Talk: Charart/Declined 37

Mistystar (Alt. W)-Declined

[[File:Mistystar.alt.warrior.png]] Any comments?❋Rainey ♫Rainwillow♫ 10:48, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Isn't gray and blue-gray basically the same thing? I think I remember having this discussion before when another user asked to do her. But maybe Oblivion and Frostheart think otherwise. Add highlights to the shoulder, haunch, and face, and blur the shading a lot! Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 14:34, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink lighter,then blur it,Ea-pink should look real...Snowbreeze 19:58, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, I believe Scarletwind is correct. What's the difference? But it's up to Frostheart and Oblivion to decline. :3 --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:07, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

I thought that there was an alternate for Mistystar declined already. Merry Christmas! o3o 22:01, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, there was a discussion about this earlier and it was decided that there is really no difference because it's just a different shade of gray. This will be declined--Nightshine 22:04, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Oh,okay.I don't mind.After all,it's just my first one.....❋Rainey ♫Rainwillow♫ 23:34, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Alt. Kit) - Declined

[[File:Sweetpaw.kit.alt.png]]

Return the lineart to its original color on the face; it has been paled. We'll see how it looks after that. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:48, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Fantastic. All I see is that the mottled spots could be darkened a tad. And the ear pink could also be darkened. ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 22:05, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:40, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

It sorta looks like the ear pink in the right ear is darker than the ear pink in the left ear. Can you fix that? If not, looks great! --User:Midnitesky/Sig 02:48, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

I think the right ear is darker because of the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 05:37, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, okay. =) Never mind. Looks good. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:19, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

The shading needs to be darkened a little, mostly on the bottom. Otherwise, it looks great! Rainwhisker⁵⁶⁷ 22:16, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:05, December 3, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading under the chin, lighten the right ear pink--Nightshine 07:02, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Very good! Lighten the right ear's ear pink. Other than that, it looks awesome! Maplefrost! 02:03, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 03:58, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the right ear pink more--Nightshine 04:48, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 05:00, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten it more, I can hardly see it--Nightshine 05:25, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 03:47, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the forearms and tail, lighten the right ear pink more --Nightshine 02:32, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 21:30, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the right ear pink more so we can clearly see it. Maybe add highlights so it has more depth--Nightshine 00:54, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I think the earpink's okay now. The picture already had highlights, so I brightened them up. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:26, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour--Nightshine 02:22, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Ah, CBA is so close, yet so far away. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 03:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour more, it looks almost the same as the colour of the muzzle--Nightshine 23:01, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I hate to burst your bubble Nightflower because this is a great image and you worked very hard on this, but didn't we decide to decline all cats with no colour and only tabby specified? Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 00:21, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, you're right. I guess this will be declined. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 04:27, December 17, 2010 (UTC)

Ah, yes Mosspool, you're right. I completely missed that, good job. Nightflower, this image is amazing, but I'm sorry, it needs to be declined. oblivion^Audience? 18:43, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose(Alt.A)-Declined

[[File:Berrynoe.apperentice.alt.png]] Here he is,my frist Charart,comments? Mistycloud 09:13, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot, darken the shading and make the tail a bit more like his apprentice charart. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:22, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

I think you should probably make the tail look more like his warrior charart's. Also, make the ear pink bigger. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 18:59, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Umm, Shaf Girl has already reserved this on the table. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 20:56, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, Rainwhisper is correct. And it was on December 19, before you, Mistycloud. This should be declined and I think you will be given a 24-hour ban, although I'm not sure. :P --User:Midnitesky/Sig 21:00, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

They're right, but we're not doing the 24-hour bans anymore. Mistycloud, I'm going to have to ask you not to post on the PCA talk page for 24 hours. If you have any questions, leave a message on my talk page. oblivion^Audience? 22:46, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - Declined

Hi i just made berrynose's alt apprentice version here it is[[File:Berrynose.app.alt.png]] im sorry...that wuz me...-User:Sheasplash/Sig 00:14, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

I made a new section for this, but it must be declined because Shaf Girl already has this reserved--Nightshine 00:47, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (Healer/Leader) - Declined

[[File:FurledBracken.Healer.png]] So if you think it is terrible just say so..no need to be dramatic..so anyway this is my first Healer picture..and yeah Furled Braken was the healer since the anicents call their leader a healer then..yeah. Enjoy :3 Also I am new to the Charart world so there has to be something wrong..lol Spottedleaf 01:09, December 27, 2010 (UTC) 

