Piketooth(W) - Declined

[[File:Piketooth.gif]] Yay, my first charart. Comments/crits? Also, I realize that it's a GIF and not named Piketooth.w, could someone please help? I don't know how to fix it. User:Toadstar/Sig 18:16, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

This is over 35 images. This will be declined. Sorry. Jayce (  ) 18:18, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, what? I know, I fail, but what's that mean? orz User:Toadstar/Sig 18:22, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

And also a question, what's up with my signature? :o User:Toadstar/Sig 18:24, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

There is a limit on how many images can be up for approval, and that limit is 35. Also, Maplepool already reserved Piketooth on the 2nd of September. Sorry Atelda insert vague subtext here 18:26, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sol (KP)-Declined

[[File:Sol.kittypet.png]]I realise his collor isn't filled in about as soon as I uploaded it. I did fix it, but the changes aren't showing up again xD. So... he was fun to do. I love torties, and Sol is one of my favorite characters. Ahah, I had forgotten how fun doing charart was. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 11:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

The white tail tip is too dark, it looks like it's gray... şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 13:13, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

NICE! define the shading a bit --Bloo!yo 16:15, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on his belly fill the area you have indicated, right now it's a white dot and he has a black belly. Define the shading on the face, and define the depth in his eyes please. Iveh Yo! 17:21, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his back foot farthest from us is a tad bit dark, it looks silver instead of shaded Iveh Yo! 18:31, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

His ginger patches should be lightened to match his loner image. Otherwise, great job. Ivyheart =P 22:27, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, Ginger, it needs ginger patches. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 23:26, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ah, they were ginger, but the shading was really dark. In any case, reuploaded. I think I took care of everything, even if it's not showing. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 23:28, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe blur the smudging a bit? Fear the pink mist! 05:00, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Personally I think bluring it would ruin the effect and it wouldn't match the other images. If you guys really want me to I could, but I'd rather not. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 07:30, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darkhallows, don't blur. It looks good the way it is. =) Jayce (  ) 07:34, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 20:27, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

I took the color from his other images. Again, if you want me to change it, I will. I just want consistantsy xD. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 00:56, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

It needs some dark brown and tan, so the colours match the other images. And the ear pink doesnt match the other images. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:11, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

The nose looks brown, lighten it a bit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 17:30, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

His right hindleg seems to have a yellow smudge on it. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:33, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

THe tailtip has a birghter ginger smudge on it. :o Ginger Heat wave + Power outage = Unhappy Ginger 19:05, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Darkhallows? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:13, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

If shes not i so shawty taking over, Ill withdraw my Echomist image. I just cant stand it. And i love sols art. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:18, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think I'll give her til Sunday to upload it. Sound fair? ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 21:22, August 26, 2011 (UTC)
I am still working on it. Um, can anyone tell I procrastinate? A lot? In any case I'll do this in a few hours, I can't at the moment. However, after that I might not be on for a few days. Hurricane Irene is expected to knock the power out here, so I won't have internet accsess. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 08:43, August 27, 2011 (UTC)
REuploaded. Darkhallows Enter the cave? 14:21, August 27, 2011 (UTC)
Are the ear and nose colors supposed to be corresponding? Smudge the black on the face a bit more so it looks like the markings on the back. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC)
Blur the earpink more, and add highlights to the tail/shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:57, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the lighter broen more sandy. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:48, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

This is really good! There is a random white spot under his front leg, is it supposed to be there? 'Petalstep 12:39, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Define the black patches; they kinda disappear with the brown. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 20:47, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Darkhallows? Jayce (  ) 04:57, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and make it bigger. Moonstorm88 10:09, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its been over a week. I'm going to take over. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:10, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But im going to start new. Declined due to lack of work. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)


[[File:Sandypaw.apprentice.png]]Ok, here's Sandypaw, I did reserve him. And it is not over the limit because Cloud's elder was withdrawn and Piper's loner is in CBA. I'm really proud of this one. AND I know it says Sandypaw has an unknown gender BUT in The Rescue (which I own) he is depicted with no eyelashes meaning he is male because all of the females have eyelashes. I rest my case ;D Light to the night sing the song of life 16:05, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

What color are the eyes? Also smudge the brown more. It looks good though ;) Moonstream 16:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good but it's over limit, I think it will be declined. I'm sorry but it's really good work. Leaf-storm,16:13, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Green, his eyes are a dark green. Did you read what I wrote? Cloud was withdrawn and Piper and Blackclaw is in cba which means they'll be approved ana Cloud needs to be taken off anyway. So this isn't over the limit, *sigh*, anyway REUPLOADEDLight to the night sing the song of life 16:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes there are CBAs but they're not approved yet, understand? This means this is still over limit. Leaf-storm,17:00, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But Cloud needs archived which means I'm 35.Moony the Magic Cupcake 17:06, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

But you still aren't allowed to post it until it gets archived. The rules need to be followed. If a lead sees this, it will be declined, and you will have to re-post it after Cloud is archived. Iveh Yo! 18:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Arg, alright :\MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is declined. One, because it's over the page limit and two, we don't know Sandypaw's gender. Jayce (  ) 20:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Cloud (E) - Declined

[[File:Cloud_with_star_in_belly_(Cloud).jpg]]This is Cloud with star in belly from the tribe of rushing water. Its not my greatest charat ever but its not terrible.

Acornfur 19:53, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

  1. de-thumbed it :P
  2. save it as a png not a jpg x)
  3. This is over the limit, so it'll be declined 8(

-takes giant breath- --Bloo!yo 20:03, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Back up. Darken the shading a lot more. Is there a light source? Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:31, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

NOW it's not over the limit!! XP Now, add shading and like I said before, sace it as a png this time --Bloo!yo 00:33, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is there any shading or highlights? If not, please add some. If there is, define them. :p User:Shadewing/Sig 14:08, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think you have to redo it because it's all pixelated. That happened to Rainflower too D: SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:01, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it has a white background. Erase it; add shading, and blur the earpink and add shading to the eyes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

something tells me this dude's never gonna respond Nah, your gonna havta redo this~save it as a png this time, THEN do all the stuff above^ --Bloo!yo 01:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Since it looks like you're having trouble with your charart, might I help you? I can effectively discuss how to improve this picture if we talk via our talkpages so it doesn't clutter the page. Since I'm a Warrior of the project, it would be selfish of me not to :) Iveh Yo! 13:18, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Iveh Yo! 17:20, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 5 days, so...2 more days, and it will be declined due to lack of work. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:53, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

This isnt deleted yet... But I`ll make some comments anyway.It would: Need to have a lighter shade of pale gray, needs shading and highlights, Its 'Cloud with Storm in Belly' and I dont really see the ey-white in her eye. Just saying, though its gonna be deleted. Fallenstars, thanks for the memories! 00:55, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

It won't be deleted, per say. Just declined due to lack of work. Also, highlights are optional. So, I think it's been over two days. I do believe this is now considered declined... Jayce (  ) 02:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Unless someone wants to take over xP --Bloo!yo 02:51, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

If Fleck gets approved soon, I'd be happy to take this over. Iveh Yo! 03:17, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy if Fleck was CCBAed id say you could but for for now anyone can take it. -ſceheartBlah blah 03:41, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Can I archive this then? It's just taking up space. Jayce (  ) 20:22, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. Jayce (  ) 21:52, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lark That Sings at Dawn (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Lark_that_Sings_at_Dawn_(Ki).png]]My first charart. Tell me how i did! Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 22:11, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed it(Your welcome XD) make the stripes thinner, and blurr the leg shading --Bloo!yo 22:14, September 6, 2011 (UTC)  This is declined. Moonleaf already has this image reserved. Please check the table before posting an image. Jayce (  ) 22:15, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, we don't know if she's getting a kit image or not. Appledash❤ crowfeather 22:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail(E) ~ Declined

[[File:Fallowtail.elder.png]]Ok here's Fallowtail's elder image. If there's any reason I shouldn't put this up I'll gladly take it down and wait. But according to me this is the 35th image. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 23:16, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This will be declined. This is the 36th image on the page. You can put it back up once there is less then 35 images on the page. Jayce (  ) 23:18, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay i'll wait till tomorrow :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 23:20, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Robinwing (WC) -Declined


It had to be i did it....Mapleflower 19:20, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Your not even a WARRIOR, let alone a PCA member, this will be declined. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to reasons above. Jayce (  ) 20:46, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fallowtail(E) ~ Declined

[[File:Fallowtail.elder.png]] Here he isMoonlightBeauty of the sea! 00:13, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the tail highlight, and fix the earpink so it isnt touching the lineart, then blur it. Pearls 00:14, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

This has exceeded the page limit, therefore, I am declining it. Please make sure there are less then 35 images on the page before you set it for approval. Jayce (  ) 00:16, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

