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Ice (Ki) - Declined

[[File:KitShortMa2.png]]

Ice as a kit. Comments? YatzSliversword Ah, spring... 23:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the eyes, add hilights Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:22, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and move it to the right section XD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:24, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

It still hasn't been decided wether he gets a kit image or not. Nightshine 23:24, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

And Mistflower already has this reserved. :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:33, March 23, 2011 (UTC)


Sparrowkit (K) -Declined

[[File:Sparrowkit.kit.png]]Comments? Crystalstar999 03:09, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, this will have to be declined. His color of tabby was never mentioned. Leggo 🏈 03:17, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs is right, sorry. Declined.  Darkhallows...Mew? 06:12, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Some new user added a kit to Sparrowkit's page that wasn't even put up. Can someone check that? Nightfern 18:48, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I removed it. No worries. =) It was probably a new user that didn't know the rules very well. Skye Meow 18:51, March 30, 2011 (UTC)
Well, wait. Tornear was called a tabby tom but I don't think HIS color was ever mentioned. I don't think this should be declined. {{Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 22:22, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake!}}

It's a newer rule that we decided on around the release of Night Whispers. [Rainlegs, not logged in. :P]

Graypool (W) - Declined

[[File:Graypool.warrior.png]]Here she is. Not awfully proud of this one...but whatever. Comments? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:24, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the chest and blur it. The shading on the tail also looks a bit blotchy. Otherwise, nice job. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:26, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading along the haunch, separate the shoulder highlight from the tail highlight, and add shading to the top of the head. Looks very nice, otherwise. :) Mossy go away. 01:31, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded What did you mean by "separate the shoulder highlight from the tail highlight", Mossy? (Also, why do we call you Mosspool and not Dovesong??) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:22, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart, she likes to be called Mosspool incase Dovepaw's warrior name is Dovesong, lighten the earpink a tad. Maplepool 02:34, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, no. XD She just dislikes the name Dovesong now. Make the ear-pink a bit smaller, and you still need to blur the shading some. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:46, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I hate plain coloured cats. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 03:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:34, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink colour is from Graypool's elder image. I don't think it should be changed much. XD ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 04:35, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Desaturated a bit. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 04:48, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Wildheart, I mean that they should be two separate highlights, not attached like you currently have them. :3 And I hate solid coloured cats, too . . they're impossible. Blur the neck shading a bit. Mossy go away. 06:35, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Am I missing something? I don't remember Graypool being mentioned as a warrior anywhere, but nobody has objected to this, so am I just completely forgetting something? XD Anyways, looks great, maybe thicken the shading on the right (our right of coruse, not her's) side of the tail? It looks kinda odd, almost like a gradient on the tail. Sorry, I'm horrible at explaining things. :P ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:41, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the sshading a bit. Icy123 14:31, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a bit or make it a little more of a reddish color. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 16:23, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlight on the tail a tad; or lighten the shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:03, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well, Willowbreeze is getting one, so she should too. And Mossy; the highlights are on completely separate parts of the body. How do I change them so that they're "not attached"?? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:11, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

It's hard to explain what I mean . . . but instead of having a shoulder highlight and a leg highlight, you have a shoulder highlight that extends onto the leg. And yeah, she gets one becaise she was seen being made a warrior and Fallowtail named them, right? Mossy go away. 23:22, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

OH! You said shoulder highlight and TAIL highlight. I was confused. And it's fine; it looks wierd if I do it any other way. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:01, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure we never saw her as a warrior. Can you tell me when she was mentioned as one? Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine, wasn't she seen/mentioned as a warrior in Battles Of The Clans? Or at least, in her history, it says that Fallowtail gaves them their names because of this and that, lalala . . . so I'm pretty sure she was at least mentioned as one. Darken the highlights. Mossy go away. 21:02, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yep. What Mossy said. lol... --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 22:59, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps my eyes are playing tricks on me, but the ear pink seems a little. . . purpley. :P And the tail looks like a gradient. Mossy go away. 23:24, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the earpink (I thought it was rather pink, actually) and how do you propose I fix this "gradient-ness"? XD --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

