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Hawkfrost (Alt. W) - Declined

[[File:Hawkfrost.warrior.alt.jpg]]Here he is.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 02:00, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Ehh..I dont think we have a cite for that trivia, do we? Oh, and save it as a png next time -Bloo!yo

No, we don't i think this will be declined, but if you can find a cite for it, then it will stay up. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 02:06, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

If this stays up, then you need to make the scar the same color as his earpink. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 02:12, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

It it does stay, add highlights to the chest, face, and haunch. Also add shading to the back, haunch, and legs. Rainface<3 10:19, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Darken tne ear pink Leaf-storm,11:42,October 7,2011 (UTC)

When I did this, it was declined, so this will probably be too. SilverThe Glee Project 11:56, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Fine a cite for this, and it stays. Otherwise, it will be declined. Just because it's on his page, doesn't mean it's true. snoωed ℓightning    19:47, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

I left a question on Hawkfrost's talk about the white mentioning back in July, and it has yet to be linked. You better go back and find the reference, or Cloudskye is right. This will be declined if nothing is found. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:09, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

I've been scoping through the books in the second arc, and I haven't seen Hawkfrost mentioned to be white at all. SilverThe Glee Project 11:29, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

This is going to be declined, then? And I thought I added shading and highlights. Just lightly. I don't really like this anyway. Go ahead 'n' decline it. I don't mind.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 01:50, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to the fact a proper source cannot be found/artist request. snoωed ℓightning    01:52, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Soot (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Soot.kit.png]]Yay my first charart!! Please tell me if its horrible because I think it is.Leopardheart Creature Of The Night 18:40, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Aww! So cute! Just blur the earpink a tad bit more. This is very pretty! Also, I linked Soot to her page.Moonstream 18:59, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks for adding the link to her page Moonstream! :) Leopardheart Creature Of The Night 19:25, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It's weird how this looks exactly like Hollyleaf's kit image. Blur the chest shading. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

It does doesn't it? Hmmm I can redo it to not look like her if I need to. and Reuploaded Leopardheart Creature OfThe Night 20:05, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, please change this. I'm the artist of Hollyleaf's long-haired kit image, and I don't like the fact it looks exactly the same. snoωed ℓightning    00:13, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

This image is being declined. This is Hollyleaf's kit image, with minor things tweaked. This counts as plagiarism. This is my work you took, and claimed as your own. If you're going to put something up for approval, make sure it's your own work next time. snoωed ℓightning    00:25, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[[File:Hawkfrost.alt.warrior.jpg]]Yes, my white one was declined. Because we couldn't find a reference for it. But I can with this one. Hawkfrost was described as a "broad-shouldered dark brown tom" in the allegiances of Midnight. I would've put the reference thing in the "References & Citations" section of Hawkfrost's page, but I don't know the coding. Could someone add it? And, comments?-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 06:02, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink, it's hardly visible. Sky- Trick and gimmie candy 06:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

If he's supposed to be dark brown, take the pelt color from a dark brown cat, like Dustpelt or one of Hawkfrost's other chararts. This is too light to be dark brown. snoωed ℓightning    06:08, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

The eyes are dark blue, make them ice blue.  Stoneclaw    06:10, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

He is already dark brown, he doesnt need an alt. We dont give tabbies an alt just because they were called thier coat colour. Someone already tried this and it was declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 06:15, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart made the call. Declining. snoωed ℓightning    07:34, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Sweetpaw.kit.png]] Yay! My first tortie! :3 Anyway, her patches needed to be re-done, and shading needed to be added/defined. OA is the amazing Night shine. Comments? Leggo 🏈 14:41, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and, no, you cannot steal it. Leggo 🏈 14:53, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Just because she can't steal it, doesn't mean I won't. Lighten the shading on the white. snoωed ℓightning    15:14, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Never. >:D Leggo 🏈 15:26, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

You might want to brush up on the Tweak page rules. This is declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:37, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt W) ~ Declined

[[File:Blossomfal.alt.warrior.png]] Comments? Moonkitti 17:23, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

You can't have more than one image for approval at the same time, even if it's on CBA. This will be declined.  Stoneclaw    17:33, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't, she withdrew Birdpaw's KP image, Mistypebble is working on it now, Moony isn't. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:39, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and the light part on her arm shouldn't be facing away from the light source. Itshould be on the front of the arm. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 17:46, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

The were talking about broken star not her. she doesn't get an al. This will be declined. ---ſceheartBlah blah 19:19, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Then, should we remove it from her trivia? So no one else gets confused? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:26, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

""The question should be, what can I do for you?" the former ShadowClan leader replied. He paced forward into the center of the clearing, and the cat behind him followed. As the brown tabby emerged into the light, Ivypool drew in a horrified breath." There. They are referring to Blossomfall, because Brokenstar was already in the clearing when Blossomfall emerged from the shadows. It stays up for approval. snoωed ℓightning    19:37, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. If Brokenstar led the cat into the clearing, it was not Brokenstar. This stays. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:54, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Uhh.. I have this reserved. Ivyheart =P 00:08, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Oh, shoot! I just realized I meant to put it on the chart, I had only said it. My bad. Ivyheart =P 00:10, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

rename this Blossomfall.warrior.alt.png. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:17, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

blur it where the shading and highlights meet.  Stoneclaw    17:53, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Her eyes look purple, can you fix that? Also, blur the earpink. 19:25, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blend it with the highlights (if you use them). snoωed ℓightning    19:43, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?  Stoneclaw    16:22, October 9, 2011 (UTC) Tomorrow will be a week. Should someone else take over? SilverThe Glee Project 23:22, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:08, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelflight ~ Declined

