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Nettlesplash (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[[File:Nettlesplash.warrioralt.png]]Eh...not a huge fan of this one. Comments? Grell No question at all! 19:41, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wait, I don't think we can base an alt color off of what we see in a manga. In the gray scale, he was easily a light brown tom. Shelly For a limited time only 19:47, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't he an apprentice at the time, to?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:47, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we were doing manga alts. And I don't know, I haven't read SkyClan's Destiny. Speckle put him on the list, so I just reserved him. Grell No question at all! 19:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I think you can keep him up.. But (I'm looking in the book) I am confused wether its either Nettlesplash or Plumwillow.. xD

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:55, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, we're doing alts from the manga based on colored cover images unless the pattern of the pelt of the cat in question changes. Nettlesplash's doesn't. Sorry, but he was just pale in the manga, that doesn't mean he was white. He was wrongly put on the list. Shelly For a limited time only 19:57, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. Sorry. Grell No question at all! 20:20, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Not your fault, no need to apoligize for anything. ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 20:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

So...will this be declined? Grell No question at all! 20:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Most likely, unless you withdraw it beforehand or a lead disagrees with me for whatever reason. Shelly For a limited time only 20:33, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:48, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Done. Grell No question at all! 10:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

I agree. Changing heading to declined; if anyone objects, voice your opinion. oblivionAudience? 21:05, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Wait! I think he should get one because in the "SkyClan and the Stranger," he is shown as much darker than the manga at the back of "SkyClan's Destiny." And, to me, he was much closer to white there than his Chararts. So I think he should get one. Bluestar11796 22:03, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Bluestar, did you see what Shelly said? We're not doing alts for the manga unless it's on the cover, or they have a major pelt STYLE change, not color. We can't tell the color since it's black and white, and we're not making alts cause of the shades. so unless he was a tabby or tortie or something in one of those mangas, he's not getting an alt. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:07, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, no, I didn't see. Sorry. Bluestar11796 22:24, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker Alt.W ~ Declined

[[File:Rainwhisker.alt.png]] Ugh he needed one for A Clan in Need and it was much different than his regular appreance..... I hate this its so horrible. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:39, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Mistystar139 already made it I'm sure, I was going to do this, but the file was already saved as it. So I'm thinking it just wasn't put on his page. Correct me if I am wrong. Sweetflower 15:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Umm, add shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:44, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, and blur/smudge where the white meets the gray. Also make the earpink less red. Grell No question at all! 15:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Wasn't he an apprentice when he was mistakened? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yes he was, sorry Sand, this will be declined.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:50, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry Sand. Sweetflower 15:57, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Aw, I'm sorry Sand. Grell No question at all! 16:59, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Guys, only leads should change the heading. Declined officially due to reasons above. Jayce seek the truth <  > 17:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Alt. A) ~ Declined

[[File:Rainwhisker.apprentice.alt.png]]Reserved it as fast as I could! Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:34, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Oops Apprentice rule..  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to apprentice rule Iveh Yo! 17:36, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I feel so stupid...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:37, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Don't. What's stupid is me mistaking blood for a pelt color. Iveh Yo! 17:39, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It's ok Stoneclaw, accidents happen :) Sweetflower 17:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Scourge (Alt R.) - Declined

[[File:Scourge.rogue.alt.png]]Since we're doing Cats of the Clans alts, Scourge was shown as a brown cat (you can tell because he has ice-blue eyes and Bone is a black a white cat). This image was used to demonstrate my shading style in the tutorial I just uploaded, so you can see all my mistakes xD Comments for improvement? Iveh Yo! 18:46, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

This is wonderful ivystripe. Blur the shading a bit more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:58, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I always thought that was blood on Scourge, not his pelt color. You can still see the black. But, I might be mistaken. Splook it's a long way down. 19:51, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I saw your video, and commented on it. Anyways, tone down the highlights. --Leafstrike-- 20:13, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it's blood if you can't easily tell that it is (when I first read the book I even thought to myself 'Is that brown cat Scourge or Bone?' Iveh Yo! 20:15, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Also reuploaded Iveh Yo! 20:18, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I think it needs to match the image more closely, in which he looked mostly black with small splotches of what could have either been red-brown fur or blood on him. Look here for reference. I suppose it matches how he looks on the cover of The Rise of Scourge, with that reddish tint. Also, the reddish brown cat is more likely Scourge than the other cat, as he appears to be smalled and has blue eyes while the other cat matches Bone's description more. Shelly For a limited time only 12:07, October 27, 2011 (UTC)S

So then make him a patched black and brown cat then? And yes I know it's him, I was using that as a reference that IF that was meant to be blood on his face, it's not very obvious. Iveh Yo! 15:22, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded he looks like a cow XD But I like it Iveh Yo! 15:55, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Eh, I mean I think black should still be the prominent color. But it's looking good thus far. Shelly For a limited time only 18:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

This is awesome. Blur the earpink. Grell No question at all! 20:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded I tried adding as much black as I could without having to reverse the colors. If this isn't enough I'll pretty much have to switch the two. Iveh Yo! 16:59, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Um, guys? Have you seen the picture that Ivystripe is talking about? There is no way that colour resembles anything close to brown. I am 100% sure that Scourge is depicted as a black cat with blood on his face. Sorry, Ivy, but if enough people agree I'll have to decline this. It's nothing personal - and this is a lovely image - I just don't want too many unneeded images. oblivionAudience? 21:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I just looked at the picture, and it could be taken either way. It seems too...frequent....for it to be blood, but it doesn't look brown either. This could go either way. Jayce seek the truth <  > 21:10, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Look at the image on the Warriors App. A cat cannot be red; it's blood. As for it being too frequent, it's most likely arterial spray or something. More blood can come out of an animal than you'd think. oblivionAudience? 21:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patches a little bit. Sweetflower 22:10, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I just don't see the blood on that image to me. Never looked like it no matter how hard I look. Iveh Yo! 02:15, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The big blob on the hind leg looks to...big. IDK but darken the shading and redden the ear pink and nose. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

That looks like blood to me. It's like, bright red. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 02:47, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Ok fine I get it it's declined >_> I don't see how the heck you guys see blood in that picture though >_> Iveh Yo! 17:30, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Goldenflower (Alt. Q) - Declined

[[File:Goldenflower.queen.alt.png]] I realize she looks golden...sorry...meh, I'll fix that if someone comments on it. Anyway, she was described as pale amber. If she needs tabby stripes, I'll add them, but I believe that's for ginger cats. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:59, October 26, 2011 (UTC)S

Sorry to be blunt, but this doesn't look amber. This looks almost exactly like her queen image before I redid it. I don't even think she'd get an alt for thatIveh Yo! 23:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

She just said that she made it golden on accident. Not trying to be rude Ivystripe though. Goldenflower was described as a pale amber cat. Any way, blur the shading once you make it pale amber and the highlights. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 23:13, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry, I was trying to get my comment down less I edit-conflicted fifty times. Iveh Yo! 23:19, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded-- Blurred. Fixed the color. Waiting for the changes to show. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:26, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I thought we already decided she wouldn't get an alt for this? Isn't amber pretty close to being a synonym (sp?) of ginger? I don't think she should get an alt.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:11, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I agree, Paleclaw. I don't think she should get an alternate for being called amber. oblivionAudience? 21:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

So...will this be declined...? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:54, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Declined for now, but, if anyone cares to offer their opinion, I'll gladly change it back. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:12, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. llwildheartl05:41 Sun Oct 30

Mistystar (Alt. Dep) - Declined

18:08, October 16, 2011 (UTC)This is Mistyfoot(star)'s alternate deputy version any comments.