But I'm pretty sure she was never seen as a warrior in any of the books. Sorry. Nightshine 00:15, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well I don't have the book with me, but from what I remember, that means Willowbreeze won't get a warrior image either. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:22, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

But . . . but . . . she was mentioned as a warrior, wasn't she? She gets a charart, then. Mossy go away. 02:16, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

No she wasn't the ONLY reason Willowbreeze is GETTING Chararts, is becuase she was told to be gray, and YES, Graypool, WAS seen as a warrior, Forest of secrets, she was seen as a queen/warrior, so she SHOULD get a charart then, right? Maplepool 20:46, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, Maplepool, the fact that she was revealed to be gray doesn't have anything to do with it - but there's still a reason, doesn't matter if there's one or two. Mossy go away. 22:04, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aliright, since Graypool nor Willowbreeze were seen as warriors this will be declined. Sorry. Nightshine 01:05, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

What? But isn't it enough that she was mentioned as a warrior? Toadstep was kept up, there are plenty of chararts like that up and on pages - so this stays up too. Mossy go away. 22:00, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think it should stay up; Toadstep and Rosepetal weren't seen as apprentices but they got chararts; Barley and his siblings weren't seen as kits but they got chararts... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:19, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

But she was barely mentioned as a warrior. I'm going to decline this for now Nightshine 23:09, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W) - Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.warrior.png]] Comments? Nightshine 04:30, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work. Darken the ear-pink and make it a bit paler (it looks kinda coralish), blur the highlights on the shoulder and flank, and maybe lighten it all a bit? ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:31, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, should I darken the ear pink or make it more pale? Nightshine 04:35, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, that was kinda vague. darken it a tad. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 04:36, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded lightened it a bit, darkened ear pink Nightshine 04:53, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck and shoulder areas. Feathermoon 22:57, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Hm, the shading there looks fine on my computer. Nightshine 00:43, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading does look like it needs to blurred around the neck and shoulder. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:08, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I darkened the shading because it looked to light for me, and I also blurred it--Nightshine 22:58, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, it seems that there's a dark spot on her one paw. Back paw on her haunch. It seems like it shouldn't be there. Should it? Other than that, she looks really good, Nightshine. Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 01:09, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lightn the shading and blur the highlights. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:35, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the middle of her stomach a bit more. ScarletwindStep into theLight 21:52, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, however, the shading on the tail looks off. The light source is coming from the front, but there is shading on the bottom of the tail and highlights on the top. You should have shading around the edges with highlights in the middle. Also, blur the shading a bit. Other than that, it looks amazing. Mossy go away. 01:33, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back legs is uneven. The very right of the back leg is lighter, it's normal colour, however, shouldn't it be darker? Unless I'm seeing it wrong. :3 Lovely charart. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I redid it. Comments? Nightshine 18:56, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:50, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred the neck shading, but I think it looks worse now Nightshine 23:01, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

It looks darker than it should be. How about lightening it up just a tad, then blurring a little more? Cloudskye The Dark Forest Is Rising 17:43, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Can you try and make the ear pink a bit bigger? :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:39, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I did what I could to the neck shading. The ear pink was already big enough so I just made it a little darker Nightshine 22:00, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Blur the shading by her jaw and on her forelegs a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 15:34, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded it's not that noticeable, but I blurred the shading Nightshine 22:02, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great Nightshine! Blur/darken the highlights when they meet the shading on the haunch and chest area. SplookMavinotp♥ 22:58, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't add highlights to this. Nightshine 23:35, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Then blur the shading in the mentioned areas, instead. Mossy go away. 02:13, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur earpink and blur/lighten shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 21:41, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading near the jaw a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 16:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded blurred shading and ear pink. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

So if Graypool doesn't get one, Willowbreeze doesn't either. Does anybody have a book they can check? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:25, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I already checked my copy of Battles of the Clans and they never show up as warriors. I'll archive this soon. Nightshine 01:14, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'm about ready to cry. I wanted to see this one done SOOO bad. :'( *wipes tear from eye* It was sooo pretty!!!Honeybreeze 12:30, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Graystripe.Alt.W - Declined

