Icicle (Ki) - Declined Edit

[[File:Icicle.kit.png]] White belly/chest needed to be tweaked so it didn't look like big, bright highlight. I'm not really a fan of this image. OA was Icethroat with a tweak by Mistystar. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:00, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

I thought this already got tweaked. I like it DJ ^^ define the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:07, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Well, it wasn't, I don't think. The last upload (exept for mine) was on Jan 26 2012. This might be declined. Depends on what the other SM's think. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:22, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Tone the white down please, it looks like a highlight. Sweetflower00:24 Sat Feb 4

You could always use a light gray too! :) Sweetflower00:30 Sat Feb 4

Yeah, it was already tweaked for that. -Bloo not logged in

So is this declined? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:57, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

I dunno, let the others tell that they think Bloo!yo 17:25, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, this is an unnecessary tweak. Declining and reverting the image. oblivionAudience? 03:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Shadow (Lo) - Declined Edit

[[File:Shadow.loner-1.png]]Okay here she is >>>>

Comments? Tigerheart stay golden... 05:33, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I believe you've got Ruby already up, and, from what I understand, you can have one up. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:34, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Twilight is right. Tigerheart, you can only have one charart up for approval at a time. If you really want to work on this one, you'll have to withdraw Ruby. Declined. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Oakbreeze already reserved this, so only this one will be declined.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  15:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)


Tigerheart stay golden... 16:07, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Declining.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Rowanclaw (Alt.A) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Rowanclaw.alt.apprentice.png]]♥poolMischief brewing 18:08, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe smudge the earpink a little more? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 18:49, January 7, 2012 (UTC)

I love Rowans :D Blur the shading more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:39, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know if it's supposed to be like that but the forehead stripe looks like an m. Ivyheart =P 02:17, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Yes mommy, thats how its supposed to look. Thats how it looked in the Manga. And i'll upload in a sec. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:48, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥poolMischief brewing 03:51, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

The shading placement seems odd. The highlight on the haunch is facing downward, so the shoulder highlight should too. Because, right now, it seems as if you have to light sources, one coming from upward and one coming from downward. If the haunch highlight stays as it is, then the shoulder highlight should be moved a little more downward, and possibly eliminate the highlights along the back. If you don't want to change too much, then I suggest moving the haunch highlight upward more. But, I might be wrong, the haunch highlight seems to be facing downward, if true, change that the way I said to.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:27, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be reuploaded tomorrow, or it'll be declined for a lack of work Iveh Yo! 03:18, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 02:44, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I believe I have a free project since my time is up. I'll take over Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 22:00, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I don't like it! Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 23:04, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and define the shading on the haunch and tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:02, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the nose grey. --Leafstrike-- 02:03, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black go in kind of an M with two spikes, not one. As that's what he was shown with in the manga. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:59, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 00:17, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the side of the pelt into the earpink. Sweetflower18:46 Sat Jan 21

And add depth to the eyes. Sky Watchu want? 22:24, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading on the face. Splook it's a long way down. 23:42, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this, Sandstorm? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:11, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

I am I'm just really really busy. I'm on the vacation list so.... I'm gonna try to upload this tonight. Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 00:22, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I re-did it because the M thing was hard. :/ Sandlegs What's up with Leggy? 03:17, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base coat a bit. He was shown pretty pale in the manga. Paleggy Ship it 22:33, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading a little more? Ivyheart =P 00:38, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Can you also darken the nose color a little more? He looks awkward with a lighter-colored nose. o3o Rainlegs 02:04, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

The M-thing could be blurred a wee bit more User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 13:08, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more; it looks a bit...flat. --User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 17:29, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt color. In the manga, he's a pretty light gray. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:21, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Sky Dovahkiin 23:28, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? Iveh Yo! 03:08, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry but well look at my userpage. I hope that somebody will do great on this! *mutters to self* Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 17:05, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Don't forget to change the heading Sand! ;) PCA will miss you. D= Anyways, anyone with a free project may take over.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:42, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt. A) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png]] How did no one claim her yet? Impressive. Anyways, comments? It's the silver alt, but do you guys think I should lighten her a bit more? Jayce (  ) 06:30, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't thin kyou need to lighten her, just the shading a tad, which should also be blurred a tiny bit. You also should blur the pelt into the earpink. Otherwise, looks great. Shelly For a limited time only 06:34, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd actually forgotten to finish up the ear pink. That's what I get for doing five things at once... Anyways, re-uploaded. Thanks. Jayce (  ) 06:39, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Icewish 16:27, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 20:27, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the light part of her shoulder a little more? And I'll CBA this. Nice job Iveh Yo! 18:39, January 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 20:47, January 17, 2012 (UTC)

As promised, CBA? ^^ Iveh Yo! 03:17, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Cloudy. Darken the shading. llwildheartl03:44 Wed Jan 18

And lighten of some of the shading on the haunch. Breezewhisker 03:56, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

You guys are picky. >.> Re-uploaded. Jayce (  ) 18:25, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

Possibly give her green eyes, she was mistakenly described with that. --Leafstrike-- 02:07, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the haunch "highlight" a bit bigger, very pretty Cloudy! :) ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:13, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this Cloudy? It's been 5 days. -- ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:22, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Cloudy, I'm so sorry, but I have to decline this due to lack of work :c Anyone with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 06:37, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll do it. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 13:12, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 16:47, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add depth to the eyes. llwildheartl02:00 Sun Jan 29