[[File:the main body looks great, but the ear pink needs fixing. It needs to be a lighter pink, more central in the ear and more triangular. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 18:13, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

This needs to be named Mistystar.deputy.alt.png. Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:36, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lot of blurred lineart, and the correct lineart needs to be black. But the actual colouring is excellent XD Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:21, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

There's also waste around the entire charart, faint, but still there. Jayce seek the truth <  > 19:24, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I fixed the heading for you ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 19:56, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Not bad ^^. Blur the ear pink a lot. Silverhmm 20:27, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

I think you know where the colored lineart is, so color over that. Other then that, lighten the tail shading a bit. Everything else was already mentioned xD Splook it's a long way down. 20:30, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks gray not black, muzzle looks like half cutted and eye is dusty gray, fix it please, Leaf-storm,20:31,October 16,2011 (UTC)

I have put up the better version fixed the eye and the gray line-art and lightened tail shading. Acornfur 23:58, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink smaller and blur it. There also looks like there are some discolored pixels on her head. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:19, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

This also needs to be named File:Mistystar.deputy.alt.png and there still seems to be waste all around the pixil. Iveh Yo! 02:21, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Good work Acorn, now make ear-pink darker and more triangual, delete this, then made a small triange in the center of ear and blur it. And made new file with this cat named "Mistystar.deputy.alt.png", any other file with uncorrent name can't be approved. Leaf-storm,17:08,October 17,2011 (UTC)

There's a TON of waste around the pixel. And the earpink is touching the lineart. Cute MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 17:26, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

You've done a good job, but the ear pink is way too big and needs to be darkened, too. Appropriately name the file (Mistystar.deputy.alt.png). Wuahahaha! Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. >:D 18:27, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Please stop mentioning the file name. It's been said four times, and I think that's enough. Jayce seek the truth <  > 19:16, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart still looks a bit gray on the ears, can you fix that? :3 And get a transparent background. (I believe that it has just a white background, but if I'm wrong, my apologies)

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 21:14, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

There i made the lineart darker and made the ear pink smaller and a bit darker. Acornfur 21:50, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Oh Acornfur, you can just say Reuploaded when you upload the new file. ;) Dull the earpink and smooth it out. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:51, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Remove the waste. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:38, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

This file needs to be named Mistyfoot.deputy.alt.png. Jayce seek the truth <  > 15:09, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Could you enlarge the highlight on the tail? Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:38, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

As said, the file needs to be renamed. There's a bit of waste in the triangle between the haunch and the front paws. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:46, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

reuploaded Acornfur 01:09, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purple. The tail and head also need more visible highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:39, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Acornfur 00:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

There is some waste/blurred lineart near the muzzle and where starts(?).. And is this a transparent image?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 00:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

I think there's some miss-coloured lineart near the base of the tail. Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:32, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eye. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:07, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The ear pink is much too small. Make it larger and darken it, it would look better with the pelt.Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:10, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail lineart is also blurred. Grell No question at all! 12:23, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded Acornfur 15:31, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink less purplish, blur it, and make it more triangular. Grell No question at all! 16:40, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink should actually be more a pink/red. Splook it's a long way down. 18:58, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and erase the waste. Make sure the lineart is all completely black as some of it looks blurred and lightened. llwildheartl19:06 Sat Oct 22

Beautiful! Just fix the earpink. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

I'm not trying to be mean, but unless you fix the waste on the lineart and blur the earpink, it should jsut be given to someone else. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 23:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Regi, that was a little uncalled for. Acornfur has a month to finish the image. Jayce seek the truth <  > 23:48, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Give the eye more depth instead of just one color. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:14, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

For the depth, it basically means to put a darker color on the highest pixel. My Daisytail warrior image should show a good example of that. Ivyheart =P 19:41, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

You need to work on this or it will be declined, and fix the image so we can actually see it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:22, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

If there isn't an upload on this by tomorrow, it will be declined. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

If this does get declined, could I possibly take over it? LeopardclawLook upto the past… 08:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

You don't have to ask, Leopardclaw. You can just snatch it up :) --Splook it's a long way down. 21:37, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. llwildheartl00:35 Mon Oct 31

Runningnose (Alt. MC) ~ Declined

[[]] Since he was shown like this in Cats of the Clans, I think he should have one.. So here he is! Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:10, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Getting rid of some of the waste right now, though. Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the places where its smudged. Also darken and enlargen the ear pink. Great! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:17, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Don't enlarge the ear pink, nor darken the shading. You can blur the shading, though. Jayce seek the truth <  > 02:18, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blurred the shading/smudged areas and got rid of the waste. Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:22, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I'm pretty sure it was decided that he shouldn't get one. I'm declining this for now, but I won't archive it yet, just in case you have a valid argument that you didn't post on the talk page. llwildheartl02:46 Mon Oct 31

Why? Littlecloud got one, why not him? Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:48, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

But Littlecloud was never mentioned as having white on him, whereas Runningnose was described as white and gray; the only thing that changed was where the markings were placed. I think you could redo Runningnose's images, but an alt is unnecessary. llwildheartl02:50 Mon Oct 31

I see now, alright.. Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 02:55, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed with Wildheart. Sorry hon =( Iveh Yo! 02:57, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

No, I totally agree. ^-^ Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 03:35, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Declined. llwildheartl04:06 Mon Oct 31

Brightheart (Alt.W3) - Declined

[[File:Brightheart.warrior.alt3.png]]Meh... Brightheart just doesn't strike me as a white she-cat... -.- Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 01:24, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Blur/smear the shading/highlights (not sure which). Also, if there's a highlight (if it's that) on the front chest, shouldn't there also be a highlight on the fron legs? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:38, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brightheart wasn't white in that image. Look here. She has a ginger patch on her body, just not on her head. Shelly For a limited time only 04:10, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly's right. Unless there was another time she was referred to as white, I think this'll be declined. Jayce seek the truth <  > 16:07, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Aww.. Crud.. Declined to reason above. -ScarletwindLisanna 20:35, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Adderfang (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[[File:Adderfang.alt.warrior.png]]I can't remember what the limit for images up for approval is, but... I think it's in its thirties...? If not, dun yell at me, I haven't been here in forever. Dx. Anyhoo, I like this! Here's Adderfang, who was never my fave character, but ah well. Ghosttail BOO! :D 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

ooh! This is epic. Define the earpink a bit and add some stripes (or whatever they're called) on the front back leg. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ah, earpink. The worst factor of my charats. -__- Someone help with the color. Redder than this, pinker than this, purple-er than this (YES PURPLE-ER IS A WORD)? I hate earpink with a passion. Added stripes to the bare foreleg. Ghosttail BOO! :D 22:03, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Epic! Add an m stripe to the foreheart and define the shading on the back just a tad. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 22:09, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and define the stripes on the tail. Specklestream Let it Snow! 09:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! just fix the earpink. Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:39, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

@Cinder You have to be more specific when you said 'Fix the earpink'. Add/define some shading under the chin. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:32, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Added some more back shading, reddened ear pink (I still don't think it looks right..) And added some shading under the chin, which, FYI, I'll never get chin-shading to look that great ever again. xD Ghosttail BOO! :D 19:55, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Amazing! Darken the shading and add more under the haunch. oblivionAudience? 21:20, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Awesome :) Blur the brown on the chest please. Sweetflower 22:15, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

This looks great! Can you define the ear pink please? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:49, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Is this an alt for him being called a dark tabby? If so, this should be declined. He's already a brown tabby. Being called "dark" should just be added to his description. llwildheartl07:04 Mon Oct 31

Wildheart is right. He was described as a dark tabby, if it is brown than it should be declined. We don't exactly know what kind of dark tabby, could be a dark gray tabby, but there are no details. It also looks more mottled than a tabby, if it stays up fix that. I think this will declined.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:45, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 21:50, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darkstripe (Alt. W2) ~ Declined

[[File:Darkstripe.warrior.alt2.png]]My first charart! Yay! Picture: Darkstripe when he was described with a dark gray pelt. Comments? Lucky Heart of a lion 22:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. And take the amber eye from his warrior image :3 Pearls 22:10, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is over the limit, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. :( --Leafstrike-- 22:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

It is the right number now. Define the shading on the tail. Iveh Yo! 22:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Also, the back leg (the one far away from us) needs shading. Firestar! 22:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. ☾Mint☽Cheers! I'll drink to that. 22:17, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice :) Make the eye pupil (the black part) bigger. Also have less shading on the tail tip, or put highlights. Ivyheart =P 22:21, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is a female blank, use a male blank. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 22:46, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll improve it. Sorry Maple took the wrong blank <:3 Lucky Heart of a lion 22:51, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't know if the changes are showing yet... Lucky Heart of a lion 22:54, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Doesn't he already HAVE an alt? Or is that for the black pelt? Also, blur the shading. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:59, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the pupil and reposition/ blur the ear-pink. Shelly For a limited time only 23:05, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

@cloudskye Black. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 23:07, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

He already has a black alt. This needs to be a silver tabby. And I fixed the title for you. Shelly For a limited time only 23:11, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Oh ok. Lucky Heart of a lion 23:14, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

There are actually four alt decriptions of Darkstripe: black, gray, silver tabby, and black with silver stripes (opposite of his real description). Pick one of the three that aren't done. Shelly For a limited time only 23:16, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Kk I'll do silver tabby, since I already started that :P Lucky Heart of a lion 23:23, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

The only thing he needs an alt for is being ark grey. He is everything else already. Ill decline alll the others. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:26, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

I'm confused :( This is a dark gray alt. Lucky Heart of a lion 23:48, September 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Nevermind, I'm just sticking with this. This is a dark gray alt, not a black one. Lucky Heart of a lion 00:04, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sotty. You had just originally said that he was black. Shelly For a limited time only 00:17, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

It looks kind of small.. Do you have the right sized blank? (or is it just me x3) If its the correct size then blur the shading a bit more. :3 Misty! 00:33, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

