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Whitethroat (RO) - Declined

[[File:Whitethroat.png]]This is my first charart, so please don't leave rude comments for it.

Blackstar, A white cat with jet-black paws....... 02:06, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The image is too small. I see no shading, there is a strange white line around it.--NightshineR 02:35, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I will enlarge it and make all the white lines black. Blackstar - A white cat with jet-black paws....... 03:42, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Lightpelt has already reserved Whitethroat's rogue image. Please be sure to check before reserving a charart Night Fall 04:51, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Tigerstar (A) - Declined

[[File:TigerpawNo.2.png]]Well, here he is! Open for comments now. Butterfly }{ Song! 13:46, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

The image is a redlink at present. ✐SaNdY 13:48, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I KNOW. I can't open the file! I'll try again. Please wait Butterfly }{ Song! 14:24, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Butterfly }{ Song! 14:29, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see any eye-color. Φτερόaεράκι60px 14:49, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

In the future, don't use caps, because it's like shouting. I do see the eye color, just that the highlight in the eye seems a bit big. Also, blur the stripes and shading on the tail. --晶須 15:16, April 18, 2010 (UTC)

Needs eye colour! :3 Dawnleaf 14:45, April 19, 2010 (UTC)Dawnleaf

The eye color is there, but whoever made these blanks made the highlights just as big as the eye color space. And I'm sorry, I won't use caps in the future. Butterfly }{ Song! 19:05, April 20, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he had the nick in his ear when he was an apprentice. Clarrissa! :) 11:22, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, he might've. Thistleclaw was a pretty tough mentor.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:29, April 21, 2010 (UTC)

As for the image, you should use a tutorial or an apprentice pic like Frostfur's for the eyes.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:26, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

I still think this is good for my third attempt (I think of it as my first because it's the only one that was up for more than one day). I origionally made him with the scars on his muzzle, but painted over them because he got them later. Butterfly }{ Song! 01:10, April 22, 2010 (UTC)

You still haven't put coloring in the eyes. He should have amber. Quailflight 16:49, April 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to copy the eyes from another apprentice image like Shrewpaw. If not, I can do it for you.--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 02:35, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Sorry for the wait. How's this? I changed the eye highlight to the eye color... Butterfly }{ Song! 14:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add some eye-white. Bring up an apprentice image on your art program, and zoom ito his/her face. That should help with the eye color, pupil, and eye-white positions ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:50, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see a pupil. Just *a glint of amber eyes* xD Springstar 20:40, April 29, 2010 (UTC)

There is a pupil, and the eye white was preventing everyone from seeing his eye color. Make up your mind please! Butterfly }{ Song! 16:09, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

No one said get rid of the eye highlight just change it's placement. Do what Night said look at some of the approved apprentice chatarts and copy the eye from there. AshshadowBring me to Life! 16:33, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Or look here for how to do the eye. 晶須 21:52, May 3, 2010 (UTC)


ReuploadedThank you for the Tutorial! I needed that, and I'll use it ffr. Butterfly }{ Song! 16:40, May 8, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad smaller.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:52, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 05:55, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

The lines on the tails look messed up, I think you blurred it too much. Also, the eyes look more yellow than amber to me. I think you should highlight a bit more on the muzzle and the tip of the tail. FrostHeart 02:48, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks fine to me, and the eye is the same color as his other images ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:24, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry I didn't work on this sooner. my computer is being weird, could i have a couple of weeks or so so my parents can fix it? Butterfly }{ Song! 00:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Seeing as nobody with the authority to do so has yet answered you, I'd personally say no to that request. It would be better if this was declined and then you can resubmit when your computer is fixed rather than leaving this up on the page for an indefinite time period. But it's not up to me. -- Sandystar 18:27, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ih.. sort of true, sort of not. Sandy here is still technically deputy, but she's taking a break. :) I can decline this and archive it, and you can resubmit when your computer is fixed. Declining; will archive later. Bramble 01:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. Bramble 16:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Moss (Q) - Declined

[[File:Leopardfoot_(Q).png|frame|best i could do]]

you like? i do i think its my best yet....constructmentsLionClaw132 03:50, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. Lighten that and make the ear pink smaller. Also darken the shading on the face--Nightshine{ 05:01, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Where did the image go?--Nightshine{ 03:35, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

I put it back up. I think this is the right image?Darkhallows 16:03, May 6, 2010 (UTC)


yes thank you! my computer is bieng very very STUIPID it wont let me downlaod it! any ways comments?LionClaw132 00:00, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred the lineart on the back. SnickersLife's a rollercoaster 20:28, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

