Ruby (Lo) ~ Declined

[[File:Ruby.loner.png]] Alright, there she is...anyone like? comments please! Thanks

Tigerheart 01:35, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Darken/define the shading, make sure the ear-pink fill the ear capacity, and erase the pink that's spilling from the lineart ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink less hotpink, make it the same as her kit charart. Sweetflower01:44 Sun Feb 5

Sure I'll reupload it in a second Tigerheart 01:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded --Tigerheart 01:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

This is still not 50% complete. Suggesting for deletion again. Get this to at least 50% completiong before uploading this again. Shelly For a limited time only 02:03, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

I agree, I suggest you look at the apprentice tutorials for shading placement and blurring Iveh Yo! 02:19, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. Thank you --Tigerheart 02:22, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, and I looked at the tutorials (thanks, Ivy) Tigerheart 02:39, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights and shading and fix the pixels on the paws, fill 'em in. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 03:17, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay; Re-uploaded --☯Tigerheart 03:27, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

  1. It looks like some of the lineart on the legs and belly are blurred, possibly erase the extra pixels around it.
  2. Make the earpink the same colour and smudge it.
  3. Fill in the grey pixels on her feet and tail.
  4. Blur the shading LOTS. --Leafstrike-- 05:06, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --Tigerheart stay golden... 05:15, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Er. Instead of the file archive, could you post the actual image? [[File:Ruby.loner.png]] User:Twilightheart200/Sig 05:18, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Redone --Tigerheart stay golden... 05:46, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Please don't upload a new file each time you change it. Re-upload it over File:Ruby.loner.png.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay --Tigerheart stay golden... 05:53, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You still need to blur the shading tons. Try using guassion blur under filters. There are also white pixels on the front paw closest to us. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D08:26, Sun, Feb, 5, 2012

You also still need to post the actual image, no the archive of it. And I don't think this is 80% complete, so you have a week to improve it before it's declined I believe. Paleggy Ship it 08:54, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

There are light pixels on the front paw, shadings are only applied not blurred, blurred lineart, some colours (ear-pink) are on the places where they can't be- this is all things they are wrong.. fix that LeafyAbsolute maniac 11:49, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Sp... I can't upload the new one I did for a week? :( I fixed the pixels on the paw... hm... Tigerheart scratch... 23:26, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

You can upload it. What Paleh means is, the charart/image doesn't look 80% complete. You have a week to make it look 80% complete. Constructivly, post the file, not the archive. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 23:28, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

Okay Tigerheart scratch... 23:37, February 5, 2012 (UTC)

So if I upload it again, will it get declined? If it's not perfect (by people's standards) Tigerheart scratch... 02:29, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

Never mind. Misunderstood it. Re-uploaded --Tigerheart scratch... 02:31, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

... =_= Use the female lineart, not the male. Shelly For a limited time only 02:58, February 6, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needs to be blurred tons still. i can help you if you wish. Also smudge the pelt into the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:14, Mon, Feb, 6, 2012

Redone... still need to do something about the shading, I believe, but I fixed the pixels, used the female blank, and blended the earpink --Tigerheart scratch... 02:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded --❦ Woo patch of green 273 04:14, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to be lightened up a lot. Sky Fus Roh Dah 08:48, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Redone once again, and lightened *wink wink* ❦ Woo patch of green 273 22:56, February 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. If I could, I'd change the heading to "For Approval", because it looks way better than it did the first time. --Leafstrike-- 00:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Tigerheart I reserved this a week ago--Acornleaf 00:46, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Acorn, you already have Birdpaw up, and you can have one up for approval at a time. User:Twilightheart200/Sig 00:52, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blurring the earpink... Thanks Moon! Thanks! ❦ Woo patch of green 273 01:45, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

It looks some of her tail got cut off, but it might just be me.:3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 18:53, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Wait, Tigerheart, I mentioned if I could change the heading, and it doesn't mean you can change the heading. Only a senior warrior and above can do that if they feel the image is at least 80% complete. --Leafstrike-- 20:43, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Oh. Sorry... *embarrassed* I'm really sorry. Woo patch of green 22:13, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define and blur the shading on the body. ^^ Sky To kill an Empire... 23:12, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded... You can barely see the changes I made but they're there... lawl. Woo patch of green 03:14, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Please stop thumbing your image. All you need to say is "re-uploaded" when you upload the file. xD Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:16, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

okay sorry. It won't happen again... is this 80% by any Senior Warrior's standards? I would like to do another and I have the day off from school today, so I have a lot of time to do a charart. How long do I have to wait until someone can approve this? Woo patch of green 02:28, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Has there been any comments besides mine in the past 12 hours? Woo patch of green 17:13, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Be patient. There's blurred lineart on her back leg. oblivionAudience? 21:53, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'll fix that Woo patch of green 22:41, February 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green 00:12, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Stop changing the file to a url. And she's light grey, not dark. Just follow the apprentice tutorials and try to match the other images as closely as possible. Shelly For a limited time only 00:16, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green 00:31, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the face and blur the shading. Sky To Kill An Empire 08:30, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the whole thing to match the kit image. The kittypet is too dark and should be tweaked. Paleggy Ship it 15:40, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded and lightened the shading... a lot. ♥ V-day I want sugar ♥ 22:39, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Woo, stop thumbing it. Just leave the file code alone, it'll update on its own. Shelly For a limited time only 22:44, February 13, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I will. Can I ask a question? What does Under Evaluation mean? Woo patch of green 02:40, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, it means that the image you put up is under evaluation by the project. If you post an image that is over 80% (I think) finished then you get to put the heading "For Approval" and you get promoted to an apprentice!! I hope I helped...and blur the "highlights." --Cinder Real or Not Real?21:45, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for telling me, and am an apprentice. Woo patch of green 22:17, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    04:17, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green 04:28, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Un-thumbed. Define the shading on the face and blur the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  05:08, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the body shading. c: Sky To Kill An Empire 06:07, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green 15:51, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

It looks like you smudged the lineart near the earpink, also define the belly shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:38, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪ 00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten and blur the head shading. Mistypebble 14:11, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

There's blurred lineart in the ear, waste under the tail, and a misplaced black pixle on her leg (I think). Also, please define the haunch and shoulder shading and lighten the shading on the face a bunch. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 17:18, February 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪ 00:03, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Darn, it's not showing the new version I did. !Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪ 00:08, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. And please stop putting the image in a thumbnail. Right before it says "overwrite file," there's another section that says "Thumbnail" or "Fill image" (something like that). And click full image. Silverhmm 00:22, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦ 03:39, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Nevermind. Reuploaded again, there were black pixels on the paws Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦ 03:41, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading at the base of her tail. --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:31, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded you can't see it very well though Woo patch of green ❦♪♪♣♪♣♣❦ 04:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. If I'm correct you've already had a week to get it up to 80%+ complete right? Unless someone hasn't updated the heading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D05:47, Mon, Feb, 20, 2012