It looks pretty good. Blur the stripes and the ear pink more. Make the highlights on his face brighter. And make the shading on his back thicker. BloodangelStarshine 12:15, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

It looks good, other then the fact that Furled Bracken was a dark ginger tom, so you need to darken the image. Blur the haunch shading/highlights a little more, too. Rainlegs 14:44, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I don't think he gets a healer image. The Ancients never mentioned anything about a healer, only a "leader". I know Rock was a healer, but maybe they dropped the healer tradition by the time Furled Bracken came around? I'll wait to see what others think before declining this, though. oblivion^Audience? 14:52, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I think someone already tried putting Furled Bracken's Healer image up and it was declined, although it might have been Leader image, not Healer. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 15:14, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Well, if this is gonna stay up for approval, darken the shading in the herbs. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 15:23, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I moved this to the right spot. Furled Bracken does not get a healer image since he was never a healer, only part of the Ancients. This will be declined--Nightshine 15:43, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Alt. W) -Declined

[[File:Maplefern.Warrior.jpg]] First charat for the project! This ones not bad... Comments? - User:Gingertail/Sig 17:03, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Wasn't this already discussed that Mapleshade doesn't get an alt. because she was only described as a tortoiseshell in an Erin Hunter chat? Someone correct me if I'm wrong, or maybe Oblivion and Frostheart have different thoughts. Darken the shading, brighten the ear-pink, and add highlights. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 17:05, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

I didn't know that o.o I'll remove it if anyone wants me to, then - User:Gingertail/Sig 17:14, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm not trying to be mean. I think it will have to be declined. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 17:16, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, it should be declined; this was spoken before on Mosspool's charart. Although Gingertail, this tortoiseshell is simply phenomenal! ;) --User:Midnitesky/Sig 17:18, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, this will have to be declined. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:30, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh, well. Thanks anyways, Midnite =) - User:Gingertail/Sig 20:17, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar (K) - Declined

[[File:Tallstar_(KIT).png]] Copied from Leader image. Comments? - Crystalstar999

Was Tallstar ever seen as a kit? I think this may have to be declined. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 17:24, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Agreed, Scarletwind. Please post this in the right section, Crystalstar. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 17:30, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Tallstar was never seen as a kit. Declining--Nightshine 19:26, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Owlstar leader~ Declined

[[File:Owlstar.png]] My first one:) Sorry I couldn't do the transparent background, Someone tell me! As you can see, this is Owlstar as leader. (I don' know why it's kinda blurred i guess? Someone tell me things) 'Splashpelt-Luvs Hopflight 19:46, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

De-thumbed. Why did you make this charart? Owlstar already has a leader charart. This will have to be declined. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 19:49, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Oh snap! I forgot about that! Sorry guys! I'll make another charart! 'Splashpelt-Luvs Hopflight 19:52, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Make sure you read the guidelines and you have to reserve an image before posting it here--Nightshine 19:54, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, thanks guys:) I forgot that I had to make a cat that there is no charart for already! 'Splashpelt-Luvs Hopflight 19:57, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Also, for future reference, to make the background transparent, just open the image in GIMP and follow these instructions from Insaneular's tutorial. If you don't have GIMP, you can download it. Rainwhisker⁵⁶⁷ 15:25, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. L)- withdrawn

[[File:Blackstar.leader.alt.png]]Comments? User:Kittypet1/Sig 23:20, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Good job. =) Blur the shading all around. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 23:24, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Make the background transparent as well. oblivion^Audience? 23:57, November 24, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink.--Nightshine 00:27, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink and shading a ton, and maybe make the highlights brighter. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:41, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Blue the ear pink. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 05:52, November 25, 2010 (UTC)

Make his nose the same color as the ear pink. Scarletwind^{Medicine cat of SolarClan} 05:08, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

No, don't make it pink, just make it a lighter black. Usually black cats have black noses. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:46, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

We have a black cat (he's semi-ours) and his nose is more grayish. Mistfire^{Owl City!} 18:52, November 26, 2010 (UTC)

For some reason it always just shows the old version. I'll try to reupload it again later and see if it's working.User:Kittypet1/Sig 05:03, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

