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Yellowfang (MCA)- Declined

[[File:YellowfangMCA.png]] Here she is! I added a scratch under the eye. It looks better. :D Under the limit- there's a brokenstar and a mist discussion. Sorry Lionclaw, I had it reserved first. Anyway, constructments? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:07, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the shading and center the ear pink a little.--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 14:14, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Centered the earpink and blurred. Stupid blurrer- weird word. Is it real? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:39, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The back lineart is grey, colour it in black. Darken the shading more, and add some/darken the shading on the herbs. --IceThe stars will light your path... 19:37, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

? The back lineart... It isn't, is it, because I never made it grey... BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:06, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think that you blurred the lineart accidently while blurring the shading, but the lineart is a gray color along the back (spine to be more specific). _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 01:52, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

I'll edit this on Sunday since I'm sleeping at a friends tonight, tomorrow and Saturday night. ^^ BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 15:52, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 13:35, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 03:44, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Rainfur_loner.png]]

Hi everybody, I'm new, so if this fails, that's my excuse. :-D Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 22:24, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I un-thu

mbed it so I could see it better. I suggest looking at the tutorials for the charart--you can find a link to them on the main page. They'll tell you how to shade, highlight, and detail correctly. I myself normally use Icythroat's tutorial.--S

haf Girl 00:38, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I've kinda skimmed a little, but I'll look through them thouroghly. Thanks! Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 00:59, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

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Needs pupil,blur shading and spots and blur ear pink. Good job though.=) Silverstar

Can I join the project? Though I can't post much images. I'll try to post tons though.

-Sagestorm70


This is good! Just....

1.Go to take the burn tool and put it around the body,

2. Dodge tool at hardness 20 and put highlights, and;

3. Fix the eye. LucyϠ in the Sky With Diamonds 05:15, April 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Completely re-did it. Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 21:07, April 14, 2010 (UTC)

If light is coming from the top (which would result in shadows on

the bottom of the image) you dont need shading there. Sakura KissMaybe you're my Love 19:54, April 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Removed upper shading, added more flecks because the back looked to plain. Also, I accidentally moved it and couldn't get it back to normal without messing up the chat area. Go me. -_- Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 01:42, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. --IceThe stars will light your path... 02:19, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading more. Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 19:39, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think its fine. Clarrissa! :) 11:10, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur spots even more MemorialstarRemember the ones who died... 19:14, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Does anybody have any advice for blurring in GIMP with a laptop mouse? I don't have my mouse with me. *destroys laptop mouse* Leopardspot Where's my Fireclaw? 02:48, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I don't use GIMP =| SilverclawWe will,We will rock you... 12:54, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Also make the earpink larger,then blur it SilverclawWe will,We will rock you... 12:55, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Quailflight 08:10, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 04:00, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (W)- Declined

[[File:Cinderfur_W.png]] Hey guys! Haven't been on for a long time and I think my skills have faded... but, here ya' go! EARTH DAY! Make sure you recycle! You get $! 16:47, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good, just blur the ear pink. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 17:59, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Is this supposed to be Cinderfur? I looked and can't find a Cedarfur. AshshadowBring me to Life! 18:36, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I think she does mean Cinderfur. He's on her current projects list ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:31, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be more triangular. 晶須 21:56, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ye, I do mean Cinderfur. I just couldn't remember his name, when I made him on Pixlr! Opps...EARTH DAY! Make sure you recycle! You get $! 15:14, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading--Darkhallows 21:17, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it'll be declined. (I can say that, right?)--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:06, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, as long as you don't actually decline. Will decline and archive in 24 hours if there is no response from the user. Bramble 11:03, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sandstorm (A) ~*~ Declined

[[File:Sandstorm.apprentice.png]] I tried to copy her tabby markings but I just couldn't make them match as much as i hoped to. Any comments?Dawnleaf 04:05, May 16, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

Dawnleaf...please look like I've told you before. Moonpelt has Sandstorm's apprentice image up for approval already; it's the tenth one down. Will archive later.