I know I'm not part of the project, but I wanted to give you some critique. Could you possibly define the shading and blur it? -Twilicorn 05:50, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Yes, I do think I've had over a week... does that mean it's declined? :( Lalala... you say I am messing with your head, yeah yeah... ♪ ♪ 20:22, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'd think so...but this is at least 80% by MY standards. I say it stays up. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:25, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Thank you! Happy Clover Day 21:52, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Tail shading was too dark Happy Clover Day 05:49, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think this is 80% There is some blurred haunch lineart, can you fix that?Iveh Yo! 04:09, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Sure I can; thank you... so much! Thank you all! Clover day Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 06:17, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Nice job apprentice. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:30, 22, 02, 2012

Umm, Isn't WooWoo been an apprentice already? --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:57, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC) Nah, I'm still a 'paw. Thanks everyone! Clover day Woo ♣♣ 02:21, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:17, 23, 02, 2012

There's blurred lineart in the ear, shoulder, neck, both back legs, tail, front leg, and along her back. ~Pouncey~ 14:59, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 02:53, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

BLur the shaind , and smudge the earpink into the ear. Is there blurred lineart in the ear? I can't see it exactly, but it looks like there is. If there is, get rid of it. C: --Fenris They know what I am; let them come, if they have the courage.

14:00, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded there was no blurred lineart Clover day Woo ♣♣ 22:18, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more and define your shading placement, look here for an idea on how it should look like. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 23:56, 24, 02, 2012

Whoo... thanks! Sorry I couldn't fix it earlier. Swim meet. Clover day Woo ♣♣ 01:54, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 01:55, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:01, February 26, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 02:31, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. Try using Guassion blur on the shading layer/on the shading, it's under Filters. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:21, 28, 02, 2012

Woo, just a notice: you have 4 days to get this approved before it reaches the four week time limit. I advise doing a quick recap of the apprentice tutorials and paying close attention to the parts about shading. You're almost there, you just gotta get it smoothed out! ^^ Shelly For a limited time only 17:30, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Thanks shelly! Thanks all of you! Clover day Woo ♣♣ 22:24, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the 'highlights' more. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:55, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the shading a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:43, 03, 03, 2012

Reuploaded Clover day Woo ♣♣ 02:54, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading more. If you're using the Gaussian Blur tool, make sure it's on a good rate, not a low one. :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 18:11, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded And just if you didn't know, something happened to my thing D: it just completely wacked out on me and stopped working altogether, so for till I get it fixed, I'm using pixlr. :3. Better than nothin'. Clover day Woo ♣♣ 23:10, March 3, 2012 (UTC)

Hun, you really need to blur the's very blotchy. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:46, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

ReuploadedClover day Woo ♣♣ 04:13, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again, baddish ear shading =_= Clover day Woo ♣♣ 04:14, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the "highlights". ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 23:21, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Tone them down? Okay... Clover day Woo ♣♣ 03:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded `Clover day Woo ♣♣ 03:02, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Woo. It's been one month since you've put this up for approval. I have to decline this. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:07, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. oblivionAudience? 03:08, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I'll archive this section and just post it under a new heading when I finish. oblivionAudience? 03:12, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ivypool (Alt A) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png]]Here she is....I realize that the shading could be blurred more, and that I may have gotten the image name wrong, but I will fix that in a moment. Comments? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:04, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The filename should be Ivypool.apprentice.alt.png. Just re-upload over this, and you'll be fine. Also, blur the shading. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:14, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Thanks Cloudskye, for clarifying the file name. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:21, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

The shading needsto be blended into the pelt a bit more. Appledash 23:49, February 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur all the shading and define the nose pink. Sweetflower23:53 Wed Feb 8

Define the tail shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  00:03, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, but still have that "smudged earpink" look. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D06:30, Thu, Feb, 9, 2012

Lighten the eyes up. They looks rather dark. Silverhmm 22:02, February 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think the eyes should be fine if you just reverse the depth. It looks better if you have the dark bit closer to the white shiny and the lighter bit at the bottom. llwildheartl07:08 Fri Feb 10

The eyes should also be green, as she was mistakenly described with them. Paleggy Ship it 11:48, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste under her chest and a speck of waste along the bottom of the image. ~Pouncey! "Aloha!" "You're Hawaiian?" "No..." x3 12:35, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Turns out, I forgot to add the nose pink, and go over detail. I fail. I feel overjoyed. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 21:51, February 10, 2012 (UTC)

If it's a gray cat, then she has a gray nose. Thicken and blur the shading a ton ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 05:13, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink on this -> ear  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  21:55, February 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I hate the blur tool User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 02:12, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Tried the gaussian blur tool, yet? If not, then try it, 'cause I think the shading needs to be blurred more. :P User:Twilightheart200/Sig 02:14, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

I use gaussian for all my shading. Unfortunately, I'm having so much trouble with the shading. I use Pixlr, so I'm not really sure how to fix it. I 'll play around with it though. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 07:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Tell me if the back needs more blurring. If I'm right, then I live in a pineapple. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 08:10, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

The haunch shading could use blurring Dazzy 08:35, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 08:57, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the tail and haunch shading more. Mistypebble 22:41, February 14, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste along the tail.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  02:44, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink. --Elork 04:15, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Here's what I did: I redid the image. I like how it looks now. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 19:56, February 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, smudge the earpink into the ear a bit, and add definition to the eyes. llwildheartl02:34 Thu Feb 16

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 08:03, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink more. Sky To Kill An Empire 13:09, February 16, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 07:04, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe define the depth in the eye and blur the shading...? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:53, February 17, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D01:30, Sat, Feb, 18, 2012

Reuploaded. She looks good.... User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:32, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading some more, and lighten the whole image.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    09:21, February 19, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I can't blur the shading anymore, because it comes out all blotchy, and if I make it lighter, the shading is either too light or comes out funky. Anyone have any tips? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 07:29, February 20, 2012 (UTC)

Occasionally, when I can't blur the shading anymore, I add a new layer to smooth out certain areas (the haunch and chest/face in this case), or you could try to smudge the shading. Atelda insert vague subtext here 02:24, February 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Well....I can at least say I tried. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 06:38, February 22, 2012 (UTC)

You need to blur the shading a lot and darken the ear pink then blur it. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

