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Shy Fawn (SC) - Declined

How is it?:) :) MOSSY RULES! 14:59, June 13, 2010 (UTC)[[File:Sharpclaws.png]]

Sorry, Mossstar, but this'll have to be declined because it's over the limit and someone has a Shy Fawn image for approval already. --HAWKTALONö 15:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Oh well it was my first image. next tine i'll do better.:) MOSSY RULES! 15:13, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Bluestar - Declined

Well, here she is! My first charart! How is she?

[[File:Bluestar.png]]

First, this is not a blank from warriors wiki. Second, you have to post this at the very bottom of the talk page. Third, you forgot to sign, and fourth, Bluestar already has all her needed chararts--NightshineR 06:26, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

I added back the section you deleted. Please don't delete or archive anything from this page unless you are leader, deputy, or a senior warrior--NightshineR 06:32, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to the reason above.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 10:50, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Tallpoppy(A)- Declined

[[File:Tallpoppy(A).png]]

Oops I got it declined...I think this is over the limit, but still...I'm sorry, Ash, I was joking.≈Ivy -sδmδ≈ 11:11, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Here's not really the place to joke but all is forgiven. Blur the highlights more. Besides that this is really good.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:13, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear shading some more and add shading or darken them, because I cannot see any. Its really good :3DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 04:19, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A)- Declined

[[File:Wetfoot.apprentice.png]] This one might be over the limit, but I'm not really sure because when I counted it seemed under. So here's my first Charart. If you have to, you may decline it.

Cherryfur123 11:13, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Cherryfur, this is the 36th one. You'll have to wait for a senior warrior to decline it. But the charact is very good for your first one! :D Frostheart♥ 14:29, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to being over the limit. Cherryfur, please be more mindful of the limit next time; count more carefully. Thanks. --Bramble 14:25, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur - Declined

[[File:Cinderfur.apprentice.png]]




I've been waiting SO long to put this up. Comments? Frostheart♥ 14:38, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur was never seen as a warrior, I do believe. We don't do ranks that weren't seen in the books; that would just be a waste of time. It's a nice image, though; see if there are other gray warriors that you can use this for. --Bramble 14:45, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

When I was looking for a cat to do (picking Gorsestar), I saw both Cinderfur's warrior and kit images on a list. How strange. Hollydapple 15:46, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

I thought we considered Cinderfur a warrior since he was fending for himself and not being treated as an elder.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:19, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh! I'm sorry. I accidently uploaded the warrior version I did for him. I'll replace the warrior one with the apprentice one soon. (I have to redo the apprentice one because I saved it in jpg) Frostheart♥ 00:18, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

You need to leave an image up otherwise it may be mistaken as an discussion. Also Cinderfur was never seen as an apprentice was he?Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 00:22, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnleaf gave it to me because she'd rather do another cat. I'm not sure. Frostheart♥ 00:30, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, Cinderfur wasn't seen as an apprentice--NightshineR 03:20, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh...okay.Frostheart♥ 03:48, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry about it, you could save it in case a cat that this could be used for comes up. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:12, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Declining and archiving. --Bramble 01:50, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (K)- Declined

[[File:Cinderfur.k.png]]

Right, before I start my mini essay, I must just say that this is below the 35th image as a few (four, I think?) topics are discussions and such. If I am wrong, sorry! Anyway...hi guys! It's been a bit of a while since I last put an image UFA due to family/school etc, (which meant getting up at 12am to reserve Molekit was a total waste of time. Meh. Oh well, he looks awesome) so here is my 'debut' charart. I decided to stick to another kit, because they're the only thing I can do xD And there wasn't much stuff to choose from! :/ I apologise for writing in the table I was doing Graymist and then changing it, I failed her queen image. Really bad. ANYWHO. All colours were copied from his deputy image, but the shading on the deputy was a bit dark for me so I didn't really do him very well :L Comments? Brightfrostof SunClan... 14:43, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur was never seen as a kit. We don't do images for ranks not seen in the books, as I said above. And it's also named incorrectly; it shouldn't be Cinderfur.k, it should be Cinderfur.kit. Remember to type the full rank. If there are other gray kits that are needed you can use this for one of them. Otherwise, this'll have to be declined. --Bramble 14:47, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry, I didn't realise we had to type the full rank. And on this page, http://warriors.wikia.com/wiki/User:Echostar/CharartList, he is listed as being needed as a kit. :/ Is it ever updated? Oh well. Brightfrostof SunClan... 16:05, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

