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Hazelstar (L) - Tweaked

[[File:Hazelstar.leader.png]]Added stripes. Orginal artist: Honeyfur Darkhallows Enter the cave? 02:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Make the earpink fill in the Whole ear --Bloo!yo

Reuploaded ah, I'm finally getting the hang of smudging in photoshop :D. About time. 'Darkhallows Enter the cave? 03:21, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Define the shading a tad bit more, and blur it on the haunch :) SplookMavinotp♥ 05:23, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Okay, now smudge the earpink and maybe add shading inside to the inside of it, or atleast darken it --Bloo!yo Great work! Darken the earpink a bit more, and smudge it into the ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:13, July 13, 2011 (UTC) The shading looks fine to me, but it can be blurred on the haunch. And darken the shading on the tail. Mintstar This time for Africa! 01:31, July 15, 2011 (UTC) There's a couple of extra spots above his ears. Shelly For a limited time only 03:14, July 18, 2011 (UTC) This hasn't been uploaded in...6 days. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:08, July 19, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work i guess. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:57, July 22, 2011 (UTC)

Graypool (W) ~ New

[[File:Graypool.warrior.png|thumb|left|Graypool.warrior.png]] My first image; Graypool as a warrior. Patch101 01:23, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Sorry, its tweak week, so you can't put up regualar chararts. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 02:05, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Can I put it back up for acception when Tweak Week ends? (When is that?) Patch101 02:28, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Check the guidelines for rules on posting. But for future reference, the image looks fine, just work on the eyes. She has no pupils. Shelly For a limited time only 03:15, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Well, when tweak week is over, you'll be added in as a kit I suppose. Kits cannot post chararts until they've served a month being that rank, then you'll be able to post chararts as a warrior :) SplookMavinotp♥ 03:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC) As an apprentice, actually. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 05:41, July 10, 2011 (UTC) Whoops, error xD SplookMavinotp♥ 16:43, July 10, 2011 (UTC)

Character - For Approval

[[File:Warrior.longfurred.jpg|thumb]]Hi everybody this is my first charart and I'm putting it up for approval! RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:23, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

No, you don't post your own characters, you put up characters based from the real Warriors books. This will be declined, sorry. Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 02:13, July 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, for future reference, don't save images as JPEGs. It causes pixalization. Only save as PNGs. Shelly For a limited time only 16:40, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm (K)

[[File:Sandstorm.kit.png]] Here is Sandkit. I did the stripes in the same style as on Sandstorm (even though I don't like that style very much, I wanted it to match).

The earpinks might need to be changed, and maybe more shading. -Oakfeather, The ultimate Warriors Fantard 17:16, July 20, 2011 (UTC) You can join, but a lead will have to add you in. But you'll be added in as a kit, and kits can't do chararts for a month. You can only comment on images. --Leafstrike-- 14:26, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Okay, thank you. :D Purplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)MudkitPurplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC) It's still in italic or something is it just my computer? Wildfire 22:09, July 14, 2011 (UTC) Are you still having that problem, Wildfire? If so, it may be your computer. Mudkit, make sure to sign with four ~'s, it makes it easier for us to contact you. Also, if nobody else shows an interest in doing Birdpaw before you become an apprentice, you may be able to do that charart. But for now, I'll have to put the delete tag on it. Iveh Yo! 00:09, July 16, 2011 (UTC) Okay Purplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)MudkitPurplebuneary 04:11, July 16, 2011 (UTC)


Hollowpaw (A) - Withdrawn

[[File:Hollowpaw.apprentice.png]] Added the white belly. Original artist: Hawktalon Darkhallows Enter the cave? 03:39, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Blur a bit more where the white meets the brown. Lawliet Light 03:57, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Nice! there's a strip of white right next to the arm/front leg, so make that match in color :) Iveh Yo! 04:06, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Great job! Blur the white part more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:32, July 13, 2011 (UTC) Woo. ;3 Smudge the white, a bit, too. Andmake the earpink smaller. ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 01:57, July 15, 2011 (UTC) Looking good! Ivyheart =P 16:07, July 17, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Moonflight 17:36, July 21, 2011 (UTC)

I've been having problems with my art program, and can't use my tablet at the moment, so... no I can't really work on anything. I'll withdraw this for now, sorry. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 09:37, July 25, 2011 (UTC)

Would anyone like to take over before this is archived? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    00:57, July 29, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 03:06, August 2, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw- Declined

[[File:Birdpaw.png]] Artist is Ivypool11

You can't do regular charart until Tweek Week is over, and you have to be an apprentice to do so. Silverhmm 15:39, August 5, 2011 (UTC)

Silvereye is correct. This will be declined.


Brackenfoot (W) - Declined

[[File:Brackenfoot.warrior.png]] Please decline this if necessary, I see other apprentices putting images up and I wonder if I could do the same. Original artist was Dawnfeather, and I just added stripes. --Leafstrike-- 19:21, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

I asked if I could do it, and if your a senior apprentice then you can do it. I'm not so I have to delete mine. Silverhmm 19:26, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

And this is over the 35 image limint, so this will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:31, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Oh. -facepalm- --Leafstrike-- 19:42, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 03:38, August 10, 2011 (UTC)


Bouncefire (A) ~ Declined

I know I'm not a warrior, but I really wanted to do a picture for tweak week. So I got Icestorm's permission to do so. If you're an apprentice, I don't think you should do this. I wanted to see if it'd be accepted like Jaggedtooth's. And this isn't offical. So here it is. I think it kind of fails though... I'm not sure who the original aritst was. Silverhmm 18:41, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Bouncefire.apprentice.png]]

I don't know what the others say, but you forget ear pink.Leaf-storm,18:48,August 9,2011 (UTC)

Edit: Added the ear pink and a blob of shading that was by his mouth. I used the exact colors from his warriro charart, but it came out like that... Silverhmm 18:59, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Good, and now you can blur stripes or use shading tool for stripes..but it's your cat not mine. Other is good! Leaf-storm,18:58,August 9,2011 (UTC)

I didn't blur the stripes because when I try to on pixlr it won't. Silverhmm 19:07, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Please hole off commenting on this until we have an apprentice/TW decission. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:32, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

If we're gonna hold off the comments for now, I'm gonna decline this for now. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 03:38, August 10, 2011 (UTC)


Mist-Declined

[[File:Mist.png]] Is it ok to make a Character for Mist`s Character art? I made one but I cant suggest it becuase I` a kit. Here is it by the way. I made it, but I added the green eyes because there was no eye color. Fallenstars 02:04, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, you can't I'm sorry, You are a kit, so you can't post a charart yet, and it is Tweak Week, I'm sorry. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:08, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok. Fallenstars 03:13, August 11, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 00:28, August 12, 2011 (UTC)


Brokenstar (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Brokenstar.kit.png]]original artist was Willowheart. I just tore the ears Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make the scars a little deeper on both. Just to match the others. Iveh Yo! 04:16, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait...why does a KIT need torn ears?....On the torn ear on <-----this side is deeper than the one on -----> side Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 14:50, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ears could be torn more on both. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:14, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

The torn ear on <--- side, like the bottom of the ear is bothering me, but i still don't see why a kit needs torn ears, unless he fought has a kit, he wouldn't have torn ears... Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:00, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

He probably did fight as a kit, I guess if it says otherwise in Yellowfang's Secret, go ahead and keep doing this. Iveh Yo! 19:52, August 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darkhallows, are you still working on this? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:02, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Declined to lack of work. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)


Brokenstar (A) - Declined

[[File:Brokenstar.apprentice.png]]original artist was Shimmer. I just torn the ears. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 04:10, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the lineart on the ear away from us. Mintclaw I may be bad, but I'm good at it! 14:47, August 6, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the other ear too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:08, August 8, 2011 (UTC)

Are still working on this, Darkhallows? The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 00:10, August 12, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 00:12, August 14, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar(Ki)- Withdrawn

[[File:Leopardstar.Kit.png]]Here she is, Comments? Paulmer 21:58, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

