 23:00, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

This is good. Lighten his pelt color a little. It looks dark compared to his apprentice image.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:05, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes on his back look too thick compared to his apprentice image. This is really good, though! --Icy-chan says hello! 23:27, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Batteh. He is pretty good... Except the stripes are thick, and then the pelt is 27 gray shades too dark!!! IT'S A CAT-ASTROPHE! (J.K. ;) ) Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 23:29, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't I reserve him?--NightshineÜ 23:45, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Jeez, Brightflight, chill. I can't really make the stripes "thinner"... I tried to make them thin when I made him. I'll lighten the pelt in a moment. Batteh 23:57, March 23, 2010 (UTC)!

Reuploaded - Made pelt lighter, attempted to sharpen stripes. Batteh 00:07, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

Theres a darker gray spot around some of the stripes and personally I think his pelt should be just a tiny bit lighter. Nightshine:Blue had it first. I checked the history. Depending on what timezone you're in it might have been shown as the 22nd like it was on mine.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:12, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Any better? Batteh 00:26, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

The color is good but his stripes kinda blobed out. sorry, I cant think of a better adjective.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:28, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to repeat what others have already said, but I think the stripes are the only real issue. On his apprentice pic, they're thick on his spine, but thin out to a point... so I'd recommend that you take the cray color of his pelt, and draw on the stripes to make them thin out, then just blur it really well. Other than that he looks good :) insaneular Talk 02:33, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I know mister picky here but the stripes on the tail don't look like the ones on his apprentice version~ Moonpelt~It’s track season~ 03:31, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Woahh, hang on. The charart is nice but Nightshine had him reserved first! :3 In fact, I had him reserved first, after I woke up at midnight, but then decided it wasn't fair to have two Fading Echoes chararts after some messages on the discussion. I was waiting for someone to actually ask nicely if they could do him, so I could remove his name from my 'list.' =/ Brightfrostof SunClan...[[File:Brightfrost1.png|60px]] 07:41, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

There needs to be a lot more stripes. His apprentice image has stripes that are thin and lots in numbers but the ones here are thicker and there are only a few. ;) FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 10:14, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Well.. Yeah... but still. The stripes need to be thin, and large in number. Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 20:00, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I completely redid him. I know the haunch stripes look kind of weird, but I don't really know what to do about them... suggestions? Batteh 23:15, March 24, 2010 (UTC)!

We still need to discuss who is going to do this charart!--NightshineÜ 23:19, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

Work it out between the two of you if you're so concerned, Nightshine. Just try and keep it civil... I'm getting sick of all these comments 'didn't I reserve this first?' and 'so-and-so had this reserved!' Almost isn't worth having the current projects table. -.- ...sometimes I wish the whole thing would just disappear. Anyways, just try and work it out between the two of you, please. --Bramble 03:02, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

I thought we'd worked it out, but I guess not. Comments on the image? Batteh 11:18, March 25, 2010 (UTC)!

The midriff stripe is really big. Can you sort it out? Didn't Nightshine ask Frosty if she could do it (sorry Barmble XD)? FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:41, March 25, 2010 (UTC)

The middle stripe goes all the way across, making it look strange. If you could also lighten the black on the stripes, that would be great, because they blend in with the lineart too well. I'm not going to interfere with the decision of who keeps this; it's up to you two, if you want to go through the effort. Bramble 21:16, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes also seem a tad sharp to me as well. Blur the edges of them some more.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:13, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Sorry he took so long. He looks worse now, in my opinion. I couldn't really lighten the stripes, and I couldn't blur the stripes without making them look too blurred. You people need to teach me how you make your tabby stripes look so smooth. Batteh 21:16, March 29, 2010 (UTC)!

It looks a little pixly. Blur the stripes some more, especially the ones on his back. If you can't lighten the stripes, set the dodge tool to highlights, and the strength to 10-15. Then it should lighten a lot better. (Ignore this if you know it already) Rainwhisker 00:02, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on his chest needs to be blurred as well.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 01:43, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The second stripe down on his neck looks like it has a stripe around it.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:30, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I can't really do anything. I'm going to let Nightshine do this. Hers was a lot better than mine. c: Batteh 21:50, April 4, 2010 (UTC)!

o Really!? Thank you! I'll need to have my sharpclaw blanks approved first.--NightshineÜ 21:55, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

-sigh- Archiving. ✐SaNdY 14:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (A) - Declined

[[File:Russetfur_Apprentice.png]]I havent given up on Yellowfang (W) yet but I finished Russetfur (A) --Clarrissa! :) 12:45, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but you can only have one image up at a time. You'll have to give up this one or give up Yellowfang. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 13:01, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

We never see Russetfur as an apprentice, so you can;t do this image. It's good, but we can't use it. Sorry. Mousetalon! Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE! 13:20, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay :P I will consentrate on Yellowfang then,thanks. Besides I think she was one of Tigerstars rouges which means she never was an apprentice! Clarrissa! :) 13:36, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

She most likely was an apprentice, but never seen or mentioned as one, so we can;t do a charart of her as one. Just remember that, Clarissa, I almost made that mistake once. Mousetalon! Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE! 13:54, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur (W)- Declined

[[File:Russetfur_W.png]]


What do you think? ~Echostar[[File:Echostar2.leader.png|60px]] 21:25, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this is over the limit and I think Fawnstorm has this reserved. it's not bad though. HaikageAsh's Talk 21:28, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