I never said he was black! And the changes aren't showing yet. Lucky Heart of a lion 01:09, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah fix the highlights and darken the ear pink Good for a try! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 03:23, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Yay the changes are actually showing. Lucky Heart of a lion 11:52, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Smooth out the earpink by blurring it. It's too blotchy. Also, lighten the shading on the paws/legs. :3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:57, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Fixed the title for ya ;3. And darken the highlights. Silverhmm 15:24, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lucky Heart of a lion 15:48, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

make the ear pink bigger and darker and also turn down the higjlights on the body and make the one on the face brighter too Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:25, September 25, 2011 (UTC)

center the ear pink OwlXGlitter4LIFE.. The colors of fall

01:08, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are fine, Sandstorm. They just need to be to be blended with the shading more. Jayce seek the truth <  > 05:23, September 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur hightlights around a little, good work. I'm working on the silver tabby now. :-) Leaf-storm,20:00,September 27,2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Sorry, forgot to say re-uploaded before xD Lucky Heart of a lion 22:40, September 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the chest highlights and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:55, September 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lucky Heart of a lion 16:15, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur it just a tad more. And maybe try and make the ear pink a tad lighter. Other then taht this is beauitful. Though if you have dodge you can use that to lighten it. Just a helpful tip. :D Rainface<3 18:55, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I don't think the changes are showing yet. Lucky Heart of a lion 19:37, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Silverhmm 19:56, September 30, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lucky Heart of a lion 00:58, October 1, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and lighten the shading on the chest. Looking good! Atelda insert vague subtext here 00:23, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Looking good, blur the neck shading (if any, it looks like it though) a tad more. Rainface<3 19:06, October 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Lucky Heart of a lion 21:29, October 4, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shoulder highlight. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:54, October 5, 2010 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Other than that, looking good!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:53, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks! :3 Lucky Heart of a lion 22:10, October 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shading still looks blotchy. Try blurring it a little more. Jayce seek the truth <  > 20:09, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Also, his shading is kinda covering the shoulder highlights. Please define the highlights on the shoulder where the shading is covering it. (a lot of words, and yes, i speak fast and type fast :P) Rainface<3 21:13, October 7, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded So far so good (in my opinion ^-^). Lucky Heart of a lion 21:19, October 8, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still blotchy, blur the the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:19, October 9, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink (is there any earpink at all?) and round out the haunch highlight. Also move the shoulder highlight up. llwildheartl23:42 Sun Oct 9

Re-uploaded Yes, there is ear-pink. Lucky Heart of a lion 14:08, October 10, 2011 (UTC) a lot Brighten the earpink more and blur the shading/highlights a lot more. Maybe take the earpink colour from Silverstream's current image if you're having trouble. llwildheartl21:36 Mon Oct 10

There's not much to comment on except define the earpink (a lot :P) Good job, Lucky. This is really good. :) Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:57, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Thanks, Twilight :D Lucky Heart of a lion 22:13, October 10, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, and blur the shading more. {{SUBST:Mistypebble/sig}} 01:10, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink and smooth the shading and highlights; they're really blotchy. -ScarletwindLisanna 01:58, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Also, define your light source. The shading on the haunch is inconsistent with the rest of the shading on him and shouldn't be at the bottom, but rather in the middle of his haunch. Bloodstripe Your demise comes ŧΦɲΪĢĦ†... 15:13, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 17:15, October 11, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm, I think you're smudging the shading einstead of blurring.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:52, October 12, 2011 (UTC)

I'm blurring. And since I gotta go, I will work on this the day after tomorrow (maybe) because my dad will be on tomorrow.   Lucky <3  Talky!   Don't you lovey the pretty breezey?   

The shading is extremely blotchy. Make the highlights larger, define the light source, and blur the highlights. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 22:29, October 13, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, define it, and blur it. Grell No question at all! 15:01, October 14, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The shading on the back is really thick and where is the light sorce? The highlights just seem randomly placed. Tone them down more and blur it. It's blotchy. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 17:14, October 14, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:26, October 16, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week since the last reupload. Shouldn't it be declined? Iveh Yo! 13:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, this is declined due to lack of work. Anyone without a current normal project may take this over. Iveh Yo! 16:18, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

May I do it? --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Yes. Iveh Yo! 17:35, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Ok Thank You I will get started now. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Reuploaded So can someone change it from Declined to For Approval I would've done it but i wasn't sure if i was allowed to. And I know the earpink is horrible.--Cinder Real or Not Real?

Changed it. Maybe blur the ear-pink more and define it also. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! Might bite underneath the moonlight 18:50, October 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ugggg my earpink is such a fail. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Center the ear pink and darken the shading. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:29, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink larger and darken the ear pink Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:33, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder/chest highlight. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:52, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

The ear pink is too pink and way too small. Try to darken it too. Blur everything and smudge the highlights into the shading more. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:38, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Grell No question at all! 16:35, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Redden the earpink and define the pupil. llwildheartl18:54 Sat Oct 22

Center the ear pink as well. -ſceheartBlah blah 22:57, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I fixed the earpink but the eyes won't cooperate with me so i will do it at a different time. --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Blur the shading more on the shoulder and haunch. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:57, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the shading. --Splook it's a long way down. 02:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Can the highlight (if you have highlights) be made a but bigger and also darkened a little? Feathermoon. 23:46, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:10, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blue the ear-pink once you define it also. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:45, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?

Okay. The highlights are too small and need to be dulled. It looks like there is no shading, so fix that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:24, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I would suggest you re-do them. Try using Fuzzy Circle Size 50. Grell No question at all! 21:34, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear pink pinker. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Wait what is fuzzy circle 50? Is it on pixlr because that is what i use.. And i can't change the earpink... --Cinder Real or Not Real?

If you use pixlr, you wont find it there. Why can't you change the earpink?? (just asking) Try to blur where the shading meets on the head highlights.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 17:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

oh yeah when i do try to change it it reverts to my original form so i would have lost a lot of work and ok Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 19:32, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the highlights and blur the shading. If you're talking about the wiki, it just takes a bit for the changes to show because we have so many useless images on here. Jayce seek the truth <  > 19:37, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

wait does darken the highlights mean actually making them darker or putting more highlights in? Sorry i sound so dumb XD. And im not talking about the wiki my computer is just being dumb.....--Cinder Real or Not Real?

Let me help Cloudy out: she means that your highlights are too bright, so by making them darker, they won't be so bright. Does that help? =) Iveh Yo! 03:05, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah that helps a lot Ivy =) Thanx. And reuploaded! --Cinder Real or Not Real?

I can't see the shading on this.. Can you darken it? :3 Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 19:29, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink some more. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 20:11, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights DJCandyBud 03:42, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and darken the highlights too. To bright for a black pelt. And where is your light source? 01:59, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Shadey, are you still working on this? Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

It's been over a month. This is declined. -ScarletwindLisanna 19:25, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Sweetpaw (K) ~ Redone

[[File:Sweetpaw.kit.png]] OA was Nightshine, and the tortoiseshell patches and shading needed to be redone, and I have Scarletwind's permission. Yes, I know this is my declined version of Spottedpelt, and its not being used, so I can use it. Tortoiseshell and white is the same as white with tortie patches, and Sweetpaw has been mentioned as a regular tortoiseshell. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:51, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

This has to match her apprentice version, does it not? oblivionAudience? 00:00, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well her apprentice version is going to be redone too when i finish the blanks. This needs to have more white. Shes white with tortoisshell patches not tortoiseshell with white patches. -ſceheartBlah blah 00:40, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Plus, when we redo images, we need to keep them similar to the approved image; not exactly her kit but more like her apprentice anyway. Yeah you can change it around somewhat but not this drastic, sorry. Iveh Yo! 01:47, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Wildheart and I decided to swap images. She's going to take over this, and I'm going to do Spottedpelt. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:02, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Feel free to archive this 'cause I already reserved Rain's TB image and I want to do that one first. llwildheartl22:42 Thu Nov 3

Stonefur (Alt. D) ~ Declined

[[File:Stonefur.deputy.alt.png]] He was shown as a silver-gray tom with amber eyes in Cats of the Clans, so I went ahead and made his Charart. Comments? Bluestar11796 23:54, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Dethumbed. Blur the shading and blur the ear pink as well. Jayce seek the truth <  > 23:58, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger, less pink, and define the shading. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 00:10, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred and defined the shading, as well as desaturated, blurred, and enlarged the ear pink. Bluestar11796 01:23, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The earpink needs to be triangular, a bit more blurring, and shading needs major blurring.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:24, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and make it more triangular, and blur where the shading meets with the highlights. (if there are any, if not, just blur the shading more)

