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Mapleshade? - Declined

[[File:Mapleshade.png]]I didn't know how to reserve it... sorry...but I made Mapleshade. Does she look right?

I don't think we can make Mapleshade a charart yet. Crookedstar's Promise and Night Whispers haven't been released yet--nightshine 22:48, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

But Vicky said...well anyway when it does come out...could you reserve it for me? Coontail 23:02, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Once the books come out you can reserve it yourself on the reservation table--nightshine 23:04, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

How do you reserve it on the table? I can't find the table...

Go to this page and edit the table. Remember to sign with four ~--nightshine 23:21, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay if you didn't know how to reserve it. When you actually put it up for approval, name it as "Mapleshade (put rank here, such as warrior) For Approval. As for the image, blur it some more, it appears that the chest hair line-art is blurred or something. Also in the leg area, otherwise, it's great.

Sorry, this will have to be declined because Mapleshade has not appeared in any books yet. Will archive later--Nightshine 07:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar(W) - Declined

[[File:Gorsestar.Warrior.png]] [[File:Gorsestar.Warriorr.png]] Hehe. Kinda bad. xD Comments/Criticism? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:16, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights or no highlights? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:20, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights! ~Sunleap~ 16:29, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but Gorsestar already has a warrior charart.AshshadowNo really? 16:32, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I saw it on Nightfall's list of chararts needed to be done. I checked Gorsestar's page and I didn't see it. Maybe my eyes are weird. xD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:03, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

It wasn't on his page for some reason but it's in the approved archives.AshshadowNo really? 17:05, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--Nightshine 18:24, August 16, 2010 (UTC)


Nettlesplash (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Nettlesplash_Kit2.png]]Im not sure what over the limit and under the limit means please tell me!! Comments? -ShadowandBlue 19:43, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

There can only be 35 images up for approval at one time. This is the 36th. oblivionAudience? 19:48, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

So I have to wait until there are only 34 images to put mine up for approval? -ShadowandBlue 19:55, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

34 or less. oblivionAudience? 20:00, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Okay thanks for letting us know!!! -ShadowandBlue 20:36, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

I'm going to decline this, then.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:24, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Harveymoon (W)~ Withdrawn

[[File:Harveymoon.Warrior.png]] Ewwwww.....So bad D: i have to say though this is my third charart and there still horrible D: but i do have some sort of talent for white cats :| (Edit) im just gonna re do the whole image when i get the time and since it only said White tom i did not know if he was long haired or short haired or what color eyes he he had this is the 35th SandleGregxSara forever 17:07, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded He didn't look right and he still doesn't where did my art skills go? :( im just going to wait to see what happens SandleGregxSara forever 17:19, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

This image is wonderful :) Darken the shading, and blur the earpink a tad. Dawnleaf 17:34, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink Is the color for a white cat i hate darkening the ear pink then have to go back to lightin it i think its fine and its blurred to max i should have said that. EDIT sorry i think the shading is dark enough BirdpawYay for randomness 20:58, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

I have already tried blurring it so.... (I has to switch my siggie T.T) BirdpawYay for randomness 18:12, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

The shading is probably dark enough but does need blending. As does the ear pink just a little. (I know you say you've blurred it to the max but I'm not sure you have as it's possible to blur the earpink right out with the blur tool) --SandyTalk 11:12, August 14, 2010 (UTC)
Add shading to the ear not facing us and to the head. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:23, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
Ok im just in cunfused mode right now about siggie reform.... Plus Pixlrs being a little wierd with me User:Birdpaw/sig 17:47, August 15, 2010 (UTC)
Sorry guys i need to leave the wiki cause its hard to keep track of the other wikis im on BirdstarYou infected me with mildew? 23:33, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

His eye looks really bright. . . almost like a pale shade of electric blue. And I think you should make his ear pink a bit redder. Mossy go away. 03:08, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pikepaw - Declined

[[File:Pikepaw.apprentice.png]]

There were lots of convo's so this should be under the limit! :) 1st charart to! Raffyjack123 17:58, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed it. Make it a png.It's really nice! ZNightsong 18:00, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Urm...it's not letting me :( Can someone tell me why?? I'm a bit new to this...1st Charart!!!! Raffyjack123 18:09, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks Bramble! I made the highlights better to! anything else??? Raffyjack123 22:24, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

When you add the image onto the page, make sure to take out the |thumb in the coding, or else it will show in a gray box, or thumbnail, which we don't want. Other than that this is very well done. I don't see anything wrong with it. Nice job. Bramble 22:35, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ok...sorry Raffyjack123 19:59, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else??? Raffyjack123 18:25, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Relax, it's only been a day. People will comment when they get time. Anyways, make the ear pink bigger and darken the shading. Icefall [[User Talk:Icestorm123|Icy Winds]] 19:06, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Wait...I'm sorry but I know Moontail reserved this first. Sorry.--Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:15, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened shading and added ear-pink :) Any other improvements that could be done???