You could change this to Dawnpelt's alternate kit version, unless someone else has her on their current projects. 晶須 01:19, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Nevermind, Goldenpaw has her reserved. 晶須 01:20, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Declining and archiving. --Bramble 01:50, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt) (W) - Declined

[[File:Rowanclaw.alternatewarrior.png]] I counted the number of images, and this is under the limit. I didn't add tabby stripes because not all ginger cats have tabby stripes (like Quickpaw and Russetfur). I'm not sure if this is the correct filename or not, and I don't know if the ginger is too bright or not. Comments and suggestions? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 23:47, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Does he need to have an alternative warrior image?--NightshineR 23:48, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good! Just darken the shading on the tail. Icefall Icy Winds 23:49, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think so, because he's a ginger tom and his images look more of a brownish color. I'll get to darkening the shading soon. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 23:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe add tabby stripes? Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 00:14, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Er... I said above that I didn't add tabby stripes because not all of the images have them, but if you really think I should add them then I'll try to. Does anyone else think I should add tabby stripes? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 01:50, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Question; what's the point of this as an alternate image? Alternates are to show different genders or entirely different descriptions. I'm pretty sure Rowanclaw was only ever described as ginger... the alternate should be like his original warrior image, except it should be female. That being because he was a female cat at least in Midnight and Moonrise. --Bramble 01:53, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I thought that Rowanclaw was only described as ginger, too, but his images looked more of a brown color than a ginger color on my computer. It had come up when I put Rowanclaw's apprentice image up for approval (here) that it was possible we would have an alternate ginger version for Rowanclaw some time later, so I thought that it was needed. If they're a ginger color and it's just that I can't tell, then this should probably be declined. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:06, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nice thought, and I understand where you're coming from. The original artist, Dawnfeather, put forth that all ginger cats have tabby stripes and they are a more light brown cross gold color in real life. I think instead of an alternate, which would probably confuse people into thinking both versions were seen in the books, that we should modify the approved versions to get a more vibrant ginger. Not in this Tweak Week, but maybe in future. We'll have to see; are you all right that this can be declined? I just don't see how it could be used appropriately. --Bramble 02:24, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it's alright. Thanks, and I'll go ahead and decline it and archive it in a little bit. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:42, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 16:56, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (SC) - Declined

[[File:Shy fawn.png]]

There's a discussion, so is this ok to put up? Well, I don't think all of my skills have abandoned me. ^^ Comments? Batteh 14:50, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

It looks very nice, Blue. The only thing I see is that the ear pink looks slightly lopsided in the ear. Other than that she looks lovely. Bramble 16:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes a bit lighter. They look brown on my screen.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:23, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Bramble. ^^ Straigtened ear pink, lightened eyes. Batteh 18:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

They still look somewhat brown on my screen unless it cant be lightened more Birdstar 19:03, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

I really don't want to lighten them anymore, they look amber to me. Batteh 19:17, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

I agree with Birdstar. Or you can darken the pelt colour a bit more. Blur the ear pink more--NightshineR 19:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lightened eyes, although I think they're too light now, and blurred ear pink. Batteh 20:46, June 5, 2010 (UTC)!

Darken and blur the shading. Make the ear pink a bit smaller.--NightshineR 01:40, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

It isn't very bornw, it's more dusty coloured. Make it browner, like Mousefur. Γǻώήςτόŗm 09:08, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

The description says dusty brown. She doesn't have to change it. MoonpeltTM 17:59, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is great, Bluestar1776, but run the burn tool over the shading once or twice and brighten the highlights (if you're using them). Good job! Hollydapple 05:08, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

I think she should, it's too creamy. It needs to be a bit more browner not a lot. Γǻώήςτόŗm 08:55, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

If everyone agrees, make the eyes more of an orangy-red color. --MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

But if you don't want to, it's fine.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 19:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:26, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 16:56, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlekit - Declined

