Contents 1 Mousefur (E) ~ Declined 2 Cedarheart (A) - Declined 3 Tinycloud (A) ~ Declined 4 Sorreltail (K) Redone 5 Blossomfall (Alt. A) Declined 6 Birchfall (A) ~ Declined 7 Frostfur (A) - Declined 8 Rosepetal (A)~ Declined 9 Owlwhisker (W) - Withdrawn 10 Goldenflower (Alt. A) ~ Declined 11 Minty (Ro) ~ Declined 12 Blackstar (Ro) - Declined 13 Sparrowpelt (SC) (A) ~ Withdrawn 14 Birdpaw (A) - Withdrawn 15 Leopardstar (D) ~ Declined 16 Beechstar (L) ~ Declined 17 Mistystar(Alt.D) ~ Declined 18 Graystripe(alt.A) ~Declined 19 Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) - Withdrawn 20 Yellowfang(alt.Med.A)~ Declined 21 Brackenfur (A) - Withdrawn 22 Hawkfrost (A) ~ Declined 23 Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) - Declined 24 Coal (Ro) ~ Declined 25 Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Declined 26 Swallowtail (E) - Declined 27 Icecloud (A) ~ Declined 28 Grasspelt (A)- Declined 29 Bella (KP) - Declined 30 Icecloud (W) ~ Declined 31 Brackenfur (W) - Declined 32 Starlingwing (A) - Declined 33 Lavaleaf (MCA) - Declined 34 Onestar (Alt.L) ~ Declined 35 Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ Declined 36 Wing (PH) - Declined 37 Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - Withdrawn 38 Snowbird (Q) - Withdrawn 39 One-eye (Q) - Withdrawn 40 Boulder (Lo) ~ Declined 41 Splash (lo) - Declined 42 Ruby (Lo) - Declined

Mousefur (E) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Mousefur.elder.png]] My, it's been a while! I think I got all the waste this time :P. OA was Sandy, tweaked by Mint (thanks Scarletwind). ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 01:48, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Make the ear-pink bigger and the shading looks almost non-existent. She also needs a graying head. OA was Sandy and tweaked by Mint. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 01:50, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Wasn't she said to be longfurred in Sunrise? Yes, she was, i just checked....Make her longfurred. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 14:02, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Okay. I'll get that done soon. And sorry, forgot the OA. ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 14:19, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-Uploaded - Comments? ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 14:35, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

She needs a graying head....take a bit of gray and maybe make flecks on her head? Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 14:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Crap, forgot the graying head. Sorry! I'll get it done pronto! ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 14:40, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Can you define the shading a bit more? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 14:41, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded - Defined shading. The graying head is a fail, I know. Comments? ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 14:51, December 24, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Darken the gray just a tad. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 18:11, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to have to point this out, but when an animal starts to grey, it typically starts at the muzzle, which is still part of the head. I think you should have the grey radiate from there instead of the top of her head. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Define the shading, and it says she has a skinny tail, so try making it thinner Iveh Yo! 22:20, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Maybe you could try to splice the shortfur tail onto the long fur blank? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:32, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

Why exactly is she long furred in the first place? It doesn't say long furred or fluffy or anything in the description. Just thick furred, and we decided that doesn't mean they have long fur. Why not change it back to short haired> Then her tail will be automatically skinny. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 22:36, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know when she's mentioned as long furred. I just went by what Maplepool said. ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 03:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

If Maplepool can cite it, then it needs to be added to her description and all her images tweaked. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 03:26, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Sunrise, Page 141. Its on her page, thats where I got it. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 03:28, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

It says that she has thick fur on that page. That doesn't nessessarily mean she should be long haired. It's the same with Firestar, he is described with thick fur but he still is short haired. Although, on that page, it says that she is ungroomed, so you could give her maybe some pelt markings like the ones on Lichenfur.  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  06:24, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Also (and this would warrant all of her images being tweaked) dusky means dark, and she doesn't look dusky in any of her images. Can you darken her base pelt color? Iveh Yo! 06:50, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Okay, let me get all this straight. You want her to be shorthaired, darkened base color, markings like Lichenfur, and gray on the muzzle? Sorry, just getting really confused. xP ❊ Starrk ❊ ^{I'm Not Alone} 18:44, December 25, 2011 (UTC) Shadewing

Yup. Though could you actually make the head just kinda a lot paler and less saturates instead of pure gray? And make it cover most of the head, instead of in little specks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 10:28, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Shade, you still working on this? If not, I need to revert the image and decline this in about two hours since that'll be the week mark. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:49, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

We're at a week now. Declining, archiving, and reverting. oblivion^Audience? 01:13, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Cedarheart (A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:128px-Appshortm.png]] My first one! Comments?Spotlegs 15:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

First, I changed the title for you. Secondly, get rid of all the white pixels. What program do you use, and are you sure you know how to use it correctly? (Not trying to sound harsh.) ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 16:14, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

This blank isn't sized correctly. He needs to be longhaired. If you used the correctly sized blank:then you probably wouldn't have the white pixil issues. I believe you should practice a little more, not trying to be rude. Iveh Yo! 16:17, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Also fill in the earpink in this --> ear. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 00:42, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Define the light source, add nose and eye color and make the earpink not so neon. It also looks like there is also some missing lineart around on the whiskers and paws. Fix the blurred lineart too. Also change the file name to Cedarheart.apprentice.png instead of the file you have there. I suggest looking at the apprentice tutorials and the guidelines to help you out. I can help you if you want. Not trying to be mean or anything, but I feel you might need to practise some more too. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}01:02, Sat, Dec, 31, 2011

I know we haven't enacted this rule yet, but I'd like to decline this on the grounds that it just isn't done enough yet to receive critique. I'm sorry, but if another SW agrees with me I'm declining this. You'd be able to keep your reservation, but it'd be better if you redid this on your own time and uploaded it again later. This is 0% done. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:47, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

I agree completely. Declining and archiving. oblivion^Audience? 04:54, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Tinycloud (A) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Tinycloud.apprentice.png]] Comments? ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   19:48, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Okay did you take the ear pink from the warrior? Anyway lighten and blur the shading. Nicely done Squishee I am le Puppeh! 22:41, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The shading is fine, just blur it towards the base of the tail. Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 22:46, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? It's been five days, Stoney. Squishee I am le Puppeh! 20:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. llwildheart™l02:12 Tue Jan 3

Sorreltail (K) RedoneEdit

[[File:Sorreltail.kit.png]]Dear lord help me.....i despise this image....I hate it with a passion....*shudders* Ick, comment? Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 04:59, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

I don't think the brown quite matches, and darken the shading. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 05:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Took the colors from her queen image....should I Daddy? *Waits for the no like in the chat* And i'll get right on it, daddy. *noms Daddy.* Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 05:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the dapples. oblivion^Audience? 05:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink, blur the patches, and add shading. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 09:13, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has shading, i'll do all that in a sec. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 15:07, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 19:56, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Make the white on her face come up to the point as it does on her other chararts. And the black patch on --> this side extends onto her leg in the other chararts. Also, it looks a bit dark, comparatively. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 20:09, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

She has either blurred/miscolored line art on both of her front legs. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:35, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

It suppoesed to be like that, its her dapples....Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 21:05, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, there's actually blurred lineart there. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 10:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Hmmm....I see it. I'll get to it tommorrow, Leaving today. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 15:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the white. It's looks too close to white. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 15:58, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading around the entire image. —Garrus ღ    01:00, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? llwildheart™l01:46 Tue Jan 3