[[File:Squirrelflight.queen.png]]Honestly I do hate Squirrelflight but she is such a BOO-TI-FUL queen :) I had a fun time doing her! If you have issues with stripes so do I :| the color I took from her warrior for some reason didn't show up on the image so I went back and took it again and that's the color I got. I really like this one! One step closer to a warrior ;) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:35, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This will be declined, she never had kits, and was never seen expecting kits, Hollyleaf, Lionblaze, Jayfeather aren't her kits, they are leafpool's, sorry. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 12:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't it said that if she was listed in the allegiances as a queen she would get a charart? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No. The rule states that the project defines queens as cats that have been seen as pregnant or nursing kits, or have been mentioned as doing so in the past. This has never been so for Squirrelflight. She was never pregnant, and the charart design shows an obviously pregnant cat. The new rule allowed for Yellowfang and Leafpool to get queen chararts, but not Squirrelflight. I'm sorry, but this will be declined. Shelly For a limited time only 12:49, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. -ScarletwindLisanna 13:56, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mudfur (MCA) ~ Declined

[[File:Mudfur.mca.png]] Comments? DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:28, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't see your version anywhere in the upload history. Iveh Yo! 22:32, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think Dapplecloud DID upload it, Define the ear-pink, Blur highights, give him a plae belly, and fill in the white pixil on his hind leg farthest from us, and define/darken the shading, then blur it. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:35, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I thought you were supposed to have YOUR version at the time of upload, as an image like ths got declined in the past. Upload your version soon, Dapplecloud, or I think this may get declined...Iveh Yo! 22:36, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

She did upload her own image.... SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:39, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

She did after my comment, which it won't get declined now. Blur the belly and make it like his aproved MC image. Make the earpink bigger and less neon. Iveh Yo! 22:41, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Now I reuploaded it. Sorry I forgot to until Ivystripe mentioned it. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:50, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Don't make the belly too pale. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall 00:00, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

It needs to look like his MC, Owl. In fact, I think the color for the belly is just fine. However, can you blur where it meets the base color? snoωed ℓightning    06:57, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, it just looks a bit awkward. But that's kinda what I meant. OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

  00:44, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

The base brown is too dark. Use #8E6235, which is the base pelt color for his medicine cat image. It looks awkward for a few seconds, but once you get used to it, it's not all that bad. snoωed ℓightning    02:42, September 29, 2011(UTC)

Lighten the main pelt color.  Stoneclaw    06:38, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneclaw, that's what I told her to do, if you had read my comment. =) snoωed ℓightning    06:39, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry.  Stoneclaw    16:49, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded 'DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:22, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights. Fixed the title for you too ^^. SilverThe Glee Project 00:45, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks!:D DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 03:54, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Wonderful, Dapple! Blur where the pale belly and the light brown meet a little more. snoωed ℓightning    03:59, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Beatifully done! Enlarge and define the earpink. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 01:53, October 1, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

the pale belly is too peach match the warrior image. otherwise awesome job. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 17:49, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

'Reuploaded 'DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:27, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the pale belly a bit and tone down the highlights. Good job. :) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:14, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

The bottom herb looks neon. Make it a paler green instead of the pure green color offored in most image softwares. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 03:49, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the transition from the pale belly to the brown fur, and extend the pale part up onto his muzzle, like the MC and warrior have. snoωed ℓightning    06:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Put/define shading on the herbs. Ivyheart =P 15:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten and define the earpink. llwildheartl23:46 Sun Oct 9

Please work on this or it will be declined. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 22:01, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Declining to due lack of work. It's been over a week since Dapple's re-uploaded. snoωed ℓightning    19:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (alt.W) ~ Declined

[[File:Rainwhisker.warrior.alt.png]] Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:25, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, Misty but Rainwhisker was an apprentice when he was seen as gray and white. This will be declined. Sorry. -ScarletwindLisanna 22:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops. xD Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:35, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Beechfur (RC).warrior.png]] OA was Sandwich989, and I redid it as a longhair. Comments? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:14, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur and darken the shading Iciloo 23:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And add depth to the eye Iciloo 23:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

There is depth in the eye. RE-Uploaded. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:16, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit of 15 images, this would be the 16th. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 23:17, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Oops, thanks for the reminder. I counted wrong. D: Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

That's ok, we all make mistakes sometimes. For now it'll be declined and when something is taken off the page put it back up ^^ It's coming along great. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 23:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar (Alt Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Mistystar.alt.queen.png]] Comments? Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:52, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Adjust the shading so she looks a bit less flat, and define the ear-pink a lot. Shelly For a limited time only 22:53, September 30, 2011 (UTC)


Then who? And, to clarify, I meant that the shading should follow her body mass, not go in a straight line across her entire body. Shelly For a limited time only 23:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, make the shading according to her bones and outline of her body rather then just a line. SplookMavinotp♥ 23:06, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Mostly they need to follow the rise and fall of muscle mass, not exactly bone. Look at a tutorial on how to shade a queen. The earpink need to be bigger. Add depth to the eye. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 23:25, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:00, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Maplepool, i would check out some tutorials on how to do shading and highlights on queens. Use Mistyheart's tutorials if you use pixlr or nightcloud's if you use gimp. there are other tutorials, though i use those two primaraly (i know it is spelled wrong, i was never the best speller) Rainface<3 00:03, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded, better, worse?....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 00:27, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and darken the shading toward the bottom; give it some volume. -ScarletwindLisanna 00:59, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Can you make the eyes less grayish white looking? Ivyheart =P 04:44, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make the shading more visible SilverThe Glee Project 11:37, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Ugh, i can't get the shading to look right. Reuploaded Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded-I messed with the shading, and i got this.....idk, it lokks better. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 16:05, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Make sure to add highlights since she is described as sleek. SilverThe Glee Project 17:23, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