 00:23, February 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:25, February 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. --Cinder Real or Not Real?18:43, February 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 03:59, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Darken & blur the shading; also enlargen and darken the earpink. --Weylon Distinctly Unique. 04:01, February 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading with your blur tool set to max. For solids, it's necessary. Shelly For a limited time only 17:31, February 29, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Quail? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:29, March 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. Reuploaded. The reason why i haven't uploaded in awhile was to blur, blur, blur. It's not blurring anymore. And I've used every possible technique. And I'm stressed, because if I don't get this perfect by the end of next week, it's declined. Any help? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 00:00, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

What program do you use? I advise switching to GIMP if you're using pixlr. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:02, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

I can't download GIMP due to my family's rules. Anything else? User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:24, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Well, there's also sumopaint and paint.NET, but I'm unsure how to use those. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:25, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

If it were me I'd define the highlights a tad. That may be just me though. Clover day Woo ♣♣ 06:34, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

If I were you, I'd just redo the whole thing. Since you're using Pixlr, it's best to set the shading on its own layer, and just Gaussian Blur your way through it. Dazzy 23:06, March 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and even it out..or as said above redo it. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:48, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Hey, Quail. You gonna re-upload? It's best to get as much time in as you can, since your month is almost up. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 03:18, March 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I know this is going to be declined. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:20, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading. It's actually pretty good, Quail. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:22, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Guess what? I had a feeling, and it turns out I have Photoshop on my computer. I can't believe I forgot I had it.

Blur the haunch shading some more. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 23:18, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and define the highlights. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:09, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I still know this is going to be declined. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 04:54, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Quite the opposite. I think it's fine the way it is, Quail. CBA? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:56, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Really sorry to interrupt, but the shading's still a bit blotchy and should be blurred and darkened. Could you fix that? Paleggy Ship it 07:42, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. She's a bit better, but I don't see how this will be approved.(Quick note have been reuploading throughout day) User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 16:42, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to pursue something else. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:20, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Nightfur (Lo) - Declined

[[File:Nightfur.Loner.png]]I joined PCA recently and saw that Nightfur need a loner image, so here it is!

My first charart :3. Comments? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:50, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot, and there's waste all around. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:17, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ivyheart still has this reserved, and I don't think it's been 2 weeks, so unfortunately, this is declined. Sky Molto bene 11:30, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Morningcloud (W) ~ Declined

[[File:Morningcloud.warrior.png]] I seem to attract solid gray chararts. This definitely isn't my best. Comments? OA was Echomist. Just a shading tweak. User:Shadewing/Sig 20:33, February 28, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

What needed to be done, and who was the OA? Also, define the ear pink. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:00, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Silverhmm 23:51, February 28, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this? --Leafstrike-- 02:04, March 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes. I'll have it reuploaded by tomorrow. I was in Florida over the weekend. User:Shadewing/Sig 22:21, March 5, 2012 (UTC) Shadewing

Define the haunch highlight. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:55, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 07:32, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:53, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Mist (lo) - Declined

[[File:Mist_(lo)_Loner.jpg]]While looking through pages I came across Mist's and there was no charart, so I did one :3 Comments? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:11, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Mist already has an image, sorry. For some reason, it was never put back on the article as his main image. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 09:13, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

And either way, this is very pixelated. User:WooWoo/Sig 22:18, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Tawnyfur (A) - Declined

[[File:Tawnyfur.apprentice.png]]Will be blurring in a moment. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:28, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shoulder shading <33  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:29 Thu Mar 8

There's waste above the front back paw. Could you also smudge the ear pink a tad? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:30, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 05:32, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

There's a speck of waste by the top of his tail, and around his hind leg. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 11:18, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 12:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge dat earpink. Weylon Distinctly Unique. 14:10, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Continue badmouthing it. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 23:43, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the lighter part of the tail and shoulder. Sky Molto bene 00:35, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I forgot to mention the light source is from the back. User:QuailflightTheCat/Sig 00:50, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Slightly define the shading and smudge the earpink. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:16, 10, 03, 2012

There's some smudged haunch shading lineart. Tint the pelt color a bit more brown. Dazzy 00:25, March 10, 2012 (UTC)

Define the depth in the eye. Wasn't this already approved? I think it was in the approved archives...  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:27, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it was in the declined archives, due to reaching the month limit. Dazzy 06:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:17, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

It's been one week. I will be taking over from here. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:16, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Rockshade (Lo) ~ Declined

[[File:Rockshade.loner.png]] Just like me, flipping through the list of loners to see if there was anyone left without art, and I come across Rockshade (under the R content category). Listed as a loner. He doesn't have his rogue charart either, and I would have made that if he rogue chararts weren't being redone. Colorpicked from his warrior. Ew, Comments? User:WooWoo/Sig 00:57, March 17, 2012 (UTC)S

Sorry, but I don't think he gets a rogue -or- a loner charart. He was a kit. Iveh Yo! 01:04, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Then wouldn't this be declined instead of withdrawn? --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:06, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, he shouldn't get one so declined.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:08 Sat Mar 17

Mothwhisker (E)- Declineded

[[file:mothwhisker.elder.png]] Tweak patched cause they were too neon. OA=Ashshadow Bloo!yo 01:20, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make the earpink match the patches' colour? Or do the other way around... --Leafstrike-- 03:06, March 9, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded - sorry it look a while, Im using my parent's laptop and I'm getting confused with all the files Bloo!yo 04:01, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur dat earpink. oblivionAudience? 13:07, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

The patchy fur is awfully bright. Hurts mah eyes Dx Tone it down a bit? Dazzy 08:00, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

No offence to you or the OA, but this image is just.... Eugh. Any chance of you redoing? Paleggy Ship it 05:18, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

I second that. Again, no offense, but you'd be better off redoing it :S Iveh Yo! 05:07, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm going to third that, Bloo. I know you'll make it look even better. 8D Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:49, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Bloo left, anyone can take over now. And since there's practically three votes for a redo right here, anyone can redo it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:56 Sat Mar 17

Jayfeather (A)~ Declined

[[File:Jayfeather.apprentice.alt.png]]Jayfeather had a white muzzle and a white pattern on his face in the cover of Eclipse, so he would need a charart for that. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 00:02, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

First of all, you need to cite it properly, second of all, I don't think this is a big enough change for an alt. Paleggy Ship it 00:03, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

No, it's not enough for an alt. Sorry, but I am declining this unless a significant amount of others disagree Iveh Yo! 00:08, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Definitely not. Shelly For a limited time only 00:46, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Declining.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:25, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Spottedleaf (A) - Declined

[[File:Spottedleaf.apprentice.png]] This is the mca with some tweaks to the lineart... So it looks a lot like the MCA image. Redone to match the other images more, OA= Maplefern, with tweaks/redoes by Shimmerpool, Rainwhisper and Thistleberry. Comments? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:41, 25, 03, 2012

