Halftail (Alt. W) - Declined Edit

[[File:Halftail.warrior.alt.png]] Here's Halftail without his tail.. comments? oblivionAudience? 15:04, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

The tail is straight and unnatural. Maybe add a curve to it --Leafstrike-- 18:00, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just cut off the warrior tail, I think it looks fine. oblivionAudience? 22:16, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image and make the stripes on his face more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:35, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

maybe lighten the haunch*Wildfire* 23:37, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the head shading, and center the ear pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 23:45, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes more like the style on his other images--Nightshine 23:59, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonleaf, the tail doesn't look right. When you see the full thing on the normal warrior blank it has a curve at the top which keeps it from looking too unnatural, but on here, it looks like his tail is a stick. Also, the colours and stripe style on this image don't match his other ones. Mossy go away. 17:31, January 12, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Moonleaf and Mosspool as well. The tail looks to straight. Adding a curve in it would make it look much better. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 00:43, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

There's no need to repeat what they just said. :P Brighten the highlights a tad, Oblivion. :) --User:Midnitesky/Sig 00:46, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I tried... the tail still looks odd. oblivionAudience? 03:49, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Add more Y stripes and try to make it more consistent to his elder image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 03:55, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the tail, add more face stripes, move the ear pink down a bit and blur it, make the shoulder highlight and haunch highlight bigger and blur them, darken the haunch and neck shading. --Nightshine 04:12, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Looks a lot better, oblivion. The tail could use a touch of light, though. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 22:14, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno. To me, the tail looks crumpled and withered like it was crushed rather than bitten. Maybe don't curl it so much and make it a tad thicker? I can also see some gray speckle near the second stripe on the tail from the base, can you fix that? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:25, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 11:22, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the image some. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:54, January 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 00:53, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a tad. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:22, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome. Just add some more stripes to the back. ❄Icy❄Jingle Bells, Jingle Bells! 03:09, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Change the shade of brown to match Halftail's elder image and use a thin brush and draw on y tabby stripes for consistency. Mossy go away. 04:12, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Mossy, I'm using the shade of brown from his warrior image. The stripes on that image are all in the same spots as in mine, I think it's pretty consistent. oblivionAudience? 15:28, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the midriff shading, blur the shading at the bottom of the haunch--nightshine 19:16, January 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a small splotch of gray right below the tip of the tail. Fix that please. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 23:54, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the tail stripes, blur the ear pink and make it a bit more pink, blur the shoulder highlight, darken the neck shading--nightshine 23:57, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's very consistent . . . I guess the colour is fine (even if his elder image colour seems barfier to me), but even if they are in the same spots, the stripes on his elder image look totally different than the ones on here. Mossy go away. 03:47, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's consistent to Halftail's warrior image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:44, January 18, 2011 (UTC)

It looks nothing like his elder image. Mossy go away. 22:00, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Okay guys, calm down. I agree, Oblivion, you've made the colour and everything match his image, and the stripes look sort of like his elder image, but the elder image's stripes are a tiny bit thinner and are more Y-tabby-ish. Now personally, I prefer the image as it is, but seeing as this is more of a consistency issue rather than a vanity issue... Anyway, you don't need to redo the image or anything, but add another line to some of the stripes and make them a tiny bit thinner. Not a huge thing, just a little tweak. It looks gorgeous, btw. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:36, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lol, Wildheart, we werent' fighting. :P But it should stay as is, if it should be consistent to either the elder or warrior image, it would have to be the warrior image. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:35, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

I decided to cut it off before it escalated to such XD Ignore pretty much all I said. Silly me only looked at the elder image. **facepalm** --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 20:42, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Umm okay, but then I guess we should change the elder image when tweak week comes. Mossy go away. 20:55, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the very bottom of the haunch. Looks good. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:00, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the front of the front leg or get rid of the shading at the top of the front leg. It looks weird how theres shading and then like a highlight on the leg. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:10, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, was Halftail ever seen as a warrior with half a tail? As for the image, I would say make the ear pink consistent with his other images. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:30, January 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the hi-lites, they look kinda flat. MistfireI'd like fries with that 02:25, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Oblivion? -ſceheartBlah blah 20:17, January 31, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work--Nightshine 20:49, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

If I can, May I take over? Splook it's a long way down. 01:37, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

I mean, make a Halftail ALT? Splook it's a long way down. 01:41, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Furled Bracken (L)- DeclinedEdit

[[File:Furled_Bracken.l.png]] Well, I figured he would get a leader picture, since he led the ancient clan. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 03:05, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. There's been a discussion about whether Furled Bracken would get a Leader/Healer charart already. Unless that's reopened, this will be declined. Sorry. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:38, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 20:33, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardfoot (Alt. A) - Declined Edit