[[File:Graysripe.alt.w.jpg]]So, I was reading Cats of the Clans last night and I saw that they depicted Graystripe as a black tom with green eyes, so I made him a warrior alt. You can find his alternate image in Cats of the Clan, page 11.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 23:36, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, This will have to be denciled. Manga\illustration mistakes don't count for an alternate. Feathermoon 23:51, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Aww, mousedung. Oh well. How do you reserve character art?(yeah, it's totally off topic, but what ever)Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake! 23:53, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Moving to correct section. Try looking through books. The Erins make a lot of mistakes, that some people don't catch. Leggo 🏈 23:58, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Snow Falling On Stones (To-be) -Declined

[[File:Snow_Falling_on_Stones.To-be.png]]Comments Crystalstar999 05:02, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but this will be declined. No images may be reseved/posted be for the book is released. And i moved this to the right section. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:16, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

And for the future, you must reserve the image before posting it up here. Nightshine 05:25, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Brokenstar (Alt.L) - Withdrawn

[[File:Brokenstar.leader.alt.png]]First charart since I came back, not so fond of this one, might re-do it, and not so proud of the shading...comments? Icy123 00:11, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a broken tail, make the nose black, the ear pink should fill the whole ear, and blur the highlights a tone. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:15, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink doesn't always have to fill the whole ear. It's the artist's choice. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:26, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing, it's too gray right now. The blank was actually designed so that you fill in the whole ear, so do that. Darken the highlights. Nightshine 00:49, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a bit and blur the shading. ScarletwindStep into theLight 00:51, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Add a broken tail, darken the highlights and blur them. Mistfire Spring rain falls 01:16, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, blur the hilights a lot, especially on the chest and haunch Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:48, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: He's...tailless. Somebody do the limp tail for me? because I liek, fail at lineart. --Icy123 00:00, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll do it. Leggo 🏈 00:10, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay I did it for you. I just used the line art from his other leader image and added some light shading to it. You still need to blur the shading, darken the highlights and blur them, make the nose dark gray. And just darken the whole thing Nightshine 00:14, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thanks, Night. I made the nose a bit lighter than the pelt color but it's gray now. I blurred the shading where it was possible not to go in the lineart. I darkened the highlights and blurred them and darkened the image. Icy123 00:52, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see a difference from the old one Nightshine 00:56, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's uploaded right now. Icy123 00:57, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and make them more realistic looking Nightshine 01:39, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Enlargen the highlights a tad and blur them a lot. Lone Wolf 19:50, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlight, it's really blotchy --Leafstrike-- 00:06, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 21:01, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten his nose

Blur shading and highlights, and darken the highlights. Mistfire Spring rain falls 22:04, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. Mossy go away. 02:51, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the hilights on the chest and tail; enlarge all the highlights, and make his nose pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:33, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I changed the tail again for Ice; she asked on the IRC. Darken the whole thing, it's to light. Blur the highlights a lot and darken the shading. Nightshine 01:03, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Gray/black cats dont have pink nosesMaple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 02:55, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

It's not pink: it's gray. What Nightshine said. XD --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 03:02, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

They eyes look redish; make them more orange. Feathermoon 03:10, March 31, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Ello, Icy! Blur the highlights, they look to bright. - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 19:29, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I don't think I can finish this. I have just lost interest in this specific piece of art. I'm withdrawing this. Somebody may continue if they please. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:37, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Toadstep (A) - Withdrawn

[[File:Toadstep.apprentice.png]]For the third time, please actually give me an explanation as to why this was declined. Second time I posted it, no one said a word. It was just declined. Why? And you can't do that, without telling me! Especially since I asked. Mossy go away. 03:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Again, he wasn't seen as an apprentice. Even though some other characters have images that they were never seen in (which I think shouldn't have happened) it doesn't mean the rule can be ignored again and again Nightshine 04:19, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

We have other images like that up for approval. Right now. The kit images for Barley's siblings. And if those chararts are against the rules, why haven't they been removed? Mossy go away. 21:37, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Frostheart said that they should be put up for approval. Skye Meow 21:45, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I think so. If others were given one before (which is a lot), there must've been a reason. But does anyone disagree? ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:54, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