The eyes look very neon, darken them a tad. --Elolegs 16:06, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light part of the tail. Sky Dovahjerk 07:48, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the "highlights". --Cinder Real or Not Real?19:30, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:14, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving Iveh Yo! 21:00, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (Lo)~ Auto-DeclinedEdit

[[File:Coal.png]] Not that good I know. Comments?Spo[[User talk:.Spottedclaw 23:23, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

  1. Add/Define shading
  2. Redo the eye, please
  3. The earpink is neon, and a bit sloppy. Please redo it.
  4. Rename is Coal.loner.png
  5. Reserve it

And, that's all I've got. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:27, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

This is under 50% complete. I'm suggsting it for auto-decline, sorry. Just work on it in your free time and re-upload it when it looks like the other images on this site. Should another senior member agree with me, it shall be archived. Shelly For a limited time only 23:55, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Archived? What does that mean? I know it didn't look good.Spo[[User talk:.Spottedclaw 00:08, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Agreeing. Archiving. llwildheartl00:23 Tue Feb 7

Tawnyfur (A) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Tawnyfur.apprentice.png]] Here she is, Tawnyfur! I know it's a fail. I haven't done a real charart since 2010. So therefore, you shall reteach me (yes, I looked at the tutorials)! So.....Bring On The Criticism! Oh yeah...I may re-do the shading if I have to......again, sorry, it fails. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 07:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Figured out how to fix shading and other stuff. --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 08:43, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I love fixing stuff in the course of a few hours. Oh, and for those who don't recognize the name..... look in the first arc, somewhere between books 3-6 --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 10:04, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. This time I Gaussian blurred it. But I left waste *dies* I'll try to remove it... hopefully. --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 10:59, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the title for you =3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:56, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:03, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

There is waste all around the image. Mistypebble 21:11, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading and according to my wand tool, I removed all the waste. Does the ear look weird? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 22:18, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

The ear looks good, but the pelt needs to be smudged into the earpink. Also, there looks like there i slighter fur next to the ear. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:21, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. There you go. --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 23:12, January 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Silverhmm 00:11, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. a catnamed Cheshire Most Everyone's Mad Here... 23:18, January 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make sure the whole belly is shaded. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:43, Fri, Jan, 6, 2012

Reuploaded. Turns out I was blurring the earpink instead of smudging. Oops. Oh, and I did this without smudging the earpink that much, because I've got somewhere to be, so please wait, remind me, and I'll upload later today/tommorrow User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 14:59, January 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Comments? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 01:36, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded wrong version. Once again, comments on my now beautiful Tawnyfur? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:12, January 8, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about two days. Comments? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 06:00, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and earpink. Also, can we tweak her images to look more golden brown? This is yellow, not golden brown. If we do, then we might as well start with the apprentice while it's up, so change that if anyone agrees. ♔ⓅⓐⓁⓔⒸⓛⒶⓦ♕ ☆StarClan be with you★ 07:15, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I blurred, but I didn't change the color. Please don't make me start over. Isn't the only thing that matters is that the image matches the warrior's image?User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 07:28, January 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading more Iveh Yo! 17:09, January 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I did it a couple times over actually....I wasn't happy with the haunches so I followed my instincts and used highlights. Hope it doesn't look ugly. --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 20:35, January 11, 2012 (UTC)

It's been about 2 days since a comment, so...comments (sorry I'm impatient)? --User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 18:37, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. Leopardclaw Box as blue as blue... 21:42, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:52, January 14, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading and blur it as it just seems inconsistent :3 Atelda insert vague subtext here 20:24, January 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I killed it *sob*. Anyway, I can't seem to get the shading consistent. But I blurred everything and found some waste. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 23:14, January 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more, and is it just me, or does the shading seem.... gray-er than it does on the warrior? PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 15:21, January 19, 2012 (UTC)

I won't say grayer. But shading on the warrior seems lighter less saturated, so lighten the shading de-saturate it. o3o sorry I was wrong before.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading more consistent and define it. It looks like it's all smudged and blurred together. Sweetflower18:37 Sat Jan 21

Reuploaded. Pretty much redid it. I made the shading less gray and desaturated it. There was also some lineart misfunction, but I fixed it following the shorthaired female apprentice lineart. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 02:45, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. Sweetflower21:50 Wed Jan 25

Reuploaded, I blurred til my hand was sore. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 09:36, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

Well, It needs blurring more, but I want only say: expand the higlinks/light parts and lighten the shadings a bit LeafyAbsolute maniac 17:08,January 27,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I blurred, but if I expand the highlights the whole cats looks messed up. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 17:57, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

It looks a touch greenish too me. What color are you using for shading? I've always found that using a rich, dark brown on tawny and brown cats works better. Redden the ear-pink a bit. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:18, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    10:01, January 28, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thank you world, for the creation of the color replacement tool. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 04:52, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

The shading still needs to be blurreded. Raineh Has returned :D 19:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shadin, and lighten it especially on the hind paw's heel. Sweetflower15:42 Tue Jan 31

Darken the paws and the chest and blur the earpink. Paleggy Ship it 18:07, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Redid the whole image. Changes don't seem to be showing. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:25, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the back leg shading. :3 Sweetflower22:10 Fri Feb 3

Smudge the earpink a tad more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:44, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