Blur the ear pink, and make it a bit smaller Night Fall 04:24, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Really, Moontail rocks reserved this first. I'm sorry, just defending my friend.Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:10, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

So...id it going to be deleted :'( It's my 1st charat :( Raffyjack123 00:42, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

,I'm sorry...Maybe you can use it for another cat?Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 04:03, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Moontail may have reserved it first but it's no longer on the current projects list. My guess is that her two weeks was up so Raffyjack may keep this.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 14:54, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah never mind.Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 01:09, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller and more reddish.--Nightshine~ 18:39, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

I think the earpink color is fine ,but it does need to be smaller.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 19:26, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I think it should be a tad darker and smaller. ♥Iceshine★ 12:37, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading thoroughly. This is very well done. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:46, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.AshshadowNo really? 21:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work--Nightshine 00:34, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (KI) - Declined

[[File:Plumwillow.kit.png]] My first kit. Sorry if this is over the limit. SkydragonFlight of dreams... 20:12, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Could use some more highlights. WhiteStorm is back! 20:33, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional, just darken the shading. Dawnleaf 20:37, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I think it would look better with highlights, also make the ear pink brighter, it almost blends in with the rest of the picture. WhiteStorm is back! 20:50, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is the same color on his warrior image. And yes, it is over the limit, it's the 37th. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:15, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Skydragon, images should not be posted if they are over the limit. oblivionAudience? 21:29, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sagepaw(A)-Declined

[[File:Sagepaw(A).png]] My first charart eh comments and i counted about 10000 times so im sure this is under the limit Maplepool 15:13, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink ★ Flowerleaf ★ 15:30, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

..This looks different. There needs to be shading, and the shading is darker, so it seems as if you burned that, instead of dodged. Read the apprentice guides and redo it. Also, the ear-pink is really dark so lighten it and blur it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:45, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

There's darker spots of color in the pelt, you should get rid of those. Shading does need to be added around the body, highlights if you want. Other than that, this is lovely. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 15:53, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

And, this needs to be under Image Pending Approval, not the discussion area. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 15:54, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is also over the limit. oblivionAudience? 16:00, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

i'm still an apprentice, but don't make the darker spots. Instead, make it lighter and use highlights. But it's great for your first charart! Silvery 17:13, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

There's something wrong with the eye I think..... ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:25, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional. And yes, the eye needs a white pixel. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:40, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This is put under the Discussion part. This should be under the For Approval section. TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

This is the 36th image up for approval.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:24, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart sorry i'm i counted right sorry and and yeah there is something wrong with the eye.....Maplepool 18:35, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

till there is space open i wont be fixing it so when space is open i'll fix it and reupload it kk? so yeah....Maplepool 18:49, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, usually, what we do is that we archive it then once there is space, you put it up again. I'm not sure about that though, because one can get declined or approved soon. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:19, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

ok here it is redone and er Bluestar's help was good but i LOVE mousetalon's guide a bit better well this is Sagepaw redone comments/helpful crit? Maplepool 20:25, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Take it out of thumbnail, fix the ear-pink. The eye still looks messed up. And replace the old one with the new one. Blur the shading thoroughly. And it looks silver, it should be gray. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:13, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:Sagepaw.jpg|thumb]]

Frostheart, this is over the limit. Stop critiquing it, please. Maplepool, you shouldn't have posted it in the first place. oblivionAudience? 21:16, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar (W)- Declined

[[File:Gorsestar.warrior(1).png]] I did what you said Sandy. It is the 32nd. (I triple checked this time.) Comments? Critiques? FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 18:40, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Gorsestar already has a warrior image. oblivionAudience? 18:43, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I knew I wasn't going mad when I said that the first time. --SandyTalk 18:51, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Hah yep :) Ashshadow - I think it was Ashshadow, might've been someone else - said it too. oblivionAudience? 18:55, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

It was a mistake I made last time. Sandy and I discussed it already. If you look you see that that picture is made by me! FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 19:17, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Look here. Thirteenth one down. Icethroat says they approved the image but it had the wrong name. Before it could be renamed, you had yours up. oblivionAudience? 19:25, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Also if you look in the approved archive 59 you will see Gorsestar's approved warrior image.AshshadowNo really? 19:36, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--Nightshine 01:25, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Fallowfern (KP) Withdrawn By User

[[File:Fallowfern.kittypet.png]]Fallowfern as a kittypet. Constructments? LOL, there are already three versions because I kept having to erase excess colour around the lineart and always missed some. Mossy go away. 03:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink some more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:01, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

When I did, it looked like a big pink smudge on her ear. I don't really want to change it. Mossy go away. 04:06, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and ear pink--Nightshine05:19, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

How's that? Crap, I forgot about the ear pink. Oh well. I'll do it soon! Mossy go away. 05:55, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

It just looks very flat right now. Darken the shading where the shadows would be--Nightshine 06:15, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Ugh, I think I'm going to re-do the shading. Mossy go away. 07:59, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, I've re-done the shading. I don't know if it's better or worse. Comments? Mossy go away. 18:57, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Better. Add some shading to the haunch facing us and the other one. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:11, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Done!! Hey, I heard that once you get your third image approved you become a warrior. Is that true? Because I do. (I guess technically two, but all Hawky did to my Coal warrior pic was add transparency to the BG XD) Mossy go away. 20:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink a tad bigger and blur it slightly.AshshadowNo really? 22:49, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading--Nightshine 00:29, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

I darkened the shading, and make the ear pink bigger/blurred it slightly. How's it now? Mossy go away. 19:55, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Very nice. Blur the shading along the back a bit more if you can.AshshadowNo really? 20:03, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Done! Better? Mossy go away. 20:59, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the tag a bit.AshshadowNo really? 21:09, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the face shading, arm shading and back foot shading--Nightshine 04:40, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Better? Mossy go away. 18:19, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink needs to be darker and smaller and I believe the face shading still needs to be darkened. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 21:25, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sigh. Done. I'm thinking of quitting on this one as it looks horrible and approving it is taking so long, and I just finished a different charart which looks far better than this, I don't know. Mossy go away. 22:11, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm withdrawing this. I really just don't want to finish it, nor do I like it. . . Mossy go away. 22:14, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Rabbitleap (A) Declined

[[File:Rabbitleap.apprentice.png]]ok i dont know if this is under 35 but if it is please dont delete it! just take it for granted..First char art! Bravespirit 06:24, August 17, 2010 (UTC)Bravespirit--Bravespirit 06:24, August 17, 2010 (UTC)


