Willowbreeze (W) - Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.warrior.png]]Found out that her warrior image was declined, and my Stone Song Leader image was currently declined, she is. I like the way I did the shading. Comments? - Gingertail The air is getting warmer!

18:15, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

It was declined because it was deemed unneeded. Mossy go away. 18:24, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) - Declined

[[File:Thistleclaw.warrior.alt.2.png]] Constructments? I didn't know what to do for his markings, so I just gave him this for now. Redlines, please? Mossy go away. 20:32, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Is this supposed to be an alternate? Because Thistleclaw already has an image. If it is an alt., you should probably put Alt. W. Iveh Yo! 20:43, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, his current charart is how he was described in the manga, this one is how he was actually described. So it probably isn't an alt, the other one would be. Mossy go away. 20:48, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur it. Wonderful job, Mossy. ;3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:52, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ahh, I gotcha :3 I didn't know that! Iveh Yo! 21:07, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm a little confused, what is this image for? Thistleclaw already has a warrior image. Nightshine 21:12, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah but that one looks like the manga, when Night Whispers came out he got a new appearance and needs a charart for it. :P Mossy go away. 21:14, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, well maybe we should save it for Tweak week? He would have to have his other images redone as well. What does everyone else think? Nightshine 21:23, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know . . . you would have to redo his images anyway, so why bother waiting until Tweak Week? It requires just as much work, maybe even more. Mossy go away. 21:31, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Nightshine. This should be done for tweak week. Waiting is just the way its done. But this is very good though. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:46, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Why does it matter? Why wait when we can just do it now? During Tweak Week, the image will be redone anyways. There really is no point to it. Mossy go away. 21:48, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Stop agreeing with eachother, it's getting annoying. Anyways, I think we shouldn't save it for Tweak Week. Mossy is correct, it requires as much work as a regular charart, why wait? There's no point, you're just aguring for no reason. --Appledash the archer of tokai 21:54, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
Well, for one thing, I tried to do an image for Thistleclaw's in-book description, and you know what happened? They told me it'd be done on Tweak Week. If it was rejected then, I don't see why it shouldn't be now. --Gοldenpelt 23:44, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for sharing an opinion Icestorm. If this one is just going to be redone, why ven have a tweak week for any of them? -ſceheartBlah blah 21:57, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Wait what? If you mean for Thistleclaw's image, I guess we wouldn't. :3 If you mean for all images, because not all of them need to be redone. XD Mossy go away. 22:05, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thistleclaw's current warrior image is how he was described in Bluestar's Prophecy. This isn't much needed. But if it is, blur the shading and make the earpink more visible. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 23:39, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

No, his current image is how he was described in the manga. He has no image that depicts how he was described in Night Whispers. He does need one. Mossy go away. 00:03, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart and Nightshine are right. This should wait til Tweak Week. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:34, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I believe he should have one. In Sign of the Moon, he was described as mottled as well. Appledash the archer of tokai 02:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
I hate to butt in, but this is getting us nowhere. Maybe we should make a forum discussion for this because if it applies to Thistleclaw, wouldn't it apply to any other cat who needs a charart redone for whatever reason (being revealed as a long/short hair or needing something a large as mottles or tabby stripes, etc.) ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:24, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Sigh. I didn't think we were going to be tweaking his images before now, but I posted it now and since it's gonna be redone anyways, why take it down? I just don't see the point. Mossy go away. 04:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
And I have one more thing to say. We have very few actual chararts to do, but oodles of images to tweak. So it gives us something to do now and lightens the load for Tweak Week. Mossy go away. 04:56, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Tweak week (or month) is when we do this, it is the time specifically designated for this type of image. We have enough to do at the moment, this should wait until then.  Darkhallows...Mew? 05:34, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
We don't really have much to do. There's the image rush from SOTM's release, but after that is just the scarce alt, and you know, nothing is set in stone. We can change rules. :3 Mossy go away. 05:57, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Bumblestripe - Declined

I couldn't upload the cleaned-up version of Bumblestripe in the other post, so I'll post the cleaned-up one here:

[[File:Cleaned-up_version.png|thumb]] I don't think he has any too-noticable specks now. Please don't sound too mean when you say it can't be added into the article.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 07:31, April 12, 2011 (UTC)</p>

Cloud with Star in Belly (Cloud) Declined

Here she is! Comments? Lightningstar of ThunderClan 19:56, April 13, 2011 (UTC) [[File:Cloud.Elder.png|thumb]]

It is not Tweak Week. Do not post a charart for this time unless it is done fully by you, not a tweak. This will be declined, and next time, do not post it in the discussion area, but the images pending approval. I will move the section for you. --Appledash the archer of tokai 12:08, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Russetfur (alt.W) ~ Declined

[[File:Russetfur.warrior.alt.png]] Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:04, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

I don't hink Alt. for mangas count, nothing has colors in mangas, so she wasn't white, she was ginger, so I don't think she gets it, so....I don't know what the leads will say, but I don't think it'll stay up. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 23:41, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

She also needs a reference before she can have an alt. ScarletwindStep into theLight 23:53, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

This exceeded the maximum amount of images allowed. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 00:43, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, it didn't, one of the images up had been declined. Mossy go away. 03:30, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nothing's been decided on manga alts yet. I'll have to decline this.  Darkhallows...Mew? 07:59, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