Also rename the file to Moss.queen.png SnickersLife's a rollercoaster 20:29, May 7, 2010 (UTC)

btw i didnt blur the line art the queen image came like that so it cant be helped but i can fix the file LionClaw132 23:37, May 7, 2010 (UTC)&nbs oinClawLTimes running out </span>

Lighten the shading. --IcestormPeace 19:41, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

And also thicken the shading--Nightshine{ 01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on it or it will be declined.Darkhallows 20:57, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED-k this is the best i could do and Nightshine i dont think thicking it would helpLionClaw132 19:19, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lionclaw, this is not your image. You can't take credit for an image you didnt make. This is Leopardfoot's queen image. It's possible to be banned for a short period for claiming someone elses work. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:25, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, this is Leapordfoot's image. You can be banned if you don't admit that you didn't do it. Next time, do your own characts. FrostHeart 02:56, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

In which case this should be declined. -- Sandystar 18:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I was originally giving time for Lion to upload his own image, but since he's neglected to do so, declining doe to lack of work and art theft. --Bramble 01:39, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

sorry Bramble ;) *goes back to her hole* -- Sandystar 10:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Heh. :) Bramble 16:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Rainfur (Lo) -- Withdrawn

[[File:Rainfur.png]]Hi This Is My Import for Rainfur of SkyClan as a loner. I know it's small, I'll make it bigger soon!Thanks! Sunspirit

Next time, Sunsp

irit, start a new section. I'll wait for the one to come up before commenting. •Maplefern• 10:39, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! I'm New so I dont Know That Much! :( Sunspirit 21:48, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry. No one is mad at you. Everyone makes mistakes when they're new.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:52, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. Fix the blurred part by the back ankle.--Shaf Girl 21:23, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Erase some of the markings outside the line art. Riverpelt 00:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay.. Is That Better? ( This Is My First :) ever one) Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 05:23, May 16,

[[File:R.png|thumb] 2010 (UTC)

You still need to erase some of the blurred gray areas around his body



. Here's a tip, you can't usually see the mistakes in pixlr but before you swap the new image with the original, you can see some of the gray areas around the image. I circled the areas that need to be erased in the light blue color for you if you need help.(sorry about it being in Thumbnail form, it wouldn't go into regular form for me) Riverpelt 23:22, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, add shading to the muzzle and head, make the ear pink smaller, fix the blurred pupil, and do what Riverpelt said. --IcestormPeace 00:24, May 18, 2010 (UTC)


Okay, Is This Better? I Erased and Made the pink in the ear smaller. Comments? Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 00:45, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

I still see the exact same spots that Riverpelt said...--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:50, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
Uploaded it, Sorry First Chararts are normally not that good, AKA Mine... This Is My First
Can you not put the image in the heading as it messes up the page a little and looks messy, thanks -- Sandystar 11:36, May 22, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry Sandy, is that better? Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 01:49, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is blurred in some places and I can still see those overlaps talked about eariler. I could help you with that if you need it.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 01:53, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ok Ashshadow! Sure you can help! Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 07:25, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more.DawnleafStarClan is watching... 13:21, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

I've fixed the line art for you Sunspirit. As for the image, make the pupil black and be careful not to hit the line art while blurring.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:45, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, I can see it very clearly. Make the ear more pink. I don't know why, but the spots look un-natural to me. Sorry. FrostHeart 03:00, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm Sorry Guys, I'm not sure I can do this charart anymore, I Have a school assignment soon and I recommends that someone should take over. I will be back in action soon, but for Now, I'm not doing Rainfur as a loner. Thanks Sunspirit- The Way the Breeze Whispers 09:31, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

I could do Rainfur for Sunspirit, but I already have Crookedstar (W) up for approval. So im sure I could fix Rainfur, but can't u only have one image up for approval at a time? RiverpeltHeart of Amber 12:37, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

As Crookedstar is your first charart Riverpelt, I'd advise you concentrate on him and this can just be declined until someone has the time to work on either a new version, or take over this version. Not every image needs to be salvaged if people don't have time; they can simply withdraw them and they can be archived. -- Sandystar 18:33, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Sandy. I'll archive this as Sunspirit has withdrawn it, and he can put it back up at a later time. --Bramble 02:02, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Goldenflower (A) - Declined

[[File:Goldenflower.apprentice.png]]There are 6 discussions, so I dont think this is over the limit. Comments? BlacktailTalk! 00:37, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

It looks really good Blacktail! Just make the ear pink color more visable. Riverpelt00:43, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, River! Reuploaded. BlacktailTalk! 00:47, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

