Cherrytail (KP) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Cherrytail.kittypet.png]]Patches needed to match more lol. OA's=Maplefern (I think? xD), and a redo from me. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a tad? :33 Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:59, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Ima withdraw this to hopefully get something else. ^^ Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 01:13, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Ferncloud (Ki) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Ferncloud.kit.png]] Needed darker shading. OA was Dawnfeather with a tweak by Icestorm123. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:12, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Silverhmm 23:18, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

And darken it.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    01:34, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Well all her images were nominated to be tweaked to have stripes on the legs, so maybe add some while you have this up? Paleggy Ship it 09:26, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

And the face and tail if you want. Shelly For a limited time only 12:33, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. I'm baad with stripes :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:44, March 29, 2012 (UTC)

I could add them in for you instead if you want. After all, you only took this on to do the shading. If not, could you make them a bit more like the stripes on her brother? Shelly For a limited time only 01:42, March 30, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm, can you Shelly? I don't want to waste time trying to get them right. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:50, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

My pleasure. I re-uploaded it, here's the changes since they won't show regularly: 20120402190120!Ferncloud.kit.png Shelly For a limited time only 19:02, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste down by her paw on ---> side. Silverhmm 20:45, April 2, 2012 (UTC)

The lineart also seems a little thick on her left hind paw... Rainlegs 01:54, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. Thanks Shelly~ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:57, April 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's also waste on her paw on <-- side. Dazzy 13:23, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:39, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the queen. Paleggy Ship it 15:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this image has been up for approval for too long. It's going to have to be declined. Anyone who wants to can take over. oblivionAudience? 19:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Snake (BC) (Ro) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Snake (BC).rogue.png]] No! Don't look at my shame! D: comments?MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 20:45, April 8, 2012 (UTC) 16:44, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots. Fill in the rest of the ear with the earpink, and optional, but add depth to the legs (highlights, maybe). Are you a kit? If so this should be under evaluation. Keep trying, this is all right for a first attempt ^^Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:46, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the tail a tad, fill the ear with earpink and blur it, and add color to the nose. ~Fallen 22:04, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded: I changed it to short haired and made his pelt color lighter. I think I forgot the color to the nose... I'll get it later. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 23:08, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the base colour and make it short haired to match the other main images? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 22:16, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Add some more "highlights"/lighter parts, (you don't have to) on the face and tail. Just a preference, ignore this if you want. Dazzy 22:57, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light source, as it doesn't really make sence now. (Sorry if I'm wrong, and if this is sort of what Dazzle said :/) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:16, 09, 04, 2012

Make the teeth match his old collar, give shading to the collar, and color his nose. ^^ :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:39, 04 09, 2012

Reuploaded. Umm... I uploaded it wrong. I'll fix it. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 16:43, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. It was a little hard to get the collar, bu I got it. I colored in the nose too. :3. Hopefully this is more than 80%. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:33, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

I'm not sure this is 80% done. However it's fairly close, so you get a week to make it 80% complete, otherwise it'll be declined. Paleggy Ship it 19:04, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Guys, I don't understand. I reuploaded it yesterday. Why aren't the changes showing? Maybe my kindle is screwed up. But the new one was on here yesterday, but when I checked the file page or whatever, it has his old rouge picture over the original one. I'm so confused. Anyway, my dads not letting me use the laptop, and I said on the vacation list I might be back on the weekend. Does that mean I cant become an apprentice? D: MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 22:31, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and smooth out the edges--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the edge of the earpink and fill in the nose. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 23:25, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

One of the dog teeth seems to be sticking out of his chin. Unless its supposed to be like that (which I doubt), please fix that. Also, there seems to be a black pixel right by that tooth near the bottom. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 16:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