Don't worry Bravespirit XD Your right on the nose, this is number 35. I think this is too dark, lighten the whole thing, and if you want, add highlights and burn the shading along the back. Also the line-art is blurred under the neck, and under the ear. Make the ear pink bigger, and lighten that. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 07:54, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, basicaly everything Susnspirit just said. It needs to be darkened and there is some blur around the neck. And I can't hardly see his ear. Sorry if I am sounding too grouchy, I don't mean to be rude. WhiteStorm is back! 12:19, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I wouldn't darken it, as his warrior image up for approval is much lighter than this, and nobody has said to change the color. If anything, I would lighten it. Also, this part of the page is for discussion; you should have uploaded it with the other images. {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 12:26, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ok hes like black on my screen and i cant see the pink what so ever LIGHTEN this pls this and when you do it will be greatMaplepool 13:13, August 17, 2010 (UTC)Maplepool

Lighten him. The shading is uneven and blur it more. Make the ear-pink bigger. The line-art is blurred near the ear area and there's a giant black smear near his legs. Also, put this in the right section. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:12, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oops! Sorry! I meant to lighten it in my previous comment. Also, get rid of the smudges. WhiteStorm is back! 15:17, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Also, the shading should be blurred more and the line-art is blurred and smudged. Lighten him to match it's other characters. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:35, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Um...is this your first one? I can harly see anything. Use a dark gray instead and get rid of the smudges. Also, make the ear pink brighter. Silvery 17:20, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I can't see the ear pink ★ Flowerleaf ★ 17:27, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I lightened it alot and made a little more ear pink and i blurred the shading so any more comments?

I think I still see some smudges around the back. WhiteStorm is back! 19:21, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know why it's so tiny..anyways. The ear-pink is too big now the line art is seriously blurred. And the eye needs to be fixed. Also, lighten the ear-pink. Lighten it more to make it match Rabbitleap's other pictures up for approval. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:25, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I know I'm just an apprentice, but anyway- The cat looks reddish, make it regular brown. I have no idea what the eyes look like, because the picture is so small. Make the picture the original size (of all apprentice pictures) and make the background transparent. Blur the shading and add some on the legs, tail, and the back ear. Also add shading on the haunch, and highlights. Though the highlights are optional, in my opinion they look much better. Also make the color match the Rabbitleap I have currently up for approval. Sunleap 20:58, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

The picture is already in full-size and the background is transparent, but if you get color outside it doesn't matter, it shows it. Do as I said before (:P) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:10, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

This picture is not in full size nor is the background transparent. If it's tiny, it is not in full size. Second, rename it File:Rabbitleap.apprentice.png. Finally, when leaving a comment, sign using four ~s. Sorry if I sound mean or rude. I'm just giving advice. Moonflight 22:03, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, when I edited it, it already said full-size and I checked it up closely to see the eye and on pixlr, it was transparent. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:12, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

REUPLOADED serisly you guys make it confusing but I just lightened it to make ever body happy --Bravespirit Leader of LightClan 00:25, August 19, 2010 (UTC

Much much better! Fix the ear-pink by looking at the apprentice tutorials. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:33, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks like Shrewpaw's image....[[File:Shrewpaw_(TC).apprentice.png]]Elorisa-sama40px 01:10, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

They are the same. Exactly, I took a closer look on Pixlr. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:13, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Then that means this isn't his/her image then....Elorisa-sama40px 01:15, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

The EXACT same?! O.O ★ Flowerleaf ★ 01:53, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. You cannot take someone else's image and say it is your own. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:55, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

So what are we going to do? ★ Flowerleaf ★ 02:01, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Just let the leads take care of it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:04, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Everyone calm down. I've told Bramble and she'll take care of it. Meanwhile, please refrain from comment on this image. Thank you. Moonflight 02:10, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm declining this, then. I'll let Bramble deal with the punishments, though.  Darkhallows...Mew? 23:32, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you for being so calm on the matter. =) Thanks for declining, Shady. Archiving. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:59, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (W)- Declined

[[File:Shrewtooth.warrior.png]] This is Shewtooth, I didn't know his eye color so I did yellow. Are the highlights blurred enough? Dappleclaw ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:10, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but this is over the limit and in the wrong section.AshshadowNo really? 00:11, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, I forgot to check! Sorry! Dappleclaw ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:13, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Umm, how do you get the post to go to the other part, the part for pictures. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 00:44, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined. Put it back up when there is room on the page.  Darkhallows...Mew? 23:21, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Pebbleheart(W) - Declined

[[File:Pebbleheart_Warrior.png]]This is like...Horrible. Comments?Skywish16 Hail to the awesome WAGE! 01:59, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This is great!! Just thicken the shading a lot so it is like his medicine cat image. Blur the stripes more--NightshineR 02:03, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Anything else? GIMP is SO much better than Pixlr's blurring tool! Skywish16 Hail to the awesome WAGE! 22:51, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Perfect! This is really nice. :) MoontailMeRocks! 14:42, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

I don't understand where your light source is from. Most images have the shading on the tail, for example, on the bottom. [[File:Dawnstripe.warrior.png]] And, the shading needs serious blurring. Mousetalon!! 18:50, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded.Sorry, it just doesn't blur anymore.Skywish16 Hail to the awesome WAGE! 20:23, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Perhaps darken the other side a little (the lighter one) so that it looks somewhat even? And the ear pink is too small. 晶須 21:55, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred alot more. I can help if you'd like.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 14:42, June 8, 2010 (UTC) Thank you Ash :) I'd appreciate it. I spent like 5 minutes on blurring!Skywish16 I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:27, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I've blurred the shading some for you Sky.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:39, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