This is over 35 images. Declined.. sorry Echostar. ✐SaNdY 21:51, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sootfur (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Sootkit.png]] Not much to say about him.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 03:39, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

He's pretty good! Darken and blur the shading, and make the ear pink more reddish NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit--Nightshine{ 03:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Please put this back up after image number has gone down. Declining and archiving. --Bramble 03:52, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Daisytail (Q)- Withdrawn by User

[[File:Daisytail_Queen.png]] I had her reserved before I left, so here she is. I found her pic in the book, so she does have a description. I didn't know what color she was so I went with gray because that was what color she was in the book. So . . . . comments on my first image in forever? (Thjere are like, six discussions so this is under the limit) Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 17:56, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

One word- WOW! Really great to have you back Mousey! This is beautiful! One thing to say for it to add shading to the front leg that's furthest away from us and to the hind paw. Also to blur the stripes a bit more. Else wize this is gourgous! :3 BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 18:01, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is GREAT! Add color to the nose.--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 18:04, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. My memory is escaping me! Ack! Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 18:39, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the arm furthest from us and add sone shading th the ear furthest from us.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:34, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights on her head and back. --Gοlδεnpαω Ap<span style="color: #FF007F">pare! 23:50, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added shading. And Goldenpaw, there already were highlights, so I didn't put that much on. And can't you see the highlights on her head? Oh well, anything else? Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 16:10, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Hate to sound impatient, but is there anything else I can do . . . ? --Mousetalon! Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE! 11:51, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights. IceSpring is here! 15:53, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I can't, or they'll look tacky. It turned out terrible when I tried. I put loads of highlights on it, you just can;t see them because of the light coat. --Mousetalon! Hopelessly devoted to CHOCOLATE! 16:46, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

To be honest, the stripes look much too cartoony and squiggly. Cats don't have stripes like that. Perhaps if you smudged them?--Darkhallows 05:35, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Tabby_cat.jpg]] I tried to base them off of these stripes- and epically failed. Anyways, what should I do about it? I don't know. --Mousetalon!![[File:Mousestars.png|40px]] 23:40, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe you can try making them look more like this: [[File:Milliequeen.png]] I love those stripes and it would be cool to have them on Daisytail--Nightshine{ 00:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think this should be up for approval, because her pelt color isn't even up! And that would be like if I just randomly picked a cat and made it be golden with gray spots! (not being rude about it, just stateing my opion...) Ham and Eggsa days work for a chicken, a lifetime commitment for a pig

There is a picture of her in Code of the Clans, the page number escapes me. (I'm too lazy to get up. I'm stuffed with a sandwhich and carrot cake XD) However, that could have been Hazelstar adressing his Clan. NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 03:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hazelstar wasn't on the rock. And I can't really do that other type, so I'll just withdraw this and put up Runningbrook I guess. --Mousetalon 22:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Russetfur_(W)- Declined

[[File:Russetfur_W.png]] I did my best. Comments? Questions? Concerns? This is only my second-ever image. ~Echostar[[File:Echostar2.leader.png|60px]] 07:34, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Did you take down my image of Shredtail? It was here a day ago--Nightshine{ 14:42, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

You also deleted Sharpclaw. Please do not delete other people's chararts.--Nightshine{ 14:44, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Declined because you removed other images to make space for your own. This goes against project etiquette. You may repost this when the page goes under 35 images. ✐SaNdY 14:58, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thrushpelt (W) - Declined

[[File:Thrushpelt(W).png]]Hey, this is my first charart (after my miserable Snowtuft -_- sorry insane), so constructments? Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 21:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC) This is good for a first timer! But the pelt color is really dark. Try to make it more like her medicine cat image: Also, blur the ear pink a little more.Snowstorm! 21:58, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


[[File:Thrushpelt_(MC)_.png]]


Reuploaded. I lightened the pelt, and blurred that earpink. Anymore comments? Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 23:19, March 28, 2010 (UTC) The pelt still needs to b lightened a lot more NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:21, March 28, 2010 (UTC) Crud it! I uploaded the wrong cat LOL FAIL Be done in a min ;D Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 23:53, March 28, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Epic fail on my part. Any more comments? Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 23:57, March 28, 2010 (UTC) Blur the shading some more. ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 00:42, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Blurred shading. Any more comments? Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 19:22, March 29, 2010 (UTC) The back paw on her med cat image is brown and the flecks need to be blurred more.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:36, March 29, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Did paw thing and blurred flecks till they looked pretty much gray. LOL! Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon

20:03, March 29, 2010 (UTC) Darken her eye color a bit? ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 16:25, March 30, 2010 (UTC) Reuploaded. Darkened eye thing. Any more comments? Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 19:02, March 30, 2010 (UTC) The earpink needs blurring and flecks need tons of blurring. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 21:06, March 30, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Blurred. Till. I. Died. Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 23:20, March 30, 2010 (UTC).