I gave her highlights! Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:25, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten them, blur the shading, enlarge the earpink a tiny bit, and add shading under the chin, along the neck. Leggo 🏈 18:46, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:49, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

No offense, Maplepool....But I think this one is worse. The shading is WAY dark, or the base color is WAY light. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 12:05, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

It is the highlights, i was told to make her look sleek, so i did. *shurgs* I'll fix it, if you like, but i was only doing what i was told. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 14:34, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Add some highlights on the paws and make the face highlight bigger. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:53, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

I followed the shading tutoiral for the queens.....should I change it?....Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks fine unless you want to change where the light is coming from. Either way, make the lighter shading/highlighta (if you use them) the same...color I suppose, and I'd add highlights or whatever you use to the chest. Nice work! Atelda 16:52, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

............What?......The highlights are.....I'm Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:08, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 17:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart by the haunch. Blur the highlights and shading. And darken the highlights. --Iciloo 18:24, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

REuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 18:36, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Uploading again, trying to get the changes to show. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:18, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

blur the shading and highlights a ton, dull the highlights, and add a lighter part to her forearm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:11, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Maplepool? -ScarletwindLisanna 02:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over once Mapleshade's loner is approved, since it's only got about another half hour or so. snoωed ℓightning    14:48, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

^^She hasn't uploaded in a week, so it's fair game. snoωed ℓightning    14:49, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I'll be taking this over now. I'll upload in a bit. snoωed ℓightning    15:35, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Gonna decline this, then re-post it. snoωed ℓightning    15:37, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Blackclaw (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[[File:Blackclaw.alt.warrior.png]] Ugh. I think this one's really bad. The earpink looks really bad. Blackclaw when he was described as dark brown. Comments?  Stoneclaw    12:53, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

The area in bewtween his legs is brown, get rid of that, make the earpink smaller. Sky- Stealing all ur candy 12:55, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I named the image wrong too, I will fix that. I am gonna be gone for 2 or 3 days. No one takes over.  Stoneclaw    12:59, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I've put this up before, and so has Paleclaw, and he actually was confused with his apprentice. This is going to be declined. :( Ivyheart =P 14:05, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed, Ivy. Declined due to reasons above. -ScarletwindLisanna 15:05, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Percy (Alt.R) ~ Declined

[[File:PerceyAltR.png]]Percy was mentioned as a gray cat (Not dark gray nor' tabby) on page.112 of SkyClans destiny. Correct me and decline this if it should not be up. BTW, I hate this. I hate doing rogues all together, the way the shading is suppose to look bothers me. Feathermoon. 02:37, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Those are just basic shading guidelines, and you don't need to follow them. Anyways, define the ear pink and darken the shading ever so slightly. snoωed ℓightning    02:39, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

No this shouldnt be here. He is gray, he doesnt need an alt without stirpes. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

He is dark gray, this is just gray. Feathermoon. 02:41, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, blend the back shading. Btw the shading guidelines say they look like that because of the way the muscles manipulate the way the light falls on their body. Iveh Yo! 02:42, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

It stays. Dark gray tabby and simply being gray are two totally different things, Iceheart. snoωed ℓightning    02:43, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Also, this is just like Oakheart being called tawny. He got an alt, when reddish-brown and tawny are very close in color. I know he got one, because I'm the one who made his image. snoωed ℓightning    02:47, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

As stated in the guidelines:An alternative image should NOT be made when a synonym of a color is used in the books. Gray and dark grayu are to similar. We dont make an alt for tabbies being called their base colour, and thats what this is. And to top it all off theres no reference. I dont want to debate this. -ſceheartBlah blah 02:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Iceheart on this one. We don't make an alt every time Firestar isn't called a bright-ginger tom (which is often), do we? Shelly For a limited time only 02:52, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going to look up said reference provided. Iveh Yo! 02:53, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, it said: she licked his rumpled gray pelt. I just think they didn't feel like saying his rumpled dark gray tabby pelt. I don't exactly think he should get one, I'm sorry =( Agreed with Shellheart's example. Iveh Yo! 02:57, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

That's fine. After all, everyone should follow the guidelines, shouldn't they? Archiving now. snoωed ℓightning    02:59, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Blackstar (Alt.2) ~ Declined

[[File:Blackstar.leader.alt2.png]] Comments? Specklestream Let it Snow! 15:22, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

He wouldn't get on just for having one black paw. It's such a minor thing, honestly. snoωed ℓightning    15:30, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. This is declined. Iveh Yo! 16:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Leafpool (Q) - Declined

[[File:Leafpool.queen.png]]ok, every time i put this up there's too many, but i'm hoping this one isn't a mistake and there really is room for it. anyway, hwo do you like it?Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 01:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, the ear farthest from us should be brown, not white. Make the white on her face closer to her eyes. Add a light part/highlight to her haunch. And yes this will stay. Nice job on this so far! Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 01:37, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading...a lot, especially on the hanch, tail, chest, and face. Also make the transition of the white and brown smoother by blurring it. Desaturate the earpink a bit and darken her eyes. Possibly make her stripes a bit larger too. ;) Atelda 01:39, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Atelda, you made me edit conflict about three times D:< Define the shading and enlarge the highlights. Extend them as well in the appropriate light sources. SplookMavinotp♥ 01:43, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Also turn the ear brown, and make the grey parts an almost white. Sky- Allons-y! 02:11, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Redo the stripes to match the warrior image, and use the kit image as a reference for how the white should look. Shelly For a limited time only 02:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ok now i failed horribly! I tried to define the highlights and shading more on the haunch and places, and now it's all light in some places and dark in others! And omg, I just realized i forgot to redo the stripes like the warrior image:( I feel like such and idiot, i'll try again.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 05:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Ok, the changes aren't showing! :( It wouldn't let me reupload a new version, i have to upload it again and it won't show up again:(. This is annouying. but when it shows, this one is fixed, it took me a long time but now it makes me feel like less of an idiot:). I also noticed that the white belly goes through one of her eyes in the warrior charart, so i did that too.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 06:46, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