In the Tigerstar an Sasha series, especially in Return to the Clans, Russetfur ist always described with a russet fur. But in the pictures she has a white belly, a white muzzle and white paws. I think you can draw a new alternative Version of Russetfur. - Aki-chan86 16:07, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shy Fawn (Q) - Withdrawn

[[File:Shy_Fawn_Queen.png]]Ok can someone do the eyes for me cuz I'm having trouble. I'll add shading after that. And fill in the white pixels. Dawn of Ages 12:25, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed. Sure, I'll help you with that later. ScarletwindStep into theLight 12:35, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Try looking at Warriors Wiki:Charart/Apprentice Tutorials. They'll teach you how to do all of those things. Moonflight 12:36, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Do you still want me to do that shading and stripe-pattern for you? ScarletwindStep into theLight 01:56, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple of empty pixels near the tail and back foot. You want to fill those in. :) User:Nightskyy/sig 01:57, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Add Earpink,Eye color,shading and highlights Crystalstar999 02:35, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I talked with her and she said she still wants you to do the shading and stuff.Honeybreeze 12:38, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Dawn of Ages should at least try to do this stuff by herself. She should read the tutorials and try. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:47, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Look at my advice below Iveh Yo! 19:36, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

May I help to finish off Shy Fawn?-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 06:02, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean by 'finish'. Anything in specific? Dawn of Ages should do most fo the work. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:11, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

She means like do what she needs done. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 20:04, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I agree with Frostheart. How else is she going to be apart of this project if she has others doing the work for her? If anything should be done for another user it should be say transparency or maybe fixing a lineart or a blur issue, or if a user turns the project over, but the markings (yes I know she didn't ask for this) and eyes? Please! Not trying to be harsh, but everyone has to learn. It took me at least a month to get my first image done, mainly because I didn't have the right program. Dawn of Ages, simply download GIMP or use to assist you in this.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:17, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Give it a try Dawn, I know that you may think its terrible or whatever, but we are here to tell how to fix it. It's not meant to say that you are bad at this. I'm sure that if you tried you would be surprised at what you could do, using the apprentice tutorials. I use pixlr, its free and easy to use. Try it, and it isn't completely brown, I see white spots. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 02:06, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
I'm going to withdraw this actually. If anyone would like to do this go for it!Dawn of Ages 15:07, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

It's up for grabs, y'all. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 22:42, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Ya know what, I'll take over this. I'm sick of waiting for an answer on Lark when there's a chance I won't even be able to do her. I'll withdraw her now. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:07, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, sorry Paleclaw, but Frostheart just reserved this like five minutes before you posted this... Sorry. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 23:19, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darn, just missed it. Oh well. That's fine. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:54, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lark That Sings at Dawn (Ki) - Withdrawn

[[File:Lark.kit.png]] I could have sworn I just posted this, but I don't see it anywhere.... huh. Anways, here's Lark! She was just described as a pale tabby in the browse inside for Sign of the Moon and I won't be able to get the book for a couple months. If she's actually given a color anywhere, please tell me and I'll change it to that. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:47, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her left ear, not the ear-pink. Actually make sure the whole left side is a bit lighter. If this isn't really help just tell me. E-SCOPE IS HERE 18:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading seems a tad dark to me. Ivystripe 19:18, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

I don't think she will get a charart if she was never given a specific color. If she is describe as a color in the book though, she can get one. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:49, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bue Speckletail got one, and for a while Longtail was only described as a pale tabby and he go one. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:49, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail was mentioned at silver in Rising Storm, I believe. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 00:05, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Plus we changed the rules not too long ago, so some of those chararts are mistakes... Anyway, if somebody finds a colour, you can do it =) --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:20, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the color should be brown because since it's Brook and Stormfur's daughter, then shouldn't she somewhat resemble one of them? Atelda 00:43, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Really, the Erins have never paid attention to genetics. I'm going to buy the book tonight, and I'll see if it has a reference for her color of tabby. Rainlegs 00:44, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Rainlegs to the rescue! Darn that browse inside. It won't let me search it =( --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:51, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I know about Longtail being mentioned as silver, but we only recently got the reference for that. Alright, thanks a ton Rainlegs! So I guess I'll just wait and not work on this till we find out if there's a reference? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:46, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

If it says tabby and nothing else it means brown. --Spottedleaf!¡ɟɐǝןpǝʇʇodS 04:35, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't say just a tabby, it says a PALE tabby. So would that mean light brown? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:43, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

On page 146, Brook says that Lark looks like her father, so that's pretty solid evidence that's she's grey. --Gοldenpelt 20:53, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:57, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw, but Lark would probably be a lighter grey. Also, the ear that is heavily shaded, the bright ear pink looks out of place, add the shade to it as well. The other ear is fine. Iveh Yo! 23:35, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Goldenpaw, too. I couldn't find any other reference, except for that one. :P Rainlegs 00:05, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, light gray it is! :) I'll work on it tonight and I've decided to redo the shading since I was using a guide before, but I honestly know how to do it on kits already. XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:49, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you can do that. It says she looks like her father but that doesn't mean she's gray, there are other ways to look like someone. I look a lot like my sister but she has brown hair and hazel eyes and I have blonde hair and blue eyes. It's not actual proof. Mossy go away. 07:06, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Wait, does that mean I can do this still or not? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:18, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I'm pretty sure you can, we have a ref for her colors, so I think it casn stay up...Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 14:06, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chin shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:09, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Alright, I guess I'll keep working on it unless one of the leads say no then. I blurred the chin shading as much as I could, but I'm not sure it made all that much of a diference. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:55, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she should get an image right now since her colour wasn't specified. Nightshine 00:26, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenpelt, said, on page 146, that she had the same pelt color as Stormfur, and hes gray, so, shes a pale gray tabby, isn't she? Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 00:39, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