I did but i didint see larks. :(

Sorry. There's no exceptions. It shouldn't be much longer before you can re-add it. These things happen. Jayce (  ) 00:19, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Flight(PH) - Declined

[[]] Not much to say... Comments? Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:28, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Rainy. Rainface had her image posted first, but it got pushed down to the bottom of the page. I'll have to decline this one, I do believe. Look at the time stamps. =/ Jayce (  ) 20:33, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A)-Declined

[[File:VoleclawApprentice.png]]This is my first Charart on WWiki. Any comments? Hollyleaf Of Thunderclan 00:57, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Dis is over the limit. We can only have 35 images up for approval. Sorry, but this will be declined. Try posting this after some gets approved --Bloo!yo 01:00, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Blue. Declined. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:48, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Petaldust (A) - Declined

[[File:Petaldust.apprentice.png]] Myfirst one! I know the highlights are bad but I kinda suck at it. >,< I didn't know if I could put it up because her warrior one is currently in the making, but I used that as a guide. Comments? --Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:38, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the stuff around the tail, and get rid of those pixels. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 21:45, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploded. How can I fix the hind leg highlights, or is it fine? I already tried blurring it. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:58, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, did you add the hind leg highlight more than three times? ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 22:43, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nice work! Can you define the earpink by lightening it and blur the highlights more? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:06, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Um, yeah, I think so. Only for the hind leg one, though. I'll try to blur some more. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:26, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

the chest seems too gray, i think it should have no white (or in this case, gray) Bluestar11796 23:36, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploded. I blurred the highlights some more. I think their fine now. I got the earpink color from her warrior version. I lightened it up a bit, but I didn't want to to much because it would look different. I got the white chest also from her warrior version, so I just put it in. Instead, should I lighten it up? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:40, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I tried making the chest lighter by putting the normal white color and smudging it around. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:47, July 6, 2011 (UTC)

The chest fur looks way too smudged. ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:04, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 00:17, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oooh, I like this! Add/darken shading on legs. :) ☆ Snowdazzle ☆ I hate that llama 00:57, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:42, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waste off the lineart at the back of the haunch ;) Splook it's a long way down. 02:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, nice job for your first charart! Mintstar This time for Africa! 03:27, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks! :] Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 14:23, July 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste by the backside of her haunch, also it looks like you have light blur pixils near the top of her haunch, dunno if you meant for that to be white or not Iveh Yo! 20:04, August 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 19:14, August 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry, I wasn't aware that Tweak week was over. It might take a while to see the changes so look at the changes page thingy. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:11, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys, the person who did her Warriors charart decided to change it, so I'll try to redo it tonight. :P Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:24, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploade. To match her warrior version. I had to rename it because the changes wouldn't show. I made it: petaldust.apprentice.png from Petaldust.Apprentice.png Should I delete the previous one? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 15:37, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbing. Looks good, Poppy! You can't delete any of them. Only an admin has the powers to do that. However, you can mark it for deletion, and someone will take care of it. Jayce (  ) 15:44, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks! Umm, sorry I don't know what de-thumbing means. And I don't really know how to mark something for deletion. Could you tell me how to and what de-thumbing is? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 16:31, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, it just has to do with the way the image appears on the page. Nothing to worry about. Next time, just remember to only put File:file name inside the [[]], and nothing else. Also, when you mark something for deletion, you "edit" the page the image is on and put the Delete tag on it. Simple as that! Jayce (  ) 16:39, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cool. Thanks. Any other comments? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 23:46, August 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and add shading. Mint Why did I pull the trigger? 00:28, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I have added the shading except for one place. The white part. Whenever I try to burn it won't show. And if I make a new layer and make the shading it looks different. Sorry if I'm being hopeless but any suggestions? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:23, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight, and make the earpink bigger Iveh Yo! 03:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smudge the white muzzle some more. şŋσщđąẕẕℓεѕeverυsѕɴαpe. 11:46, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 14:24, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well if you're using the burn tool, don't make the white a pure white. Make it a little darker white, but not gray. x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 20:22, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The problam was I had to burn it like 8 times. XD A little extreme but it worked.Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:25, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:31, August 19, 2011 (UTC)

Changes not showing. Check changelog to see. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 03:14, August 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Any other comments? Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 21:20, August 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and brighten the ear-pink. Smooth out the shading on the chest; it's really blotchy. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 00:22, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 14:23, August 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger patches to make it look more natural. And the highlights make her look kinda plastic-looking. If you're using pixlr, dodge the haunch, head, shoulder and tail-tip two or three times. If you're using GIMP, do the same, but use the pencil, make the color white, lower the opacity, and only dot them once. If you're using something else, I don't know. ☾Mint☽Can you go downtown with me? 15:11, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the tail a bit and does the chest look a bit gray? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 21:31, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the chest a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sorry, I'm not very good at highlights or shading on torties. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 17:52, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the black parts more to match her warrior version. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:24, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

You should blur just a teensie bit at where the brown fur meets the white on its forearms. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 23:56, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uloaded. I haven't had much internet access because of Irene. So that should explain my delay.. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 19:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch highlight. User:Shadewing/Sig 23:02, August 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur all the highlights a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:55, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a lot. --Leafstrike-- 19:53, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 15:00, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the paws, and blur the haunch shading and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:39, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Poppypelt4Ah, my sweet Deathberries! 17:02, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the patches on the leg. -ſceheartBlah blah 04:46, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on the hind leg and tail a little bit darker. Moonstorm88 09:52, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading and blur all the white parts. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded for 6 days. Are you still working on this? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:54, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a week. So, should this be declined? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:51, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. Jayce (  ) 23:38, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Soot_kit.png]]Its really bad I know. Comments?

♫ Featherferal ♫May StarClan Be With You! 19:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)Featherferal

  1. This is over the limit, so this will probably be declined.
  2. The heading should say [[Soot]] (Ki) - For Approval (or (K), though it's up to you).
  3. Your signature should link to your userpage and talkpage, not Insaneular's. Okay, that's it. Phew. --Leafstrike-- 19:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, and I de-thumbed it for you. --Leafstrike-- 19:29, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Even if it wasn't over the limit, you'd need to shade it. Silverhmm 19:31, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Changing heading and declining due to it being over the limit. Jayce (  ) 19:49, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar(L) ~ Redone/Declined

[[File:Firestar.L.png|thumb|left]]Yeah, this one looks really bad. Redone as long hair. I thought of doing long hair because Firestar has a thick coat. Comments? {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+} 19:34, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

You are not a warrior. You cannot tweak images. This is getting declined. Jayce (  ) 19:35, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm Kit (TC) - Declined

[[File:Sandstorm_kit.png]]So here's Sandstorm kit picture, and I saw her description as barely visable stripes so I put really, really light stripes on her... I don't know if you can see her pink ears too.

But anyways, please take a look at the picture!

=Squrrielstar= 01:50, September 12, 2011 (UTC)=Squrrielstar=

I'm sorry, but this is over the limit, it will have to be declined. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

This is over 35 images and will be declined. Jayce (  ) 01:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

I don't get it with the "35" thing... Please explain?

=Squrrielstar= 02:15, September 12, 2011 (UTC)=Squrrielstar=

Never mind, I got it... But does that mean if the accepted ones get moved, I can apply for this to get approved again? I'm just wondering.

=Squrrielstar= 02:18, September 12, 2011 (UTC)=Squrrielstar=

Stormkit (SC) - Declined

Stormkit (SC) It really sucks[[File:Stormkit.png|left|thumb]] I know. Comments please.

This is over the limit and will be declined, sandstormrocks32 has this up for approval already. Pearls 21:27, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Correct. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:49, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) Declined

[[File:Honeypaw.apprentice.png]]Here's Honeypaw :D Hope she looks ok. Silverhmm 23:48, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

She has some waste around her, get rid of that, and get rid of her lighter chest.Flowerpatch 23:54, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

It doesnt have a gender, this will be declined. Wait for an answer next time. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:55, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt. W) - Declined

[[File:Hawkfrost.alt.war.png]]I saw that no one made a alt. warrior for him. I did so because no else had, so... This will probably be declined -_-. Silverhmm 00:02, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

This should be declined because your other image isnt archived yet, but first im going to ask for a source. The trivia doesnt count if theres not source. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:03, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Declined. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 00:28, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlenose (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Beetlenose.kit.png.png|thumb]]And here's Beetlenose's kit image. I changed his nose, made his ears pink, (although I failed at that. Ultimately) and I lightened the highlight on his tail. If you have any questions or need me to change anything else (like the horrible fail ears) just tell me. ❄ Blizzardpelt ❄Freezing in the Summer! 23:36, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

This will be declined. Beetlenose's Kit isn't approved yet, so just reupload that on the approval page. Please read the Guidelines. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:42, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. Jayce (  ) 23:44, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Sandypaw (A) ~Declined

[[File:Sandypaw.jpg]]This is my first charart! Wildbreath 21:49, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit and will be declined. Iveh Yo! 21:50, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Over the limit of what? Wildbreath 21:56, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

The images. The max of the images on this page is 35, and if there's more, those/that image will be declined and archived. If there's lesser images (ex. 15 :P) you can put that image back up for approval. Hope that helped! ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:02, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

'Sides, we don;t don't know Sandypaw's gender. So we can't make a image. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:46, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Declined and archiving. Jayce (  ) 23:03, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur(MCA) ~ Declined

[[File:Mudfur.mca.png]]I don't really like this image much, but here he is. Any Comments?

