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Brackenfur (Alt. Warrior) - Declined

[[File:Brackenfur.altwarrior.png]]This is like, really bad. Comments? Cobaltpaw 23:56, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

It looks a little blotchy. Willowheart1231 23:57, September 18, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Make the scar more red and noticable.-ſceheartBlah blah 00:05, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Does he really need an alternate image for this? I mean, in real life golden brown is ginger. Mossy go away. 00:53, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

They're different. Golden brown tabby is brown tabby with a yellowish-undercoat, while ginger is, well, ginger. Anyway, make the stripes orange, and make the body less yellow. --Gοldenpelt 01:31, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more noticiable. WhiteStorm is back! 01:37, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

No; this is not an image worth creating. If you google golden-brown and ginger colors, they produce exactly the same color results. Spend your time making an alternate image (or regular) that the reader can appreciate the difference in. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:44, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. oblivionAudience? 20:06, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Harveymoon (KP) - Declined

[[File:Harveymoon.Kittypet.png]] Well here he is! I don't think he's to bad but then he's my first charart uploaded on here. Comments but nothing rude or too mean please! ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:03, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the earpink from his left our right ear and blur the shading more. Nice job.AshshadowNo really? 22:07, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Remove the ear-pink on the right and blur it. Make the shading a bit more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:09, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded~ Better? His shading was a bit picky but I made it more noticeable. ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:27, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. oblivionAudience? 22:48, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the warpink smaller. Then blur it. Moonflight 23:04, August 24, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Moonflight. Also, blur the shading and add more shading top the top of the shading and back legs. His eyes are also a bit bright, but that probably doesn't matter too much. Mossy go away. 05:35, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I had to redo his body so I could do the shading on it. Its blurred as much as I can without damaging the lineart and earpink is smaller I didn't change the colour of his eyes because they look fine to me. ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 21:43, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading much much more and make the ear-pink like a triangle. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:32, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot more. You can go over the line art, or maybe shrink the size of the blur tool. Add some shading right underneath his collar. A good example right now I think would help you is Velvet (underneath). But you don't have to listen to me because I'm only an apprentice. Ha ha =D. WillowheartMay StarClan light your path! 00:44, August 26, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Tansy, I think you may have sharpened the shading instead of blurring it, because it was a lot more blurred before. :P Oh well, everyone makes mistakes. If you use pixlr, the blur is the tear drop. If you use GIMP, just make sure the blur/shapren tool is set to blur, not sharpen. Mossy go away. 03:48, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Put the blur tool on 100 and blur the shading as much as you can. Silvery 11:33, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading and blur. Add shading to the paws and arm, and face. Blur the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:33, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:36, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-done - Thickened and blurred on 100. Don't worry Willowheart I listened ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:02, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs serious blurring, and make the ear pink more triangular. Dawnleaf 22:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I agree. You need to blur the shading a whole bunch so it looks more natural. Sunnyfrost 22:16, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the section title. Remember it is usually KP when submitting a kittypet. As for the image, it's too dark, he looks like a pale gray cat, lighten it, and use a less concentrated brush for the highlights. =) user:Mousetalon 22:30, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Blurred a lot and I had to re-do the body so I hope he's ok for now because I'll be going off soon also earpink was blurred as well.♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 22:38, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink like a triangle. The shading seems blotchy and uneven now. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:05, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs more blurring.AshshadowNo really? 13:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and the shading on the right forearm (the forearm we can see) looks uneven, try to fix it up, I can't really explain how it looks....TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!! 14:20, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

You still really need to blur the shading. And there is some blurred lineart by his right ear. Sunnyfrost 17:25, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a ton. His head is blurred and a little bit where the fore-arm steps out. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:50, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink still looks square'ish (lol) make it more triangular. --Dawnleaf 04:47, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - Better? Dawny don't worry I understood the earpink did look more like a rectangle. Anyway I'm going on holiday from tomorrow till Friday so I won't be able to update him for a while but when I get back I'll be right on the case. ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 21:46, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I changed the section title again, remember it's KP for kittypet. And center the ear pink. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 22:50, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it, but well done! RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 01:36, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