kk, now the changes are showing.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 06:47, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Take the colors from her Warrior charart (not the MC one), match the stripes to her warrior charart too. Color in her eyes, dull and blur the earpink, blur the white, make the white not go over her right (our left) eye, and remove the white to the right of her front arm. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:26, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eye color darker, because it looks like she doesn't even have any eye color. Blur the ear pink too. SilverThe Glee Project 11:26, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge and blur the white where it meets with brown more, blur ear-pink and add some more stripes on the belly and back and one stripe on neck if you want, and the eye color can be darker it looks like yellow to me, Leaf-storm,11:34,October 8,2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights. ☾Mint☽Luckily, there is a Family Guy. 14:03, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

i will try to fix these things, but when i try to dull the highlights it goes crazy and i end up having to do all the brown over again. I took these colors straight from her warrior image, i might have done it wrong but i took the eyedropper and put it on this image. if there is any other way to do it PLEASE tell me because the eyedropper keeps picking up the highlights and shading and doesn't get the right color. and I have tried many times, if i darken the eye color anymore it turns gray. can someone please send me and example of what color her eyes should be? And lastly, Paleclaw, when I put this up before I got complaints that her chest goes a little beyond her front legs and there should be a little white there, too. I don't want to repeat it as shellheart told me that i need to have it a little past the front legs.Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 17:33, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

But the kit image that Shelly said to reference needs to be tweaked to match her Warrior version. Work off that one, not the others. And on the Warrior one, it ends right above the legs. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:33, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

I got the colors of her eyes from the warrior image for you: #FBCC17, #B18100, and #EAAE0C . Also, the earpink isn't the right color. It should be more like: #EC5350 Blur the earpink more, too. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:03, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Wow, everything that i can complain about it (no offense bluey) has already been stated. XD Rainfacestar Vampire time! 02:04, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Err...Rainfacestar, that is a little uncalled for. Please be nice, and also, it is uncontributive to just say "I agree", it's like repeating someone's criticism. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 02:09, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes don't match the current stripes on her warrior image; tweak them so they do. llwildheartl21:42 Mon Oct 10

Blur and make her ear pink more triangular. It looks like its touching the line art. {{SUBST:Mistypebble/sig}} 01:18, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color please. The brown doesn't match her warrior image. snoωed ℓightning    06:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I try to copy the colors, but they're really hard because when i use the eyedropper it keeps picking up highlights and shading. i'll try, and i really apprecitace the help with the colors, twilightheart. I will work on it when I have more time, but I have a BIG problem... i'm going to be gone for a week on vacation where I won't have internet acess. Is there a way I could keep this charart while i'm gone?--Bluedawn With Clouds like Shining eyes... 09:53, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Are you going to be gone for exactly seven days? I think it can be five days and you can keep it. Is there any way you can get on during that? Also, the numbers that are colored above are the colors you can use for this. If you don't know how to how to use the numbers as colors, then print screen that section, then use the color-picker tool and pick them off the colors :3 Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

If it's alright and she's going to be gone for a week, may I take over with her permission? Iciloo 15:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Be patient, let's find out if it's 5 days or a week. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:32, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink.  Stoneclaw    15:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Bluey, if you are having issue's with this, just ask for help. Anyone here on PCA will more then gladly help you. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 19:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blue will be gone for five days. For some reason, she's having issues editing the section. Check my talk page for proof. snoωed ℓightning    19:41, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and blur the stripes and highlights. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:31, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

For when she comes back, she should make it match the warrior image. Ivyheart =P 14:37, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Uh...why can't I read this? I have to edit to read it. Something up with the font? Oh, and this is really good. Everything before me, I guess, but it looks like one eyes is covered with white fur, but the one closest to us is half white fur? ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 14:02, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, how long has it been sense she has been gone? Any way, I can re-upload this for her, i wouldn't mind helping her out. And i can read the font without having to edit it Regi. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 23:14, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

No. It's her image. You're only allowed to do that if the artist asks. snoωed ℓightning    23:16, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It has been six days since this was updated by Blue. As soon as the wiki clock strike midnight (8 PM EST) tonight, this is up for grabs to whomever reserves her first. Just pointing that out, I'm not after the reservation myself as I feel I've done enough queens for the time being. Shelly For a limited time only 13:36, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Although technically she hasn't updated the image itself since the 8th. Shouldn't this have been declined days ago for lack of work? It seems unfair that such a sought after charart assignment should sit here unfinished when others would jump at the chance to do it. Shelly For a limited time only 13:40, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, since this image has not been uploaded in over a week and Blue wasn't back when she said she'd be, I don't have a choice. She loses her reservation, and this image is officially up for grabs. Anyone who wants it may take it, provided they don't already have another reservation. snoωed ℓightning    14:48, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'd be willing to take this over. Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:16, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

She's yours. =)snoωed ℓightning    16:17, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt. MC) ~ Declined

[[]]Comments? Ivyheart =P 23:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I'm stupid. Daisy is still on CBA. xD Ivyheart =P 23:20, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Uh... can I take over then? Well, if I can x3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:23, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

You actually can since it hasn't been 24 hours in order to archive the image...Iveh Yo! 23:26, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Oh no... Really? I wanted to do this image so bad? Your really going to do this? Ivyheart =P 23:26, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Wait, you really wanna do it? Ok, I'll let you do it x3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:28, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I can't thank you enough. I can help you find an image if you want. :D Ivyheart =P 23:32, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Tawnypelt (alt.K2) ~ Declined

[[File:Tawnypelt.kit.alt2]] My first tabby; third charart! Comments? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:41, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Someone already has this reserved (I think Twilightheart). This is declined, as they have not been given ample time to post their picture. Iveh Yo! 22:46, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - Declined