I hope you've thoroughly blurred it in the new version, because that is exactly what it requires; blurring both on the ear pink and the pelt. User:Starlingflight/Sig 09:01, November 30, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Blackstar.leader.alt oblivion^Audience? 02:05, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded GIMP won't let me blur it anymore. User:Kittypet1/Sig 02:16, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Well, it should be able to..make sure the blur rate is at 100. Rename it Blackstar.leader.alt. --☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:18, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make the ear pink bigger--Nightshine 04:26, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you sure you can't blur it any more? Right now, the contrast between the shading and the highlights is very sharp, making it look...separate. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:54, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Are you at least able to blur the earpink? ☾Moonflight☽ 01:14, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The earpinks should match. The right one is more skinny. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 22:46, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink should fill the entire ear, and make it more red. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 23:45, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

It doesn't have to fill the entire ear; it's optional. The colour is fine. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:06, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Kittypet? oblivion^Audience? 02:09, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Yeah, I'll get it in by tomorrow, i got grounded from the computor User:Kittypet1/Sig 23:54, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I could take over; it's been 3 days. Mistfire^{Owl City!} 19:41, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

No, we wait a week. oblivion^Audience? 00:20, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Now it's been a week. ℳerryspirit 17:20, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, now you can take over. Add this to the reservations table--Nightshine 17:37, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Okay, I redid it. ℳerryspirit 16:32, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and brighten the highlights.Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:34, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the image. There are tons of white pixels everywhere. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:35, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Looks horrible, doesn't it? ℳerryspirit 16:45, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing, make the ear pink more reddish, brighten the highlights, darken the nose colour--Nightshine 17:17, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a lot. oblivion^Audience? 01:36, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm at my Grandparent's house and my computer doesn't connect to their internet and I have to use Pixlr. So if I have to blur the highlights, could somebody do those for me? Pixlr's isn't that strong. ℳerryspirit 17:48, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Add shading/darken the shading. Make the ear pink more reddish and blur it. Darken the nose colour--Nightshine 17:57, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Are you withdrawing this? It says withdrawn. ☾Moonflight☽ 16:17, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Yes, she is taking over Birchfall's Alternate Kit image. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 16:27, December 27, 2010 (UTC)

Macgyver (W) - Declined

[[File:Macgyver.warrior.png]]

All the patch transitions and ear pink must be blurred. Shading needs to be added; use the burn tool to add shading along the back, chest, tail, legs and head. You may want to withdraw this and work with our art tutorials on your own, to learn about shading, before you continue to work on this. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 22:52, November 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks very unnatural. Try using a different, less neon shade, and blur it as well. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:22, November 23, 2010 (UTC)

Rainear, are you still working on this? --Nightshine 07:11, November 27, 2010 (UTC)

I will take over. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 20:47, November 28, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry if to be sounding like I'm nagging, but Bramble may I take over the image? You've taken over a lot of images since the project has just reopened and it seems like a lot on your plate. If not, thats fine since I know you can handle it as leader.--Shimmerpool^{★Follow the stars...☆} 00:32, November 29, 2010 (UTC) Blur patches.Scarletwind^{Medicine cat of SolarClan} 03:19, December 1, 2010 (UTC)

I don't know if you'll understand but make the image softer. more shading and more buluring with some highlights as well.Fiercestar_{Leader of RiverClan} 22:01, December 4, 2010 (UTC)

Go ahead, Shimmer. That's fine by me. --Bramble -Hyuu~ 04:01, December 5, 2010 (UTC)

Taking over this image now and I made a new version to make some of the patches match with his kittypet image. Also took the ear pink and eye color from that image as well. I know he's going to need a little more work before approval but just wanted to get this up before my school week began. Comments?-- ❄Shimmery Crystals❄ 00:28, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

Add/darken shading. oblivion^Audience? 00:53, December 6, 2010 (UTC)

blur the shading. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:55, December 8, 2010 (UTC)

:Updated-- ❄ Shimmering Snowflakes ❋ 02:57, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

The way you did the shading interferes with the patches. Make it lighter and blur a ton, also make the patches look more like his kittypet image. (same place and what not) --☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:12, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

His Kittypet image is from a different side and angle so the patches can't exactly be in the same place. I had the two images side by side when making the image. I play with the shading though-- ❄ Shimmering Snowflakes ❋ 06:21, December 11, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there is a thick line of gray around all of the patches, get rid of that and blur the shading. Lighten the ear pink and blur it.--Nightshine 00:56, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and fix the eye up. There is a pixel out of place. ޓSun spiritޓ^{Santa Paws is coming to town!} 08:44, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