Change the ear-pink to the angle of the line-art. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:41, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should blur the ear pink Sunnyfrost 22:17, August 29, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the shading some. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:57, August 30, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink, it looks a bit unnatural. And shift the ear pink to our right a little, to match the angle - oh, wait someone already said that... xD 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 13:46, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his back a lot. oblivionAudience? 18:33, August 31, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 18:07, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

add some highlights, he looks gray. blur the shading. Sunnyfrost 22:46, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Highlights are optional and his pelt color is fine. -ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:47, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Willowheart1231 00:42, September 3, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Blur the ear-pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

He looks gray. Make him look white. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 03:01, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

I think the main reason people say it looks gray is because the shading is a bit too dark. Lighten it, or blur it alot. Silvery 14:20, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I thought the pelt colour was fine. Well I'll lighten the shading like silver said ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 18:38, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~Ah that was a lot of blurring. I did what silver said lightened shading and blurred it a lot. When I saved it it looked gray but on pixlr and when I uploaded it it was the pale gray-white colour. ♫ Tansy ♫So unbelievable it's believeable! 19:05, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the earpink. --llwildheartl 23:34, September 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the back shading. Moonflight 15:33, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Try and make the ear pink a bit more triangular...EarthbenderTawny Style! 23:32, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

I agree, and blur the shading (Has this been said already?) DappleclawCan you read my poker face ... 23:44, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Try to also add some shading to the collar to give it more of a 3D effect. Just trying out ideas...EarthbenderTawny Style!14:19, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Pretty good. I would say needs more shading. Rubyblaze 16:12, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.AshshadowNo really? 18:12, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.AshshadowNo really? 20:22, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Plumwillow (a) - Declined

[[File:Plumwillow_Apprentice.png]] --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 20:10, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

My first cat. I don't know about it...--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 15:43, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Plumwillow.apprentice.png and blur the earpink.Also, I'm pretty sure this is over the limit.--.Silverstar .talk 15:50, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

This is good and like silverstar said blur the pink ear XXRainfeatherXx 15:54, August 10, 2010 (UTC)Honeyfeather

I think it's blurred enough, but the corner is touching the ear, make it shaped and make it lighter. Frostheart 17:14, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is too pink. Make it a bit darker. It's amazing for your first cat! Rainbreath 17:22, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

The top of the haunch needs blurring. Darkhallows...Mew? 21:01, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Er... like Silverstar said, this is the 38th charart up for approval on this page, which is over the limit. This project talk page is only allowed to have 35 sections (chararts for approval) at a time. 雨晶須 夏天來了! 21:53, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

So what do I do? Should I make the corrections or is this taken down and sorry, I miscounted.68.84.233.244 23:29, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry! That was me. I thought I was signed in.--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 23:31, August 10, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I made the ear pink not touch the line art, darkened it and blured the shading and thanks Rainbreath.--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 19:23, August 11, 2010 (UTC)

You still have to rename it to Plumwillow.apprentice.png --.Silverstar .talk 00:13, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

I forgot to mention that, but I did it. --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 01:32, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

No, you didn't. You called it Plumwillow_Apprentice.png. I know it's pretty small, but hey, my coal warrior one was originally called Coal.Warrior and they changed it for one capital letter. ♫ mosspool ♫ the new dovesong! 05:53, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Oops, sorry mosspool, I fixed it now. Is there anything I need to change with the image?--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 16:00, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit smaller. Dawnleaf 20:11, August 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and darken the haunch shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:27, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Darkened and blurred shading.--WillowwhispGOWARRIORCATS 02:25, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

Fix the shading around his hind-leg, and maket the ear-pink lighter. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:10, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know how to fix the shading on her hind leg because every time I blur it, it gets bigger. What sould i do --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 18:26, August 15, 2010 (UTC)

On the blur tool, make it a very small brush and zoom in so that you can blur in detail around the haunch area. Blur thoroughly in that area so there are no hard lines between any transitions. The ear pink color is fine in my opinion. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 03:23, August 16, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better?--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 19:09, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights slightly.AshshadowNo really? 19:51, August 17, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Blurred highlights.--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 15:33, August 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading a bit more and make the ear pink smaller--Nightshine 01:29, August 19, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better?--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 15:26, August 20, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - The highlights look beautiful, but the one on her front leg is in the middle of the lineart. I think you should move it back some, so it's more in the middle.