It didn't outright say that she was grey, but it said she looks like Stormfur. Beyond fur color, the only thing I can think of that would make her look like him is body type, which isn't nearly as a notable in terms of looking like him as fur color. --Gοldenpelt 01:00, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Naaaw, so since Nightshine said no will this be declined? D: Could I get a final answer soon, cause I wanna grab this other charart that's open if this will be declined. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 06:14, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Have we come to a decision on this...? --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:52, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

That's what I'm wondering. :/ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:02, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

I dunno. Maybe leave a message on some of the leads' talk pages. But for now, lighten the earpink. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 23:05, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I'm just gonna take over Shy Fawn and withdraw this. Anybody who wants to can take over this, but I'm tired of waiting to find out if it's gonna be approved or not. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 23:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Nobody reserve this yet! Paleclaw, sorry, but Frostheart already reserved Shy Fawn. See my comment under that section. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 23:21, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, that's fine. :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 02:56, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stone Song (Leader) Declined

[[File:Stone_Song.leader.png]]If he gets a leader image, here it is. Comments? I tried to make the markings like his SC, but idk... - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 18:57, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! Some of the spots look like they have tiny pixils where it's not colored, but I don't know if you meant to do that. Iveh Yo! 20:02, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, but if it would look better with hte pixels filled in, I can do that. - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 20:06, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, let's see what others say. I'm still new to the charart project, so you might want to see what the senior artists say as well. Iveh Yo! 20:19, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I can see that the white pixels are eye-shinies, but they should be smaller. Look at some other leader/healer chararts to see what I mean. Make the ear pink extend farther down into his ear. Mossy go away. 20:41, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

It wasn't actually decided if Stone song should get a leader image. This will be declined for now. Nightshine 21:13, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

But they were listed in the allegiances as leaders, right? Perhaps Ancient Tribe leaders could get a new lineart, since they were different from the Clans, yet not Healers of the Tribe. - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 11:34, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Since only two cats were ever leaders in the Ancients, we shouldn't have to make more line art just for that. Nightshine 00:16, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Nightshine is right. It's unnecessary. Mossy go away. 05:04, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lion's Roar (Kit) - Declined


I'm really proud of this. I especially like the tabby stripes :) Appledash the archer of tokai 21:53, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Icestorm! Blur the chest highlight, and blur the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:57, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink, make the nose a bit pinker, and darken the shading a tad. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:18, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look too paintbrush...y, if that makes sense. Either go back and smudge them, or redo them. They just look unnatural. I hope I helped. Iveh Yo! 23:53, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivystripe. I'd also say makey them a little less green-tinted and a little more browny-orange. =) Make the chest highlight a bit bigger and add some smaller stripes. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 03:12, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more visible. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 21:22, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur stripes. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:42, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 22:25, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

It has been over a week... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:25, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of work. Anyone can take over or reserve. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 00:43, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Pebble (CG) - Declined

[[]]Pebble is my fave. Tribe cat ^^. Comments? User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 02:51, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink. --Gοldenpelt 03:00, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights, ear-pink, darken the shading a tad, and make the mud a bit more noticeable. ScarletwindStep into theLight 03:10, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 16:14, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the rightish side of Pebble. Make it lighter. Also do caveguards have legs? E-SCOPE IS HERE 18:17, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Does the mud have shading? I can't tell if it does or not, but some of the shading is kind of hard to tell. That could just be me though. Ivystripe 19:16, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

I'm pretty sure caveguards have legs, E-scope ;) Add some mud to the tip of the tail --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:33, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. I agree with Wildheart too. E-SCOPE IS HERE 03:31, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The mud is under the shading layer, so yes, it does have shading. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 15:04, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the mud streaks. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:33, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur shading and brighten highlights. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:55, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the hind leg. It should be in shadow. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:50, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

PS you still working on this? --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:41, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Its been 6 days since the last upload... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:41, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Nightshine 22:42, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

DarkStripe (Alt. W)- Declined

[[File:Darstripe.warrior.alt.png]]Here's DarkStripe! Any suggestions? I know my EarPink is horrible.

He already has an alt.User:Cardinalfire1234/Sig 22:25, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

And please sign with 4 ~'s next time. I think this will have to be declined. --Leafstrike-- 15:52, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah sorry. His alternate image was already made. Declining. Nightshine 22:11, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Night of No Stars(Queen) ~ Declined

[[File:Night.Q.png.png|thumb|left]]Comments?{{SUBST:User:Thegost/Sig}} 09:12, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Aren't you doing Cloud's elder charart? You can only do one at a time, so unless you're withdrawing the other one, this will be declined I think. Plus, Goldenpaw arleady has this reserved. Sorry. D: ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 09:42, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Hi, can I get Pine or Lark for reseve on Charart? Whichever one is free... Please! I made a Dovewing warrior Charart but I had to delete it when I found out that Skystar had already taken it. User:Hazelwing of LightningClan/Sig 18:01, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Pine's already reserved and Lark hasn't been decided on yet, since she was only described as a pale tabby, and it doesn't clearly state her color. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Swiftbreeze was also just described as a tabby, yet she got an image, so I don't see why not. And yeah, Pine is already reserved it. Have you withdrawn Cloud or not? MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 21:14, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's very small.