If Rainy's is staying up for sure, doesn't this one, too? I even talked to you about it, with Rainy. :P Mossy go away. 22:27, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Rainy's is staying up, I think this one should too, this is good, the white could be whiter, but I think Frostheart should say if we need his and his sister's. Maplepool 23:01, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Mak this match his warrior image right now hes black with white patches, his warriors imgae and kit image is white with black patches Maplepool 15:22, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Actually, Maplepool, the markings work fine. On his other one, it shows his back is black, which could extend onto his other side and his chest is also black on there too, and he has a white face like I have here. I kept the white ear, left the other legs black. . . . the markings work. Mossy go away. 16:59, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the black meets the white. Mistfire Spring rain falls 22:06, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. I don't think the transition should be blurred more, I like it the way it is now. The white patch on the muzzle, make it smaller and add more black. Otherwise, 'tis lovely. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:51, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look like the warrior and kit images. Either make the white bigger, or the black smaller in general, it looks like he's black with white, where with the others he's white with black. :/. It's bugging me. Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames 14:25, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black areas a little bit, they seem dark compared to his other images. Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bleh, it looks worse to me now. The shading is bothering me. :P Anyways, Frostheart, where do you want me to add more black? On top of his head or around his chest? And Elorisa, I don't feel like explaining it again (I failed anyways) so go examine his other chararts to see how the markings work. :3 I assure you, they do. Mossy go away. 20:48, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think it needs to have the shading defined a little more. Especially on the black. To me it looks like a blurred flat charart. I'm not trying to be mean ^^; Ivystripe 00:15, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

It looks fine to me, brighten the tail highlight a little. Looks great Mossy. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:46, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Either darken the shading or lighten the places where there is little shading. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:48, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really look THAT flat to me.. And add more black around the muzzle area. ;3 ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 02:36, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the shading. A lot. There are three shading layers and some of them have their opacity all the way up to eighty percent. :P Mossy go away. 02:50, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink, lighten the shading on the white areas a bit, and maybe add a few more areas with white.

I see how it works, but it just doesn't look right to me :/. It looks like a totally different cat... Axel; The Flurry of Dancing Flames 19:35, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, after all we never saw this side of him. Can you brighten the earpink a tad? ;3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:05, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just don't want to do this anymore. It looks bad and nothing will fix it, and I'm tired of it. Mossy go away. 01:48, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Pine That Clings To Rock - Declined

Here's Pine That Clings To Rock. Please leave comments!Mapleheart87 00:58, April 3, 2011 (UTC)Cardinalfire1234

[[File:Pinethatclingstorock.jpg]]

Sorry but is will be declined. Not images may be reserved/posted before the book is released.-ſceheartBlah blah 01:10, April 3, 2011 (UTC)


Harley (Alt. R)~ Withdrawn

[[File:Harley.rogue.alt.png]]Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 22:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Define the stripes a tad more, add a small bit of highlight to the front legs, and give his nose a color. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:17, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the whole thing a bit more and desaturate the ear pink. Nightshine 22:19, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 22:41, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit Nightshine 23:05, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 04:07, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

There are few lighter pixels on the right back leg and right below the tail. Fix those and this will be ready Nightshine 22:59, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a tad or the image. I can't really see the stripes ont he back that well. Also, a few (near the head and shoulder) stripes are really messily smudged. Otherwise, nice work. :] ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:33, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and also, are you doing the gray-black version? I'm assuming you are, since it's the only character description in the trivia. :3 This shouldn't be a tabby, it should probably be two-toned. The trivia didn't say anything about it being a tabby. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 20:56, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I defined some stripes, lightened it and got rid of the pixels. As for the stripes Brackenfur alt., Rowanfur, and Skipper all got stripes when they weren't described with them.If its a big issue i'll change them but i think it's okay. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:00, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but since ginger cats all naturally have stripes. That's why they got them. As for the charart, it looks great but you need to blur the belly and tail shading, and maybe darken/desaturate the ear pink a bit? Seems pretty bright . . . could just be me. Mossy go away. 22:20, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- Brackenfur alt was russet. He got stripes because the original had stripes. Like this one. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:36, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Russet is pretty much just dark ginger, you know . . . Mossy go away. 22:53, March 25, 2011 (UTC)