Sadly, yes. Been swamped wtih work...i'll upload it sometime today....Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 23:23, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

ITs been 6 days since the last upload... and I think we're going by that, so technically you have 1 more day to upload it. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Archiving and reverting. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 06:03, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blossomfall (Alt. A) Declined Edit

Oh, my goodness, I am soooo sorry it took so long to get this. Here she is:

[[File:Blossomfallaltapprentice.png]]

Comments? Tigerheart273 22:41, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Someone refresh my mind, when was she described like this? Wasn't that a kit alt.? Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 ^Talk 23:12, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it was. She was kit. sorry, Kiddo*Im 17, your all kiddos to me, I'm a elder!Now, go get me some fresh moss and a mouse!), this will be declined....gosh you must HATE us, everytime you put a image up it seems to always get declined...i feel bad Dx. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 23:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Next time pay attention to the talk page when you're told that this charart can't be done. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 01:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall (A) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Birchfall.apprentice.png]]First charart, yay. Sorry if someone already did him or wanted to do him- if so, I didn't see, I apologize, and disregard this. Crits or comments? toadstar blah blah blah toaster blah 02:11, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

You have to reserve this. Smudge the pelt into the earpink. Very nice. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

How does one reserve something? toadstar blah blah blah toaster blah 02:19, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Here. That should help. And rename this Birchfall.apprentice.png and make it match his warrior image. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 02:33, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I don't know. I rather like this pattern, and the warrior image does not look very realistic to start with and has a bunch of random, miscolored pixels in it. Prehaps the warrior image should be redone to resemble this? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:39, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

I agree. When his warrior image was up for tweaking, I kept trying to say something about the highlights, but it got approved before I could. I'll add him to the list now. oblivion^Audience? 04:50, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Alright, sounds good to me, I never liked his warrior image personally... XD Anyways, define the stripes on the body. Make them look more like stripes than flecks. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 06:10, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bit and smudge his pelt into the earpink. Breezewhisker 16:06, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Rename this Birchfall.apprentice.png ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:18, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

• Sorry, didn't see Paleclaw's message so nevermind me.. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:23, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you darken darken the nosepink a little? This is lovely.  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  21:14, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the earpink as well. Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 00:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Redone but not reuploaded- it says something about a MIME type, and I'm not sure how to fix it, so I might just upload a new image. toadstar blah blah blah toaster blah 00:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Yeah, you have to reupload a new fil. You can't upload a png over a gif file. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 01:15, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded. toadstar blah blah blah toaster blah 22:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

There's a lump of waste where his back rises. Dazzle~♪ 23:06, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Define the stripes a bit. llwildheart™l00:48 Sat Dec 31

Make this transparent :3 Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 ^Talk 22:20, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? You have until tonight to re-upload it before it is declined. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 16:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:55, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Frostfur (A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Frostfur.apprentice.png]] Meh. It's not great. ☾Moonflight☽ 16:50, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the back shading and smudge and blurr the pelt into the ear pink. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 17:16, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten her eyes. They don't really match her other images. ✧Twi✧ Happy New Year~! 01:15 Fri Dec 30

She looks like a pale grey. Lighten up the lighter parts a bit. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 23:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And darken the front paw farthest from us just a tad. Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 20:00, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Er...It's been a while without a reupload...Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:16, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Moonie? Scarletwind^{✧Lisanna✧} 02:35, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 05:02, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A)~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Rosepetal.apprentice.png]]

Weee.....nother solid apprentice.....Comments? Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 22:39, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Pretty~ Can you blur the haunch shading? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:41, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Yup. Reulpaded. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 22:48, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Can you add shading to the chest? ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 23:08, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

No, the sunlight would hit her chest. Define the shading, especially on the back of her front leg closest to us, and her haunch has some blurred lineart Iveh Yo! 23:24, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Same with the base of her tail. Blur all the shading a lot. oblivion^Audience? 01:09, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Where's your light source? It looks like the light is coming from underneath her in the front, and that wouldn't really be natural... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 01:11, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I'll fix that tommorrow, we're in Kansas, and leaveing to go home today. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 15:12, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ✿Dapplecloud✿^{A pang in the heart...} 03:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? llwildheart™l02:16 Wed Jan 4

No, i'm not. Normally, i would, but, my mom and stepdad keep fighting, and i'm having to keep my stepsister alright, and keep the cops from busting down the door. Look, i'm sorry, but, i just can't....Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 02:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can I work on it then? I'll need help, but I can ask for it...

Not to be rude, but if you already know you won't be able to do it by yourself, and you'll need help, you probably shouldn't take over. That's just my opinion though, you can wait for another lead if you want. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 11:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and don't forget to sign with four tides (~~~~) ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 11:33, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Look out 'cause i'd like to take over if that other person can't and I promise I won't go inactive...Moonlight^{Beauty of the sea!} 13:17, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, whoever else wants to do it can. I changed my mind. a cat♣named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 21:16, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Declining Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 05:03, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Owlwhisker (W) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Owlwhisker.warrior.png]] It was on the list for redoing. The stripes needed to be redone. OA was Sandstar12. Comments for improvements? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 19:53, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

it doesnt look brown,..did you take the color from the old pic? .__. -Bloo!^yo

19:58, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ^^ If anything, now, it's the shading. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:12, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Lovely! Maybe try thicken the stripes a bit? Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪},20:21,December 31,2011 (UTC)

OHHHh Now I see it! 8D Define the tail stripes. -Bloo!^yo

20:27, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

Darken the shading. Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 02:21, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changed the style. I thought it looked a little better. =3 Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:37, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes are kinda gingery. Could you desaturate them and either blur them all or smudge them all so they match? Right now only half of them are definitively smudged :P llwildheart™l00:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:21, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading. llwildheart™l01:50 Tue Jan 3

Reuploaded - ^^ Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:12, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Add/define the shading on the back ear and tail. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 03:52, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:41, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I changed the stripe style, but if the other one was better, I can revert it...Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 04:01, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Nice, darken the stripes, add some more on the face and darken shadings a tad. and i think there is a blurred lineart on the tail tip. Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪},18:28,January 5,2012 (UTC)

My computer that I had the files for this image on broke down, so, I can't work on it. Stupid Mac Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:54, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. llwildheart™l05:27 Sun Jan 8

Goldenflower (Alt. A) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Goldenflower.apprentice.alt.png]]I quite like this. I will get this approved if it is the last thing I do. I chose to do this tabby style because it could be any style. I've always wanted to try this style and now I can! Icewish 16:27, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Pretty! Blur the earpink. Moonlight^{Beauty of the sea!} 16:34, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED, I like this <3 Icewish 16:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but, this alt was taken off her page when we gave her stripes, and the tabby part was added to her description, so this will have to be declined. Sorry. D: ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 17:57, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Minty (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Minty.rogue.png]]My first tweak :3 OA was Icestorm123 and the shading needed to be blurred. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:49, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

I had reserved this, but I don't want to take away your glory ;3 I'll be happy to give it to you ;D Blur the shading a bit still. Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 05:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

facepalm* I'm sorry! Anyways, Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:36, December 27, 2011 (UTC) Blur the tail tip. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 14:40, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:16, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks like she has a gray tail tip, and not a highlight.. Can you fix that? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad more. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   20:35, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 22:23, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes lighter and brighter, and redden the earpink. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 01:27, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

The shading looks to me like it's only on the outside of the image and in. Lighten the back, darken the neck, lighten some of the legs and tail, and shade behind the shoulders. Breezewhisker 15:49, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uplaoded. I re-did the tail shading because it was giving me a headache. :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:55, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Blur the back shading and lighten all the shading. oblivion^Audience? 01:40, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the whole image, including the eyes, so it matches the queen. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 09:14, December 29, 2011 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:44, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Look here for a better idea of what the shading placement should look like, and blur all the shading. llwildheart™l22:39 Sun Jan 1

