Windstar (Ki) Declined

[[File:Windkit.png]] This is how Windstar would look if she were a kit. And she's my third charart. If you have any suggestions or comments on this image, plz leave them on my talk page. Thnx! Gothstar45

I am sorry, but we never saw Wind as a kit. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT!

Yes, we have never saw her as a kit. Also, we leave comments for the image here, not on your talk page. Icefall★ Talk 21:30, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Declined, will archive later Night Fall 22:12, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Jaykit (First One!!:D)-Declined

<gallery widths="120"> Jaykit.GIF|My First Chartart </gallery>

—Preceding unsigned comment added by Rainear (talkcontribs)

Sorry but Jayfeather doesn't need a kit image and it shouldn't be in a gallery, just on the page. Also please sign with ~~~~Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:28, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry I don't know how. Rainear 22:40, June 28, 2010 (UTC)Rainear

Just click add a picture instead of add a gallery or slideshow.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:49, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur (W) - Declined

[[File:Cinderfur.Warrior.png.png]] ok then any comments BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 21:46, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but I'm pretty sure we never saw Cinderfur as a warrior. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 22:17, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well It's on Nightfall's page, so I guess it's okay? But I agree Goldenpaw, I can't remember him being a warrior. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:25, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if he is, his earpink should be blurred.Sunflight Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 22:38, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

1. It is blurred just cause of the color i will change that

2. He was seen as a warrior in into the wild with Nightstar and Dawnflower i forget what page but hes there as a warrior BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 22:41, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and desaturate it.Dawny 22:44, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Acutally he was an elder. Yellowfang found him out of camp because all the elders were kicked out. Read Cinderfur's page, and Into the Wild Allegiances. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 22:48, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

An elder seen a warrior in the allegiances.....Ok then Decline this (Even though i tried hard to get the fur color the ear pink (Not really Ear pink) shading all perfect BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:00, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well too bad, it looked good to me. But that means it'll be even easier to do the next charart! :D ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 23:04, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, this is my fault :P That confused me too Night Fall 23:08, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I get lost too dont worry bye y'all BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 23:14, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

He's not in the allegiances of into the Wild at all. I just checked.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 23:25, June 27, 2010(UTC)

Yeah, a few weeks ago, I did Cinderfur too, and people declined it because he was never seen as an apprentice or a warrior. (They told me that at least) But, this is good :] Just blur the earpink and make it more natural. Frostheart 17:25, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Frost your's was declined because you changed it to his apprentice image. We have no way of knowing if he was an elder or just an old warrior. Nightpelt was with them and he was listed as a warrior.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 17:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I did the research and Nightpelt was a seinor warrior when Raggedstar was leader. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 19:52, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think we should go on with that. He wasn't seen as a warrior, so this should be declined. Icefall★ Talk 21:32, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Should he have an elder image than. We don't know what he was. the only elder listed for Into the Wild Ashfur. Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 22:17, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I think perhaps he was an old senior warrior; I mean if Nightstar was at the time. It's sort of hard to believe that he'd make Cinderfur deputy if he had the official rank of an elder, even with the Clan weak Night Fall 22:19, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Cinderfur was never seen as a warrior. Birdpaw, you are mistaking Cinderfur for Ashfur. Even if the Erins did err and just changed Ashfur's name to Cinderfur, Ashfur was still an elder in that book. And on page 131 of Rising Storm, it is confirmed that Cinderfur was an elder at the time Brokentail was driven out. Therefore, unless you can provide me with a page number that calls Cinderfur a warrior, this will be declined. Will archive momentarily. --Bramble 22:21, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Speckle Queen- Withdrawn by User

Hi! This is my charart of Speckle as a queen. I apologize for the lack of shading, it's just that whenever I tried to shade, all it ended up doing was making her fur look lighter in some spots, and generally just screwed evetyhing up. So, yeah. . . XxdovesongXX 08:25, June 29, 2010 (UTC) [[File:Speckle.Queen.png]]

This is acually pretty good, but you need to ask to join before posting a charart. I'll go ahead and add you in though :) As for the image; did you try just using the burn tool set on high? Night Fall 08:51, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

I did, it just made her look lighter in some spots, unfortunately. It didn't look like I'd shaded her, just messed up the colours. —Preceding unsigned comment added by XxdovesongXX (talkcontribs)

How many times? You do not need to join to post charart. Bramble and I discussed this a week or so ago and we are of the same mind that joining was never a requirement to post charart; it should be a choice.