Stoneclaw33 12:29 August, 30th 2011

Dethumbed it. Blur the earpink and highlights. Pearls 20:40, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make the earpink a bit bigger and triangular, then blur it. :3 Misty! 21:05, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink, and the highlights on the haunch and shoulder. If you didnt, shade and highlight the Herb, because i dont really see it on my laptop. {User:Fallenstars/Sig} 21:55, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

give him a pale belly. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:59, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:00, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

The herb color looks a little bright, perhaps darken it. Once you do, add shading to it. Ivyheart =P 23:11, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also, Rename this Mudfur.mca.png Pearls 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't really showing except for the earpink and herbs. Stoneclaw33 05:52 August 30, 2011

There is a bit of white on one of his back paws, can you fill that in? Misty! 01:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Mudfur.mca.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I filled in the little white bit of white on his hindlegs, renamed him and gave him a pale belly Stoneclaw33 08:23 August 31, 2011

The shading still needs blurred a lot, and give the herbs some depth. Iveh Yo! 21:30, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights a bit, too. Misty! 00:26, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate it a bit, so that it matches his Medicine cat image. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 15:10, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink, and blur the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:38, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a couple days. Just letting you know that you need to work on this or it will be declined, ok? Iveh Yo! 20:40, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- Changes aren't showing much exept the shading, I blured the shading Stoneclaw33 5:41 September 5, 2011

Darken the shading on the pointed shoulder blade on our left. Moonflight 22:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The whole thing sorta looks blotchy. Blur both the shading and highlights. Jayce (  ) 01:00, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded- I desaturated it a bit, and I blurred the shading. {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+}StoneyAwesome 15:13, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

I still thikn that the highlights could be blurred a little. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:26, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste along his back. Frosted Apple 02:02, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

There is a white spot on one of his hind legs, can you fill that in? Misty! 22:24, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the highlihgts and define the earpink,. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:37, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Highlight the herbs. Ivyheart =P 03:47, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week, Stoneclaw. Are you still working on this? If not, it'll be declined. Jayce (  ) 15:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. Jayce (  ) 01:19, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Cloudstar (L) - Tweaked

[[File:Cloudstar.leader.png]]Alright, here's Cloudstar. He needed darker shading, and I changed the earpink beacuse it was purply. Original artist was Sandy. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 15:49, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. Appledash❤ crowfeather 15:55, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes aren't showing. Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 21:35, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The tail shading needs to be blurred, and the haunch shading is blotchy, so fix that. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:49, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Vega; Beauty is absoulute.50px 14:18, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

There seems to be some lineart or something that's leaked into the <--- ear. It's darker then the rest of the area around it. Jayce (  ) 23:34, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It was some shading, but I lightened it a tad. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:21, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more. Appledash❤ crowfeather 14:42, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Suprisingly, the changes are showing ^^. Comments? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 15:57, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Appledash❤ crowfeather 20:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Better? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 00:58, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

The patches shouldnt be smudged. We dont need to tweak the deputy art to match. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:04, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, the patches shouldn't be smudged. The shading should be blurred. Silverflower ...the flower of the heart 13:15, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Artist hasn't worked on this in five days. Declining. Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:13, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Kit) - Declined

[[File:Firestar.kit.png]] This is my first character art pixel. I really like how it turned out. I took all the colors from his leader image. This is my favorite character! Does anyone have comments? User:Blacktail12/Sig. 01:57, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Waitaminute, he gets a kit image? Anyways, Very nice job for your first charart. make the earpink triangular & take the color from his other images --Bloo!yo 02:00, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

We never decided he gets a kit image. This may be declined. Jayce (  ) 02:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, sorry! I didn't know! User:Blacktail12/Sig. 02:04, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I edit conflicted with all three of you. I hate edit conflict. I'm archiving this right now so i dont get more anoyed. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (A) - Declined

[[File:Leopardstar.apprentice.png]] Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

And I know about the redlink. I'll upload the image tomorrow. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

This redlink is a waste. I'm archiving this until you have the image. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:09, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A) for Approval

[[File:VoleclawApprentice.png]]This is my first Charart on WWiki. Any comments? HollyleafOfThunderclan You have their friendship, and that is a loyalty that never dies 00:30, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

add shading to the neck and stomach --Bloo!yo 00:52, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink to a reddish color, and not pink. Splook it's a long way down. 00:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to be longhaired. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:57, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

And, it should be the same color as his warrior charart. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:26, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also make the ear pink more triangular? Misty! 21:39, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Can you also center the ear pink a bit more? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 01:18, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Just friendly reminder. Iveh Yo! 15:09, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of work. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Flight (PH) - Declined

[[]]Ok let's try this again. Comments? x3 Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 23:42, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, lighten the fur color, make the mud look like the mud on her kit-mother image. Make the eyes a tiny bit darker. And make the stripes on the tail for noticeable. (yeah ik thats alot im just in a very bad mood, dont be yelling at me about it either because im sure im not the only one who's had a bad day) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 23:46, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the mud streaks and the stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:50, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Since Rainy is leaving and Fleck is on CBA, I could take this over if that is ok? Iveh Yo! 01:36, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I have no chararts up for approval and your Fleck is still on CBA, so, maybe could I? Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, since your charart is technically still on the approval page, you can't take another charart. Let Icey have it. Jayce (  ) 04:57, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart said it's ok when I said something about Cloud, that if it was on CBA that she would've let me take it. And mine can be archived at any time. It's not a big deal, I just thought it was ok since she said that. Iveh Yo! 04:58, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

That I did not see. Well, since Fleck is approved, you can argue about which one of you gets it. Jayce (  ) 05:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I'm not sure how we can do this...Appledash❤ crowfeather 14:22, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Errrr......Ivystripe has already reserved this. Rainey 14:23, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I never actually said I was withdrawing this... So I'll just keep working on it so there will be no arguements. :P Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 14:27, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, then blur/smudge the edge of the earpink more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:22, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this Rainy? -ſceheartBlah blah 00:50, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Rainy did say she left the wiki. Should we decline it? Jayce (  ) 00:52, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe we should decline it. How long has she been gone? {+{SUBST:Nosubst|User:Stoneclaw33/Sig}+} 13:43, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. Jayce (  ) 15:08, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (SC)- Declined

[[File:Birdpaw.Apprentice.pgn.png]]This is Birdpaw before she got her scar. Comments?

I know it sucks.

This is over the limit and will be declined. Iveh Yo! 20:53, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also someone also has this up. Iveh Yo! 21:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw doesn't need an alt. apprentice, as the scar is on her left eye and not visable in the apprentice art anyway. Shelly For a limited time only 22:38, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. Jayce (  ) 00:21, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (K) (Alt) ~ Declined

[[File:Stonefur.kit.alt.png]]Here he is! This is mai second Charart, since Stormfur finally got approved. Comments?-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 01:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot and thciekn it. The ear pink should be centered a lot more, and the shading needs to be darkened. Add depth to the eye and if you have highlights, brighten them. Appledash❤ crowfeather 02:54, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think he'd get an alt, would he? I mean, he's described as blue-gray (it doesn't say how dark he is) just like Bluestar, and Bluestar's alt got declined multiple times if I remember right. So would this be any different than Bluestar being described as light gray? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:24, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great. Just decline & archive it, then. Get it over with. At least it'll make space for my bro LordVampire's first Charart.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 07:04, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Light gray and blue gray are different. If Oakheart gets one for being tawny, and that's close to his original color, then Stonefur gets the alt kit. For now, it stays, unless another lead says otherwise. Jayce (  ) 14:52, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, I agree with that, but since Bluestar's light gray alts were declined before, I wasn't sure. So, would this mean she'd actually GET alts now? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:16, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

I'm gonna withdraw this. I don't want to work hard on it, then have it suddenly declined.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 01:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Remember to change the heading. If no one else wants this, then I'll decline it. Jayce (  ) 01:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Declined. It doesn't seem like anyone wants it. Maybe I'll take it up once Magpie's approved or something. Jayce (  ) 18:01, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Pebblefoot (W)- Declined