Re-uploaded Better? --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 01:18, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks lovely. CBA? --SandyTalk 09:13, August 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink a lighter. It looks purple right now. I feel so bad for ruining CBA. Dx ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:23, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Don't worry Frostheart, if it's not ready then I understand. I'm at my mom's work so when I get home I'll fix it. --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 20:13, August 23, 2010 (UTC)

Okay, now that I don't have to feel bad about ruining CBA (lol Frostheart), it looks to me like there's this little dent on the top of the earpink. Perhaps you could smooth it out a bit? llwildheartl 05:15, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Might I just say that it's not about 'ruining CBA' because when a senior warrior puts that on an image it's a matter of their opinion that the image is ready. The whole point of having CBA is that this project isn't a dictatorship and that the senior team aren't infallible. =) --SandyTalk 12:31, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, Sandy, but you got to know that feeling where you see "CBA" and you go OMG MY CHARART IS ALMOST APPROVED and you get all excited and then somebody comments and it's all like "noooooooo...." lol you know what I mean? llwildheartl 20:04, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

It's fine though, I only saw Frosthearts thing and then Sandy's. Anyway, better?--۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 20:10, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Looks good to me. Maybe blur the shading on the top of the haunch a TEENSY bit. Just a tiny bit and then it looks perfect to me =) --llwildheartl 21:12, August 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlight near the shoulder. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:46, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Re-upload Better? --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 23:52, August 26, 2010 (UTC)

Blur it more still. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:45, August 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more reddish, its like hot pink right now. Also blur the shading on the haunch a bit. --Dawnleaf 03:52, August 28, 2010 (UTC)

I'm so sorry about my inactiveness if that is the real word. I have had a sleep away camp till now and I'm at my mom's work, but the computer won't download the pic so I will do this for sure when I get home, but I am in another camp now so this will be done in about...10 hours. Again, I'm really sorry. --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 12:30, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

It's alright. For the image, it is lovely and well done, I just see that the haunch shading needs blurring. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 14:08, September 1, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Better? --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 03:07, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

It needs a bit more blurring, then it will be ready. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 17:36, September 2, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlighting and ear pink. I am famous for being PICKY about ear pinks! JK, I'm not famous. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:12, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the upper haunch, there's a pretty obvious separation between shadow and highlight there. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 13:09, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I'm having a lot of trouble with the haunch shading. Could some one help me if I don't have it right. --۞₩ÏŁŁØ₩₩ĦÏşÞ۞ 14:50, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Expand the highlight on the haunch a bit to the right and move the shoulder highlight up a bit and change the earpink colour slightly - it's kinda purple. --llwildheartl 01:56, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Ummm is this okay? [[File:PlumwillowApprentice.png]] I tried to fix it up but IDK. ★ Flowerleaf ★ 00:12, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit and triangulate the earpink and then it's perfect. --llwildheartl 04:23, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular. The ear pink looks neon... ish. I suggest changing the color or lightening it? SunnyYes O Great One, I shall do as you command... 06:15, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur highlights. Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 17:11, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, blur the highlights, and on the haunch the shading looks odd against the highlight, blur it together more. I guess I'm making my return. 火の毛皮30px 18:27, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on her back and center the highlights on her shoulder and haunch. Try to make the highlights a BIT bigger on the haunch also. EarthbenderTawny Style! 14:16, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.AshshadowNo really? 21:58, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.AshshadowNo really? 20:27, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - Declined

[[File:Leafstorm_deputy.png]] Here she is. My first Charart in a while. Comments? MapleOn dA and Skye 15:30, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading, darken the earpink, and darken the haunch shading. Moonflight 16:04, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I'm having issues with this image. This is Hollytail's image, Not mine. I'm not sure what went wrong... MapleOn dA and Skye 16:49, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This is happening to me with Nettlesplash. Cherryfur123's image is showing up, not my own. :( Moonflight 16:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Then your pressing Overwrite the Existing image with yours. Don't press that, you will have to re-name yours. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 20:35, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Well, here's my image, I'll have to correct it later... MapleOn dA and Skye 20:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:15, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the haunch shadow and make it a bit bigger, and blur the huanch highlight. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 17:41, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing just a tiny bit. Also, blur the highlights. Mossy go away. 01:51, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur the earpink. Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:40, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink as well. Mossy go away. 23:29, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Um, Maple are you still working on this? Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 21:34, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this soon or it will be declined. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 03:57, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and try to lighten it a bit if you ever get a chance to work on this. EarthbenderTawny Style! 14:25, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.AshshadowNo really? 20:34, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypelt(Alt.K)-Declined