No need to comment, this one is declined. And there was a rule that was created after the release of Night whispers that if we don't know the color of the cat, we can't make a charart for them. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:21, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Crowfeather (W) - Declined

Today I noticed I joined the Character Art, so if you could give me a few tips on how I can contribute. Enjoy this picture I put up for approval of Crowfeather. Comment Please? I wanna learn how to be better at Pixlr.!

User:Applestorm/Sig 01:18, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

oops, I forgot the picture, well here it is,User:Applestorm/Sig 01:21, April 23, 2011 (UTC)[[File:Crowfeather.png|thumb|left|Isn't this awesome, hope you like!]]

This will have to be declined as Crowfeather already has a warrior image, and chararts should be in full view not thumbnail form, plus this is in the wrong section. Mossy go away. 01:31, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to join the project, I'll add you in, but please, read the guidelines before you do anything! Mossy go away. 01:33, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, nevermind, you already joined. But please, read the guidelines! Mossy go away. 01:35, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

I was looking for the guidlines but I couldn't find it so thanks for the link!

User:Applestorm/Sig 15:47, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt(Medicine Cat) Alt- Declined

[[File:Cinderpelt.MC.Alt.png]]I'm having extreme trouble trying to do the foot. I've tried so far 5 or 6 times. Can someone PLEEEEEEEEEASE HELP!Light to the night sing the song of life 12:29, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Where was she described at light gray? Darkhallows Enter the cave? 12:34, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

OMG I FORGOT!!!!!!!! I have to do the tabby part!!! *looks shamed* Light to the night sing the song of life 12:49, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Consdiering she was mentioned as a light tabby in a chat, I'm not sure if it counts. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 14:09, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry; but I agree with Darkhallows. That was just a mistake of the Erins; they probably mixed her up with Cinderheart. Koisplash 14:19, April 19, 2011 (UTC) 14:18, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well it said pale gray tabby I think and event if it is a mistake I still think it should be an alt. But if not I'll reserve either Millie or Lark's charart. We'll see where this goes...Light to the night sing the song of life 14:26, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Darkhallows to. And,btw, Lark doesn't get an image yet, I think, since we don't know what kind of pale tabby she is. Oh, and Millie already has her images. Rainey 14:35, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I mean her cream alt because it seems like everyone is agreeing that manga's should get alts.Light to the night sing the song of life 15:13, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Wait till that disscouin is over, incase, it isn't approved, then resver her loner image(If you can XD) Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:14, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Cinderpelt_Lineart.png]]I'm not sure how to add it onto somebody else's picture, but I made a Cinderpelt Lineart from her medcat image. I don't know whether this will be declined or not since it was from a chat, but I figured it wouldn't hurt to make this. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:54, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well since the alternate is only from a chat, it's not really legitamate. This will be declined, sorry. Nightshine 05:23, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (W)- Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze-warrior.png]]Eh , yes I see, Willowbreeze don´t have a Warrior art... this is my little experiment. This isn´t expert work. Leaf-storm 19.52 , April 20,2011 (UTC)

I think we decided against doing a warrior charart for Willowbreeze. Sorry. --Cloudskye 18:03, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Well that doesn't make sense because Violet got a charart for only being MENTIONED. So shouldn't Graypool and Willowbreeze get one too. 18:28, April 20, 2011 (UTC)(honeybreeze)

I said I think. This would be for Nightshine and Frostheart to decide. --Cloudskye

We decided that Willowbreeze and Graypool wouldn't get warrior images since they were never seen as warriors. --Nightshine 22:53, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ah , yes sorry i don´t know that. Leaf-storm 13.04 , April 21,2011 (UTC)

But, neither were Toadstep and Rosepetal... Moonflight 13:32, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Umm Moonflight, Toadstep and Rosepetal have been seen as warriors.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 04:47, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
I think Moonflight means they weren't seen as apprentices. And Barley, Snake, and Ice all got kit images from only being MENTIONED as kits. I agree that Graypool and Willowbreeze should get warrior images. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:12, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt.W) - Declined

[[File:Blossomfall.warrior.alt.png]]Blossomfall's alt. Described like this in SOTM, page 131. So...I chose long-haired because that's what I did for her regular image, and green eyes because she has green yees. Yeah. Comments? --Appledash the archer of tokai 00:08, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

It wasn't actually her they were talking about. The brown tabby they were referring to was Brokenstar. wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:57, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

I guess it'll have to be declined then. Mossy go away. 18:29, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Bluestar.alt.kit.png]] Bluestar was described as dark gray in Bluestar's Prophecy, so here it is! Comments? - Golden Sun Before Dawn Daughter of Brook and Stormfur, legend of the Tribe 13:09, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Looks wonderful Gingertail! Blur the earpink a bit more. Rainey 13:24, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

We weren't going to do alternates for this. 17:32, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

The unregistered user above is correct. Dark gray is too close to blue-gray. wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:52, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

That was me. My stupid computer keeps logging me out, despite being remembered on here. DX Mossy go away. 01:59, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

So this will be declined? --Leafstrike-- 16:22, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yep. wildheart spring rain ♫ 20:48, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't this be archived? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Barley (K) - Declined

[[File:Barley_K.png]]Okay, as of Frosthearts comment on Violet, she said that even if its one sentence they get one. So I'm going to see if Barley's Kit version won't get Denciled this time. If it is, i got a back up plan im saving. This is the picture it was at when it was dencied.