Re-Uploaded. I re-did her. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:39, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and blur the earpink. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 19:45, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a bunch. llwildheart™l01:43 Tue Jan 3

Re-Uplaoded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:06, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Nice job! But can you fix the tail highlight? It still looks as if she was a gray tipped tail. Also, make her nose darker. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:14, January 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:07, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten and bright the eyes a lot? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 11:38, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:31, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Looks great! ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   04:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:18, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink more. Sweetflower23:55 Mon Jan 9

This is well over the time limit. Declining and archiving. You can repost it whenever you get back on. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 00:41, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) - Declined Edit

[[File:Blackstar.rogue.png]]I got permission for Iceheart to redo him instead of making it a tweak. His pelt colored bothered me; I felt it was too close to white. First redo as a warrior (Not on the list yet, but I've had 4 chararts approved) ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:27, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

AGIN! Its rogue , no rougue! Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪},13:51,December 30,2011 (UTC)

Leaf, chill, its just a typo, it can be fixed. Lighten the shading a bit. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 15:10, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Chill Leafstorm, and spell correctly if you're going to correct. Shouldn't the black go up farther on his legs to match his leader? Breezewhisker 16:05, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I just reread that. I didn't mean to sound so rude. Sorry Leaf. ^^; Breezewhisker 16:18, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 16:48, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little.  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  17:28, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I love Blackstar! The back black paws should be a little more black. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:35, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

No, if they're any darker than you won't be able to see the lineart Iveh Yo! 17:37, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

I think she meant raise to black up or something xD Blur the earpink alittle bit -Bloo!^yo

17:38, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Oh yeah sorry. I meant to raise it up so it's level with the front. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:42, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 18:45, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

You forgot the back black paws. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:51, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the black and enlarge the earpink. oblivion^Audience? 20:53, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Lighten the shading more -Bloo!^yo

20:57, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

And blur said shafing. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 22:13, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 13:55, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the black in the ears. llwildheart™l22:41 Sun Jan 1

Blur and lighten the shading more -Bloo!^yo

00:17, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the white into the black on the ears. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 03:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 00:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the paws and blur them RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:46, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink larger and add eye color. a cat♣named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 01:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Silver? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 00:07, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also blur where the black meets the white. ^^ Looks great, Silver! ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   01:07, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:00, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sparrowpelt (SC) (A) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Sparrowpelt_(SC).apprentice.png]]I decided to do a new style because his entire image was bothering me for some reason. I honestly think it should be redone, sorry for whoever made it. If you want me to follow the old style I will but I like this style much better, though. Icewish 12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If this is the style that's going to be kept, can you define the stripes? I can barely see them...Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:17, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Eh...not trying to sound like a derp but how do you define stripes? Icewish 17:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You paint over them. --Leafstrike-- 19:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you don't really have to paint over them, but sometimes I darken them a tad, or re-blur them. Ivyheart ^=P 03:32, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

It looks kinda flat, darken/define/add shading. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}06:49, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Message from Ferret: I'm declining this because this is just..ew

@anon: huh? Iveh Yo! 17:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

The message from Ferret must mean that she wants to withdraw this, because she can't decline her own image unless she is a SW, deputy or leader. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:04, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Declined. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:49, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Birdpaw (A) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png]]Yay for missing school~ It means I get to work on chararts. =P Anyway, by the looks of it, this hasn't been approved yet, or reserved, so, comments? *Shading Fail* Yes I see the waste. I'll fix that, along with the shading. =3Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:54, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 16:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Good job Twi! On the right ear, the black smudges too far up into the ear. Make it so the whole ear is pink. Leopardclaw ^{Box as blue as blue...} 17:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks, Leopard. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:09, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, lighten the shading a lil' or blur it. And i'm not sure the scratch/scar on her eye should be there because in the manga she doesn't have it in the beginning. Icewish 17:12, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should indeed be there. But define it a lot, maybe lighten it. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 17:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:52, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know how it is with black cats, but I can not see shading or highlights at all, so define highlights. a cat♣named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 23:15, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I never use highlights. ^^ Define the shading, then? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. a cat♣named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 23:22, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

I think the scar looks a bit too thick. Possibly make it a bit thinner? Leopardclaw ^{Box as blue as blue...} 12:41, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawn due to my computer being broken and not having the files on the Dell. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:40, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

If I am allowed too, may I take over? --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 20:06, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask Iveh Yo! 04:16, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I made it a bit brighter and I thinned out the scar....--Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 23:47, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink on the corner of the ear pink. Lookin' good Birdpaw! >8D Sweetflower00:24 Wed Jan 11

Re-Uploaded Yea! Birdpaw lookin' smexy now! xD --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 00:44, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I can't really see the shading on the tail. Define it. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:02, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 22:13, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wait....Is the artist allowed to work on two images at a time? Because right now, the artist is working on both Birdpaw and Boulderpaw. --Qway 22:17, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy said I could take over...So...yea..I don't know...--Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 23:08, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Oh I didn't know. If you have two projects already, then no you can't do this unless you give one upIveh Yo! 23:38, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Someone can take this one then...--Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 23:35, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Declined Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:49, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Leopardstar (D) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Leopardstar.deputy.png]] She needed to be redone to match others she was on the list. OA was Sandstar12. Comments? Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 03:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make the unshaded bits brighter, they sorta look shiny on the other images. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 03:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

She looks kinda greenish. Make her a little more orange.  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  03:33, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 03:40, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Make her a bit brighter. Sky-Jedi ^{You will talk to me.} 22:10, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit and define the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 20:33, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 00:51, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Saturate the image a tad and add highlights so it matches the other images. llwildheart™l05:49 Sat Jan 7

Also, lighten the whole image just a tad. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   03:57, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 22:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Add/brighten highlights so this looks shinier (like the other images) llwildheart™l02:02 Tue Jan 10

Make the ear-pink bigger and blur it. Sweetflower00:24 Sat Jan 14

Over the time limit. Declined. Archiving and reverting. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 22:42, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Beechstar (L) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Beechstar.leader.png]]He needed to be a lighter brown. OA was Echomist, with a tweak by Iceheart, and what looks like a redo by Wildheart. Breezewhisker 05:22, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like there's a translucent film over the entire image, including the lineart. Could you fix this? To do that, just take another copy of the same lineart and lay it over the image on a new layer until it lines up. Should fix it. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 15:06, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah...Also, blur the earpink a tad. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   23:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry.. why did he need to be a lighter brown? I don't see the reasoning behind tweaking this. He is described as neither dark nor light brown llwildheart™l00:14 Sun Jan 15

He was on the tweak list. Something about dark brown not actually being part of his description. If you think how it was was fine. Go ahead and decline it. :3 Breezewhisker 03:39, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

....Uh.*raises hand* I was the one that put him on the Tweak list. Heheh...I guess this is my fault, huh? xD; Bloo!^yo

04:46, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

It's okay I don't mind all that much I just don't think there's any reason to tweak this. If he's not described as dark brown or light brown, then he can be any shade, eh? So I'm going to decline this for now, but I'll leave it up jic. llwildheart™l06:59 Sun Jan 15

Archiving and reverting. llwildheart™l02:07 Mon Jan 16

Mistystar(Alt.D) ~ DeclinedEdit

this is my charat so any commentsAcornleaf 18:03, January 16, 2012 (UTC) [[File:Mistyfoot.deputy.alt.png.png]]