May be my computer, but shading seems kind of flat. Maybe looking at the apprentice tutorials may help, though shading placement is the artist's choice. Maybe tone down the highlights a tad. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Also, the highlights seem a bit confined to that one space on the back. Blur them, maybe add a highlight to the chest and haunch to give it more depth. Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. Keep trying, I think you're getting the hang of this ^^ And there's two black pixels on the collar that I don't think are supposed to be there. Fill them with the color of the collar (orange). Add some depth to the eye, too :/ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:33, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste on the ear. Also, on the bacl and tail, and I think the back front leg is missing lineart. Tone down the highlight on the haunch, or tone u the others to match it. When you reupload/redo an image, please tell us. It just helps us know when you've changed it. Keep trying. You'll get it sooner or later ;) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:50, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but this is declined. You had a week to get the image up to 80%, and sadly, it's not. Jayce ( 19:44,4/15/2012 )

I'm gonna take over. User:WooWoo/Sig 19:47, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyfern (Alt.Ki) DeclinedEdit

[[File:Honeyfern.kit.alt.png]]Cam's tired : / and her pixlr's being a pain in the tail end, so her uploads will probably be messy

She was originally described as a pale bracken-colored tabby in Sunset, and a few times after, I believe : / so that would technically deserve an alt, yes? Comments will be appreciated c: Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:40, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Pale bracken colored is basically pale brown, which is the same as her description. Cloudy agrees, though she sent me to do her work. :P Declined unless anyone else disagrees. Sorry Ivy. Paleggy Ship it 01:51, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hm... I'm not sure. Brown is brown, like in her charart, but there's a difference between brown and bracken. Honeyfern's charart is brown. I looked at Oakhearts alt warrior image and it was different from Honeyfern's color, and it said he was mistakenly decipted as bracken colored. I looked at both the images for a long time before I decided they weren't very close. Just my opinion : / Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:58, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Hm. It also said her charart was light brown, not pale, and it looked more brown than tan (which bracken-ish cats color usually is) Tawnypelt's bracken alt and Oakheart's bracken alt look different from Honeyfern's kit image : / feel free to disagree, but this is my opinion on the subject Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:09, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Doesn't matter if the two images aren't similar, the colors themselves are two close. You can make two colors very different if you want, but that doesn't mean they should get an alt. for instance you could make ginger very different from orange if you really wanted to. Everything has shades. But this is still a synonym for brown, and therefore, no alt. Paleggy Ship it 02:11, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Oh and pale and light are the same thing. *didn't see that post until now* Paleggy Ship it 02:13, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Darn. Okay then :( Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:13, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Minnowtail (Alt. A2) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Minnowtail.apprentice.alt2.png]] I think I made her too dark >m< I shall fix that.... Anywho, she was described with a dappled pelt~ Comments? 23:14, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, especially on the back ear. I love it! 8DDD User:WooWoo/Sig 23:17, March 17, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded, changes arent showing :c 00:08, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Define the nosepink. Looks pretty! 8D  ☯Stoneclaw☯    08:13, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading on the face just a tad. Nice job, Fallow. Jayce (  ) 11:15, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Beautiful, Fallow! C: Define the earpink. Mistypebble 14:47, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ Thanks everyone ^^ 16:58, March 18, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the belly a tiny bit? :3 Ivyheart =P 04:14, March 20, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the face, too. ♫Purplemoon♪ Happy St. Patricks Day! Good luck! 11:23, March 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded~ 16:27, March 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch and tail shading just a tad? :3 Mistypebble 14:46, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

This is great and all, but who says that was a mistake? It was never stated otherwise, she could very well be a dappled dark gray cat.... Paleggy Ship it 23:21, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

That's what I was thinking, I think that since she was only mentioned once it would be an alt but I think that this should be the main apprentice image and the warrior should be changed.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:27 Sun Mar 25

Paleclaw's right. We're already having a discussion about partial-description alts, and this would be partial. She already is gray, in this image, just mentioned with dapples. All cats have some kind of pelt pattern, for what I know, but it just may not be visible. Plus, dapples don't make much of a difference, sorry.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:34, March 25, 2012 (UTC)

Then how come cats like Lilystem get an alt. for being described as a tabby? I think this should stay. --Leafstrike-- 01:53, March 27, 2012 (UTC)