[[File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png]]gosh, it seems like such a long time since I posted a charart here. I know I've been a bit inactive recently, but I'm going to try and be more active from now on. And, I realise there is no ear pink, Pixlr was down when I tried to do it, so I'll do it on Sumopaint or something later. I just wanted to get the image up whilst there was a space. So, comments? LeopardclawI’m a warrior now! 07:46, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have done earpink. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 09:37, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the earpink a lot. ShadewingBlades of the Night 12:25, September 18, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the highlights more smooth. Ivyheart =P 15:20, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Define your light-source, define the shading, then blur the high-lights and the shading. And take the ear-pink from Hollyleaf or Nightcloud. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 15:39, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She needs the scar across her eye too. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:03, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Misty! 19:02, September 18, 2011 (UTC)

She does not need a scar, as her scar is on her left eye. Shelly For a limited time only 02:18, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Add earpink, and blur the highlights(hope Im lookin' at the right one) --Bloo!yo

02:55, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh sorry I was using the same eye as the kittypet XD RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:40, September 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink darker, it looks to bright right now. Take the earpink from Hollyleaf.  Stoneclaw    15:27, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeopardclawLook upto the past… 16:03, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

Try to blur the ear pink a lot, and make the shoulder highlight just a tad bit bigger. :3 Misty! 20:04, September 20, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is blotchy...also make the highlights bigger. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:36, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeopardclawLook upto the past… 07:28, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights look like big bits of wet paper. Blur. And also blur shading.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 08:02, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There's a line at the bottom of the earpink that sticks out. Sky- Killer of Daleks 15:55, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Try and blend the highlights and shading a little better, Leopard. If you need help, just ask. =) snoωed ℓightning    05:20, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth the earpink out by blurring it. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:12, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Leopard?-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 02:09, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

If you are, the highlights are really blotchy. Sky- Killer of Daleks 23:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 03:20, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm sorry, I am working on it. I've just been so busy with school lately I haven't had time. Sorry. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 12:53, October 2, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights and shading way more smoother. They look very stiff. Also, there's some blurred lineart by the front leg closest to us, and darken the shading as well. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:28, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Just a friendly reminder, still working on this? SplookMavinotp♥ 19:58, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Yes, sorry, sorry. I redid the shading. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 07:36, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Blend the highlights with the shading and pelt more. They're big defined pale gray discs.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 07:55, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink.  Stoneclaw    16:15, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Why is this a long haired blank with a short haired tail? -ſceheartBlah blah 17:51, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

That is creepy. Any way, there is gray about above the shot haired tail and the foot. Rainfacestar Vampire time! 01:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink Robz You make me feel good! 07:30, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Get rid of some of this black stuff near the tail.. And define the ear pink. (sorry, my sig isn't working -_-) {{SUBST:Mistypebble/sig}} 01:08, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and center and blur the ear pink. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png, please. snoωed ℓightning   

Reuploaded Damn, I forgot to rename it. Ooops. I've blurred the highlights as much as I can, so if they need more blurring, can somebody please help me. Thanks. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 17:04, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can help if you want. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:44, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Please, Splasheh. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 16:07, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

I blurred it as much as GIMP and Pixlr would let me. If it needs blurred any more then i'd suggest re-doing it. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:53, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the highlights bigger, and the earpink looks really rectangular. Make it triangular, smaller, and blur it. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:21, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I have finally got the hang of highlights on black cats. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 18:44, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the front right leg. This is looking good. SplookMavinotp♥ 18:24, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeopardclawLook upto the past… 07:17, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste below the bottom foot and brighten the earpink. llwildheartl10:59 Sun Oct 16

Reuploaded LeopardclawLook upto the past… 18:09, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The waste isn't all gone, there is still some by the bottom foot and along the back, but mostly it's around the head. Feathermoon. 13:38, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded LeopardclawLook upto the past… 17:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This has been up for exactly a month now, so can I take over? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:03, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I wouldn't see why not, since it would have been declined anyways since it would have been over a month. snoωed ℓightning    23:16, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Since it has been over a month, this will be declined. Squirrel, you can just re-post it. snoωed ℓightning    15:26, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt L) ~ Declined

[[File:Bluestar.Leader.Alt2.png]] She was mentioned to be dark gray.

This will be declined. You don't have this reserved on the chart, nor are you a PCA member. You can join, if you wish, however. snoωed ℓightning    19:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I hardly know anything about this wiki yet.

Poppycloud (Q) - Declined

[[File:Poppycloud.queen.png]]It...disgusts me. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 11:15, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Didn't Ivyheart have this reserved? Iveh Yo! 16:59, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Checked, Ivyheart does have this reserved.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 17:06, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Agh. never mind then. >.< Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 17:45, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Declining. snoωed ℓightning    19:57, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Sedgecreek (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Sedgecreek.kit.png]]Gotta do this quick before the opening closes. Okay, I don't sync well with tabbies. This is a fail. Comments? ShadewingBlades of the Night 19:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading and possibly connect a few stripes to the other side of the lineart. :3 SplookMavinotp♥ 20:17, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes smaller, curvier, thicker, define the earpink, and darken the shading. ` Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 20:39, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but what exactly do you mean by connect the stripes? ShadewingBlades of the Night 21:41, September 21, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think connecting the stripes means to commenct the small stripes to form thicker stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:43, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the nose. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:29, September 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink & define it --Bloo!yo

Make the stripes thicker, and less of them. Darken the shading a bit too. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 14:02, September 22, 2011 (UTC)