Feathermoon 14:52, March 24, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 22:39, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded=.- Comments? :) Feathermoon 17:30, March 25, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Define the change between black and white areas; they look like they are bleeding into each other. Blur the earpink a bit and make it smaller --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:38, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Try to have an equal amout of black and white, and as Wildheart said, define them. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 17:39, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 01:43, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-done- Okay i re-did this, I had no idea how to fix the spots without ruining it. :3 Feathermoon 23:16, March 27, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The black and white division needs to be defined a bit more. You can just use the smudge tool and then blur it lightly if you don't want to redo the whole image =P --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:20, March 27, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- i worked hard on the shading and spots :3 Feathermoon 23:39, March 28, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

The shading needs to be a little more defined, it's hard to tell where it's at Ivystripe 00:17, March 29, 2011 (UTC)Ivystripe

Okay, i did my best but I cant darking the shading anymore. The black spots are getting too dark. Reuploaded. Feathermoon 01:36, March 30, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Lighten the black spot on his right (our right) its FAR to dark, its blending in with the lineart. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 00:59, April 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Feathermoon 13:30, April 1, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the nose colour, darken the shading on the white areas, blur the black a little more. Nightshine 07:00, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

The black patches still look rather dark in my opinion, almost the color of the lineart but it may be my screen. Also the patches on his stomach seem like they are smudged in with the white in stead of blurred. Blur them more.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 14:12, April 2, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- okay i fixed the lineart and lightened the spots a tad, and darkend the nose. Feathermoon 18:49, April 2, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon
The black markings look crowded and awkward, I don't really know how to describe it . . . the ear pink is very blurry and kind of hard to see and dark, and you need to darken the shading. Mossy go away. 00:13, April 3, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded- PLEASE can someone help me with the shading? i'm desprate! everytime i try it gets worse! All i need is shading help. And then im good. Please? anyone? Feather 02:02, April 3, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

I'd help.... but I'd probably make it worse, so I won't XD the white parts need to be completely white (shading excluded) and right now they have patches of gray on them. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 03:48, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

But people keep saying to darken the shading on the white so I did, and ^^thats^^ what I end up with. Feather 17:28, April 3, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Well maybe you need a better light source. Where's your light coming from right now? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:28, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ummm the....left? Feather 22:27, April 5, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Maybe you should take a look at Nightshine's tutorials if you're not sure about the light source =) The light source is one of the most important aspects of a charart, in my opinion XD --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:49, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um....Reuploaded I think i made the white to....gray...But i did it Night Shines way so, yea. But i REALLY need help with the highlights! Its killing me! Feather 19:15, April 7, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

This looks good! Highlights aren't needed though, so it's fine. Make the ear pink a little lighter and this will be ready. Nightshine 01:08, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. Sharpen the patches. Darken the shading. Mossy go away. 03:38, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Ear pink lightened, And mossy, I don't really think the patches need to be sharpened. And as for the shading, I can't darken it because the white will turn gray and the "black' spots will become, well, actual black. Feather 16:12, April 8, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Darken the ear pink. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where black meets the white. Mistfire Spring rain falls 15:12, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't blur the division of black and white any more, just because it'll end up a little bit too blurry. You could smudge the division if you really think it's necessary. Redden the earpink a bit, but keep it at the same size. It looks good right now =) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:26, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded- finally found time to do this...two minute job...Feather 13:44, April 12, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Blur the ear pink a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

This looks good; I think you should lighten the shading a little in the left black patch. Koisplash 07:32, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

You should do more black on his tailSandstormrocks32 23:01, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Barley.kit.png {{SUBST:NOSUBST|User:Moonleaf:)/Sig}} 23:17, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the markings less . . . pointy and straight, darken the black, and darken the shading a lot. Mossy go away. 18:01, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? If you are, make the earpink a bit more gray. Not too much though. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:47, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a long time... blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:48, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks pretty good but try to light the ear pink just a tad Sandstormrocks32 23:03, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

She hasn't worked on this since 4/12, so I think this should be declined. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:05, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

yeah it should be declined 23:07, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. --Nightshine 00:54, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool alt - Declined

[[File:Leapool.alt.png]] Here it is! I think the highlights might be a bit bright.... Spottedstar 42 Says ,"Happy Easter, all cats!":) 23:15, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to correct section. Does she even get an alt.? --Leafstrike-- 00:11, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

If you can find where she was described differently then that would be great. But right now this will be declined. Nightshine 00:35, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Screech (PH) - Declined

[[]]Comments welcome. Crystalstar999 10:51, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Add some more mud streaks and please put this in the correct section =) --Leafstrike-- 17:06, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and rename this --Leafstrike-- 17:07, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the right section. Make the eyes match the prey hunter ones here (obviously without the eyelashes). --Gοldenpelt 20:54, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink should be reddened. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:26, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the mud streaks into the fur more. Splook it's a long way down. 23:51, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

Add more streaks. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:44, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Crystalstar999 08:56, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the mud streaks a tad and add some to the legs. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 00:00, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Crystalstar999 11:21, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear pink, smudge the mud streaks Nightshine 00:59, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Crystalstar999 02:52, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of a few of the mud streaks, it makes him look too brown. Nightshine 04:08, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add highlights. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:28, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Crystalstar999 07:55, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 02:48, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

And make it more visible, then blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:29, April 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add/darken the shading. Moonflight 00:40, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 21:37, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 05:35, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded (Crystalstar too lazy to log in)