I moved it to the right section for you. Darken the shading, and I believe she had more spots. Iveh Yo! 22:06, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Ok, The changes arent showing for me yet. Added more spots and darkened shading. Paulmer 22:13, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, define her spots/stripes colors to match her leader. Since the light source is on the left, lighten up the left portion of her arms/front legs. I like this, btw! Iveh Yo! 23:05, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart is blurred. --Gοldenpelt 23:07, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Weird, I got the colors directly from Leopardstar's leader image. Eh, Whatever. Redid the shading, and the stripes. Light source is now from the right. Paulmer 23:49, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Mintstar This time for Africa! 23:53, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 00:04, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Again, Beacuse The shading got out of the lineart, I needed to fix it. Paulmer 00:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure if your supposed to, but, make the nose a bit more visible pink, or add the pink to it. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:16, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make her entire paws brown. --Gοldenpelt 01:55, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Made the nosepink darker, fulled her paws. Paulmer 12:12, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights and darken the shading, great job!!! -- Cherryfur 14:40, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Darkened shading and brightened highlights Paulmer 15:56, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights on her right hind leg less bright, or color it in. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

the highlights look too light, almost white. Bluestar11796 21:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 23:27, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Leopardstar.kit.png, and remove the whiteish spots, they're still there. --Leafstrike-- 02:07, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Paulmer 13:18, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:10, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Im afraid I'll have to withdraw this, My gimp isnt working and I cant work with other programs.Paulmer 23:57, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can take over this. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:13, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Rainflower(Queen)~Declined

[[File:Rainflower.Queen.png]]

Okay, here's Rainflower. I think I did pretty good. The two things that are bothering me are the earpink's shape and the eyes. I may need a little help finding the perfect eye color anyway. But yeah. Here she is! Hope you like her!!!Honeybreeze 16:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The eye color is fine, you just need to add shading and highlights to them. The earpink is touching the ear, so erase some of it so that it doesn't. Iveh Yo! 16:46, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make her pale gray to match her description. Iveh Yo! 16:47, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

There's a couple pixels on the belly and front leg (closest to us.), So fix them please :) Also, add a speck of white to each eye and define the shading once you lighten the image :) SplookMavinotp♥ 17:00, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Where the shading is placed looks a little odd. Maybe follow this guide so the shading makes more sense. --Leafstrike-- 20:26, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make the belly highlight larger. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

I think there might need to be a white pixel type thing in the eyes. Ivyheart =P 22:08, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Ivyheart's right. Add the white pixle in the eye so it'll look better x) --Bloo!yo

Move the earpink over, it is touching the lineart, and Honeybreeze, are you listed? I looked and didn't find your name in kits, apprentices, warriors or Sr. Warriors. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 23:37, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ya sorry you're not a member, and if yo were, you would be a kit, and kits cant put charart for approval. Sorry this will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:46, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:10, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw(SC)(A) - Declined

[[File:Honeypaw_Apprentice.png]]FIRST OFF, Im sorry beacuse I have NO CLUE on how to move this article to the correct section.. SORRY! xD. Anyway this is HONEYPAW <3. Comments? Paulmer 00:26, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be declined. You already have Leopardstar's kit image up for approval. Moonflight 00:32, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

I withdrew it, beacuse my GIMP crashed and lost everything.Paulmer 00:38, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Then, how did you create this? Moonflight 01:56, July 7, 2011 (UTC)


I went ahead and moved this, but if you worked on this, you can work on Leopardstar's kit. This will be declined. Mintstar This time for Africa! 03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar(Alt.L)-Declined

File:Leafstarmanga.pngI think I over did the stripes and shading... But anyway, this is what she looked like in the manga editions. I know it sucks.Moonstream 16:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

We're doing manga alternatives? If we are, blur the shading tons.  <jayce>  16:18, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yep, blur, blur, blur the shading and smudge/blend the brown parts into the white --Bloo!yo 16:30, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we only did them for significant changes, and she is still brown and cream in the manga. I think this might be declined. Iveh Yo! 16:57, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think it might stay up. Get rid of the waste around the tail. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh! White shading is too dark, lighten it but not too much and blur it..other is good,nice stripes! Leaf-storm,18:26,August 18,2011 (UTC)

Ivystripe is right. The manga colours have just too many possiblities to make this a needed alt. Sorry this will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:08, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I dissagree, in the manga she's white and brown, and her leader image isn't even cream and brown, it looks like a brown tabby to me.WildfireHazelxThorn! 20:38, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

We're not discussing her leader blank here, and the fact is this doesnt meet are criteria. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:42, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud With Star in Belly (E) ~ Declined

[[File:Cloud(star).E.png]]Comments? Lightningstarof ThunderClan 21:28, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Umm... This is supposed to be up in the "Images Pending Aproval" section, not the discussion area. FiercestarLeader of RiverClan 17:36, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've moved this for you. I think you shold blur the shading down his back a more. Leopardclawxx 19:11, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks a little bit, it kinda extends below the ear a little bit. Make it a tad bit smaller Iveh Yo! 19:27, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Cloud (Star).elder.png. Cloud (Storm) and Cloud (Star) are not the same cats. Moonflight 19:40, April 8, 2011 (UTC)
Yes, actually, they are. Think about it. The Erins wouldn't make a Tribe elder with a name so similar to another Tribe elders' name from a different book. I'm sure it was just a typo. - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 20:04, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Never mind, I just read the article in the discussion section XP - Gingertail The air is getting warmer! 20:08, April 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, one of the good ol' characters. This is however, wonderful. Make the ear pink a bit more...well, matching the gray pelt. Add shading to the chest and forehead. And, add shading around the haunch if you aren't going to add highlights. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    02:20, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
The heading should also be changed, just so people don't get confused. XP I agree that Cloud with Star in Belly is a different cat from Cloud with Storm in Belly, and besides, if it wasn't this would be declined. Cloud with Storm in Belly already has an elder image. Darken the shading just slightly. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 05:37, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Reuploaded.{{SUBST:User:Thegost/Sig}} 09:37, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is thick and blotchy, thin it out and blur it, and make the ear pink fit the ear, it's a bit messy. Mossy go away. 17:38, April 9, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading thinner, add some to the chest, legs, muzzle, and paws. --princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    19:40, April 9, 2011 (UTC)
Redo the entire image because it would be easier, and use the apprentice tutorials to help you. MINTSTARR That peaceful Hawaiian breeze.... 02:09, April 12, 2011 (UTC)
Ummm..guys, if you looked on the table, you would see that I already reserved this. Whats going on?
Lightningstarof ThunderClan 19:47, April 14, 2011 (UTC)
Lightningstar, you did have this reserved. But you reserved it on the same day this was put up. I say this be declined and you work on it, but its up to the senior warrirors. MINTSTARR You can stand under my Umbrella! 22:07, April 14, 2011 (UTC)

Wait... who reserved it first? Because it goes to them. wildheart spring rain ♫ 00:08, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well... I think i reserved t, did the charart, put it up, got off of my comp. and then whoever did the charart uploaded it and didnt see if anyome reserved it. Lightningstarof ThunderClan 18:08, April 16, 2011 (UTC)

I looked through the edit history and The Gost actually reserved it first. Sorry Lightningstar. Please work on this or it will be declined.Nightshine 22:17, April 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded.{{SUBST:User:Thegost/Sig}} 08:49, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and blur the shading. Mistfire Spring rain falls 16:34, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:26, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ummmmmmmmmm, no, they did Cloud with STORM in belly ALT. ELDER. I did this.