Oakheart (A) - Declined

[[File:Oakpaw_(Apprentice).PNG]]


My first attempt at a Charart. I don't know what it is, but something just doesn't seem right about it...Copperpelt 01:01, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good! Make the line art black and darken the ear pink--Nightshine{ 01:05, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Reuploaded. Is it better now? Copperpelt 01:21, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more up some more so it isn't touching the line art--Nightshine{ 01:25, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

He was never seen as an apprentice. Moonpelt 01:34, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

He wasn't!? *face palm* It's an awesome image though--Nightshine{ 01:40, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Well, on the list it said that Oakpaws apprentice pic was still needed... Reuploaded. Does the ear pink need blurred more?Copperpelt 01:44, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

What list?--Nightshine{ 01:47, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Sandstar12/CharartList That one... Should I have looked at the other ones too? :S Copperpelt 01:49, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh dear, once again this is my fault. I apologise again for messing up on that list; I made it a while ago and would have just gone with whatever his page said at the time so it may have been because of that or it may have been me making a genuine mistake out of the 600 characters I added to the main copy of that list on my cp. I would suggest you look at User:Nightfall101/Articles that need images instead as she is much better at keeping it updated and my list seems to cause more trouble than it solves. Sorry again. -- Sandystar 08:04, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I don't mind. He was fun to make. Will it still be added or will I have to try a different character?Copperpelt 08:12, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

I'm very sorry Copperpelt, you'll have to find a different character. He looks amazing for your first charart, and he shows a whole lot of potential. This was nobody's fault, not Sandy's, not yours, nobodys'. He won't be added, but I bet your next one will :) Will archive in the next 24 hours. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 07:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well, I'll just do a different one. Thanks~ Could I ask here to reserve Gorsestars deputy pic, or should I make a new messege?Copperpelt 08:24, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Copperpelt, you don't have to keep asking to do chararts. You just put them on the current projects list. Quailflight 11:04, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (W) - Declined

[[File:Yellowfang_W.png]]Okay,I guess it was up before but i was really busy with cats of the clans so i didnt get to approve her. I did her again. Um..so what do you think?(i know shes rubbish and i'm happy to do her again) Clarrissa! :) 10:03, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

No, she isn't rubbish. But add some highlights on the areas that would kind of stick out, blur the ones you already have, make the earpink a bit more visible and add shading on the edges. Butterfly }{ Song! 16:10, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Her pelt is too dark. According to her article, she is dark gray, not black. You could try to lighten her pelt a lot, or redo her with a dark gray color. 晶須 17:43, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add highlights to the haunch. There is nothing there. Quailflight 09:08, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Quailflight 23:45, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 02:35, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Mousepaw - Declined

[[File:MousePaw.jpg]] This is my first charart to upload here. Please tell me anything I can do to improve it, but please say it nicely. :]


<----Mousepaw

Comment please.

Frostheart, Mouefur already has an apprentice image. See here. This is a list of all the chararts that need to be done ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:24, May 16, 2010 (UTC)


Really? I didn't see it. All I see is kit, warrior, and elder. FrostHeart 20:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Huh, where did it go? Bramble, Sandy? Was it accidenlty deleted all together when we were moving all the files? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 20:42, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Mousefur was only seen as a kit before Into the Wild, and her mentor was never mentioned, so there's no reason we would have her ranked as an apprentice, is there? --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 20:43, May 16, 2010 (UTC)


Oh..sorry, I didn't recall that. FrostHeart 20:48, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She was an apprentice in Bluestar's Prophecy, so yes this charart can be done. Unknown DestiniesMistreated...Used...

She was? I'll have to check. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 20:50, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She wasn't. She was only three moons old when Bluefur gave Oakheart her kits. After she's made deputy, a moon later, it skips straight to her leader ceremony and then after that, it skips to a bit before Into the Wild. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 20:56, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

That's weird, because I saw it has Mousepaw in it. Unknown DestiniesMistreated...Used...