Nettlekit! Yay first charart!!! Any comments? Raffyjack123 11:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)




Okay,This is over the limit, you can not put this up untill SkyClan's Destiny is released,and you forgot to sign.It is very good, but sorry Raffy, it will have to be declined. OMG...You killed It! 11:01, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok :( sorry but I'll try to get to it when the book comes out! By the way how do you delete it from the WW gallery? Raffyjack123 11:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Gothstar (L) - Declined

Ok. There are a few things wrong with this:

  1. This is not a real character.
  2. You're not a member of the project.

The image itself is excelent, but you need to join the project first. You don't need to be nominated, someone will add you and decline the image.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 13:51, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Gothstar.jpg|thumb]]

Here we go! My first charart, EVER! Hopefully it's great! If it is, please nominate me as an apprentice for the Art Project! Thanx, Gothstar45 P.S., it's for everyone to view, and it's a symbol

of me!

Gothstar (A) - Declined

[[File:Gothstar apprentice. png.png.png]] Hi again! This is my second charart today! You can check if there are any mistakes that should be fixed, or if there are no mistakes at all. You can post them on my talk page. Any comments? Gothstar45 14:08, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Again, this is not a character in any of the books, and you're not a member of the project, so this will be declined and please stop posting these Chararts of Gothstar.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 14:13, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

First, this is not a character in the books. Second, you can only have one image up for approval. Third, you aren't a member of this project. Icefall Icy Winds 14:14, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Songbird - Withdrawn

[[File:Songbird.queen.png]] yay guess what ice isn't leaving. :D Comments?  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:15, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Yay! You're staying! You need to add tabby stripes and possibly a highlight to her belly area, other than that it's really good.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:20, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 21:29, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lovely :) Add a highlight to the face, and blur the highlight on her belly Night Fall 23:04, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the hanch highlight, otherwise this is stunning :3DawnleafStarClan is watching 00:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks, everyone!  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 00:22, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The highlight on the belly (sort of between the front and back legs) needs more blurring. I really love her color ^^. Blur the back shading some more.--DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 07:32, June 5, 2010 (UTC)--

Reuploaded. Thanks.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:12, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

The colour looks a little too pale. Darken the shading and blur all the highlights more. Make the nose colour darker--NightshineR 01:17, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 01:26, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, nose colour, ear pink and highlights. Fill in the white pixel on the arm facing us.--NightshineR 06:27, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think I made the shading really dark.... MidnighttailI will serve SkyClan with every breath I can take 12:08, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tail shading and stripes. •Maplefern• 22:30, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading. Darken face, right arm, and belly shading. Lighten the ear pink a bit--NightshineR 06:41, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Done. Ice fall 21:10, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit and blur it. Darken the stripes Fill in the white pixel on the fore arm. Brighten the white paws a bit--NightshineR 16:58, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Ice fall 22:56, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Comments? Ice fall 23:26, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes don't look natural. Make them a bit more curved and thicken them. Darken the shading, but not too much. Blur the white transition.--NightshineR 01:34, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Better? Icefall Icy Winds 19:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, it does to me. If anything, the shading needs to be darkened a tiny bit, because it looks a little too light to me, and then make sure to blur it. The highlights on the leg and tail need to be blurred, and maybe darkened just a tad too. The highlight on the stomach needs to be brightened more. I don't know if it's just me, but I think the the ear pink needs to be a bit darker, and maybe the nose too. Otherwise, it's very sweet! Hollydapple 02:55, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, though. I can see it very clear. And it can't blur. But I'll do the other stuff. Icefall Icy Winds 20:05, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I made the highlight too bright...Icefall Icy Winds 20:54, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Personally I'd already thought that the highlight was too bright before it was brightened, but that may just be me...can you get the highlight to how it was before you lightened it, but keep the rest of the image as it is now? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 20:57, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Done. Icefall Icy Winds 21:10, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. The stripes look too much like lines and they are all going in the same direction. There is a highlight on the belly where there should be shading. Darken the shading a bit more. Make the white pixels in the eye a bit bigger--NightshineR 05:50, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This is the style of stripes I always use...Icefall Icy Winds 12:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine, but maybe brighten the belly highlights. =) Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 23:04, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I think I made it look worse. Icefall Icy Winds 23:07, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Songbird.redline.png]] Sorry for my terrible redline. That is where I think you should darken the shading. Get rid of the highlight on the belly. The tail stripes look fine, but the other stripes are too line-like. Blur them more and don't make them all the same length--NightshineR 06:28, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