Lightningstarof ThunderClan 20:15, April 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, since they are different cats, there should be one for each, since they were both mentioned as pale gray. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:37, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Cloud With Storm in Belly was described as white. Try to make the earpink more triangular. --Leafstrike-- 21:06, April 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear-pink a tad more too. ScarletwindStep into theLight 21:35, April 19, 2011 (UTC) URGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!! Who is doing this, me or them???????? LightningStar of ThunderClan (not logged in) XD

The Gost is doing this one, sorry. Nightshine 00:08, April 21, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink also looks a tad unnatural. I mean like shade it in the direction of the ear and it goes a tad to far down. when you smudge or blur the earpink make sure you get the bottem, and smudge it to the tip of the ear. otherwise great job, love it! Atelda 01:34, April 22, 2011 (UTC)


Two things

1. I put this up FIRST, and that is My image.

2.The Gost is doing Cloud with STORM in Belly Alt.E, not Cloud with Star in Belly

Lightningstar

It doesn't matter who put it up first, but you're right, you did reserve it. Sorry, The Gost, but this is Lightningstar's. Anyway, Lightningstar, please sign with four ~'s when you're on talk pages. wildheart spring rain ♫ 02:30, April 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningstar, are you still working on this? If so, redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:42, April 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightningstarof ThunderClan 21:28, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumb it, and she was just described as a pale grey cat, not sure why you added those on the back. I can't see any shading on this. Iveh Yo! 23:13, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Make it a solid colored cat, she was never described as a tabby. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, April 27, 2011 (UTC)

And perhaps blur the bottem of the earpink some more, and to bring out the shading, you should darken a few places just a little bit, so you don't over do it. Atelda 22:26, April 28, 2011 (UTC)

The things on the back seemed out of place... Sandstormrocks32 03:27, April 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading and highlights and brighten the earpink. MINTSTARR Want to eat orange ice cream? 00:14, May 1, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Its been a week. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:46, May 4, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, and the person who was working on it first (even though they didn't reserve it first) was putting effort into it. No offense intended ^^; Iveh Yo! 20:31, May 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, i will put up the new version in about 3 days time (sooner). Lightningstar (not logged in xD)

Are you still working on this? Because it's been three days. }wildheart~ 05:24, May 9, 2011 (UTC)

May I work on this?

/\ was me Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 09:00, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

It's been 12 days since Lightningstar reuploaded it. So I believe so. If you do, make this accurate(like, why are those gray lumps there?) Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 20:52, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

I think they were supposed to be stripes, but she is a solid colored cat, so remove them, and add highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:06, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt solid, add highlights and shading, and lighten the earpinkWildfire 22:13, May 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Been working on it for 5 days. XD Lightningstarof ThunderClan 00:51, May 13, 2011 (UTC) If the shading needs work, i cant get it right (GIMP screwed up) Can someone do it?

What's up with the shading? and did somebody upload it on thier page? Sandstormrocks32 01:09, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you with the shading if you want me to. Iveh Yo! 01:51, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. No, Ivystripe, don't help yet. I know GIMP, and I know it can't screw it up that bad. All you need to do is try again with a lighter coloured earpink, and fix the shading so it looks more like the redline on this tutorial. You can also find an earpink chart at the link I gave you. When you're blurring the shading, put the blur tool on 100% and go over it several times. If it's still not good enough, which it shouldn't be, then you can ask Ivystripe (or whomever you wish to ask) for help blurring. I hope I helped. llwildheartl 06:21, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, thnks ivy and wildheart! Lightningstar (not logged in)

You're welcome. That's ok, but if you're still having trouble, just ask and I'll try to help :) Iveh Yo! 16:34, May 13, 2011 (UTC)

No problem. I just want your charart to be your own, not someone else's =) llwildheartl 00:12, May 15, 2011 (UTC

That is about as well as I can shade. Can someone help? D: Lightningstarof ThunderClan 19:57, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'll help one sec... Atelda 20:25, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Cloud(star).E.png]] Ok, so all I did was smooth out the shading shading, you might also want to make the earpink more rounded on the angles. and lighter. Atelda 22:08, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

I dethumbed it and do more hightlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:11, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs more blurring. Sandstormrocks: highlights are optional. Fill in those light pixels on the far ear. Much better, Lightningstar. llwildheartl 22:23, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make it smaller. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and more highlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:11, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Soften the edges of the earpink, and blur it quite a lot. Darken the shading a tad. This is great.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 03:31, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the earpink more of the shape of the ear. Let the earpink curve with it. Also, what Sandstormrocks said: Fill in the blank white pixels on the ear furthest from us.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 03:34, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

I tried, but cant do it without re-doing the entire image. Lightningstarof ThunderClan 21:05, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Then I guess you might have to redo the whole image. You could just erase the earpink and start over... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:03, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. What Mistystar said is what I was thinking. This'll never get approved with that earpink.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 06:02, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

It's actually really easy, you won't have to redo the whole thing. Just color pick the color right behind the ear 9the light grey part), color over the ear pink, then use the right color for it and look at others to see how their ear pink looks. Maybe colorpicking off of an approved charart for the ear-pink might help. Let me see if I can find one to help you. Iveh Yo! 22:20, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

What about Cloud with Storm in Belly's charart? The earpink on that looks good :) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:26, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, that sounds good, just copy her image and colorpick it off :) I linked to it in the previous comment so it's right there. Iveh Yo! 21:12, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Ok.....sound good,but... how do you do that? Lightningstar(not signed in)

Click the image until it comes up in a blank window, then save it. From there, open it with your editing program and then you can colourpick it. I'm not sure what it's like in other programs, but for GIMP, the colourpicker looks like an eye dropper. llwildheartl 00:00, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks unnatural and the color is too pink Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:28, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink and make it more natural; Here is an ear-pink chart for help :3 250px-Ear pink chart

Up-load this in your editing window to get a natural shade of earpink, this is just some optional help =3 SplookMavinotp♥ 00:58, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I use Adobe Photoshop to edit my Chararts. Lightningstar, would you like me to make a third, new version of this Cloud With Star in Belly Charart and put it at the bottom of the section? I'll try to fix the earpink(not only the shape, but colour, too, using the pelt+earpink chart).-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:07, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

I think you could just do that, since this hasn't been re-uploaded for a long time. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:56, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Here it is: [[File:CWSIB.png]]Is the earpink lightened enough, or too much? And is it curled enough? I did my best.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 00:46, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Umm...its okay, but the earpink should be reddened more, like Cloud with Storm in Belly's charart...And it could be a bit more curled/triangular, but its better than the current version's earpink. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:52, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

The shading could be blurred some more. Kittycat, delete the above image, and then reupload it over the image at the top, so it doesn't confuse people =P llwildheartl 23:04, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Still work-in-progress, Sorry uys,about the abbcence,but school homwork has cut into my comp time. It will be uploaded, though, and im also going on vaca june 5 untill the following Sunday.

Lightningstar of ThunderClan

Shading needs to be blurred around the haunch. And a little around the tail. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:19, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink. Try to make it seem smoother, not so angular. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:20, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading by the right front leg could be blurred. Ivyheart =P 23:56, May 31, 2011 (UTC)

So, fix the earpink, blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:12, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

I like it so far, but you really need to blur the earpink. 75.134.29.67

This Should be declined from lack of work.Ivyheart =P

No, He/she was talking about earlier he/she has limited computer time. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within...

I still think it should be declined from lack of work. If he/ she has limited computer time, he/she shouldn't reserve things like this.Ivyheart =P

I don't agree. Give her a chance. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within...

this will be declined, then?Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD!

