Foxpaw - Withdrawn by User


I'm amazed that there wasn't another one started while I was gone. Here's also an updated Foxpaw image as well.-- ShimmerCrystals 03:24, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

The outline is really blurry in places, and the ear should be more blended into the pelt. Bright pink ears look unnatural. Koda
The shading is too light, and isn't really buffed out like it should be. But this looks pretty good. FxC 23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)
I added the line art back in the places it was needed.-- ShimmerCrytals 01:10, 4 December 2008 (UTC)
Cool. I did Icepaw, just to partner up with your Foxpaw. A little tweak with the darken tool on the shading. Mallinois The Doghouse 20:30, 13 December 2008 (UTC)
I got a bit on the bored side and decided to update this. Its boring when you get out of school at 1:30 O_o-- ShimmerCrystals 19:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

The outline is blurred into the background a little bit by the neck. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:14, 28 February 2009 (UTC)
I would like to withdraw Foxpaw so I can work on Crowfeather more.-- ♪Shimmer 02:32, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Brackenfur - Withdrawn by User


I also made a few edits to Brackenfur before I reuploaded him. Comment please cause I think he needs more work, but I can't think of what.-- ShimmerCrytals 03:27, 26 November 2008 (UTC)

I think this looks good Shimmerpool. I can't think of anything right now that needs doing except maybe the shading could be blended slightly more along his chest fur. Apart from thst I think this looks great!--Sandy 19:16, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

This needs shading, of course. Also, the tabby markings need to be blended better. A pretty good start, but of course, it needs improvement. Also, there is a "swirl" in the lower leg area, if you see where the curve is, a little above that. You might want to put a tabby marking there.--Jakko123 21:34, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

I would like to decline this submission at the moment. I want to finish up Crowfeather and Foxpaw for now. Once I'm done with them, I'll come back to work on him if I'm feeling up to it, which I probably won't cause of midterms.-- ShimmerCrytals 22:13, 14 December 2008 (UTC)
I have changed my mind and made the decision to keep up Brackenfur. I came up with a new color scheme for him and got more ideas with shading messing with GIMP for the past few weeks. Comments please would help revive this cat.-- ShimmerCrystals 20:23, 28 January 2009 (UTC)
Withdrawing him cause I want to work on Crowfeather and also I can't nail his tabby markings right >_<-- ♪Shimmer 02:34, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

It look a bit sqiggly, try spacing ou the tabby markings and add fewer like Squirrelflight's. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:15, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

RavenPaw~Withdrawn by user

What do you think? I wanna help with the project, too. (if that's ok...) --Mumble785 01:15, 21 December 2008 (UTC)Mumble785

Welcome to Charart Mumble :) I see this is your first try out. Now let's begin. Ravenpaw is, yes a black cat, but you could make him a bit lighter so you could add shading. Once done with that, add your shading and blend away. Good luck ;) May I suggest when getting the lineart, save it to your computer. That makes it easier instead of having to upload it to photobucket time after time again. Also I advise to use Photoshop or Gimp when doing these.-- ShimmerCrystals 05:58, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

This has a lot of unneeded color blotches, and something looks wrong w/ the eyes... Other than that, you need to shade and really amp up the blending on the white-tipped tail and the chest(which by the way has a white dash, not white splotch.) And the image needs to lighten up, too. Sorry if I sound harsh, but this is really what is wrong with the image. What image editor did you use? --Mallinois 15:32, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok.I'll work on it some more using your tips. ;) Thanks!--Mumble785 14:07, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

P.S. What program do the other people use, where do they get it, and does it cost anything? Currently, I'm using paint. *blushes from embarrasment* (I know I spelled embarrasment wrong.)--Mumble785 14:25, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Paint? *Shivers* That's a problem. Most people use GIMP. I color my images with paint, and edit them with GIMP. GB39 17:46, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Ok. I'll check GIMP out then, and trade google sketchup for it. THEN I'll work on ravenpaw some more.--Mumble785 18:06, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

Any other programs besides GIMP that will work for this? Dad won't let me download it. :( --Mumble785 23:39, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

I'm putting ravenpaw on hold. I have the program I need now, but I would like to concentrate on fireheart, and regaining my cool after that last coment on my kittypet blanks. --Mumble785 23:26, 27 December 2008 (UTC)

Withdrawn. I'm never gonna do 'em, i guess.