[[File:Tawnypelt.kit.alt.png|Tawnypelt.kit.alt.png]] Mosspool says that Mosspelt doesn't get a Leader image, so this should be the 35. Comments? Silvery 22:10, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

That was not confirmed. We do not know the answer right now. And post your charart on the BOTTOM. I think this should be declined, I believe this is over the limit, but I'm not certain. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:43, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Silverdapple you may have reserved this first but your two weeks was up. Someone already has this up for approval and they're allowed to keep it because your two weeks was up around the 5th and they didn't post it until the 16th.AshshadowNo really? 20:00, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Archiving. oblivionAudience? 02:48, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Stonetooth (D) - Withdrawn

My first charart for the PCA!! Comments?[[File:Stonetooth_.DEPUTY.png]]

Good for you first charart! Try to blur the highlights and stripes. Tawny (Talk) 22:12, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

This looks silver, darken the highlights and make the whole cat darker, basically. There is blurred line-art near the tail, the legs, back, ear, and head. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:22, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

rename it Stonetooth.deputy.png

Darken the highlights and blur the shading, make the ear pink smaller and darker. Add shading to the paws, base of the tail, and the head, and the ear not facing us. Overall, this is well done. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:19, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to look more like he ones on his elder image: [[File:Stonetooth.elder.png]] Here, they're thinner and don't stretch out as far. The tail stripes are also too thin, and he looks silver while in his elder picture Stonetooth is really more of a brownish-gray. Mossy go away. 02:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Im not sure i can do all that on the original, should i just redo it? Iceflower 14:14, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

And how do you blur the stipes without blurring the line art? What pencil size should i use for the stripes? iceflower

Iceflower, look at the apprentice tutorials on the main PCA page. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:23, September 4, 2010 (UTC)


Reuploaded:

It is now too dark. Make the ear-pink bigger and blur it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:24, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

should i use dodge tool or re-do it? ***Iceflower*** 17:38, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Probably the dodge tool, but if it still does not match, maybe you should redo it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:41, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 19:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:


Lighten the pelt colour. Make the ear pink bigger and more triangular; its like a straight line right now. Also blur the shading a lot. --Dawnleaf 20:48, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

Iceflower, overwrite the old image with the new one. You do not need to put a whole new image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:47, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Also, lighten the image still. It looks quite blotchy, darken the shading and define and blur the ear-pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:02, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reploaded:

Blur the earpink a bit. And make the stripes reach down a BIT further. Tawny (Talk) 23:40, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure the pupil is visible. Blur the ear pink, and back and haunch shading. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 00:28, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

How do i make the pupil "visible"? it looks fine to me. i looked at other warriors images and copied the way they did the eye. ***Iceflower*** 16:48, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded:

I don't know if it made much difference, but i tried to make the stripes longer and blur the ear pink and shading. I'm still not sure what to do about the eye, Icestorm. By the way, how does an image get approved? It seems I have an endless amount of corrections to make! :P ***Iceflower*** 17:02, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

I know this is not the right place to ask, but if anyone can show me how to amke siggys, that would be AWESOME! I have no idea how, and all you guys have cool siggys!! ***Iceflower***

There's a highlight line going down his body in the middle, I dunno if you did that on purpose, but you might want to blur that. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 18:02, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Kay, thanks, i used bllur and burn tool. will reupload it soon. i just dont feel like it now. i know, LAZY! :P

IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

Reuploaded: Finally, i reuploaded. sorry for the long wait. it was a minor correction and i didnt feel the urgency........i had a busy day......IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

The shading needs to be blurred, the entire thing's a bit dark and the stripes are too thick. Mossy go away. 01:48, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are too 'fat' xD This is still too dark. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:15, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

What paintbrush size should i use for the stripes? or pencil size? also, this new upload may take a while.....i am quite busy........SORRY! :P IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

Iceflower, look at the apprentice tutorials. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:30, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Frostheart, all the tutorials say to use different sizes. Size one is too small, and size three, which I used, you guys say is too fat!!! please help, just this one? Pretty please?? IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....  