I guess.Ivyheart =P

Wait for an admin to say that this is declined before declining it yourself. This image hasn't even been given a 'Please work on this or it will be declined'. Leggo 🏈 19:48, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! Don't decline this! Somebody impersonated me- I didn't say that! PLEASE don't decline this! Please... I didn't say that. Believe me... believe me!Ivyheart =P 19:53, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

This won't be declined. As for the impersonator, I found who it was and warned them. Leggo 🏈 19:56, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much! Ivyheart =P 19:58, June 4, 2011 (UTC)

Still working on this.. sorry about the lack of work, but i have not gotten on the comp in a week, and im going on vaca tomorrow, so can someone add me to the vaca list? again, sorry for the lack of work. Lightningstar

The ear pink needs lightening, and it needs to curve with the ear. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:08, June 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear pink, curve it with the ear as Leopardclaw said. Blur the ear pink and highlights. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 03:24, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. :3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:06, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Put the version with the new earpink at the top so people don't get confused. Iveh Yo! 00:03, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur back shading. Mist: Not emo, not a psycho, not a freak, but a loner. 19:10, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

PLease work on this or it will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:48, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back Dovey Newbie! 16:33, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

I could take over :3 ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 20:10, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Why Was i removed from the list? Lightningstar

YA you can take over. Rename this Cloud.elder.png. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:53, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Lightningstar: You were removed because you were probably inactive. And sign with 4 ~'s. Snowdazzle ROAD TRIPPP!! 19:26, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

I can take over this now, 'cause Shy Fawn was approvaled X3 ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 01:04, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I'm on my mom's computer, which sadly does not have GIMP. I did the best I could with Pixlr, which I'm sad to say is only good with Colour Replace and Layers. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 01:18, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

B-B-But I HAVE been working on this. I think someone has removed my posts, because I have been active EVERY DAY. Dont you think its wrong to rip someones FIRST charart away from them?Lightningstar

I'm sorry Lightningstar, but you HAVEN'T been active everyday. You can go to your user contributions and see that. As far as I know, nothing can be deleted from there, so that's proof that you were inactive for a while. Even if you came on everyday, you didn't DO anything. And also, please sign with four ~s. And as for the charart, the earpink's blurred now, so that's good, but it's still really hot pink. I'd suggest just redoing it. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:23, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the ear pink is really bright. You should try making it more like the shape of the ear itself... like, round the edges more ;) But it looks good!! -- Cherryfur 00:00, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you could make the ear so it didn't look like a triangle as much, but this charart's great. Ivyheart =P 13:56, June 26, 2011 (UTC)


Ok, i will have it up tomorow, GIMP crashed again, and can someone add me back on the list?Lightningstarof ThunderClan 16:13, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, so whose charart is this now? Rainey 13:40, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, so I did the color-pick, thats the best i could do with the earpink, blurred and all. If it looks bad, can someone help? Lightningstarof ThunderClan 14:06, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed it. Mistfire is doing this now, actually. Lightningstar took too long to do this, so they were removed from the list and I believe Mistfire took over. Sorry Lightningstar, but you simply cannot come and work on this at your leisure, if everyone did that, almost no articles would have charart. --Iveh Yo! 14:51, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

To me, that's a good color, but the shape is still not exactly fit for the ear and it needs to be blurred more. There are also some white pixels along both ears. The rest looks really good!! Do you want me to help with the earpink? -- Cherryfur 19:16, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

  • starts crying* But I have worked on it, i just didnt get it up because the site wouldnt let me log in, and my mom told me to get off of the computer. ;-( Lightningstarof ThunderClan 14:23, June 28, 2011 (UTC) = saddened

P.S. If im not working on this, can I do a charart for Pepper?

Sorry Lightningstar, and, not to sound rude, but no. You can't do a describsion for Peper, as he was only described as a tom. Rainey 08:00, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, is there any other character that needs art? Im really bored, as Clouds Charart was the only thing i was on the comp for, and now I have nothing to do. ;( Lightningstarof ThunderClan 15:17, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Lightningstar, but kits cannot do chararts until they move up to be apprentices. Sorry :\ Anyways, back to the art, just curve the earpink and make it a bit triangular. Maybe just re-do the whole image, but it's your choice, Mistfire :) SplookMavinotp♥ 01:54, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I know you can make great images, so try redoing it. Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:57, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 03:10, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink still looks weird. Look at an approved image of an elder, how the earpink looks, and copy it. It's hard to explain exactly how to fix it, know what I mean? I think it helps to have a visual aide. Iveh Yo! 03:24, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Also, fix the far ear, it was lots of plain white pixils on it. Iveh Yo! 14:38, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Mistfire? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:50, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fix the earpink; it should be more triangular. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:01, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink; You could make the earpink more triangular and then maybe blur it (earpink) The Stars AlignSummer + Heat = Unhappy Starry 18:11, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Mistfire is still working on this, she's been pretty inactive for a long time. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:35, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined due to lack of work. Iveh Yo! 19:50, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. I think some one else can take over now. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:50, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze-Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.png|thumb|left]]This is Willowbreeze's Warrior image. Up for aproval . Stoneclaw33 August 21, 2011

Willowbreeze is also my first official charart. Stoneclaw33

This will have to be declined. Scarletwind already has this up for approval. Rainey 22:17, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like a previous version of the one up for approval... am I the only one that thinks that?  <jayce>  22:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Correct, Rainey. Declined due to reasons above. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:29, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:16, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Shimmerpelt-Declined

It looks like that there is allready a willowbreeze for approvall so I want to put Shimmerpelt's warrior image for approval. Here she is.[[File:Shimmerpelt.png|thumb]] Stoneclaw33 August 21, 2011 5:26

Sorry, Stoneclaw, but kits can't put chararts up for approval. This will be declined.

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:16, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mitzi (Lo) (Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Mitzi.queen.png]]Ugh.. After some time.. Heres the horrible result Dx (changes arent showing, i made a change without posting, Sorry!) Anyway, Comments? Pearls 23:41, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Just noticed, it doesn't seem to have any earpink...if it does, make it bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:52, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Done and done, However changes are not showing x.X Pearls 00:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the 35 images and will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Birdsong (E) - Declined

[[File:Birdsong.elder.png]]It's my first! hope it's okay, she was described as tabby and whiteOh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue! 21:34, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Its fine, but you should have put this at the bvottom for the for approval part, and this is over 35 images, so it will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:37, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

I MEANT to put this at the bottom but somehow the codeing was messed up and it came here once i noticed i immeadeatly tried to fix it except of couse then my computer decides to have a strage spazz attack i just barley go it working sorry! and it being declined does that mean i cannot use the image anymore because i tried really hard on it, sorry again!Oh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue! 22:02, August 22, 2011 (UTC)


No you can keep it reserved and just repost it when theres lss than 35 images. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:04, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! and sorry again!Oh no! emergency!CanyonsongCandypaw to the rescue! 22:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Well that was well taken. Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:42, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Crookedstar (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Crookedstar.loner.png]] Not sure whether or not this is over the limit, since one charart's declined, and one's withdrawn, but anyways, here's Crookedstar's Loner image. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think this counts since the loner lineart is for a grown-up cat and he wasn't even an apprentice then. I've asked the same question about Hawkfrost, Mothwing, and Tadpole and I think this is the same story. Sorry, Paleclaw, this is still really good. PS. How on earth do you do such awesome tabby stripes? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:35, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

But he was OLDER than an apprentice actually. Remember, he was apprentice late. I'd think he'd get one, wouldn't he? It's like how kittypets get one if they're 6 moons or older. Crookedstar WAS six moons when he was a loner. And thank you! ^^ I don't know! XD I just..... draw stripes..... XD ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:52, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Paleclaw's right. Oakheart was already an apprentice, making Crookedkit around or older then six moons. I can't really tell you exactly how old he was, because I haven't really read CP...but... he was older then a kit. That I do know. I say he still counts for loner status, thus, giving him a charart.  <jayce>  08:26, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, he won't get a loner image and shouldn't even have a "loner name" on his charcat because he always considered himself a Clan cat. Yes, Ravenpaw believes in StarClan, but he's never coming back. Crowfeather and Leafpool gave up their warrior and medicine cat duties for a short while to be together. They originally intended to stay loners. Crookedkit had always planned to go back to his Clan, and always said he was a "loyal RiverClan warrior", and came back to his Clan. It's the same with the cats who went to the sun-drown-place and the cats on the Great Journey. So, no, he doesn't get a loner charart (I've put a lot of consideration into this since I've read the book) Iveh Yo! 13:32, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