I added you to the current projects table, Blacktail, as Warriors808. You can add in your current projects there now; you're near the bottom of the table. Just use CTRL + F to find yourself if need be. On the image, nice job, but the ear pink needs to be a hotter and more visible pink; try a little darker and less dull. Also add a white pixel to the eye to give it some life. Bramble 10:44, May 14, 2010 (UTC)

Wow...This is better than mine. Quailflight 05:29, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading--Nightshine{ 01:26, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine, and don't forget the white pixel. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 21:57, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Bramble! I made the ear pink hotter and visible, added a white pixel, and darkened the shading. BlacktailTalk! 12:00, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to blur in the shading a bit more. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:11, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

The white pixel for the eye is bothering me :\ try moving it to another position.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:25, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

I can see the shading well. Blur it more and make the ear more pink FrostHeart 20:17, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

This is awsome! The only thing that I see needs to be fixed is the shading and the ear pink. Blur the shading some more and also make the ear pink like FrostHeart said, otherwise this is very good! :3DawnleafStarClan is watching 02:31, May 24, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or t'will be declined in 24 hours. Bramble 01:46, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Darkhallows 19:45, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail (A) - Declined

[[File:Whitetail.apprentice.png]]Here she is. She might be my last charart for PCA, sadly. Comments?  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:09, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Icy. Frostheart already has this up under Whitepaw. Sorry. Quailflight 00:12, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, she just didn't have it reserved, that's what got me confused.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:14, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'll add it to the table and archive this. It looks nice though, Ice. Why possible last piece of art? Are you going to be leaving us soon? Bramble 00:30, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks, Bramble. Maybe, I might leave, but I'm not sure. Because, I want to edit more to the Wiki but PCA's getting in my way of editing.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:38, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Whichever you feel is the wisest decision, I wish you well. It takes courage to admit to that. Archiving now. --Bramble 16:10, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Whitepaw- Withdrawn

[[File:Whitepaw.jpg]]2nd charart of mine. Whitepaw. Comments :]

Frostheart, this is your second. You can only have one charart each time. So Whitepaw or Mousepaw? Skywish Let's go May 18th! 22:40, May 17, 2010 (UTC)


Sorry Skywish. May I delete this post then repost it as soon as Mousepaw is archived? FrostHeart 23:30, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

No, please don't delete your posts. Wait for a senior warrior to archive it. Which Whitepaw is this anyway?--Nightshine{ 23:46, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry. I didn't mean to sound mean. But I think this is pretty good. Just next time remember to put it on full-size image and save it in PNG form Skywish Let's go May 18th! 00:17, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Though, it dosen't look like you coloured in his hind legs. Also blur the shading. Its very good! DawnleafStarClan is watching 01:13, May 18, 2010 (UTC)


Mousepaw was declined and archived, so this can stay up. But I thought that Blackclaw had this reserved? ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:23, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

Really? I didn't know. I'm not sure. I saw this on this page with the list of cats that needed to be done. Sorry I'm new, i didn't know like how to reserve and stuff. FrostHeart 01:50, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, Night (is it ok if i call you that?), I gave Whitetail to Zoe27 because Clovertail was taking a long time to get approved. I let Zoe27 take Whitetail because she really wanted to do her, so I figured it was only fair I did that. 晶須 23:00, May 18, 2010 (UTC)

That was really sweet of you! Alright Frostheart, sorry about this. If you can find another character to use this as; you may keep this up.☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 01:09, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

lol sweet isn't exactly how I would describe myself... I can't find any other white cats for you to do, but if you darken it some, it could become Minnowtail's alternate apprentice image (is that reserved yet?) 晶須 01:58, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, there's no color on the legs farthest from us. Quailflight 09:33, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading more.Darkhallows 20:53, May 21, 2010 (UTC)

Whitepaw
Reuploaded. Can you see it now? FrostHeart 02:46, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to color in the legs farthest from us.Snickers 7 Days! 19:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

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Turn it into a png, and name it Whitetail.apprentice. --Quailflight 09:30, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I added color to the furthest leg. It's already in png. FrostHeart 14:26, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

I meant the same color as the rest of the image.Snickers 6 Days! 19:15, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Please save it in a png format. Right now it is in jpg--NightshineR 03:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

No, if you roll your mouse over the one on the right, it's png. FrostHeart 14:27, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

That image may be .png but it has the pixelated spots of .jpg if you look closely. It will just simply have to be redone...--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 15:10, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to name it Whitetail.apprentice Quailflight 23:09, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

And it's still jpg. The excact file name needs to be this - Whitetail.apprenitce.png Night Fall 23:17, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Whitetail.apprentice.png, Nightfall. Spelling mistakes :) Quailflight 15:44, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this because I'm going to start working on Cinderfur FrostHeart 02:29, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

petalfall and Leafstorm - Declined

[[File:Leafstorm(d).png]][[File:Petalfall(d).png]]this is my first sprite.


feel free to play with any shading or etc.