Queen Blanks ~ Withdrawn by user. :*(


Kittypet blanks don't work, obviously. So I tryed a queen. this is a short haired female. i will get a long hair female eventually. --Mumble785 18:09, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

As I said on the kittypet blank, the muzzle is too large, and there should be a larger drop from the forehead to the muzzle. 18:38, 2 January 2009 (UTC) Random Quest

Right now, I'm looking at an Akita(Huge Japenese dog) --Mallinois 21:21, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

I know what an akita is, i will fix the muzzle, and how can i make it look less like a dog? --Mumble785 23:02, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

The head-try to make it squareish(Is that a word? :P) --Mallinois 22:09, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I made the snout shorter. is that better? --Mumble785 23:40, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

Make it a tiny bit smaller. Also, the front legs are bugging me. Try and straighten them. It will look better then. 00:01, 14 January 2009 (UTC)Random Guest

ok. --Mumble785 23:08, 14 January 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. I made it smaller and straightened the front legs. --Mumble785 23:19, 16 January 2009 (UTC)

It still doesn't really look right...I think it may be the transition from the neck to head - it needs to be smoother. Also - the legs look unatural still. They're quite...short for a start and they look very flimsy, as if they're about to collapse. Sandy Leader's Den 08:43, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

try making edges round, but not TOO round. Remember, cats have very small necks, small muzzels and long legs. Ps. Love Akitas (says as black Akita sets head on my lap, asking to be petted, lol.) Kaboo08 Flamefeather

REUPLOADED. Is that better? P.S. I'm going to have the long haired female done by the end of march. ;) --MUMBLE785 18:55, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Move the tail back more, and the legs are too cartoony. I would also thin out the lines.Darkhallows 09:15, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

It looks Okay, but the outline is uneven. --Mallinois B e w a r e o f F l u f f y 22:21, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

ok. i need to put some of my images on hold, including this one. not able to be as active as I used to. :( --MUMBLE785 18:55, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawn. I guess I'll let Melon do them. :*( --MUMBLE785 20:02, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

Fallen Leaves-Withdrawn by user


I did him as a warrior. My first multicolor. Needs some work, but I'm not sure where to start. Flamefeather 18:05, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

He's a Sharpclaw, I don't know if you should use the warrior blank, but it look like you smudged the whole image, and PLEASE just fill in the eye like this: Four white pixels inside. Top lefT:black Top Right:White Bottom two:Blue, Green, Amber, Yellow, Orange, Gray, Pale...(ETC) --MallinoisHimatsu'sHowl 23:09, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

I t also needs shading. --MallinoisHimatsu'sHowl 23:10, 27 January 2009 (UTC)

This image looks smudged almost all the way. You simply smudged the colors together. You need to blend them. A little smudge here, a little blend here (repeat). In time it'll come out good. It also looks like you smudge his front leg a bit on the outline. Add that back in using the real lineart. I'm not sure if its my laptop, but I keep seeing gray lines running from his forhead to his eye.-- ShimmerCrystals 00:37, 30 January 2009 (UTC)

Tried to unsmudge some. Also did shading. Flamefeather 13:02, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

Fix the front paw, the orange was smeared with the lines, anslo the shadeing is a little shaky, I'd fix that.Darkhallows

It still looks like you're smudging a lot. Try leaving the smudging alone and try blending. These colors really need to be blended together to give it that more real look.-- ShimmerCrystals 04:36, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

I would strongly suggest withdrawing this; we don't have the blanks yet. GB57 05:48, 1 February 2009 (UTC)

Robinwing - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Robinwing.png|left]] Here's my go at Robinwing. GB39 05:38, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

You can just barely see the shading, it needs to be more prominent(if that's the right word) XD. And if you look closely, you can see some white highlight on the lineart, right on the head. --Bramble Bramble's Realm 16:44, 30 November 2008 (UTC)

I'll get on it soon. And I found the highlight! XD GB39 17:21, 30 November 200Th

There needs to be a lot of shading here. Also, there is no pupil in the eye. The ear pink needs to be made more into the picture too.--Jakko123 21:37, 4 December 2008 (UTC)

How's this? GB39 18:04, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

I can't see any shading at all here, and you need to blend in your ear pink, and make it a brownish pink. Use images such as squirrelflight for example. --Mumble785 22:12, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

I'll work on the shading, and I'll blend the ear. Although, I wouldn't really say it needs to be brown-pink. GB57 23:22,

11 January 2009 (UTC)

No, not brownish-pink, just maybe paler :) Sandy Leader's Den 08:58, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Beautiful, I really love the color on this one. It needs more shading though, alot. It still looks 2-D Kaboo08 20:33, 25 January 2009 (UTC) Flamefeather