But everyone else considered him a loner, even if he didn't himself. I would think he gets one, but that's just me. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 18:52, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know, but Mapleshade told him that "if you stay here much longer you won't. You'll be considered a loner." So, maybe that means he wasn't actually a loner, since he always intended to return to RiverClan. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:01, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

But he was called a loner by his mentor WildfireHazelxThorn! 22:33, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

No, they were just taunting him. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:35, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Whitefang (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Whitefang.Apprentice.png]] Yay! My first image was finally approved XD So, anyway... Comments? Specklestream Let it Snow! 09:27, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Who write this? Yes I know it's Specklestream but, you forget name!! You can darken shadings a little. Leaf-storm,9:14,August 25,2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded (Sorry that I forgot to sign :P) Specklestream Let it Snow! 14:03, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

This will be declined its over 35 images. -ſceheartBlah blah 16:00, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (D) - Declined

[[File:Tallstar.D.png]]I know the eye is dead, and the shading needs blurring. Other comments? LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 08:00, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur black patches, Leaf-storm,9:10,August 25,2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink some more and darken the shading on the chest. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 10:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar was never seen as a deputy. This will be declined, sorry. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 15:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

But in character needing art list is written this:

Tallstar (kit,deputy)

It's mistake? Leaf-storm,15:39,August 25,2011 (UTC)

He was seen as deputy on the app, this is declined because its over 35 images. -ſceheartBlah blah 15:59, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Harrykit(Ki)- Declined

[[File:Harrykit.kit.png]]It's ugly!The gost,14:27,August 25,2011.(UTC)

In the wrong section, but someone'll move it. I'd say blur the earpink and make it more triangular, and blur the shading. Fear the pink mist! 11:39, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Aww, it's cute. I think you should darken the nose a tad. Shelly For a limited time only 12:22, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Cute. Darken the earpink a tad. Grell No question at all! 13:16, August 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

This is the wrong section and over the 35 image limit if it were in the right section, this will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 16:02, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (A) - Declined

[[File:Oakheart.apprentice.png]] Ear pink on apprentices is a pain. Dx Comments? Gοldenpelt 02:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too pink, take it directly off of one of his images. Blur the haunch shading. Define the shading on the tail. Iveh Yo! 02:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

[[File:Oakheart.deputy.png]]See? It's a tad bit duller

Darken the shading on the far back leg (if you know what im talking about xD) Looks great!! Good job :) -- Cherryfur 09:11, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gοldenpelt 16:21, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights a tad bit more visible. Really nice, though! Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 20:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Gοldenpelt 21:33, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice, Goldenpelt. I know how annoying ear pink on apprentices can be...but...can you make it just a tad bit larger? Lawliet Talk 01:35, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, and yes, make the earpink a bit larger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

It's kinda hard to see the earpink, in my opinion. The Stars AlignIsn't there somewhere I can buy snow?

Goldenpelt, are you still working on this? =(  <jayce>  06:03, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

It has been a week since TW ended, and this hasn't been worked on at all. Goldenpelt wasn't active during TW, either, even though he is a warrior, so I think this might be declined for lack of work. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:36, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It probably should. Iveh Yo! 23:30, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. Declined due to lack of work. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:32, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:37, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - Withdrawn

[[File:Flight.preyhunter.png]]Bleh.... this is my first one in.... a while :P Comments? -- Cherryfur 13:18, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the mudstreaks more noticable, and add more of them. Blur the stripes, and fix the eye a bit. Looks great! =D Rainey 13:24, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink fill up the whole ear. Awesome job. Snowdazzle ROAD TRIPPP!! 13:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks, guys :) :) :) -- Cherryfur 13:37, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink now. xD And your welcome! Rainey 13:43, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded lol it wont blur anymore than that :P -- Cherryfur 14:25, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, add shading to the chin, don't make the stripes and mud overlap, define where the muscles buldge out on the shoulder and haunch. Iveh Yo! 15:15, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and brighten the mud so its easier to see. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:23, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Is this good? I had some trouble with the mud because if I brightened it, it was hard to see still :P So how's this? -- Cherryfur 20:45, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken and define the mud streaks. Darken the shading and brighten the highlights. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 20:58, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded grrrrr.... :P -- Cherryfur 21:05, June 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading on Flight's back and blur the shading. Rainey 08:33, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :) How's this? -- Cherryfur 11:52, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great! Although I think there's something wrong with the mudstreaks....Besides that, looks great! Rainey 13:07, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah I agree with Rainey. Can you make the mud streaks longer and thinner? Otherwise, good job! Snowdazzle ROAD TRIPPP!! 16:21, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Lol how's this? I darkened the mud alot and smudged it. -- Cherryfur 13:58, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Darken her chest and under her head. Blur the mud streaks and maybe add some to her legs. Shade the tail. Besides that, it's looking rather good! Fawngaze 22:25, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded :-) Thank you! How's this? -- Cherryfur 22:49, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Put a mud streak on the tail and more highlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:42, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Cherryfur 22:49, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

Muuuch better! I circled some places where you might want to shade though. And maybe you could add a streak of mud on the hind leg. I apologize, all I have access to at the moment is MS Paint XD Fawngaze 03:43, June 27, 2011 (UTC) File:Flight fix.PNG

Yeah, you could use more mud, but great work! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:04, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does this look good? -- Cherryfur 18:47, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

The mudstreaks look better, but blur it more.Rainey 13:12, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded How's this? -- Cherryfur 18:48, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Looks nice. Only think you may need to change is make the stripes more visible. The mud covered them nearly completly. Work on the eye Paulmer 13:58, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also make the mudstreaks a little more scattered and random. Right now they all are going the same direction and they need to look more slapped on. ;3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:09, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge or blur the earpink. Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:43, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:32, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Meh...... does this look good? :P -- Cherryfur 23:33, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink and make the mudstreaks go in different directions. Right now they look too...uniform? Anyways, you might also want smudge the mudstreaks more also. Nice job. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 01:04, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay, I desaturated the earpink, but I am really struggling with the mud. When I smudged it, it just totally blocked out all the tabby stripes... so, basically, I darkened the stripes and made them more visible, but now it just clashes badly with the streaks of mud... Can someone help me make the mud look... you know, more splashed on? Thanks :) -- Cherryfur 12:30, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Where is your light source? Even from above, the limbs would still have light parts. If you're having it from directly above, make sure to add light parts to the tops of the arms/front legs, the top part of the back part (ugh could I make it more confusing -_-) of the foot, and add shading to the bottom of the tail, neck, and chin, or define it if you have some. This is looking phenominal! :) Iveh Yo! 23:40, July 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm failing EPICALLY :P -- Cherryfur 03:16, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add one more mudstreak on the tip of the tail? Good job ^^ ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 20:31, July 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know if it is my laptop, but the mud looks......black?(It has got to be hard to make mud look good on a BROWN cat.) Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 22:34, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Anything else? -- Cherryfur 03:02, July 4, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more. Its great! Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:14, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks! How's this? (I'm hoping to get this approved soon! :P) -- Cherryfur 17:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Don't worry, it should. Is there supposed to be mud on the face? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, what's on the face now are tabby stripes and if I add mud to the face it'd block out the stripes. :) -- Cherryfur 00:28, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Smudge the earpink into the ear a bit more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:20, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded sorry i havent been on in a while, my computer is full of viruses and im just glad it would let me log in xP so anyways, hows this? -- Cherryfur 23:44, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't the file name be Flight.ph.png? I always thought we shortened the Prey Hunter part.  <jayce>  08:35, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, it should...blur the shading on the front leg. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:32, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 14:10, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I'm soooo sorry guys, I dont have time for this anymore!! I tried my best, though. Someone can take over. -- Cherryfur 20:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (D) - Declined

[[File:Tallstar.D.png]] I know this was declined because of the 35 rule, but now this the 35th image. So, Comments? LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:36, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur more where the white meets the black. Where's the light source? It seems there's no shading on the chest.  <jayce>  09:05, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading on the haunch.  <jayce>  09:05, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the earpink a tad. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:14, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Give him a pupil. Shelly For a limited time only 13:04, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    14:06, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