D: I think it's been one month since this was put for approval... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:42, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I think its fine. And Twi, the max number is 50, so I think that this is fine to stay up. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:10, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I think you misunderstood Quail, you have a month after your image is put up for approval to finish it, and if it's not approved by then, it's declined. And it's been a month now I believe, so I'm really sorry, but this is declined. Paleggy Ship it 06:17, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Okay.User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:22, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

No. Since your image was declined due to the one month limit, you must wait. Plus, it would give someone else a chance to work on the image if they wish. It clearly says this at the top of the page. Jayce (  ) 21:25, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Skyheart (A) - Declined Edit

[[File:Skyheart.apprentice.png]]I'm proud of this. If the tail is jumbled, I'm a fish. Tried to follow all the warrior image's color. Comments? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 04:28, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think this was already approved... User:Twilightheart200/Sig 04:40, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It was. Declined.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving and reverting file. Jayce (  ) 04:47, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Daisy_full_image.jpg]] Daisy's loner image. My first charart. Comments?

I de-thumbed it for you, remove all the waste and rename it File:Daisy.loner.png, or just upload it ove rthe old file. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:59, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Also, make it transparent. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:01, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And move the ear pink over. Silverhmm 21:48, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

And the image is kinda pixelated. Raineh Has returned :D 21:50, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be me, but I can hardly see the shading. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:47, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

@Silvah, the ear-pink can be on either side. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:56, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Change it to a png image. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D02:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

You'll have to redo the image, I think. Because of the file format, it's made the lineart look slightly blurred and the overall image is somewhat pixely. Jayce (  ) 18:58, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

I know Moonshine is an apprentice, but I thought the 80% done rule applied to everybody? Don't take this the wrong way Moonshine, but I believe you should practice a little and then put this back up. Iveh Yo! 18:03, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it still applies, but as long as an image is 50% complete, which I believe this is, then it has a week to improve. Then it can be declined. I'll work with Moon on this and hopefully it can stay up. Paleggy Ship it 00:41, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this Daisy.loner.png ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:57, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:08, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Declined to to lack of work. It's been a week, and there hasn't been any activity regarding this. Any user without a project may take over. Jayce (  ) 03:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I couldn't figure out how to upload the redone image over this. That is why there was lack of work.--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Regardless, you could have posted that you didn't know how to do it, or say that you have it uploaded or something. It's not that hard. If you want to work on it again, I see no problem with it...however, it's not up to me alone. Paleh, Scarlet? What do you two think? Jayce (  ) 20:48, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

You never replied to me either Moon, when I told you we needed to work on this. If you weren't online, just say so, and if you were, you need to post and let us know. It wouldn't have been that hard to just post on here and say you're having trouble, or saying that you are still working on it. Next time remember to do that. And since Moon never gave any indication that she was working on it still till after it was declined, I think it's only fair that someone else can take over if they want. That's how we've always done it, if you wait till over the 1 week mark, it's declined and you can't work on it anymore, so unless we wanna change that rule for everyone, someone else can take over this. Paleggy Ship it 16:18, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Well said, Paleh. That pretty much sums it up, if you ask me. I'm going to archive this in a bit unless anyone else wants to speak their opinion. Jayce (  ) 16:27, February 9, 2012 (UTC)


[[File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png]] Its not great but i tried i know the earpinks bad im tryin to fix it so that doesnt need comments about ear pink ill fix it so any other comments?Acornleaf 22:12, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Birdpaw.apprentice.png, lighten the shading, colorpick the earpink and scar off the kittypet image, and perhaps blur the shading. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:13, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I use pixlr what is colorpick?Acornleaf 22:19, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Colorpicking is when you open the other image found on their page on the editor and use the eyedropper tool to get the color from the image. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:21, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

oh thanksAcornleaf 22:25, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the ear pink was hard to change because it wasnt saved under layered before thats why its badAcornleaf 22:41, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure that chararts should be saved as a .jpg...They are normally saved as a .png. Also, the file name is still...wrong. The A in apprentice shouldn't be capitalized. Blur and lighten the shading. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 22:47, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Chararts shouldn't be saved as jpg, otherwise they pixelate. You might have to redo and save as a png. Sky- Fightin 'gainst the Legolution 23:05, January 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded i know yet again the earpink is terrible so please dont comment on that and i lightened and blurred the shadingAcornleaf 00:36, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar...Looking nice. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:39, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

thanks and i dont know why the box is around it its a pngAcornleaf 00:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Something worng my comp. wont let me blur or smudge anything anymore what do i do?Acornleaf 00:44, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded now its working i blurred itAcornleaf 00:48, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, You need to make the background transparent not white. --Cinder Real or Not Real?01:12, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

this is png i dont know why its like thatAcornleaf 01:19, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

No it's probably because you didn't make it transparent. I know your work with pixlr, so just take the wand tool and go over the background. ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?01:23, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and the scar and define the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the black. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 03:41, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

ok not really sure what you mean cinder what exactley do i do with the wand tool do i delete the background? what layer do i delete it on?Acornleaf 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

My comp. isnt working well so i cant really blur alot so i might take a while to reuploadAcornleaf 17:58, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

and i know i seem stupid but im bad at blurring ear pink so how exactley do i do it and make it goodAcornleaf 18:03, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i know the background im workin with it to make it transparentAcornleaf 18:21, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded thanks to teldy for telling me how to make it clear on the background thanks teldy!Acornleaf 18:55, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Remember to upload over the old file when reuploading. Don't make a whole new file. Rename this Birdpaw.apprentice.png and either brighten the highlights of lighten the base coat. PaleLegs ♪Be prepared...♪ 19:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less red. Silverhmm 21:02, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the earpink now and i added highlights to make the shading "pop"Acornleaf 21:32, January 21, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the highlights Sweetflower00:11 Sun Jan 22