No, no and no. We're not doing this again. Either make the image yourself, or don't take it on. That's stealing work that you did not make yourself. You are not the OA of the MCA image, so you're not allowed to do that. I'm going to request you either make the image yourself, or don't bother. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:48, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Unless you're the OA of the image, you're not allowed to do that. Declined. You can make your own and repost, but otherwise, just.... no. Paleggy Ship it 05:50, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Flametail (Kit alt.) ~ Declined

[[File:Flametail.kit.alt.png]]Okay. My first one ever. *crosses fingers* ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 14:38, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Why exactly does he need this? There's nothing in his trivia. oblivionAudience? 15:17, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

"Flametail is first described as a dark ginger tom, though this is later changed to bright ginger." My bad if he doesn't need an alt... ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 16:17, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

He might, I'm not 100% sure though. If this does stay, please add stripes since he is still described as ginger. Iveh Yo! 16:49, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

If he was first described as dark ginger then his current one should be changed and he would bet an alt for being bright ginger.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:36 Tue Mar 20

So you're saying that his current image should be dark ginger and he should have a bright ginger alt? ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 20:21, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

In this case, I don't think so. Bright ginger is the most used description, with dark ginger only being used once. It's not like Willowshine, who only shifted a single shade to accomodate her original description into her current one. I think he should remain bright ginger, and he should recieve a dark ginger alt kit, as he was a kit when he was called dark ginger, not a medicine cat apprentice. Also, said kit image will need stripes. Shelly For a limited time only 20:30, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think he should get any alts for this, it's way too close in my opinion. There's so little difference bright ginger and dark ginger, I really do think it'd be silly. Paleggy Ship it 20:38, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I dunno, Paleh. We did agree before that alts could be given for a color shift of more than one shade, and bright ginger to dark ginger would fit that criteria. Shelly For a limited time only 20:41, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Okay. So should I make a dark ginger alt kit with stripes now, or is it still in consideration whether I can make an alt for him or not? ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 23:10, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with Paleclaw it is the same Color but different shade, and I think the guidelines say that wouldn't get an alt. not sure... Also Silverflower yes change it to a dark ginger kit, just in case it stays. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:15, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm with Shelly on this. Bright ginger is like Lionstar and dark ginger is like Rowanclaw it's a pretty big difference.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:22 Tue Mar 20

Alright, I changed it. ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 23:56, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Well usually when it changes more than one shade, for instance, from dark brown to light, it's is a big difference. But look at this; When I searched "Bright ginger cats" most of the results I got looked like this [1], but when I searched "Dark ginger cats" I got [2] mostly. There's very little difference between the results I got, and I really don't think this should get an alt. Paleggy Ship it 00:33, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Honestly, I think that if Lionstar is described as "bright ginger," and Rowanclaw is described as "dark ginger," and there is a drastic difference between their chararts, like Mountain said, then Flametail could get an alt. But I don't know, that's just my opinion. ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 13:08, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Lionstar is only described as ginger, not bright ginger, and his charart is actually pale ginger if anything. The difference is because it's the artists choice on the shade for the most part, however just cause two artists choose completely different colors out of personal preference, it does not mean that there should be an alt for those colors. Paleggy Ship it 14:00, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

How about Sunstar then? Look, Paleclaw, we need to be consistant here. And we've consistantly agreed that if the coloring on a cat changed more than one shade they get an alt. If you think it should change, propose it on the talk page and put this charart on hold until a decision is reached. That way more than just the few people that come look here will be inclined to give their input. Shelly For a limited time only 14:36, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

We also consistently agreed that synonyms don't get alts, and looking at the image results on this, I believe Dark ginger is pretty much a synonym for Bright ginger, and therefore this shouldn't get an alt. Paleggy Ship it 20:56, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Again, take it to the talk page, Paleh. Seriously, I think that we should get project consensus on this. I'm not saying you're wrong, I just think we ought to see what everyone thinks. Shelly For a limited time only 21:00, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes look a little thick, thin them out and add a few more. Define the shading on the legs. Iveh Yo! 00:34, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Well, honestly this is good, only try to make stripes more like on the apprentice's charart. its easy. just take the smudge tool and smudge the stripes in the zig-zag lines. LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:43,March 22,2012 (UTC)

Since we seem to be in agreement on the talk page about dark and bright ginger, this wouldn't require an alt. Declining, unless others disagree. Paleggy Ship it 23:20, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Russetfur (Ki.) ~ Declined

[[File:Russetfur.kit.png.png]] I was looking around and I found that Russetfur didn't have a kit image! I decided to make this. Comments? Perrylegs Don't. Diss. The. Button. 00:13, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

She wasn't mentioned anywhere as a kit. Declined.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:15, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo) ~ Declined

[[File:Oakstep.loner.png]] Yay! I was browsing last night and found this! Then I resvered it today and made it in twenty minuets. Tried my best to copy it. Comments? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 01:07, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes you have now thinner and add more. Blur the earpink too.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:08 Tue Mar 6

His elder is also lighter. No just highlights, but all over. Breezewhisker 05:03, March 6, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't lighten it too much because I got the colors from the elder. Also I added a stripe or two and thinned almost all of the stripes. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:21, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 02:08, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes more "zig-zaggy" like the elder's image, and darken the overall shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:19, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

The tail needs seven stripes, and you have five. Try thinning out the ones you already have, and add a few more in so it matches. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:51, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Two hours....Two /hours!/ nice to Sandy... Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:58, March 7, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading and smudge the pelt into the earpink more, mainly the sides of it. Sky Molto bene 11:41, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The ear pink might not look much different, but it is. And the changes might not be showing too. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:00, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes really don't match. Take a closer look at the elder and try to copy that. oblivionAudience? 22:01, March 8, 2012 (UTC)

Okay I'm working on a new onE right now. The earliest I can do is Sunday, since I have a girl scout thing at the Mall of America. All weekend long baby! Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!