The White and Black look cool. Add a pupil though. (The white part of the eye)

Tallstar was never seen as a deputy. This will be declined. Sorry. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:02, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't he mentioned as a deputy in the Warriors App? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:12, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I just checked it. It says the names he's been known by (tallkit, tallpaw, talltail) and it gives a book reference from when he made Onewhisker deputy. That's it. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 22:15, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, okay. Just making sure. =) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:31, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Loudbelly (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Stormbelly.png]] So here`s Loudkit (Belly)! Any comments? Fallenstars 20:01, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the Shading/Highlighting. Also, Blur the ear-pink a tad and add transparency to the background. ;)

Twilightheart The Stars Align... 20:03, August 26, 2011 (UTC)


Moved to the correct section. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:05, August 26, 2011 (UTC)



Don't forget to color in his nose ;3 Misty! 20:23, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Isn't this over the 35 imag limit? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 20:56, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, this is over the limit. This will be declined. Sorry. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:00, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

( Ok. But can I reserve the kit image untill when they do have space? Fallenstars 21:10, August 26, 2011 (UTC)
Sure, that's fine. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:31, August 26, 2011 (UTC)


Archiving. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 23:28, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Brightsky (W) - Declined

[[File:Brightsky.warrior.png]]Woot. so i herd u liek mudkips??? ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:36, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job, Nightflower! Lighten the earpink just a tad, and brighten the highlighs on the head a bit more. Atelda COLLABRO hella yes 03:39, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Bee-oo-tee-fool! Reminds me of Mapleshade ;) Add a light part to her front legs/arms, and to the top of her hind foot. Iveh Yo! 03:51, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 04:32, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is so good! :) blur the highlights a bit! But, super awesome job! ;D -- Cherryfur 09:13, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

so u herd rite!!! But yes, this is amazing xD. Darken the stripes a bit and blur the highlights. Great job! princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    11:44, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights a little to bright. I don't know how to make it less bright but, blur it as everyone else says. And, yeah, it looks a lot like Mapleshade! Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 20:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks to.....violet colored...and Mudkip is a pokemon, a very awesome pokemon. Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 20:45, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading. I like this! ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:06, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 22:43, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - lawl. GIMP crashed on me and didn't save my layers, so it's gonna be a little hard to edit it. Oh well; might redo it later :P ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 22:58, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shadings to dark. Lighten it up a bit. Overall really nice! Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:30, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Just blur the shading along her back a tad more. Leggo 🏈 00:29, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The colours in the white look all messed up. Blur it out or change the image to png., because the white has like a rainbow in it. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:24, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the neck shading just a tad? Otherwise, this is amazing! Lawliet Talk 01:27, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome! lighten the front leg. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 15:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm gonna redo this in a bit. Oh, and Iceheart, I can't turn this into a .png, because if I do, I won't be able to upload it. Also, excuse late uploads, Sims 3 and laziness are a deadly combination :3 ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 01:20, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 03:53, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Looks better than before :3! The leg shading makes the white fur look kinda tan-ish.

Sorry that ^^ was me Snowdazzle¹²³Lets count numbers! 21:55, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Someone can take this over, Nightflower left the wiki. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:54, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

I can :) Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 20:04, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really pink. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:15, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Her white fur looks pale ginger, make it look white. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:46, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Alright, I ran the desaturate tool over the white. I think it worked, but the changes aren't showing (I think). Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 01:22, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Her fur looks gray-brown and her ginger looks pale ginger. Maybe copy the colors off of File:Broken Shadow.queen.png's charart? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Brightsky's description just says 'ginger', so it can be any shade. The changes aren't showing, but I *think* I fixed the white...xD. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 18:02, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, you got it! The marking on her tail looks a little "straight" towards the middle part, it's just a preference but maybe make it flow with the shape of the tail? Iveh Yo! 19:40, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

GORGEOUS! Other than what Ivystripe said about the tail stipes, I see nothing wrong. Awesome job! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 04:08, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Is it me, or does the ear pink look a little too red? Maybe tone it down a tad. Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 18:11, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks blotchy. Also, lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:46, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks fine to me Ginger. Blur the shading on the haunch, this is great! ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 14:57, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the cream colored fur with the white fur on the tail a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for a week. Are you still working on this? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:18, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll leave it until Sunday before I decline this. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 05:50, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:57, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) - Declined

Since I am not a kit anymore, I put Mudfur's warrior image for approval. Any comments? Stoneclaw33 August 27,Mudfur_(W).png 2011 01:31pm

Moved to teh correct section aaand..de-thumbed it xP srrys, but this is over the limit. This'll probably be declined 8I --Bloo!yo 20:40, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

You're right. This is one over the limit. As far as I know, you can still keep the image reserved though! =D  <jayce>  20:42, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, Moonflight already has this image reserved. Stoneclaw, next time, please read over the table before you reserve a charart.  <jayce>  05:07, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sharpclaw (KP) - Declined

[[File:Sharpclaw.kittypet.png]] Ok, there are two CBA and one declined image, when it will be archived there will be room for this cat. Right, there he is. Leaf-storm,9:50,August 28,2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

It's still over the limit at the moment. It will probably be declined until room opens up. Looks good, though. Shelly For a limited time only 15:26, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:01, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Magpie (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Magpie_Kit.jpg]] I had problems with the shading. Comments? Salcie 20:16, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Again, this is over the limit, so it'll be declined =.= ^ Did you not see what I posted in on the image above? But you can still reserve it if ya like! --Bloo!yo 20:18, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Ach, that awkward.... sorry.

I did reserve it, but I thought it said that after 2 weeks, you lose claim on the character. I didn't want that to happen, so I thought I could just post this here and it would become the 35th slot when it became open. Uhhhhgggggg.... sorry again for the fail. Salcie 23:05, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Blackclaw.apprentice.png]] I'm a ninja, Fleck was reserved, so I switched over to Blackclaw's apprentice! Comments? Ivyheart =P 01:20, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

You cant delete things from a talkpage. Its against wiki rules. And this will be declined because it is over the limit. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (W) - Declined

[[File:Mudfur.warrior.png]] Bleck. Here it is. Badger with comments and criticism at your will. Moonflight 00:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but this is over the limit. But for future reference, lighten it. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Tigerheart (Alt. W) - Declined

[[File:Tigerheart_warrior-alt.png]]Nobody reserved it so I thought I could do it. But I messed up the torn ear. Sandstormrocks32 16:53, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm, not bad, needs some work;

  1. one make him more golden colored, like his aperentice image is, this is more a horrid yellow-green
  1. number two

You might want to copy the red line that was done for his image that was up before this one;

File:Tigerheart redline.pngcopy the colors for it too

  1. three

Darken and blue the earpink some more and make it smaller. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 18:05, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks but it might take a while becuase I'm trying to replicate it. So it might take a while but i am working on it. Sandstormrocks32 18:31, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Almost done...Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:30, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Much better. Darken the shading, and lighten the earpink. Blur the stripes as well. llwildheartl 22:18, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

(and smudge if you want) Wildfire 22:27, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured the striped as I could Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:38, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Tigerheart.warrior.alt. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:40, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more evenly and either add more or make the current ones thicker. Desaturate the earpink. llwildheartl 23:01, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did as much as possible but it was really hard to make the stripes thicker and blur the stripes but I did my very best Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:09, May 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded i made the stripes bigger and i changed the ear pink. I hope the changes show! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:01, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Run over the stripes with the smudge tool to give them a sort of "point". Darken the belly/legs. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:00, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:00, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded When I reupoad my computer says I have to rename it and I can't do anything about it so I keep having to change the name in someway. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:47, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you can still upload it onto the same image and keep the same name on the wiki file, even if you rename the file on your computer. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded The shading was driving me crazy! But i still have to change the name. I don't know what to do. And it's when I'm inserting the picture. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:46, May 16, 2011 (UTC)