Add more mud stripes and darken the shading or add highlights. wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:58, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

You have to be logged in to reupload an image... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:46, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and redden the earpink and add highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:47, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

The mud streaks look really centered arooung the middle area... Sandstormrocks32 23:15, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Technically, this hasn't been uploaded since 4/11. Should it be archived? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:10, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

It hasn't been approved yet, and I think it should be declined since Crystalstar hasn't fixed the things we've commented on and it's been more than a week. And put some highlights on the tail also. Atelda 01:13, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I think that Mistystar meant that this should be declined. It HAS been quite a while... wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:11, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work --Nightshine 06:06, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Longtail (Alt. W) - Declined

[[File:Longtail.warrior.alt2.png]]I hope this is okay but before he fought Rusty he didn't have the nick in his ear hope its okayWildfire 22:37, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think this is a big enough change to need an alternate image for. Iveh Yo! 22:49, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ivystripe is right. A nicked ear is something that would be tweaked and already has. This is not necessary. It will be declined. Sorry. ScarletwindStep into theLight 02:10, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

okay then :( oh well i hope i can still do scourge. Wildfire 03:56, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

What do you mean for Scourge? He already has all his images. Nightshine 04:26, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

He doesn't have a kittypet one look at one of the discussions below.Wildfire 12:13, May 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar (alt. L) - Declined

[[File:Pinestar.leader.alt.png]]He was described as tawny in Bluestar's Prophecy. Comments/criticsm? Mistfire 1000 Edits! 18:03, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink and darken the shading. ScarletwindMedicine Cat of SolarClan 18:30, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

There's some blurred lineart on the tail, fix that please. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 19:11, March 13, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the looks kinda weird. Rainey 11:07, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

It should be a bit more orange-y. There's some blurred lineart on the front right leg also. 17:33, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Make the earpink less purply and more red-pink . Mistystar Trust the fire within... 22:52, March 14, 2011 (UTC)

Also, do you have a ref for that? There's nothing on his page. Rainlegs 03:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

I tried posting this thre times but my computer got screwed up -.- theres a tad of white on the tail you forgot to color in, and the highlights could be blurred a tad. - Gingertail The Luck Of The Irish... 20:30, March 15, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink should fill the whole ear. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:28, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't really have to. Looks fine! --Moonleaf 02:24, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

Yes it does have to, thats how the line art was designed. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:41, March 16, 2011 (UTC)

If you want to know what tawny should look like, look at my alternate for Tawnypelt on this page. I think there is some blurred lineart on the haunch. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:18, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

I think this color for tawny looks fine. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:09, March 17, 2011 (UTC)

Same here. On the tail, there's a white pixel in the lineart. Can you fill that in? Echostar229 01:27, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

There's also blurred lineart on the tail. It may have some one of the forelegs but I'm not too positive on that. MINTSTARR There is a traitor among us... 14:07, March 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. '''Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:33, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, make this more gingery (it's too brown right now) and lighten the ear pink. Also make the ear pink fill the whole ear. --Nightshine 18:49, March 19, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little and blur the tail shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:37, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Mistfire 1000 Edits! 17:12, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white pixel on the tail still isn't filled in, so fill that in please. Also, the earpink isn't filling the whole ear still and brighten the highlights more. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 17:18, March 20, 2011 (UTC)

Is it just me, or is there a tiny gray smudge between the tail and the foot? Also, blur the shading. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:40, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Nightflower is right. It needs to be removed. Unless this has already been discussed, brighten the highlights. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 20:47, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe darken the ear pink a bit more, it's kinda hard to see. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:13, March 21, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make the earpink more visible, then blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:14, March 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on the right ear. User:Howl Of Lone Wolf/Sig 20:40, March 23, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good! Define/darken the ear pink to make it more noticable and maybe blur a tad the highlight on the chest. Splook it's a long way down. 23:00, March 24, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 01:29, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

If Mistfire has abandoned this, I'd be willing to take over. Moonflight 17:03, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hey, I'm still working on it :P I'm only allowed to use the computer on weekends, so there will be 5-6 day gaps between each reupload. And Rainy promised on the IRC that she would blur the highlights for me. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:09, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry. Moonflight 20:11, March 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a paler reddish colour. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 00:19, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading Nightshine 05:29, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear pink, it looks too bright. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:17, March 28, 2011 (UTC)

This is up to you, but I think you should fill in a couple more pixels in the eye. It just looks like they are half-coloured in. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 02:41, March 31, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 07:07, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading around the neck just a tad. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 07:32, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Hmmm... I ran into an edit conflict when I uploaded, so it uploaded the image but didn't publish the Reupload notice. Wildheart: The white in the eyes is the shine. Mistfire Spring rain falls 14:09, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading Nightshine 17:58, April 2, 2011 (UTC)

I realized that, I just kind of thought it was too big... usually it's just one pixel. But whatever, it's your choice =P Fix the blurred lineart in the left ear. --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 03:32, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink still seemes unnatural to me. Maybe lighten it some. That pink just really doesn't go with the color in my opinion like it's too bright but too dark. Do you get what I'm trying to say?-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 15:24, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Not really, Shimmerpool... can you give me a sample color I can steal? Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:46, April 3, 2011 (UTC)