The brown paw is gone now.HaikageAsh's Talk 00:04, March 31, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Brown pawed. Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 22:23, March 31, 2010 (UTC)


Blur the shading a bit, mainly on her back legs ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 23:14, April 1, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Shade blurred. Brightmoon Night Whispers, and Sign of the Moon! 00:11, April 2, 2010 (UTC)


Can you run the burn tool over it to make it darker?--NightshineÜ 04:40, April 2, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Darking shaded. (Notice how I have weird uploaded phrases.) Flowerflight April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims! 12:42, April 2, 2010 (UTC)


Not just the shading but the whole image. Blur the shading and darken whole thing again. There is a white pixel on the chest. Can you fill that in?--NightshineÜ 00:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded. Darkened entire cat. Flowerflight April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims! 01:07, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

It looks rather smudgy now. I'm not sure how you can fix that.HaikageAsh's Talk 14:45, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

No idea either. Darn. Well... I might just redo it... I dunno... Suggestions? Flowerflight April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims! 14:46, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks cool now...MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The flecks look very gray, make them brown NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:19, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Browned flecks. Flowerflight April Showers bring Mayflowers, and Mayflowers bring Pilgrims! 15:53, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Any more comments? It's been four days... ✆Brightflight✆The Amazing Bean Machine! 20:21, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Thin the shading on the back and add some flecks .HaikageAsh's Talk 20:51, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hey people... I can't work on Thrushpelt right now... I am going on a hiatus. Sorry. ✆Brightflight✆The Amazing Bean Machine! 13:45, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I'll decline this in that case. ✐SaNdY 13:40, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - Withdrawn

[[File:Goldenflower.apprentice.png]] I counted, and this is image number 35, but if I counted wrong feel free to take this down or decline this. I did horrible on the ear lineart, and the shading's a bit awkward because of the pelt color. Comments and suggestions? Icethroat氷喉 01:01, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. This is awesome!--Nightshine{ 01:19, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Good job! Try to make the nick in her ear a little bit more noticeable, but not too much.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 03:16, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a bit yellower than her other images, could you make it a bit more golden? I love it though :) insaneular The original Hazelnut spread 10:37, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Ooooh! Pretty! But like Insane said, make it a bit golden. Otherwise it's great! Willow★Do you want fries with that? 16:18, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I haven't been on in a couple of days, I've been busy. How should I make it more golden? I used the same base color, but I think the highlights are too bright and that's making it look more yellow...should I darken the highlights? (I haven't gotten to making the other changes yet, but I'll get to it soon, and then I'll upload all of the changes in one upload instead of multiple.) Icethroat氷喉 20:30, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Her eye looks a bit reddish-brown. By the way, nice sig! Rainwhisker武士貓 02:43, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the comment about my sig, Rain. :) Sorry everybody, but I'm going to withdraw this image. I'd much rather work on another image, and I tried many things but the image still looked yellow. I'll post another image sometime today. Icethroat氷喉 15:22, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Smudge(KP) - Declined

[[File:Smudge_(KP).png]] [[File:Smudge.png]] Birchy here! Since Jmiles is having computer problems, I'm taking over this charart. I'll do this the best I can! BirchyI am a warrior at heart...

Well... here you go. I know that Spottedsky reserved this earlier, but there was no CharArt (that I know of) for smudge yet, and it was reserved awhile ago, so, I hope this works out. So... comments?Jmiles 06:46, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Darken the shading, and change the file name. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 11:19, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Oh wait. You already have one image up for approval. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 12:04, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, but the spots need to be bigger, and Maple's right, you have one up for approval already. I don't know much yet, but I think the senior warriors will decline it, or

something. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 20:14, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I thought someone already reserved this? O.o - B-Day-Kitty! :D 21:22, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Jmiles, this will have to be declined until your first image is approved. I think one of the seniors warriors will have to decline this. When your first image is approved, then you can put this up. Rainwhisker 22:23, March 5, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it said he was black and white, not black with white spots... Quoth the Raven, Nevermore 00:49, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

It never said that he was black with white. It showed that in Cats of the Clans, but that book can't really be trusted as a lot of the characters in that book were done completely wrong. He's white with black patches, and it says that he has amber eyes, not blue. GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 05:48, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

OK. White with black patches, amber eyes, darken the shading. Consider it done. As for having one image already up for approval, if you haven't noticed already, IT CANNOT BE APPROVED!!!! It was already reserved by Insane. Go up and see it if you want. Somebody please help explain all this reservation stuff and approval stuff on my Talk Page, because I'm really, really confused! Jmiles 19:06, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

No, it's fine. I'll decline the Mudclaw now. ✐SaNdY 19:07, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you! After it's declined, can I try Smudge again? And I wouls still like some explanation on my talk page, if it isn't too much trouble. Jmiles 19:15, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

You can continue working on him now, and I'll come and write what will undoubtedly turn into a rather long explanation (through no fault of my own) on your talk page. ✐SaNdY 20:41, March 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry. I sorta died on the blur tool. I had a bad day. (my internet crashed twice and I have the flu)Jmiles 05:40, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Awww, I'm sorry to hear that! Well, he looks better. But I would define the patches more, they look to blurred now. And also, add ear pink to the left ear GoldfallMeet me at the end of the rainbow! 06:43, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

His eyes look more orange than amber.HaikageAsh's Talk 15:41, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

OK, less orange eyes, more patch definition, and ear pink in the left ear. Got it. Jmiles 16:21, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changed the eye color, redefined the black patches. I was a little confused about where exactly to put the ear pink because of the angle that he was at. If it's the exact same image, tell me. My computer did not want to put this one on, and it kept uploading the old one. Jmiles 16:46, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I understand. My computer doesnt want me to upload the image period. As for your image, blur the patches a tiny bit more and his eyes still seem orange. Amber is a bit more golden.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:51, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay. I'll do that. Jmiles 16:59, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Still not quite amber... I think. I pushed the rate on the blur tool to 80%, and blurred the patches more. Once again, tell me if there's anything wrong with the image (I mean upload wise) Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 21:00, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