CBA?! 75.72.59.54 02:08, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes look kinda pasty and the highlights don't go through them. It's like the stripe is over the highlight. Stretch the highlight down the tail rather than leaving it on the tip and darken the shading. ScarletwindStep into theLight 04:28, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

MUCH better, blur the pink a tad, do what Scarlet said, and whoever said CBA, that is for the leads to do, not so random person, to do. Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 08:16, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

okay 1.go over highlights again and 2.to Reupload the charart you click on it then you click on the little box thing in the bottom right corner then you scroll past the two pictures of your cat and click on 'Upload a new version of this file' and find it on your computerWildfire 11:45, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need highlights/shading too. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:53, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Wildfire I clicked modify and I had to do the same thing Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:58, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

Its too light. Are you sure you copied the colors from the apprentice alt? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:40, May 17, 2011 (UTC)

I got it from the red line one but I'll darken it right now

Reuploaded Sorry ^ that ^ was me. I darken the whole thing now Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:10, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Now the stripes don't have shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:14, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I put some more hightlights and shading Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:19, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights some more, darken the shading a tad, and blur the stripes. Leggo 🏈 01:46, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and the shoulder and face highlight. This looks great, Sandstormrocks.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:51, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could someone blur it on GIMP for me please? (Sandstormrocks32 not signed in)

I would blur it for you, but I don't have GIMP. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:51, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

I can help you. Imma talk to you on our userpages. Iveh Yo! 22:25, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured as much as i could but could somebody blur on GIMP please? But I did darken just a little bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:48, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Ok reuploaded for you. I blurred the stripes, some of the shading, got rid of some misplaced pixils, and erased the waste around the erased part of the ear. Hope I helped :) Iveh Yo! 23:00, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights, darken the shading (I can't really see any) darken the stripes a bit and define them. Nightshine 23:18, May 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:33, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Looks much better with the highlights and stripes blurred. Blur the shading on the bottom of the tail, and make the earpink a tad smaller, as Squirrelflame advised. Blur shading on the front paw closest to us. This is awesome! :)-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 01:54, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

OMG! It looks awesome! Darken the shading. Rainey 11:24, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm having the worst time ever with reuploading! :( Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 20:52, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are still too bright. It makes him look shiny. Also, darken the shading a bit more. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 21:54, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reoploaded I fixed the reuploading problemSquishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:33, May 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes and make the shoulder highlight more oval-shaped. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:59, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the highlights. ⚛Nightflower⚛☣Absol invasion 20:20, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Never mind I'm still having trouble with reuploading Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:34, May 21, 2011 (UTC)

From above. What do you mean you clicked modify? Wildfire 18:12, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this 'Tigerheart.warrior.alt' Leggo 🏈 19:19, May 22, 2011 (UTC)

@Rainlegs Sandstorm is having a problem w/ reuploading I'm trying to help. you can join in on her talk page if you have any suggistions.Wildfire 21:24, May 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed all the misplaced colors and stuff. @ Wildfire thanks for the help with reuploading the problem is now fixed Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:40, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Tigerheart.warrior Maple♥poolI'm a star gazer~ 03:45, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Correction, name this Tigerheart.warrior.alt , As Rainlegs stated before =) SplookMavinotp♥ 20:32, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are too light; darken them a bit, and the highlights look kind of greenish on the face... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:40, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't know how to rename it. Is it possible for somebody else to change the name? Oh and when I press backspace it makes me go back to the previous page Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:12, May 24, 2011 (UTC)

Upload the same file, then name it "Tigerheart.warrior.alt.png". Then replace the old image with the new image. That's how you rename it. --Leafstrike-- 00:45, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, and make sure to put the "delete" tag on it saying it's a duplicate and an admin will get rid of it. Iveh Yo! 01:35, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks kind of blotchy. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:28, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried to change the name but I dont think it's wroking too well Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:41, May 25, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more pale, center it, and blur it. Add shading. Blur the stripes. The highlights are too bright and need to be blurred. And there is blurred lineart on the right foreleg. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 02:01, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip Mintstarr. I also fixed the other misplaced pixils Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:19, May 27, 2011 (UTC)

Better. Try to blur where the highlights meet the actual pelt color and/or darken them. :) SplookMavinotp♥ 02:51, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blured as much as I could and i darkened the highlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:34, May 28, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job!! You might just want to blur the earpink a bit more, and darken the legs that aren't in front. Atelda 00:52, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Did that and I don't think the way Wildfire told me how to do it isn't woking too well... It keeps reuploading the same picture. Is anybody having the same problem? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:42, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

I am, too. Just upload it twice everytime you need to reupload it, and tell people that the correct image is the one under the 'current' one on the file page. Leggo 🏈 02:43, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't understand like, half of that but I'll try to do that next time. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:13, May 30, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights are way too light, they look kind of greenish. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:37, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I did what Rainlegs said to do, and It worked but it's not showing and I reuploaded it like 3 time and it didn't work. But it is under the "current" one on the file page. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:57, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing. The colors don't match the apprentice pic anymore. Also darken the shading, and sharpen the stripes around the shoulder/neck area. And MAYBE get rid of the highlights, as it still makes him likke a bit too shiny, but that's up to you. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 08:50, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

And the earpink is kind of blotchy, fix that. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:17, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded To dark? I don't know what I was doing... So comments?Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:54, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is still blotchy; And the highlights are still too light and too small. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:00, June 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I sort of got rid of the hightlights becuase they were making him look grennish. And I ended up re-doing the ear pink and. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:11, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The changes don't seem to be showing... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:18, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, he is brown make him golden Maple♥poolSchool? Pfft. SUMMERTIME! 08:25, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Does he look better now? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:15, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful! Blur the tabby markings, please. Skye Meow 21:25, June 2, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink looks really blotchy, though. Define and redden and blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:36, June 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's under the current one on the file page. Just to let you know...

Hmm...the shading in the back needs to be blurred a bit more...or if there are highlights right next to the shading...the different shades/highlights should blend together a bit better...I know that sounds sort of confusing...but just try blurring the back shading. Wow I'm starting to ramble ;P Otherwise...this is pretty good. :) TawnytasticYOU'RE JUST AS CONTAGIOUS AS GREENCOUGH MOUSEBRAIN!!!

Yeah, blur the highlights and shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:58, June 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah I can't really blur anymore than this...Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:12, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to have more then four little spots of highlights. Where's your light source coming from? SplookMavinotp♥ 21:04, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Well the light source is between the tip of the tail and the ear.Somewhere between there or in tha general area... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:18, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. A lot. And make them bigger. And darker. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, June 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. It fills up the ear too much. Snowdazzle ROAD TRIPPP!! 20:20, June 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. The ear pnk is too angular at the top corner. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 02:27, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:54, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

Ooh, it's looking much better from when it started! The earpink's a bit too red right now though. Lighten it a bit, Also take the eye color from his apprentice image. This is looking great! ^^ ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 19:05, June 9, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink looks too big. And blur it too. This is a lot better! SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 16:26, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Why does ear pink have to be so hard...Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:41, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink and blur the shading. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:25, June 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad, and make the earpink more triangular, along with lightening it, making it more pink and less red. Maybe add a highlight to the ears? They look too dark to me. This is great.-Kittycat79Kitties Rule! 05:40, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for the tip, Kittycat Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:50, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

I love this character art! I suggest that you maybe lighten the part of the tail that faces upwards and maybe the tip of the un-torn ear? It seems as though the lighting is coming from above in some parts so.... Oh! And maybe you could darken the back paw, the one that is less visible and isn't really "facing" us. Since it is under Tigerheart's body or on the otherside it should probably be just slightly darker! Fawngaze 23:28, June 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Very odd request but I think I did what you wanted Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:28, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Sandy, I don't wanna sound mean, but this whole thing, not right. The highlights need to be more circular, and only on the face and haunch. The shoulder highlight needs to be ovaly, while the tail tip is obvious. Shade the back, legs, tail, mid-back to underbelly, and stomach to chin. Smudge and blur the stripes, and desaturate the earpink. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 19:42, June 12, 2011 (UTC)

Though I did do the shading I just darkened it and put the highlights differently. I don't really know what ^that^ means so I did nothing to the ear pink... I'm not the best in engilsh class Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:45, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

I forgot. Reuploaded

I think this is great and I really like it. CBA? . Darkhallows Enter the cave?