If so, they shouldn't have been as obvious, but it's too late for that. I think this is fine. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:35, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart, if the alternate isn't supposed to have stripes, and it's up for approval, it's never too late. She's perfectly capable of changing it. Mossy go away. 02:16, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

But i dont think i should have to change it. Its not really your call Dovesong. If anyone else is upset about it i'll lighten them so they're harder to see, but i dont want to get rid on them. Call it artistic license. -ſceheartBlah blah 07:42, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

I personally think it doesn't matter if the image has stripes or not. Make the earpink less...obvious. Lone Wolf 19:36, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- -ſceheartBlah blah 21:04, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and make the earpink more purply. Mistfire Spring rain falls 22:01, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, please don't call my Dovesong. The signature says it all. Anyways, how does it make sense at all to add stripes to an image that doesn't need them? They said, 'dark gray' not 'dark gray tabby'. At this point I could reasonably claim you're leaving the stripes on because you're lazy and think they look pretty. Mossy go away. 01:17, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Skipper didn't get tabby stripes. I remember Nightshine told me that that was the shading, before. And yeah, I agree with Mosspool that she doesn't get tabby stripes. But derp, I can't make this decision on my own. XD Does anyone think that they SHOULD have stripes? If this goes into a longn debate, I"ll make this into a forum. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:22, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't understand why this would turn into some long debate . . they never described him with stripes, he doesn't get stripes. Common sense? Mossy go away. 01:28, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I was just waiting for an actual leads opinion, please refrain from assuming I'm just lazy, because we all know what happens when you assume, And Mosspool/Dovesong, while we're on the subject of your signature, it's actually a violation of the Signature Policy, you might want to fix that. But back to the subject at hand, everything is blurred to the max and if i go any darker with the shading it just looks stupid. -ſceheartBlah blah 05:01, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use layers for this? If you did, you can probably blur it more. If you aren't using layers, maybe try using the smudge tool first. You just need to blur it in the middle, that's all. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:08, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me... --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 05:10, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, oops. Turns out I was viewing it at an odd angle, and my brightness levels were wayy up. XD Sorry for the confusion. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 05:15, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart, I assumed you had enough common sense to realize that if they didn't describe him with stripes, he doesn't have stripes. And please, just stop calling me Dovesong. You could also accuse former PCA senior warrior Hawktalon of violating the signature policy . . . everyone knows me as Mossy and it's what I want to be called. And if you wanted a lead opinion, then you could've said something. Whatever. Blur the highlights and shading. If it's all blurred to the max, then you might want to try smudging the shading and highlights and then blurring it to smoothen the rough look that smudging creates. That always works well for me. ;) And maybe make the ear pink a teensy bit bigger. Mossy go away. 05:47, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well few know you as "Mr. Moose" so please change it. Other people have made images with stripes when they weren't described with them, so why shouldn't she? It's not common sense, so don't belittle her intelligence. The shading and highlights look fine. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 06:02, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

I wasn't belittling her intelligence; but those images were all ginger cats and that was explained to her. It just bothered me that she wasn't changing it. Yeah, no one calls me Mr. Moose, just a joke with my friends :P I changed it, of course. But I think the highlights need blurring. Mossy go away. 06:27, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I just redid it. Didnt really help. -ſceheartBlah blah 20:38, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

There's some stuff next to the whiskers. Crystalstar999 04:10, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the little bit between the chest and the forearm Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the middle highlights Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:37, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:23, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights, and maybe add some highlights to the legs. Mossy go away. 02:52, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded - -ſceheartBlah blah 23:12, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! If you want, it might look a bit better to have the middle highlight a bit more spread out :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:47, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I messed with it a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:48, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit Nightshine 01:12, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

The changes aren't showing but RE-uploaded. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:44, March 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:18, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- everything blurred to the max. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:18, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe add some highlights to the back legs, unless the light isn't hitting them. They just look a little too dark to me. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:59, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- I lightened it a bit but not to much because it is in shadow. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:16, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