The eyecolor is fine now. Sorry when I took it out of thumbnail size it showed up under your first message. Imagewise, try to make the white a little less gray and darken the shading.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:48, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. OK, I got the shading darkened and redefined the white in his fur. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 02:08, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Instead of having his fur w/ black spots, make it more like less circular patches and clusters, and the eyes are a little too brown. Try using a reddish orange instead of a brownish one. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 01:43, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

When you say to make "more less circular patches and clusters", do you mean like a tortoiseshell, just with only 2 colors? I think I know what you mean, maybe. I can do the eye color thing though. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 01:49, March 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think that's what she's talking about, so it's sort of like the style used here. Also, there's blurred lineart in various places. --Icy-chan says hello! 21:04, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Whoops, forgot to say that I think the patches are fine as they are now, though. :) --Icy-chan says hello! 21:10, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

'Kay, I'll fix the lineart. But do I change the patches or not, because I really don't want to. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 05:23, March 13, 2010 (UTC)

No, I think that the patches are fine. --Icy-chan says hello! 01:08, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

There is too much gray.Darkhallows 18:26, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, I'll leve the patches as they are. Do you just want me to use dodge to get rid of some gray? Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 20:02, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Alrighty, I used the dodge tool to lighten it, amber-ed the eyes up, and fixed the lineart. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 22:22, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

make the patches bigger, because they look a bit like spots. Though this is really good! FawnstormThe Dark Forest are rising... 16:22, March 19, 2010 (UTC)


Make the patches bigger, and also, you might see that you went outside the outline... Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:20, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Can do, I'll reupload soon. Just got a lot on my plate right now. Jmiles Brambleshadow's Den. 03:13, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

The eyes look red. Choose a more orangey colour. :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 19:50, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

It's been a week, please work on this or it will be declined NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:57, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

I will, sorry! I really am! I'm just having computer issues. Jmiles Clicky, Clicky!!! 05:41, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Jmiles, do you want me to continue editing this while you're having computer problems? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 18:02, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Well if you do the lineart is smudged near the whiskers. The shading seems odd as its only light on his face and his whole entire back. Plus the shading near the patches are smudged as well.--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:17, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, please Birchy! My computer is officially breaking down. In about a day, It'll stop working. I'm very sorry. Jmiles Clicky, Clicky!!! 01:04, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Okay then. I'll do this for you Jmiles. When your computer's ready to fight again, you can resume this. BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 11:26, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did the pictue again, but I'm keeping the other one. I wasn't sure. Anyways... Comments? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 15:38, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

I love how you did that patches. MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 23:35, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

The second one is very good! Just darken the patches, they look a little gray right now NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:13, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 13:35, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Bircy decided that he wanted to keep Littlecloud up, so this we can archive this later NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 19:17, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Deadfoot (W)- Declined

[[File:Deadfoot_warrior.png|frame|[[-03-0000Deadfoot]]]] I know i messed up on the thumb nail thing and this is a total failier but any thing to say?LionClaw132 03:19, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Lion. Deadfoot was never seen as a warrior; this will have to be declined (this is Nightfall, my siggie is messed up)

  1. deadfoot was never seen as a warrior.
  2. i dont think tat you used the right programme for this.
  3. its over the limit.

Clarrissa! :) 08:35, April 12, 2010 (UTC) I know his charart thing says warrior but just because he was in the warrior den doesn't make him a warrior. Deputy's sleep there as well.--Sakura KissHaikage 10:47, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ivytail (W) -- Withdrawn by user

[[File:Ivytail.warrior.png]] Well, here's Ivytail. Not much to say about her. •Maplefern• 11:43, April 4, 2010 (UTC)


Looks good!! Blur it some more.Dawnleaf 13:14, April 4, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf


Darken the shading. Make the white chest smaller. Blur the white transitions, and the markings--NightshineÜ 18:13, April 4, 2010 (UTC)


Well, I fixed it. •Maplefern• 20:07, April 4, 2010 (UTC)





Some of the patches seem more blurred than the others. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 22:17, April 4, 2010 (UTC)

Here is some changes you need to make:[[File:Ivytail.warrior.changes.png]]Sorry, the text is really small. Green says make earpink bigger, and red says Spots are really blurres together.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 02:42, April 5, 2010 (UTC)


Made earpink bigger and fixed overblurred patches. •Maplefern• 11:55, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur her chest. IceSpring is here! 15:48, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

...On her queen image she has a bunch of patches, not little spots.--Darkhallows 05:30, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add some cream patches, all of these look like ginger patches but her queen image has ginger patches and cream patches. Icethroat氷喉 20:54, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Should I redo her? •Maplefern• 00:23, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Only if you want to. I think if you just blur the patches together more and add some cream then it will be awesome--Nightshine{ 00:25, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

When I do it, it just doesn't look good. Sorry guys, maybe I'll put her back up later. •Maplefern• 11:01, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L) - Declined

[[File:Furled_Bracken.png]]