Nope, she's never mentioned after the scene when they're playing with Mistykit, Stonekit, and Mosskit, other than Bluestar and Spottedleaf's conversation. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 21:01, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Hm...I guess there's a good chance this will be declined. Oh well! :] I finished Whitepaws charart. Am I able to put it up now?FrostHeart 21:03, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

After this is archived in the next 24 hours you can :) I suppose we overlooked this, since Runningwind was mentioned as an apprentice in one of the field guide series. Oh well; my bad Frostheart :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:05, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Umm... Frostheart, I didn't see Whitepaw on the current projects list, so you're not able to put her up. 晶須 01:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:20, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Mintkit Male --Declined

S[[File:MintkitMale.png|left|thumb]]o, here he is. In the alliegences, he's a she-cat, but in the book he's a tom. I saw this charart was needed, so I thought I'd put it up. Comments? =) PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 02:33, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this image is already reserved. Can you find another cat this could be?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:45, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Poppy do Not remove sections from the page. All sections must be archived. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:20, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (W) ~*~ Withdrawn by User

[[File:Cinderfur.warrior.png]] Not my best. Any comments?DawnleafStarClan is watching 01:15, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im withdrawing this.DawnleafStarClan is watching 03:31, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

You sure? This is a very good image. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:57, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Princess- kittypet- Declined.

Princess picture

This is my Princess charat.[[File:Runningpaw.apprentice.png]] —Preceding unsigned comment added by Iluvwarriors (talkcontribs)

This is my charart that I did for Echostar. Do not take credit for other peoples's chararts; last time I checked that was against the rules. She already has an image, see here. You also have to be a member of this project to contribute. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 02:59, May 19, 2010 (UTC

Frostfur (Ki) -Withdrawn

[[File:Frostfur_(Ki).png]] ok its my first charat ever. I know it's bad but still..... Comments? SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 16:12, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but even with two discussions this is over the limit of 35. Just when I thought we had that problem sorted... Declining as I'm fed up with having to clean up the page already today. Please resubmit this when the page goes below 35 images. Thanks Snickers, and it's not just you so don't feel bad. ✐SaNdY 16:19, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Its quite good but as Sandy said,below 35. Clarrissa! :) 17:17, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

It might have changed since Sandy's comment but this is the 35th image.HaikageAsh's Talk 19:47, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

So, is it ok? SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 19:49, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's fine now. The background needs to be transparent, not black though. ✐SaNdY 19:52, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploded Better? SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 20:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

wait. I have this reserved. Can't i do her? EchoKit 21:14, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Echo your reservation is over two weeks old. Snickers has the right to do this image .HaikageAsh's Talk 21:23, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

oh... I was about to but her up but oh well. EchoKit 21:24, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

The lining on the right ear is not there, and I can't see the highlights really well. What program did you use? ~Echostar[[File:Echostar2.leader.png|60px]] 22:04, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

There is gaps in the line art in various places.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 22:06, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded crosses fingers Better?

It looks as if you're using paint to do this image. You need to use pixlr of some other image program. The shading needs to be blurred.HaikageAsh's Talk 22:31, April 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to blur the shading more. SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 11:23, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

You are familiar with blurring, right? And some of the lineart was drawn over.BirthdaypathLet's go April 7! 22:53, April 6, 2010 (UTC)

It looks as if you tried to draw some of the lineart back...The ear pink needs to be blurred around the edges and this white is too bright so the shading won't show up as much and it'll make it harder. Look at her other images for reference:

[[File:Frostfur.warrior.png]] [[File:Frostfur.png]] [[File:Frostfur.elder.png]]

To make it easier for you use the color droppler so you can take the base color from one of these images. Don't take the shading at all though and you are using pixlr right? Because it still looks as if you're using paint. If not there's always GIMP you can download :)--♪Shimmerpool♫ 22:27, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah I'm using pixlr. I'll work on it : ) SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 22:34, April 7, 2010 (UTC)

I'm on vacation and pixlr does not work. : ( I'll fix it when I go home. (which is in 2 days :) SilverstarLeader of Shineclan! 00:03, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded What! every time I try to change it on Pixlr it stays the same! = ( Snickers!Meeow!I am such a furball.I ♥ the Warriors wiki! 22:17, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