Re-uploaded the highlights are as bright as the'll get--Acornleaf 00:59, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:08, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scar and can you darken the nose pink just a tad? And I think there is blurred ear lineart, but I can't tell.. >.< Mistypebble 14:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She looks like you just filled her in with black! Add highlights or something. --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:42, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

She does have highlights and there as light as i can get them and her nose is black so i cant darken it--Acornleaf 17:34, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

Add another layer of highlights, perhaps? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 17:35, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded i added another ;ayer of highlites.--Acornleaf 18:07, January 22, 2012 (UTC)

I think there's a speck of watse by the tip of the tail.Sky Watchu want? 02:59, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

where do you see the waste sky not bieng sarcastic i just need to know where it is so i can get rid of it--Acornleaf 22:26, January 23, 2012 (UTC)

The ear on <-- side doesn't look completely filled in. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 01:30, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded it was overfilled.--Acornleaf 23:50, January 24, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her up a tiny bit.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:37, January 25, 2012 (UTC)

ok--Acornleaf 22:55, January 26, 2012 (UTC)

re-uploaded--Acornleaf 00:28, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her up some more? I can barely make out the lineart. Rainlegs 03:01, January 27, 2012 (UTC)

i might be able to re-upload it today but probabley tommorow--Acornleaf 14:53, January 29, 2012 (UTC)

Make the scar less hot-pink please. Sweetflower00:01 Mon Jan 30

There is a waste near the back legs LeafyAbsolute maniac 18:03, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded the scar is the same color as the one on her kittypet image and the fur is lightened--Acornleaf 00:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten her a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:42, Wed, Feb, 1, 2012

re-uploaded its as light as it will get and still look like a black cat--Acornleaf 00:01, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, you can still lighten her up a lot. Please do so~ ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 01:26, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

You might want to try color picking off Hollyleaf since the shading on the Birdpaw's kittypet image is hard to see too. It might need to be tweaked.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:47, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Since the heading has said "Withdrawn" for a good while (and the user seems to have put up another project in the process), I'm declining this. Any user without another project may take over. Jayce (  ) 06:06, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (W) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Thistleclaw.warrior.png]]Tail needed to be longer. OAs are Bramble, Windwatcher, Mousetalon, Mintstar, Cloudskye, Shellheart, Icestorm123, and Paleclaw. Comments? Silverhmm 00:37, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Theres a spike on the far right side of the tail, second from the bottom, thats sort of square shaped. Could you make it more spiky? Great job ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:44, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 00:49, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't believe we're tweaking things like long tails unless it's a prominent feature, like with Tallstar. If we are, then there's a lot of images we have to tweak. But I'm pretty sure it was decided we're only gonna tweak ones where the tail is where it's either very often mentioned, or the character is named after it or something. Sorry. And also, I didn't actually tweak, I just reverted. XD Paleggy Ship it 02:32, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I just went with what was said on the tweak page... Why don't we let Thistleclaw's be the last one? I know I'm not a SM, but it wouldn't hurt to let this one be the last. Silverhmm 12:03, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

But then we'd be being inconsistent with who gets one and who doesn't. It'd mean we'd have to give one to every cat who was described with a long tail. Paleggy Ship it 13:19, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Two things: one, I wasn't an artist. I just moved the file. Second, I think the tail shouldn't be tweaked. Characters who do have them tweaked are ones for which they're known for, like Tallstar or Aspentail. Thistleclaw is different. If we tweak some and not others, we'd be inconsistent, as Paleh said. Jayce (  ) 20:13, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

So...what's going to be done here? Should this just be reverted and declined? Silverhmm 19:55, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I think. However, let's see what the other users have to say about it. Jayce (  ) 20:37, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well for no this is just taking up space. If there's nothing other than the tail that needed to be tweaked, I'm declining this for now. If you want to discuss the whole, tweaking for longer tails thing, make a new topic on the discussion page. Paleggy Ship it 11:50, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Thistleclaw (A) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Thistleclaw.apprentice.png]] And here's his apprentice :3 His tail needed to be longer, and I saw a bit of blurred lineart so I decided to fix that too. OAs were Sandstar12, Goldenpaw, ~Rainwhisper~, and Mountainheart :3 Silverhmm 00:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think we're going to be tweaking the tails, as discussed above. However, if there's some other issue with the image, like blurred lineart, feel free to fix/comment on it. Jayce (  ) 20:15, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It was on the needing tweaks list, though.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:27, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:28, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't he have one lighter leg/paw? *is derp* Kill me if I'm wrong. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:05, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think he does. Silverhmm 19:57, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

I think you may be thinking of his manga image. Sky To kill an Empire... 23:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Since we're not tweaking the tails, I'm declining this image. Jayce (  ) 17:42, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Lo) - Declined Edit

[[File:Sasha.loner.png]] Comments? Elolegs

20:41, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. --Leafstrike-- 20:47, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the stripes on the legs just a tad? Mistypebble 21:15, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:26, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste. llwildheartl03:00 Thu Feb 2