This looks lovely, I see nothing wrong. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:31, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before approval? Nightshine 07:03, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the back shading strech all the way along the back. Mistfire Spring rain falls 14:02, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- There is shading all along the back, but i darkened it a bit. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:44, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 17:56, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights,and the legs look way darker than the rest of the image which looks awkward - lighten them. And make the ear pink bigger. Mossy go away. 00:16, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded- If you read 6 lines up, everythings blurred as it can get, but changed the other stuff. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:01, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 05:47, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, Iceheart, I can help you with the blurring if you want. Sorry, I don't usually read anyone else's comments, lazy me. xD Mossy go away. 22:39, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

You can take over if you want, im done with this one. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:45, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wait don't withdraw it! It's been ready for a while now. Repeating 24 hours. Nightshine 22:48, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry about ruining your CBA, but lighten the shading on the back legs. It's really great. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:27, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading to the haunch. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:38, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok im withdrawing this agina. Im tired of it. MAybe I'll put to back up after SotM. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:30, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Larkkit (Lark That Sings At Dawn) (Alt. Ki) - Declined

[[File:Larkkit.png]] I know that we dont have a firm look on Stormfur's and Brook's kits, but it does describe that Larkkit is a tabby and it seems like she takes off of her mother, Brook. It's an assumption, and you can denie it. Any suggestions? Atelda 23:34, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

You can't put it up until the book is released. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:38, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and its not in the correct section either. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:39, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

You'll have to be the first to reserve this tomorrow if you want to do it. Sorry. Ivystripe 23:56, April 4, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Milkfur's deputy - Declined

[[File:93px-Milkfur.deputy.png]] Milkfur. Please post suggestions! ❁Ice cave❁ 20:39, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

There is already a charart for Milkfur. This will have to be declined. --Leafstrike-- 21:27, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

He needs a bushy tail.❁Ice cave❁ 21:30, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well, then it would be fixed in tweak week. Sorry, but thats too minor of a change. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:58, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

And just for future reference, make sure you use the full size image for the lineatrt. It looks like you used the smaller version. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:44, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (alt.W) ~ Declined

[[File:Sandstorm_(Alt._W).jpg]]

Described in Rising Storm on pg. 88. Comments? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:15, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

This picture is in the wrong section. Ivystripe 00:15, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

I'll move it :D Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:18, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:19, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you, Mistystar. Also thanks for fixing my error I made when I tried replying. I don't know why the talk page did that. Anyways, for critique, this needs to be saved in PNG format; I presume it's saved in JPEG? JPEG isn't a good quality format to save in. The shading needs define, both light and dark. Hope I helped :D Ivystripe 00:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Sorry, she doesn't need an alt for being called golden. It's too close to her original pelt colour. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:24, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart's right. Golden and ginger are very similar colours, and if Brackenfur doesnt get an alt neither does this. Sorry. And for future refrence, always make a new heading when puting a charart for approval. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:28, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. --Nightshine 00:41, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Runningbrook (Alt. W)~Delined

[[File:Runningbrook.warrior.alt.png]]

Comments? ❁Ice cave❁ 21:41, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Well, she is pale gray, so I don't think having pale gray fur is enough of a difference... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:54, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

But she is a tabby...Ice Cave 22:12, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

That isn't much of a difference though. Silverstream was described as pale gray and her charart for that was declined. So I believe this should be declined as well. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:22, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah. Sorry, but this will be declined. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:30, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to reasons above. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:32, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Pine That Clings To Rock(K)- Declined

Okay, so everyone else has been posting their new tribe cat images, so here's Pine. Again.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake![[File:Pinethatclingstorock.jpg]]

I moved it to the correct section. Blur the shading, make the earpink a little larger, and brighten the highlights a tad. Leggo 🏈 03:33, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonflight had this reserved first, if you had read my revert on the main page you would have know that. You may receive a temporary ban . -ſceheartBlah blah 03:44, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

WHAT?! I checked the WHOLE thing before I reserved this character art! Do you know what time she reserved it, because I'm pretty sure it was after I did. I swear, though, I had no idea; please don't BAN me.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake!

It's right in the history, go look for yourself. She reserved, and then directly after you reserved it as well, then i reverted you edit telling you this would happen. Moonflight had it first. Sorry. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:53, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, well. Live and learn. If it's okay, I reserved Snow's to-be image.Cardinalfire My fluffy yellow cake!