First, these two cats are already up for approval. Second, this is over the limit, Third, you can only have one charart up for approval at a time. Fourth, you need to add eye colour--NightshineR 20:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Nightshine is right. Will archive later Night Fall 21:25, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy (A) - Declined

[[File:Tallpoppy.apprentice-1--1-.png]]

I don't like Robinwing, so I erased it. I'm at school, so this isn't finished..--≈Ivy -sδmδ≈ 03:06, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

As I believe has been said numerous times before, you never blank a section; you put 'withdrawn' in place of 'for approval' and let one of the senior team archive it. You never erase it. I also uploaded your image in accordance with the new naming policy; Tallpoppy.apprentice. Your image isn't finished yet, so I'll hold my comments for now. --Bramble 03:33, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading, this looks like a speckled (whatever LOL) cat and here description says tabby, add some color to the eye, add some shading and highlights if you want to, akso some ear pink, and blur the markings after you make them tabby stripes. (sorry if they are tabby stripes :( ) Add stripes to the tail, the foreleg thats farthest away from us, some on thee tail, and some on the back leg closes to us. Moonpelt 13:35, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

She's not done with the image; in her first message it says that she was at school when she did it. ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:59, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

School again Reuploaded≈Ivy -sδmδ≈ 03:08, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken her pelt and the shading some.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:02, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

She looks too golden, make her a brown color like her elder and queen images ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:09, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Don't forget to add the ear pink and color in the eyes.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:23, May 20, 2010 (UTC)
She looks too golden, and the tabby stripes seem too weird. And make the ear pink. FrostHeart 02:51, May 25, 2010 (UTC)
The ear does have earpink in it, it just is hard to see.Snickers 7 Days! 19:34, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 13:03, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, keep your"skin" on, reuploaded!≈Ivy -sδmδ≈ 12:57, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ivypool, there's not need to talk to us like that. You have seven days to reupload your chararts before the decline warning is put on them. Ashshadow did just this. She's still too golden, and she doesn't have blue eyes; she has amber Night Fall 18:55, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

In addition to what Nightfall said, the ear pink needs blurred some more and also needs to be a bit more reddish like the ear pink on her elder version. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Bramble 00:44, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers Declined.

[[File:Dark_Whiskers.png]]I think this is my best charart yet! How can I improve it? Clarrissa My Talk!16:30, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten his pelt some and add/darken the shading.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 16:37, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Not some...a lot my friend. Its really close to the regular black of the lineart so when shading it wouldn't work out too well. Also darken the ear pink some.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 17:11, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Clarrissa, you'll have to redo the image, as trying to lighten it won't do much good. I suggest you color it with this color: #343434. 晶須 17:34, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't see any work done but the pelt color, the eye and the ear. You'll have the tweek or redo the image a lot. FrostHeart 03:13, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what what you told me too. I hope it's better. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 19:06, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think Dark Whiskers is supposed to be black, this is completely gray ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

Try #11111 instead. I've tested it out myself. You can still see the lineart clearly on it, but it it still looks like a black cat. It ought to work for Dark Whiskers. Hollydapple 18:24, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

If you don't want to completely re-do it, just run the burn tool over it and then fix the eye. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 02:45, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

I tried #11111, and it turned greenish. Shall i just use the burn tool? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 16:30, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes and darken the shading while you're at it.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:50, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Clarrissa, I left you the wrong number! It's six ones, not five. Sorry, that was my fault. It's #111111. The shading could be darkened. Sorry again! Hollydapple 20:32, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

She doesn't have to change the color, that's way to confusing. All she has to do is run the burn tool over it a few times Night Fall 22:37, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it more reddish--NightshineR 06:34, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:55, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:11, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Graymist (Q)- Declined

[[File:Graymist-1.queen.png]] This is one thing............. an epic fail. XP Comments?--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 02:32, AprJöhn lënnön Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)il 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes. Comments?--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 00:11, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, and add a few to her legs ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 00:14, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

When I did darken the stripes, it didn't match her warrior image and messed the whole picture up. The stripes on the leg are there, you just can't see them very well because of the shading. Comments?--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 03:09, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

I still think that you should darken the stripes in the shaded area. The shading would darken the stripes.AshshadowBring me to Life! 19:27, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened leg stripes. Comments?--Earthstorm Keep the Earth clean! 22:15, April 26, 2010 (UTC)

Keep blurring the stripes, because it looks like they've only been blurred over once. Here's a trick:

If it looks like it won't blur anymore, press the mouse again and keep repeating until the blurring is perfect. Quailflight 10:49, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred stripes more. Comments?Snowstorm 23:01, April 30, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes have no highlights- they seem to go over the shading and highlights you put- they look drawn on. Could you fix that? Mousetalon!! 20:44, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

I understand what you are saying. Do I have to redo the image? Or is there a way to fix it?Snowstorm 20:53, May 1, 2010 (UTC)

Well, acually Mouse, that's the way I do my tabbies. I do the shading and highlights first, then I do the stripes ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 03:56, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of people do that but it only works if you use the burn tool for stripes. You should do the stripes first if you paint them on. As for the image if you're careful you can just highlight that area. AshshadowBring me to Life! 13:30, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I used the pencil tool to put the stripes on :3 What should I do? I also did it the way Night did it. Is it ok?Snowstorm 18:18, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading again. --HawkshinePartyyyy! 20:15, May 2, 2010 (UTC)

I never darkened the shading before, and if I do the stripes wont be visible.Snowstorm 03:05, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit bigger--Nightshine{ 03:31, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Snowstorm 23:55, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink more. Jöhn lënnön Imagine 01:27, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

I won't blur anymore.Snowstorm 16:44, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it a touch for you (if you don't like it then revert it), but you're right; to do so any more would blur it right into the pelt and it wouldn't be seen. I think you've done a great job with this. -- Sandystar 11:51, May 16, 2010 (UTC)
Thank you, Sandy :3 I thought I would fail because this was my first tabby. Thank you, also, for blurring it.Snowstorm

14:37, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

So is this in CBA?Snowstorm 01:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think so. Make the earpink a tad bigger and then it'll be ready for sure. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 02:00, May 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlight the tail. And make the ear more pink. Great job :]FrostHeart 02:50, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

The tail is fine.You could make the ear pink a little more noticeable though.Awesome job! =) Snickers 7 Days! 19:33, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

If I make it any bigger, it would look unnatural.Snowstorm 02:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Define the ear pink more--NightshineR 02:58, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:34, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 19:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Hollystar - Declined

Ok, this is my first charart. I hope you like it!

Lions62

[[File:Hollystar.png]]

It's good, but Hollystar doesn't have a description. Sorry, this will have to be declined. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:10, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to the reason above. Will archive later so that you have a chance to see this.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 23:15, June 9, 2010 (UTC)



This is Hollystar. I hope you like her! She is my first charart, and I think she came out pretty good! Lions62

[[File:Hollystar.png]]

Good job on her! No changes needed! Good luck! 96.251.192.143

As stated before, Hollystar has no description, so there is no need for an image. Declined, and will archive once this can be seen. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 01:54, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W)- Declined

[[File:Pineclaw(w).png]] Hoorah! Oh wait, is this within the limit? I forgot to look *facepalm* Sorry if it isn't! Anyways, improvements?? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 20:21, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Always remember to look; this will have to be declined now and take up space in a declined archive. It's very simple just to check. I will archive this in a moment. --Bramble 23:25, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Mothwing (W)

[[File:Mothwing_as_a_Warrior.png]] So Sorry, know this is over the limit, but I saw other users do it so I thought I would give it a try. Technically my first ever charart! Mothwing as a warrior and I hope you like it! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Over the limit and Moonpelt already has it up. This has to be declined. I know you saw other users do it, but the image limit to this page is 35, no matter what. They broke the rules and decided to go over. Even if it gets under 35 it will still be declined. Sorry Sunspirit, a senior warrior will decline this shortly. Quailflight 07:42, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Quailflight, didn't see someone Moonflight had done it. Sorry. SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:57, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay Sunspirit, we all make mistakes. It's a good image, just not one that is needed at the moment. If Moonpelt's is withdrawn/declined, you can put this one up. Don't delete it from your pictures. Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:35, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Birdy - Declined

[[File:Birdy_Kittypet.png]]