Reuploaded~ Can someone help me with the waste? --Elork 13:52, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sure..I'll get right to it.. ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:00, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Removed waste. (I hope xD) The earpink seems a bit too smudged. --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:13, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The shading on her belly looks like a rectangle c: Maybe round it a bit more? oblivionAudience? 02:32, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Better? --Elork 03:04, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:20, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Define the tail shading. Sky Dovahjerk 07:15, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste/coloring in the middle of her ears and by the tip of her tail. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

You never put a date on the table as to when you reserved this, Elo. I think it should be declined because of that. Jayce (  ) 20:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Well I think we should give her this as a warning, since I don't think many people remember that rule. But are you still working on this Elo? Cause it's been a week. Paleggy Ship it 15:46, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work and reservation, any one with a free project may take over Iveh Yo! 04:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Boulder (Lo) ~ Auto-DeclinedEdit

[[File:Boulder.loner.png]] This is Boulder. And comments? Brackentail 02:20, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I fixed the heading. Fill in the blank pixels. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Very pretty! Smudge the pelt into the earpink and make the eyes not purple. (Whatever his eye-colour is supposed to be.) ;3 Sweetflower02:25 Sat Feb 11

"shadow" the charart a little. Is this your first? It's pretty good! Woo patch of green 02:27, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart for the ear got deleted. Woo patch of green 02:27, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...I honestly think that this may be 50-70% done. 70% actually. Blur the shading, earpink, and make the stripes match the elder's image. You have a week to get this 80% done, or this will be declined. Changed the heading to For Approval.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:32, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

The tail lineart looks blurred Iveh Yo! 04:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart on the belly, on the extended front paw, and along the back. Please fix it. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 17:28, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the shading once you blur it. Silverhmm 21:40, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, Stoneclaw, upon further inspection, I do not believe this is 50-70% done as it could use much work and it doesn't match his elder image. You can disagree but I think Brackentail should practice on this a little more and then repost it. Iveh Yo! 04:43, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Ivy on this one. Also, it hasn't been touched since the file was placed on the page. There's tons of room for improvement (but, we could ALL use practice and improvement), and with practice, Brackentail could do better. Jayce (  ) 04:46, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. So, autodeclined? Paleggy Ship it 08:04, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Autodeclined indeed. oblivionAudience? 03:36, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Thornclaw (Alt.W) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Thornclaw.warrior.alt.png]] Was my last post of this approved, declined or just deleted? I don't see it in any of the archives... So am I okay to re-post this? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:18, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

I think you are :) , well darken the shadings a tad. Nice. LeafyAbsolute maniac 12:07,February 5,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Okay, cool. Thanks. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:17, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Darken the shading some more. Lovely!  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:39, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Thanks. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:19, Tue, Feb, 7, 2012

Define the tail shading and blur the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah 10:07, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

This is lovely DJ <3 Define the shading on his face.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:41, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Forgot to say Reuploaded - *facepalm* thanks M-heart. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:45, Wed, Feb, 8, 2012

Blur the earpink. Sweetflower21:38 Wed Feb 8

Reuploaded -  :3 I only just realised I've done 2 of Thornclaw's images. XI ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:26, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Smooth the shading out and make sure the darkness is constant; it looks a bit blotchy ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:09, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing. Lost all the layers to the image. Wildfire can have this as she pointed the alt out. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:04, Sun, Feb, 12, 2012

Archiving. If Wild wants it, she can put it back up for approval. Jayce (  ) 21:00, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Brook (Ki) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Brook.kit.png]]Ugh. I have to be more active. >.< Well, this is my first image that I did using a new program... Comments? Mistypebble 20:07, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but when was she mentioned as a kit? And I think this is on the wrong page, I don't think she has an approved kit image Iveh Yo! 20:28, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh. So sorry >.< I think I was spacing, you can just delete this... ._. *is fail* Mistypebble 22:42, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Iveh Yo! 22:46, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce (  ) 21:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Woody (Lo) ~ withdrawnEdit

[[File:Woody.loner.png]] This is the correct title? It is from what I saw in the guidelines... First charart...;3; I know it's not that good...comments?? ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 03:37, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Very good. 90% complete, thus changing this to "For Approval", as I have evaluated, and Willowfern will now become an apprentice.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:41, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

His description says he's shaggy. Can you add some lineart on the fur like Yellowfang's image?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:47, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Of course. Also, thank you, Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 03:56, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading some. Good first image! Ivyheart =P 05:39, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks, Ivyheart. :) Reuploaded ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 02:07, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye, again, this is amazing @Willowfern! Possibly add shaggy parts to the legs and/or legs.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:10, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Once again, thanks Stoneclaw. :) Reuploaded ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 02:20, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

To me, the highlights (or light sorce if you don't use highlights) almost look tinted green to me. When using brown, make sure it doesn't have too much yellow in it ^^ Iveh Yo! 19:11, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, this is really your first charart? Very nice! Well, I know Ivy already mentoined it, but i think he is whole a tad greenish, or its just my,dear PC? LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:39,Febreary 2,2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink go down a bit more and blur it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:29, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

The earpink placement is fine, just blur it. Sweetflower18:28 Sun Feb 5

I completely forgot about this. :( I'll reupload as soon as I can. tonight or tomorrow ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 03:15, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