Dark shadow over water TB- Declined

[[File:Dark.TB.png]]Hey, before anybody says anything about my withdraw of Barley K and the dumb shading, Im not at home so I couldn't use my beloved GIMP, so I was stuck with pixlr. And About the barley, I was really hoping to get it approved before SOTM came out so I could do one of these. I already have my next charart plan for when with one, and if its approved i'll only have one more charart left until i'm a warrior on PCA. Thats my plan and my excplination. Comment feircly! No jokes! Feather 03:18, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the shading a tad more, desaturate it on his stomach and darken it just a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Feathermoon, this will have to be declined. Splashpelt14 reserved it before you. Sorry. Leggo 🏈 03:30, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs is right. And you may receice a temporary ban from commenting, but im not sure if that is a rule. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, But I reserved him really late last night. Nobody had him. I made sure. Feather 13:22, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Sorry, but Rainlegs is right. Splashpelt did reserve this first. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 19:49, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

So does that mean i can take over my barley again? Feather 22:14, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

If you want to. Unless there's another charart you want. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:38, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Dovewing (W)~Declined

[[File:Dovewing.Warrior.png|thumb|left]]I'm so proud of this picture. I know you are going to say to like blur the ear pink or something and yes I know. I forgot about that. :') But this is my first picture! Comments?Honeybreeze 12:00, April 5, 2011 (UTC)


-Lighten the charart, blur the earpink and the shading, and get rid of it on the tail. Use the dodge tool instead of the pencil. 我如何爱春天 雲⻗晴Ice Cave雲⻗晴我如何爱春天 12:42, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Honeybreeze, if you look closely at the charart chart, you'll see that Skystar has already reserved Dovewing's warior image. This will have to be declined I think. Rainey 13:10, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

OMG my heart is crushed now... :'( Honeybreeze 21:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller~ Declined

[[File:Stoneteller.OTS.healer.png]]Suggestions?我如何爱春天 雲⻗晴Ice Cave雲⻗晴我如何爱春天 02:26, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

He needs shading and the mud needs to be blurred or smudged. --Gοldenpelt 02:30, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights, brighten the ear-pink a tad, and add shading to the herbs. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:39, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill the whole ear. Leggo 🏈 02:50, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I will have to delcine this, it is over the limit.   Darkhallows...Mew? 03:56, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The limit is actually 35, so this can stay up. Nightshine 04:03, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

-facepalm- I could swear it was 25. Oops D:.  Darkhallows...Mew? 06:15, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Either add more mud streaks on the tail, or take off that one spot. It seems really out of place. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:47, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Needs shading. Ivystripe 19:07, April 6, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

I thought I had this reserved first...? Moonflight 22:06, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

You actually never reserved this. It will have to be declined. Moonflight 22:08, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. You never reserved it. Sorry, but this will be declined. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:16, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud With Storm in Belly(Alt.E)- Declined

[[File:Cloud.Alt.E..png]]Comments?{{SUBST:User:Thegost/Sig}} 19:29, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know how to move this to the right section, but this is not needed, so it will be declined. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 21:15, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Since this is over the limit, it will be declined. --Nightshine 00:50, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

And you should have asked to join before putting your name on the reservations table and reserving it. Nightshine 00:53, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

She did ask to join. I add them in, -ſceheartBlah blah 01:13, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, sorry about that. --Nightshine 01:18, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly (Alt) - Declined

[[File:Star.png]]Im pretty sure this one hasnt been put up. So here she is. but the thing is that i dont no what her eye color is and if she is long haired or short haired. comments?I POKE YOU!I Will Have A Poking War!! 05:15, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud already has an elder image, so this will be declined. Sorry. Nightshine 02:24, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's her pale gray alt. It stays. Mossy go away. 03:19, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I should actually comment. Blur the shading and highlights, and make the ear pink redder. Mossy go away. 03:53, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hey!I't my image!!!!{{SUBST:User:Thegost/Sig}} 06:17, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know who made it a thumbnail but it shouldn't be one. Mossy go away. 06:47, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, actually I do think this would be declined because someone else had it reserved. Sorry. Mossy go away. 06:58, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she's right. Declining. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:32, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ice (Lo) - Withdrawn