I dont think that was actually Darkhallows, just someone using her siggie, but either way, darken the neck and mid section shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:00, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded You do know that it's the second one on the file page, right? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:58, June 13, 2011 (UTC)

There are some speckledy bits above the torn ear - erase them. Also, make the earpink pinker. LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 15:42, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Are those things gone? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:26, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Some markings look more blurred than other markings. Blur them all again? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 19:37, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the markings, earpink, and shading. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:27, June 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have blured Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:27, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it more, and make the earpink smaller. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:43, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more neck shading. ~Misteh~ Where was I, when the rockets came to life... 22:14, June 15, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and more triangular. Rainey 00:34, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Curse you ear pink! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:25, June 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you lighten up the shading? This seems way too dark. If I'm wrong, then sorry. Lawliet Meow 18:21, June 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded It's your comment Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:14, June 20, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading more? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:29, June 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I can't blur it anymore then this... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:45, June 24, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome, this is great! I see nothing wrong with it. Bluestar11796 01:41, June 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. This is beatiful! CBA? The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 10:40, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry for the interruption, but the tail highlights don't match with the body highlights... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:04, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded done. I think I did what you wanted Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:48, June 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and thin out the shading. Mintstar Tick tock, the arena is a clock. 17:00, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:32, June 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading needs to be lightened a little and the haunch highlight needs to be a little more.. circular? x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 02:26, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Circularerised? Whatever, done. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:13, June 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add a small highlight to the tip of the tail, or just brighten it. SplookMavinotp♥ 04:01, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I brightened it Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:46, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading by the jaw, stretch the shading up to the tip of the tail, and move the highlight on the face onto the muzzle. The Star that cannot Return to the Heavens 19:27, June 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed my best with the highlights Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:14, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the shading more. It's touching the highlights too much. And blur the stripes. Mintstar This time for Africa! 02:51, July 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on the bottom of his arm closest to us. Iveh Yo! 14:42, July 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Man I can't do much more to this! Arg! But sorry I was away; I was camping Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:05, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but the highlights are still too bright. You seem to be having problems with them. Do you need any help? ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 10:54, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded No. But I think I got it now Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:30, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy, blur it more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:49, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blured. Man I wish this would get CBA'd! I've been waiting and there isn't anything for me to do anymore Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:08, July 8, 2011 (UTC)

Thin out the shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:00, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger and more round, it looks like just one streak running down his side. Also desaturate the earpink a bit and blur it. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 13:43, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded FYI it's the second one on the file page. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:25, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Tigerheart.warrior.alt.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:46, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

And blur the highlights more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:50, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Thin the shading; it should not go that far from the back. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 14:08, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tryed tha shading again. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:07, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Fix up the ear pink; make the bottom of the triangle more flat, it's sort of angling down to the right. Maybe lighten it a tad. {{SUBST:Stargaze66/Sig'}} 18:29, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Done Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:41, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

I think you sould redo the shading/highlights. It looks really inconsistent and needs to be blurred. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 01:00, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the highlights don't flow unto the shading well. Perhaps fix that and center the earpink a bit more. SplookMavinotp♥ 15:01, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the front ear torn instead of the back. That's how it is on his normal Warrior. And the ear pink is REALLY red. Desaturate it a bit. ♥ Paleclaw May StarClan be with you ♥ 01:42, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yeah can someb body help the back torn ear? I don't know how to fix it..... Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:35, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Idk how to explain it...use layers, and copy the old ear off. Maybe you should just redo it... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 16:08, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the tail. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 20:58, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights --Bloo!yo 00:51, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:43, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

>_< Yes I am I was just having a hard time posting. And I can't blur it anymore and I even blured it on Gimp to I can't blur anymore than this. But I did my best Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:11, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Erm..

1. shading looks inconsistant; wheres your light source?

2. highlights look really bright and out of place

3. earpink looks WAY too bright and saturated; de saturate it more

4. blurr earpink too

5. shading need more blurring

Sorry if Im pressuring you 8| --Bloo!yo 00:50, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little bit. Moonstorm88 15:32, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, do you want me to take over for you? I heard the kit system went bye-bye :P This is seriously taking a long time 8I --Bloo!yo 16:45, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I don't mind waiting as long as I get it done. I am working very hard on this. And the light sorce is between the ear and the middle of the tail. And I did everything as best as I can. I really think it's good it's just that people keep asking the same things and I can't do it anymore! I will continue but please keep in mind that I am trying my best Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 16:54, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, just telling you that its not a problem asking for help. Aaannyywaaaayysss... darken the earpink and the stripes look a bit rounded at the tip~fix that please xP --Bloo!yo 17:07, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I know you've been told this countless times, but the shading and highlights still don't look right. The highlights are positioned funny, are kinda to bright, and need to be blurred. Any chance of you redoing the shading and trying it without highlights? You don't have to, I just think it probably be easier. 02:21, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

^Sig fail? 0.o ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 02:58, August 30, 2011 (UTC) (Paleclaw)

Declined due to one month limit. Feel freee to repost when there is under 35 images. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:18, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Fleck (Lo) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Fleck.loner.png]] Here he is! Got my first one approved, now I'm off the the next. Comments? Ivyheart =P 00:37, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:44, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is epic^ blur the shading some and define the earpink a bit --Bloo!yo 00:49, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

wait...isnt this reserved by Ivystripe? Check da chart 8| --Bloo!yo 00:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no! It is? *checking* Ivyheart =P 01:07, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Errggghh, it is! I'm so sorry I didn't check it :( Ivyheart =P 01:09, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good, maybe Ivystripe could just take it from here. WildfireHazelxThorn! 20:36, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Or maybe Ivystripe can lend it to you. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    20:44, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's some orange by his back leg on his stomach that doesn't look like it belongs there... Shelly For a limited time only 21:12, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I wouldn't want to take it from Ivystripe. She can do Fleck, it's no big deal. :D Ivyheart =P 22:57, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, so this is withdrawn? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:01, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think so....I think it is, I mean, Ivy hasn't posted her's, and s/he did reserve it first...Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:04, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I guess I'll withdraw this. I'll have another chance to do chararts. Ivyheart =P 23:09, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll archive this then. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lark (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Lark.kit.png]] This will be the 35th image when what needs to be archived is archived. I didn't see anyone reserve her, so I decided to do her. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 22:04, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Well, this is currently over the page limit, and if the rules are correct, then even if something needs to be archived, you can't put anything up. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:05, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar is right. This is declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:16, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Piketooth(W) ~Declined

[[File:Piketooth.warrior.png]] everyone else does this, so why cn't I, am I not allowed to do it? xD Nah, Jk ;) Once Sedgecreek's Apprentice image is archvied, this will be number 35, so....here is Piketooth! XD he was frggin' FUN to doI like the way it looks, I think I need to darken the tail highlights. But...here he is, comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:06, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Nobody is allowed to do this. It is over 35 images and will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:24, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Meteorstar (Le) ~Declined

[[File:Meteorstar.png|thumb|meteorstar]]well what do you think?

SHAD:"If love is blind, and God is love, and Brokentail is blind, then Brokentail is God." 12:36, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but this will be declined. Meteorstar isn't a real character in the series. Rainey 12:58, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwillow is correct. This isn't what PCA is for. Sorry.  <jayce>  03:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (Ki)- Declined

[[File:Voleclaw.kit.png]] WildfireHazelxThorn! 16:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the heading for you. xD Blur the chest highlight, it looks a bit blotchy. Blur/smudge the earpink also ^^ SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:48, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is over 35 images and will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 17:08, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

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