My first official one. Thanks, Leafstorm. :) Reuploadedωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 03:28, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Make it a bit less brown red. This is really good for your first image. ^^ Paleggy Ship it 03:40, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce (  ) 20:15, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry....i can't work on it anymore - the files are gone because my dad cleaned out the computer files and didn't know i needed the one for Woody. :( ωιℓℓσωƒєяη тнє ѕυммєя ѕυη 22:39, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Paleggy Ship it 18:25, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Brackenfur (W) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Brackenfur.warrior.png]] Spot, finally! Any way, needed to match kit. OA = Sparrowsong. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 22:42, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but... this looks almost nothing like his kit. The pattern on the kit is tight, and this is extremely loose. Shelly For a limited time only 22:54, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Just go crazy and add a bunch of squiggly stripes between the ones you've already placed. It's hard to make it not match this way Iveh Yo! 23:02, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Sucking with matching images, who noticed? Any way, comments? Raineh Has returned :D 23:25, January 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blurthe shading. 8F Sky Dovahkiin 01:22, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller and blur it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:13, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Losing it, I nearly recked it while in chat and i started to hyperventilate. Crud, forgot the scar, i'll add that next time round. Raineh Has returned :D 02:45, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Light the shading on his paws and blur it. Mistypebble 02:58, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs more stripes. Really, go nuts. Shelly For a limited time only 04:24, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, earpink, and the stripes a tad.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:12, January 31, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 20:49, February 1, 2012 (UTC)

Add the scar.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:08, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add a stripe or two in the thin "traingle" on the back of his neck/shoulder, add one to the top of his haunch, and define the stripes on the tail. Don't be ginger on your stripes now ;D Iveh Yo! 19:22, February 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 20:12, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

The scar should be shorter; it doesn't go all the way to his underarm. It's just on his flank. oblivionAudience? 20:50, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 21:24, February 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D00:41, Sat, Feb, 4, 2012

Possibly thicken the stripes a bit? Sweetflower01:14 Sat Feb 4

Make the earpink a bit bigger too. Sweetflower01:18 Sat Feb 4

Make the scar a bit thicker.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:55, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Okay, i think the ear-pink is fine and for the stripes, they are the same thickness as the other ones. Other then that, comments? Raineh Has returned :D 18:27, February 4, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please make the earpink a bit bigger and define it? Also move it into the ear more. Sweetflower19:13 Sun Feb 5

Blur the shading too. Sweetflower23:34 Sun Feb 5

The stripes may be the same thickness as his kit charart, but this isn't a kit. As he grew, his stripes naturally grew as well to be proportional to his body size. On that note, the apprentice charart should be tweaked as well. Shelly For a limited time only 04:19, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The shading looks... odd, i'm trying to fix that, don't worry. Raineh Has returned :D 21:16, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

That's because it's dark. Lighten it, pleeease. :P User:Twilightheart200/Sig 21:20, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Stupid shading Why must it be so irritating? Comments? Raineh Has returned :D 21:51, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the chest shading a little more. And where is the light source? I can't find one. User:Shadewing/Sig 22:46, February 6, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 00:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten or blur the shading, and define the earpink. Sky Fus Roh Dah 09:58, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes and change the color of the scar to something a bit more different from the stripes, I almost told you to get rid of the extra ginger stripe on the flank. XD Paleggy Ship it 15:39, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Raineh Has returned :D 19:32, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes some more. --Leafstrike-- 22:50, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

... Okay, I'm sorry, but this just doesn't feel like Brackenfur. Can we do an overhaul on the image and make it a redo?--Shelly For a limited time only 23:55, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Rain, are you still working on this? Jayce (  ) 20:09, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Well, not right now, sorry. I just don't have the time. I am going to Withdraw this for now and work on it later. RainheartlegsHaunts you 19:22, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Shelly, do you mean like, redo all of his images to look more like him, or just redo this to look like his kit? --Elork 13:50, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving for now. And if Shelly thinks all the images should be redone, she can nominate it. Paleggy Ship it 18:30, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Owlstar (W) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Owlstar.warrior.png]]The eye needed to be bigger. OA was cloudy I think, I'm not sure *too lazy to go digging* Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:57, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the pupil a little bigger? Iveh Yo! 06:10, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  06:20, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Make the inner ear match the leader please. Shelly For a limited time only 06:25, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

No offence Shelly, but I don't think the inner ear on the leader looks very natural. I'd rather they stayed like this personally. Paleggy Ship it 12:07, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

It is natural, actually. Dark cats tend to have dark skin. Shelly For a limited time only 14:19, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Not necessarily all of the time.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:28, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but that's how I made the leader image, and this is being tweaked to resemble that is it not? Shelly For a limited time only 14:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Not necessarily. More to match his description. And the picture you linked it looked more like it just had a lot of black fur in the ear so it was hard to see the skin. I still think it'll look more natural like this. Paleggy Ship it 15:55, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

My black and grey cats have sorta greyish pinky skin, so maybe make it more greyer? Sky To Kill An Empire 22:38, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  01:22, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm withdrawing this to work on something else. I'm really sorry.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  14:33, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hollyleaf(Ki) - Declined Edit

[[File:Hollyleaf.kit.png.png|thumb]]Comments please.Kittylove1 17:55, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. She already has a kit image. Shelly For a limited time only 17:57, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt. MC) ~ Auto-DeclinedEdit


Comments? PerrylegsMy Den 23:15, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this is no where near being 50%-80% done. This will have to be auto-declined. Please practice some more before you post this again. Rainlegs 23:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Archiving. Shelly For a limited time only 23:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt.MC) ~Auto-DelcinedEdit


Comments? PerrylegsMy Den 22:35, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Dethumbed it. Sorry, but I think you need to redo it. Cinderheart is a tabby, and you need to fill it all in and fix the shading. ~Pouncey~ 23:02, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