Define and blur the shading. Mistypebble 19:38, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, I'm redo-ing it Also I just finished the tail! I know I'm /really/ slow but there's about...13 more tests this week and one more tomorrow on monday. I /am/ going to work hard on this as much as I can but this is just a progress report. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:31, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

^ Scratch all of that. I lied >:D. Okay this suuuucks! I copied it the best I could and then when I blurred Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:02, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the stripes and add more stripes to the haunch and forelges.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:33 Mon Mar 12

Define the tail shading. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 23:29, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Okay I didn't darken the stripes because I took it from the elder. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:07, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes. Mistypebble 01:57, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Along the back, there's a lighter stripe there. C: Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:52, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Changes not showing. Also, Twi witch one? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 20:52, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Where the stripes are supposed to meet the lineart, they don't. It just kind of fades and then you can see the base pelt colour where the stripes should meet the lineart...if that made any sense... Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:54, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well I double checked and I'm sure that now there's nothing of the sort...I hope Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:16, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes coming into the belly look like they are starting to get lost in the shading Ivyheart =P 23:44, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

First of all you didn't tell me what to do :\ and really? Hpmf well just tell me what to do about it :) Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:45, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sand, don't cop an attitude. Define the stripes that are lost in the shading. Jeez. If you keep this up, there WILL be consequences. Your attitude is getting on my nerves. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 00:47, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

You might wanna think about redoing the shading. There's absolutely no light source from what I can tell, it seems to be coming from all different angles, and at some parts the shading doesn't really make sense (muscle structure and shape-wise). Paleggy Ship it 14:33, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Okay I'll be redo-ing this and I'll reupload on Sunday because I have this HUGE essay due on Monday and it counts for about 70% of my grade... O.0 Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:40, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Sand, remember to upload soon. It's been four days since you last uploaded. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 11:14, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I didn't redo it, but I made some changes to the shading and most of the stripes. Gonna get an A on that essay! Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 00:04, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't really match the elder.... Dan you darken them, ass add more, and just make them look more like the stripes on the elder? Paleggy Ship it 14:01, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Umm, Paleh. Check your shading place again.... XD Also, Sand, darken the shading. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:51, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Paleh fail!!! But anyways the stripes and the base are the same exact color because I spent 15 min originaly doing this just for the color. Also the stripes on the belly may look a little odd because I burred it. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 01:40, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

-dies- not again.... DX And no Sandstorm, they are not in any way the same color, please change them. Paleggy Ship it 14:03, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Once again Redone. Better now? Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:33, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Not really..... sorry but the stripe pattern and colors just don't match. Paleggy Ship it 21:56, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Try this. [[File:Oakstep.redline.png]]I don't know if the colors will work, as this isn't shaded, but at very least this should help with the stripe pattern. Paleggy Ship it 00:44, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded that redline is boss! This is why you're up there and I'm down here. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 21:53, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Umm you should really blur the stripes. They shouldn't be pixily like that Iveh Yo! 22:00, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy's right. They need blurred tons. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:00, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Dx derp derp derp derp derp! Fail...okay I re-did it (probally doesn't look like it) and guassion blurred it now. Changes not showing. Sandy I think Daddy's my slave! 22:17, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Um, Sand... you didn't even re-upload. I'm looking at the file changes, and there's two at 17:54 (my time) and nothing after that. oblivionAudience? 22:52, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I've been stalking the recent activity all day too, and you never uploaded after the first time. Paleggy Ship it 22:54, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. User:WooWoo/Sig 07:03, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the stripes a bit. Silversong123<<There Is No "E" In Pi>> 22:14, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Define/Darken the shading. Mistypebble 13:39, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a bit more.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 00:41, March 26, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the earpink a tad. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 20:09, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Sandy? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:41, 27, 03, 2012

Sorry, Sand. Since you said you were going to be away, there's no way you can get this done. Anyone without an image up may work on this. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:39, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take it. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 23:49, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Purple, I just reserved it. Paleggy Ship it 23:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe (Apprentice) - Declined

[[File:Graystripe.Apprentice.png]] This is my first charart on here. I'm not sure if I was allowed to do him, but, I'll leave him here until said. Thank you, Silversong123<<There Is No "E" In Pi>> 22:00, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Graystripe already has an apprentice image. Sorry. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:03, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm sorry. Silversong123<<There Is No "E" In Pi>> 22:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Featherwhisker (MCA) ~ Declined

[[File:Featherwhisker.mca.png]] Tweaked the whiskers to be longer. I can't tweak the left whiskers because there is no more room on the image to. Comments? --Cinder Real or Not Real?22:51, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Just make the canvas bigger ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:24, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean? Aren't the whiskers at the last pixel on the image? --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:27, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

She means to increase the extra space you have. If you use GIMP or Pixlr, I believe you go to Image -> Canvas Size. --Leafstrike-- 01:09, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thanks Leafstrike ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?17:50, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make them droop more. They look like sticks or something right now. Paleggy Ship it 19:37, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. Sorry, Cinder. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Yellowfang (E) - Declined

[[File:Yellowfang.elder.png]] I just tweaked the muzzle....OA was Thistle (who had help from 'teldy.) Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:39, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

The line should end at the edge of her mouth and should not extend below it. Shelly For a limited time only 01:49, March 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Like this? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:58, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Shorten the mouth to end at the crease like it does on the apprentice charart. Shelly For a limited time only 20:38, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Since Twi has left PCA, any user who so wishes may take over this project. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 18:55, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'll try at it... WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:18, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:33, March 22, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look any different. Iveh Yo! 14:19, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... what should I do to fix it? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 14:58, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Don't have the line go past the mouth line.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 02:54 Tue Mar 27

Re-uploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:23, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Thin and smooth out the line a bit. Paleggy Ship it 15:19, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. Sorry, Wild. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:45, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Cherrypaw (TC) (Ki) ~ Declined


This is my first tweak, so just tell me if I'm doing something wrong.

So okayyy. I tweaked the shading and tried to make it more like her apprentice.

Comments? :3

Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 15:35, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

The shading looks almost like it is tinted brown... (sorry if its just my computer) Can you fix that? Mistypebble 15:46, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Thistle you dork this is over the limit X3  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 16:01 Sat Mar 17

Yup, it is. xD Silly Thistle. Declined for now, you can repost when there's space. Paleggy Ship it 18:52, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

I archived something so you're good.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:30 Sat Mar 17

The shading looks kind of green. When I did her apprentice, I tinted her shading slightly red, so that might help :) Iveh Yo! 23:16, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Upload it over the old file. Paleggy Ship it 15:48, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Uploaded it over the old file, but it red tinged, and not a dork anymore. Phew. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 18:25, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

In Cherrypaw's talk page, although it hasn't been put in due to lack of page numbers, I velieve ger eyes were revealed to be amber? Should the eyes be changed, or wait until a cite is in? Sky Exterminate! 01:53, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

I say wait until a cite is added. If you don't mind...could you define the ear pink? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 04:38, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

The light parts look tinted yellow-green. Dazzy 08:33, March 19, 2012 (UTC)

Is it possible to define the stripes? They look very faded. Sky Exterminate! 10:02, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this thistle? Paleggy Ship it 22:14, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but no. >:C I'm in Phoenix and can't work on it 'cause I don't have my tablet. Sorry. >> Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 16:03, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry Thistle, I know you can't control that you can't work on this, but it's just been too long. Declined for now. Paleggy Ship it 14:36, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

You have until Saturday to repost the image, otherwise you lose your reservation. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:42, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Oakstep (Lo)~ Declined