Here he is, Clawface was approved, so i took him over, OA was Maplefern, and I made him more mottled, cause, his 'mottles' looked liked shading done wrong. So comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:25, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Looks a lot better. Blur the shading, add shading to the head, and redden the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:26, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the dark lines by the lineart. Ivyheart =P 23:42, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- What else, Thanks, Misty :) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading on the tail some more? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:59, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- anything else? I am really fond of this image ;) Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:02, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the shading. Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:11, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-I lightend the shading a touch, then blurred, what else? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:38, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the front legs... is it me, or do they look a little...awkward? It seems there's some misplaced colour or something? I have no idea, but, it just seems weird. Jayce (  ) 13:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Did i fix it?....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:43, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Still a little bit on the front paw, but, I won't complain. It looks much better now. Jayce (  ) 22:46, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little. It makes him look almost black. Iveh Yo! 03:35, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! I've been waiting so long for this image to be fixed! Maybe add a little dark gray or a mottle to his ear farthest away from us, it looks bare and plain. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 12:23, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's way too dark. Appledash❤ crowfeather 21:10, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I redid the shading, look better, or should I darken it? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 21:25, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten it a bit more and add more shading to the haunch, back, and chest. Appledash❤ crowfeather 02:17, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

I'm doing hidhlights from the back, so no shading on his back. Reuploaded -Comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and brigten the highlights. Appledash❤ crowfeather 19:13, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Curve the shading on his haunch, it'll make it look more natural. Iveh Yo! 17:44, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:43, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it a bit. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:54, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

The shading's too dark now...change it back to how it used to be, and use a lighter burn tool to darken it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:27, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-Did i fix it? Or will i go nuts again? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:55, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

There's just problems with shading. Here, if you use layers, lower the opacity of the shading layer. If not, just brighten it using the dodge tool at a rate lesser than 1.00. Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:15, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, um, dislexic teenager here. Explain that please, dumb it down, all i ask. I-i don't mean i'm dumb or anything, it is just, i can't understand it....i'll shut up now....^^; Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:41, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I really don't wanna do Pebblefoot anymore. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:09, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I'll archive this then. Unless someone else wants to take over, that is? Jayce (  ) 02:11, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Softwing.apprentice.png.png]] Here is the other version that I have just made using the suggestions you all made. How does it look? ~Cloudclaw1

Make it look like her queen image. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:37, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, see her queen image, it is a mainly white, like you did, but the tabby patches are light brown and the stripes are a different style. When you see the queen picture, also make sure to have the patches match up to where they are on the queen image. Just thought that would help. :) Ivyheart =P 23:53, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

What happened to all the comments that were here before? o.o Did they get deleted? Anyways, blur the patches adn the earpink a bit more, anad mke the earpink lighter and more natural, it's really hot pink right now. Also, there seems to be a lot of blured or miscolored lineart, I suggest pasting a whole new blank over it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:07, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Match the colors and everything from the queen image, and add more shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:20, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Perhaps smudge the patches upwards using a tiny brush for kind of a fur effect? Also, smudge the stripes and darken them and make the earpink a little smaller. Splook it's a long way down. 00:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

o.o Oh no!! The blurring of the patches!!! Darnnnn... I'll redo it now

/just went through the history to see where all the posts went. Cloudclaw, when you reupload the file, don't delete all the posts, just type Reuploaded in bold below all the comments, so people know it's reuploaded. We're not supposed to delete comments from talk pages. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:05, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Paleclaw okkk i didnt realise at first


Cloudclaw, remember to sign with the four ~'s just in case. 01:29, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink a much lighter pink color. You can take it off of an approved white cat, such as Whitewing. Make sure it doesn't touch the lineart. Iveh Yo! 03:10, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

This doesn't look fullsized. Use this one ; [[File:Apprenticelongf.gif]]. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:25, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

@Maplepool I don't see a difference with the charart and @Ivystripe i'll fix that soon!

{{SUBST:User:Cloudclaw1/sig1}} 11:47, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, Maple's right, this isn't the full sized blank. Though it's not THAT much smaller, it is smaller. You'll have to redo it with the full sized blank, sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:08, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

And make sure the earpink doesn't fill the whole ear. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:06, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Iveh Yo! 01:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to lack of activity. Whomever wants this may take over. Jayce (  ) 03:21, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Ravenpaw.loner.png]] I made this in advance a while ago, way before I even reserved it. And I hope this still counts as the 15th, because there's some discussion that shouldn't be here. Original artist was Minnowclaw, and the highlights and shading were blotchy. Changes won't show. --Leafstrike-- 17:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It still counts, so don't worry. I'll be archiving that discussion now, since it's pointless. (xD) Darken the shading on the white areas, please. Jayce (  ) 17:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white part of his tail bigger Iveh Yo! 17:26, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:39, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading on the tail a bit. I like this new Ravenpaw. Jayce (  ) 20:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:22, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink a darker red. Appledash❤ crowfeather 22:03, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Dumb changes. --Leafstrike-- 23:46, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Nice! Blur the highlights a little, and make the earpink go farther into the ear. ShadewingBlades of the Night 00:22, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I'm pretty sure you're looking at the wrong image, Shadewing. --Leafstrike-- 00:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded But I blurred the highlights anyways. Dumb server that isn't making the changes show. --Leafstrike-- 00:47, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights; the shading needs to be more defined. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:40, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes are showing below the top box in the file history. --Leafstrike-- 21:25, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink smaller, and more of a dark red, look at Nightwing for example. Appledash❤ crowfeather 01:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 17:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Still a weird color. Make it a dark red. Try - a94141. And define the shading. Appledash❤ crowfeather 21:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now the shading looks blotchy. I tried blurring, but nothing's working. --Leafstrike-- 01:17, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

But I hate this anyways. I'm withdrawing this. --Leafstrike-- 19:21, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Declining and archiving. Jayce (  ) 03:35, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Creekfeather.warrior.png]] Original artist was Elorisa. I basically just darkened the stripes and the shading. Comments? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:55, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Do you think you could basically re-do the stripes? They're bothering me. Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:10, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Then that would basically be redoing the whole thing, right? ... and darken the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Um, no, it would just be re-doing the stripes...Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:25, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

But redoing the stripes would mean erasing the stripes, and then adding stripes, and adding shading again, even if you used layers, the shading would have to be redone...whatever. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:27, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

What's with all the hostility lately? Define the shading a little more. Splook it's a long way down. 00:51, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Then the shading could be re-done, if possible. Appledash❤ crowfeather 00:54, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine to me :). But I'm not much help with this, I'm the original artist xD. Lighten the stripes a tad, they seem really dark :3. Looks great, Dapplecloud! Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 19:55, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, also, can you make that large circly stripe on the chest less circlish? Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 19:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Dapplecloud? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:26, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, I'm still working on it. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 00:52, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Then why don't you upload it? :3 Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:55, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Dapple, can you please work on this? Otherwise, it'll get declined. Jayce (  ) 05:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of activity. Jayce (  ) 17:45, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (K) - Declined

[[File:Tallstar.kit.png]] Ta-da! I've done better than this. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:53, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! Before I say something, did you use an off-white for his face? Silverhmm 12:07, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

No…its probably just the shading ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:22, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful, Snowy! Just define the earpink, make it more pink and less purple. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can you make it so it matches its leader image? the pelt is kinda blurred. Pearls 12:56, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Also, he looks more gray than black. Nice! Ivyheart =P 15:16, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I blurred it too much. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:26, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you make the tail longer? Shelly For a limited time only 15:30, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Forgot to mention this, in his leader image, he is smudged a tad, if you also want to include smudges. Ivyheart =P 15:31, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I failed on the tail. :l Changes aren't showing. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:42, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the tail a little less pointy. Ivyheart =P 18:41, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:25, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I know you already did this, but can you make the dark gray look more black? And also, define the earpink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 20:52, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

If I darken it, it'll be just a regular black. I'll define the earpink though. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:54, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Meh, I darkened it slightly. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe separate both sides of the black so the midriff is more white. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 05:56, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

It looks like he's looking down. Can you do the eyes the regular way? You don't have to, but it would look better. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:34, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it 'cuz I felt like it. It looks horrible now D:< SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:40, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

It doesn't look horrible! Make the circle of white on the head less circular looking like the leader image. Ivyheart =P 16:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Did you use pure black for the black on him? It kinda looks like it. Could you lighten it a bit? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:42, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Can I withdraw this? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:10, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes you may. Just change to heading to reflect that. Iveh Yo! 17:12, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Why would you withdraw this? It's so pretty D: llwildheartl06:27 Mon Sep 26

Declining and archiving. Jayce (  ) 17:52, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lionblaze (Alt. A) - Declined

[[File:Lionblaze.apprentice.alt.png]] FINALLY, a space open :P So he was mistakenly described with orange fur in Outcast. Anyways, comments? 23:26, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Make the ear pink brighter and blur (or take away *is horrible at explaining things*) some of the shading on the front leg that is closest to us. Misty! 23:38, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

He needs stripes :3 23:39, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

won't this be declined? I tried to do his alt.w, wich also had ginger fur, and it got declined. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:40, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah.....Declined? 23:52, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, orange/ginger isn't really a difference from golden-brown. We've had this discussion with Brackenfur and Sandstorm too and I think this was also put up a while ago and declined because there wasn't a big enough difference. Declined, sorry Sand Snow. 23:57, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

You mean Snow. xD It's fine ;) 23:58, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

lol, sorry Snow. xP ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:55, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Whitewing.(W).png - Declined

[[File:Whitewing.(W).png]] I tweaked Whitewing's warrior. Comments? I am trying to get a character approved.