The stripes size looks fine to me... Moonflight 22:32, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please add the date you resevered this on the reservations table.  Darkhallows...Mew? 11:59, September 11, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

Thanks, Moonflight.
Darkhallows, I will, Thanks for telling me!!

IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

This is still too dark, also, the belly, back, and tail line-art is blurred. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:09, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the haunch more. The image looks very good! Rainbreath 16:55, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Actually, I don't think that the images are too thick anymore. Just too blurred. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:38, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Hey guys, since my school starts tomorrow, this might not be done for a few days! Sorry! If anybody has any objections, please put it on my talk page, as I check that more often than the PCA page! Sorry for any inconviniences! :P

IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

Lighten the whole image - it's too dark in comparison to his other images. llwildheartl 03:17, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

I AM REALLY REALLY REALLY SORRY, BUT I HAVE A LOT OF WORK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I PROMISE THIS CHARART WILL BE IN THIS WEEKEND. i had it done except for eye color yesterday, but my computer crashed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was gonna finish TODAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....


how do you make those cat pics96.19.39.68 16:57, September 17, 2010 (UTC)LEOPARDSTAR

The line art looks a little blurred on his chest. Blur the shading and lighten the ear pink--Nightshine 17:46, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

I know this is breaking my promise, but there is no way I can do this charat. I'm not "giving up", its just now that school is over, I simply dont have time for this. I AM REALLY SORRY. I am officially withdrawing Stonetooth. He is anyone's game now. Again, I apologize. I hope you understand! Do you?

IceflowerMay StarClan light your path.....

Archiving. oblivionAudience? 02:59, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Swallowflight (W) - Declined

[[File:Swallowflight.Warrior.png]] - Nightshine put CBA on Sol's alt image, so this should be okay! This is my first black cat and charart for PCA. Constructments? --SunXMossBest Friends Forever! 06:28, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add ear-pink, darken the shading a bit. Blur the highlights, they look a bit blotchy to me. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 14:32, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

CBA or not the image is still on the page. Sorry but this is over the limit.AshshadowNo really? 19:38, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Well, Sol is archived, so this should be okay...EarthbenderTawny Style! 21:09, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Many images have been archived, so this should be fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:55, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Add an earpink, and if you want highlights make them a little bigger and add some to the tail. DappleclawTigerstar's best buddeh!! 17:28, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - CBA images are not included, as stated in the note above. Wow, this looks really nice, but I think his eye colour is different on his other image. And yes, add ear pink, I suggest using the ear pink colour on Hollyleaf's image because it looks great on black cats. Also, darken the entire thing a bit. Mossy go away. 19:35, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded: Thanks Mosspool! I'm such an idiot for forgetting the ear pink. Comments? SunXMossBest Friends Forever! 22:56, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Wow I think it's georgus. --Spottedwing 01:57, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and highlights.AshshadowNo really? 16:18, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the midriff shading, too. IcethroatHappyHolidays! 23:17, September 13, 2010 (UTC)
The shoulder highlight is a bit smudged in a V position, it looks awkward. Blur it and the shading around it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:59, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.AshshadowNo really? 20:41, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Declining due to reason above. oblivionAudience? 19:04, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

Leafstorm (D) - Declined

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ummmm.......... I'm not an apprentice but I still wanted to do Leafstorm so........Here it is!


sugarplum99 01:15, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Someone already has Leafstorm up for approval, this is also in the wrong section. I'm sorry but this will have to be declined. May I suggest taking a look here, for charcters currently needing images done. --Dawnleaf 01:23, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declining due to reason above. oblivionAudience? 02:10, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (K) ~ Declined

[[File:Featherwhisker.kit.png]]Okay, since my other image is being declined, I think I can put this one up. Comments? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 21:18, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Featherwhisker never appeared as kit, this image shouldn't be made. WhiteStorm is back! 21:23, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