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:26, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make him darker, he isn't that light in the book. This is almost the color you'd use for white. Splook it's a long way down. 01:35, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded darkened, shading and earpink blurred, and earpink more triangular. Bluestar11796 02:19, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink more pink and make the shadinger bigger, like go farther in. This looks flat. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 02:25, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded saturated earpink and enlarged shading, and also changed eye color because, to me, it seemed more yellow than amber. Bluestar11796 15:02, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 16:14, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded earpink blurred. Bluestar11796 16:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the pelt less blue-gray and make it more silver-gray. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Move the earpink more into the ear, make it more triangular, and less neon. Also, blur the highlights. Grell No question at all! 19:46, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Beautiful just fix the earpink..Starshine☾The Full Moon Awaits☽ 20:40, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the color from actual silver, fixed earpink, and blurred highlights. Bluestar11796 20:48, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Hmm... Pretty good! Thicken the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:50, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded thickened shading...I think (Not really sure what that means) Bluestar11796 13:46, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It means make it denser and more noticable. Blur the earpink a bit more. Splook it's a long way down. 20:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the shading a bit. It looks a little too light. Sweetflower 22:06, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded blurred earpink, and will brighten shading soon Bluestar11796 22:10, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded eh...I think he looks cool, but I don't think he was depicted this way in the book. Bluestar11796 22:27, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading and highlights are soo blotchy. Blur it and the hole 9 yards. Also redden the ear pink. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Don't you dare. They are not soo blotchy. Don't insult this image. This is very pretty, Bluestar. May you define the ear pink and darken the shading? Appledashkrebs x burgdorf 02:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded defined earpink and darkened shading. And, thank you, Icestorm, and Sandstorm, if I get more comments on the shading and higlights being blotchy, I will fix it. Bluestar11796 16:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It does look a little blotchy, but not to the extend Sandstorm makes it out to be. Blend the shading/highlights. Is this your first charart for PCA? Jayce seek the truth <  > 19:30, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Well, kinda. I also started Stormkit's charart, but I couldn't continue because of school; Sandstorm took over it. Bluestar11796 20:11, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

There is blurred lineart on the ear, and I think there may be some on the top of the head as well. Grell No question at all! 20:22, October 29, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

There are two white pixels underneath the third spike of fur on the chest. The front leg also has blurred lineart as well as the bottom of the eye. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add scars to his ears. llwildheartl00:08 Sun Oct 30

He looks kind of.. Mottled or something. Blur where the shading and highlights (if any) meet.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 14:52, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is still very very blothy. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Sandstorm, instead of being blunt, provide a way to fix the problem. Like, why not suggest to the artist that they blur it? Jayce seek the truth <  > 01:16, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading is only mostly blotchy on the tail. Blur the tail shading, and maybe go over the rest of the shading with the blur tool too. And also, lighten the earpink a bit. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 13:58, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading, it looks as if the image has flecked so fix that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:42, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

There are two white pixels on the third hair out on the chest. Can you please erase them? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:02, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Iveh Yo! 20:45, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. llwildheartl20:15 Sat Nov 5

Gorsetail (NP) ~ Declined

[[File:Gorsetail_(NP).warrior.png]] OA was Rainwhisper? I know I had this reserved before enyone else because I checked.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    16:01, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Um... Rainy already posted this. It's right up there. Houston, we have a problem. oblivionAudience? 16:46, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

It's okay, decline it...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:50, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah Rainy reserved this before you. Sorry, Stoneclaw. llwildheartl20:30 Sat Nov 5

Swallowtail (RC) (E) - Declined

[[File:Swallowtail_(RC).elder.png]]I have permision now, don't worry :). Original artist was Bramble, shading needed tweaking and stripes needed to match the warriors :D . Comments? Elorisa 19:56, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink and blur the smudges :3 Splook it's a long way down. 20:11, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I personally like the smudges. The make him look furry, which is brilliant to me. I think you should just enlarge the ear-pink a bit. Shelly For a limited time only 20:32, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I like the smudges too, Shellheart. They're just a little sharp. Splook it's a long way down. 21:29, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

I say leave 'em as they are. They look good to me :3 llwildheartl23:55 Sun Oct 23

Reuploaded~better? Elorisa 02:02, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Could you fix the reddish parts on her haunch and her leg? --Leafstrike-- 17:49, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:00, October 24, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful! Make the ear-pink curve round more at the top. Specklestream Let it Snow! 08:17, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I didn't see any reddish parts...:/ Elorisa 20:50, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The highlights looks blotchy. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:52, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ I redid it..again xD. The shading was wonky and icky, so I fixed it *throws confetti* comments? :3. Elorisa 15:48, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She looks a little green to me... Maybe darken her a little? oblivionAudience? 15:51, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

define the earpink and blur the shading a tad -Guradian 01:07, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the earpink and darken the stripes to match her warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:35, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Elorisa? -ScarletwindLisanna 19:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Declined

[[File:Leopardstar.deputy.png]] Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:32, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Blur her spots more. oblivionAudience? 20:34, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:58, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and define the earpink. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:04, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh how I love xcf. files >:3 SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:28, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

She seems a little too dark, or too yellow. Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 00:28, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Well, I took all the colors from her leader image.... SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:43, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I'm not sure you took them from the right spots of the image though. The spots look a little green... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:21, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail needs highlights. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:59, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Highlights are not mandatory. Jayce seek the truth <  > 04:00, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

I think what you meant to say, Dapplecloud, was that the tail needs an area where there isn't any shading. Am I correct? llwildheartl06:13 Fri Oct 28

Reuploaded Eh... --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:02, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Absolutely beautiful. Make the earpink slightly more pink.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes on her front legs. Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:25, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 14:41, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The whole image needs to be lightened to match her other images. And I know highlights aren't mandatory USUALLY, but the other images all have highlights. Should this on have them too so they match? Unless you can match the 'shiny' look without highlights. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 16:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

And also move the three stripes up a bit to match the other images. --Leafstrike-- 17:40, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the ear-pink so that it matches her other images. Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:56, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Snowy? -ScarletwindLisanna 20:01, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfoot (Q) - Declined

[[File:Hawkfoot.queen.png]]Orginal artist was Hawkfire, shading and highlights needed tweaking. Comments? Elorisa 19:11, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce seek the truth <  > 20:47, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The muzzle looks white because of the highlight, could you please fix that. And it looks like there's blurred lineart now. It wasn't listed for that I know, but I don't remember it being there before you tweaked it, so I think you should fix it. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 20:52, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks really odd and blotchy to me... I don't know. oblivionAudience? 15:08, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. tried blurring and tweaking the shading... :/ Elorisa 15:18, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

It still needs to be blurred a lot. Try what you can, and if you have to, maybe you can redo it. Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:00, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

The lineart looks blurred still, and the muzzle still looks white. Sweetflower 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading. DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 02:39, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. It looks blotchy. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:40, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:32, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Whitestorm (D) - Withdrawn

[[File:Whitestorm.deputy.png]] Oh my.... well, he needed tufted ears. I based that off of Tawnyspot's charart. OA was Icestorm with major tweaks by Atelda. Shelly For a limited time only 04:06, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Withdrawn so I can work on Sharpclaw. Shelly For a limited time only 00:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 01:04, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Dappletail (Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Dappletail.queen.png]] I hope this doesn't get declined. Anyways, I think Dappletail gets a queen image, according to the new rule. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:07, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

  • cries of the awesome beauty* The stripes need to be more orangy though. xDSky- Stealing all ur candy 00:10, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Good job! But blur the striped a bit more, define the earpink and lighten the shading just a tad on the white.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 00:27, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Make the nose look less whiteish, more pink. :) Ivyheart =P 00:31, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

You're right, she gets one under the new rule as she was mentioned with kits. Her earpink should be the same color as on the other chararts, though. Shelly For a limited time only 00:42, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Nice. :) Blur the stripes more, lighten the earpink a tad. Wuahahaha! Yup. I've been working on my evil laugh. >:D 00:47, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think I made it worse. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:13, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Erase or thin out a few lines so they match the original image. llwildheartl02:05 Tue Oct 18

I agree with Wildheart, the lines look too thick. Feathermoon. 03:56, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

When you fix the lines, blur them more too. --Silverhmm 20:08, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Blur, blur, and blur. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:34, October 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the lines more. --Silverhmm 10:57, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Redden the ear-pink. Specklestream Let it Snow! 20:31, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't she have a front white paw?

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 20:50, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Oh derp, yeah. I erased it while I was fixing the stripes. And Speckle, I don't think I should. It's from the other images. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 21:23, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

Define the era pink. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:42, October 19, 2011 (UTC)

I also agree that the earpink should be made more visible. The tail needs some highlights as well. It looks really nice!! DapplecloudA pang in the heart... 22:49, October 20, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back paws, please. :3 --Splook it's a long way down. 04:19, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm so lazy :P --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:12, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paws, and she needs a front left white paw. --Leafstrike-- 20:47, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Xcf. files changed my skills :P --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:58, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

Great job! Try to separate the stripes more because they look to...close together. Also smudge the stripes and ear pink. Also darken the ear pink the slightest bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 23:13, October 21, 2011 (UTC)

You need to lighten the ear pink, not darken it. Take it right from her elder image. Jayce seek the truth <  > 03:14, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the stripes and the earpink. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:36, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's stripes going out, erase those. xD Sky- Stop right there criminal scum! 12:37, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

After you erase the waste, blur the stripes more.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 12:41, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Derp. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:45, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

This is amazing! Define the earpink. Grell No question at all! 16:02, October 22, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the stripes a tad and make them more orange so they match her elder image. llwildheartl19:09 Sat Oct 22

Her stripes kind of look like they are fading from left to right. Also, are there stripes on the legs? If not, add them. Ivyheart =P 23:32, October 22, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the nose a tad. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 01:16, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Ick. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:31, October 23, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes. llwildheartl00:13 Mon Oct 24

Reuploaded I redid it. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:07, October 25, 2011 (UTC)

The paw i belive is supposed to be white and make it slightly longer and blur it too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 00:42, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on her white paw.