I will get to that as soon as I can. I'm redoing the image. ShadewingBlades of the Night 19:37, September 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Please produce the revised version soon, ok? Iveh Yo! 01:08, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - A thousand apologies. I was so busy, I had absolutely no time to work on it. I still hate it. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 19:31, September 26, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Blur the stripes, define the highlights, shading, and earpink. And add a stripe or two to the hind leg. ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:07, September 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also, make the stripes a bit longer. SplookMavinotp♥ 02:04, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Any better? Changes are not showing. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 22:10, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Nevermind, they are showing xD. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 22:16, September 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The stripes still don't quite match her other chararts. Make them thicker, longer, and darken the whole thing. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:22, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes not showing. SleepingAngelThe angel is sleeping... 19:21, September 30, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the shading some more. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:00, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes a little longer, and define the pupil, it kind of looks like she's blind, or has no cornea. :P Atelda 02:15, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Does it look any better? I feel like it's getting worse and worse. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 22:17, October 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the pelt color. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:04, October 5, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - I hate this friggin' charart. It's a piece of crap. >.> Sorry for my grumpiness, it's been a long day. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:47, October 5, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Heads up, we are now enforcing the time table rule, so sometime today please add in the date you reserved this. We'd greatly appreciate it. AutumnstarTriumph over tragedy 05:02, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Done. Sorry about that. I always forget. xC SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 19:39, October 6, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The base brown is a little off, Shadeh. Can you fix it? Take the brown from her warrior image. snoωed ℓightning    06:14, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  Stoneclaw    16:17, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

That's odd. I did take the colors off her warrior image, Skye. Oh well, I'll try to fix it. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 21:40, October 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the ear-pink. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:57, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:24, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Changes aren't showing. Grell No question at all! 12:38, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wait, never mind. Silly me, they are showing. Grell No question at all! 14:59, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

This looks really good! No criticism! LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:29, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - The earpink was annoying me. xD Grell No question at all! 17:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

CBA? snoωed ℓightning    02:25, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

I hate to interrupt, but she needs some stripes on her chest like in the warrior, and the shading needs defined on the tail. Iveh Yo! 13:33, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This is so cute. but i think there is something in her left eye. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 00:19, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't find anything there. I'll get some more stripes soon. Grell No question at all! 00:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Changes aren't showing. Grell No question at all! 21:32, October 19, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Now they're showing. :) Grell No question at all! 19:28, October 20, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the earpink.  Stoneclaw    15:06, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but this is declined, since it has been up for over a month without being approved. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:03, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over, but you can archive this so I'm starting afresh. llwildheartl01:22 Sat Oct 22

Redwillow (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Redwillow.warrior.png]] Not real proud of this one. Anyways, OA was Maplefern, and the whole thing needed so much done to it, I couldn't work with the original image. The shading needed blurring, he needed stripes...need I go on? Critique it, and I'll fix it when I get up in a few hours... snoωed ℓightning    04:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Just fix up the waste and darken the shading some, looks amazing, and way better then the original :D SplookMavinotp♥ 04:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less red. Grell No question at all! 12:29, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the shading a bit, and maybe add more depth to the eye. --Leafstrike-- 17:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change the color a bit and define the mottles? Wait, screw the colors. Just darken the brightest ones. Iciloo 20:50, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Meh. snoωed ℓightning    20:54, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Desaturate the ear pink, its like fushia. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:49, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, someone added a tawny description, to which I cannot and refuse to work with. I'm withdrawing this, and I'll be reverting the tweak. snoωed ℓightning    01:02, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Swallowtail (RC) ~ Declined

[[File:Swallowtail_(RC).elder.png]]Don't shoot my head off for redoing it; it needed to match the warriors stripes (in my opinion) and the shading needed to be redone. Original artist was bramble. Elorisa 14:30, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

If it was on the tweak list, and you didn't get permission to re-do it, it will be declined. So, did you ask either Iceheart or Scarlet? snoωed ℓightning    14:37, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

No. Just decline it then; doesn't really bother me. Elorisa 14:40, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ask, then you can put it back up. snoωed ℓightning    14:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - Declined

[[File:Scourge.kit.png]]I tweaked it only because his rogue version have the white paw on the..ehm left side and kit on the right..I change it and redone shadings and hightlights , I dont know who OA was but i think its Mosswisker&Stealthfire Leaf-storm,13:35,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and highlights. Nice job! Grell No question at all! 15:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Leaf-storm,17:38,October 22,2011 (UTC)

Give him a gray nose. This is lovely. :3 Leggo 🏈 20:59, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Huh? Reuploaded Leaf-storm,8:56,October 23,2011 (UTC)

You are not allowed to have more than 2 chararts up for approval/reserved at a time. This is declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:39, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (D) - Declined

[[File:Firestar.deputy.png]]Ok, now, I'm sorry if I missed something and just made a fool out of myself, but in the tweaking section, since it says "no more than two at a time", I figure I'm allowed to do this. If not, please don't get mad, just archive this and move on. Original artist was Insaneular. Honestly, there was NO tweaking this because this had been on the list before his leader got redone, and this needed to match. I figure with the stick to the character rule, it'd still be ok that I did this because I did his kittypet. Again, if not, feel free to decline this. I, however, do really like it :3 Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 05:26, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't I hvae to do all his chararts, because the leader was approved first? Anyways, blur the belly, stripes, and ear pink. Iciloo 14:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a bit. Looks very well done, Ivy. =) snoωed ℓightning    14:50, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

The pale part of his belly on the leader image seems to come to a bit more of a sharp point than you have. Otherwise, looks fantastic. Shelly For a limited time only 17:33, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry but you cannot have more than 2 chararts for approval/reserved at a time. This will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:40, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Ravenpaw (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Ravenpaw.loner.png]] Finally putting this back up again after sitting with my 70+ chararts in the "Wiki Chararts" folder. Original artist was Minnowclaw, and the shading and highlights were blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 14:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the entire thing and the shading. Iciloo 14:49, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Now it looks blotchy. --Leafstrike-- 15:20, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