File:Ear sample.png<----- This is a color that I'm thinking about. You can always mess around with it to getting it at a tone of your liking of course. Also after taking a closer look at the image I think the real thing that's bothering me is how the ear pink is taking over the entire ear. Possibly add in some of his fur color around the ear pink as ear fur. There's many examples of this, just look at some of the other leaders.-- ♩ Shimmerpool ♪ Never B ♭ ♫ Sometimes B ♯ ♬ But Always B ♮ 01:27, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Leave the ear pink filling the whole ear. Thats how the blank was designed. Just change the colour. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:20, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just a side-note, it doesn't really have to fill in the whole ear. It's optional. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:28, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

...but it's also how the blank was designed, so really, it shouldn't be optional XD --Wildheart Back from Maui; tanless 23:22, April 4, 2011 (UTC)

I know it's hard to get the right earpink on tawny cats like this, but that looks a little, unnatural. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 01:20, April 5, 2011 (UTC)

I could be a bit more red, and lighter. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:31, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading can be blurred a bit :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:19, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Can I join?Scarface9lives 13:32, April 9, 2011 (UTC)Scarface9lives

Reuploaded. Scarface9lives, please place your join request somewhere else. And can someone help blur the shading? Mistfire Spring rain falls 14:54, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help =) --Leafstrike-- 17:15, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Good? --Leafstrike-- 17:21, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Nightshine 00:37, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Darkened shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 17:01, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. It's a little too hot-pink right now ;) --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:17, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a bit redder. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:54, April 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? It's been 6 days. wildheart spring rain ♫ 21:12, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I'm working on this, don't fret ;)

Reuploaded. I made the earpink more salmony. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:56, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. It looks like part of the face line art has been cut off on the left side. Darken and blur the shading. Nightshine 22:50, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I darkened the nose colour. The face is fine, the lineart was already like that. Nightshine, can I have help with blurring the shading?

Dang, it's HARD to get the earpink right on this color cat. X.X It looks a bit too hot pink still. I messed around and this is the most natural thing I could come up with. File:Earpink Pinestar.png Other than the earpink it looks GREAT. I can't see anything wrong with it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:35, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I blurred the shading for you and changed the ear pink. Nightshine 06:30, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Nightshine! Mistfire Spring rain falls 19:19, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

Tawny is a light brown colour, not orange, and the ear pink is WAY too dark. Mossy go away. 18:04, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. The colour looks fine to me. I dunno about the earpink. I thought it was too dark at first, but on second glance, I really like it... wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:35, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the ear pink into the fur a little more oterwise it's greatWildfire 00:50, April 24, 2011 (UTC)

Looks really good! Lighten the earpink a lot and blur the chest highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:59, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. 'Mistfire Spring rain falls' 23:45, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

The ears look purpley Sandstormrocks32 17:40, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:35, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose colour. Nightshine 00:56, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's a little blotchy, so smooth that out with the blur tool. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:44, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Nightshine 06:13, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due t lack of work. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:48, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Pine That Clings to Rock (Ki.) - Declined

[[File:Pine.kit.png]]&nbsp Comments? And, did I name it correctly..? Wasn't really sure what to name it. Wasn't simple, like how you would name a Firestar picture "Firestar.leader.png". So, please forgive/correct me if I'm wrong. Edit: Crap I didn't sign xD. ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 02:58, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

If you saved it as a "png," then I suppose it's correct. But; anyway, nice job! Darken the ear pink a tad bit, and lighten the nose color a little. Koisplash 07:54, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? ℳąφℓ₠ƒя☼ş₮❣ ツ 23:59, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. The earpink is too big, and define it. Nice job, MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 01:23, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy which makes him look mottled. Make the ear pink more visible, and lighten his coat. His eyes are very neon. Mossy go away. 02:00, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Definitely blur the shading. Fix the ear pink, too.CardinalfireMy fluffy yellow cake!

Lighten the whole thing. and try a redder ear pinkSandstormrocks32 22:00, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and define and lighten the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:14, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the highlights Iveh Yo! 00:07, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge/ blur the shading (it looks patchy) and define the highlights and shading on the tail. I think the earpink should be reddened, but don't overdo it. You're the artist so you can do either one. Also, remember to blur the bottem of the earpink. Well done! Atelda 02:57, April 29, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this...? wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:29, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded since 4/22, so its been 10 days. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:06, May 2, 2011 (UTC)

So shouldn't this be declined...? --Leafstrike-- 21:43, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

It should, but not that many leads have been really active lately. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:49, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his -------> side a bit. There's a blotch there. The earpink is almost perfect. Just darken it a tad. I don't think much reddening is needed. Is he supposed to have a gray nose? And blur the inner edges of the shading on his head. It's a tad too sharp and noticable right now. Maybe darken the shading on his <-------- side.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:25, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on his head a bit XXXSpecklestreamXXX 19:06, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:51, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneteller (OTS) (H) - Withdrawn

[[File:Stoneteller (OTS).healer.png]] Ice Cave never reserved this and I had it reserved yesterday. Comments? Moonflight 22:04, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink, darken the shading on the herbs and tail, and remove the brown pixels by his front paws. ScarletwindStep into theLight 22:14, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink on the left side is larger than the right side. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:16, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I really like this one. ^.^ Remove just a bit of the mud streaks. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 22:18, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Moonflight 22:30, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hm, right now he looks like a brown-and-black cat. Make the mud look more like streaks and also make the ear pink more reddish. Darken the nose. Nightshine 22:49, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I kind of like the way it looks like he rolled in mud, instead of just separate streaks... blur the shading though, and make the eyes a little less red XD --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 23:01, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Wildheart. I think it looks nice. Add more shading to the herbs. Mossy go away. 23:17, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