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:48, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded HUZZAH! --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 12:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear-pink. This is doing good though. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:49, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Don't think I should Rain, I took her earpink color from her elder image. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 11:45, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I may be wrong, but shouldn't the stripes be defined a bit? Feathermoon. 22:08, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think your looking at the wrong image... I can see the stripes clearly. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Looks fine to me. Excellent job :) CBA? oblivionAudience? 20:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Could you saturate the stripes a bit more so they match the elder image better? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:23, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:36, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

It looks as if there is a big blob of brown near her shoulder.. Could you fix that??

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:46, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Spread the stripes out and make them more uneven to match her other images. Specklestream Let it Snow! 12:23, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made it worse D: --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:33, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

No you didn't. Join up some of the stripes, and look at the stripes on her other images. They get thicker and thinner and some bits are brighter than others. Try to replicate that. Specklestream Let it Snow! 19:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear pink lighter. Also, possibly lighten the shading on the haunch? SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 00:10, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading along the face, neck and shoulders. --Splook it's a long way down. 20:14, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading DJCandyBud 03:50, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine. Sweetflower 23:49, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

Good. The nose pink is much to bright. Tone it done and redden it. Also make the paw white, because part of it is gray Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:09, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

It's not gray, it's shaded. Just lighten the shading a little. --Splook it's a long way down. 20:27, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Try making the dapples just a bit brighter. Also, the white on her elder image doesn't reach her muzzle: that's just gray that came with age. The white ends on her chest. Shelly For a limited time only 18:46, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Not to be rude but are you still working on this? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:48, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry Snow, but it's been a week. =( Jayce seek the truth <  > 03:00, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pebble (TB) - Withdrawn

[[File:Pebble.tb.png]] Needed mud. Don't comment on the color of the mud, I took it straight of the .xcf file of the CG version. I'm not sure who the OA was, but I THINK is was Dawnfeather. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:33, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I wanna work on Dappletail's queen image, so I'll withdraw this for now, and repost when Hawky's approved if it's not reserved by then. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 05:28, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Archiving. Iveh Yo! 15:48, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (E) - Withdrawn

[[File:Speckletail.elder.png]] Eh, not too sure about this one... Should I change the stripes to match her warrior? I'm terrible at that tabby style, though ;_; oblivionAudience? 11:40, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I really love these stripes you did, though... Anyway, define the earpink a lot. Ivyheart =P 14:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. oblivionAudience? 15:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This style of ear-pink looks good only on the leader charart, made it different. Leaf-storm,15:57,October 29,2011 (UTC)

It looks fine to me. oblivionAudience? 16:04, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like this style of ear pink. Less hassle. xD Blur the shading. Jayce seek the truth <  > 17:58, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

I like it too :P Blur the shading on the hindquarters, I love this image by the way! Sweetflower 18:01, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded.' oblivionAudience? 18:12, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Could you change this so that it matches Iceheart's image? She was the first to post it, so it should match hers. llwildheartl00:54 Sun Oct 30

I'm fine with changing the stripes, but I'm hesitant to change the colour. Personally - with absolutely no offence at all to Iceheart - I think the shade of brown in this image is more suitable. People have even been asking Iceheart to change her colour to make it more brown. I'm open to suggestions, though. oblivionAudience? 02:48, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Honestly, both images' color need to be changed. Iceheart's needs to be more brown, and I think this needs to be a little less pink/red. could you fix that? And honestly, though Icy's image is gorgeous, I like these stripes better. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 08:13, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

No offense to Iceheart, but I like this style of stripes better. I think both of you should talk it out and see which one you like better. Jayce seek the truth <  > 17:35, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

Can you change this to match mine? Technically you shouldnt even be doing this but one exception to the rule isnt a huge deal. Still its my pattern well go with -ſceheartBlah blah 00:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Must you really be so mean about it? She already said she would change it. Jayce seek the truth <  > 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Oblivion, are you still working on this? llwildheartl00:29 Fri Nov 4

I'm working on it, I was waiting for a reply from Iceheart. Now that I've got one, I'll start working on redoing the stripes. oblivionAudience? 01:48, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I can't do this; I'm terrible at that tabby style. Sorry, but I'm withdrawing this. oblivionAudience? 16:13, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Oakheart (Alt.W2) ~ Declined

[[File:Oakheart.warrior.alt2.png]] Comments? If Pinestar gets a fox-colored alt, then so does he. I got all the colors from Pinestar, including earpink, so I'm not changing those. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:10, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, well if he's supposed to get an alt for being called "fox-coloured", his pelt should be ginger. llwildheartl23:13 Thu Nov 3

Blur the ear pink. Jayce seek the truth <  > 23:15, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I just changed the red scale thing to redden it. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:20, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

I redid it; the red scaled version looked too red. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:49, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

This just looks like a tabby version of his normal image though. Barely any difference. And he wasn't even mentioned with stripes, those are just being added because this is supposedly a form of ginger. And I'm pretty sure his normal charart is pretty close to fox-color. I don't think this should get an alternate, but that's just me. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:45, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

If Oakheart is "reddish-brown" then, yes, fox-coloured is pretty much the same. I agree, this shouldn't get an alt. oblivionAudience? 19:03, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

There really is not much of a difference So I belive this will be declined. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:55, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

I'm declining this due to a majority of people thinking it isn't needed. If many others disagree, feel free to change the heading back, but for now it's declined. I'm truly sorry D: Iveh Yo! 15:39, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Pinestar got an alternate for fox-colored, so why shouldn't Oakheart? If his current image is too close to this color, then its his current images that should be tweaked to be Pinestar's color. However, if everyone thinks this should be declined, then it will. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 22:50, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Beetlewhisker (K) - Withdrawn

[[File:Beetlewhisker.kit.png]] Needed to be longhaired. OA was Sandstar12. He looks adorable. xD Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 15:26, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Shouldn't he be redone to match his warrior image? The pattern and shade of brown on that one is different. Shelly For a limited time only 15:27, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I tried.... stupid me, forgot to save the xcf. file before. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 18:03, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Did Iceheart give you permission to do this? llwildheartl04:18 Mon Nov 7

It was on the redo list, so it's fine. Jayce seek the truth <  > 14:53, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

I love it! Try to connect the patches on the head maybe. Also redden the ear pink. So cute! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 15:43, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Even though this was on the redo list, Snowy still needs to get Iceheart's permission, 'cause Iceheart redid the warrior version. llwildheartl20:18 Mon Nov 7

That was before the rule was made. The images created before the rules was made don't count. Jayce seek the truth <  > 20:22, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

How so? That wasn't outlined in the rule when it was made. llwildheartl21:24 Mon Nov 7

Iceheart said it herself. Check here, if you don't believe me. Jayce seek the truth <  > 21:30, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

No, I remember that, but it was originally her image, and she did say that even though it's not officially retroactive, she'd like it to be unofficially so. Sorry, Cloudy and Snowy, I'm not trying to be nitpicky <3 It's just I know she loves the warrior image and I think she'd want to make the kit image as consistent as possible. Honestly, it doesn't matter a whit to me, but she's not here to argue her point, so... I dunno. I'd just recommend asking Iceheart first. llwildheartl21:38 Mon Nov 7

Iceheart was the OA of the warrior image? Stupid me. *facepalm* I'll be careful next time. Sorry 'bout all the flapdoodle. I'll leave a message on Iceheart's page. And its fine Wldheart, no worries. ;) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:01, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this. I wanna work on another image. --SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Understandable. Archiving Iveh Yo! 16:32, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Hawkfrost (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[File:Hawkfrost.warrior.alt.png]]This is my first one. It is an alternate for when he was discibed as a dark brown tom in the allegiances of Midnight. I think it's ok. Any advice?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:14, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

De-thumbed. Also, I thought we decided that he wouldn't get an alt for this? Jayce seek the truth <  > 02:18, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, I seem to remember a thing on this. Sky-Stupidly Spring...✿ 02:21, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah it wasn't much a difference from his reagular imagde. So declined? Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:22, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, for now. But, if the others disagree, feel free to post your opinion. Jayce seek the truth <  > 02:24, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) - Declined

[[File:Jaggedtooth.warrior.alt.png]] I'm pretty sure this is going to get declined. In Into the Woods, he is seen just solid-colored with a lighter muzzle. Well, comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 16:43, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, if ya don't know what solid color he was shown as, then yes, it probably will be declined as it is unknown. He'd need stripes, and there'd hardly be a difference. I'll see what the other leads think, so I'm not going to decline this right nowIveh Yo! 16:47, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