Better? GB57 21:25, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

Much better. It could use a little bleinding on the shadings edges, and maybe some shading on the hindquarter part where it goes up into the body. However, much improved! Good job! Flamefeather 21:34, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I think more shading is needed around the belly area and as Flamefeather mentioned - the edges of the shading need to be blended for a more natural change between the darker colour and the lighter area. This is coming along though --Sandy Leader's Den 14:25, 22 February 2009 (UTC)

It needs a lot of blending where the shading is. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:18, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

Needs more shading on the further legs, and the belly. --MUMBLE785 20:45, 16 March 2009 (UTC)

Needs alot more shading on the legs, head, and a little bit more on the tail. Some more highlights too. I can not see any blending (sorry if there is some and i am just an unoberservant nitwit!) and the eye and ear are unnaturally fluro. Dawnfeather I am of the Forest - I am of the Dawn's Radiance 06:58, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Graystripe - Declined

[[File:Graystripe 2.png|left]] My first try at a character art. i accept criticism and advice. --Lightning 17:57, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

1. He has some white specks.

2. He has a blue line on the left side of the pic.

--GB 00:15, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Woops, the line was a mistake on the part of I think i got the white specks.--Lightning 18:34, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

The shading could be increased a bit, but those white flecks... gotta deal with those. GB 00:39, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Also, the background has to be white. GB 01:02, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, you solved the white flecks problem, but the background is still blue, and it looks like you took blurtool and ran it over everything. GB 01:24, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

There is a bunch of little black lines......and the darker gray stripe needs to be bigger. His eyes should be more golden brown, too. User:Mallinois

Welcome to the project! Thanks you for giving this a go... Let's get things started: The outlines are blurred, and that needs to be fixed. The shading is also a bit small, and really needs to be amped-up and fully blended.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:40, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
Well, I always envisioned Graystripe as having a darker, slate grey stripe on his back. With this blank position, that would be a bit hard. I suggest a really dark gray on the back that fades into the normal pelt, blending the stripe with the shading. That would look really nice. Also, maybe add some highlights on the front forelegs. FxC 23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

The background is colored again. GB39 15:48, 6 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree with GB with the background being colored, but also he looks very fuzzy. Reminds me of one my earlier versions of Crowfeather when Kitsu said it looks as if you're looking at him through glass bottles or something.-- ShimmerCrystals 02:28, 29 December 2008 (UTC)

It looks like hewas run over with a blur-car, and the outline is reallymessy in some places. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:07, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for months. Declining. GB57 05:39, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Hazeltail - Declined

[[File:Hazeltail.gif|left]] The ear-pink is blended now, whaddya guys think? FxC 22:45, 22 November 2008 (UTC)

More blending on the patches.User:Mallinois Nov. 23
I'm pretty pleased with the blending of the patches, with the exception of 3 places: Tail, right-foreleg, and between the eyes. But shading... Shading is needed. The ear-pink could do with being a touch softer, too.  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:44, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

I'd like to place this on hold (if it is possible) to focus on finalizing Feathertail. FxC 23:20, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

Sorry FxC, but images can't be put on hold. GB57 05:42, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Larchkit - Declined

[[File:Larchkit.png|left]] Hope you like it! Hawktail 00:47, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

It's a nice start. But I am going to say something I say all the time: Blend. I also have to comment on the ear pink, as it's simply far too pink to look right. And... There's something weird about the tabby... I think it's the angle of the stripes, in addition to how un-integrated with the pelt they are. And the fact that they're conspicuously absent from places they should be (forehead, tail, left foreleg, cheeks).  Kitsufox  Fox's Den 16:47, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

Blend. Shade. Draw in pupils. Plus, where did the light Brown Belly come from? Coyote=background:Black>Coyote The Doghouse 21:46, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

I dont have time to fix it right now, but there are pupils, look closer Hawktail 23:59, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

This hasn't been updated in a while, so you'll need to get working quick. This really needs blending and shading, and the light brown belly looks unnatural. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:10, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on for 5 months. GB57 05:43, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Deputy Blanks - Declined

[[File:Depshm.png|left]] We are in desperate need of pixel blanks, so I thought I'd contribute this sketch of a deputy. Yes, this is my own original drawing. Hope you like it! FxC 14:30, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

For a minute I thought these would be good queen blanks... --Mallinois 16:21, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