[[File:Oakstep.loner1.png]]I saw that Oakstep's other charart image was declined. Does that mean I can post this? And I named it something other than Oakstep.loner.png 'cause the name was already taken. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 22:58, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh already has this reserved. Please check the table next time. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 22:59, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving Iveh Yo! 17:54, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Shrewtooth (Ki) ~ Declined

[[File:Shrewtooth.kit.png]] Well...I just thought I'd upload it now. Comments? Dazzy 08:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 08:25 Sun Mar 11

Define the shading plz xP Sky Molto bene 08:42, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Failed shading iz failed >.< Dazzy 11:35, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded again. ^^; Sorry for missing that, Mounty. Dazzy 12:18, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Are there any highlights? Lighten the whole thing just a tad. User:WooWoo/Sig 15:11, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

And make his nose grey. --Leafstrike-- 18:31, March 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 07:42, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and no, there are no highlights. I'd rather keep the color the way it is, since I colorpicked from his warrior, unless someone else agrees with Woo. Dazzy 07:45, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should lighten it just a little bit, so I agree with Woo XD. I amYour worst nightmare 16:54, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think there should be shading on the eyes. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:01, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Rowan, shading placement is artist's choice. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:08, March 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Lightened him up a bit ^^ Dazzy 07:44, March 13, 2012 (UTC)

Add shading to the tail and make the earpink more triangular. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 22:53, March 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 23:08, March 16, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Mistypebble 15:43, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Also, can you lighten up the shading a bit?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:33, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Dazzle, you still working on this? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:02, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

xD *forgot about this* Reuploaded. Dazzy 23:43, March 23, 2012 (UTC)

Uhh...yea. It's been 3 days, any more comments? Dazzy 08:12, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and please be patient ^^ Mistypebble 19:32, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

No, she's fine. You're Ok to ask for comments if you've gone 2 days without comments. Could you define the head shading? Then I'll CBA. Paleggy Ship it 09:18, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Dazzle, but it's been a week... I'll be taking over on this. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 16:57, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt. A) ~Declined

[[File:Heatherpaw.alt.apprentice.png]]She was described as a blood-stained gray kitty. So I decided to do her. {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 14:58, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Remove the blood. It's inappropriate and not part of her physical description. Honestly, have you ever seen a charart on this website with blood on it? Shelly For a limited time only 15:30, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

This should be declined because she has been described as gray cat with blood in Long Shadows and she was a warrior. And her warrior alt already exist. LeafyAbsolute maniac,16:42,March 26,2012 (UTC)

But in the line she was called Heatherpaw. Ivy and Dazzle both think she would get an alt for it. REUPLOADED. Changes may or may not be showing.{{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 15:47, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it [[File:Heathertail.apprentice.alt.png]]. oblivionAudience? 18:56, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail shading and can you take the eye color from her apprentice image? It looks too purplish. Mistypebble 19:30, March 26, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:44, 27, 03, 2012

Define the belly shading. Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 11:13, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. Seems flat. --User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig 23:01, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Dewstar, please don't repeat what's already been said. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

It seems like there's black smudged into the earpink.... fix that? Paleggy Ship it 09:20, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I really don't want you guys to think I'm a quitter but I don't have the time to work on this right now. Does anyone want to take over? {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:04, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 17:15, March 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Declined and archiving so a new section can be put up. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:43, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Princess (Q) ~ Declined

[[File:Princess.queen.png]]Ewwie.. >.> Tried to match Shelly's awesomeness, but I still think I'm a bit erm, off.. :/ Comments? Mistypebble 01:58, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Didn't Shelly say she wanted Princess' images? Or was she only talking about the kittypet? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:00, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, Misty. I looked through the archives, and Shelly did indeed ask for her images. This is declined, as since she requested them, she has first pick of the images. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:28, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

So sorry, I didn't see that at all Dx Sorry Shelly! Mistypebble 03:40, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:20, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

Coal (ro) ~ Declined

Coal (FQ).rogueMy first rogue!! Okay, whaddaya think? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:54, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Add earpink and it seems like the shading/highlights are cut off at the tail, make sure it goes all the way through to the end. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:58, 02, 04, 2012

Re-uploaded as you can probably tell, earpink=not my strong point. >.> Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

P.S. Changes are more than likely not showing. -_- Try Here Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 07:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and blur it tons. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Also, this needs to be named Coal.rogue.png. You can re-upload over the previous file, which is found here. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 08:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded and re-named Here Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:35, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You also need to change the file that's shown on the top of the section. I changed it for you this time, but please keep it in mind for next time. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 09:06, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

This is the wrong version of the blank. There's no fur on the back of his arm nor his hock, and that weird random spot on his tail wasn't fixed. Look here for the correct version. oblivionAudience? 10:26, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading, and at the very darkest points, it almost looks like pure black. Lighten it a tad so we can see the lines. Iveh Yo! 15:57, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Here

Don't forget to sign! Blur the shading tons.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:15, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

All right, so I'm just wondering why you completely ignored my comment... This is the wrong version of the blank. Used the one linked above or this will never be approved. oblivionAudience? 10:59, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Using the right lineart. Here if changes aren't showing Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:07, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the front paw closest to us. I can't make out the lineart, and it looks like a blob. Nicely done, Berry. Black cats can be a major pain if you don't know how to shade them. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:50, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Berry, you failed to reserve this image, therefore it is declined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 20:50, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:42 Fri Apr 6

Stripes (Alt. Ro) ~ Declined

[[File:Stripes.rogue.alt.png]]Here he is, probably my last for a while. Comments? WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. Mistypebble 01:46, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think you should make him longhaired, since his main image is. --Leafstrike-- 01:54, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Also, blur the shading and define the depth in the eye.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    03:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Why does he need to be longhaired? It isn't in his description. I'll still change it if you want. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:52, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Well, it should be consistent with the other images, Wild. Please change it. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

As discussed with the other senior members of the project, this image has been declined for Wildfire's comments towards other users. If another member would like to take over, they may do so. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:24, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 01:45 Sat Apr 7

Leafstar (Ro)~ Declined


Don't thumb the image, remember to sign, and also...this needs to be Leafstar.rogue.png. You can re-upload over the original file, located here.. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 16:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, I'm in school right now and had an arguement with my language arts teacher, so I didn't get a chance to write anything. Anyway, Leafstar's rogue image for aprroval. I don't think she turned out half bad. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:44, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the cream parts, make the stripes thinner and add more stripes.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:37 Tue Apr 3

Reuploaded Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:46, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still need to be much more thinner, and try to mach the stripe style more that the other images have. Also lighten the stripes a bit and make them more pointier at the tips. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:19, 05, 04, 2012

You know, I'm not sure this is 80% complete.... There's little if any shading, and the stripes don't match the other images. I'm on the fence about it, what do you guys think? Paleggy Ship it 04:13, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