That splotch on the belly could be blurred. Quailflight 07:57, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Nah, it's okay. I just want to withdraw this. May I? Icefall Icy Winds 11:49, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Of course you can, Ice. It is your image. •Maplefern• 11:59, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oakheart (A) - Declined

[[File:Oakheart.apprentice.png]] Frostcloud gave it to me because she didn't want it anymore. Comments? Frostheart♥ 02:17, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Frost, Oakheart was never acually seen as an apprentice Night Fall 03:15, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Chasing Clouds - Declined

[[File:Chasing_Clouds.png]] I will say that Moonpelt's version was very good, and I'll remember to put the rank after my charart next time. I guess I didn't think I needed it since Chasing Clouds has only one known rank. Anyways, comments?--Shaf Girl 23:31, April 24, 2010 (UTC)

Huh...blur the shading on his gray parts and darken the shading on the white transition. --IceThe stars will light your path... 15:46, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

This is good....blur the gray. Quailflight 17:47, April 25, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like you blurred some line art on the ear. Moonpelt is a Jayfeather fan :3 13:51, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, add some grey to the face. --IceThe stars will light your path... 19:39, April 27, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart's blurred in several places. Ravenflight92 00:21, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should add more gray patches all over--Nightshine{ 00:27, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred the shading on the gray parts, darken the white shading, fixed the blurred lineart on the ear and some other places, and added gray to the face and other parts.--Shaf Girl 02:14, April 28, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart looks weird. Quailflight 09:49, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

It's blurred a lot. Ravenflight92 23:00, May 3, 2010 (UTC)

Where exactly do you see it blurred? Maybe it's obvious to you, but I can't tell. My computer crashed a few days ago and I have limited time on my brother's computer, so I can't really look over to see exactly where it's blurred.--Shaf Girl 23:52, May 4, 2010 (UTC)

Around the head and tail, I think. Ravenflight92 00:29, May 5, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll get to working on it soon.--Shaf Girl 02:27, May 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. If there are still blurred places, I can fix that. Also, any other problems?--Shaf Girl 01:19, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

The lineart still looks blurred...maybe its this computer as its not my own. Its like fuzzy where it touches the color and it seems almost blurred to the gray patches. Blur the patches more too.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 22:10, May 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I went over all the fuzzy places and fixed them. Also blurred the patches into the white part a little more.--Shaf Girl 02:28, May 12, 2010 (UTC)

The white patches on the tail are very grey and the shading needs thickening and blending all over. ✐SaNdY 16:09, May 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 21:20, May 15, 2010 (UTC)

The shading on his gray patch on his back needs to be blurred more.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:39, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 23:32, May 20, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and darken the ear pink--Nightshine{ 04:41, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Add more grey to the back paws and make his ear more noticeable. FrostHeart 02:49, May 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not quite sure what you mean by "more noticeable." I can't change the lineart.--Shaf Girl 01:21, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 02:17, May 26, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure Frostheart meant earpink, which I agree could be a bit bigger.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:57, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 19:19, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Bramble 15:57, June 2, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry; but the shading looks very bumpy. Try blurring it more, (especially on th front leg closest to us) and it seems as if blurred lineart is causing the shading to look bumpy, perhaps smooth it out if it is Night Fall 08:06, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 21:51, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I think his eyes are a little dark; maybe you should lighten them up a little. But otherwise, I think he looks great! --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 15:55, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 02:51, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a little more, so it shows up better. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 13:57, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.--Shaf Girl 22:21, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more red. MoonpeltTM 23:18, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be more coral like. The line-art is blurred in the circled parts. Frostheart♥ 02:08, June 13, 2010 (UTC)File:ChasingCloudsblur.png

The ear pink is fine- I've seen gray cats with an ear pink color like that. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 16:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:34, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. -- Sandystar 18:56, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -- Sandystar 12:13, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (Ro)- Declined