Mistystar already has aalternate deputy image, it's on her page... Sweetflower18:08 Mon Jan 16

She's right. Mistystar doesn't need another. Declining. oblivion^Audience? 20:23, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Who did the 1 already up?--Acornleaf 20:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

So do i take this down now?--Acornleaf 21:38, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Leave it there and it will be archived. Sweetflower22:47 Mon Jan 16

Archiving. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:11, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe(alt.A) ~DeclinedEdit

[[File:Graystripe.apprentice.alt.png.png]]Here is Graystripe when he is depicted a solid gray i know its not perfect im not the greatest at charats but any comments?Acornleaf 21:39, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

When was he depicted as a solid grey? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:41, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, no, I really don't think this warrants an alt. Declining unless another senior members disagrees. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:46, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

If you go to graystripes page and look at trivia it say graystripe has been depicted as solid gray in one of the booksAcornleaf 02:11, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Being solid gray and being solid gray with a black stripes is almost no difference. Not every litle mistake warrant an alt. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   02:16, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:11, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) - Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Spottedleaf.mc.alt.png]] First charart as a warrior! Anyways, I know the color isn't right, but I want your opinion on it first. Should it be gray, because the book is on gray scale, or a creamy gray color, because without the gray scale, it would be a color like that. The discussion is on the talk page. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}03:33, Mon, Jan, 9, 2012

She's tabby. So brown is fine. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 04:02, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Where is this alt from? It's not in the trivia. Add it please. And I can't really comment without knowing what this is supposed to be an alt for, so I'll just comment after it's added.... ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 07:12, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

• Facepalm*, forgot about that. I added it and cited it. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}01:47, Tue, Jan, 10, 2012

Stripes look flat Moonlight^{Beauty of the sea!} 14:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Loudsplash, don't just say what's wrong, tell her how to fix it. Could you make her less purple-y? ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 15:05, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, maybe smudge them a bit and blur them? And you can barely see shading on the stripes if any. Moonlight^{Beauty of the sea!} 15:11, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

I think it might be your computer. I can see the shading on them just fine on mine. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 20:00, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - least favourite charart here. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:39, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Lighten the shading and blur it tons. —Garrus ღ    06:33, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}06:21, Thu, Jan, 12, 2012

Blur/Smudge the stripes more. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:58, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

I honestly think the stripes can be drawn nicer, but if you refuse, that's ok. Qway 20:03, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

This is how they look in the comic. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 18:30, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I do see your point Quailflight. The stripes do look odd, but that is what is shown in the book. For a reference, look in the trivia of Spottedleaf's page. I won't change the stripes unless some SM's agree. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}01:47, Tue, Jan, 17, 2012

There's some waste around the image, and I thought we weren't supposed to copy the comic? We're redoing a lot of the triangle tabbies anyway, so why not give her a more realistic tabby pattern? Iveh Yo! 04:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, we're not supposed to copy the comic exactly. Right now this look more like a dark tortie honestly. also, maybe lighten the brown a bit. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:20, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I am withdrawing this. My version is terrible. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:06, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Archiving. llwildheart™l04:10 Wed Jan 18

Yellowfang(alt.Med.A)~ DeclinedEdit

Well Here it is its not amazing i know but it was hardAcornleaf 01:12, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

[[File:Yellowfang.alt.Apprentice.png.png]]

Rename it Yellowfang.mca.alt.png. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 01:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang already has a medicine cat apprentice charart. I'm sorry, but this will have to be declined. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And if you're going for an alt, this doesn't qualify for one unless you can cite her being described as pale gray when she was a MCA. Declining. From here on, try to play it safe and ask on the talk page before you make an alt. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 01:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. llwildheart™l04:13 Wed Jan 18

Brackenfur (A) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Brackenfur.apprentice.png]] Ewwwww, comments? SnowyXPerry ^{= Serry!} 21:26, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

His stripes look more brown then golden.. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:43, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Thats how they are on his warrior and kit. Maple♥pool^{Mischief brewing} 23:35, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

No, they're definitely more brown. oblivion^Audience? 00:58, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Yep, they are. If I'm correct, is the earpink ment to be smudged into the ear, not out of the earpink? ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:06, Sat, Jan, 7, 2012

Darken his base pelt, it looks too pale compared to his stripes. Dazzle~♪ 12:59, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I just redid the whole entire thing, it was killing me. >.> --SnowyXPerry ^{= Serry!} 13:38, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Really good! All I would suggest is darkening the shading a tad more. ❄swagstorm❄ 16:55, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't we decide not to do triangle tabbies? --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?} 20:14, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Dull the earpink, this looks great! ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   20:46, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I talked to Scarletwind, and she said that his images were fine. Brighten him to match his other pixels. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 01:11, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --SnowyXPerry ^{= Serry!} 00:07, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the belly shading. Sweetflower02:55 Wed Jan 11

Reuploaded --SnowyXPerry ^{= Serry!} 12:53, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Make the base pelt darker and more gold-ish. Dazzle~♪ 13:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make it match the warrior. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing because my computer crashed and I lost all my charart files. Sorry guys. :( --SnowyXPerry ^{= Serry!} 22:33, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. llwildheart™l04:18 Wed Jan 18

Hawkfrost (A) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Hawkfrost.apprentice.png]] Comments? ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Cute! He should have more stripes. oblivion^Audience? 12:07, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Wait. Icestorm has dibs on this image, did you get permission to do this image? ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   16:00, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Even if you were allowed to, hmm. The eye needs more contrast in shades, and needs to be a tiny tad less neon Define the shading just a bit. ✤Featherwillow✤ ^{Hmmm... HO}_HO^HO!!! ✤✤ 17:32, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Icestorm isn't active right now, so I don't know if she would be able to lay claim to any of her images. Try and thin out the middle of the stripes on the tail by a pixel or two. Also, the eyes look like they're blue with a tint of green. Did you color pick right from the warrior/deputy? —Garrus ღ    19:16, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

I didn't even know Icestorm had dibs on the image... I actually just chose the color, since his eyes are an ice blue shade. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 20:48, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 21:02, December 16, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon and add depth to them. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 11:10, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:00, December 17, 2011 (UTC)

Move the stripes on his haunch closes to his head up further and make the top one longer. -Scarletwind^{✧Lisanna✧} 02:34, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:28, December 19, 2011 (UTC)

Make the eyes less neon. --Cinder ^{Real or Not Real?}

23:51, December 20, 2011 (UTC)

Add depth to the eyes. ✤Featherwillow✤ ^{Hmmm... HO}_HO^HO!!! ✤✤ 00:53, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Correct me if I am wrong,but could you defie the shading a tad bit. Otherwise, excellent job! a cat♥named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 02:54, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:05, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

The tail looks really dark. Also could you define the shading on the whitish part of the tummy? a cat♥named Cheshire ^{Most Everyone's Mad Here...} 15:21, December 21, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 11:44, December 22, 2011 (UTC)

Brighten the ear-pink a bit and lighten the shading a bit. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 00:54 Fri Dec 23 00:54, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

His image's stripes are being redone to look like Tigerstar's. Might as well do that here instead of the tweak page. ;) Shelly _{For a limited time only} 03:43, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Be right back going to puke because of this >_> ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 19:20, December 23, 2011 (UTC)

Awsome! Fix the stripes to look more like his warrior image. Moonstorm88 22:23, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

His warrior image needs to be redone Moon. Can you fix the angle of the stripes? I don't think it's natural for them to be diagonal like that. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 23:37, December 24, 2011 (UTC)