♫ Featherferal ♫May StarClan Be With You! 15:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)Featherferal\

First of all, your not even a warrior. Second of all, if you were allowed to tweak this, it should be posted on the Tweak page. This will be declined. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:15, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

And for future reference this is also over the limit of 35 images. Ivyheart =P 16:17, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdazzle is right, and you are not a warrior, I don't think Whitewing needs tweaking, and next time, please put the headline. The image is not supposed to be the headline.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:39, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declining due to reasons above. Jayce (  ) 16:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Petalfur - Declined

[[File:Petalfur.warrior.png]] - Petalfurry! I love her, she's one of my favorite characters. She needed to be long-haired. So I based her off a Ragdoll cat...heh. Ragdoll cats ftw. Comments? Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:19, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, you don't have this reserved. Rainwillow does... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, Rainey has this reserved. I would know, I was planning on doing this too, but she beat me to it like, a long time ago. She's had it reserved for a while. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 23:32, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, sorry, I didn't see :/ Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:40, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Alt W) ~ Declined

[[File:Blackclaw.warrior.alt.gif]] This is Blackclaw's alt when he was described as dark brown. Comments? Ivyheart =P 22:39, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might want to blur the shading. I personally think it looks really cool, but when the same thing was done to Yellowfang's charart it was tweaked to look "normal". Shelly For a limited time only 22:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

So should I keep the multi-color design but define the shading, or just have it be normal? Ivyheart =P 22:59, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, that's up to you. My advice would be to keep it normal, though I hate saying it. If you want to keep it like this, just know that some user that prefers for all charart to conform to the norm will probably tweak it. Shelly For a limited time only 23:03, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid it. I think it looks pretty okay. :) Ivyheart =P 23:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Ivy, I've done this one before, and they said it was decided they were talking about his apprentice, not him, so I think this'll be declined. D: Sorry. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:14, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I shall look for alts, then. :P Ivyheart =P 01:01, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

He was described as dark gray. Just turn this dark gray. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:03, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

He was described dark gray as a kit, actually. I wanted to try something other than a kit. Thanks for telling me that, though! Ivyheart =P 01:08, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I have decided that I'll do Blossomfall's alt, anyway. Ivyheart =P 04:32, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I'm taking this over. What color does he have to be? Dark gray or brown? I'm confused xP SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:29, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just made him dark brown. If he's gray, I don't mind redoing the image ;) *bows down to apprentice tutorial* SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:54, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nice job! Lighten and blur the shading. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 13:48, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You guys, he wasn't described as brown :P He was described gray, though, but as a kit, if you want to do that. Ivyheart =P 13:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

So.. is this declined? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:03, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I guess it is unless you want to make a gray kit :3 Ivyheart =P 19:07, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Nah, I'll do Flight (PH). SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:13, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

So is this declined or Withdrawn?.....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 20:24, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Either one of those... I guess this will be withdrawn since she said she would be doing something else, so I will change the heading.

That was me, sorry forgot to sign. Ivyheart =P 20:36, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Hasn't someone already reserved Flight though? AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 22:39, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Snowdazzle did. Declining because she's working on something else. Jayce (  ) 23:51, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (alt warrior 3) - Declined

[[File:Darkstripe.warrior.alt3.png]]he was described as silver tabby, Im glad there is open space!! Leaf-storm,20:27,October 3,2011 (UTC)

Make the stripe above his eye thinner, it sticks out. Blur the shoulder muscle shading. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 20:28, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, nvm. Make the shading darker. Silverhmm 20:34, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Where is the light source coming from as it seems like there's lighter shading on the head, bottem chest, edge of the haunch and tip of the tail which doesn't make much sense to me that is. So in otherwords, define your light source and do the shading accordingly. Also darken the shading on the edges, because it seems like there is a little upside down parabola on the chest meant to be the darker shading. Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:50, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

He doesnt need an alt for being a silver tabby. He already is a silver tabby. This will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:53, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Softwing (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Softwing(a).png]] Here she is! This is my first one up for approval, so this is kinda suckish. Comments?Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 22:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but this will be declined. There are already 35 images up, and this is over the page limit. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:09, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

shouldn't it just be postponed?Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 22:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

We don't postpone. Images are either accepted, declined, or withdrawn by the artist. Shelly For a limited time only 22:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (q) - Declined

[[File:Leafpool.queen.png]]here she is! comments?Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 20:23, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

She has a white underbelly, and is not a 'y' tabby. Make the tabby stripes like those of File:Leafpool.warrior.png User:Twilightheart200/Sig 20:31, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

ok, first of all, is it just my computer or are all the words tiny and far apart? second of all, there are 'y' stripes on her warriors image, third of all, i looked at her warrior image. no white underbelly, it stops before her front legs.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 20:35, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior charart was recently redone, this should match that. Also, the color is a bit off, the white is in the wrong pattern, and her eyes have no color. Shelly For a limited time only 20:38, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

her eyes do have color, and i got the color directly form the warrior image, i 'eyedropped' it. i'll fix it in a bit, but right now my computer is going crazy. also, can someone find me a color of amber i cna use for her eyes?Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 20:42, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Use the eye color off her kit image. Also, when you redo this (because I honestly think it needs to be redone from scratch) make the white stretch just past he forelegs onto her belly a bit. She doesn't have a white belly, but cat chests go down a bit farther. Shelly For a limited time only 20:45, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Also, rename the image Leafpool.queen.png when you reupload it. Shelly For a limited time only 20:46, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Guys, don't be so harsh on her. Bluedawn, this is really good for your first official picture for the project. I have a couple of suggesions for you to make it match. Make the white on her face go through the middle of her eye instead of farther out. Make the stripes a little thinner. On her tail, make her stripes go across it instead of up and down, that's the pattern tabby cats have. Make the earpink smaller on the ear closest to us, and on her ear farthest away from us, make it white instead of pink. At the angle that her ear is at, we would not be able to see it. Make sure you color in her nose. Add some depth to her eye. I will link you to a visual that will help show you how the eyes are supposed to be. You are doing a good job, just take these suggestions so it can match her warrior a little more, alright? AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 21:01, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, sorry. Been having a long day. You're fine, just do what Ivy said. Shelly For a limited time only 21:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Wait a minute, this is over the limit. Sky- Seek! Locate! Exterminate! 21:41, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is good, but it is over the limit and will be declined. Sorry! Atelda insert vague subtext here 21:50, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

That's odd, because when I first noticed this image, it was at 35. Splook it's a long way down. 21:55, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

yes, it was. someone added another one above it because i checked it and this was 35Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 22:03, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I can't get the eyes right... and i had to upload it under a different fiel because it wouldn't let me reupload it, and i'm hoping i get to keep it, considering it was 35 when i put it up, but someone must have put someonething up above it...Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 22:13, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Nope. All the images that are above yours were already there. I'm sorry Bluedawn, but that's the rule. =( Jayce (  ) 22:17, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

i swear on my life it used to be 35, it was number 35 when i posted it! this is so unfair, i swear it was number 35!Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 22:19, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

And I know why it was. When you posted it, there was an issue with the coding that caused two sections to merge into one. I saw it earlier, and forgot to fix it. You can always put it back up. =) Jayce (  ) 22:21, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Sunfish.apprentice.png]]Here she is? My second charart. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:52, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think you used the right blank. It seems too small for an apprentice. You'll need to re-do it using the proper sized blank. Jayce (  ) 19:56, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, also, is there some white above her eyes? Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 19:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Here, this is the full-sized blank:Using this, redo your image (sorry :c ), then reupload this. It doesn't look bad, you know. Iveh Yo! 21:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