On the image, it's very nice and you've done the spots well, but shading is needed. Did you use pure white as the base colour? If so, that may be why you're having trouble; try using a very pale grey instead as this can be shaded where as pure white and black cannot. -- Sandystar 10:19, June 29, 2010 (UTC) okay, i think i can do that :)

I agree with Sandy. Darken the white parts, make the ear pink a tad bigger, and add shading. Icefall★ Talk 14:39, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED!! Okay, I've re-uploaded it. I darkened the white, added shading (although I don't know if it looks any different?), and extended the ear pink. -dovesong



Geez, calm down! Watch the caps! Always wait at least five days before asking for comments, users will comment when they can get on. If you're sure, I guess you could withdraw this... Night Fall 04:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Will archive later Night Fall 04:23, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstar's Mother- Declined

I did this charart for Leafstar's mother. Comments? -dovesong [[File:LeafstarsMother.rogue.png]]

The cream spots could be blurred a bit, and maybe add some more shading. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 18:30, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more as well. Also, instead of just writing your name, could you sign with 4 ~ or click the signature button.MoonflightƸ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ 18:35, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but it looks like you already have Speckle up for approval- you can only have one charart for approval at one time. ❦✌Mousetalon❦✌!!It's too HOT! 20:49, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Mousetalon is right. Also, I saw you blank of this section. Do not delete sections, they are to be archived by a project lead. Icefall★ Talk 22:50, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

And we can't assume she was a rogue, she could have been a kittypet for all we know. Will archive later Night Fall 00:25, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I've been planning to do Leafstar's Mother (grew a bit close to her for some reason) but never gotten round to doing it. Maybe I will in the future, if no one takes it by then. Regarding the blank, in my opinion it should be done with the Warrior blank. Reason: she was seen in StarClan, which is a place only for warriors, not rogues or kittypets (there was the same reasoning for Brightspirit and family). Kind regards, Helixtalk 03:41, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but she never WAS a warrior! It's like saying they should show the leader base for Pinestar even thoguh he became a kitypet because he went to StarClan. I don't care if you were planning to do Leafy's mom, I already did and as I can only post one charart at a time I'm taking down my other one. —Preceding unsigned comment added by XxdovesongXX (talkcontribs)

Remember to sign all your posts by adding ~~~~ at the end or clicking the Signature button. Kind regards, Helixtalk 04:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Hmm, I would do a queen blank. Helix has a point, but she wasn't a warrior, she couldn't have been. I think it's safe to assume she was a queen at some pointNight Fall 04:11, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, but we don't know how she died or if she were a queen when she did. Why was this declined? if it was because of my Speckle one, I'm waiting for the to be taken down!

Dovesong please calm down. Always remember to sign with four of these ~, so we know who you are. I don't think it's safe to assume she was a rogue, like I said, she could have been a kittypet. But she must have been a queen at some point. That's the only rank we know for sure she was. (Besides a kit) Night Fall 04:19, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Well, okay. I'll do her as a queen, then, but I ddi her as a rogue due to the fact that all the cats living by themselves in Firestar's Quests were called rogues (i.e. look at Clovertail's page, rogue pic.

Well yes, because the book confirmed they were rogues Night Fall 04:44, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

I've posted her as a queen since this was declined now.