It just needs to be blurred some more. Iciloo 15:35, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Still looks blotchy. =_= --Leafstrike-- 16:45, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

You cannot have more than 2 chararts for approval at a time. This will be declined. -ſceheartBlah blah 19:42, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Millie (Alt. Lo) ~Declined

[[File:Millie.loner.alt.png]]This looks AWFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cry* MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

You need to make an outline of her collar, and you need to copy my stripes. The stripes have a darker brown in the middle and are smudged into her pelt. She doesn't have all those stripes on her legs, so get rid of those. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 14:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

And hey, also, if you are having trouble telling from my image, you could always look at what she looks like in the mangas. It should show you what the stripes look like and how many :3 Don't get down about it, just do these things and it should help. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:00, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, ugh this looks so sloppy :| MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Nahhhh now whatd did I say xD At least it matches. Add lines to the nametag of her collar, darken the shading, make her paws and muzzle a little paler using the dodge tool, there is some blurred lineart on the ear closest to us, and define the earpink/make it less blotchy. If you put yourself down, then no it won't get any better. Just think positive and before you know it, it'll get approved :3 Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:30, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Don't be to hard on yourself, every artist has different artistic views. ;)  Stoneclaw    15:33, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED any better? I honestly love Millie. (I wish she would've stayed a cream tabby, she would've been so much prettier) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:45, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink is to large, and it's covering the lineart, make it smaller.  Stoneclaw    15:47, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED lol, is this any better, I have serious issues with earpink lol. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:24, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

It's better, but still a little different from Ivy's. Try making them have a soft point on the end. snoωed ℓightning    16:31, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

You need to work under the lineart, not on top of it. I can tell you how depending on the program you use. Do you use GIMP? Shelly For a limited time only 17:03, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, you don't need to work under the lineart. She can use layers, and it's a lot easier. I don't work under the lineart, and my images are just fine. Loudsplash, darken the shading as well. snoωed ℓightning    17:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, but I still think it'd be easier. Again, if you'd rather work under the lineart and aren't sure how, just ask. ^^ In any case, you have some stripes going over the lineart that need fixing. Shelly For a limited time only 17:42, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, how do you work under lineart? I have no clue how to use layers XD And or how do you do layers too. I think it would be best ust for me to find out now. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if you're using Gimp, it's pretty simple. Select the tool that looks like a wand (aptly names the wand tool) and select the white on the base charart. Then just hit Ctrl+X and it will vanish. Do this for all white areas. Then you go the the layers section and make a new layer by hitting the button that looks like a piece of paper with its corner folded down. Drag the new layer you make underneath the original layer and, viola, you can work under the lineart. This way you can't go over any lines and you won't smudge any lines either. Shelly For a limited time only 18:23, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED I tried it and I was confused so I just went back to pixlr. I think it's a lil better :| Can you give me an honest answer, does this look like it's showing improvement? And changes aren't showing. Btw it won't stop being on the heading :|MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:05, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

It happens. Probably just a wiki thing. snoωed ℓightning    19:07, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yea. Any way, can you add more stripes? Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 19:19, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

No, because it needs to match mine and mine matches her manga depiction. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 19:21, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

I just wanted to say lol cuz for a second I thought u meant it isn't showing improvement :P MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:31, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Epic fail xD Lol no, it is showing improvement. You still need to add lineart to her collar tag though Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 19:43, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 19:52, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the squiggly line in the middle of the collar. It doesn't need to be there. snoωed ℓightning    20:28, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the tail highlight and smooth out the collar tag lineart. SplookMavinotp♥ 20:50, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Let me tell you. You aren't going to get ANYWHERE if you scream insults at yourself and abuse exclamation points and claim to cry. Make the stripes more like Millie's alt. Iciloo 23:06, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and blur it. It looks blotchy. Also, it's hitting the left lineart on the ear. SenbonzakuraDance of the Cherry Blossoms... 00:54, October 12, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If you're using pixlr, do the same as Shelly said, but to add a layer, go on layers, add layer, select layer 1, go to layers again, and click on move layer down. Define the earpink.  Stoneclaw    07:45, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, dear stripes, collars, and ear pink, I hate you lol :P MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:09, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, it's a bit better, have patience, and you should be able to accomplish your goal. ;) There is a line above the shoulder that's sticking out of the image, please fix that.  Stoneclaw    12:29, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED fixed :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:01, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink.  Stoneclaw    13:46, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

How do you define earpink? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:02, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

By making it more visible. Perhaps reddening it or sharpening it. SplookMavinotp♥ 19:34, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED okay, I defined the earpink by sharpening it and I noticed a few specks on the collars so I fixed them :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:46, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match Ivystripe's image, and blur where the shading and highlights meet.  Stoneclaw    19:15, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneclaw, how about giving some suggestions on how to match Ivy's image, instead of just telling her? Loudsplash, try making the stripes a little thicker by using the pain brush tool. In fact, there's a fade out option that would work wonders in making the stripes match Ivy's. If you need help, don't hesitate to ask, 'kay? snoωed ℓightning    19:21, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:36, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Alright Cloudeh can you help me and I did define the earpink, :| also I never use highlights.MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:03, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll be tweaking this for Loudeh. However, I'm currently quite busy today. I'll reupload this when I come home. =) snoωed ℓightning    14:37, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

I tweaked the stripes on the back for you. =) snoωed ℓightning    03:27, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks like its choking her. MAke it thinner and have more of a curve. Look as some of the rogue images for reference. -ſceheartBlah blah 18:36, October 15, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Grell No question at all! 17:11, October 16, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the earpink smaller.  Stoneclaw    00:04, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED meh :| MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:27, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The collar looks a bit blurred. Can you fix that?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 00:54, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Can you show me where it's blurred? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:38, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks a little strange; it looks like she has a concave belly from the shading XD Maybe try to make it match this tutorial's shading and it'll look more sensible :3 llwildheartl05:51 Wed Oct 19