RE-UPLOADED.. I fixed the blank :P I got it from the PCA page if thats that right one :PP. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:20, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It still looks a bit small. Yes, I looked on the image history to see if it was the correct revision. Did you save it by clicking it to be full size? Splook it's a long way down. 21:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's still not the right size. Also, use the color from her warrior image. Jayce (  ) 21:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)\

REUPLOADED. Finally got the right size. (Thanks Ivystripe!) I also got her warrior color. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:04, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

It's the right size, but now it looks all blurry and such. I don't think you saved the file right, Firestar. Jayce (  ) 22:08, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

I saved it as PNG on RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

That's good :3 Blur the shading on the back and the ear pink. Misty! 21:18, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Then reupload this or redo this again. The lineart is all blurry, and you can't fix this by hand. Splook it's a long way down. 22:00, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded again. If it doesnt work I'll redo it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

I re-did it. :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:45, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce (  ) 16:51, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the bottom of the earpink a tad Iveh Yo! 16:53, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED comments? Firestar! 23:06, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading on the front, front leg darker. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 04:51, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Comments? Firestar! 21:42, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Add shading between the haunch and the foreleg. Nice! Ivyheart =P 16:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Thanks Ivyheart! Firestar! 21:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Seeing as you're so eager for someone to comment, blur the shading on the back as it almost looks like a stripe. Make the highlights on the chest larger and I would add some highlights or lighter shading to the head as it would look odd when you think about the light source. Darken the base of the tail, as well as the bottem of the paws and neck. Nice job so far. :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. :3 Firestar! 23:53, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. There is also a bit of waste on the outside of the chin. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:20, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Add some most shading to the chest fur. Silverhmm 15:28, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED! Hehe :P Firestar! 18:50, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

There's also some waste outside the closest hind foot to us. ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Does anyone know how to get rid of waste? Firestar! 20:10, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I do, want me to do that for you? Rainface<3 20:21, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

"Took care of the waste for her by her command. Comments? Rainface<3 20:25, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks, Rainface! Firestar! 22:53, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Dull and blur the chest shading; it looks like its supposed to be a pale chest. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED :3 Firestar! 00:47, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Gravo Firestar! i can't fnd anything wrong with it. Rainface<3 01:13, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think you should lighten the base pelt color just a smidge. Unless it's the way that Shellu did the shading/highlights, this one looks darker then her warrior image. Jayce (  ) 06:50, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

I think it looks similar enough. But if you must lighten it, Firestar, on Pixlr you can select Adjustment at the top and then do Brightness & Contrast and then lighten the whole thing. Ivyheart =P 20:56, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

want me to do that for you firestar? Rainface<3 19:02, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 01:56, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Uhhh, you gonna edit this firestar or are you on vaction. (don't know much, SORRY) Rainface<3 18:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Its been a week, and Firestar isn't on the vacation list, so if this isn't commented on by tomorrow, it will be declined. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) - Declined

[[File:Creekfeather.apprentice.png]] Comments? It was really hard to replicate Cloudy's style, but I wasn't going to let anyone else redo my old image XD llwildheartl22:56 Thu Oct 6

We're not re-doing apprentices, Colleen. Didn't you see the announcement on the PCA talk page? Also, I didn't know my style was THAT hard... Jayce (  ) 22:59, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Haha it wasn't really. I just couldn't make it perfect :P OOPS SORRY. Iceheart was talking about it and sending me files, but I didn't realize it was already in play. SORRY. llwildheartl23:03 Thu Oct 6

That's okay. We all make mistakes. I'll decline this now and get it off the page.. Jayce (  ) 23:04, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Stonefur (A) - Declined

[File:Stonefur.apprentice.png]]Comments? llwildheartl22:58 Thu Oct 6

I think this will have to be declined, since the apprentices blanks are being re-done, sorry.. User:USERNAME/sig 23:01, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Misty. Sorry Wildheart, but no apprentice blanks will be done until the new lineart is out and approved. -ScarletwindLisanna 23:02, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry guys; missed the announcement ^^ llwildheartl23:05 Thu Oct 6

Shimmerpelt (Q) ~Declined

[[File:Shimmerpelt.Queen.png]]This is my first charart, please tell me what you think. 'Petalstep 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

1) De-thumbed it

2) Define highlights (assuming that they're there) ★☺Starshine☺★Too Much School! 23:17, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlights, make the noese black, blur the earpink, make the earpink longer, and darken the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

And when you darken the shading, blur it. Silverhmm 23:21, Septembe

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Blur the earpink, darken the nosepink, and recenter the earpink.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 23:23, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Make her look glossy Iveh Yo! 00:03, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. I know some users don't like using highlights, but since her description specifically says that she has a glossy pelt, they should be used here. Darken the earpink, and you don't really have to make the nose pink. Plenty of black cats have pink noses. Just make sure it matches the ear pink if you leave it as is. Shelly For a limited time only 00:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

When she says glossy, I think you just need to make her shiny. Maybe some white will help, but I'm not sure... Ivyheart =P 00:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, not pure white. But the highlights could have a slightly zig-zag pattern to create the glossy look. That's how the light usually hits a shiny black cat, anyway. Iveh Yo! 02:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

True, white would make it zebra-ish when I think of it. Ivyheart =P 04:16, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

You can use this as a reference for how light hits glossy black cats. Shelly For a limited time only 16:12, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. I think i reuploaded it, i saved the new one with the same name as the old one. Changes aren't showing. Petalstep 21:23, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more. Silverhmm 21:29, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink more like Silvereye said. Then make it look a bit more... glossy looking. Hiya! I'm Rainfacestar 21:36, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Add mud streaks. Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:49, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Oh wait, nevermind that. For some reason I thought this was Night (KM). xD Roo Hawkfrost lover♥ 21:50, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. Blurred the ear pink and tried to make her look more glossy. Petalstep 22:05, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller, it's way too big xD SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:44, September 7, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look way too layered. Blur them out. Splook it's a long way down. 01:15, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and thin it out. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:55, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

smooth out the highlights on the tail & haunch --Bloo!yo 04:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce (  ) 06:56, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. Redid the shading, hightlights and ear pink. Changes aren't showing. Petalstep 19:18, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes darker, they're really neon right now. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:36, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) thanks paleclaw Petalstep 19:11, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is blotchy, blur it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:15, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded. Fixed the shading. Changes are not showing. Petalstep 15:03, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The right file isn't showing up, I'm trying to fix it. 'Petalstep 17:09, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are showing. (finally!) 'Petalstep 20:00, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

Her eye fartherest from us And she looks cross eyed. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:50, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the eyes :) (thanks maplepool) 'Petalstep 16:43, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink extends too far down. Move it up a few pixels. Jayce (  ) 13:52, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the earpink. 'Petalstep 19:27, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and make her look glossy.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:18, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and the earpink. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:10, September 13, 2011 (UTC)

Can someone tell me how to make her more glossy? I tried making the highlights brighter but they looked too layered, even when I blurred them. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 20:02, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Just make the highlights light. You might have to redo it, and use brighter highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:10, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I tried to make her glossy, it looks better to me. I completely redid her image, I think it looks better than last time. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 19:30, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of the waste. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:47, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Changes are not showing. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 16:32, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

If you want, I could make it glossy like I did to Shimmerpelt's warrior :-) Blur the tail highlight :3 Splook it's a long way down. 18:24, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Would you? Oh, thank you! :) I tried but I kept messing it up T_T ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 20:59, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Pretty sure the changes won't show. Well, the shading might look a little blotchy, but that's up to you to fix :-) I just put in the highlights the way I did Shimmerpelt, the rest is up to you! Splook it's a long way down. 22:41, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Thanks so much! I'll fix the shading soon. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 20:16, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Just blur the shading tons, and it should look better. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:33, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred the shading as much as i could, it still looks blotchy but pixlr made it look worse when i blurred it, so i used gimp to blur. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 19:34, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

The back and the chest shading is too dark. Lighten them. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:42, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Urghh.. I tried to brighten them. I'll reupload tommorrow, don't have time tonight. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 22:52, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. They're rather blotchy. But nice job! SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 01:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Emma, it's been a few days since you've uploaded. Still working on this? Jayce (  ) 21:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, Cloudskye, I am. I've been trying to fix the highlights + shading, but I've been having a hard time. Reuploaded. ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 11:14, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

All you need to do is really blur the shading a lot. Also, the earpink looks a bit watery, I'd suggest making it look more solid. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:38, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

also the back is a little too dark lighten it a bit. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:38, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

There's some waist in front of the chest. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:12, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on the chest and front legs is a tad too bright, dull it down a bit. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 20:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Do you guys like the other one better than this one? With the other one, I had a really hard time fixing the shading, I couldn't brighten it, couldn't blur it. With this one, it's easier, but the pelt is darker. Comments? ♫☮ɛɱɱɑ8362☮♫ 20:30, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the other one had blotchier shading, but this one's shading is kind of random, so I think this one is better. see the apprentice tutorials on the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:26, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bunch. llwildheartl03:58 Thu Oct 6