Fourth image, sixth image I've made, and first leader and first tabby. Comments? Critique? Critiquents? Perseus | Perseus , Thou art not the hero | Thou art not the hero 11:25, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Love it, Lightning. Darken the ear pink more, and blur the tabby stripes. --IceThe stars will light your path... 11:54, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Grayraven. We decided that we were going to do Furled Bracken as a Sharpclaw, since he wasn't tecnically a leader Night~Fall 17:51, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


And the orange is a bit bright. Butterfly }{ Song! 19:35, April 13, 2010 (UTC)


Again, real sorry, but I think this will have to be declined. I've checked, there's no other leader you could use this as. NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 06:49, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Declined; to be archived later. --Bramble 00:26, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Crookedstar (W) - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Crookedstar (W).png]] Okay, Insane said I had permission to use this blank, so I did. I thought of a challenging cat to do, and he came into my mind. :) Construments? IceSpring is here! 23:37, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

nice job Iceh :D but i think you could just blur/smudge the shadin a bit more and itll be good anyways nice jobPebble2Pineow 23:43, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 23:50, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

He looks good, but check your placement of the cream patches. His back paws aren't cream, only his front paws. And also, add the little cream splotch on his foreleg. insaneular Talk 00:59, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Are the changes showing? IceSpring is here! 01:23, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

No, my computer isn't seeing them. ☯Sgt. Pepper's☯Lonely Hearts Club Band 01:45, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

I clicked on the image, and it shows the changed in the thumbnail, but not on the actual image. I normally give a few hours to notice the change, but it's already been quite some time, so upload the new version under a new file name and put the delete tag on the old one. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:43, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 21:12, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Hurhur, the changes really showed up! :D I can't blur the shading anymore, *sigh* IceSpring is here! 21:29, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Can you blur the tail shading? Also make the ear pink more defined--NightshineÜ 21:31, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

No, I can't blur the tail shading. I really should get a copy of GIMP then download it....Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 21:35, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

The midriff shading needs blending too. And some of the stripes need to be extended further into the body. ✐SaNdY 21:36, March 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The upload log doesn't like me... IceSpring is here! 02:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken ear pink more.--NightshineÜ 04:38, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I think that in-between the legs it's colored in. If so, you should erase that. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 14:20, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes to the front legs.--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 14:28, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Snowfeather, I can't because there is no room. IceSpring is here! 16:57, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading some NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 00:23, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, and when I tried it, it ruined the stripes when I blurred it. Are there any opionons? IceSpring is here! 02:08, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps just brighten the highlights then NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 04:44, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 20:56, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ice, you do need to add stripes to the leg. They are on his deputy pixel. Maybe you can see if you can find room to add them. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 22:21, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I found little space. IceSpring is here! 23:38, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

There should be a stripe on the cream patch. There's one on his other images.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:41, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. IceSpring is here! 19:57, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight on his shoulder some more--Nightshine{ 04:22, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Yayyy, I am getting a new computer this weekend. :3 IceSpring is here! 21:08, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Congratz on the new computer. the highlights look extremly bright on my computer. They almost match the cream fur. can you darken them some without ruining your image?HaikageAsh's Talk 20:49, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

They don't look too dark on my computer. I'll see if I can darken them. IceSpring is here! 21:06, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

No, it won't work. I darkened them with the burn tool, but it looked like it was painted on, and the 'paint' looked dried up. And when I blurred it, it ruined the stripes.. IceSpring is here! 21:39, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

Do you use GIMP? If you do I think there is a way to fix it.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I only use GIMP to make the image, and Pixlr to edit. GIMP doesn't work when I try to edit an image in it. IceSpring is here! 22:00, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

I can try for you if you'd like. What does everyone else think of the highlights before we make plans to change them?HaikageAsh's Talk 22:04, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are too bright. Also, the stripes need to be thinner and darker, and the shading darker. The whole image is too light in my opinion. ✐SaNdY 13:41, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Daarkened the image. --IceThe stars will light your path... 14:45, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

the highlights are still too bright and now the image is too dark. I'm still willing to help you with the highlights if you want.Sakura KissHaikage 14:49, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look too dark to me... see Crookedstar.deputy ✐SaNdY 14:53, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah you're right. I was looking at the leader image.Sakura KissHaikage 14:56, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are still too bright though, and the stripes aren't right. ✐SaNdY 15:01, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. is this better? As for Ash, I deleted the highlights on Pixlr, since I thought it looked better. But thanks for being so genurous. --IceThe stars will light your path... 12:08, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

You're welcome. As for the image the space between his legs is brown and darken the shading some.Sakura KissHaikage 20:31, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --IceThe stars will light your path... 21:09, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

You forgot to add leg stripes.Sakura KissMaybe you're my Love 00:29, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Added leg stripes. Comments? --IceThe stars will light your path... 12:00, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the stripes could be a little more curved and some are too thick especially at the wider section. The cream on the uzzle also extends up too far and the ear pink is hard to see. ✐SaNdY 21:21, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Can I withdraw this for a while? He needs a lot of work, and I'd rather work on another image and then post him back up later. --IceThe stars will light your path... 21:25, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) - Declined

[[File:Sansdstorm.png]]




I'm back with a new charart! And (luckily) this one is about 1,000 times better then Icicle. This is 37 but 2 of the things were discussions so technically this is 35. I just want to say thatnks to Ashshadow for some great advice and help and to al of the turtorial authors, you were very helpful. Anyways, quistions? Comments? --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:11, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Saint Ice 23:23, February 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? i learned an important lesson for the next time I do a tabby:shade FIRST! Then you can do the tabby markings. --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:40, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I put it near the top again. The shading needs some more burring and the stripes need to be thickened a bit more--Nightshine 01:41, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