This is nowhere near 50%-80% done. Auto declining. Please practice before putting this up for approval again. Jayce (  ) 23:06, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

I didn't know I put it up twice. Sorry. PerrylegsMy Den 23:20, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Shelly For a limited time only 23:30, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Runningnose (MC)- DeclinedEdit

[[]] I think I died while making him....I swear I did....Anyway, had blurred lineart shading was blotchy, needing a crusty/runny nose, and patchy fur, OC was Dawnfeather, With a Tweak from Ivyheart. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 03:45, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add a missing patch of fur on his shoulder? And blur the earpink a little.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:31, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'd rather not, I tried to copy the patchy fur from his elder...Maple♥legsMischief brewing 00:44, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

But, the linearts are facing opposite directions, Maple. Give it a shot and see what it looks like. Jayce (  ) 05:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded-The friggin' blurred lineart....ugh...Maple♥legsMischief brewing 23:24, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

There's still a lot of blurred lineart - fix that. llwildheartl01:49 Thu Feb 16

Uhg, those patches look unrealistic, sorry. Can we just redo these and retweak the elder image? Shelly For a limited time only 14:21, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yes please. And I personally think this should be redone. The shading's still really blotchy, and honestly it'll be almost impossible to get completely fixed without redoing. Paleggy Ship it 15:01, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to agree with Shelly and Paleh on this one. And since three leads agree, and it was reserved/posted before the new Tweak Process, you don't have to re-nominate it. 8D Jayce (  ) 19:20, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Alright....Give me five mins. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 17:36, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Maple? It's been considerably longer than five minutes. Shelly For a limited time only 00:51, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Maple, it's been a week since your last upload. Jayce (  ) 06:06, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (Alt. MCA) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Mudfur.mca.alt.png]]He was described with a dark pelt in CP, as contrasted to his usual light brown, so I made him dark brown. i can take out the pale belly if needed. Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 01:13, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

<3 Blur where the pelt meets the earpink a little more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:22, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Thanks, it's been a while since I done a charart for PCA xD Sky Remembering the 22nd of February 01:27, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Err...I'm really sorry to say this, but I thought we agreed he wouldn't get one? Because he was described being in the shadows and a dark cat shadows do not make. I'll wait for another to agree but I think it should be declined based on that pretense :( Iveh Yo! 01:43, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

I thought so too. Declining and if anyone has an argument, it should be posted immediately. oblivionAudience? 01:44, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ick, never mind Sky Promises, promises 14:14, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sasha (Ki) ~ DeclinedEdit


*Dies of friggin' cuteness* Okay, See in the T&S manga, Into The Woods, Page 55 she is seen as a kit. And Paleclaw, Ivystripe, and Skye all agree that she should get a kit image. Comments? Maple♥legsMischief brewing 05:15, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes, define the ear-pink, blur the muzzle and give some depth in the shading ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:19, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest shading <3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:21, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 05:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh chest highlight/shading. You were right, she /is/ cute~ Jayce (  ) 18:12, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think the brown muzzle should go down so far. <3 Sky To Kill An Empire 18:26, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 02:20, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Still, Blur the shading some more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    07:42, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the highlights some if you use the, make the dark muzzle more round, blur all the darker brown except the stripes, and make the eyes a much brighter blue to match the other images. Paleggy Ship it 16:49, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a bit more. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy Valentine's Day! Chocolate, please? 23:59, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 23:31, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights more, and blur the shading, expecially on the cats waists, both sides, and the cats right front leg. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:23, Thu, Feb, 16, 2012

Can you make the earpink more triangular? And is the nose brown or pink? Mistypebble 22:07, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Her nose-pink is pinkish-brown, got the colors from her kittypet image. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 17:33, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the ear-pink and blur the shading and highlights on the chest ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:55, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Jayce (  ) 23:10, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:12, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smallear (W) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Smallear.warrior.png]]Ah, tweaking. =D Anyway, it was on the list for shading, so, I just layered some shading overtop of the image, not major or anything. Okay, I think the OA was Snowfeather1 with some help along the way from Night shine. Comments? User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:52, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights and blur them Iveh Yo! 03:24, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading on the back and chest. Elork 01:48, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Redid the shading. x.x User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:32, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge, blur, and lighten the earpink. --Leafstrike-- 20:43, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Silverhmm 23:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

And thicken it. Paleggy Ship it 15:59, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Twi, ya still working on this? Jayce (  ) 19:23, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Read my comments on Brightflower. Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 05:00, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Could I take over? :P Appledash thegodofwar 18:40, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. Jayce (  ) 18:42, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded: I redid the shading and the ear pink and replaced the highlights Appledash thegodofwar 19:04, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Also, next time, change the heading. XD Jayce (  ) 20:22, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit bigger. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:34, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Make the shading cover more of the image, also maybe thin out the back of the neck more so it doesn't look like he's fat. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:36, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Icey, are you still working on this? Jayce (  ) 22:38, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Declined since Icey has left the wiki. Jayce (  ) 01:57, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Leafstar (Alt. L) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Leafstar.leader.alt2.png]] I hope I'm doing this's what I saw other people do. This is what she looks like on the cover of SkyClan's Destiny (I own all the Super Editions) User:~Fenheart~/Sig 13:08, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading/add some if you didn't. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:30, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less neon. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 13:53, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Add more stripes and sharpen the others, make nose pink less neon and match it with new ear pink after you edit it. I still think we arent doing cover alts and that white should be cream on the cover. LeafyAbsolute maniac,14:04,February 25,2012 (UTC)