[[File:Leopardfoot._alt._apprentice.png]]Crystalstar999 09:23, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

She has been described as mottled, but I think this will have to be declined because we don't know what the colour of the pelt is. --Leafstrike-- 18:10, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. And I agree with Moonleaf. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:49, February 4, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--Nightshine 20:49, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Alt. A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Jayfeather.apprentice.alt.png]] Jayfeather's alternate warrior apprentice pic, as he appeared in the Sight. He was just called "mottled" but I like doing gray cats. =P I hope I'm allowed to put this up - Wetfoot was approved, but never actually archived... that's okay, right? Anyway, comments? --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:50, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add it to his trivia?--Nightshine 02:55, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Right. I forgot. Doing so now. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 02:58, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Nice mottles! Blur the shading under his chin by the whiskers a tad, lighten the ear-pink a bit, and blur the shading by the belly. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:03, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! But, if the light's coming from the back, why is there light coming from the front on the tail? Rainlegs 03:14, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I figured the tail was twitching up a bit. Cats don't generally lay their tails flat on the ground, right? Tweaked it a bit, reuploading in a sec. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:18, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:22, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

Was he called a gray mottle? Or just mottled? If it's just mottled, then this will have to be declined. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:47, February 8, 2011 (UTC)

I checked and it was only mottled. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:42, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Frostheart, my bad. You can archive this, I suppose. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 06:06, February 9, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above--Nightshine 07:15, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt. Q) DeclinedEdit

[[File:Daisy.Queen.Alt.png]]Alright, I TRIPLE checked and no one has this reserved anymore. First project character, and I'm pretty excited about it. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 15:54, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but Daisy already has this image on her page. This will probably get declined. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:07, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

She does? -facepalm- Oops. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 21:54, February 10, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 00:58, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Alternate Mudfur - DeclinedEdit

Mudfur is described as mottled so I gave it a try.[[File:Mudfur_alt..png|thumb]] Deputy of HollyClan 15:39, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

NOTE: This is my first try at this type of cat. So don't expect it to be great.

Moved to the correct section. Did it ever mention what color of mottled cat he was? Rainlegs 15:43, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

No it didn't and this has already been declined before so it probably will again. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:48, February 12, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 16:34, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Tigerheart.warrior.alt.png]] oblivionAudience? 22:55, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Dull the ear-pink and darken the shading a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:15, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the stripes. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:22, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Darken the stripes, maybe change the color so they are like his alternate apprentice image. Darken the ear pink a lot. Brighten the highlights and make the shoulder and haunch ones bigger--Nightshine 23:44, December 21, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:13, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Move the shoulder highlight up a bit and make the stripes on his face more noticeable. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:14, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller,but when was he seen as an golden tabby warrior? 01:45, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:38, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and define the stripes. Darken the ear pink/make it like the ear pink on his alternate apprentice image. Make the haunch highlight bigger and blur it-Nightshine 02:14, December 22, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 01:33, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Brighten the shoulder highlight, darken the ear pink, darken the belly and neck shading--Nightshine 03:05, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

The stripes are very . . . orange . . . now. I think you should make them more goldeny. Also, brighten and blur the highlights, and add stripes to the far legs. Mossy go away. 04:20, December 24, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 16:26, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the legs farthest from us and the ear behind us. Blur the shoulder highlight.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:42, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. oblivionAudience? 16:45, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. There are some dark brown areas that should be blurred/taken away. Desaturate the ear pink and darken it, darken the stripes--Nightshine 17:34, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading does not need to be darkened, but it does need to be blurred. The stripes are fine, too. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 19:51, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

smooth the shading on the back flank and behind the ear and at the base of the tail. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:14, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

The shading does need to be darkened; around the base of the tail, the neck, the belly, and at the back of the haunch-Nightshine 20:20, December 25, 2010 (UTC)

I think the orange tabby stripes look a bit weird against his golden pelt. They show out a lot. Or is it just me?NightfernMerry Christmas 02:48, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

I agree with Nightfern, I think the colours should look more like the ones from his alternate apprentice image since that is also a golden tabby--Nightshine 18:49, December 26, 2010 (UTC)

Try taking the tabby stripe color from his alternate apprentice image. Also, there is a dark spot on the back of his neck. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 11:23, December 28, 2010 (UTC)