I have to agree with Paleh. Bluestar, if you're unsure of how the stripes should go, I'm sure you can ask Ivystripe or one of the other users who happened to work on one of her images. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:44, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

I would be more than happy to help you with your image, just let me know if you'd like a redline or something like that. But I do have to agree, I don't think this is 80%. I can't see the shading, and the stripes do need to match. Iveh Yo! 16:53, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Definetely define the shading, and maybe make the stripes on the back a teensy bit thinner. User:Dewstar(leaf)/Sig

Dewstar, please don't repeat what's already been said. And since 3 SMs agree that this isn't 80% complete, declined. Sorry Bluestar. Paleggy Ship it 23:32, April 5, 2012 (UTC) 23:08, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Dewkit (TC) ~ Declined

[[File:Dewkit_(TC).kit.png]]First kit!! Comments? Improvements to be made? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:49, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry but the limit on the page is 40 chararts, declined until the spot opens LeafyAbsolute maniac,10:11,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Okay, you can continue, blur the shadings LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:42,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Made him gray and worked on the shading. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:01, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, Berry. Since you failed to add a date when you reserved this image, and you already posted it, this is declined. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:04, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can I re-reserve it? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:05, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

No. I took over. You need to think of these things before you post. Sorry. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:08, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Charart for Mistybreeze

[[File:Torties.png|thumb]] BluSkye~The Only Girl in the world 17:18, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

No. This is a place for official chararts only. This will be declined. Shelly For a limited time only 17:19, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:32 Sat Apr 7

Snowy (Ro) - Auto-Decline

[[File:Snowy_rouge.png]]she's my first kitty up for approval! she looks a bit dark, *shrugs*

Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 00:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

I de-thumbed it for you. Don't thumb an image ;) Blur the shading lots. And it may be just me, but I honestly can't understand your light source. User:~Leafy~/Sig 00:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

...This shold be under evaluation, and rename this File.Snowy.rogue.png. To add on to what Leafy said, add a significant light source to the tail. Also, the earpink is covering the lineart, fix that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:00, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol I TRIED do blur it and light up the tail! >o< Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 01:17, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

p.s (wait, i did it wrong, sorry! Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 01:33, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater)


Don't thumb the image. Blur the shading a tiny bit more. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename this [[File:Snowy.rogue.png]]. Blur/smudge the earpink. Atelda insert vague subtext here 01:56, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

i'm sorry! i've shaded it all i can! =(

Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 02:01, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

You still have to blur the shading...And rename it [[File:Snowy.rogue.png]]...I already told you to, and so did Atelda. And blur the earpink. The earpink is still covering some lineart, and it needs blurring. There's also a lot of blurred lineart. ...Did you do the other things other than shading that you were told to do?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Done! I smudged her a bit and blurred her, and I worked on the ear pink ^^ Snowy.rouge.png

Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 21:41, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

Smooth out the shading tons and blur it, then define the highlights and blue everything(minus lineart) alot. Maple♥legsMischief brewing 22:28, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

sorry i have to use iaza. Wiki has a goofy glitch right now.

Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 22:57, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

Fill in those empty pixels and blur the shading a lot, mainly around the edges. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:41, 04, 04, 2012

Erase the waste around the image. LeafyAbsolute maniac 15:36, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the black spots on the image. —.neha it's that gloom boy season. meh Cloverstar Let the leaves fall 19:03, April 6, 2012 (UTC)Eaglewater

I'm sorry, but that's not 80% done. The lineart's blurred, there's almost no shading, and she looks gray, when she should be white. I propose an auto-decline of this image. What do the rest of you guys think? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 05:05, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Auto-decline, sorry, Eagle, but this really isn't 80% done.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:09, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Nobody seems to disagree with this being auto-declined, so I'll set this to auto-decline. Sorry, Eagle.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    21:04, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:35, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Rock Beneath Still Water (CG Alt) ~ Declined

[[]]In Moonrise, he is described as black. First Cave Guard!! Comments? Constructive criticism welcome. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 05:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading tons, lighten it on the legs, and the earpink is way to big and needs to be blurred.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:26, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:57, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the highlights a tad.Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:34, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink smaller. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:54, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think there should be a highlight on the lower haunch area. Could you add some shading? Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 21:37, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me, or did the earpink disapparate? O.o Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 03:00, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

My photo editor is being really annoying. Backround won't go transparent. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 03:20, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded By the way, you might have to click the image to see changes. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:48, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named And yes, there is a difference with the file names... Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 06:53, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-named. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:56, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image is really pixel-y. Fix it? Dazzy 07:10, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Fixed the pixels. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 08:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

The space inbetween the legs should be colored in. If it had nothing behind that spot, it'd mean he only had one leg. XD Paleggy Ship it 09:10, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can be such a derp sometimes. XD Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:12, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Crop it to make it thinner. Dazzy 13:58, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but when he was described as black, he was actually a rogue, not a cave-guard. I do believe this is declined, since he already has a rogue just needs to be redone. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 23:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Can I have the rogue then? Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 09:54, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

...>.> Cloudy already reserved the rogue. Dazzy 11:30, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I reserved tha main image, not the alt. She wants it, fine. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 11:32, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Paleh, not Cloudy x3 Dazzy 11:34, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Onion (Ro) ~ Declined

[[File:Onion.rogue.png]]Comments? {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 14:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Can you please reupload this, then link us to the version in the file history that will show? The images are being stupid and showing the old rogue. Thank you. Iveh Yo! 15:51, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

I reuploaded it but the changes still won't show. {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

20120402160200%21Onion.rogue.png {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 16:04, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black, and define the shading. Hmm... nice work, Aeris. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 17:40, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

REUPLOADED. If it doesn't show when I publish this I'll give the picture. {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:46, April 2, 2012 (UTC) {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 17:50, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the black a little more. User:~Leafy~/Sig 18:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC) {{SUBST:Nosubst|Username:AerisFF7/Sig}} 18:24, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Darken it even more. You'll not destroy anything with it. LeafyAbsolute maniac,18:57,April 2,2012 (UTC)

Work on it or it will be declined LeafyAbsolute maniac,17:49,April 6,2012 (UTC)

Since the last upload was on the 2nd, this is declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over. Iveh Yo! 18:34, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Bone (RO) ~ Declined

[[File:Bone.rogue.png]] Bone, Scourge's deputy. I tried to make him look like the one in the manga, and I don't think he looks too bad. I also thought that, as Scourge's second-in-command, he would have the same dog-tooth claws as his leader. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:15, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you add the claws to the back paws too?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 18:27 Mon Apr 9