I can't tell where the light source is coming from; on the shading of the body it's from one direction, and on the shading of the tail it's from another almost opposite. The light source needs to all be from one direction, so either change the shading on the body or the tail (probably easier on the tail). $ Icethroat % Exploring through the galaxies... 02:02, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. Quailflight 07:58, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine as is. It looks like the approved example and I always thought the light was coming from above.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 18:57, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Made earpink bigger. Oh, and thanks Ash Skywish16 I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 22:47, June 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. If they don't or won't blur, than use the smudge tool to get a similar effect. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 16:39, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and stripes. Icefall Icy Winds 22:28, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred stripes+shading Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 00:19, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink and blur the shading some more Night Fall 04:20, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest lightining the shading some at this point. This style is hard to blur without destroying the tabby stripes.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 14:19, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The shoulder lineart looks weird. Thicken it. Icefall★ Talk 14:22, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Sorry it took so long guys. I thickened the back, but how do you lighten the shading? Blab, I sound dumb. Skywish I'm Bob the Weasel and I'm SQUEAKY CLEAN! 02:36, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Personally, I run the dodge tool over my shading a few times when it's too dark. That's the only way I can think of lightening it. Hollydapple 04:58, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree that the shading needs to be lighter, but coiuld you make it smaller, too? Right now, it doesn't look like shading to me, it sort of looks like half of him is darker. Making the shading smaller would fix that. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:08, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I based the shading on his medcat image Willowpool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!" 01:20, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The shading style is okay and has been used on many approved chararts to my knowledge. I think the problem is that it is such a hard transition. And I don't think this is because you haven't tried to blend it - some of the stripes are too smudgy as a result of over-blending - but I think the line was too blunt to start with. Did you use the faded-out brush tool or the normal paintbrush-shaped one? If it's the latter then that may be the problem. --SandyTalk 14:58, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Normal, I think. should I try to re-do it? Willowpool "Let's look for donuts in the wilderness!" 23:00, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I feel bad to say it but perhaps if you're having trouble with blurring the shading then it might be a good idea. --SandyTalk 11:00, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

The tabby stripes look..kinda unnatural because of the curves and it's blurred too much in the haunch area. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:44, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined --SandyTalk 07:51, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Please resubmit when you've had time to address the issues highlighted. --SandyTalk 10:10, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers - Declined

[[File:Dark_Whiskers.png]] Okay, I tried to make it better, here it is I ran the burn tool along some more-as you told me too. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 17:01, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think the shading looks nice. Try making the ear pink a little bigger and darkening it up a bit, like on Reedwhisker or Breezepelt. --HoneyfurBob's Your Uncle! 18:25, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a lot. I don't really see any--NightshineR 23:29, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I darkened the shading a little, and I darkened the ear-pink. Better? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 16:33, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

The whole thing still needs to be darkened. It looks like a dark gray cat on my computer.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:17, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

It's dark-grey on my computer, I think you should darken it. :Sunspirit 09:08, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah darken it so it looks more black. MoonpeltTM 18:03, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Should I run the burn tool along it or use another colour comepletely? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 16:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

The burn tool should work.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 16:33, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the entire image and darken the shading/add shading. Icefall Icy Winds 22:22, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reupladed-I used the burn tool a little more. Anything else I can do to improve? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 19:19, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken it more.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:26, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading.

Please work on this or it will be declined Night Fall 04:27, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I burned it some more, but I think it was better before. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 18:39, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Which one are we supposed to look at? Which ever one it still needs to be darkened. The first one looks dark gray and the second one looks silver.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 18:49, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Dark Whiskers is black, Clarrissa, not gray. You need to really darken it. Look at Blackclaw, Breezepelt, or Nightcloud for help Night Fall 06:37, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Both of the images need to be darkened. Icefall★ Talk 14:24, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, they need to be more like #111111 (just around that range) in color. They're both nice, but they're too light. Another cat to look at would be Crowfeather's kit image. He's not "black", more like a smoky black, so that might be more ideal for you. Hollydapple 18:59, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

No, like I said above, just run the burn tool over it. On pixlr, there's no way to search for the hex code of a color that I know of Night Fall 00:30, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, there is. You click on those color boxes, and the "colorpicker" window pops up. Near the bottom, on the right below the "L:" text box is th place where you can input a color. Though if Clarrissa wants to, she can run the burn tool over it. What I meant when I said to make it more like #111111 is to make it more of that color, either using that hue or running it over the burn tool to make it more of that color. Sorry if I didn't make that clear enough, but I meant to make it more like #111111. She doesn't have to change the whole color if she doesn't want to. :) Hollydapple 02:50, June 30, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, I didn't know that xD But seriously, just darken it. All you have to do is run the burn tool over it a lot Night Fall 20:48, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, I'll try to re-do it then. Whenever I burn it, it just go's lighter. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 08:58, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

If it gets lighter than you're not burning it. If you use pixlr make sure you're using the burn tool and not the dodge tool. If you're using GIMP make sure it's set to burn and not dodge. This may be where your problem is.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 13:01, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I finally realised that I did it comepletely wrong:P I've burned it right now. Better? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 12:08, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more.AshshadowAg 13:47, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I still think he needs to be darkened. He looks dark gray. Good job, though :) ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:52, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

I think the tail could use some shading on the bottom, but it's great otherwise! Also, like Ashshadow said, his highlights need to be blurred more. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 01:13, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I suggest making the ear more of a redish tone and making it bigger, and ditto what Blackclaw, said about the shading. Dawnleaf 03:26, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I blurred the highlights, reddened the ear-pink and darkened him. I think he looks a little rubbish :( Clarrissa!My talkpage! 11:54, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