[[File:BirdThatRidestheWind_rogue.png]]

This is the 35th I think. If it isnt, than decline it. But anyways this IS my first charart! i feel proud of it! Is there anything I need to improve?Rubyblaze 22:34, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Blur the mud streaks. Darken the ear pink and nose colour. The line art looks a little blurred--NightshineR 22:48, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Smudged the mud streaksRubyblaze 22:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

You still need to fix the line art and darken the nose colour and ear pink--NightshineR 23:01, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- darkened the ear and nose color.Rubyblaze 23:14, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like a jpeg. Convert into png and name it BirdThatRidestheWind.rogue --Quailflight 23:16, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

It actually is png right now. It just looks pixelated for some reason. Fix the line art and make the mud streaks a little more blurred--NightshineR 23:23, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay. I am having trouble with the line art with I fixed the mud streaks.Rubyblaze 23:56, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I can help. Can you please stop putting the image into a thumbnail?--NightshineR 00:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded fixed line art--NightshineR 00:48, May 31, 2010 (UTC)


Thank you. Sorry. I thought that was the way you were suppose to do. *turns pink* Is there anything else I need to do?Rubyblaze 01:04, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes so they are more visible--NightshineR 01:49, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Better?Rubyblaze 23:52, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Now just blur the stripes, and I think she'll look good. =) Nice job on the shading, by the way! --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 14:04, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sharpen the stripes some more. It looks good. Icefall Icy Winds 00:42, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 13:15, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -- Sandystar 12:20, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

:Dappletail (A) - Declined

[[File:Dappletail.apprentice.gif]] Here's Dappletail as an apprentice. And on that note, I'm back for the 5th time! xD I'm not sure I like the shading, so what are your comments? Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:49, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is over the limit. Wait until the number of charats go down to 34 or less. The image will be declined. BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 18:07, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Didn't Nightfall have this reserved...? Icefall Icy Winds 19:35, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Nope, she has Rabbittail reserved--NightshineR 19:39, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Warrior. This won't be declined, it's under the limit. Image-wise, this doesn't really look like any of Dappletail's other images. This image has patches, and the others have stripes. Also, I can't really see the ear pink, and the shading on the muzzle is too dark to see the lineart. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 01:45, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Add stripes, this looks like mottled/patches. Lighten the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 22:15, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 12:53, June 20, 2010 (UTC) Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:02, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D)-Declined

File:Stonetooth.Deputy.pngOkay. So, this is my first tabby I ever put up for approval. So it might be bad, please be nice. Comments? Frostheart[[User talk:Frostheart♥ 18:11, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Make stripes alot less thicker, blur more.But it looks great other wise! XD Spiritcloud48 18:14, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this image is already up for approval.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:30, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

This image looks really similar to the one Wildear has for approval, I think you may be stealing art....Dawny 19:08, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Check the file history before accusing people. I reverted it to the image Wildear had up for approval because Frostheart uploaded her image over it.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:10, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ohh, ok I just didn't realize that you reverted it...sorry frostheart! :)Dawny 00:02, June 24, 2010 (UTC)


Owlfur (W) -- Declined

[[File:Owlfur.warrior.png]] This probably isn't my best charar ever, but anyway, comments?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 22:51, May 15, 2010 (UTC)


This looks really good. ^-^ I'd say to darken the shading and lighten the highlights because I can't really see them, but this is trully fabulous. ;) Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 21:44, May 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading and lightened highlights, better?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 20:23, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Much better. :) Kitties Ruleda WORLD!Mumble sees a kitty!!! 23:18, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the bit of shading on the tail tip and also blur the ear pink--Nightshine{ 23:49, May 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred ear pink and tail tip shading. What else?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 20:30, May 19, 2010 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me--Nightshine{ 04:33, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

The shading overlaps the highlights, but it needs to be a smooth connection. Try blurring the transition some. 6 Icethroat 8 Only two more weeks left of school! 19:00, May 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the places where the brown touches the white.