I thought we agreed she wouldn't get an alt for that? She already has a brown and white alt, even though it is different places. Iveh Yo! 15:29, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

We don't know if that is Leafstar on the cover of SkyClan's Destiny. Declined unless someone else disagrees.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:01, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

You forgot to change the heading. :P But yes, this was already discussed before so it should be declined. Paleggy Ship it 16:04, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to reasons above ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Twig (KP) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Twig.kittypet.png]] Amazingly he has no chararts, he needs a loner and a kit after this one, Skywatcher needs a kit too. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:10, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

The description is false. He was never given a description, aside from the fact that he's a tom. A user added it in to be smart and switched the refs around. Sorry, Wild. Jayce (  ) 20:13, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Okay thanks Cloudskye WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:15, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderheart (Alt. MC) ~ Declined Edit

[[]] Comments?Perrylegs PANDAS! ATTACK! Mufasa... DA. DA. DA. 00:52, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

I told you on chat that she doesn't need an alt. Plus, this is far from 50% done. Auto-declined. Jayce (  ) 00:55, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to reason above ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:09, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sol (Ro) ~ Redone Edit

[[File:Sol.rogue.png]] Okay, it needed to match it's loner image, and it was pretty much impossible to tweak and get a fine result, so I ended up redoing it with permission. I did redo it, more of a tweak, on the same image, but I'll say it was redone, 'cause that's how it was except on the same image. OA was Iceheart. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:05, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

His muzzle shouldn't be black, and make the earpink a bit more triangular. :P Sky To Kill An Empire 00:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the white on the chest paws and belly. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:11, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tone down the earpink by any chance? Mistypebble 01:32, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I also redid the whole image because it didn't match the loner.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:18, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Add the tufted ears ^^  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:15, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Eh...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    18:53, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it some. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 00:15, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Crop what? If it's the tufted ears, it matches the other images.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I meant crop it around the lineart. ♫Purplemoon♪ I'm going skiing! In Colorado :3 15:06, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the chest white parts a tad. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:40, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. @Rowan, I'm not changing the white, 'cause since the light source is above, the light can't hit the white at all, so it's in the shadows, giving it a darker color.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    02:36, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

The pattern doesn't really match the warrior image. There's too much black and the placement's a bit off. Could you try and match it? Paleggy Ship it 16:06, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

I don't know...I'm withdrawing this.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    17:36, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Don't forget to change the heading, but if it's alright with you, I'll take this over. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 04:11, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:10, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Declining because rogue blanks are being reworked ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:10, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Willowclaw (W) - RedoneEdit

[[File:Willowclaw.warrior.png]] Okay, Willowclaw. OA was Bramble, then Sky. Was redone due to shading. :3 Comments? User:Maplefern/Sig 17:46, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Center the ear-pink a but. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:57, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Pffft, but? You may have been on that site too much xD Blur the shading and maje the earpink less red. Ugh, Willowclaw. I hated that redo xD Sky Everyone likez teh cats 05:08, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Maje? Sky, you've got it too. :3 Anyways, Reuploaded. User:Maplefern/Sig 23:21, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the ear pink a bit~ ~Pouncey~ 04:14, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a bit more. Silverhmm 20:58, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? oblivionAudience? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Apparently not. Over a week with no upload, declining, archiving, and reverting. Shelly For a limited time only 17:44, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Misha (R) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Misha.rogue.png]]Eww... I wanna re-do this. Cream is an annoying color to tweak. OA is Riverpelt, and it needed the shading blended. I also added depth to the eye. Jayce (  ) 00:37, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Shouldn't rogue chararts be put on hold until the new blanks are done? There's only one vote for keeping the old ones, and I don't see them getting any more. Shelly For a limited time only 00:41, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Good point. I just assumed since it was on the tweaking list, it could be tweaked. I don't mind waiting to re-do it once the blanks are done. Jayce (  ) 00:42, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to pursue other chararts while waiting for the rogue linearts to be done. Jayce (  ) 00:46, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Mudfur (alt. MCA)~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Mudfur.alt.mca.png]]Here he is! Would the "dark" description mean dark brown? User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 22:14, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

We discussed this before. It was dark in the scene he was called dark in. His pelt was in shadows, and was thusly described correctly. Declined. Shelly For a limited time only 22:34, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

oops. My mistake. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 22:59, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth(W) -DeclinedEdit

File:Shrewtooth.warrior.png Heres Shrewtooth, hope he's good enough. Comments? BrackentailLionblazeROCKS! 10:22, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Bracken, but Shrewtooth already had a warrior image. This will have to be declined and reverted (although a SM needs to archive/decline this). If you want to tweak the image, you have to be a warrior. Sorry again, Brackentail. Dazzy 11:43, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Declined. Sky Seedlit Proxy 12:51, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Cedarheart (E) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Cedarheart.elder.png]] :3 Cedarheart. First elder for me. ._. User:Maplefern/Sig 03:06, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce (  ) 03:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Enlarge the earpink a tad and make it more triangular. c: If ya use highlights, tone them down a tad, otherwise just blur the shading like Cloudy said. *Is stupid Dx* Sky Promises, promises 06:10, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Maple? oblivionAudience? 20:44, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Jayce (  ) 22:35, March 2, 2012 (UTC)