I made them look like Tigerstar's stripes, so that's why they look that way. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 00:08, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

The stripes are great, but they do need to be vertical. If you used layers, you can meddle around with it some and not have to redo them Iveh Yo! 04:06, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

I posted his new warrior, so make the stripes match that, and don't forget the line along his back. oblivion^Audience? 14:17, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Took the colors from his new warrior image. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 15:00, December 25, 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, CBA? -❄ſceheart ♥ ^{Blah blah} 20:57, December 26, 2011 (UTC)

Yes, yes, I'm interrupting. Smudge the chest more to match his warrior. oblivion^Audience? 17:07, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 17:57, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

No, no, not like that. Use a smaller brush with the blur smudge tool and match his warrior. oblivion^Audience? 18:05, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Cha ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 18:19, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Did you look at the changed version? The changes aren't showing here. (Sorry that if looks like I removed your recent post on here, the wiki is being stupid.) ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 19:28, December 27, 2011 (UTC)

Changes still aren't showing, and it's been a few hours. Try re-uploading again. oblivion^Audience? 03:36, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Reuploaded Should be working now I hope. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 11:03, December 28, 2011 (UTC)

Looks great ^^ Comments before approval? Splook^{Sweet serendipity.} 17:41, December 30, 2011 (UTC)

Sorry to interrupt: it's almost ready, but not quite. Smudge the white on the belly into the pelt some more so it looks like definitive fur-smudgies, darken the shading so it matches the other images, and add some depth to the eyes at the top and then I'll CBA this :3 llwildheart™l01:14 Sat Dec 31

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 14:26, December 31, 2011 (UTC)

His eyes should be a brighter blue. oblivion^Audience? 04:38, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 18:59, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be darkened. llwildheart™l22:10 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded I fail so badly. When I went to darken the shading I realized I forgot to recheck the layer where I had the darkened shading. xD. Changes aren't showing. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 22:32, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Haha it's cool I always forget to uncheck my "colour swatches" layer :P Define the smudgies on the belly some more. llwildheart™l22:46 Sun Jan 1

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 23:30, January 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the white on the belly. Leopardclaw ^{Box as blue as blue...} 14:22, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 15:46, January 2, 2012 (UTC)

The white on the belly is still too messy: I suggest redrawing that bit and re-smudging it. The shading needs to be darkened. llwildheart™l01:50 Wed Jan 4

Define and blur the shading. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 21:52, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 00:01, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the back stripe, smudge the belly a tad more, and make this --> ear a tad pinker. This is looking good, Silver! Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:40, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 11:59, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the smudges, it makes him look prickly --Iveh Yo! 17:15, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 22:10, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eyes. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   23:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 13:06, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the earpink just a tiny bit? This looks awesome Silver!  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  00:51, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 12:46, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Time is up. Declined. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:26, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over if no one else has taken this already Iveh Yo! 04:39, January 17, 2012 (UTC) But Bloo needs to put a date

Archiving. llwildheart™l04:22 Wed Jan 18

Spottedleaf (Alt. MC) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Spottedleaf.mc.alt.png]]I had some trouble with the shading. Comments? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

She looks ginger.And I really think she should have more stripes. Iveh Yo! 05:00, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

This is the alt from the comic, right? If so, she should be brown, not ginger, since that's the base tabby color. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 05:02, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Derp... Scarlet's braindead. @Ivy those are all the stripes that I can depict from this side of her. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 14:53, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

I think that instead of making her like the manga tabby, you should make her a natural tabby. I think the stripes are too blended in and a bit sloppy. But the shading is great. Qway 23:51, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

...It's supposed to be like the manga. Ivyheart ^=P 01:36, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

A lot better than my version... darken the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:31, Thu, Jan, 19, 2012

I thought we weren't supposed to copy the manga? Iveh Yo! 02:43, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

From the side that this blank doesn't show, she looked a lot more like a tortie than a tabby. If others disagree, that's fine, but she looks like a tortie to me. Declining. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:17, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Coal.rogue.png]]Yay! My first tweaked charart! Just to tell you, I use highlights and right now they're blurred to the max. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 23:50, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

OA and why did it have to be redone? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:51, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

lighten the whole thing, I can't see the lineart Bloo!^yo

23:53, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the redo list and OA is Blackclaw09. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 23:58, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 00:00, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:35, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

His ears are facing <---that way though. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 00:39, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but they should still be centered. That's the placement. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   00:47, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

But, the earpink placement for Shadepelt's elder would have to be centered, then. I think it's fine. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

If is ear-pink facing ←← this way, i think you should add it on the second ear too. Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪},18:25,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 14:28, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt more, and maybe enlarge the highlights Bloo!^yo

06:36, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 21:45, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 12:51, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur or tone the highlights down more. Sweetflower22:24 Sat Jan 14

Reuploaded I don't know if the changes are showing.... ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 01:33, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the "highlights" and blur them. Also, the one on the tail doesn't make much sense with the current light source, so remove it. llwildheart™l01:54 Mon Jan 16

Also lighten the shading a tad. --Leafstrike-- 18:23, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 21:51, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Center the earpink--Acornleaf 01:36, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't need to be centered. We went through this above. (^^) Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe add a 'highlight' at the bottom of the tail? Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 21:37, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Wildy told me to remove it, so no, sorry. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 23:45, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, my fault ^^ I should have asked you to put it on the other side of the tail, to match the light source. You can add one if you'd like. llwildheart™l06:06 Thu Jan 19

Tone down the highlights a bit if you use them, and blur the shading and highlights. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:49, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's been over two weeks. Sorry. Declining and archiving. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:50, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Milkfur (WC) (D) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Milkfur (WC).deputy.png]] Needed to be done as shorthaired. OA was Moonflight, comments? ✿Dapplecloud✿^{A pang in the heart...} 08:27, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Add some haunch shading, and blur alot. Sky- ^{Lather. Rinse. Obey.} 09:58, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that light parts alot Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪},18:20,January 5,2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and lighten it. Sweetflower20:07 Thu Jan 5

It looks like there is blurred lineart on the haunch. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

You know you didn't actually have to redo it? You can just layer the shorthaired lineart over the original version. See the tutorial if you don't know how. oblivion^Audience? 22:32, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a tiny bit, and there's some missing lineart on the front paw and a few other places. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ^{☆StarClan be with you★} 15:20, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad more. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   03:44, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Dapple? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 22:23, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded ✿Dapplecloud✿^{A pang in the heart...} 23:07, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

(If this isn't a highlight, just ignore what I say ;)) Tone down the highlight on the tip of the tail. It looks really bright. O.o Leafy - Winter is here. ~ <3 ^Talk 23:12, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I made it a bit darker. ✿Dapplecloud✿^{A pang in the heart...} 23:33, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make him a slightly creamier colour? Sky- ^{Lather. Rinse. Obey.} 23:46, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

The color is from the old image. ✿Dapplecloud✿^{A pang in the heart...} 01:10, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It does look a bit too white, and it's his only image anyway. It wouldn't hurt to make it a bit more creamy color. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}01:26, Wed, Jan, 11, 2012

Blur the earpink more. Sweetflower23:13 Wed Jan 11

The base pelt color seems okay...The long haired version was the same. =P ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   01:06, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:09, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink also. --Leafstrike-- 19:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? llwildheart™l01:56 Mon Jan 16