Millie's plain loner charart doesn't have a collar. Should this one not have one too, or should the normal one be tweaked? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:18, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I think the normal should be tweaked because she has a collar in the manga. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:48, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes the loner should be tweaked. And the collars still to straight, curve it more. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:45, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading under the collar. Specklestream Let it Snow! 21:26, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights with the shading and add some shading to the hind leg on your left that is farthest from us. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:30, October 20, 2011 (UTC) Hmmm instead of making big stripes, make a bunch of little stripes....or at least make more stripes on the legs. Blur the smudging, it looks odd. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:08, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, there's the same amount of stripes on here as her Kittypet alt. They should stay like that. But do you think you could make the head stripe a bit thinner to match the kittypet? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:35, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

The smudging is fine as well. Darken the shading a tad. snoωed ℓightning    03:11, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There is waste outside her back and tail. Can you get rid of it? If you can't find it, try filling it in with a white or neon background. Grell No question at all! 16:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The ear pink is blotchy and has many stray pixels embedded within. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:08, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Iveh Yo! 04:24, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

If you do work on this, blurr the shading near of the middle of the back leg...? (If that makes sense!) Feathermoon. 23:54, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

This hasn't been uploaded in a week. Since Loudsplash isn't anywhere to be seen, I'll take over. snoωed ℓightning    00:00, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. L) ~ Declined

[[File:FIRESTAR_L_ALT.png]] This is my first character art. I saw on Firestar's page that he was once mentioned as golden so I decided to make this. :) Aspen(Talk) 20:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, but this will have to be declined. He already has an alternate. --Leafstrike-- 20:11, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above Iveh Yo! 20:13, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Firestar (Alt. Leader) ~ Declined

[[File:FIRESTAR_L_ALT.png]] Firestar was once described as golden in Dawn so here he is as a golden cat :) Aspen(Talk) 21:17, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lettin you know, this will be declined, eh already has a golden alt. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 21:20, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Do not post this again. This has already been declined once. snoωed ℓightning    21:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

( Okay I just worked very hard on this and it was my 1st charart so thanks for crushing my hope :( Aspen(Talk) 21:22, October 26, 2011 (UTC)
Aspen, it's already up!! It's not that it isn't good - which, its not bad - but it was reserved before you. Ghosttail BOO! :D 21:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I declined it because he already has an alt for being called golden. It's not that I don't like it, because it's very good for your first one, but it's because there's already a pixel for him. snoωed ℓightning    21:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (Q)~ Withdrawn/Declined

[[File:Spottedpelt.queen.png]] If Wind gets one so does she. Comments? -ſceheartBlah blah 23:25, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Was she mentioned as having kits? I don't remember... Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 23:27, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, she has decendants, so she must have had kits. Great work! darken the tail shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:30, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Well, no, not necessarily. For all we know, she could have become a medicine cat, not bearing kits, and instead Gorseclaw, her brother, could have fathered kits, and she'd be the aunt of many cats. Iveh Yo! 23:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Their family tree says that she had kits... Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

On the website? The official website isn't reliable. Look, unless it says somewhere that she had kits, we cannot conclusively say that she had them. Iveh Yo! 23:36, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Good point. Then, should this be declined? Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:39, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

I say wait and see if anyone has citational proof that she mothered kits. However, I would hate to see this get declined =( Iveh Yo! 00:04, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Well, at least lighten the white on the back paw. x3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

There is no proof that she had kits. We don't know she was a mother. This will be declined if a proper citation cannot be found saying she mothered kits. snoωed ℓightning    00:49, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with what's been said before me. It could of been her brother who got a mate and had kits, not her. Though this is very pretty. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:55, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

On both her page and Adderfang's it says that Spotted pelt is his many times great-grandmother. The citation is on Adderfang's page. I says it was revealed on Vicky's facebook page. Check it. Silversong 20:01, October 26, 2011 (UTC)Silversong

We don't know she had kits. Simple as that. If a proper book reference cannot be found, this image will be declined. That reference from Vicky's facebook page makes no sense whatsoever. I looked. snoωed ℓightning    20:35, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Relax, no need to go bolden words now. I just assumed because Wind it getting one, and all she had was decendents. Go ahead and declined this. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:41, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Rain (Alt.E ~ Declined

[[File:Rain.elder.alt.png]]This is my first charart! I hope it's ok :P I wasn't sure if he had a white muzzle or not, for his alt, so I didn't add it. Comments? Sweetflower 11:15, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

It needs shading and you need to rename it "Rain.elder.alt.png" without the speech marks. Specklestream Let it Snow! 11:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sorry. Sweetflower 11:29, October 27, 2011 (UTC)


Death, you must say re-uploaded after you upload it again. I also moved itfor you. Erase the waste by the chin. SilverThe Glee Project 11:51, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chin shading and the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:03, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Iceheart already has this image and it's approved. This will be declined. Sorry, Sweet. =( snoωed ℓightning    14:27, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Check the images closely next time. It seems someone didn't put it on the article. snoωed ℓightning    14:29, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Spottedpelt (K) ~ Declined

[[File:Spottedpelt.kit.png]] OA was Nightpelt101, and I redid it to match her warrior version. Seriously, it needed different colors, pelt design, patches, etc. Her warrior version was redone, so this shouldn't be declined. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is good, but wasn't Wildheart supposed to do this? Iveh Yo! 02:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

...yep. I was... llwildheartl06:18 Fri Oct 28

Declined then, I guess. oblivionAudience? 19:16, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

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