The patches in the middle are a lot fainter and smudged-looking than the ones to the side; make them more or less the same shade. ²⁰¹¹ Light paw ^{It's anew year!} 18:14, December 18, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 07:33, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

I could take over if this is declined.²⁰¹¹ Light paw ^{It's anew year!} 18:38, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

For whoever takes over, lighten the shading on the black patches. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 20:47, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Also, blur all of the shading. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 03:23, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Is it just me or is the ear pink really dark? PtEЯO ^{:D I'm back!} 06:29, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 19:05, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of work--Nightshine 21:23, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt. A) - Declined

[1] Comments

First, I moved this to the correct section. Second, I believe this will be declined, since Shaf has Berrynose's alternate apprentice on the reserve table. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 11:38, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

She's right. Declining. oblivion^Audience? 16:06, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

[[File:FirestarAsAKitWarriorsWikibyHollypool.jpg]] Please comment heavily on this one....!!!

Firestar doesn't require a kit image, because he's never seen as one. This will have to be declined. Rainlegs 16:38, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Sky (L) - Declined

[[File:Sky_.png]]-Crystalstar999

This willl have to be declined. Sky's description and gender are unknown. Rainlegs 14:49, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

I'm moving this to the right section as well--Nightshine 18:08, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Declining--Nightshine 17:52, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefeather (D) - Declined

[[File:Whitefeather.png]]

Hi I am Cinderpelt123 and i would like to join Pca as an apprentice.

This is Whitefeather one of my Recent Chararts. Comment and i would love to join PCA Cinderpelt123 18:27, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

I moved this to the correct section. I believe this will be declined because there is no Whitefeather in the actual series, and we do not do fanfiction characters. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 18:43, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

However, you don't need to put up personal pictures for approval, nor do you need an art example to join. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 18:47, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry. I didn't realize this charart wasn't up for approval. Sorry again. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 18:51, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

You can't decline images. Only a lead can. ☾Moonflight☽ 19:12, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well can i join as an apprentice Cinderpelt123 19:16, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Tumblekit (Alt. Ki) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Tumblekit.kit.alt.png]]Here he...er...she is! My first charart. I wasn't sure if I named the file correctly, but just tell me if i didn't, so.....comments? User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 19:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Rename it Tumblekit.kit.alt. There is a white pixel on the top of her head, fill that in, and blur the shading. oblivion^Audience? 19:34, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I fixed the head dot thingy majigger, and i blurred the shading as much as i could. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 19:42, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the ear pink. -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 19:44, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Make the blur pink even. Also, the shading and highlights look out of place; try to fix them. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 19:57, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Done, Done, and sorta done. I tried to fix the shading and highlights, but I'm not sure if they're....good or not...but i did my best to fist the earpink. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 20:24, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. This looks great!--Nightshine 20:26, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink looks much better. :) The highlights on the shoulder...maybe fix them? The highlights should be on the chest. :) --User:Midnitesky/Sig 20:29, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I fixed the nose pink and did my best to blur the highlights on the shoulder. I also added the highlights on the chest....I stand accomplished. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 20:33, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit on the right side of the chest highlight. Maybe add a small highlight to the tail--Nightshine 20:40, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading down by his paws, I can't see the lineart--either that or my eyesight is dying... Scarletwind^{Medicine cat of SolarClan}

Nah, your eyesight still lives, Scarletwind. :) Lighten the paws and also lighten the face; I can't see the mouth. --User:Midnitesky/Sig 23:30, December 12, 2010 (UTC)

Erm she looks Crossed-eyed Snowbreeze 01:36, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Good job, lighten the shading. ❄Icy❄^{Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells!} 21:33, December 13, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Fixed. Comments? Sorry, I won't be on AS much....so this wasn't updated in a while. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 00:07, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think this looks great. Comments before approval?--Nightshine 02:19, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a ton. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:30, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I think the highlights look fine. Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 22:57, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, but they look just splattered on the chest to me. Darken the shading in that area and blur the highlights. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:02, December 15, 2010 (UTC)