If she isn't (I'm assuming 7 days with these right?) then I'll take over. Iveh Yo! 17:51, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Dapplecloud, I'm taking over. It's been 7 days. Iveh Yo! 18:30, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I made him slightly more cream colored, hope ya don't mind Iveh Yo! 18:53, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and on the closest hind foot, it looks like the shading stops abruptly. And maybe add a bit more haunch shadin. ^^ Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 20:48, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

The shading makes it look kinda gray, any possible chance of you using colored shading? Usually if you put the base color on multiply for the shading layer, it ensures it doesn't look gray. You don't have to though. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:29, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

It's over two weeks. Declining and archiving. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:51, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowtail (E) - Declined Edit

[[File:Swallowtail_(RC).elder.png]]Original artist was Bramble, needed stripes and shading tweaked. Comments? Elorisa 02:03, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It looks kinda more ginger then the warrior one...or should the warrior be tweaked to be less green and to match this one? Bloo!^yo

02:09, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'll tweak the warrior image to match if this comes to a conflict; people get comments all the time on their images to be less green anyway xD. I think the warrior image should be tweaked, personally. Elorisa 02:10, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and make the ear-pink paler. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 17:07, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Risa? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 01:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:02, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (A) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Icecloud.apprentice.png]]Oh yes, I got the pretty Icecloud. I actually asked some users for feedback so that I could fix it before I put it for approval. I'm really proud of this :) Icewish 12:04, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink a bit more, and decrease the shading on top of the haunch. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:49, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink some more. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 22:53, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Message from Ferret: I can't upload today so i'll upload tomorrow :)

REUPLOADED Icewish 14:12, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the back near the base of the tail as it looks awkward with a highlight right there, center the shading on the haunch, and add depth to the eye. Wonderful, Icewish! Atelda 20:27, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this is declined due to lack of work. Last upload was 8 days ago. ∗ Mistystar ∗ ^{Trust the Fire Within...} 00:04, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:11, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

My sister wrote that >.< RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Declined Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:02, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Grasspelt (A)- DeclinedEdit

[[File:Grasspelt.apprentice.png]]I'm pretty sure no one has this, do they? o.e Sky ^{Watchu want?} 01:31, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and uh, I just realised he probably won't get one. o.e Decline if so, I'm an idiot. Sky ^{Watchu want?} 01:57, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Well I can't find any reason why he would, so declined for now unless someone points out where he was seen or mentioned as one. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 04:55, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Declined Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:02, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Bella (KP) - Declined Edit

[[File:Bella.kittypet.png]] This is actually tweaked. Original artist was Sandy, and the patches needed to be blurred, and the shading was blotchy, and needed to be defined. Comments? --Leafstrike-- 23:39, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Bootiful! Blur the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:43, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading and maybe the stripes. Maybe. Sky ^{Watchu want?} 23:47, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

How exactly was this tweaked? 0.o But anyways, get rid of the wastes and make the white speck in the eye pure white. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 23:54, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I have to agree with Paleh. Looks redone to me... Anyways, fix the ear pink; it looks too obtused. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 00:10, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moon, there is no way that this couldn't have been redone. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tweaked. --Leafstrike-- 00:22, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moon, this is not tweaked. And you didn't get permission. Honestly, there's no reason for this to be redone, or even tweaked as much as you have, if you tweaked it. As the rules say that any redo without permission will be declined, please tell us how on earth this could be tweaked, otherwise, this will be declined. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 00:31, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Gah! I was gonna post this up, then remembered I forgot to reserve it. Dx Anywhoo, this doent look tweaked to me, tell us how you think made this. Bloo!^yo

00:33, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's not tweaked. Shading and style is much, much different before. >.> ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   00:38, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Since everybody seems to agree this can't be tweaked, declining unless you can explain. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 00:42, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm... I see, you're becoming aggressive nowadays. Look, I painted over the old image, I never started from scratch. --Leafstrike-- 00:47, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh..no offense, but that's still redoing it. Just cause yout painted over the whole image doesnt count, i think >_> Bloo!^yo

00:49, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Bloo's right. This is redone. And I'm not being aggressive, I'm simply stating this is redone without permission, which is against the rules. That's all. I'm sorry if I offended you, but it's true, this is redone. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 00:54, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 01:26, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Icecloud (W) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Icecloud.warrior.png]] The shagding was poor and the ear-pink was to dark for a white cat. The OA was either Cloudy or Icecloud. I got permission to redo this from Ivy in chat a couple minutes ago by the way. Comments for improvement? Rainheart^{Haunts you} 19:41, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and thicken out the shading on the haunch. Define the ear-pink and blur it. Sweetflower23:10 Wed Jan 11

I'm not a fan of the earpink. Make it darker and redder. Breezewhisker 01:17, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainheart^{Haunts you} 19:22, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I forgot some waste between the legs. Fixed that. Rainheart^{Haunts you} 19:33, January 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 00:55, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainheart^{Haunts you} 01:25, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Make the tail 'highlight' curve with the tail more, and if she has shading on the back of her head and ears area, darken it to match the rest of the shading. Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 05:37, January 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Rainheartlegs^{Haunts you} 18:48, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

To me the shading looks kind of dark and unblurred. Do that as well as blur the earpink a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:49, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. Sweetflower22:33 Sat Jan 14

Re-uploaded. Fail. Rainheartlegs^{Haunts you} 00:03, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 04:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little, too. x3 —Leggo ^QuailXStoat 05:20, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Still a fail with blurring the shading. Rainheartlegs^{Haunts you} 22:18, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lolol blur and lighten it more c: oblivion^Audience? 22:23, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink a bit more.  MΘυητɣ   Sucks to your Ass-mar  05:16, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Than blur it more. Sweetflower18:10 Mon Jan 16

Make her an off-white. The color she is is white, and it shouldn't be. ^Sil_ver^{The Glee Project} 19:30, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

It's not, and i'm withdrawing this. It is starting to get on my nerve, the shading. Raineh ^{Has returned :D} 19:35, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. --Leafstrike-- 21:44, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 21:55, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Based on the shading, I think the unshaded part of the tail should be on the other side of the tail. ^^ Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 21:59, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

The light was coming slightly from the top-right, so I won't change it, unless someone else says otherwise. --Leafstrike-- 18:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading or the entire image, it looks pale gray. --Elolegs

19:40, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Then perhaps extend the light part to cover more of the tail? Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 21:30, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Leafstrike-- 22:39, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪ ^{2012! The end of the world?} 23:47, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

And the shading. I agree that the unshaded part of the tail should be on the other side of the tail. llwildheart™l06:01 Thu Jan 19

Darken the earpink a tad, blur the shading, and maybe lighten it a bit? PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:24, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I'm not the biggest fan of this image... --Leafstrike-- 18:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:53, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's as light as it can get. --Leafstrike-- 18:14, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail shading a little. Sky- ^{Watchu want?} 11:37, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...The shading doesn't need to be lightened, it's a perfect match with the pelt color. Maybe blur the earpink? It looks smudged. This is lovely Moon! =3 ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   19:39, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Th epaws don't look right. Did you mess with the lineart? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it's definitely different. I'm not sure what you did Moon, but it doesn't look right and needs to be fixed. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 05:24, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded No one has ever had a problem with the paws since I started doing that, and I do that because I think the normal paws look too block-ish. It doesn't matter anyways. --Leafstrike-- 23:29, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think anyone ever noticed. But you can't just change the lineart cause you don't like it. If you've done that to any other approved images, do you think you can fix it? And blur the earpink a bit. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 20:29, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Hmm, so you want to start a fight? Well then, sweetie, I'm sorry, but I'm not going to change it. --Leafstrike-- 00:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enough. You can't do whatever you want. Fix it, or it'll be declined. Placlaw is not trying to start a fight, only trying to say it nicely. --^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   00:52, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I doubt it. Just because she has "higher authority", you're supporting her. And she is trying to start a fight, I can tell perfectly. Paleclaw, just because you have "higher authority", doesn't mean you can be bossy as much as you like. It's not a big freaking deal. That is all I'm trying to say, yet you start treating me like crap. --Leafstrike-- 01:36, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Moonleaf, please fix the paws. There is no reason for a wonderful image like this to be declined. Sweetflower01:40 Tue Jan 24