I'm not really sure if she would need a kittypet image since this blank is used for adult kittypets and she was a kit. If needed take the earpink out of thr right (our right) ear and this doesn't look much like her kit image. The image on a whole is really good.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:22, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I agree with Ashshadow, and you should add a white pixel to both of her eyes. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 14:35, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I agree with both of you, actually, but I did her picture because she was listed on Nightfall's list of cats that needed pictures, quote "Birdy: Kittypet Image Needed". Check it out for yourselves. I fixed the pixel and tried to make it more like her kit--I added a gray splotch to her tail, I made her forepaw and hindpaw gray, and I ajusted the eyecolor--and added the white pixel (I can't believe I forgot that...). How do I re-upload the picture? Thanks. Hollydapple 17:42, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I know that it was listed as needing a kittypet image but people do make mistakes and im not sure if she meeds an adult image. That happened with Berrynose,Hazeltail, and Mousewhisker needing loner images. Anyway the way the image is facing the part you have white whoud actually be gray and gray partly white.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:11, May 22, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I'm not sure I got her in the right spot...anyway, I added the eye-white, as you can see, a splotch to the tail, and I made her tag gold so you can see it better. I see your point, Ashshadow, but even if I do withdraw/get it declined, I'd like to get her right (it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe kits). Anyway, does she need to be even gray-er? I think I got the splotch on the face right, but do you think I should ad more gray around the hindleg, foreleg, and that spot on the flank? Hollydapple 18:38, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I took it out of thumbnail. Darken the arm, tail and face shading. Add more white to the eyes--Nightshine{ 21:32, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I'm very sorry if I did make a mistake. However, Firestar has a kittypet image; but he was a kit when he was a kittypet ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:45, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I thought he was apprentice age. Thats what he joined the clan as.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:52, May 22, 2010 (UTC) But an apprentice still isn't an adult ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 21:54, May 22, 2010 (UTC) I know but its not really a kit either.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:56, May 22, 2010 (UTC) Add some more shading to the white blotches and define the ear to a more triangle shape. FrostHeart 20:13, May 23, 2010 (UTC) Don't worry about it, Nightfall; I have fun doing the chararts, whether it's just a pixel of the real Hollydapple (my weird cat Gertie), or if it's a pixel for approval! ;) You have a point about the Firestar-kittypet thing. I have this remark posted earlier--it's too bad we don't have kit blanks for kittypet/loner/rogue/Tribe cats. I'll fix the ear pink and I'll try adding more shading to the white splotches in a minute, FrostHeart. The ear pink does look kinda funky right now. *Snickers embarrassedly*. Hollydapple 23:09, May 23, 2010 (UTC) Well acually, kit blanks can be used for any blank there is. See Frisk, and Tadpole for example. And acually, I was going to do Firestar's kit image; a kit with a collar drawn on it like Scourge's. But I changed my mind at the time, I don't remember why though xD ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 23:23, May 23, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. Point taken. Fixed the ear pink and added a few pixels more of eye-white. I tried darkening the shading, but it looks kind of funky. Lemme try blurring it more in Adobe Photoshop 8. They have a great blurring tool. If it works, I'll try uploading again here. Hollydapple 23:57, May 23, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. Adobe Photoshop 8's blurring tool worked well, I think. Do you think I ought to smudge the head patch more? I think she looks better now than she did the last time I re-uploaded her. Hollydapple 00:10, May 24, 2010 (UTC) It's good, but the small ball next to the kittypet chain needs to be colored gold or yellow. FrostHeart 03:10, May 25, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I thought I had already fixed that. I must have forgotten to save my changes. I did it silver first because there aren't a lot of kittypets (that I've seen, anyway) with silver tags. But it sort of smudges in. I made the tag bronze-colored. Should I try lightening it some more? I also darkened the nose, so it doesn't look so baby-pink. Hollydapple 18:25, May 25, 2010(UTC) Just so everyone knows what I mean, when I said "but it sort of smudges in", I meant the silver tag camoflauges with the gray-and-white pelt, not that the silver tag smudged in with the charart. I didn't word that the right way; sorry! :) Hollydapple 18:38, May 25, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I felt like working on Birdy tonight. *Yawns sleepily*. I fixed a few minor things that were minor, but showed up, if you know what I mean. Anyway...not much else to report. Goodnight. Hollydapple 05:28, May 28, 2010 (UTC) She's really good. Just darken the ear pink a tad, make it smaller, and blur it. ICEYWait, that's not how you spell Icy! 01:04, May 29, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. Thanks, Icestorm! I looked at a tutorial to work on the ear pink, and made it match the gray more, so now it's darker and more of a salmon-pink than a pink-pink. Is the size and blurring any better? I think the ear pink does look better now. Hollydapple 21:07, May 29, 2010 (UTC) The eyes don't look right to me. Make the white pixels over lap the pupil--NightshineR 17:11, May 31, 2010 (UTC) I made another copy of Birdy with "new eyes" (I looked at Rose's eyes for reference), but I think it looks strange. To me, her pupils look dialated in a weird way, and it makes her nose look bigger. Can I post a seperate version of Birdy down here so you can see which one looks better? Hollydapple 23:37, May 31, 2010 (UTC) Hey, guys, I just needed to let you know that, as my computer is new, it has to go get some stuff done to it, so I will be without a computer for an undetermined period of time, though it should be back soon. Anyway...just be patient with me. Thanks. Hollydapple 01:32, June 3, 2010 (UTC) Change of plans. The computer won't go to get stuff installed on it, so I will have it for a few more days/a week, though I will be without a computer with a few days sometime in the near future. Anyways, I'll re-upload her in a sec (I see a few things that are bugging me...). Hollydapple 02:05, June 3, 2010 (UTC) Re-uploaded. I fixed some blurred lineart. You guys probably won't notice it--they weren't big blurs--but I saw them when I was commenting last, and I went, "oh, I need to fix that". Let me know if it looks weird, because my eyes are going nuts right now from my stupid seasonal allergies. Hollydapple 02:18, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The gray patches where it meets the white on her legs from her back look smudged instead of blurred.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 15:37, June 3, 2010 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I saw what you meant, Shimmerpool. I blurred where the patch meets the smudge, if that makes any sense to you. Any better? Hollydapple 01:24, June 5, 2010 (UTC)