Maybe move the shoulder highlight up or lighten the shading on the upper part of his neck, it kind of looks like he has an elongated neck. 2011 Light paw It's anew year! 00:50, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Oblivion? Moonflight 19:21, January 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mmm yes, sorry Moonflight. I haven't gotten around to it recently. I'll start working on it. oblivionAudience? 00:18, January 3, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic, Oblivion. :) Perhaps the shading could be darker on the tail and blurred a little to make a smooth transitioning? :3 --User:Midnitesky/Sig 14:08, January 4, 2011 (UTC)

Hey guys, sorry I've been so inactive lately. I'm going to withdraw this since I can't really find the time, and - let's face it - the effort. Anyone who isn't working on something can take this over. oblivionAudience? 01:49, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I redid the image.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:20, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. Rainlegs 04:36, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Fantastic, Frostheart! Maybe you can add some tabby stripes on the head; it looks very abrupt. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:45, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Just blur the shading a little. :) Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 15:18, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 16:22, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, darken the shading, blur the stripes, lighten the stripes, get rid of all the small dots as there aren't any on his alternate apprentice image. --Nightshine 20:07, January 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:46, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, make it smaller, add a few stripes to his forehead. Darken the neck and midriff shading--Nightshine 02:49, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:40, January 10, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the face stripes and make them a bit bigger. Trim off some of the ear pink from the left side. Darken the face/neck shading--Nightshine 01:17, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:23, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Add one or two more stripes onto his haunch, darken the forehead stripes and make them bigger, darken the face shading. Make the ear pink smaller--Nightshine 01:42, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think that it looks worse now, kinda. I might revert it back to the other one.ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:47, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight more. oblivionAudience? 23:37, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't add highlights. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:55, January 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, darken the neck shading--Nightshine 04:15, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

I think the ear-pink is fine now, and I won't darken the neck shading. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:30, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Why not? I can't really see any neck shading. The ear pink looks off center to me. If you could just trim off some of the left side of it--Nightshine 07:04, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Do you mean the muzzle or the actual neck? If so the real neck, it is there and the same opacity as everywhere else. If it is for the muzzle, I never added shading to my muzzle and I don't intend to do it on this one. I think the ear-pink is fine. If I 'trim' it anymore (with a one pixel brush) it becomes tiny. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:37, January 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder SHADING. >.> oblivionAudience? 00:23, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. :3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:31, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

He has, like... a pale gray ring around him. Get rid of that. oblivionAudience? 00:40, January 15, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like the shading ends suddenly at the head. Can you add some head shading? Other than that, I love this style of tabby :D ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 07:29, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:28, January 17, 2011 (UTC)

Define the face stripes, sharpen the left side of the ear pink some, darken the neck shading--nightshine 02:11, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:07, January 21, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing job, Frostheart! ;D The muzzle looks a little bare. Could either a stripe be added or the shading/highlights added there? :3 --User:Midnitesky/Sig 03:04, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Frostheart! There is a strip of light-ness on the back of the tail, shade that in. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 06:30, January 22, 2011 (UTC)

A lot of cats have bare muzzles, it's fine, and the tail is fine. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:53, January 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and enlarge the haunch highlight just a tiny bit. Looks wonderful =) --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:36, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 15:50, January 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch hi-lite. Mistfire Epic Fail 05:16, January 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it needs blurring. :P ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 21:45, February 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken neck shading. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 04:13, February 6, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined--Nightshine 01:03, February 11, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work--Nightshine 16:49, February 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm alt. - DeclinedEdit


YatzSilversword here. In Night Whispers Sandstorm is mentioned with an orange pelt.

Comments? YatzTalk 14:02, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's not in her trivia. The fact needs to be given a citation before it can be done. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 15:18, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

All right, I put it in her trivia and gave it a refrence. YatzTalk 16:38, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Make the background transparent, add shading and highlights, and blur the ear pink. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:13, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I can do all but one. Make the background transparent. I looked on tutorials but I just can't figure out how. I don't have MS paint either. YatzTalk 17:45, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Do you have an eraser tool? Just try erasing all the back background but leave the outline. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 17:46, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Duh, I'll try that! YatzTalk 18:06, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, its a little to neon - {{SUBST:Gingertail/sig'}} 20:16, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Finally, I'm done. I lightened the ear pink, added highlights and such. I know the border isn't the neatest, but it's the effort that counts right? I'm HOPEING it gets accepted. YatzTalk 21:38, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Add more orangeish color to it. And maybe make the ear pink more triangular. ♦Crystals In The Sky. HollyClan♦ 21:43, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

  • sighs* Okay, this had better be the last time I have to modify this photo unless it's a really good reason. I don't want to clutter up the wiki with these images. YatzTalk 21:59, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the outline on the back and on her muzzle. Darken the shading, and center the ear pink. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:07, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, I did it again. I darkened the shading and made the outline thicker and centered the ear pink. YatzTalk 22:25, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