On his page it says "kit:Featherkit" so he must've been seen somewhere. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 21:33, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I just checked, it dosen't say that. Dappleclaw 21:36, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh my StarClan! I'm losing my mind! It's not Featherwhisker I meant to do! I'm sorry everyone! I'm losing it lately =/ Go ahead and decline this. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 02:26, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Birchfall (Alt W) ~ Declined

[[File:Birchfall.alt.warrior.png]]For my 9th charart, it came out pretty good to me. Comments? RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:37, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

When was he ever seen gray as a warrior? --Dawnleaf 23:39, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

On his page it says, "Birchfall has been mistaken for a gray cat" (or something like that) RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 23:42, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Ya, but was he called gray when he was a warrior?-ſceheartBlah blah 00:21, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Oh I never thought of that.... It's sad though, I put so much work into this =( RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 00:26, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think he was seen gray as a kit. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:50, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

I even explained it in my edit summary when I reverted your edit on the main page. I'm sorry Riverpelt, but he was never seen gray as a warrior, and this will have to be declined. oblivionAudience? 01:52, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

It's okay. =) Sorry for putting this up in the first place. RiverpeltDeputy of StormClan 20:24, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 02:26, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Nightkit (Ki) Declined

This is my first character art, tell me what you think! [[File:Nightkit_(Ki)_For_Approval.png]]

She does not have a description, and we cannot assume she is black. This needs to be declined. oblivionAudience? 01:18, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Nightkit (Ki) Declined

[[File:Nightkit_(Ki)_For_Approval.png]]

This is my first character art, so tell me what you think!

Nightkit's description was never mentioned in the book if this is Tigerstar's sister. And this should be in the Charart section. Please sign with the four ~. Thank you ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 13:04, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 15:39, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (Alt. Ki)-Declined

[[File:Tawnypelt._alt_kit.png]] Since Skipper's rogue pic is withdrawn, I'm entering another one. --Mistfire Ready, Fence! No, don't spear the kitty! 18:34, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Add nose color and darken the entire image a tad.AshshadowNo really? 19:13, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

This seems yellow to me, she is supposed to be pale ginger. 142.161.238.236 21:20, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

She looks very yellow. . . make her more gingery. And thicken and blur the shading. Mossy go away. 21:53, September 16, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. --Dawnleaf 01:44, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure you color her nose.^_^ Midnitesky 19:17, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

I think it is a very pale pink. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:44, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - If so, then make it darker, do everything listed above, and blur shading. Our User Page!

Goldenflower.queen As pointed out above, she needs to be more ginger. Make her more like Goldenflower. --Gοldenpelt 17:04, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. WhiteStorm is back! 20:13, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

It's PRETTY much the same color, but on Goldenflower's image, it has deeper shading. Thicken and darken the shading. xD Also, the ear-pink is hot-pink, desaturate it. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:02, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Ahem...I believe I reserved it first? Silvery 22:15, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

It is true that you reserved it first, but you only get two weeks to work on it. If it is not posted by two weeks, I think someone else is free to take that character. Willowheart1231 02:01, September 20, 2010 (UTC)Willowheart1231

Mistfire you may continue working on this as Silverdapple's time was up.AshshadowNo really? 20:54, September 20, 2010 (UTC)

Darken her pelt colour. Darken the shading and blur. Add some to the head, muzzle, chest. Blur the ear pink. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 23:23, September 21, 2010 (UTC)

You need to add color to the nose. :3 Good job! Hollydapple 15:59, September 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the shading along the back thinner. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:47, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a ton. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:21, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Color in the nose SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 05:16, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this of it will be declined.AshshadowNo really? 20:02, September 24, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work.AshshadowNo really? 17:37, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

Yellowfang (MCA) - Declined

[[File:Yellowfang.mca.png]] My first Charart for PCA !!!! Comments? Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 16:15, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Don't put it in a thumbnail. Also, rename this Yellowfang.mca.png. Moonflight 16:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Make it look like her medicine cat image ->[[File:Yellowfang.mc.png]] Make her fur more like that, make the herbs yellow, add scars on her face. oblivionAudience? 16:34, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

Ill Re-Upload it tomorow! :D i wasnt sure wether she had scars or not, and i didnt know what colour the herbs were s'posed to be, so sorry. :) Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 17:02, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

why do the herbs have to be yellow? Sunnyfrost 19:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