We don't know what color he was seen as. If he was on the cover, it would be a different story, I think. As Ivy said, he would still need stripes, so it really wouldn't be that much of a difference. I'll decline it for now, and if any of the other leads want to comment, by all means, please do so. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:30, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well, he can be the cat behind Tigerstar on the front cover, since hes the only cat in the book with a lighter muzzle. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:55, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Leafstar.queen.alt.png]]*shivers in disgust* This is disgusting :S she looks like a chipmunk with a nut in its mouth :| my least fave charart i've ever made. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:21, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones like in my image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:23, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

The brown patch on the far side of her face needs to extend all the way to the end. Make the stripes on her face go up and down and define them. You smudged the lineart on top of where her arms are. Add more stripes to her patches. Iveh Yo! 15:24, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

OK how do I make the stripes match teh other image and where is the smudged lineart. Would you mind showing me I don't see it. Also I'm trying to match them so the only place I see that needs more stripes is teh haunch. And seriously does she not look like a chipmunk with a nut in her mouth? LOL REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:31, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce seek the truth <  > 15:36, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED hehehe this is so creepy... MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 15:43, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the haunch more. Darkfangstorm Vampire time! 18:56, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading on the patches and make the stripes match on all of the patches. Splook it's a long way down. 20:25, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

Seperate the patches on her back. Look at her background picture on The Rescue and you can see they are seperated, plus if you have the book she's seen laying down frequently, so you can use that for help as well. The patches on her face wouldn't come down so far. Again, looking at how she looks in the manga should help, if you don't have it look at Harper Collins Browse Inside, it's free and I believe the first page she is on she is shown laying down. Iveh Yo! 23:07, October 26, 2011 (UTC)

I like this MUCH better now. REUPLOADED. She's growing on me :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:36, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes still look a little off. If you need help, ask Stoneclaw. She may be able to give you advice on how to make the stripes like hers. Jayce seek the truth <  > 14:37, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

I think you might have smudged/blurred the nose because it looks huge xD Iveh Yo! 15:30, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

The whole face lineart looks funny. Could you paste a new lineart over it? I could do it if you need help. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 18:42, October 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Grell No question at all! 21:05, October 27, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Could you help me Paleh? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the patch on the belly/chest area too. Grell No question at all! 21:32, October 28, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Reuploaded - Kay, fixed all the lineart. :) Had to redo the eyes, but I tried not to touch anything else. If you need help with anything else, fell free to ask. ^^ ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:18, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Try to fix the stripes.. They look irreuglar, since they are a bit too thick. Try to match the ones on Stoneclaws image ^-^

Ghoulpebble!Trick? Or Treat? 01:43, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Smudge the back paw and darken the shading a touch. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 02:29, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading specifically on the cream and blur the tail stripes. Splook it's a long way down. 20:16, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink, add either a highlight or shading on the haunch, and blur the place where brown meets crem on the back left leg. SquirrelFlame29 Defying the Darkness 23:52, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular as well. Grell No question at all! 10:34, October 31, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the overall shading and define the highlights if there are any. DJCandyBud 03:55, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED O_O moooo MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:08, November 1, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes need to match her alt leader more -ſceheartBlah blah 00:53, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Well, um. If I did it wouldn't match, er the manga. And that SERIOUSLY bothers me...if I have people seconding this I guess i'll hafta live with it but can you explain how to make them match cuz I had trouble before and that's why I switched them to match the manga in the first place. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:13, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

They need to match Stoneclaw's version, not the manga. We're not allowed to copy the exact pelt style of a character from the Warriors books because those images are copyrighted. If you're that confused, then ask Stoneclaw for help, as she's the one who made the leader image. The two cannot be different. Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:16, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

LOL I was just about to reupload it XD anyways REUPLOADED MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 18:29, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and smoothen the stripes. Splook it's a long way down. 20:26, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

Make the earpink more triangular, more pink, and blur it. Grell No question at all! 20:54, November 3, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

The earpink is triangular, and I will not make it more pink because I copied it from the leader alt. And if I blur it any more than it is it'll blur the lineart. I'll do the stripes later. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 11:29, November 4, 2011 (UTC)

Make the stripes match the ones on my image, and the earpink is not the same.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:54, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe working from the comic instead of the alt leader image would help? Just a suggestion That way you could see her stripe pattern from different angles. Shelly For a limited time only 18:51, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and I also agree with Shellheart. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 22:49, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

Shelly, she can't use the one from the "manga", because the stripes aren't the same. We're not supposed to match the designs 100%, because those images are copyrighted from HarperCollins. It also says that in the guidelines. Jayce seek the truth <  > 02:59, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

I meant she could use it as a reference, Cloudy. >.> I know the copyright laws, and you know I do. But we agreed to try to match the images the alts come from as closely as possible, didn't we? I thought it may be helpful for her if she saw the stripes on Leafstar in the "manga" from multiple angles, as that helps me when I'm trying to draw things. But if that won't match the alt leader, then you're right. Shelly For a limited time only 15:23, November 6, 2011 (UTC)

Well, the tabby stripes still look odd. Maybe do something about that. If someone disagrees with me, then forget this post Rainface<3 20:19, November 7, 2011 (UTC)

Agreeed, Rainface. They just don't... match? They look off. By whatever method you use, make them match the image (the manga, the other approved pixel, doesn't matter a whit to me) and it'll look a lot better. llwildheartl20:31 Mon Nov 7

Ok can someone help me? I've been trying to fix these stripes and they are driving me CRAZY!!! So yeah...oh and I never work on it for the weekends-Monday because I have stuff...thanks :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 12:02, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I might be able to help you. Unless a more experienced user wants to... Grell No question at all! 17:15, November 8, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

You can help Loudsplash, but Loudy, if you are unable to work/post this very much, don't you think that that might be a little unfair? I can understand if you pushed the time limit once due to something, but on a constant basis? I'm not saying you can't d this image, but, just think about it. Iveh Yo! 17:35, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but Loudsplash, you've had help on every image you've done. No offense, but I really think you should try and do this one yourself. Sorry, but this is how I see it. You're not going to improve if people help you with everything. I understand that this project is to improve character images, but it doesn't sit right with me. Jayce seek the truth <  > 17:46, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Cloudy. You're gonna have to put some more effort into this if you want it approved. If you think it's too hard, withdraw it and let someone else finish it. -ScarletwindLisanna 03:34, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

if you choose not to withdraw, make all the stripes inside patches the same size. Thistle. 04:28, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

REUPLOADED mk I blurred the white shading 'cause it was bothering me and then I once again redid the stripes on the haunch :\ MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:03, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks blotchy. I suggest you re-do the shading again, but if you don't, then maybe lighten the highlights a bit, and blur it more. --Rainey 13:22, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

I don't use highlights. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 14:21, November 9, 2011 (UTC)

The shading on the haunch goes way too into the middle; Mabye look at one of the shading guidelines for a queen blank if your not too sure how far it can go out--unless it was a mistake, then I would understand better. :) Thistle. 02:17, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the stripes on the haunch. They don't look connected with the lineart either. Try connecting them more. Grell No question at all! 20:20, November 10, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

To make the stripes more like in my image, you should use the pencil tool to draw out the shape, it looks as if you painted it the shape using a large size of paint brush, correct me if you used the pencil tool then filled in the stripes.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:51, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I'm going on vacation from today-15 so dont decline this!!MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:04, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

If it's not worked on, it WILL be declined, whether you like it or not. Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. Either withdraw it, or find a way to work on it during your vacation. --Splook it's a long way down. 21:54, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

If you choose to withdraw this, I'd be willing to take over. It's fine if you don't. ;)  :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 23:35, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Since Loudsplash isn't going to be around to work on this, I'm going to decline it. Anyone who wants to take it over, may, but start a new section since this one has gotten so long. -ScarletwindLisanna 02:47, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'll take over since I've wanted to do this. I'll go ahead and archive this, then. Iveh Yo! 02:49, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Speckletail (W)~ Declined

[[File:Speckletail.warrior.png]] OA was Nightshine and it needed to be brown and nobody likes triangle tabbies so heres this. -ſceheartBlah blah 23:40, October 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading alot more, especially around the highlights (if you use them, of course) Guradian1098 01:06, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

This looks pinkish-cream, not brown. Iveh Yo! 02:10, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

At least tint the base color to be more brown. Ivyheart =P 03:35, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

Add some shading to the ear farest from us. and her base coat looks gray, make the base coat match her elder. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 19:31, October 29, 2011 (UTC)

She doesn't need to change it to match Oblivion's; she posted first, so Oblivion's should match hers. Lighten the shading a tad. llwildheartl00:59 Sun Oct 30

As I suggested below, she should talk it over with Oblivion, and see what should be done. It shouldn't just be "Oh, she posted first" sort of thing. It's not fair to either artist. Jayce seek the truth <  > 23:39, October 30, 2011 (UTC)