Oblivion already has this reserved. Unless her reservation ran out, then this will have to be declined, sorry! Iveh Yo! 18:28, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yeah, I checked and her reservation hasn't expired. I'm sorry, but I have to decline this :S Iveh Yo! 22:21, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Creekfeather (A) ~ Withdrawn

[[File:Creekfeather.apprentice.png]] Finally. I've been /so/ lazy about this...anyway, comments? :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:30, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Straighten out the stripes like his other images, fill in the entire ear with earpink as it seemed to blur away from the lineart, lower the opacity on the earpink, and define the shading on the tail and face/neck. 23:08, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing to work on another charart.~ And I really don't like the pattern anyway. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 12:47, April 7, 2012 (UTC)</small> </small>

Yellowfang (Ro) - Declined

[[File:Yellowfang.rogue.png]]Any comments on improvement ? Makimotto 11:00, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Wrong file name. Honestly, I don't see what's so hard about re-uploading over File:Yellowfang.rogue.png. oblivionAudience? 11:01, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ May the odds be ever in your favor 13:32, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

It's fine...It looks cool this way honestly. I think that shading should be artist choice. Shading can be hard or soft, you know.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    13:37, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

You're a kit so this is under evaluation. I think this is over 80% All of the colors are right, it's the right size, and there is no blurred lineart from what I can tell. Just add the line on her muzzle like the rest of her images and make the lineart on the ear a pixel bigger. This looks wonderful!  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:41 Mon Apr 2

Agreed. Makimotto will become an apprentice of PCA, and the heading is changed to For Approval.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:17, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

No, she had shading like this before, and that's why her images were redone, unless you want to revert all of her new images to the old version. So, as nice as it looks, you need to blur the shading. Iveh Yo! 15:55, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Or the other images could get a shading tweak. Honestly, I like this version very much. Really well done. Just try to match the scars on the other images. There's no fur missing there. Shelly For a limited time only 16:20, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

While I like this shading, Ivy's right, we already tweaked her images before to get rid of it. It'd be pointless to tweak again, so please make it match. Paleggy Ship it 21:38, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

Ok, the reason why this may look not blurred is because I added someshading where her fur would be all scragley. I tried to blur it really good without the whole light source disappearing. I also was going to add the line, but it kinda weird, but I can understand that you won't them to all look the same. I tried to Line up the scars, and a few are off, so sorry about that too. If you can't see it, here Makimotto 22:44, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

No, we want the straggly fur to be gone. As we said, her other chararts were tweaked to get rid of that. Blur the shading so it's smooth, not showing the fur. And I'm not sure you're understanding what we mean about getting rid of the lineart on the scars, but I don't know how to explain..... Paleggy Ship it 23:14, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

K, I can get it gone... I just wanted it to look good, But I'll change it. And I didn't even see the part about getting rid of the lines. But ok, I'll do it. Makimotto 23:39, April 2, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto


Makimotto 00:25, April 3, 2012 (UTC)Makimotto

Blur the shading more.Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 09:05, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blend it, too.^^ Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 15:51, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Love it! I think there is just a bit of gray lineart on the ears, sorry if I'm mistaken. Mistypebble 02:59, April 7, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    15:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink and scars a bit less neon~

This is delcined due to lack of work. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 02:33, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (D) - Declined

[[File:Squirrelflight.deputy.png]] Squirreldeputy! Getting those stripes the right colour was a pain... oblivionAudience? 01:02, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Make the torn ear more like the warrior. -steals- Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 01:08, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. It's there, I promise xD oblivionAudience? 01:53, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Could you smooth outh the floofs to more resemble the warrior? Don't have them stick out as much, but have them laying on each other... if my explination is made of too much fail, feel free to ask for a redline. Shelly For a limited time only 01:55, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

This is beautiful! I can't tell if there's a stripe above her eye or not and define the ear-pink. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:05, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Mind if I suggest adding a scar to her stomach? In Eclipse, her stomach was so bad she had a scar. (From what I remember she did, which is why she can't have kits.) Silverhmm 21:27, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Okay, I'm leaving very soon and I'm almost positive I won't have time to work on her until I get back on the thirteenth. All I'm asking is: please don't decline her. I worked hard to get her and I wouldn't want her taken away just because I'm going to Europe. It's not like I'm disappearing on your guys; you know where I am, and you know I don't have access to a computer or likely any Internet at all. Besides, we're in no hurry to get her approved, at least as far as I know. So, just... let her be, okay? -puppy dog eyes- oblivionAudience? 01:24, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

This image is not to be touched until Oblivion gets back. Anyone that does will face my wrath. She earned this image the proper way, so it's hers. Putting on hold until she gets back. Jayce READY STEADY GO! (  ) 14:47, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

After discussing this with Cloudskye and getting Scarlet's approval, we've come to the decision that this image will be treated with the same rules every other image is treated with. There is no special treatment for anyone no matter the circumstances, least of all on such a coveted image. If this image is not updated within 7 days, it will be declined and whoever wants it at that point will be allowed to do it if they reserve if first.

However, please note that there are to be absolutely NO COMMENTS asking for or claiming the image. Please follow proper PCA ettiquite when commenting: no repeating a critique someone else has made, no flooding. Just comment as normal. Thank you. Shelly For a limited time only 23:31, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but I need to decline this because it's been a week. Anyone can take over.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:49 Tue Apr 10

Molepaw (Alt. A) - Auto-Declined

[[File:Molepaw.apprentice.alt.png]] He was said to be brown and white, not brown and cream. I thought that was big enough to get an alt, since the original Molepaw image was definitely not brown and white. I tried to use Twi's markings, but they're not exact. Comments? c: Spark Love me some chocolate~! ♥ 19:48, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Even if he does get an alt, it looks like you just changed the colors on the other image which you can't do. If another SM agrees with me then this will be declined or change it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:53 Wed Apr 11

I'm sorry, but this isn't 80% done. First, the image doesn't even look like it's the proper size, and the entire image is blurred. In fact, it looks exactly like his apprentice image, only tweaked a bit. Jayce READY STEADY GO! ( 19:53,4/11/2012 )

I think we should decline it LeafyAbsolute maniac,20:09,April 11,2012 (UTC)

Changing heading to auto-declined. If any user wishes to speak up against this, they may. Jayce READY STEADY GO! ( 20:31,4/11/2012 )

Molepaw (alt.A) - Declined

[[File:Molepaw_(OTS).apprentice.alt.png]]Nothing special, i used earpink colours and brown from his original apprentice..I dont like him, what do you think? LeafyAbsolute maniac,15:03,April 12,2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:45 Thu Apr 12

This is declined. Nowhere does it say that a user loses their reservation if a project is declined due to not being 80% done. Technically, you stole this from Sparkleaf, as she it still allowed to post her redone image within the time limit. Jayce READY STEADY GO! ( 16:01,4/12/2012 )