The outline should still be a bit thickerin the front, and the ear pink could be probably smaller. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Try using out regular blanks, located on PCA's page. Blur the shading, and the earpink's a little too large. Her eye can use a pupil, too, and her pelt's not exactly orange on this picture. It, right now, is a yellow. Also, the backround isn't transparent. The backrounds of the regular blanks are transparent, so when you use it, it'll become transparent. One more thing: Darken the shading, too. Rainlegs 01:31, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the way my computer works is, when it shows up on GIMP, the background is black. If I give it a white background it loses the outline to. So there's no other way I can do it. YatzTalk 01:42, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

If it's black, it's transparent. Try pixlr if the black buggs you. Rainlegs 01:48, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know what pixlr is though. I made an orangy image of her. YatzTalk 02:02, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Here's a link. The image still needs to be orange, like the fruit, but a tad more dull/brown. If you need a refrence, here's a photo. Rainlegs 02:25, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Took it out of a thumbnail. You need to fix the lineart. What you can do is download the female warrior blank onto your computer again and then open it (separately) in GIMP. Use the Select-by-colour tool and select all the white. Ctrl + X it away (or go edit>cut) and then use the Free-select tool and draw a complete circle around the lineart. It should create a flashing white circle around the lineart and then you Ctrl + X it away. Open your image of Sandstorm in another window of GIMP and Ctrl + V or go edit>paste. The lineart will appear in the window and just position it so it fits over the old lineart. Then you can save it and close it. Your lineart will be fixed =) 03:12, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry that was me. Stupid comp logged me out. Also, you need to rename this file "sandstorm.warrior.alt.png" and stop reuploading a new file. Just reupload over the old one, so you don't clog up the wiki with images. --Wildheart L i v i n g w i t h o n l y m y t h o u g h t s. 03:17, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm is a ginger cat so she doesn't need an alternate for being described as orange. Sorry, this will be declined--Nightshine 03:35, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. Sorry if I'm going "OFF" on you guys but I'm kinda really annoyed. Yatz has tried so many times to do a charart. Can you FIND one for Yatz please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Loudsplash100000 23:57, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Well, there isn't that many chararts needed, and there are many, many members in this project. Mistystar Trust the fire within...

It's not the job of the other members to find chararts for other user to do. Everyone has to find their own. Reading the guidelines will also help to determine whether a character would get an alt. or not. But for now, time could be better spent by commenting on others' chararts and by doing that, they could help hone some of their charart making skills. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:06, February 18, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar Alt. D - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Mistystar.deputy.alt.png]]Heres Mistystar as a pale gray deputy. Comments? Lets hope this one doesn't get declined, like my last four *sobs* - {{SUBST:Gingertail/sig'}} 20:16, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if this will get approved, because it is just a lighter shade of grey, but I could be wrong. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 23:44, February 14, 2011 (UTC)

Personally, I agree. I think we were only going to do alts. for her dark gray coloring, but I'm not positive. Blur the shading, brighten the ear-pink and darken the shading on her legs and tail. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:51, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

There was a discussion about this before and no decision was made. It will be declined for now until Oblivion tells us what the decision is--Nightshine 03:36, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (W) alt. - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Mistystar_alt..png]]She is decribed as dark gray. Comments? Yatz私の話 21:39, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger, blur the ear pink, check the eyes. Mistystar Trust the fire within... 22:10, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and move it to the right section :P Mistystar Trust the fire within... 22:14, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. I really hate to do this, but Oblivion never gave us a final answer on Mistystar's alt. chararts so this will have to be declined. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 03:25, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the two light gray spots Bear in the box! 19:05, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade alt. - DeclinedEdit

Hey. I found out from a friend that Mapleshade has an alternate. Comments? Yatz私の話 14:35, February 23, 2011 (UTC)


Great job Yatz! Maybe make the ginger a bit darker. And maybe make the black a tiny bit less gray. Other than that looks great! (love the charart not trying to say its bad because it isn't!)Honeyfern 14:43, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this will be declined because it's a chat mistake, not trying to diminish your self-esteem. --Leafstrike-- 18:09, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry if I'm going off on you but this is RIDICULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :O Have any of you seen how many chararts Yatz's done! All of them have been declined. This is horrifyingly wrong. Yatz is a good charartist and deserves to at least do this! I'm sorry but this is just SOOOOOOOO annoying! Honeyfern 19:01, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Woah-ho-ho! Redpaw calm down. :/ Fernwing 19:18, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