The earpink shouldn't be pure red. Try a color like Whitethroat or Hollyleaf. AshshadowAg 14:55, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I changed the ear-pink, added shading to the tail, and blurred the shading on the haunch. Improvements? Clarrissa!My talkpage! 12:37, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if you have to do this, but maybe add some highlights or shading to his face and tail. TigerXAmberWe see Heart to Heart 12:15, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory but I agree that some shading would be good. The rest of the shading (and what I think are highlights; if not then ignore me lol) is a little blotchy; try and blend the shading a little. Also, the ear pink needs blending. --SandyTalk 14:38, August 13, 2010 (UTC)
Some parts of the shading and the highlights are blotchy. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:46, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the ear pink until the color is faded into the pelt and you can't see a solid transition line. Take the dodge tool and touch on the dark splotches on the pelt to make them stand out less, and then blur thoroughly. The shading should look more or less like this: File:Shy Fawn.sc.png; just an example of a smooth shading job. Bramble -Hyuu~ 02:45, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe blur the ear pink a little more, and maybe add just a little more highlight? 21:37, August 19, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 07:53, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 10:10, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Frecklewish - Declined

[[File:Frecklewish.MCA.png]]Ha ha, I epically FAILED on the spotted legs!!! Anyways, My first Charart!! Comments? River storm 13:58, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

This is pretty good for your first charat, but it's tweak week and I think that only warriors are able to put up characts. (I may be wrong, but I read the guidelines for tweak week twice, I may be mistaken). As for the picture, there is something wrong in the chest area (not sure what) and the medicine needs to be more blended together. Like it's too light, then it just turns dark. Frostheart 20:01, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Tweak week is over. Image wise; define the spots and darken the shading.Its very good for your first charart though :) Dawnleaf 20:21, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

She could use some stripes. She is a mottled tabby, after all. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 22:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Unless those dark brown bits are the stripes, and I'm just blind. --Gοlδεnρεlτ FRΣΣ YΩUR HΣAT 01:56, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I fixed the herbs, darkened the shading, and added stripes. River storm 15:42, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Define the spots a bit more. This is way better than my first charart! Clarrissa!My talkpage! 10:13, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I defined the spots a bit more. River storm 17:24, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

There is some blurring outside the lines.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:19, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Define the stripes/spots more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:12, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too blurred. Define them, as Frost said. Then blur the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:52, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Note to Erins: CATS. DON'T. HAVE. FRECKLES. And I agree with Icestorm about the earpink. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 12:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Have you ever seen a spotted tabby? That's what I see her as.http://s3.hubimg.com/u/2888854_f496.jpg. I think she's called 'Freckle' because that was her kittypet name.   Darkhallows...Mew? 21:58, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - XD yeah. I didn't realize SD came out when I wrote that. Then I left and spent about two hours looking up everything I could find on it... {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 11:57, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

The line art is blurred a lot on the back.--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 16:00, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 07:56, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --SandyTalk 10:10, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reedshine(W)-Withdrawn

[[File:Reedshine.Warrior.png]] -This is my first one. Tell me what you think! Silvery 14:20, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Is Reedshine even a real character? ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 14:30, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry but Reedshine already has a warrior image.Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 14:38, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Where? I didn't see it on the page and it wasn't reserved. Silvery 14:45, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

It's there. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:21, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

It is? Well, for some reason I can't see all of the charart on this page. Silvery 15:33, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

It's the only charart on her page. (I believe) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:39, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Hmmm...My computer doesn't see it. I'll withdraw Silvery 15:40, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Withdrawing--Nightshine 19:12, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D)- For Approval

[[File:Leafstorm.deputy.png]] Yay! Second charart! =) What should I do to improve it? HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 23:09, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Her ear pink should be darker, shading needs to be blurred more, and her tail needs more shading. 晶須 23:12, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

Close the gaps in the shading and blur it more. Also add shading to the legs and tail. FrostCloud 23:14, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks yellow as opposed to ginger. Try saturating her some Night Fall 23:19, June 4, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred, as stated above, and the ear pink needs to be moved more into the ear and lightened. Also, remember to put "For Approval" in the discussion title. Mousetalon!!Here comes SUMMER! 14:14, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

The eye should be made like this: File:Eye Chart.png (see the warrior version), instead of the current eye. The saturation tool is a sponge located near the dodge and shading tools, so use that to saturate the pelt color and give it more of a ginger color. Define the ear pink some more, but not too much. The two hind paws should also have shading, and the top of the head. Bramble 15:35, June 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading and define the ear pink. Darken the shading on the tail, and add shading to the back paws, and muzzle to the top of the head. The ear not facing us should have shading, too. Ice fall 00:11, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 14:46, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Darken the shading on the main part of her body and darken the earpink.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 22:37, June 6, 2010 (UTC)

Well, could be just me, but I don't see any highlights. SCARY MONSTERS with scarier alligators and suffering all around 03:33, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights aren't needed. Blur the shading--NightshineR 03:43, June 7, 2010 (UTC)

Better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 00:20, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Shadings needs to be blurred a bit more and make the ear pink more pinkish, this is good overall ;)DawnleafChickon Thursday!!!!! 04:22, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 19:52, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. --SkydragonRide the wind 23:40, June 8, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shadings on the head..Dawnleaf.Deputy of SnowClan 02:52, June 9, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 21:20, June 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is really sweet :) The back shading is very thick though, maybe thin it a bit? And maybe make the ear pink a bit pinker? On my computer, it looks very red. Brightfrostof SunClan... 15:14, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks. =) Better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 16:05, June 11, 2010 (UTC)