I sugust you redo it. The shading looks like you sprayed it on using Paint. You need to burn it on using the burn on pixlr.Sakura KissHaikage 22:20, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Ok I'll redo it. I'll have it done soon. Silverstar

If you want, I can help you re-thicken the lineart. Otherwise, just do what everyone else said above. Rainwhisker武士貓 00:10, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Computer problems.... Getting it fixed tomorow. Right now I'm at the Library.*sigh* Snickers 20:04, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid it so is it any better? Snickers 04:10, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The shading still looks as if its painted on.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 04:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I promise by StarClan I was using pixlr Snickers 04:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Im not saying that your not using pixlr. I'm saying that it looks like you're using the paintbrush instead of the burn tool.Sakura KissMaybe you're my love 04:36, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry :S The burn was weelll kinda weird with me Snickers 13:35, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

You seemed to have smudged part of the lineart, like near the forelegs. I can help you fix that if you want. 晶須 15:26, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


I think looks good, but I see a bit of stuff like smuged fur and I also see you accidentally blured the tail and the chest together, making it look mixed up. But other than that, it is SO cute!

p.s. I have a cat

Graystripefan 14:48, April 22, 2010 (UTC)☞Graystripefan☜

Reuploaded Can someone remove the gray background for me because when I did that it wouldn't let me save it cause who knows why...So apart from that any better? MemorialstarRemember the ones who died... 22:33, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Parts of the lineart seem to be missing. Just copying the original kit lineart, making the white parts transparent, and lining it up on a new layer over it should do the trick. (: --Quiet!... 03:15, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Umm.. Layer? MemorialstarRemember the ones who died... 19:12, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm... Whats a layer? Springstar 20:22, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Copy and paste the lineart over this image. Make sure you delete the white pixels around it. There are lots on the kit blanks--Nightshine{ 20:28, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid her. Didn't like it before. So Commentos? Springstar 11:54, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is...blotchy and I don't see any eye color. Φτερόaεράκι 13:27, April 25, 2010 (UTC)I'll Work on her Snickers

Reuploaded Layers.. Hmmm I tried :/ Springstar 19:55, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

The background is gray, it needs to be transparent ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:25, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yay! Fixed! Springstar 20:36, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

That is better :) Okay, darken and blur the shading, make the ear pink more of a reddish color, and color the nose in ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:56, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It won't blur any more. Springstar 22:05, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? ★SilverclawWe will,We will rock you... 19:04, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on her left (our left) foreleg. Looks good, otherwise:) --Ŧķ§ƱΣö 19:37, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

I see. I'll get to work on this tomorow. SnickersLife's a rollercoaster 20:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded SilverpawChase that mouse! 18:54, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

This is nice! Just add some shading to the top of her head, and try to smooth out other shading with the blur tool. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 22:57, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

There is shading on her head and I'll try and blur it more.Snickers 10:52, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It can not blur any more.Snickers 23:05, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?SilverclawGoldenface 19:15, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Anyone???Skittles!Love that Rainbow!

My best call for it is to start over. The shading hasn't gotten any better over the course of the month that you've had it up. Restart with a long-haired, female kit blank, just as you did before. When you poen it in your editing program, create the eyes like this: File:AllEyesPtI.png, except do it with the blue color you used. Then select the burn tool, set the size on nine pixels, the range in highlights, and the exposure on 40%. Then run the blur tool down the sides, the head, the edge of the tail, the forelegs, and the one hindpaw. Do the ear pink and nose color as you had done. Bramble 23:03, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't want to do this.Withdrawing.Snickers 11 Days! 19:57, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Waspwhisker (W)-Declined

Here is a guess to what Waspwhisker from the upcoming Skyclans desting might look like its my first try and I'd appreciate it if you could give feedback saying if it needs improvement...


Wildear~101


Ok Thanks for letting me Know Shimmerpool...I think next time I'll join project character art...