The only differentiation that I see is the toe lineart being just a couple pixels thinner. Can you thicken that please and darken the shading just a touch. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 01:43, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Please, no one's treating you like crap. Everyone: Enough with the fighting. No more drama. Except all critiques, and don't protest. All PCA is for, is to provide WWiki character articles with images. Thank you. And that is a message to everyone not just Moonleaf. Everybody needs to listen, not just Moon. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   01:45, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, we cannot be having a fight right now. Declined. Moon, you were just asked to fix the danged line art. It's a simple thing to do, and I assume that since you're in the middle of a SW nomination that you know how to do it. The was absolutely no need to fight over it. Someone else may take over. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 02:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving for more space, and it has a pretty long comment thread. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:51, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Brackenfur.warrior.png]] Hey guys, not sure if changes are showing, but either way, wee.. Here it is. xD I can darken it to match the apprentice image. But I used the ref link on the tweak page, so yeah. xD Comments? ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:57, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Tis belongs on the tweak page, mon ami 8D Bloo!^yo

18:00, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Moved it. xD ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 18:01, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

There ya go xD Blut the scar. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:04, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Just a personal preference, but could you extend one of the cheek stripes to extend behind his head? It seems a bit off, just stopping so sharply. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 18:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:13, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think you forgot to add the OA and why it was redone. :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 17:33, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Does this count as a triangle tabby? I think it looks realistic, but it looks kinda triangle-y, and we're redoing it for that reason, so.... PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, it looks like you're wanting to do a wavy tabby, so here you go. Iveh Yo! 16:52, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

This style is at least better than the old one. And the cat you're citing is actually a mackeral tabby, Ivy. Anyway, the scar stands out a bit too much. Blur it? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 01:04, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Fixed the heading. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}01:27, Wed, Jan, 18, 2012

Add a tabby M on his forehead? (I wanted to do this...) --Leafstrike-- 22:05, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Well, actually, this is kinda a wavy tabby and isn't it just like a wavy triangle tabby? So can you pretty please change the design. Though this is, as they are saying, better then the last one. Raineh ^{Has returned :D} 19:49, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Frosty? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:17, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:51, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Starlingwing (A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Starlingwing.apprentice.png]] Meep. ;_; It kinda sucks. xD Comments? ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 23:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and make the stripes less frequent. And he's a warrior now, not Starlingpaw xD oblivion^Audience? 23:37, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful! Lighten the shading on the head a tad. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   01:15, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the back, too. Dazzle~♪ 08:00, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add a white pixel to teh eyes. o3o Purdy. Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 08:06, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. ☄ℱrostheartϡ Hexakosioihexekontahexaphobia 17:12, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Add some shading under his chin. Breezewhisker 20:32, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is very good the shading is good and the stripes are to but he is a warriorAcornleaf 02:13, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

He is supposed to have an apprentice image and a warrior image. ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   02:18, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just cause the blanks smaller, or is there more stripes on here? Anyways, lighten the shading a bit, saturate the while image a tad, and take the earpink from the warrior. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 16:21, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the eyes dark green like the warrior. And I think it is cause it's smaller. Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 00:15, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Frosty? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 02:27, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:51, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lavaleaf (MCA) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Cool_cat.png|thumb|left]]Well, I started out making a cat for Hollyleaf when she was a medicine cat apprentice, then I found this brush and got carried away, now this is Lavaleaf a firey tom thst is medicine cat appentice!

This is a page for adding actual character images so this has to be declined even though there was not a new heading. Although I am not in the project I noticed. Chez

Declined. Fan character. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 23:37, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Onestar (Alt.L) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Onestar.leader.alt2.png]]I hate this but whatever, he was shown as a black and white tom in Warriors return. Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 17:02, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

It looks cool, but I think it was established that the black and white tom was Tallstar, put in on accitdent because Mr. Jolly forgot that he'd died when the Clans reached the lakes. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 17:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Really? Okay if you need to decline this that's fine by me Wildfire^{Mistystar's Omen!} 17:55, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. If another senior member disagrees, fine. But even if it's not confirmed that the black and white cat was Tallstar, it's not confirmed that it was Onestar either. For all we know, it could have been a more realistic depiction of Blackstar. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 19:00, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (Alt W) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Brackenfur.warrior.alt.png]]=Nightshine with a redo by Iceheart. Pretty much a triangle tabby, had permission to do it. Gah, this is not one of my favorites. Comments? Ivyheart ^=P 23:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Ffffff- Just realized this is over the limit. XD Decline this. Ivyheart ^=P 23:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It's pretty though :P Can't wait for this to be put up again xDD Sweetflower00:59 Sat Jan 28

Declined. Feel free to put this back up once the limit goes down. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 01:05, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Wing (PH) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Wing.ph.png]]Okay... I have been simply dying to redo this. The gray was placed awkwardly so it looked like really weird shading. If anyone has any real vices with me redoing this, I can take it down and revert it. OA was Shadowedheart, with a tweak by Bramble, and then a redo by Moonflight and Cloudy. Comments? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 05:43, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the grey a little. oblivion^Audience? 16:13, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Explain to me what was wrong with this image. I do have a problem with you re-doing it. It needed to match her queen image, which it did. I have a major issue with this, because it was one of the quickest I'd ever completed, and I thought it was perfect. —Garrus ღ    20:21, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

If you have problems with images that get proposed and accepted for tweak, take it up with the project leadership and spearhead a revamp of the process by which tweaks are proposed and given permission. Don't attack those redoing images. Instead find out why it was approved and discuss it with the person who approved the tweak.  Kitsufox  ^Den/_CoSC 22:07, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno... please, please don't get mad at me, but the placement of the grey on all of her images is a bit awkward. I can't tell is the grey on the bottom is shading or not just by looking. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:56, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Now, Scarlet, could you please lighten the shading a bit? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 21:59, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Why does the pattern have to be changed though? I have no problem with this being redone just fr say, better shading, or defining the patches, but personally I liked the old pattern. Can't you keep that and just define the patches or something? I don't wanna cause drama, I just liked the old patter. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 02:28, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleh. Cloudy would have given you the .xcf to touch it up. Iveh Yo! 02:35, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

If everyone would like to keep the old version, I'm perfectly fine with that. I just say that Gorsetail's pattern had been redone and I figured that cats with the same pattern should be redone. And if Cloudy would like to tweak it, I'm fine with that to (she asked earlier). Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:07, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

But the pattern's not the same thing. Just look at the queen image. It only looks that way because the PH blanks are a little smaller and harder to work with. If you don't mind, I'll take over on it, as I do in fact have the .xcf file, and I'm working on it now. It's looking better, actually. —Garrus ღ    04:14, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Fine by me. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 04:15, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Tweaked the patches, lowered the opacity on the mud, and tweaked the eye, 'cause I thought the color was too plain. —Garrus ღ    16:43, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you remove the brown paws though? I never really understood why she had them. She's not mentioned with them as far as I know, and they have mud splotches, not mud covering their legs. PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 20:45, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. And make the mud more splotchy so she looks like a gray and white cat with mud, not a gray and brown cat :P llwildheart™l02:09 Mon Jan 16