Comments?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 20:08, June 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink a lot and blur the shading. The fur colour is a little bright, so I suggest saturating it a bit--NightshineR 05:52, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

This may be my monitor, but the white pixel on the eye looks a dull, you might want to brighten it a bit. RiverpeltHeart of Amber 20:26, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

I think it might be your monitor, because it looks fine on mine... then again, I'm probably misunderstanding what your talking about. =) However, I did darken the ear pink and blurred the shading and saturated it; is it better? Oh, and by the way, I'm stuck in a summer school session from June 14th to June 25th, so I might have some difficulties getting on to work, but I should be able to. I'm going out of town after that though, and I won't have access to a computer very often, if at all.HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 23:21, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. It still looks too neon orange coloured. Darken the ear pink--NightshineR 23:24, June 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it. Darken the image. Icefall Icy Winds 22:26, June 17, 2010 (UTC)

Like this?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 00:18, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Try desaturating it with the sponge.--MoonflightA Star In Her Own Mind... 00:48, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Also darken the shading and earpink.Ashshadow.Warrior of StormClan 19:51, June 18, 2010 (UTC)

Did I darken the image too much?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 20:53, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

Way too dark, and bright. It looks neon. Lighten it. Quailflight 20:55, June 19, 2010 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I'm really confused... how can something be both too dark and too bright at the same time?98.242.242.121 03:30, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, that was me... Sorry, forgot to log in! =) HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 15:49, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I think (I mean think) what Quailflight means is that the dark areas are too dark and the bright areas are too bright, catch my drift? Dappleclaw Go ShadowClan! 16:13, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure I understand, but if not... well, it's always fixable. =) Is this any better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 23:26, June 20, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'd say it looks pretty good. =^.^= ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 13:23, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

It still looks neon, desaturate it some more. And I can hardly see the ear pink, lighten it some Night Fall 21:16, June 21, 2010 (UTC)

Needs to be desaturated, and shading needs to be darker.--Dawny 19:00, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is this better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 00:48, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Why is she bright red? Ginger is orange, she should be orange. Any shade of orange, and blur alot more. Spiritcloud48 20:58, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

How is that red? That looks orange to me ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:16, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

R-E-D Spiritcloud48 21:20, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Thank you, now I know how to spell red. And acutally real ginger is pale orange. Just saying! :) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 21:47, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Im sorry then, you must be color blind. It is most definitly red. Sorry Hollytail about the arguing! Some people cant see that its red; change to ginger, and blur. Spiritcloud48 23:05, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's not red on my computer, it's dark orange. I would suggest lightening it though. Her description isn't dark ginger.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 23:09, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

OK, 1: do I just lighten it or change the color entirely? And 2:please be nice, Spiritcloud48, because that's probably offensive to anyone who is colorblind, and also because your monitor could be displaying it differently on your computer, because you seem to be the only person who thinks it's bright red.HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 02:27, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Lightening it will work unless you just want to start over. The earpink also needs some work. Perhaps take the color from a nother ginger cat of a similiar color and make it a bigger.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 02:36, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

-_- Just for the record I'm not color blind. But you could check Buzzardstar for the earpink. He's a ginger also. :) ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 02:53, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Probably not Buzzardstar, one of the reasons I nominated him for tweak week is because I think his ear pink is way too hot pink. Night Fall 07:48, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

Well then you've got me. XD I guess you should look for a ginger cat for examples. ➪'❀❤Dappleclaw❤❀'GO SHADOWCLAN!!! 17:30, June 26, 2010 (UTC)

I made it a lighter orange, is this shade any better? As for the earpink color, i tried to make that lighter, too...HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 03:17, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know, it still looks kind of neon.... try desaturating it or something.... TawnySMEASH 11:34, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the front of the haunch and to the tail. Icefall★ Talk 13:47, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

The tail already had shading, but I darkened it a little bit. Is this better? Also, I'm leaving at, like, four a.m. and won't be back til August........HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 18:09, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm not sure if we can let you keep an image for a month. You still need to add shading to the front of the haunch.Ashshadow.StormClan's strongest 01:16, June 29, 2010 (UTC)

No way can we leave this here for a month with no hope of it being touched... but what I'm going to suggest is that we call this 'withdrawn' and archive it for now, but allow Hollytail to keep it in her projects until she returns; everyone is entitled to a holiday and sometimes we have little choice in the matter. Ultimately it's up to you though, Bramble. -- Sandystar 14:52, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - I agree with Spiritcloud; it looks Firestar-red to me. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:11, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Hi I'm back! Is this any better?HollytailLion x Heather 4ever! 22:12, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the back leg farthest from us. -- Cherryfur 23:28, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

She still looks red. It should be like to orange on Ottersplash's pic but a bit darker. ♫ mosspool the new dovesong! 07:18, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Thin out the shading along the back. Dawnleaf 20:20, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better? I think I made the shading too light but idk Hollytail he's there... inside your mind... 20:17, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur it.Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 23:53, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Is this any better?Hollytail he's there... inside your mind... 00:16, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

It still needs a lot more blurring. And more shading. Check out some of the tutorials. (I have one on my page... and there are a bunch of others)  Darkhallows...Mew? 07:38, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Either lighten the shading or blur it much more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:52, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken the ear pink.--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 15:35, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

I still think you should lighten it a bit as this is a very bright shade of ginger where she is just described as normal ginger, which would probably be a little bit paler. Also, blur what you have for shading and then add some more. And then blur that. XD Mossy go away. 22:52, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. --SandyTalk 08:55, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a LOT TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

Still, lighten or blur the shading a bunch. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:13, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