There was already a discussion on whether Mapleshade would get an alt. for her tortie description and since that was only in an Erin Hunter chat, she wasn't actually seen as a tortoiseshell. Relax, there aren't very many chararts to do right now so my advice to all the other users who are looking for a charart to do is just to comment on others' work and just wait for other chararts that they can take over. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:02, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt. D) - Declined Edit

[[File:Blackstar.deputy.alt.png]]My first black cat charart. What do you think? Paleclaw 12:43, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

He was mentioned as black when he was leader. This will have to be declined. --Leafstrike-- 18:03, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Ok. I didn't know cats only get alternate art for the rank they were mentioned as. I didn't see it anywhere on the guidelines page but maybe I just didn't look well enough. Alright. Paleclaw 22:52, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, I have a question then. If a cat was mentioned as another color while they were say an apprentice, but in the same book they became a warrior, would they need a warrior alt? Paleclaw 23:00, February 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. If a cat is given a different description, they'd only get an alt. for the rank that they were currently when described. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 00:03, February 24, 2011 (UTC)

...So it doesn't say Declined on the title, so what's going on exactly? Sorry, I'm pretty new to wiki. When can I start a new cat if this is gonna be declined? Paleclaw 04:16, February 25, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedleaf alt. - DeclinedEdit

[[]]In Eclipse she has a white tail tip. Comments? Yatz私の話 22:58, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Does she need an alt for that? THats really minor, so I think you might need to ask. Mistystar Trust the fire within... 23:33, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed. It's just her tail, not the whole cat. An alt. isn't needed for it. This will be declined. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 23:38, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brook (Q) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Brook_copy.png]]Brook as a Queen I know she is'nt but ~SPOILER~ (she will be)

Moved to the correct section. Since The Sign of the Moon isn't out yet, this charart is unneeded. This will be declined. And remember to sign with four (~) ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 21:35, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker alternate - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Warriorshortm..png]]In A Clan in Need Rainwhisker is seen as gray and white.

So I did it. Comments?YatzTalk 16:32, February 15, 2011 (U

He has no ear pink or eye color. add it!!! Oh, and put this in the correct section

Actually, he does have eye color. Although, yes I did forget the ear pink.YatzTalk 21:01, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I added the ear pink.YatzTalk 21:11, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

We don't give alternates for being described as something in the manga, so this'll probably be declined. Sorry. :Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:18, February 15, 2011 (UTC)</span>]]

Besides, he was an apprentice then.ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 22:32, February 15, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 21:35, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brook where small fish swim(Q) - DeclinedEdit


I'm Dovestar Dawn. I would like to join this and do the Queen charart for Brook. I will need help with shading and adding the stripes that Brook has. So...yeah. No one has "Reserved" this yet soo. Figured I would try. :) Dawn of Ages 16:15, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but I don't think she needs one yet. Mistystar Trust the fire within... 17:13, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed. The Sign of the Moon isn't out yet, therefore so Brook cannot have a queen charart. This will be declined. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 21:20, February 22, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 05:26, February 26, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream alt. - DeclinedEdit

She's mentioned as pale gray. Comments?  YatzSliversword Let it snow... 12:26, March 2, 2011 (UTC)[[File:Sil_.png]]

Silverstream doesn't need an alt. image. There was a discussion about it and it was decided she didn't need one. So sorry, but this image will have to be declined. Rainey 12:34, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 13:46, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 23:21, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe.alt - DeclinedEdit

He is seen with silver stripes. Comments?  YatzSliversword Let it snow... 01:57, March 2, 2011 (UTC) [[File:Darkstripe.alt.png]]

First of all, Darkstripe was a rogue when he was described with silver stripes, second, I think someone already had this up for approval. I'm not sure of the reason for it being declined so I can't say that this will be declined, but it might. Darken the pelt so the stripes can stand out, center the ear pink and darken it. Add shading and highlights. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 02:07, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

It was declined because it was basically a swap of his coloring. [Like saying a zebra is black with white stripes, or it being white with black stripes.] This will have to be declined. Sorry. Rainlegs 03:28, March 2, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 23:21, March 3, 2011 (UTC)

Scorchfur(A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Scorchpaw.png]]Here is my First Charart, hope u like Cinderpelt123 16:01, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

Scorchfur already has an apprentice image, so this will have to be declined. :\ --Quiet!... 20:54, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

No a better one then the one on the page Cinderpelt123 23:21, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

If the current one needs improvements, it will be tweaked during the next tweak week. Mistystar Trust the fire within... 23:42, February 28, 2011 (UTC)

The one on his page doesn't look so bad. The highlights are just too bright, that's all. --Leafstrike-- 20:39, March 1, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above--Nightshine 23:21, March 3, 2011 (UTC)