Cinderpaw (A) -Declined

Well, here is Cinderpaw after the monster screwed her leg up, so how is she? Spottedleaf08 05:31, June 29, 2010 (UTC)Spottedleaf08


I'm sorry, Cinderpelt already has an apprentice image Night Fall 06:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Will archive this later Night Fall 02:33, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) Declined

[[File:Wetfooot.apprentice.png]] Uhm, Wetfoot doesn't have an apprentice image, does he? I didn't see one on his page, so I made one. It FAILS, but whatever. BeautifulOblivion 18:30, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

This is already being done by Cherryfur123. Sorry but it's been taken. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 18:45, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, thanks. Is there anything I could do? I'd really like to contribute more to this wiki :) BeautifulOblivion 18:51, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

On the main page under "Current Projects (No mor then one at a time)" there will be two links to check for something to do. But make sure to double check if anyone is currently doin the project. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 19:10, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Here's a list of articles that need images. However, I think a lot of them have been reserved already, or put up for approval. Just be sure that nobody else has reserved the charart you want to do before you add it to your current projects :) Will archive this later Night Fall 22:59, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Wind (Ki) For Approval

[[File:Windkit.png]] So, this is my fourth charart. how is it? Gothstar45

Gothstar this was declined before because wind was never seen as a kit. This isn't a bad image so unless you can find another cat to use this as it will have to be declined. Also please sign with ~~~~.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 19:54, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Darkstripe - Declined

[[File:Darkstripe.png|thumb|left]]Here's Darkstripe. I made the gray lighter than the original image and did different tabby stripes. I can't do eyes, so I'd appreciate it if somebody did them for me. It's my first charart, so I hope you like it! Mistfire 17:43, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

1. are you an apprentice because apprentices are not allowed to do chararts in tweak week BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 18:13, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful, but first, you are new to PCA, and new members aren't allowed to do Chararts during this period. And, for the image, he wasn't nominated for tweaks, since there's nothing wrong with him. ♥Icestorm★ 18:47, July 12, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry Mistfire, but you are new to PCA as Icestorm stated above. Second, during tweak week, only warriors, senior warriors, the deputy, and the leader can post images up for approval. Tweak week won't last too long though ;) Second, Darkstripe was never nominated for tweak week as, as Icestorm has said, there is nothing wrong with his current picture. Will archive later Night Fall 23:08, July 13, 2010 (UTC)

Night Whiskers-Declined

[[File:Dark_Whisker.png|thumb|left]]here is Night Whisker hope you like it Cinderpelt123 03:10, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers, not Night Whiskers. And tweak week's still going on, so he can't be posted. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 04:36, August 5, 2010 (UTC)

Declined  Darkhallows...Mew? 19:13, August 6, 2010 (UTC)

Pineclaw (W)- Withdrawn

[[File:Pineclaw.warrior.png]] I made a re-do. Accidentally erased old message here XD BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Not bad. His earpink is a bit lopsided and his eye is a bit neon. Fix those and maybe add/brighten highlights or shorten the shading.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:14, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed earpink, dampened eye. Brightened highlights and blurred well. Comments? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:22, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger or shorten the shading again. Make the ear pink bigger and darken it--NightshineR 16:13, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, The one on the left is the same one, just I edited it. The one on the right is a whole new one. Which one is best and I should keep edititng?? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 17:33, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Both are nice, but the one on the right looks more normal to me. On the muzzle, if you choose the one on the right, the highlights need to be brightened, and the haunch and shoulder highlights need blurring. The shading on his back could be darkened as well. Hollydapple 19:29, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hope it looks good! First time I actually did highlights like that... BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 21:16, June 12, 2010 (UTC)

They look good for your first time. Just blur them some more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 01:07, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlithgts and back shading more. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 03:10, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights and blur. Blur the shading more. Icefall Icy Winds 22:16, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I might be mistaken but I thought his description said he had a torn ear. Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 01:29, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