Good, put do you think you think youcan thicken the linesRedflare 21:31, 22 December 2008 (UTC)

There needs to be a male shorthaired, a male longhaired, a female shorthaired, and a female longhaired. -- random guest

Yes, I know, random guest. This is my first post, and if people like it I will then post female shorthair, female longhair, and male longhair. FxC 13:34, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

"Random Guest" is am IP address. I think the blanks look good, just need to thicken the outline and fix the further ear. --Mallinois 13:46, 23 December 2008 (UTC)

I agree with Mallinois. --Mumble785 23:42, 26 December 2008 (UTC)

Very realistic. One of the best I've seen. The further hind leg could be shorter, and the further ear needs a little work. Great Job!!! Flamefeather 14:14, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

The paws look a little cartoon-ish. Darkhallows 9:14, 2nd Feb 2009

I agree w/ Darkhollows. --MallinoisThe Puppy's Crib The Puppy then howled bravely -Ui! 22:22, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

It's a fairly good drawing, but I don't think it'll be accepted. Sorry! Please take no offense! (Please don't hate me!) Dawnfeather I am of the Forest - I am of the Dawn's Radiance 13:08, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry FxC. GB57 05:50, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

Swiftpaw - Declined


I made Swiftpaw of ThunderClan. Questions are encouraged. ZZ Top Get Your Wings This House Is On Fire 23:19, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

I've got one. Did you use paint? GB57 23:52, 23 January 2009 (UTC)

Yes I did. ZZ Top Get Your Wings This House Is On Fire 00:33, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

This image needs some shading and highlighting, ZZ Top. Also, maybe the eye colour should be changed to make it more noticable - at the moment I can't even tell what colour his eyes are, all I can see is the white speck. The ears need the tiny pink bit put in as well. look at some of the approved images - possibly Nightcloud (or Rockpaw) seeing as she's black to see how this is supposed to look for a black cat. Sandy Leader's Den 08:41, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Try using a very dark gray. It's hard to shade with true black. If you want to blend, try using It has blurtool. Shim told Mumble to use this, and his images look okay. --Mallinois13 13:25, 24 January 2009 (UTC)

Yup its true pixlr works fine. are you saving this image? It looks like your saving it gif or jpg then reuploading it by paint making the shading all well weird. And yes it is a bit hard to shade with true black so try something a bit darker to my Crowfeather image. After all, Crowfeather is a cat close to black but not true black at all.-- ShimmerCrystals 02:53, 28 January 2009 (UTC)

I'm going to put this one o hold for a while. I am working really hard to make rouge blanks. And when you're the worst user of paint in Wisconsin, it takes tons of time and effort to get it done. Feel free to comment still. ZZ Top Get Your Wings This House Is On Fire 12:23, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

I think you can't put it on hold, but you can withdraw it. And you're the worst user of paint ever? Join the club. --Mallinois F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g 13:16, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

ZZ Top, this page is way to cluttered. Withdraw this or work on it, please. GB57 18:04, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

There is no shading, and the eye is ocmpletely black, minus on white pixel.  Dawnfeather  23:26, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

You can't put images on hold. GB57 05:59, 19 April 2009 (UTC)



I tried my first one. I did Dawnpaw, coloring on paint and then blurring on It worked, I think she turned out good! Give me constructive critism, I can improve her! Kaboo08 20:19, 25 January 2009 (UTC) Flamefeather

I can see you worked up the outline. The eye looks wierd, and I just want to say good blending. --MallinoisHimatsu'sHowl 20:37, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

I'll get to fixing the eye real soon. Thanks Kaboo08 20:40, 25 January 2009 (UTC) Flamefeather

Got a new eye version up Kaboo08 20:46, 25 January 2009 (UTC) Flamefeather

You know, you could just change the inage. [[File:Dawnpaw.PNG]] This is my Dawnpaw. I stopped doing it because I had other pics. Try using it for reference. --MallinoisHimatsu'sHowl 20:51, 25 January 2009 (UTC)

My computer won't take me to the page to see your Dawnpaw. Any idea why??? Flamefeather 14:09, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

It's because the page no longer exists since Mallinois deleted the image. (I think anyway - it's a redlink now) I think the first eye looked better than the second - the second one looks too...big, and out of position. Try keeping the eye outline balck and coloring the center. The shading is fairly good although I would suggest blending the highlighting on the back in more. Also - the ear pink needs a tad bit more blending to make it look more natural Sandy Leader's Den 19:57, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