Hollydapple; I'm very sorry to tell you this now, after you've put in work on the image, but it's really not needed. Birdy is still a young kit in the manga and never seen as an adolescent/adult. Plus, we don't know if the family became kittypets just because the Twolegs were friendly with them. They may still be loners for all we know. I do apologize for not catching this earlier and so save you some time, but this has to be declined. --Bramble 20:11, June 9, 2010 (UTC)


Pikepaw (A) - Declined

[[File:Pikepaw.Apprentice.png]]This is my first Charart. Tigerheart102 18:55, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's good for your first try :) But I see no shading. Look at these tutorials to learn how to do a charart. Night Fall 18:59, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the nose needs to be black and the ear pink needs to be smaller. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 17:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Needs shading, and or highlights, highlighing is optional.. The ear pink needs to be smaller and a more natural colour, also the nose needs to be black like Mousetalon pointed out. This is excellent for your first try!! :)DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 01:28, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The ears too neon and so is the nose. And I don't see any highlights or shading. :] FrostHeart 01:13, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional so if you dont want to you don't have to add them. Lighten the eye color a bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:22, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 13:57, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Boulder (Ro) - Declined

[[File:Boulder.Rouge.png]]

I made sure that nobody reserved it.

I took out all white lines.

Blackstar 05:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

First of all, it's too small, and it looks like you used only paint. Please use pixlr, GIMP, photoshop, etc., The earpink is too neon, and must be lighter, the eye looks weird and the stripes need to be blurred. Sorry if I sound mad. Quailflight 05:57, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I did not use paint. I used www.pixlr.com/editor for it. I will edit that.Blackstar A white tom with jet-black paws......... 06:03, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, sorry then. Just do what I said above. Quailflight 06:10, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Edits made: ears lighter, stripes darker, image larger Blackstar 05:29, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please don't create new sections to say your edits. Type it out below the last message--NightshineR 06:33, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

The image is extremely large now. I just took it out of thumbnail, you shouldn't have the image in thumbnail anyway.--NightshineR 06:35, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I shrank it. Blackstar A white tom with jet-black paws......... 15:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Here is the line art again: Rogueshortmale Layer it over your image for the right size--NightshineR 16:27, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I made a new one. The new one is better than the other one. :D Blackstar A white tom with jet-black paws......... 16:47, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye color so there is a white spot and a black spot so it's not so blue. And connect the stripes a little more. It looks pretty good so far! :) PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 16:58, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the lineart got erased on the tip of his ear. Draw a black line there to fix it. Oh, and don't forget to color his nose :D AdderstrikeWarrior of MythClan 17:05, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

He is supposed to have that! Boulder has a nick in his ear. I will fix his eye.Blackstar A white tom with jet-black paws......... 17:13, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Blackstar, I'm tired today and forgot about his ear xD Anyway, it looks really good right now. =) AdderstrikeWarrior of MythClan 17:36, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the eye colour. Look at some tutorials to help with eye colour, shading etc.--NightshineR 17:40, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

And also look at Boulder's article to see what the stripes should look like--NightshineR 17:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I tried my best to make the stripes like they are supposed to look loke. Blackstar 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 03:23, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Now blur the stripes and ear pink, add shading, fix the eye, and thicken the line art on the ear tip--NightshineR 03:26, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, Blackstar. Maybe blur the tabby stripes a little more and deepen the nick in his ear. Try changing the ear pink from the shade you have now to #d08383. You should use this shade for his nose, too. Maybe look the eyes a lighter shade of blue, like #1478ff, for example (just an example, keep in mind, this shade may be too bright for Boulder). Other than that, he looks very nice! Hollydapple 04:41, June 1, 2010 (UTC)