I've left Iceheart a message on her talk page. Now it's just a matter of waiting until she replies :3 oblivionAudience? 00:37, October 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded- sorry guys ive been crazy busy. -ſceheartBlah blah 01:46, November 2, 2011 (UTC)

She still needs to be more brown. This looks cream. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 03:31, November 3, 2011 (UTC)

The changes werent showing... They are now. -ſceheartBlah blah 08:58, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

No, I was looking at the right version. I still think it needs to be browner. It looks like cream still. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 10:03, November 5, 2011 (UTC)

You still working on this? Iveh Yo! 16:04, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Yes sorry m finally getting my lazy butt in gear. This is supposed to be pale brown, and when you google pale brown, the old colour comes up. If i make it any more brown its not pale anymore. -ſceheartBlah blah 21:42, November 8, 2011 (UTC)

Well pale brown could mean just light brown, and this isn't light brown, it's dark cream. Honestly, the base color doesn't look all that much different than the old one, just the stripes do. Could you please change it? I guess if nobody else agrees with me though you don't have to. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 00:56, November 10, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights slightly. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:54, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this, Iceheart? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:56, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work -ScarletwindLisanna 02:54, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Copperpaw (A) ~ Declined

[[File:Copperpaw_Apprentice_png.png]]Ok This is my first character art and i suck but what ever. i am doing this chacter art becuase I was looking at random cats and when I came to this one It had perfect Discreption but no picture so I am trying my luck with this on. I am open to complains of all kinds XD ♪ ★Hollycloud♪ ★ 18:52, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I dont know if this is supposed to be up but there isn't supposed to be and white on the charart. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 18:54, November 13, 2011 (UTC) No apprentices until new outlines are done. This shold be declined. ~Regifloat222Riverstar, Leader of the Thunder Snipes! 18:56, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Yea, this will be declined. The apprentice blanks are being redone, incase you havent seen above ^^^. And besides this isnt even the right size -Bloo!yo 19:00, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt.W) ~ Declined

I really hope this can be up, but in Cats of the Clans, her image is dark-ginger with some cream and dark ginger on the tail, and cream on the muzzle and stripes on the face. Tell me if this should be declined. :) Thistle. 04:26, November 14, 2011 (UTC)


She is shown as a light brown tabby, actually.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:40, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I compared the colors, and they look close to me; but I don't know. :S Thistle. 04:42, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, it's pretty much just a light brown tabby. It looks the same as the picture on Dark River too. Though, she MIGHT get one since she has a white muzzle.... not sure though. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 06:49, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

i think this will be declined because she is apprentice in Cats of the Clans Leaf-storm,12:54,November 14,2011 (UTC)

Also, if you look here, she does have faint stripes all down her body and she's just a brownish color. The description matches except for the white muzzle. And, as Leaf said, she was mentioned as an apprentice in CotC. Shelly For a limited time only 13:22, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

So, is she going to be declined? Thistle. 14:11, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

If she was an apprentice, then yes :( Sorry Iveh Yo! 21:45, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, she was an apprentice. Sorry, but this is declined. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 23:02, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Jaggedtooth (Alt. W) ~ Declined

[[File:Jaggedtooth.warrior.alt.png]]Ok let's try this again. He was solid brown with a white muzzle in Into the Woods. This is ok.

This was declined before, and it'll be declined again. Check the archives first before posting an image. Jayce seek the truth <  > 03:27, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Honeypaw (SC) (KP) ~ Declined

[[File:Honeypaw_(SC).kittypet.png]]Mk, here's Honeypaw's kittypet. I <3 Honeypaw hehe. And once the apprentice blank is approved Sandypaw shall be mine!! lol XD MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:30, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

As I stated when I just undid your reservation, Honeypaw cannot get a charart because 1) We don't know Honeypaw's description and 2) We don't know Honeypaw's gender. This will be declined. Shelly For a limited time only 13:32, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Same goes for Sandypaw. No real knowledge of color or gender. If we knoew the gender, the charart would need to be gray just like Sunfish's. Shelly For a limited time only 13:33, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Okay it's she-cat I know that because she has eyelashes. I'll change her to gray rite now. MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:39, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

No, it isn't. We've discussed this before and decided we can't pick a gender based on eyelashes. Honeypaw and Sandypaw do not get chararts until their genders are stated. Shelly For a limited time only 13:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Trust me, I don't want to get into a fight about this but seriously, it's kind of obvious she's a she-cat. I mean, what tom has eyelashes? What tom looks like a she-cat is what i'm saying. This is kind of a stupid thing to add but what tom would be named Honeypaw? MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 13:43, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

The androginous community would like to have a word with you. But, that aside, we've already decided. It's possible for a tom to be named Honeypaw and have eyelashes, we are not making any assumptions. We wait until the gender is stated, and not before. This was decided when his/her apprentice charart was declined, along with Sandypaw's. If you don't believe me, check declined archive 45. Shelly For a limited time only 13:46, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Also as your other cahrart hasn't been archived yet you can't even post a new one here. You have to wait for a lead to clear it off the page. Shelly For a limited time only 13:47, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

As Shelly's said, s/he's not getting a charart. Till it's CITED, she won't be getting ANY chararts. I'm declining this. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 15:05, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail (NP) (KP) ~ Declined

[[File:Gorsetail(NP).kittypet.png]]Gorsetail DOES get a kittypet. Let's leave it at that. I like this one :) MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:21, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Gorsetail was captured and put in a cage. He was not a kittypet in any sense. Sorry, this will most likely be declined. Shelly For a limited time only 16:25, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Well Stoneclaw told me he'd get one...MoonlightBeauty of the sea! 16:32, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

If he does, the eyes are messed up. Sorry about that. Sweetflower 17:23, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Stoneclaw was wrong, sorry. If Gorsetail and all the other cats caught by twolegs and put into cages were to get kittypet images, they would have already. They were not kittypets, just prisoners. On that note, Willowbreeze shouldn't even be getting one. Shelly For a limited time only 18:01, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I shouldn't have said that, sorry. It's not my decision. This is being discussed on the talk page presently. Shelly For a limited time only 19:31, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I'll decline it for now, but if the other leads and members care to dispute my decision, please, feel free to discuss it. Jayce seek the truth <  > 19:50, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Silverstream (Alt.Q2) - Declined

[[File:Silverstream.queen.alt2.png]] Manga alt. of Silverstream from Crookedstar's promise - Harakiri-wish 18:33,November 15,2011 (UTC)

I don't remember...did we say she would get one? Anyways, there's waste above the head (between the ears), near the neck and between the front paws. Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:42, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Actually, I think we decided not to... she still has a stripe on her head in the comic, so technically she's still a silver tabby. Shelly For a limited time only 18:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, as far as I know we didn't discuss this specific alt, but she IS a silver tabby in there, so I don't think she'd get one. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 19:45, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. We've also decided not to give her one for just being described as being pale gray so I think this is the same thing. This is declined, sorry. -ScarletwindLisanna 21:56, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Jayfeather (Alt. K) - Declined

[[File:Jayfeather.kit.alt.png]]Here is Jaykit with his pelt colour mixed up with his sister's. Pelt and earpink colour are from scratch, and I took Jayfeather's MC eye colour and edited it a tad.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:57, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

He was called black in Outcast as an apprentice, never as a kit. This will be declined, sorry. Shelly For a limited time only 00:01, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:03, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (KP) - Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.kittypet.png]] Eh... I'm pretty sure this is gonna get declined. Well, In CP, Twolegs took her into their house. (whatever the cats called it). I wasn't really sure if she would get one or not, so I just went ahead and made this. I erased the lineart for the collar because she didn't wear one. And I took absolutely ALL the colors from her queen image. Well.... comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 22:37, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

If she does, define the ear-pink a bit, I can hardly see it. Sweetflower 22:49, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I can see it clearly... SnowyXPerry = Serry! 23:04, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

I think she gets one. Tone down the shading a tad, also blend it in more with the lighter area of her pelt. Define the depth in her eyes. Iveh Yo! 23:30, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Define the ear pink just a bit, Snow. We won't decline it. It's very pretty! Jayce seek the truth <  > 23:46, November 11, 2011 (UTC)

Ok, sorry. Can you darken it a little bit? Sweetflower 00:00, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Well, Birdpaw did and she was still in SkyClan so..... Sky-Stupidly Spring...✿ 00:11, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Dull the highlights on the haunch. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:47, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:28, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Erase the waste, and she shouldn't have stripes on her earpink. oblivionAudience? 02:33, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stupid me :P SnowyXPerry = Serry! 02:40, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading and the ear pink. Very nice! Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 14:42, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

To keep consistent with the highlight in the eye, I think it should probably be lighter running down the foreleg and on the edge of the backward facing ear. ~Breezewhisker~ 18:03, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded I think this looks a lot like her queen image now. :) SnowyXPerry = Serry! 18:39, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Lol I think it's supposed to. Anyway dull the ear pink and blur it. Maybe lighten the shading on the back a little bit. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 21:06, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Earpink's fine, but blur the shading on the back -{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 21:31, November 12, 2011 (UTC)

Add a highlight that connects the highlights on the shoulder and the hind-leg please. Also blur the shading on her back.