The fur on the toes completly lose the line art, lighten it up a little so we can see the individual digits on his paws, or cover it completly in mud. It looks strange when the lineart gets lost like that Iveh Yo! 23:56, April 6, 2011 (UTC)

I can see all the toes fine. There seems to be a bit of colour outside the lineart by the base of the tail. And blur the highlights (mostly the haunch one). Mossy go away. 00:39, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

AMAZING! I also like how the mud looks. I honestly can't see anything wrong that hasn't already been said. Nice job! :) ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:52, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

I am so insulted...I leave for 2 days because my cat almost dies and my pic gets ignored. (Ice Cave)

I got the ear pink and nose pink from his cave guard image. The eyes as well. Also, the mudstreaks are that different from Night's:

[[]] Moonflight 11:13, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Well is Crag, not Night, so going by her isn't very good, but make the mud streaks a bit smaller Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 21:17, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, they're different cats but I doubt that would effect how mud shows up on their pelt. I think it's fine. Make the nose black and darken the ear pink. Mossy go away. 22:30, April 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. I read in the books that the healers never leave the cave, so I don't think they would need to have mud streaks. Nightshine 00:54, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

But we added mud streaks to queens, and they don't go out either. Mossy go away. 03:24, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with mossy. Healers might actully have mud streaks to blend in with the senery and have protection like if Sharptooth, (when was alive) were to come into the cave, The mud streaks would help them blend in better so Sharptooth wouldn't spot them. This could go for queens too. Feather 22:57, April 8, 2011 (UTC)Feathermoon

Actually, the queens do go out, as shown by Brook in SotM. As beautiful as the mud streaks are, I think Nightshine's right. Sorry... --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:31, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Really? They like go out and patrol and stuff? Or do they just like go out for walks? Did it actually say that Brook got all muddy and stuff? XD Mossy go away. 07:39, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:47, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Then, why does his proceeder have mud-streaks?

[[File:Stoneteller (NP).healer.png]] Moonflight 17:06, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Well when I made that image it wasn't clarified that the Stonetellers don't leave the cave. I think they should just have no mud streaks. Nightshine 00:21, April 10, 2011 (UTC)

Mossy: it didn't explicitly say she got muddy, but she did go out hunting, so I'd assume she did get muddy XD And I'm sorry, Moonflight, but I agree with Nightshine. Make the eyes a bit less red and smudge the pelt colour into the earpink. --Wildheart In mourning for Duckling, my phone. 01:42, April 11, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the ear pink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:52, April 13, 2011 (UTC)

It's nice the blank I made is being used :) The left (our left) foreleg could use a little more gray. He looks more like a brown cat than a gray with mud streaks. It looks amazing though! Rainwhisker567 02:16, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moonflight 19:12, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink a bit, blur/smudge the shading. The nose should probably be black or gray. Darken the herb shadingNightshine 22:25, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moonflight 00:39, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail and blur the rest of the shading. This is nice =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 05:24, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moonflight 13:10, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, this looks awesome! Blur the shading on the chest a little. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:15, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

It won't blur any more. Sorry. Moonflight 19:50, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading a touch. Mistfire Spring rain falls 20:54, April 18, 2011 (UTC)
I can't blur any of it anymore. Plus, it looks fine to me. Moonflight 12:25, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

I can help blur if you want. Add some shading to the belly/midriff on the right side--Nightshine 05:33, April 20, 2011 (UTC)

That's okay. I'm re-doing him. Moonflight 16:22, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Moonflight 21:00, April 22, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge/ blur the shading a little, and dont forget to shade the tail. Define the shading on the tail in other words. Good job, love the herbs, and the earpink is fantastic! Atelda 02:53, April 23, 2011 (UTC)\

Darken the nose. This is very nice =) wildheart spring rain ♫ 03:38, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

This is very good, but I must say his "Cave-guard" cat looks grey, while this cat looks close to being black. Make the nose color the same as his "Cave" cat form as well :3 SunspiritBack in... uh, yellow? 07:45, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Defining the shading and blurring it are not the same thing. Which do you want? Nightshine also told me to make the nose grey, so I'm not changing it. I will darken it, however. I took the pelt color directly from his Cave-guard image, so I won't change the color. Also, the tail is already shaded. Moonflight 13:24, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and darken the herbs a tad. They're a bit neon =P wildheart spring rain ♫ 01:14, April 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading more Wildfire 00:48, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

I'm still working on this. I've been pretty busy, but I'll work on it today. Moonflight 09:47, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? }wildheart~ 02:11, May 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, I'm withdrawing it. I have no time for it anymore, and I'm tired of fixing things that don't need improvement. I can't satisfy everyone. Moonflight 19:13, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone want to take over? -ſceheartBlah blah 19:21, May 8, 2011 (UTC)

I take over.The gost,10:09,9 may,2011,(UTC)

Reserve it, or else someone else will take it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:18, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, blur the shading, and change the heading from Withdrawn to For Approval. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:33, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

get rid of the stray red mark Wildfire 23:44, May 12, 2011 (UTC)

This should be archived for space. The gost (or who reserves it) can repost it when they start working on it. Otherwise this page is going to get way longer than it needs to be XD llwildheartl 06:26, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart is right. Whoever takes over can repost it. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:35, May 13, 2011 (UTC)