It does now but it didn't always.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 12:52, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:36, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Ugh Sorry. Pixlr hasn't been working, but it's all fixed :D I'll get right onto it! >:3 BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:58, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Would you like me to take over Birchy? I'm finding it really hard to get an image done and I can finish this for you. :3 Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 10:43, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Would you Fawny? Whenever I type in pixlr, it judt goes black or white. Can you continue please? BirchyI am a warrior at heart... 14:54, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

O'll start a new section. :) So, I'm taking over, you withdrawing it? I've put that. :3 Fawny Keep on Smiling :D 15:39, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

You do not need to start a new section. Just change the title of this back to 'For Approval' and continue from where Birchy left off, Fawny. It saves us archiving this and then having another section for what is essentially the same image. -- Sandystar 09:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Since Fawny no longer wants to do this may I'll take over if no one minds.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 17:43, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 14:33, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

I lost interest in him a while ago.AshshadowAg 02:48, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Wetfoot (A) - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Wetfoot.apprentice.png]]I put this up for approval again. I really hope it's under the limit. So anyways, here's my first Charart. Comments? I am also really clumsy when it comes to counting things. I counted all the images up for approval five times and I got 34. If I missed one, please don't get angry! It's just that have terrible counting skills when there are a lot of things.Cherryfur123 17:55, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good, it's under the limit if you don't count the discussions. Anyways, he looks fine. Lighten the stripes, blur the shading and highlights, fill in the white pixels on the tail, make the ear pink bigger, and add a pupil into the eye. He's very good for your first try! Icefall Icy Winds 01:00, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. It's great for your first try. Just do the things that Icefall said. SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 05:13, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights are very bright. Darken them a lot and blur the shading. The ear pink should be centered in the ear, so move it to the right more. There are a few light coloured stripes on the end of the tail. Add more stripes lower down on his forearms.--NightshineR 05:59, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Cherryfur123 12:27, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I added the pupil in the eye. Cherryfur123 19:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I took it out of thumbnail for you. Darken the highlights more and add a few more stripes onto the haunch--NightshineR 21:14, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I darkened the highlights and added some more stripes. Nightshine, thanks for taking it out of thumbnail for me. Can someone tell me how so I could do it myself and not trouble anyone else to do it? Cherryfur123 00:47, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

When you edit the page, click modify and then select Full Size. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 01:21, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tail stripes more and darken the highlights a bit more--NightshineR 21:07, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Cherryfur123 21:44, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:09, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Blurred ear pink and darkened shading. Anything else? Cherryfur123 11:49, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading a little and add some to to the ear farthest from us.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:27, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Thickened the shading and added some to the ear. What else? Cherryfur123 I'm under your control, as long as you give me candy! 00:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC) 21:40, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Definitely need less bluring, also make stripes a lot more visible. You should try looking here for help on creating a charart. Spiritcloud48 03:43, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

The shading looks a tad dark.Dawny 19:04, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I made the stripes more visible and lightened the shading but I think I just messed up the whole thing... Cherryfur123 I'm under your control, as long as you give me candy! 00:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC) 19:17, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

No you didn't it's coming along pretty well :) Darken the stripes on his back, and blur the stripes on his chest and legs Night Fall 04:23, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Done. Anything else? Cherryfur123 I'm under your control, as long as you give me candy! 00:32, June 21, 2010 (UTC) 17:41, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Some of the stripes look a little scratchy; perhaps blend them a little more. -- Sandystar 14:25, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

By blend, do you mean blur it more or something else? Cherryfur123 I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 18:27, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Cherryfur123 I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 11:39, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes on the legs, and blur the stripes on the tail Night Fall 04:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading a little thin. Icefall★ Talk 13:41, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I thickened the stripes on the legs and blurred the stripes on the tail, and I tried to make the shading thin, but if I failed, just let me know and I'll try to do it better :) Anything else? Cherryfur123 I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 17:37, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The image looks to bumpy. Smooth out the pixels more in between the stripes and lighten the shading--Nightshine~ 01:22, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Better? Cherryfur123 I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 11:55, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else!? Cherryfur123Home + work should never be together! 21:09, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. ♥Iceshine★ 12:38, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Done. Anything else? Cherryfur123Home + work should never be together! 13:55, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the highlight on the right shoulder. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:16, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLODADED Blurred the highlight on the shoulder. What else? Cherryfur123Home + work should never be together! 14:23, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