[[File:Ice.L.png]]Ice's loner version. Comments? - Gingertail The Luck Of The Irish... 18:33, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink, so it doesn't blend in with the pelt as much. This looks great! :) Leggo 🏈 19:02, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Aw thanks :) - Gingertail The Luck Of The Irish... 19:15, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and maybe give him a blood clan collar. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 20:00, March 12, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also give him amber eyes, like on his rogue image? Leggo 🏈 04:00, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darkened the shading, attempted to blurr the shading adn highlights, and lightened the ear pink. Added collar, though it isn' t ver good :| - Gingertail The Luck Of The Irish... 14:40, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Move the highlights up on to the middle of his shoulder and hip, blur the shading a bit more, and make the teeth on the collar more noticeable, it looks like the collar is more jeweled rather than has teeth coming out of it. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 15:45, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks a bit flat. Make the shading more noticeable there. :] ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:37, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can you rename it Ice.loner.png? And there is some blurred lineart on the right-back leg, near the tail. RiverpeltStarClan's Chosen One XD 20:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

In his Rogue charart he has a blue collar, not a red one, so you should probably change the color. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:06, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded *sigh* not much better, but I added more highlights, blurred, changed collar color adn fixed the teeth, ext. - Gingertail The Luck Of The Irish... 19:48, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit.  Darkhallows...Mew? 21:41, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

Dry making the ear a little more reddish-pinkish instead of pinkish Feathermoon 01:03, March 16, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Brighten the highlights. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:00, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink. 98.22.152.78 23:39, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Since he's in bloodclan, i belive he needs dog teeth reinforced in his claws. Right? Feathermoon 00:10, March 20, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Good point, Feathermoon. And blur the shading a little more. Mistfire Spring rainfalls 17:35, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

I checked his rouge version and he didn't have teeth on his claws, so wouldn't that look weird? anywho, Reuploaded, I brightened the highlights and blurred the shading. Should I make the shading darker? I think it should be darker, but i realized that after I reuploaded it :| - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 20:31, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah darken it a little bit and desaturate the earpink. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:43, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

Claws can easily be added to his rogue image on tweak week. So for now I think he should have claws. You might want to use Scourge as a refence. Feathermoon 02:17, March 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Add some shading to the middle of the belly. They aren't just flat surfaces, remember =D --Wildheart Living with only my thoughts. 06:56, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pupil angle upwards. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:13, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make therpink look more real, it looks too....ah, dark and fake. Maplepool 22:32, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:16, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I am, parden my lack of reply. Reuploaded Now, I'm not sure what color to make the earpink, so which would look more normal? - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 20:42, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Samples

I'd say around one. That's the closest to what I would use for a grey cat, though I would use a more red-hued pink. --Gοldenpelt 20:54, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

The first or second look good. Add shading to where the haunch meets the body and upwards and where the front leg meets the body and upwards. Looking good. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 22:45, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the tail is too light, and the body shading is really dark. Lighten it a bit. Mossy go away. 02:58, March 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think the paws could use a little bit of shading. Other than that I think this is pretty good! I hope it gets accepted! :) Ivystripe 16:46, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Lighten the shading on the body a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:35, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

And blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:36, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 00:40, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Please don't decline it! My PhotoPlus is all screwed up and I need to wait until my dad fixes it, I don't know when that will be. But I'll upload the new one as soon as it gets fixed. - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 16:35, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Gingertail, would you be okay with me declining it until you fix your computer? You can always resubmit it afterward.  Darkhallows...Mew? 02:55, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm fine with that, I really want to do a SOTM charat before they're all gone :3 - *Gingertail who's too lazy to log in*

Actually, I'm just going to withdraw from this. I started doing Stone Song's leader image, but I told myself I wouldn't reserve and upload it. But then I realized it looked pretty good, and I decided to give up on Ice's and reserve Stone Song. (My PhotoPlus got fixed an hour or so after I decided to let Darkhallows decline it) - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 18:53, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

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