[[File:112px-Warriorlongm.png|thumb]]

Wildear, there are many problems with you uploading this image.
1. You must be a member of the project
2. No one is allowed to do any character from SkyClan's Destiny at this time until its released
3. You put the image as a thumbnail -.-

I can't give you any feedback on this image as its not allowed to be up and so it shall be declined when a senior warrior or Nightfall, Sandy, or Bramble gets to this.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:42, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Declined due to the reason above. You can try to reserve this when the book comes out. Will archive later.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:53, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Firestar (W) - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Firestar.warrior.png]]Comments? Did I make him too red? I copied the deputy image.--Quailflight 04:02, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

Looks great! The eye line art is a little blurred. Make him more orangey. Darken the tail and arm stripes--Nightshine{ 04:12, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I redid the image. Comments?--Quailflight 09:06, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too dark, and blur the shading. 晶須 14:11, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. That's as far as the blurring will go.--Quailflight 21:55, May 9, 2010 (UTC)

I want to reupload it but it won't load! Can is it a glich or something?--Quailflight 08:39, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Try uploading it again. _ Icethroat ^ Only one more month of school! 20:20, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.--Quailflight 06:14, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Quailflight 05:27, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Just sharpen the stripes a bit more and make the ear pink a bit brighter. Riverpelt 00:18, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I really need some help with the blurring and the earpink. Can someone help me? --Quailflight 11:07, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sure, all u have to do for the ear pink is make it a color brighter than the color of the cats fur (but not too bright), and make it into a triangular form. The blurring comes out better when you use a smaller brush (like a 5px brush) and make sure that the blurring makes the image smoother looking, if its blurred too much, the image will look bad. If it ever looks too blurred, you can use the shapen tool. Riverpelt 23:33, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is good. Blur the top of his head some more (not the line art though!!) and lighten up his earpink. DawnleafStarClan is watching 03:44, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Umm....Guys, I don't want to be rude, but this is my 5th or 6th charart, I've been here since December so I know what to do. (This is Quailflight, too lazy to log in) 11:08, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED.--Quailflight 11:19, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the bright spot on his head, lighten the tail and darken the stripes, I can't see any right now--Nightshine{ 23:53, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having so much trouble. Would anyone like to help me? Quailflight 11:14, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sure! What do you need help with? 晶須 23:43, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

What Nightshine said :) Quailflight 09:19, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok. You use Pixlr, right? For the darkening, set the exposure (at top you'll see a drop down menu) and set it to around 80. Then the burn will be more powerful. For the dodge tool, do the same as the burn. That should help with the darkening/lightening. 晶須 21:04, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I still don't get it. I'm going to withdraw this, maybe I'll do in a future date. Quailflight 09:27, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth(D)- Declined

[[File:Stonetooth(D).png]]Decided to do something different. Comments? ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 22:14, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Amazing! Just blur his back shading more. --IceThe stars will light your path... 20:22, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred the shading as much as I could. ɆƆHØĦƏ@ƦƮ 20:46, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks good. Clarrissa! :) 16:27, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his haunch and back leg. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is this better? εСћбђэάѓτ 10:37, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? εСћбђэάѓτ 22:22, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

It's only been two days, be sure to wait at least five to six says before asking for comments. As for the image, this is very good :) Just darken the stripes more on the face ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 22:34, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry, and thanks! Is it too dark? εСћбђэάѓτ 10:40, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit, right now it's the same color as his stripes ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:28, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Snowstorm 00:34, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

I won't be here from tomorrow till May 16, so please don't decline when I'm gone. :) εСћбђэάѓτ 10:21, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but it's past May 16th and you still haven't reuploaded. Please work on this or it will be declined ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:10, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 03:47, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) Declined

Here she is! [[File:Shy_Fawn.png|frame|Shy Fawn]] I don't think its that bad for my first 'official' charart. I'd appreciate it if I could get some feedback on this maybe how to improve it?

Sorry for size I tried to upload it differently and I did use png instead of Jpeg...