HOW is this red? Blur the shading a LOT ★ Flowerleaf ★ 12:42, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Needed Shading- More wide on the haunch On the paw that's farest to you Head

Needed Highlights- Some on the haunch, NOT touching the shading, however Some on the side

Other- I can barely see the ear pink, maybe darken it? Blur the shading alot....♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 22:56, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional, Featherblaze. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:13, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.AshshadowNo really? 14:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Nettlesplash (W)- Withdrawn by User

[[File:Nettlesplash.warrior.png]]Since I'm withdrawing my Wetfoot image, I think this should be under the limit. But, anyways, here's Nettlesplash. I had a little trouble with the shading and all. Comments? Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 10:47, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

It's really good:) Blur the shading more. Clarrissa!My talkpage! 12:09, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred as much as I could. The blur tool hates me for some reason xD. What else? Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 13:04, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but blur the back shading a bit more. Also, blur the earpink. EarthbenderTawny Style! 14:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the eye a bit.AshshadowAg 14:03, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred the shading (think I messed it up D:) and the ear pink. And I lightened the eye. Is it better? Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 15:00, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the head, and chest, and blur the ear pink a tad. Dawnleaf 19:20, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

He looks a little reddish, but I don't know if that's really a problem. ♫ mosspool ♫ 22:31, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded better? Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 22:42, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading to the head, and the shading on the back is a little thick. Dawnleaf 22:44, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 23:05, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the head, and back, it's still too thick. Blur the highlights SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 06:02, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm probably gonna have to blur the shading again >:( Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 12:18, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

What should I do next? Cherryfur123In stores worldwide 14:59, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks nice! EarthbenderTawny Style! 15:05, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should try making the colour more like the colour on Fallowfern's queen image that's up for approval. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 20:22, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I tried but now it looks like the shading needs blurring again >:(. Yeah, so what'd you guys think? -- Cherryfur 20:36, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

How is it now? -- Cherryfur 00:26, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights User:Frostheart/Sig 03:03, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry Cherry! XD The shading down the back is still a little too thick. Blur the highlights to, There too concentrated. SUNSPIRITBest Furry Friends Forever! 09:17, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Grr... I don't think it's any better... I think I still gotta blur the shading... What do you guys think? -- Cherryfur 12:05, August 11, 2010 (UTC)


Looks GREAT! I like it! 4pinkbear 11:43, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink.AshshadowNo really? 22:37, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened the earpink. Anything else? -- Cherryfur 22:56, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish and defined. Dawnleaf 04:15, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- Cherryfur 21:30, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Much better :) Dawnleaf 22:02, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Thanks! Anything else? -- Cherryfur 23:59, August 13, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, darken the forearm shading, fix the line art on the chest; it looks a bit blurred--nightshine 00:27, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Better? -- Cherryfur 11:50, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Blur the haunch shading. Add some face shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:55, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the haunch shading and added some face shading. I darkened the shading, but it's not that noticeable. Anyways, is it any better? -- Cherryfur 11:06, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the two highlight areas, blur it and make it bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:55, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded -- Cherryfur 18:10, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his chest, and add shading to his left front paw. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:39, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done. Is it better? -- Cherryfur 20:15, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Anything else that I need to do? -- Cherryfur 20:40, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Just so you know,Cherryfur, you have to wait at least 5 days before asking if there is anything else needed, but maybe blur the ear pink, and brighten it a bit, it's kinda dark. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:26, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Sorry if I sounded impatient and all, but school's starting in a few days for me and my after-school activities have already started, so I was really busy and I wanted to get most of the things about this image done before the end of summer. Anyways, I blurred the earpink and lightened it. Anything else that needs to be done? -- Cherryfur 22:23, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay! =) But it's looking really good, just blur the shading on his head just a bit more. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 22:07, August 21, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! I blurred the head shading a bit. Since school starts tomorrow for me, I might not be able to update this, because of all my after school activities and homework :P. Just to let you guys know. Anyways, is there anything else to do? -- Cherryfur 11:35, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I'd just say to blur the back shading and highlights a bit more. Man, school starts EARLY for you, I start on like the 31st or something like that...EarthbenderTawny Style! 15:17, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol, on the 31st? Wow, I'm jealous. xD Anyway, I blurred the shading and highlights. Anything else? --- -- Cherryfur 15:31, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear-pink is weird. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:17, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wasn't sure what you meant, so I just redid the earpink. Anything else? I'm thinking of withdrawing this and putting up another image cause this one isn't all that good. --- -- Cherryfur 11:18, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I meant that there's like this line then a hook. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:26, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Some areas are too bright, like the side and haunch. Maybe darken it?♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 18:11, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Spread out the highlights evenly. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:00, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I just don't like this image, so I'm going to withdraw it and put up another one. You can archive this. Thanks!!! And sorry... I know I've already withdrawn my other one, but I don't think this one's any good. xD --- -- Cherryfur 10:47, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. Ki) Withdrawn By User

[[File:Blossomfall.kit.alt.png]]

Here's Blossomkit as she was described in Long Shadows and Sunrise. Which one do you like better? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 15:30, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Pearsonally I like the long haired one. Good work!! -ShadowandBlue 15:53, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Well, seeing as the rest of her images are long-haired, I'd say you have to use the longhaired one. Darken the shading. oblivionAudience? 17:13, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Darkened shading. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 17:17, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and blur the shading--Nightshine 17:38, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink FAILED. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 18:40, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Is that darker patch on her right side the stripe or the shading? If it's the stripe, it shouldn't be there because it's supposed to be going down her spine. If it's the shading, lighten and blur it. oblivionAudience? 18:43, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded The darker patch was the stripe. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 19:00, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pinkish. oblivionAudience? 19:07, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripe on the head. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:09, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured stripe more and made earpink more pinkish. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 20:21, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more-Nightshine 20:58, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading under the head on the neck. Err, I don't know how to say what I mean. See Willowpelt's kit image. Do you see how under he head on her neck there is shading? Mossy go away. 22:38, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured shading to the max and added shading under head. Anything else? ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 23:22, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading or blur it more. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:06, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lightened shading. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 12:07, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The chest shading needs blurred. {{SUBST:MosswiskerandStealthfire/Sig}} 12:17, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. Mossy go away. 20:55, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading a bit because the transition between the shade beneath her neck and the highlight on her chest is a bit abrupt --llwildheartl 22:18, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink even and blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:53, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