You're actually supposed to do the stripes before shading so that everything is shaded equally. In addition to what Nightshine said make the stripes a little longer.HaikageAsh's Talk 01:44, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Gah1 I accidentaly deleted the file! It migt take me a while but I'll get her back up soon.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 16:47, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to have to disagree Ash - I always do my shading first and use the burn tool to add stripes resulting in the same evenly shaded effect without the overblurred stripes because of trying to blur the shading. Anyway, this is good Artimas, just make everything more polished. Make sure there aren't gaps in the shading, so it looks consistent, and make your stripes a little thicker. ✐SaNdY 22:42, February 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I forgot about burning the stripes on. My comment only applies if you paint the stripes on. Did you check your recyling bin for the sandpaw file?HaikageAsh's Talk 02:25, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Artimas, if you just save the image from this site (Right click the image above and select 'save as') then you can get it that way. For the image, I can't say much that the others haven't already said, so, yeah. ♫ insaneular ♫Down at Fraggle Rock! 20:34, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

You guys are life savers! I'll be back in just a minute. Hopefully.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:16, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, I'm back. i tried to do everything you guys said. How does it look?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:38, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Her stripes are a bit too dark and I dont see that many stripes on her tail.HaikageAsh's Talk 21:42, February 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.--Shaf Girl 03:48, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Is this good?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:19, February 27, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone comment? Is this good or not? I'm sorry, I'm just really impatient and I can't wait until my first charart gets approved! :D --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:35, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes darker on the leg farthest from us. MaplefernCarrying the torch... 22:06, March 1, 2010 (UTC)

Is this dark enough?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 01:00, March 3, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes look a bit SQUARE, was that on purpose? No hurt intended, but I think you should have the stripes move around the body. Crystalpaw *glimmer* 23:03, March 4, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I can't seem to get them circly. Is it ok like this? Sorry, keep in mind, this nis only my first charart.--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:35, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, wow! Is this your first attempt at a tabby? If so, it's pretty good! (You should see my first attempt at a tabby. LOL. xD) But the stripes don't exactly resemble the ones on Sandstorm's Warrior/Queen image. Try making them a bit more curved, and make them like tree branches so they split off in differant places. See This page if you really can't get the hang of it. ^_^ Shistar Mai Talk Page 18:39, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

I know that she's facing the other way in her warrior pic, but I think she has too many stripes.HaikageAsh's Talk 18:47, March 7, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks. I will work on that when I get home, I'm at school right now. ^^ --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 18:21, March 8, 2010 (UTC)

Redone, is this better? I did less stripes and tried to make them curve more. :) --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 21:44, March 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the stripes a bit thicker.HaikageAsh's Talk 20:12, March 12, 2010 (UTC)

Better? --Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 23:45, March 14, 2010 (UTC)

So...comments?--Artimas HunterWelcome to Bramblepath's Den 00:26, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Can someone please tell me: is this goo? Sorry, I feel like this has been up forever and no ones approving or ging help eather. I really need something to do. :P --Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 23:45, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

The colour isn't the same as her warrior image--NightshineÜ 23:51, March 17, 2010 (UTC)

Are you talking about the stripes or the pelt? Because I got the pelt color from her warrior image and I burned the stripes on. --Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 01:01, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The stripe color isn't right--NightshineÜ 01:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ashshadow and Sandy told me to burn the stripes on, should I make it darker? Sorry for all ther stuipid questions ^^ --Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 17:22, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

I was talking about shading not burning the stripes on. I think ther should be a bit lighter.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:26, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, thanks, I'll work on that now.--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:58, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

Ok, done. Are these stripes better? I can't wait til this gets approved!--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 22:12, March 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still doesn't look right. Add shading around the arms and chest, not just the back--NightshineÜ 21:42, March 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think I had some shading on the lgs and chest but I added more. Is this good?--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 15:19, March 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.HaikageAsh's Talk 23:03, March 22, 2010 (UTC)

I can kind of see the shading on the back, and you should blur it. Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 19:18, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

I wasn't sure what shading you meant Ash so I blurred it all. Blurry enough? ^^ --Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:28, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry... But no. On the back, there is a distinct line where the shading starts. Sorry Artimas. Brightmoon The Sign of the Moon! 23:21, March 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading and stripes need blending a little more. ✐SaNdY 16:48, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred some more, I think it's good but for some reason, when its on pile it looks goodb but when I post it its all weird. Go figure. Anyways, is this better?--Artimas HunterWarning! This user is reasonably insane! 21:25, March 24, 2010 (UTC)

You may want to make the stripes a bit darker. I don't know if I'm the only one who thinks so or not. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 00:40, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, but I had them dakr and someone said they neded to be lighter. But I don't know, should they be daker? --BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 19:44, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think the stripe color is ok. Her description is barely visible tabby stripes.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:14, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