The herbs don't have to be yellow, theres more then one type of herb, and its not like she would always be carrying around the same ones. Brighten the highlights and blur the shading. Also make the ear pink smaller. --Dawnleaf 20:40, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

They should be yellow for consitency, actually. oblivionAudience? 20:54, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think it matters unless she's always holding the same herbs. The ear pink is too big, and darken the shading/add highlights for consistency. Mossy go away. 21:32, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Oblivion. Also, add shading to the legs and blur it a lot. The ear-pink is too big and blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:26, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think the herbs make a big difference; like Mosspool said, she's not always holding the same herbs. But maybe add more highlights and make the fur look more like her medicine cat image. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 23:41, September 3, 2010 (UTC)

oh ok. i was just wondering so sorry for doing it in bold and underline. shrink the ear pink and blur it. try to fix up some of the highlights on the tail, it looks like one side it dark gray and the other side it Yellowfang color. Sunnyfrost 00:37, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

As far as I'm aware, the herbs don't have to e the same color. There are more than one type of herb. I would blur the shading, and add highlights (they are optional, but well worth it on a black/gray cat.)  Darkhallows...Mew? 00:46, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

This looks light gray, make it darker. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:56, September 4, 2010 (UTC)

The color looks fine. If it were light gray, it would look like this:

[[File:Sootfur.warrior.png]] Moonflight 14:53, September 5, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't look light gray, but in comparison to her other images it's quite a bit too light. Mossy go away. 03:30, September 6, 2010 (UTC)

Hi guys, sorry, ive re done it but its taking a g e s to upload so ill do it later,Ive changed the herbs, changed the earpink, darkend the shading and blurred them, blurred the highlights darkened her colour, but i dont know how to shade her tail, so ill have to get some help on that. sorry for taking ages, and thankyou for your comments! Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 16:30, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

Oh scars! umm, should i add them or not?Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 16:30, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

I believe we already discussed that you should add them. So, yes. Moonflight 19:15, September 7, 2010 (UTC)

*Re-Uploaded* Comments?I dont like how it came out though. :/ Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 15:22, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

(S) - Blur, or use some other method of making them less distinct. Also, I don't think herb color is that important. I mean, we're focusing on the cat, not the yarrow, right? Mosswhisker & Stealthfire Want to chat? 20:46, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, scars, and ear pink ★ Flowerleaf ★ 20:50, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes need to be blurred and thickened a bit. Add shading to the herbs. Also, darken the shading and blur the highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:10, September 9, 2010 (UTC)

Try to lighten the image a bit so it matches the medicine cat, and blur the SCARS not stripes (lol I <3 u Frostheart) EarthbenderTawny Style! 21:11, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the scars, and mess up the fur more, like her Medicine Cat Picture. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 23:33, September 10, 2010 (UTC)

Please remember to put the date you reserved this on the reservations table.  Darkhallows...Mew? 12:10, September 11, 2010 (UTC) 1193477C-A375-C968-069C-C1818BA7C5911.03.01

The highlights are too concentrated, spread them out more. Wicked Mouseh is Defying Gravity!!! 17:43, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks better now, but the highlights are too concentrated and you need to make them furry. I can help you with that, if you want. Mossy go away. 19:37, September 11, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it a bit smaller. Rainbreath 16:52, September 12, 2010 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading, scars, and add shading to the herbs. Mossy go away. 23:47, September 13, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the entire image, blur the scars and earpink, and make her more furry. oblivionAudience? 23:45, September 14, 2010 (UTC)

*Re-Uploaded* Ok, I will re-do the fur, but other than that, comments? Sunstar27'Be true to your dreams... 15:52, September 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make it whiter and match the texture to her images. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:52, September 18, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights look a bit whispy. Are you trying to match the medicine cat version for the highlights/texture/whatever it's called? EarthbenderTawny Style! 19:24, September 19, 2010 (UTC)

Add some highlights and shading to the herbs. SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 00:18, September 23, 2010 (UTC)

Sunstar, are you still working on this? It will be declined soon if you aren't. oblivionAudience? 21:16, September 25, 2010 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. oblivionAudience? 19:07, September 26, 2010 (UTC)

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