It's great, but I think the highlights can be blurred a tad. Brilliant! SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:43, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think I'm gonna withdraw this, so if someone could archive it for me that be good :). Thanks! --- Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 10:39, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar(W) - Declined

[[File:Gorsestar.warrior.png]] Not bad if I do say so my self. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 03:50, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but this is over the limit. You should've waited. oblivionAudience? 03:52, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar already has a warrior image and this is over the image limit of 35. Declining. --SandyTalk 14:34, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

edit: my mistake, but this is still over the limit. --SandyTalk 17:56, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

He does already have a warrior image; I just got it approved. --SkydragonFlight of dreams... 19:28, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I approved it. It had the wrong file name, and I put the rename tag on it, but it seems that you uploaded a file under the correct name before the approved one could be renamed. User:Icethroat21/Sig 22:33, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declining--nightshine 06:05, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Coal (R) - Declined

I know it's a total fail. You can redline it. [[File:Coal.rouge.png]] ZorthHighly Explosive 01:00, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

This was already reserved by Blackclaw09. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 02:02, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

This is really good but you need to Withdraw it as Blackclaw09 had reserved him first and what is with his eye? o.oMossy I fight to live I live to fight! 02:15, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Nice he has red eye on the out-side of his but a user Blackclaw09 has taken this just as Mossy has saidXXRainfeatherXx 07:52, August 11, 2010 (UTC)XXRainfeatherXx

OK, is there a way to know if someone has reserved something? And yes I messed up with the eye. :/

ZorthHighly Explosive 23:11, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

If you look on the Project Page, theres a reservations table that shows what characters are reserved and who reserved them. User:Dawnleaf/Signature 23:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, and press CTRL + F and type in the name of a character and it'll highlight it if someone's reserved it. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 00:23, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Declined for the above reasons. Will archive soon. --SandyTalk 11:10, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving--nightshine 17:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (W)- Declined

[[File:Macgyver.png]] My first charart since I left. BTW: This is the 37th image, but there are three work or declines. §₩1ƒ₮¥BLAAAHH, Elder dance! 11:25, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Welcome back, Swifty. This image is really good, but define the ear pink, there's blurred lineart in multiple places, and even where there's not shading the white fur still looks gray, so lighten the white fur a tad bit. Also, this is over the limit: if images are in the 24 hour stage for cba or being declined, they are still part of the 35 limit. This will probably be declined until the page limit goes down. User:Icethroat21/Sig 13:08, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

This can be returned to the page when the total number of image sections goes under thirty-five. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 17:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Honeyleaf(Rouge)- Declined

This is the first one I've done! [[File:Honeyleaf.png]] Flowerleaf 17:07, August 14, 2010 (UTC)Flowerleaf

This is over the limit, and the file has to be renamed Honeyleaf.rogue.png. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 17:23, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

I don't get this 'limit' thing Flowerleaf 17:28, August 14, 2010 (UTC)Flowerleaf

Renamed file. I still don't get this 'limit' thingFlowerleaf 17:37, August 14, 2010 (UTC)Flowerleaf

Oh yeah and Mouseh, I didn't see my name on the table thingy. Flowerleaf 17:41, August 14, 2010 (UTC)Flowerleaf

There can only be 35 images up for approval at a time on the talk page. You'll have to wait your turn. oblivionAudience? 17:45, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Will explain more on user's talk page. Archiving in declined sector. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 17:56, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Honeyleaf.rouge..png]]Hi! this is my first pic. And will someone please tell WHAT is this 'limit' thing? Flowerleaf 01:13, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