Oh yeah. That's right. The color's good. --MoonflightCome The Dark Side. We Have Catnip... 22:37, March 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's ok Moonflight, you thought it needed to be fixed so you saids smething. That's what you're supposed to do. ^^ Anything else I need to fix?--BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 15:46, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading around the haunch some more and add some to the top of her head.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:31, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred a little more, the earpink should be a little bigger and she needs some shading on the leg farthest from us. Crystals and Pearls *glimmer* 20:35, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this took so long. I did every thing but I'm kinda fuzzy on what you meant by thickening the shading. Can you elaborate? Thanks. ^^ --BramblepathBrightshadow is mine! 02:12, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Add more to the curve of the haunch. thats all I meant. HaikageAsh's Talk 19:17, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

I this any better?--MoonbeamSkyClan will rise! 22:00, April 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the tabby stripes a little lighter.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:15, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Lighter stripes.--BrightshadowYou belong with me! 14:44, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are all the same colour, even in the shading... How did that happen? Butterfly }{ Song! 19:22, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a week. Please do so or it will have to be declined.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 14:39, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Minnowclaw, I worked on this yesterday. And Crystal, I think they're supposed to be the same color.--BrightshadowYou belong with me! 14:52, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, no, they're not. The stripes should be darker than the shading. I highly recommend re-doing this; do the color, the shading, and the highlights first (and blur them) and then do the stripes NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 23:19, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my god, I am the biggest idiot on planet earth. I was looking for your bumblepath signature and I didn't see that you changed it. Again, soooo sorry!.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 22:08, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good,(better than mine!)but its a little too blurred and the stripes should be a little darker. Zoe27 10:57, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 18:15, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Raggedstar (D) - Declined

[[File:Raggedstar_D.png]] This is Raggedpelt, one of my favorite warriors, EVER! I think I did... ok. Brambleberry! 16:23, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Does this mean that you're withdrawing Boulder? Imagewise the hind foot closest to us needs to be colored.HaikageAsh's Talk 16:28, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

He needs a ripped ear--NightshineÜ 19:32, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Considering you've expressed the want to withdraw Boulder and do this image, I'll let this stay up and take over your Boulder image myself, because there are very minor changes needed and it can be approved. Although, you shouldn't waste your work. You're throwing away a perfectly good image just because you want to do another. --Bramble 22:22, March 27, 2010 (UTC)

Bramble's right about that, silver. Anyway, for the image, I know that his leader image has green eyes, but in "Bluestar's Prophecy", it said he had yellow. Should this be changed now, or do we have to wait for the next tweak week? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 06:32, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Eye colour. If you can cite it then tell me and I'll quickly change the leader image. It won't take two minutes. ✐SaNdY 08:51, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wow! Sandy, you're awake? Its 4:55am here, I'm wide awake! Brambleberry! 08:56, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more--NightshineÜ 18:27, March 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back ear, and darken the shading on the chest and belly just a little bit. --Icy-chan says hello! 13:36, March 29, 2010 (UTC)

Well, about the citation. On page 163 of "Bluestar's Prophecy", it says here - A dark tabby tom, his yellow eyes blazing, was staring at Stormtail from among the ShadowClan warriors. It doesn't say that it was Raggedpelt, and over on page 166, it says - "Raggedpelt will take his place," Cedarstar went on. A dark brown warrior stalked from the crowd of ShadowClan cats into a pool of moonlight below the rock. Now, I know that it's possible those were two totally different cats, but I really think they were both Raggedpelt. I also looked in the allegiances, Raggedpelt is the only dark brown tabby in ShadowClan. (Featherstorm is brown tabby, but she's a queen. And Lizardfang is light brown tabby, but he's an elder) So, what do you guys think? NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 21:53, March 30, 2010 (UTC)

The chances that the cat on page 163 is not Raggedpelt are one in a million. Unless someone can find something saying he has green eyes, I think you should change his eyes you yellow. Also, the stripe on the top of his haunch and his belly look like they are one large triangle and it looks odd.MINNOWCLAWO'MALLEY THE ALLEY CAT! 21:36, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

The tufts of fur on his hauch don't look like tufts of fur. Fix that. Møųşëţąłőʼn!! 22:25, April 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ☮SilverthistleBerrystumpytail, Ha!☮ 15:02, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail stripes--Nightshine{ 01:34, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, I ah- never would have found it if it weren't for you, Nightshine! Also, aren't we allowed to have anouther image up for approval? Thats what I heard. ☮SilverthistleBerrystumpytail, Ha!☮ 12:31, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Where'd you hear that? Only one image per person. Oh and, I found the citation ;) Blur the shading on his haunch more NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 16:46, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred haunch shading more. K! Got it, 17silverthistleWelcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 13:47, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

His belly is missing the raggedy-fur look Butterfly }{ Song! 19:28, April 8, 2010 (UTC)

No one has replied on this for quite a while, I'm getting conserned.... When will this get anouther suggestion? 17silverthistleWelcome to the Nursery! Of SkyClan! 21:34, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Crystalpearl already comented.MinnowclawMy dragon will eat you! 22:16, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

In addition to Crystalpearl's above comment about the raggedy fur, I would suggest you thicken and/or darken the shading as it is hard to see. ✐SaNdY 15:36, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. ✐SaNdY 17:14, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 18:44, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Halftail (W)- Declined

[[File:SparrowpeltW.png]]


How is it?