REUPLOADED Blurred stripes, blurred ear, lightened eye colour. Blackstar 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 14:42, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The paint and stripes cover the lineart in lots of places. Fix that. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 14:50, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Took all paint and stripes off the lineart, or at least most. Blackstar 8 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 15:15, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

I've circked the parts where the lineart needs to be fixed in red. File:Boulder.rogue.lineartgraph.png Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 15:36, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The circles help. I think I fixed the problem. Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 16:07, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Model the image after this:Boulder.elder It might help. $Coolstar$ 19:12, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

The loner image helps better. :) Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 19:32, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

Here's the loner image.Boulder.loner $Coolstar$ 19:33, June 1, 2010 (UTC)

I already used it and tried my best to copy the stripes the way they are supposed to look. It looks good enough, I am not starting over, Its almost done but there is some undetected edits. Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 00:25, June 2, 2010 (UTC)


Also, please dont tell me what to edit in words, but show me what to edit. Copy my rouge picture and circle where I need to edit, just like Mousetalon did. Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 00:48, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I still don't see any shading. The image itself is a bit too light, perhaps darken it some? And the stripes are way to jumbled up together. Make them thinner and spread them out some. Make the ear pink more of a reddish color, it's hot pink at the moment Night Fall 23:08, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I can finally edit! I was blocked somehow after a unregistered user got blocked. I was not on the block log. I am on a computer at school. I cant do chararts at this time. I will start on it when I get out (in less than 2 hours) Blackstar 7 Days Left until SCHOOLS OUT! :D 19:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:08, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:05, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnyspots (E) - Declined

[[File:Tawnyspots.png]] Here is My first Character Art! I know its not as good as somew of the other ones, but its my first offer.JayfireBlindFire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights and shading. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 19:42, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't really necessary. However, Riverpelt is right about the shading. Look at these tutorials, they'll help you with shading; and highlights if you want to do them :) ☻Nightfall☻Follow the brightest star in the sky! 19:47, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? i added some shading like you said.JayfireBlindFire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blend it in a bit more. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 01:28, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is that better? I blended the shading more.JayfireBlindFire 15:22, May 27, 2010 (UTC)

That looks good, but just blend it in a bit more like where the paws and the chest are. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 00:34, May 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Is That better?JayfireBlindFire 15:03, May 29, 2010 (UTC)


i think its me but just to be sure the paws are a lighter grat then the base color or is that because of the stripes? Birdwing 19:33, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Its just from shading the stripes.JayfireBlindFire 21:24, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Oh ok its ok then Birdwing 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit more red coloured. Some line art looks blurred. Make the stripes sharper and more like his deputy image--NightshineR 01:53, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:00, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 00:44, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Nightwhisper (R)- Declined

[[File:Nightwhisper.rouge.png]] Darkhallows 05:48, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more pink-ish and colour in the nose. Darken the highlights a bit and darken/add the tail shading.--NightshineR 05:52, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Done.--Darkhallows 16:35, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 17:39, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I blurred it all I could. Darkhallows 23:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe, make the nose colour more red-brown coloured.--NightshineR 00:35, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?Darkhallows 00:51, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Yep! Brighten the shoulder highlight a bit more--NightshineR 01:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more of a reddish color than pink, and the lineart looks odd in some places. 6 Icethroat 8 School's out! For summer! 01:16, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this before its declined. Its been over a week since your last update--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 20:19, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Bramble 01:09, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Runningwind-- Declined

[[File:Runningwind_Kit.png]]

Okay, I counted a lot of discussions on this page, so I don't think this counts as 39, but instead it counts as 34? If the discussions do count, feel free to achive/delete this. Plus I didn't see anyone reserving this image, so I think I'm okay, otherwise lemme know right away. Anyway, here is Runningwind as a kit. I just got done rereading Bluestar's Prophecy for the 4th time and I checked Runningwind's page and realized he didn't have a kit image. So I thought I'd put this up for approval. Heh, ear-pink = fail. Anyway, comments? PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 22:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You don't have this reserved. But it is a very good image. Blur the stripes more--NightshineR 22:40, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, er, how do I reserve it? Just wondering. PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

On the main project page there is a chart. I already reserved it for you though.--NightshineR 23:26, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded, what else should I fix? PoppystormFlight of an Eagle 17:30, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I don't see anything that really needs fixing. Good Job, Poppystorm! RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:44, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

In the image name, please change the _ into a "period". Also, the stripes on the legs are too thick. --Quailflight 20:52, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken face stripes and blur all the stripes more--NightshineR 20:54, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I think it is fair to say that if this is not worked on it will be declined. -- Sandystar 13:29, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -- Sandystar 10:50, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

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