Personally, I think the streaks are fine. I can look at this image and clearly tell it's a gray and white cat. —Garrus ღ    20:28, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

At least burn the mud, then. It's too light. llwildheart™l03:39 Wed Jan 18

Not all mud is the same shade of brown, it looks fine. --Elolegs 19:42, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you, Elo. Also, each artist has their own style, and honestly, I don't like copying other user's styles. —Garrus ღ    20:33, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

No, I know mud can be different colours and all, but the mud is only barely distinguishable from the pelt, and only 'cause I know it's supposed to be mud. llwildheart™l05:56 Thu Jan 19

Honestly, I agree with Wildy. If you didn't know it was mud, you'd think she was just a brown and white cat. also, can you lighten the white a bit? PaleLegs ^{♪Be prepared...♪} 15:20, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Fine. Re-uploaded. Does that look better? >.> Seems nothing I do is good enough for you guys. It's freaking mud. It's supposed to blend in and make the white fur darker. Ever seen a cat covered in mud? xD —Garrus ღ    18:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the mud a tad more. I liked the mud better before xD. --Elolegs

19:38, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I know, so did I. But, if I kept it like that, certain people would continue to ask me to change it, thus being counterproductive. Now, I'll tweak her queen version once I'm back home, since this connection is very hit-or-miss. —Garrus ღ    19:49, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

People will think what they think. Make the earpink a bit paler. Sky- ^{Fightin 'gainst the Legolution} 21:29, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Cloudy? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 03:47, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yeahm seems Cloudy's internet may be out again. I haven't seen her on the wiki in a week. Someone else take over? Shelly _{For a limited time only} 13:14, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 05:31, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Sagepaw (Alt. Ki) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Sagepaw.kit.alt.png]] Okay, this was on the list for redoing because the stripes needed to be redone...The OA was Goldenpaw with a change of the nose by Ivy. I'm not such a big fan of it...Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 17:50, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

I love this <3 Lighten the nose. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:36, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - PSE was finally nice to me. :P It made this image. :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:44, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading a little. You so good... Sky ^{Watchu want?} 23:58, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Lies. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:01, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft. When do I lie except all the time? Darken the earpink a tad. :P Sky ^{Watchu want?} 00:19, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I knew you lied. :P Naw, anyway, comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:23, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it Sagefur.kit.alt. oblivion^Audience? 20:08, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Whut. Don't mind me. Leave it be ^^ oblivion^Audience? 20:09, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Blank pixels. :o Changes may or may not be showing. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:12, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure all the shading is the same darkness. llwildheart™l02:03 Thu Jan 26

Er...What? *doesn't understand that* :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

The shading is all a very dark gray... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:16, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well the shading should be solid on the back near the hind paw. It doesn't look solid. llwildheart™l02:24 Fri Jan 27

Reuploaded Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:04, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Re-reuploaded - There was some waste. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 15:16, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

There's a white pixel on the head and the shading doesn't look consistent on the haunch. It should be pretty solid. llwildheart™l06:26 Sat Jan 28

Reuploaded - I redid the shading-it's the same as my Tawnypelt alt. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 06:34, January 28, 2012 (UTC)\

Withdrawn. Read the talk page to know why. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:52, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving Iveh Yo! 04:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (Q) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Snowbird.queen.png]] Shading needed to be redone. OA was Bramble with a redo by Golden. Changes may or may not be showing. Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:47, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Pretty. ^^ Sky ^{Watchu want?} 06:05, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 06:12, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

There is some missing lineart on the cat's left ear above the earpink on our right side. Also blur the belly shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ ^{I do enjoy fun...8D}02:47, Sun, Jan, 29, 2012

Right..Withdrawn. Read the talk page to know why. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:50, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving Iveh Yo! 04:17, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

One-eye (Q) - Withdrawn Edit

[[File:One-eye.queen.png]] OA was Nightfall101 with tweakes by Mintstarr, Bramble and Shimmerpool. Tweaked the eye to make it blind. Sweetflower23:24 Sat Jan 28

Can you make the earpink the same colour as tbe elder's? Sky ^{Watchu want?} 23:44, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sweetflower23:58 Sat Jan 28

Define your light source and blur the shading. llwildheart™l02:19 Sun Jan 29

Er, I didn't do the shading so I'm not sure where the light source is. If you want me to re-do the shading I will, but other than that I wouldn't be sure where the light source is. Sweetflower15:34 Sun Jan 29

I'm a derp XD yes, please. Redo the shading; it's terrible. llwildheart™l04:52 Mon Jan 30

Re-uploaded. xD 'Tis ok :3 Sweetflower17:44 Mon Jan 30

Something is wrong with it Leafy ^{♫Absolute maniac♪}17:52,January 30,2012 (UTC)

Huh? Sweetflower18:06 Mon Jan 30

Something is wrong with the shading and stuff. And there is a ring of the shading stuff on the haunch and... it's just bad. *shivers* I don't like bad shading. Can you please fix it? Raineh ^{Has returned :D} 19:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

o3o I have no idea what your talking about because I can't see it. Withdrawing. Sweetflower19:44 Mon Jan 30

I'm sorry but the way you worded your comment was uncalled for. Next time please be a little nicer, no matter how much you may dislike an image. Sweet, I feel you may have just accidentally bucket-filled the transparent pixils and it created that ring. Iveh Yo! 20:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I still can't see anythin Dx. But I'm still withdrawing, I just don't like this image either... Sweetflower20:14 Mon Jan 30

Understandable :( Archiving Iveh Yo! 22:40, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Boulder.loner.png]] Here he is...Ugh. Comments? ^Awesomeness STONEY _{Fantasticness}   03:38, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Psh. This is absolutely gorgeous. <3 Can you define the tail shading. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he have a torn ear? Or did he get that later on? Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 16:43, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

He was described with it in Rising Storm, so I believe that was after he was a loner.... So I don't think he would, but if he was a loner after that, correct me if I'm wrong. Anyways, thin out the stripes a ton to match the other images. Paleggy Ship it 17:52, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

You already have Scorchfur for approval, so this will have to be declined. Once Scorchfur's approved, you can re-post him. oblivion^Audience? 02:48, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving Iveh Yo! 18:09, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Splash (lo) - Declined Edit

[[File:splash (Lo).loner.png]] Lol, this sucks. But since I love his kittypet image so much, I thought Id do this one 8D Bloo!^yo

01:17, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading on the white? And brighten the earpink a tad ^^ Iveh Yo! 01:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

You still have Hawkfrost's apprentice image up, so this'll have to be declined. Sorry. Atelda 02:11, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

FFFF- Gah, I forgot I had him up. Sorry bout that Bloo!^yo

02:18, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 02:34, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Ruby (Lo) - Declined Edit

http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/warriors/images/2/2a/Ruby.loner-11122234565432.png

There she is, comments? :)

Tigerheart♥ 23:38, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading. The earpink is messy, and there's a lot of blurred lineart...The gray on the nose isn't supposed to be there, too. Mooneh^{Goodbye, everyone...}

23:59, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

This is not 50% complete by my measure.I'm suggesting this for auto-decline. Work on it and re-submit it when it's at least 50% done. Should another senior member agree with me, this will be archived. Shelly _{For a limited time only} 00:08, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, Shelly. Declining and archiving. oblivion^Audience? 00:25, February 5, 2012 (UTC)