I completely agree with Frostheart. The highlights look a tad bit messy. I mean, I'm not a warrior, but I think she could move some highlights. ޓSun spiritޓ^{Santa Paws is coming to town!} 09:36, December 16, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I did my best to blur the highlights....but they didn't come out so good.....I'm really happy that i got the comments before approval! (even if it didn't count)... User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 16:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

This looks ready to me. Comments before approval?--Nightshine 17:02, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

It looks like there's a lighter highlight on top of the hight on his chest. Smooth it out. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 18:30, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

Thicken the shading where the highlight is; it's just a blob pretty much. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:55, December 19, 2010 (UTC)

The highlights and shading look really messy and blotchy, I would just suggest looking at some tutorials and redoing them. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 01:02, December 20, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: I just redid the whole shading and looke at all the tutorials like 7 times. (I have way too much free time). So.....howdya like it?\

It looks a million times better . . . make the nose black and darken the ear pink, also, the ear pink are different sizes so try and even them out. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 02:20, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Just redid the ear pink with a better satisfying color in my opinion. The nose looked weird as just black, so i just darkened it. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 22:50, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours--Nightshine 02:16, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

The ear pink is a bit too large and blurry now and no, make the nose black, because black cats have black noses. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 03:00, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Updated: Black nose. smaller and not as much blurred ear pink. xmas in a few days. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 23:32, December 23, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit, lighten the highlights--Nightshine 17:55, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

He's too dark. ℳerryspirit 22:18, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the nose should be more gray. ⚛Nightflower⚛^{☣Absol invasion☣} 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more. Roo ^{Hawkfrost lover♥} 14:45, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 21:19, December 30, 2010 (UTC)

Sorry but i have absolutely no time to work I have been very busy lately. I think I might just withdraw this and just stick to helping the articles through its text issues...not image. User:MoonWillow77002/Sig 16:45, December 31, 2010 (UTC)

Alright that's fine.--Nightshine 00:29, January 7, 2011 (UTC)

Feathertail (Alt. Warrior)- Declined

[[File:Feathertail_warrior.png]]Here is Feathertail, I fixed the way her eye was Cinderpelt123 00:56, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed. Cinderpelt, Feathertail already has an alternate warrior up for approval, second, this is her normal warrior charart, and third, if there was a problem with her eye, it would've been fixed during the next Tweak Week. This will have to be declined. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 01:00, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

The eye doesn't need to be fixed, the style is fine. Zexion; The Cloaked Schemer 01:00, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to above comments. --Nightshine 01:28, January 8, 2011 (UTC)

Buzzardkit - Declined

[[File:Buzzardkit.kit.png.png]]This is Buzzardkit, a WindClan kit without a description, it's mentioned in The Sight. I know it will likely be declined because no description was ever given, but I wanted to practice, and it didn't have a picture yet. Please let me know how I did!Alexis Moonwish Ott 05:38, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. This will be declined since Buzzardkit has no description. If you wanted to practice you don't have to post them here, this project page is just for chararts for real characters with actual descriptions from the books. If you want to practice, I suggest using your single profile picture to practice with. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 05:43, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

sorryAlexis Moonwish Ott 06:03, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--Nightshine 06:34, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart alt. warrior - Declined

[[File:Tigerheart.alt.warrior.png.png]]This is my first try at this, and the only one available was this one, so I hope I did a good job! Alexis Moonwish Ott 04:29, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to break it to ya, but Tigerheart's alt. warrior is already taken, and is up for approval already. This will have to be declined. Rainlegs 04:33, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

It is? Oh, sorry, it was the only one on the list of available ones, why aren't there any more?Alexis Moonwish Ott 04:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe because there aren't any charart left to do? If you wanna do an image, read the books and look for something to do. The list of available ones probably isn't updated very much. Mossy ♫ ^{go away.} 04:42, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

k thanks, but do you think I did a good job? Like I said, this is my first one, and even though it didn't even take me ten minutes, I worked hard. Can anyone tell me what they think? p.s. does anyone know how to make their signature look cool?Alexis Moonwish Ott 04:44, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

You did very well for this being your first one. Rainlegs 05:07, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

thank you, Rainlegs. I just put up my second one, Buzzardkit...Alexis Moonwish Ott 05:39, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. Scarletwind^{Medicine Cat of SolarClan} 05:53, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to comments above. Frostheart already has this reserved--Nightshine 06:33, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

i will go update it again*Wildfire* 15:22, January 9, 2011 (UTC)