05:53, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it needs the extra highlight, Fallow... It looks fine how it is. Jayce seek the truth <  > 09:10, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Blur all the shading a bit. LeopardclawLook upto the past… 15:02, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded SnowyXPerry = Serry! 18:39, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

If you use highlights tone them down and maybe the ear pink too. Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 19:20, November 13, 2011 (UTC)

I'm leaving the earpink the way it is unless someone else agrees. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 00:19, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Toned down highlights a weetle bit. SnowyXPerry = Serry! 01:03, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze shouldn't be getting one. She wasn't taken to a twoleg den, she was held in a box by some twolegs at a camp. Not like Leafstar, who was taken into a twoleg den, given twoleg food, and was basically made a kittypet for a day. But that's just my opinion. Shelly For a limited time only 18:03, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

I shouldn't have said that, sorry. It's not my decision. This is being discussed on the talk page presently. Shelly For a limited time only 19:28, November 14, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back a bit, especially the middle.-Kittycat79aka Rowantail 23:06, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

There was an (extensive) discussion about this, and it was agreed Willowbreeze should not get a kittypet. Changing heading to declined. oblivionAudience? 02:24, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Stonestream (E) - Declined

[[File:Stonestream.elder.png]] Needed to be longhaired. OA was Spottedwing, then I'm guessing Nightfall101 tweaked it. Comments? SnowyXPerry = Serry! 20:41, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights, if any. oblivionAudience? 21:03, November 15, 2011 (UTC)

Center the earpink, please. :3 Awesome! Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:09, November 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the ear-pink larger and more triangular. Sweetflower00:08 Thu Nov 17

Darken the shading -{{SUBST:Signatures/Guradian1098}} 01:18, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Guardian, the shading doesn't need to be darker. It's fine. Okay, since Snowy sorta left, is anyone else going to work on this, or should we decline it? Jayce seek the truth <  > 17:07, November 17, 2011 (UTC)

Declined -ScarletwindLisanna 04:16, November 20, 2011 (UTC)

Ivypool (Lo) ~ Declined

[[File:Ivypool.loner.png]]This is actually Blossomtear's not mine, she can't edit the PCA page yet. So, Blossomtear thought she would get one, since she got stuck in the tunnels. Well, comments? Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:21, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

But she wouldn't right? Cuase she and Blossomfall just got lost, right? They were still part of Thunderclan, and never left, just got lost. But if i'm wrong, define the ear-pink. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 01:27, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Mm. IF she gets one, then Blossomfall would too. Just saying. :3 Trollsky She who Trolls everything 01:30, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Why would they get one? They were still a part of the Clans... Changing heading to declined. If anyone disagrees, feel free to. oblivionAudience? 01:32, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

There's no need for it. Archiving now. Jayce seek the truth <  > 04:31, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W)- Declined/withdrawn

[[File:Willowclaw.warrior.png]]Redone. there was multiple issues, Permission from Scarlet. Looked funny when I tried to tweak. Please don't kill me. Oa is Bramble.Trollsky She who Trolls everything 02:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Beautiful. <3 Define the shading on the tail a little. I'm jealous. Ivyheart =P 03:36, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Could you add some shading in the midriff area, so the shading isn't just a straight line? Puurdy :D Splook it's a long way down. 21:19, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No. No purdy, or jealousness. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 01:20, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Well too bad, cause this is beast BD define the shading on the tail -Bloo!yo 06:12, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. No. Trollsky She who Trolls everything 06:19, November 19, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. *flutters eyelids lovingly* Darken the shading on the very edge (<--) of the chest for more dimensional stuffs. llwildheartl05:33 Sun Nov 20

Re-uploaded. o.o Trollsky She who Trolls everything 01:08, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Since Sky had three images up she told me to take this one down. Iveh Yo! 20:40, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

Willowbreeze (KP) - Declined

[[File:Willowbreeze.kittypet.png]]Whoopie! Back to silver tabbies! Changes may not be showing... Comments? -ScarletwindLisanna 03:57, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

We decided she wouldn't get one, Scarlet. Sorry, but I'll have to decline it. Jayce seek the truth <  > 03:58, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Cruuddd.... Well, back to the hunt... -ScarletwindLisanna 04:17, November 23, 2011 (UTC)

Squirrelfur (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Squirrelfur.warrior.png]] OA was hollyberry; redone to be reddish brown. I took all colors from Oakheart, so I am not changing any colors. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:11, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Does the red part of his description mean that he needs stripes? :\ Shelly For a limited time only 00:13, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

He's red-brown, which is the same as reddish brown. Oakheart and Pinestar are reddish browna nd they don't need stripes, so I'm not adding stripes. Mistystar Trust the Fire Within... 00:52, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. oblivionAudience? 02:38, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks the taddest bit blotchy by where the haunch meets the foreleg. Ivyheart =P 03:37, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

You may not be changing any colors, but that ear pink needs to be blurred. Misty, this looks much better then the original version. Jayce seek the truth <  > 08:03, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Thicken and blur the shading along his back. 18:27, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Derp. Forgot to log-in. Specklestream Let it Snow! 18:29, November 18, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the neck shading. Sweetflower00:00 Mon Nov 21

Misty, you still working on this? Jayce seek the truth <  > 18:47, November 22, 2011 (UTC)

It's been a week. Sorry, but declined due to lack of work. --Splook it's a long way down. 00:35, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Tallstar (Alt. L) ~ Declined

[[File:Tallstar.leader.alt.png]] On the cover of Code of the Clans, he was seen as a black cat with only a white muzzle. I wasn't really sure if he'd get an alt for this, so I just went ahead. And I took the eye color from the color on the book cover. Comments? Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 01:11, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Nice ;) Saw my post, eh? Well, if this stays up, there is some waste on the charart, and did you pick the eye colour from the other images and the ear-pink? Cause the need to match. Sweetflower01:15 Thu Nov 24

The waste is right above the left ear. Also smudge the patch a little bit. Blur the ear pink too. <3 Squishee DONT EAT MY FOOD! 01:20, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded @Sweetflower Yeah... I'm desperate to do chararts. --Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 01:25, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Dat earpink. Make it a little less... eyes burning ;) Also make his tail longer. oblivionAudience? 01:26, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

This is so perty! But it's supposed to be just the muzzle that's white, none of the chest. Sweetflower01:28 Thu Nov 24

Techinically it's the neck, I think. But if it's just the muzzle...Troll-de-mort Eh heh heh. 01:41, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading -ScarletwindLisanna 02:45, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 13:41, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

It seems like in the Code of the Clans, the white goes down a bit farther, can you extend that? I know that Sweetflower said its just the muzzle, but if you look a bit more closely, its his neck, too. Sorry if I'm wrong. Dx Mistypebble 14:57, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Erm, how do you know the white was only in that place? In his current image, I think if he was placed the same way, minus the way his tail looks, it would look very similar or the same. He could have white patches on his belly or on his paws, ect. Plus, he is a black and white cat, including this image. Sorry but I think this should be declined. Iveh Yo! 21:12, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. He was kinda blocked off in the cover of that book, and this is pretty much the same as Runningnose. He's still a black and white cat regardless, it's just up to where the white is placed, and since it's never said in the book, that cover could very well be right. I don't think he should get an alt. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 22:14, November 24, 2011 (UTC)

Agreed. *pets declined Runningnose* Its like having an alt. for Blackstar when he is mentioning only having one black paw.. Mistypebble 01:06, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

I truly believe he deserves an alt for this. But it seems like majority rules. Sweetflower01:39 Fri Nov 25

You don't actually see all of him, so his markings aren't certain. Firestar's big rear end hides him. ~Breezewhisker~ 02:00, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

I agree with Breezewhisker. Grell No question at all! 13:05, November 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

So.. is this declined? :( --Blossomtear Tearing the blossom 15:53, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Yes. If any other leads disagree, feel free to change the heading. Jayce seek the truth <  > 21:54, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Comments before archiving? --Splook it's a long way down. 23:23, November 25, 2011 (UTC)

Declined. llwildheartl06:16 Sat Nov 26

NoneStar2 ~ Declined

[[File:NoneStar2.jpg]] I wish to approve a Char Art ★NoneStar★☆May Starclan be with you… ☆

Er, this isn't for fan characters. This is for cats from the actual series. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:20, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Twi's right. I don't know if you're even part of PCA yet, but if you wish to join please leave a join request on the talk page, and then read over the guidelines before posting another charart, please. llwildheartl04:28 Sat Nov 26

And you didnt even make this. you took the image off here, and some parts off of Raggedstar's lead image, am I right? -Bloo!yo 05:15, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

Declined and file deleted. Jayce seek the truth <  > 22:08, November 26, 2011 (UTC)

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