Ear pink needs to be the same color as her warrior image. Jayce (  ) 20:14, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the earpink and brightened the highlights, currently working on shading. --♫☮ɛɱɱɑ'8362☮♫' 21:01, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this image has been up well over a month. It's time this is declined. Work on it more, and you can post it again. Sorry. Appledash❤ crowfeather 23:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (Q) - Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.queen.png]]I added her yesterday, but somehow she was deleted. :P Anyway I know it sucks! Moonstream 17:48, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Moved to the correct section. It doesn't match her other chararts, so get the colors off of them. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:04, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Also, isn't this more than the page limit? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 18:09, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink bigger, and she needs a gray nose. Iveh Yo! 18:46, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

I think this is over the limit of 35. Silverhmm 19:12, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

It's not now, and the others should have been archived. Iveh Yo! 20:25, August 23, 2011 (UTC)

blur the stripes more --Bloo!yo 00:06, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink and enlarge it a bit more. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 02:26, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ShadewingMischief Managed... 13:49, August 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing though.Moonstream 17:46, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I redid her stripes, blured the shading, and changed her colors to match her other chararts. I can see some white dots, but I colored those in, hang on I'm still editing her.Moonstream 19:16, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay fixed the white dots, but the changes arn't showing :PMoonstream 19:19, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Now the changes are showing. Yay! I also blurred the ear-pink a little more. Hope it gets approved soon!Moonstream 20:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes, blur the earpink more, and lighten the highlights. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:56, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might not show.Moonstream 22:30, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur all the stripes and the earpink and the shading. You should redden the earpink too. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

And it needs to match her other chararts. It has too many stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:47, August 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes might show. I'm not sure. It looks like they are not showing. I removed some stripes, and blurred everything.Moonstream 03:43, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Changes are not showing!Moonstream 15:17, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Okay changes are showing, a little.Moonstream 15:23, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:26, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing. I added a gray nose, blurred the stripes, and removed some black smudge around her tail.Moonstream 22:46, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Willowbreeze.queen.png, and remove a few more stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:01, August 25, 2011 (UTC)

I'll try, but there are other willobreeze.queen images.Moonstream 01:26, August 26, 2011 (UTC)

Then overwrite the images :] Splook it's a long way down. 15:34, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But the previous image always shows up, but I'll try!Moonstream 17:27, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I canged the name to Willowbreeze.queen.png, and removed a little more stripes. Hope it gets approved!Moonstream 17:35, August 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur ze highlights, especially tail and haunch. User:Shadewing/Sig 21:01, August 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She looks a little dark compared to her Warrior image. Damn Skippy. 00:30, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Her warrior image was not apporved yet. I copied her colors from her kit, and apprentice pics.Also, I won't be on start after this, not until tommorrow.Moonstream 02:06, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Anyway, there's a white pixel on the front right (our right) paw. Damn Skippy. 12:58, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes aren't showing. :P I fixed the white on the paw.Moonstream 21:33, August 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more and round it; it looks a bit flat. ScarletwindFairy Tail Mage 04:00, August 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Darkened the shading a bit more, and blured it. Hope it gets approved!Moonstream 21:46, August 30, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't everyone? xD Lighten the highlights a bit, and blur them . Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:45, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes are showing now.Moonstream 17:29, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back highlight a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:46, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading, blur the highliht on her belly and left front leg, blur the earpink a bit. This looks friggin awesome by the way 8D --Bloo!yo 01:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Thank you! I blured the earpink, and the highlights.Also, I darkened the shading, just tell me to lighten it if it's too dark.:D PS. The changes might not show. :PMoonstream 22:25, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Mmkay, blur the front left leg and belly highlight more, make it look smooth like the tail & haunch x3 --Bloo!yo 22:33, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, the changes are now showing! I'm gonna re-upload it now.Moonstream 00:44, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes arn't showing. But i smudged the highlights.Moonstream 01:01, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

heheh, your gonna hate meh for saying this but blurr/smudge them some more xD Oh, and darken the very bottom of her belly and chest shading --Bloo!yo 03:20, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are still not showing! It looks way better than this.Moonstream 04:57, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Sky, it's over 9000!! 04:25, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur / smudge the stripes into the pelt and make the whole thing lighter.Moonstorm88 10:19, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Make what lighter? Her pelt colors?Moonstream 16:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moonstorm, sorry but the stripes should not be smudged into the pelt, because it won't match the other images. Ivyheart =P 00:07, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Changes are not showing!!Moonstream 13:24, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, now the changes are showing. So, should I smudge in the stripes? Or leave them? :| Moonstream 19:48, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

This is coming along nicely! Also, do not darken the whole thing like moonstorm said. It's supposed to match the others x) Anyways, blur the front legs and back highlights(heheh..) and did you add the darker shading to the very bottom of the stomach & chest liek I told you to? I dont see any .-. --Bloo!yo 21:58, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is too dark. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 21:02, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: Changes arn't showing. I lightened the shading a bit, and added the darker shading like Blue said, (hehe) and blurred the highlights a little. Though, I won't be on during this weekend, :P so yea, I might be on, or not.Moonstream 03:13, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on her stomache needs to be blurred a lot. This is looking great! ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:47, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thank you! But somehow the changes are still not showing! Just wait till' the changes show.Moonstream 16:55, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

She was mentioned to have the same forehead markings as Silverstream in CP. I think the charart should reflect that. Otherwise, beautiful. Shelly For a limited time only 20:39, September 11, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading on the front paw and back.`DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:59, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Tone down the shading just a teensy bit. Iveh Yo! 17:19, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Okay the changes ar not showing. I kept her forehead marking the same 'cause I based it on her kit image and apprentice.Moonstream 00:09, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

The kit and apprentice chararts can be tweaked, but it was specifically stated that Willowbreeze and Silverstream have identical forehead markings. I honestly think it should be done. In any case, realistically, all cats have the tabby M. Shelly For a limited time only 00:37, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly's right. Honestly, it's a simple tweak for the other images. Moon, if you could do that, we'd appreciate it. =) Jayce (  ) 00:48, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: The changes are showing! Kk, XD I removed the stripe and added the "M" on her.Moonstream 20:40, September 15, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:01, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

This is really pretty ^^. Blur the stripes a tad more. Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:58, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank you! I blurred the shading and the stripes. But the changes aren't showing. :P Moonstream 18:27, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Any more tips?Moonstream 20:02, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading into the pelt and define the earpink. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:35, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I defined the earpink and blurred the shading.Moonstream 22:13, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes more. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:38, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the ear pink and also smudge the stripes into the pelt to give it a more natual look Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:34, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, it doesnt need smudging cause it needs to match the others. Again, this is coming along great. spread out the back & front arm highlights & blur em --Bloo!yo 22:55, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the shading on the bottom of the haunch. There is some waste in the very upper left corner. Iveh Yo! 01:12, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, something's wrong with Pixlr. And also, I won't be on today, only now(Dentist:(.. )Moonstream 20:09, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce (  ) 03:34, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights visible on her stomach. Silverhmm 11:30, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce (  ) 21:44, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a few days, if she doesn't work on it, I can take over... Ivyheart =P 17:02, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I'm sorry! I was grounded! I got rid of the black smudge....My tablet isn't responding.Moonstream 00:01, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

I'll work on it more tomorrow. Is that okay? This is my first charart and I don't want to lose this.Moonstream 00:04, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Blured some of the stripes, and the highlights. And I believe I thickened the shading at the bottom of her haunch. Any ways, more tips? Or is this approved?(crosses fingers! XD!!)Moonstream 20:30, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

The shading/highlights still need to be blurred a ton, and needs to be lightened a bit. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:34, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The highlight on her back needs to be enlarged a tad, as well. Rainlegs 00:36, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the highlight on the face aswell. User:XXXSpecklestreamXXX/Sig 19:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: blurred the highlights and shading, and enlarged the back highlight. Oh and Paleclaw? Lighten what?Moonstream 20:05, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the highlight on the face so it matches the intensity of the ones on the front paws. Brighten the earpink, too. llwildheartl03:53 Thu Oct 6

Re-Uploaded: Okay... Um I brightened the earpink and face. I hope this gets approved soon! I have way too much school work! :| --Moonstream 19:40, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

If the month rule is clarified, then I think this will be approved soon. Nice work. Ivyheart =P 01:17, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really dark, can you tone it down? Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†...