The limit is the number of images allowed on the page. The limit is 35 images up for approval. Sorry but this is over that limit.User:Ashshadow/Sig 01:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darn. Flowerleaf 01:37, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Ki) - Declined


Yeah, well, can't say much about this one. Pretty bad, eh? SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 06:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks odd. Try making it bend toward him. Make the stripes more v shaped like his leader image.--NightshineR 06:25, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

He looks black on my screen. Maybe lighten him a bit? SkydragonListen...the wind is singing... 14:54, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I haven't been on in soooo long... Anyway, he's a tad too dark, like Skydragon said, and I think there are a few gray pixels near the top of his tail (in background). 晶須 21:15, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe thicken the top of his tail a bit. It looks mor squished than broken to me.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:45, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've copied the colour from the rogue image, but if it isn't right, then I'll change it. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 13:47, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I don't exactly understand what you mean by bending the tail, and Ashshadow, how do I make it look broken? Sharpen the bend in the tail? Also, this can only be uploaded again after five - six days. See here. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 13:57, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I just meant thicken the top part a little bit. It looks flatened rather than broken.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:26, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights on his chest and forepaws. Hollydapple 04:51, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 07:04, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

I've noticed that the other images of Brokenstar. He Is a little bit lighter than that. SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 07:26, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Brokenstar.Kit.example.png]] I made a redline for what I meant about the tail. Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:16, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and sharpen the stripes. Make the lineart on the tail a tad thicker. Icefall Icy Winds 22:27, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 06:44, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Blend the highlight on the chest as it looks like a white smear. -- Sandystar 12:54, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 06:33, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Just saying I think the break in the tail might look better closer to his body. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 13:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him just a tad. 晶須 22:20, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightning talk 04:31, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add two stripes coming out of the corners of his eyes, like his other images. Also, thicken the lineart on his tail tip Night Fall 04:21, June 25, 2010 (UTC

Define the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten him up a bit. Well, the non-striped area, at least. --Gοlδεnpαω Tensou! 23:28, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

There are some smeary highlights that I would advise you get rid of. -- Sandystar 10:49, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

This page was reopened on the 7th August and it is now the 14th with no work done. Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 11:00, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 09:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D)~ Declined


Okay now I look at this I can now see some major changes but here he is improvements please?

Edit how do you change the pxl on it so I can get it 127x155 pxl I'm not sure if its my computer or not...

Oh yeah this is the biggest size I could get him....:)Wildear~101:) 13:12, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

First,he's a tabby, second, sorry, but it's over the limit.GoldenthornEpic! 14:00, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

For future reference Wildear, remember to sign with 4 ~ and to get a bigger picture of the blank you have to right click the blanks and select open in new window or new tab. That way you'll have the full size of the blank. With the galleries installed, it takes away the feature of copying the direct size of the image. Stated before this is over the limit so this will have to be declined.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 18:44, June 6, 2010 (UTC)
Ok sorry I thought this might've been ok but I must've counted it wrong...yeah I realised my computer must be wrong in a way I'll take your advice to heart Shimmerpool.:)Wildear~101:) 21:27, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Wildear; this can stay here as two images were just approved and there is now room. But for future reference, please count more carefully. Do what Shimmer said and redo the image in the full-sized blank and make him a tabby cat. Also, please put a link in your signature by typing [[User:Wildear~101|Wildear~101]] into your preferences. --Bramble 00:20, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks Bramble I'll get it reuploaded for tomorrow:)Wildear~101:) 18:26, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~ Better? It was what I could at short notice I got art project so I fitted it in anyways!:)Wildear~101:) 19:59, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's not a bad tabby but it needs to look more like his other images here. Also make the earpink more triangular.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 20:01, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby markings need to be bigger like his other images, and make the earpink more pinkish and blur it some more.DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 14:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~Ear pink made more triangular thickened stripes and blurred some more also add some more colour on his haunches anything else?:)Wildear~101:) 19:49, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