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long, comments?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 20:27, May 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the white transition on the fore arm--NightshineR 03:07, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred fore arm transition. What else?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 12:29, May 30, 2010 (UTC)

I think there's some blurred lineart at the very end of the transition between brown and white on our right end of the tail. 6 Icethroat 8 School's out! For summer! 14:28, May 31, 2010 (UTC)

I couldn't find it (if I was looking at the right section...)--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 01:10, June 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the white parts some more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:51, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

On the transition between brown and white on the tail, on this >> side of it it looks like there's a jagged strand of lineart, and I think some of it got blurred while blurring the transition. Does this help you find it? $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 14:38, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wow, I just now realized that the lineart wasn't blurred, but that it was part of the tail lineart. For some reason it looked different to me, but I have no clue why. That's completely my fail, and I apologize greatly for it. D: (When I'm done making this comment I'll find a book and hit myself in the head repeatedly.) Otherwise for the image, lighten the shading just a little bit. It looks like it's overlapping the highlights when it should look like a smooth transition. $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 03:23, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Really nice! I'd say to blur the front right(furthest away) leg where the two colours meet. It might already be blurred... BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 16:49, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The shading is too light, isn't it? Icethroat- It's ok, it looked a little odd, so I fixed it. --Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 23:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Help.png]] Blue: Blur some more. Red: Blurred lnieart. Hope this helps! :) BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:30, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred and fixed as directed above. What else?--Snowflight1Thank StarClan Newleaf is here! 15:01, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit. Other than that this is perfect!--NightshineR 05:46, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Icefall Icy Winds 22:33, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined . Icefall Icy Winds 20:12, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.Ashshadow.Got Cake? 16:44, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Amberclaw (W)- Declined

[[File:Amberclaw.warrior.png]] I'm sorry that I'm one over the limit, but I've been waiting for a couple of days now. =P Anyway, comments? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 01:02, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit so it will be declined--NightshineR 01:07, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Nightshine. I guess I just got impatient. =P I won't do it again. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 01:40, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

It can stay now. Blur the back shading.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 16:19, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, guys. I feel bad about it now. Anyway, I tried to blur the back shading more, but the blur tool on Pixlr is a little iffy. Is this better or does it need more? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 13:53, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

If your having trouble with blur tool reduce the hardness a bit I ussually have it 41 for minor adjustments or even fifty for big shadings and i use the size 9 to go blur my things. Try doing that it might work :)Wildear~101:) 21:16, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, that seemed to help. Thank you for the advice! =) Is this any better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 00:33, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe darken it a bit- it seems awfully bright. Other than that darken the ear pink a smidge and maybe add a little highlight nearer to the front leg so that it has a defined shoulder. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 16:37, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 12:00, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 13:20, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the highlights a bit. --HAWKTALONö 15:22, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:39, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face highlight a little.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:29, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

How's this? --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 20:14, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up and to the left a bit--NightshineR 20:22, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the muzzle highlight. Icefall Icy Winds 20:27, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:59, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to brighten the ear pink a bit, so that it's more visable. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 03:24, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -- Sandystar 16:50, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dawnstripe (Q)- Declined

[[File:Dawnstripe.Q_.png]]I dont think its good... Spiritcloud48 14:54, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and make the stripes a little thicker. But it looks nice! ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 14:57, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Could someone make me a spot on the reserved list for Dawnstripe? Thanks! Spiritcloud48 16:56, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

I reserved Dawnstripe (Q) for you, image wise, the ear pink and shading needs darkening, otherwise its really good! :3 --Dawny 18:57, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Wait a minute, guys Dawnstripe was never seen as a queen. And yes, I've read Battles of the Clans; it doesn't acually say she's a queen, it just says that she was near the nursery during the story she was in Night Fall 03:56, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Yes she is, and no one decline this, please! I've worked my heart and soul into this, so please dont! And Nightfall, on her page it dose say shes a queen, and if she isnt you need to fix her page! XP Why so negative? Spiritcloud48 17:08, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Spiritcloud but unless it's explicit proff that she was in fact a queen I don't think she needs a quen image or listing on her page. Don't get down though. We all had an image we worked hard on declined or withdrawn.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 17:13, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, I did fix her page after I saw this Night Fall 21:04, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nooooooooooooooooooooo! :'( Spiritcloud48 23:07, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, the image is very well done, and this means you'll be able to do well on other pieces of art as well. Will archive this momentarily. --Bramble 16:56, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

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