[[File:Shy_Fawn_128x118px.png]]

)Wildear~101:) 17:41, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
doesn't fawnstorm already have this up for approval? Skydragon 18:25, May 26, 2010 (UTC)
Not sure I looked on her profile doesn't seem to be there...:)Wildear~101:) 18:36, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

This image is already up for approval. It's the second one on the page. Sorry but it has to be declined, it's not bad though. Will archive later.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:26, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC)- Withdrawn by User

[[File:ShyFawn.Sharpclaw.png]]Here she is! Second sharpclaw! Γǻώήςτόŗm 08:48, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Again, why am I so slow!? I really want to put my charart up! Image wise, this is good. Just blur the shading and highlights. Also, darken the earpink and make it smaller. But this is good.SnowstormDeputy of LightClan! 14:06, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Note: I am dping this while Briarlight is being worked on :) Blurred shading and made the Ear Pink darker and smaller. :) Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:29, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any shading... Could you make it more noticeable??? I think you blurred it a little to much... Moonpelt ۞ 18:07, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry about that Moonplet. :) I think I got over-excited. :3 Γǻώήςτόŗm 18:24, April 9, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger. Sakura KissHaikage 14:29, April 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Largened Ear Pink. Better? Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:30, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Center it some more.Sakura KissHaikage 19:29, April 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Centered it. Sorry it took me so long, my laptop wouldn't let me upload it. :3 Γǻώήςτόŗm 09:53, April 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading more visiable;thefore, darken it. --IceThe stars will light your path... 14:06, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, darken the shading and/or add some highlights. ✐SaNdY 17:34, April 18, 2010 (UTC)


Darken the shading more. Clarrissa! :) 11:07, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I was talking to Sandy and Shruugy on the IRC and they said to show what my shading normaly looks like. Here it is. Dapplestar 10:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, that doesn't look too dark to me. It just needs blending. ✐SaNdY 12:03, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's horrible though. :( Γǻώήςτόŗm 12:45, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are hard to see, and the bottom of the earpink could be blurred. Quailflight 08:18, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Have attempted to blur the shdng, but have failed, also I've brightened highlights. Γǻώήςτόŗm 10:32, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading some more--Nightshine{ 03:25, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I've redone her but it won't let me upload her! I've done everything that has been said but I can't do it!!! Sorry, I'll try A.S.A.PΓǻώήςτόŗm 08:47, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Finally. I used Insane's way of layering the image and its worked!!! Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:45, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments.....?Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger and more triangular. Right now it looks like a circle at the bottom of the ear.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:59, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or she will be declined ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:54, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, but the ear is too small. Add highlights to the tail and legs. FrostHeart 02:41, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I have got a ban from the PC for the rest of the week...is there any way this can be frozen or something? Γǻώήςτόŗm 12:09, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I am withdrawing her. Someone else can do her. By Shy Fawn. :( Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:37, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (D) -- Declined

[[File:Hawkfrost.deputy.png]] I'm hiding under my bed, if you need me. But since there are a lot of images in the CBA stage, I think I'm safe. •Maplefern• 23:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Great job! The only thing I see is the ear pink and the white/brown transition coFrostHeart 20:20, May 23, 2010 (UTC)uld be blurred some more. 晶須 01:06, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Awsome job, Maple :) Blur the shading and highlights, make the white on his chest stretch up higher, and add a few stripes to his face; in addition to what Blackclaw said ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:24, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Again, when I state 35, I mean 35. That doesn't mean put up another when images are in CBA or if they're being declined. It means put it up when there's room. Anyway, the images is good. I don't see anything other than what has already been stated. --Bramble 22:42, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Bramble, I shall not do it again. Anyway, it's fixed. •Maplefern• 00:54, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is good, lighten the ear pink, I can barely see it and darken/add shading to the head. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 12:13, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Add more shading to the legs, also. And maybe blur the highlights more?Darkhallows 21:16, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blurred higlights, darkened shading on legs, added shading to head, lightened earpink. •Maplefern• 11:37, May 10, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else? •Maplefern• 00:21, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Make his eyes a bit paler. Add more stripes to the base of the tail--Nightshine{ 00:32, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the top of the white patch.Darkhallows 01:47, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

The ears too red. The tabby marks near the tail needs to be blurred just a tad bit. Other than that, its really good! :]

Please work on this or it will be declined ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 04:49, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, but the ear is too red and defined and the tail needs to be highlighted more. FrostHeart 02:52, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 13:00, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

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