He has to many stripes and his color is off. Try taking the color from this--->[[File:Stonetooth.elder.png]].Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:11, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED~Gave him less stripes and gave him a more brownish grey affect licke his elder image. Like Ash said...anything elses? :)Wildear~101:) 16:18, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes need to strech out father like this:[[File:Dustpelt.warrior.png]] Hope that helps!.Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 01:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Okey dokey I'll get it done for saturday as I am busy a few days:)Wildear~101:) 21:11, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Make sure the stripes don't over lap the line art. Fix the eye and darken the ear pink--NightshineR 01:36, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

He still looks closer to gray to me than gray-brownish like or whatever he is. I think lightening him should do or unsaturating.--Shimmerpool★Follow the stars...☆ 20:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Okay made him look more the colour he is made sure the lines didn't overlap fixed the eye and darkened ear pink. So anything else? :)Wildear~101:) 13:38, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

The eye still isn't correct. Look at my tutorial to see what the eye should look like--NightshineR 23:43, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 14:30, June 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, darken the stripes and blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Also add a pupil in the eye. Icefall Icy Winds 20:41, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I've sttarted already I'll put it up tomorrow Wildear~101 17:57, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/blur the shading--Darkhallows 23:05, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I have done it just have virus on computerso when thats cleared up it will be on sorry its just my time on the computer will be restricted else...Wildear~101 18:49, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Here he is re-uploaded blurred ear darkened stripes re did the eye blurred shading anything else? (btw this took a while to upload my computer froze so..)Wildear~101 15:10, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

The eye looks kindda funny, and blur the shading.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:18, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

You covered some of the lineart on the back, haunch, and chest.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:44, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes are to thick, make them smaller. ☼ Şũήמy ☼ 22:10, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the face, paws, and tail. Blur it, too. I agree with Sunspirit, make the stripes smaller. Icefall★ Talk 13:44, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Okay I will get it uploaded soon just getting rid of viruses on computer then it will be up and ready oh yeah I'll make the stripes smaller but I'm a bit worried they might be too small...Wildear~101 20:05, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - A lot of the lineart is gray. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 01:38, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Please keep this on your resevations list.Darkhallows 00:40, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

A lot of the color is on the lineart. Also, blur the stripes or make them...what's the word? Less thick? Thickless? Anyways, you get the message. EarthbenderTawny Style! 13:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes eem kinda irregular. Make them thinner and stretch them further. Make sure the "Y"s don't always curve down. It kinda makes it seem messy. User:Frostheart/Sig 02:50, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

You might want to put some shading on his paws as well. TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 12:11, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

This page was reopened on the 7th August and it is now the 14th with no work done. Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 11:01, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 09:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Whitethroat (R) - Declined

[[File:Whitethroat.rogue.png]] Well, I'm not sure how this went. Shruggytalk 07:07, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's good, except you'll notice that there's a black flick on the white chest, maybe lighten the ear pink a bit, but otherwise good! SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 07:15, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The Black flick, is part of the line art. ;) Shruggytalk 08:56, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Oh Sorry! Laughs SunspiritThe Way the Breeze Whispers… 08:58, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Might just be me Shruggy, but did you pick pure black for the colour? It needs to be light black, dark grey. I can't see the lineart. Γǻώήςτόŗm 11:47, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

No, he didn't. This is well done Shruggy. Blur the white, and lighten the pelt color a tad. Icefall Icy Winds 12:06, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also added shading to the back ear. :) Shruggytalk 13:55, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I was on a school comp and it looked really black, it dosen't now. Γǻώήςτόŗm 15:36, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good, darken the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 20:21, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Shruggytalk 08:29, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Looks Great Shruggy! I've been looking at it, couldn't find anything that bad! :Sunspirit 08:35, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Is it possible for you to smudge the white more? Like a fade in? And I think it would look a tiny bit better it there was some shading on the white part on the chest. Warrior♥Warrior's Den 17:46, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