This fails so I am withdrawing this. ♫Dovesong-Moonleaf♪♫Dove's gentle song♪ 00:15, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving--Nightshine 03:27, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Dodge- Declined

[[File:Dodge.rogue.png]] Here's Dodge as a rogue. This should be fine since there's a withdrawn image. Comments? Mossy go away. 21:54, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

This is wonderful ,but I think you should make the stripes darker,I can barley see them other then that perfect! :)Mossy I fight to live I live to fight! 22:32, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

I was thinking the same thing. I'll get right on it. Mossy go away. 22:54, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded★ Better? Mossy go away. 22:58, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry this is over the limit--Nightshine 22:59, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

How? Not counting this, there are thirty five images, and one of them was withdrawn. 35 - 1 = 34. Mossy go away. 00:06, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, I see now. The Crowfeather image isn't withdrawn anymore, I suppose. Mossy go away. 00:11, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

You can put this up once the number goes back down--Nightshine 01:15, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) Withdrawn by User

[[File:Yellowfang.mca.png]] My first charart for PCA. Comments? The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 14:34, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading along the back a bit.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:28, June 22, 2010 (UTC)

The haunch needs some shading (near front legs) and her chest needs some shading as well (depending on where the light source is) and her scars are a little too straight, perhaps make them curve a little. But she's great for your first charart! 晶須 01:42, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 13:03, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Much better, but just blur the shading on the haunch a little bit.DawnleafThe Epicness Of This Epic Signature! 17:12, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

You need to blur the burn shading a bit. Sunspirit

ß 20:55, June 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 12:38, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

A little more. Hopefully 3rd times the charm! ;)Dawny 18:52, June 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 18:17, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading Icefall Icy Winds 18:58, June 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit pinker (like the color on the mc image) and center it in the ear. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 04:00, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 16:22, June 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and add some shading to the herbs Night Fall 04:34, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Add some shading to the tail. Icefall★ Talk 13:36, June 28, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading more. Better? The rain breaths "I'm not laughing at you. I just think we'd look stupid with wings." 16:17, July 1, 2010 (UTC)

Make it a bit thinner ♥Iceshine★ 12:35, July 3, 2010 (UTC)

How can I make it thinner? Rainbreath 10:04, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

Either with the dodge tool, by lightening it to the color of the fur outside of the shading, or the pencil tool, by drawing over it with the color of the fur outside of the shading. Icethroat $ Puttin' on my shades $ 14:17, July 4, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Are you sure you can't blur the shding more? If so, you could try putting a color that is lighter that the shading but darker than the fur next to the shading and blurring that. Mosswhisker & Steatlhfire 13:25, July 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Rainbreath 07:07, August 7, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights need to be Blured Rainear be as silent as rain

The overall shading and highlights need to be thoroughly blurred. They are much too thick and blotchy right now. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 01:01, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I re-done the whole image. Comments? Rainbreath 12:19, August 8, 2010 (UTC)

Haunch hilights need to be blured more Rainear be as silent as rain

Reuploaded. I blurred the highlights more. Rainbreath 17:02, August 9, 2010 (UTC)

This looks lovely. Comments before approval? --Bramble -Hyuu~ 12:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

She sort of looks black. She's supposed to be dark gray. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 21:02, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. (or highlights. depending what way you see it.) And make the scars straight. (just my opinion.) User:Frostheart/Sig 02:58, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it lighter and blured the shading and highlights. Rainbreath 09:18, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, blur the ear pink, and make it more reddish--nightshine 00:20, August 14, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading more.

(S) - I don't think you need to straighten the scars, that's the way they'd be if she got clawed across the face, but the one scar goes right through the eye. A lot of times, when that happens, the cat is blinded, like Brightheart. Also, I don't think her other images have the scar through the eye. Just an idea. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 11:49, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Rainbreath 09:23, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot--Nightshine 23:05, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate shading :P Better? Rainbreath 10:09, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

P This looks quote un-even or blotchy (the shading) ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:13, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Try to add some highlights, at least near the arm closest to you. Also, try to add some to the haunch.♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 22:58, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional so you dont have to add them. Blur the shading a touch.AshshadowNo really? 23:03, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Rainbreath 15:45, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think it looks awesome! Also, maybe blur the ear pink, a bit more?♥Featherblaze♥Meow to me! 16:42, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the front leg, fix that. The shading is a bit blotchy, so some blurring wouldn't hurt. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:12, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading thoroughly and make the shading smoother. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:56, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her shouder and haunch. oblivionAudience? 12:11, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should change the scars back to the way they were before. They looked more natural. Mossy go away. 07:59, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the scars a bit thinner and make the middle one cross through the eye like her other images. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:18, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah. And on her other images, the scars are curved. Mossy go away. 00:13, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Yes. Also, make the ear-pink slightly bigger. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:00, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry guys. I'm going to withdraw it. I don't like it. So you can archive it later. Rainbreath 13:39, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving--Nightshine 18:44, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

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