Opps! The second drawing is listed first. I'll delete the my first attempt and work on shading. Flamefeather 21:24, 26 January 2009 (UTC)

I'm bored and haven't updated her in a while, so I worked on the forlegs and highlights. Flamefeather 15:03, 8 February 2009 (UTC)

I think you overused the sharpen tool, and the eye has purple around it, and it looks blotchy. I would strongly suggest consulting Mr.Blurtool and try to make it less blotchy and sharp-looking. --Mallinois F l u f f y is W a t c h i n g . . . 23:35, 8 March 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work in over a month. GB57 06:00, 19 April 2009 (UTC)

To-Be Cave Guard Blanks-Withdrawn

[[File:To-Be CaveGuardMS.PNG]] [[File:To-Be CaveGuardFS.PNG]] [[File:To-Be CaveGuardFL.PNG]] [[File:To-Be CaveGuardML.PNG]]

I'll get the longs up later. Please comment onthese "poorly drawn" blanks. -- Mallinois  Fluffy Power 14:45, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Longs are up. -- Mallinois  Fluffy Power 14:47, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

First off, the snout is much too long, making them look mouse like. The head is also too big in proportion to body size, though that could be neck length. I would also make the paws a lot more realistic. Also, the tail should stick straight out, not curve around. --Darkhallows 07:09, 12 April 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. -- Mallinois  Fluffy Power 13:32, 13 April 2009 (UTC)

Gorsepaw-Withdrawn by user

[[File:Gorsepaw.PNG]] I really wante to do a ginger and white cat like Brightheart, so I did Gorsepaw, the only other cat availible. Comments needed. --Mallinois13 23:19, 19 January 2009 (UTC)

I like that the picture is not cloudy. It's a little to shiny to me though and the shadow under the chin looks a little out of place. I never liked this outline for the apprentices, the tail for the short haired cats looks dead and I don't like the idea of having a completely different style from the warriors. I think the apprentices should look more like younger versions of the warrior pixels. Good coloring though and I like the eyes. Perhaps you could make the white fur more of a creamy and warm color.--Thornpath 00:18, 20 January 2009 (UTC)Thornpath

The fur is white, so I can't modify that, but I'll blend the neck shading if I need to. --Mallinois13 23:05, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Make the pink on the ear a little smaller, it seems a little... like it is taking over.--Darkhallows 23:09, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawing. -- Mallinois  Fluffy Power 13:04, 11 April 2009 (UTC)

Putting back since my other one got accepted. -- Mallinois  Dog Lingo 22:12, 22 April 2009 (UTC)

Taking him out again... -- Mallinois  Dog Lingo 22:14, 23 April 2009 (UTC)

Sandstorm - Withdrawn

[[File:SandstormG.png|left]] I made Sandstorm. If you look closely, you can see the stripes, as stated on her page. Constructive criticism is appreciated. Gοlδεnpαω User Talk!

I'd make the stripes a little more visible. But I really like it. Nice work! Darkhallows

I like the colour you've chosen but would suggest blending the shading around the hind legs a little more just to make it a more natural transition between the two colours --Sandy Leader's Den 11:09, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Updated with darker stripes and better shading.^_^ Gοlδεnpαω User Talk! 23:06, 5 February 2009 (UTC)

Looks amazing. --Jayfeather 20:22, 18 February 2009 (UTC)

The outline is blurred in some places. Darkhallows 05:39, 11 March 2009 (UTC)

I also noticed you're using triangle cartoon tabby markings. Please don't use those. Try useing tabby pictures like Squirrelflight or Dustpelt for refernce. --Mallinois F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g 00:33, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

Updated with the best tabby markings I could make.^_^; --Gοlδεn pαω 01:22, 20 March 2009 (UTC)

WHOA!!! What did you do to her!?!? Your still using stripes. Very smudgy, huge stripes. Try jagged Y's for the markings, like my Fireheart and Squirrelflight. (Still mumble, still lazy.) -- 19:27, 29 March 2009 (UTC)

Well, her page describes her as having stripes, not tabby markings.--Gοlδεn pαω 22:20, 8 April 2009 (UTC)

A cat can't really have stripes other than tabby stripes. Like Mumble said, try using jagged 'Y' shapes. Or you could even convert it back to the old ones. --Darkhallows 09:46, 14 April 2009 (UTC)

I don't think that you should do the Y twigy marking, but rather those big wavy tabby markings.  Dawnfeather  23:25, 14 April 2009 (UTC)