Sorry this is over the limit; you forgot to sign--Nightshine{ 01:32, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

No this is within the limit. Darken the whole thing.Sakura KissHaikage 11:33, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Halftail.png]] Use a less saturated shade of brown like the one in his elder image. --Gοlδεnpαω Appare! 15:49, April 10, 2010 (UTC)

Tabby stripes need to be blurred. Dawnleaf 18:37, April 10, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Shouldn't his tail be... in half? Also, the stripes seem too big.--Darkhallows 19:52, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail should be long since he retired after it was halved. I agree about the stripes though.Sakura KissHaikage 19:56, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Naw, he became an elder because he couldn't balance BECAUSE his tail was in half. They only began calling him Halftail when he became an elder. His warrior name was Sparrowpelt. Other wise, the stripes are a tad too wide and they need to be blurred. A LOT. Butterfly }{ Song! 19:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this. It has been 5 days.♥Snowstorm♥ Happy Mother's Day! 01:54, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

A user has a week SnowStorm. ✐SaNdY 15:00, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Sandy *dips head in shame and foolishness*♥Snowstorm♥ Happy Mother's Day! 21:49, April 16, 2010 (UTC)

Alright, it's been a week. Please work on him or he will be declined

NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 23:24, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Snowstorm: No worries ;) ✐SaNdY 13:28, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks Sandy. Yes, Nightfall is right.SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 02:21, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 18:44, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Molekit - Declined

nothing much more then awfull.....anything to say?(i tryed to take out the black)LionClaw132 23:52, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's way too big and stretched out, plus there's an extra square of white around the actual image. You'll need to redo it with this image: File:KitShortMa.png. Save that to your computer, edit it again and then reupload on the file name 'Molekit', please. He's not a warrior yet. Also, you'll need eye color, a less purple ear pink and some shading. You can look at some tutorials if you need help with the shading aspect. --Bramble 19:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Whoever left the previous comment you forgot to sign. Lion (if you dont mind if I call you that) You need to leave an image on the page even if you're fixing it. It might be mistaken as a discussion otherwise. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 18:36, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

You're right, Ash; I did forget to sign. Fail on my part. :) And the post above is correct, Lion; you have to post an image soon, or this will be declined and archived. Please upload something in the next 24 hours. --Bramble 19:45, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined as no image was uploaded... ✐SaNdY 18:44, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Finchstar (L) --- Declined

[[File:Finchstar.png]] Heres Finchstar!! If theres any thing i need to fix please tell me!!! Dawnleaf 22:22, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

This is already reserved by Nightfall. Also Do Not remove sections from the page, everything needs to be archived.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 22:28, April 19, 2010 (UTC)


Opps sorry. Dawnleaf 22:40, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Archiving now. --Bramble 23:41, April 19, 2010 (UTC)

Dawncloud (A) - Declined

File:Dawncloud - Apprentice copy.png


Yup, heres the other one.. Anything that needs to be fixed? --Quiet!... 03:04, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Quiet, you already have one image up for approval.SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 03:24, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I've been gone a while. I'm guessing the rule changed? Okay, feel free to remove this. --Quiet!... 03:34, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I need someone to decline this. I can't.SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 03:46, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

Here, I got it. This is beautiful though, please resubmit this when Dawncloud is approved :)

NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 08:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)


Stonestream (A) ---Declined

[[File:Stonestream_a.png]] Heres stonestream!Dawnleaf 00:32, April 21, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Stonestream already has an apprentice image - Stonestream This is really good though :) See here for cats who need images NightfallThe evening star is shining bright 01:16, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

This is awesome! But like nightfall said, it will have to be declined. There is plenty of other cats though!SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 02:09, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok...i'll find another cat to do! Dawnleaf 02:48, April 21, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Archiving. Clarrissa! :) 11:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Poppydawn (W) - Declined

[[File:Poppydaw_Warrior.png]]

Okay, I redid the image of Poppydawn, because the Lineart was hardly visable, and there was no eye color. Comments? ♥PoppyStorm♥ 20:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

The coat color looks too brown compared to the rest of her images. Make it more reddish. Φτερό 20:32, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

On it! ♥PoppyStorm♥ 20:50, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Better. But she doesn't look red-brown, she just looks brown. Make her more of a reddish color NightfallSilverpelt looks beautiful! 20:55, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll redo her again. (Be right back, working on picture) ♥PoppyStorm♥[[File:Poppystorm.png|60px]] 23:17, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, redone. What'cha guys think now? :D ♥PoppyStorm♥[[File:Poppystorm.png|60px]] 01:11, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest saving one of her other images and using the color dropper tool to get the right color.Sakura KissHaikage 01:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Theres...No eye color.... Φτερό 01:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

At Ashshadow ~ I did use that. I decided to use the Color Dropper so the colors would match. Should I try again?

At Φτερό ~ Oops, lemme fix that. Be right back. :P ♥PoppyStorm♥[[File:Poppystorm.png|60px]] 01:42, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, Fixed. Comments? ♥PoppyStorm♥[[File:Poppystorm.png|60px]] 01:44, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little and blur it.Sakura KissHaikage 01:49, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it a little and make the shading a little bit darker. Clarrissa! :) 12:09, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur her stripes more, along with what Ash said. --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:14, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and darken it.SNOWSTORMLast one to the Great Sycamore is crow food! 01:31, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Add eye coloring. Raven Randomness! 04:32, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

For the eyes, I suggest using Icy's tutorial. 晶須 21:19, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Beautiful, but the stripes could stand a little more blurring. Butterfly }{ Song! 01:18, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 10:44, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ✐SaNdY 12:05, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

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