The white on the chest seems awfully straight, I agree with Warrior, just use the smudge tool and then blur to make it . . . um . . . rounder. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 03:11, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Any better? Shruggytalk 11:13, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The tail looks very dark. Make the pupil in the eye a bit smaller. Blur the white transitions--NightshineR 23:27, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Icefall Icy Winds 21:37, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Great! Just add some more highlights. SunspiritGotta Love Newleaf 23:02, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are acually optional, you don't have to add them if you don't want too. Night Fall 00:59, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The Pupil is as small as it can be. and I blured the ear pink and white. Shruggytalk 16:48, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Can you lighten the whole thing just a tiny bit.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 21:37, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? Shruggytalk 10:16, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Darken/add some shading to his back, tail, and the legs farthest from us Night Fall 04:22, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded It did have some, but I made it darker anyway. Shruggytalk 09:37, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit more. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Acually, I think the shading looks fine. Blur the white transition on the paws Night Fall 04:29, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the chest more. Quailflight 05:21, July 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur white transitions more. The eye doesn't look right. Make the pupil smaller and make sure there is a white pixel in the eye--Nightshine~ 17:20, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'll do this tomorrow, and I'm done with blurring the White then! XD JK. Nightshine: there is a white plxel in the eye. And I'll blur the white more then. :) Shruggytalk 01:16, July 6, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--nightshine 00:19, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 09:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Briarlight Alt A -- Declined

[[File:Briarlight.apprentice.alt.png]] Well, she broke her spine as an apprentice. Comments? •Maplefern• 17:20, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, I can barely see it. RiverstarLeader Of StormClan 17:25, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Um there is no Earpink add some BirdstarTo the world I am one cat, but to Darkstar I am the world 17:30, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Above her hind leg there is some brown that needs to be blurred more. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 17:55, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights Cherryfur123 I'm not sweating, I'm melting! 18:11, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

The line art for her back legs isn't very smooth. The back paws need to be fixed and ear pink is needed. Other than that this is fine!--Nightshine~ 20:27, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. Make the lineart more smoother, and I would say to make the legs a tad bigger. Add earpink, and there's a big mob of colour between the midriff. Blend that into the pelt. Icefall★ Talk 13:31, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

This is good! Briarlight is a hard character to draw, she has one of the hardest injuries. But if anything, add an earpink and make the line art a bit more smooth. It kind of looks like her tail is just there, not attached to her body. TawnySMEASH 17:04, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Smooth out her rump and bring her hind hip forward a bit. But otherwise, very good! :) Also maybe make it look as though her hind paw where resting on the ground.

ScarletwindMedicine cat of SolarClan 03:23, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the right leg (her right) and make the tail thinner. The belly is a little slim, perhaps make it more round. The rest of the charart is great though! 雨晶須 五六七☯☮ 14:45, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Long time no c guys!! For the picture, I can't really tell the diff between her legs and tail. Maybe bend the tip of the tail up a bit to look more like a tail. Do you know what I mean?? --RoseyBye Bye School!

There's a splotch of dark brown in the chest area. Blur the highlight in his hind leg. User:Frostheart/Sig 02:59, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

I think she looks very skinny at this point. Willowpool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!" 23:01, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 11:03, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 09:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Pouncetail (Alt A) - Declined

[[File:Pouncetail.apprentice.alt.png]] Aw, first Rowanclaw, now Pouncetail. Poor guy xP Okay, here's Pouncetail as he (or she) was portrayed in The Sight Night Fall 20:44, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

  • sigh* so many alternate images...O.O it's killing me. This is great, just make the ear pink bigger and blur the stripes. ♥Iceshine★ 20:52, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think you could afford to make the ear pink a little bigger. Other than that, this looks great! ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 18:53, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the tabby stripes Rainear Let the rain guide you

Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 11:04, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink bigger.

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 09:28, August 15, 2010 (UTC)