 16:26, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Thank's Ivyheart! Sure grayravenpaw, I lighted it a little. Just to match her kit and apprentice images, her warrior image is a little too bright. Moonstream 21:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

That's Ivystripe, not Gray. He left. Lighten the base color, just a smidge. I think it's only a tad too dark. Jayce (  ) 19:53, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: Oops! Sorry ivystripe!XD I lightened the base a little.Moonstream 21:35, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Moonstream, but I'm going to need to decline your image. The one month limit has been passed. Jayce (  ) 03:04, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Declined


So here she is....People did this vefore, so I don't see why I cant, Once Fleck is withdrawn, this will be number 35. I took all colors from her Warrior image, this ish my first comments? Flowerpatch 00:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

NICE x) blurr the earpnik, smudge where the white meets the brown, and define the stripes --Bloo!yo 00:07, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She looks miscolored, take the colors from her warrior image. Pearls 00:09, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I did, sweetie, it is just I shade and highlight differ than Mosspool. I use Pixrl, I think she uses Gimp, thats all ;)

Anyway; Reuploaded. Thank you, Blueorca^^ changes aren't showing. (I think I need to blur the stripes, don't I?) Flowerpatch 00:21, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Extend the stripes a little butm and blur them some on the legs. Splook it's a long way down. 00:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Butm? And this is the same stripe style on her warrior image. Flowerpatch 00:44, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

The white from her tail is too far in, blend it a little better. --Iveh Yo! 00:50, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She has a bit of white on her haunch on her warrior image, so I did that here. Or do I get rid of it?.... Flowerpatch 00:56, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the warrior image is facing left, and loners face right, so they don't have to match that much. Blur the earpink, darken the shading, lighten the highlights, and blur them a lot. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 01:04, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It just looked weird to me, but whatever. Define your light source so that it falls over the high and low parts of her muscles. Iveh Yo! 01:25, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

I think the white on her should be just a bit lighter.. So that we can see the shading and highlights. Misty! 01:41, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? Flowerpatch 03:03, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink just a bit more ;) Misty! 04:10, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

She needs a patch on her front leg/arm closest to us Iveh Yo! 05:06, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

It isn't the same style as her warrior image. Splashpelt is correct. Extend the stripes or re-do them. Appledash❤ crowfeather 20:05, August 31, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll re-do it.(Well the stripes anyway. ;)) Flowerpatch 23:18, September 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Hows that? Flowerpatch 00:15, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

better. Blur the stripes, and it looks kind of 2D. Try using the regular loner shading (See Fleck's loner version under this one.) Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:36, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Due to the fact, my sister, Flowerpatch isn't on, I want to point this out; Ivystripe uses Gimp, Flowerpatch Does not. Therefore, she can't match the shading, sorry. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:40, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

The fact that I have GIMP has no impact on that. I practiced doing the shading and looked at how loners were shaded, on the high parts of theit bodies you just don't add shading, and on the really low points you add extra shading. I could do it without layers. Iveh Yo! 14:25, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make it match her warrior image. Even if you and Mossy use different programs, you can still match it. Appledash❤ crowfeather 16:11, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

  • Dips head* Okay, I will see what I can do. And Sis, Maple. We BOTH know, I hate it when you try to help me, and I've told already, to NOT comment on any images I do. Lets face it, you hate me, and I hate you. Flowerpatch 22:20, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

All programs use the same basic tools, so you should be able to. ;D I use pixlr, and it works just fine. And, try to get along for the sake of PCA. :P I'm sure that if one of you was falling off a cliff, the other would save them. Lol. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:49, September 2, 2011 (UTC)

  • sighs* Fine fine, I'll try....anyway, Reuploaded, I tried to match the shading style. Changes aren't showing. Flowerpatch 13:48, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sis, Changes are showing now, darken the shading. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:58, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think she has ginger on the front leg away from us, or on the back paw either. Sky, forever flying 17:20, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, you dont see the parts i added ginger to, so i did it anyway, she seemed to have more White than ginger, so I added more ginger. Flowerpatch 17:28, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oh hey, wow, changes are showing, what are the odds? ;) Flowerpatch 21:11, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the legs farthest from the viewer Iveh Yo! 21:26, September 3, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Flowerpatch 15:24, September 4, 2011 (UTC)

  • gigles* Is the image so good, you can't find a thing wrong with it? Is this why it lacks comments? ;) Flowerpatch 02:38, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the back leg seems a lot darker then the rest of her. I suggest lightening it. Jayce (  ) 03:37, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tad on the white areas. Rainlegs 03:47, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Very pretty, Flower :) Right where the tail starts, where the ginger is, there seems to be a bit of color lighter than the rest of the ginger. Ivyheart =P 03:50, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur where the gunger meets the white on the mzzle. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:43, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Wow I can't type. -.- I meant Ginger, and Muzzle. XD ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:00, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

To make it more consistent, Move the left back leg patch to the top, take the patch on the left front leg off, and make the right front leg patch wrap around the leg. Moonstorm88 11:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Moon, can you explain that? Like dumb it down. Not that I'm dumb! I'm dislexic, so is my sis, and she can't firgure out what you mean, so can you explain it for me? Flowerpatch 13:04, September 5, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- Okay, is that what you meant? Flowerpatch 00:51, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

The changes probably aren't showing. What I meant was to make the back leg behind the pointed one put the patch on the other half of her leg but take the other one off. On the front leg, the one behind the pointed one, take the patch off. On her other front leg, make it so it looks the patch goes around her whole leg. Sorry for the confusion. Moonstorm88 01:38, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Lol. Thanks, me and My sis, Flowerpatch, HATED the fact we couldn't figure it out, and it should be like... the....sixth one down, i think. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:25, September 6, 2011 (UTC)

Add some more stripes to the ginger patches, darken the shading on the tail and legs, and blur the ear-pink a bit more. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:11, September 8, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- i added some smaller stripes everyhere and there, darkened the shading on the tail and legs, and blurred the earpink. comments? Flowerpatch 17:46, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight to the tail. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:35, September 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I made the tail highlight more visabile. Comments? Flowerpatch 15:38, September 10, 2011 (UTC) Looks good sis! Just blur the shading a touch. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:49, September 10, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- What else? Flowerpatch 22:51, September 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the tail highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:22, September 14, 2011 (UTC)

I thought i said this....the tail doesn't have a highlight xP. Reuploaded-Darkend the shading. Comments? Flowerpatch 22:57, September 16, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ginger transitions. Looking good, Flowerpatch ;D Selene; She's got eyes of the bluest sky~ 01:59, September 17, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded- Thanks, Elorisa :) Flowerpatch 15:21, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shoulder and haunch highlights. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:29, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the legs Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:35, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Flowerpatch 02:45, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty sis! I see nothing wrong with her. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:58, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the tail, please. I can't really even see any visible shading. Iveh Yo! 23:11, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the chest. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:37, September 23, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded-You guys are picky with the tail, 'define the hightlight.' 'Darken the shading.' your confusing me DX Flowerpatch 13:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a bit of highlights/a light color on the edge of the tail and hind leg. Looks good! ☮OwlXGlitter☮..4EVERThe Peace is Perfect☯ 00:05, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It is suppoused to be there, my sis was told to match Fleck's highlights, so she did. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:30, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah there is blured lineart and also smudge a little bit more Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

@Santstormrocks no she doesn't need to smudge since it would create a continuity error. Please check the other pixils before suggesting something like that. Iveh Yo! 01:14, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, there is no blurred lineart, my sister had been very carefulr, there is not ONE pixil of blurred lineart here. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:22, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't believe that is blurred lineart Sandstorm. But, there's this little white line on the hindleg that goes farthest back, and it looks odd because it's pure white and has no smudge or blurring. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 23:50, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sand, let it be known, i took GREAT offence to that, Like Maplepool said i didn't blurr so much as ONE pixil of lineart here. Reuploaded. Flowerpatch 02:14, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes get lost in the highlights xD also the smudging between the white & the ginger seems to stop right around the lineart (if ya know what I mean) --Bloo!yo 05:00, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is too red, please make it more pink. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:27, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I left the Ear-pink the way it was, i took all colors from her Warrior image, Reuploaded. Flowerpatch 15:40, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes match the other versions better? Also, try blurring the whole thing more, really. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Define the transition between white and ginger on the tail. llwildheartl03:54 Thu Oct 6

Flowerpatch, it's been at least five days. Are you still working on this? Please do so, otherwise it will be declined. Jayce (  ) 16:31, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Because we are enforcing the one month rule, this will be declined. Jayce (  ) 03:08, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Voleclaw (A)- Declined

[[File:Voleclaw.Apprentice.png.png]]It sucks, I know I'm a total fail!Moonstream 18:53, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is good. However, we are NOT accepting apprentice chararts as the blanks will be re-done in a year or so. So this will be declined. Appledash❤ crowfeather 19:17, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm is correct. Archiving. Splook it's a long way down. 19:44, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

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