Perhaps Lilystem should be tweaked to a tabby then. Either way, I thought we decided something about what gets alts and what gets added? Didn't we decide that if it's completely plausible then it'd be added? I can't quite remember, but I thought that's what we worked out. Meaning this alt should be declined and all her images tweaked. Paleggy Ship it 00:02, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Isn 't this sirt of assuming her description? We don't know for sure that she's actually a dappled cat, and it could very well be a mistake. But in any case, if this goes ahead, cats like Mudclaw would have to be tweaked too, and it seemd really unecessary. *Bad at making points* Skt Raxacoricofallapatorian 00:07, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

Skt's right. This is assuming descriptions, something we don't do here. If we don't assume with genders and eyelashes in the manga, then why are we assuming descriptions? I say we keep it, and if we find out later that she dappled, then we can delete this and tweak the others. It's not partial, honestly. We know she's gray. For all we know, the dappled coat could be an error. Jayce (  ) 06:28, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

I've decided to place this image on hold until a final decision can be made. This is not to be declined, approved or archived until said decision is reached. Jayce (  ) 07:05, March 28, 2012 (UTC)

-didn't notice Misty left a comment- Should I reupload or wait until we figure out what we're doing with her? 13:44, March 31, 2012 (UTC) Reuploading. Cloudeh told me to start up the discussion so... I think this should stay an alt. It was the only time she was described with it, and she has never been described with dapples in the alligiances. 18:08, March 31, 2012 (UTC)

I think she meant start it on the talk page. XD But really, since when do we not add descriptions purely cause they were only mentioned once? If we did that, Spottedleaf wouldn't have half her description, Firestar wouldn't have a pale belly, Brindleface wouldn't be mottled, so and and so forth. We shouldn't assume it's wrong just cause it was only mentioned once. Paleggy Ship it 08:44, April 1, 2012 (UTC)

lighten up the shading on the ear.User:Brackentail/siggie 01:22, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Since the light source is coming from over there---> the shading would be darker. I'd rather not change it :s 15:28, April 8, 2012 (UTC)

Fallow asked me to decline this. I don't think it should go up again until her description is confirmed.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:53 Sat Apr 14

Violet (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Violet.rogue.png]]This was unbelieving hard to do. I am no good at tabbies xD. Suggestions for improvements, please! Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 12:41, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Color the nose. :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:40, 04 09, 2012

Upload it over the old image and match the desing with other images, you cant just change the patch desing. I dont understand why you choosed so hard cat to do. LeafyAbsolute maniac, 14:30,April 9,2012 )UTC)

Trololol I was actually planning on doing this to save someone XP Define the tail shading. Although this does look over 80%...  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 14:57 Mon Apr 9

Add the pale belly, muzzle, chest and paws C: --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 23:49, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Re-named and re-uploaded. Too many changes to list. xD Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 04:22, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful!! Maybe blur the earpink and the sharper streaks of white on the stomach :3--RavenBeeeeeees 04:35, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading some more. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 05:36, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I think it is too dark xD Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 06:02, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes still don't match. Paleggy Ship it 12:34, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink a bit less neon--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:39, April 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Some of teh earpink looks like it's leaking out of the ear a little x3 Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:13, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Lessened ear-pink and made it less neon. Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 01:40, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:39, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Berry Midnight Monster's Parade! 02:59, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Define the stripes, make them darker and shorter like on her kittypet version. LeafyAbsolute maniac 12:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

She looks so wonderful! <3 I would suggest blurring the darker shading quite a lot. --RavenBeeeeeees 15:23, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

This isn't bad, especially when you're trying to match a Mounty. Smudge the stripes more. Dazzy 22:49, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure this is over 80% done. This is now for approval and Berryflower will become an apprentice.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:33, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 01:16, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Re-uploaded BerryflowerIma like a field of BERRIES!! 05:26, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

It still doesn't match. Please match it. Paleggy Ship it 22:31, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Get rid of the white pixel on her front leg. Silverhmm 11:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you tint the shading with a warm color? Iveh Yo! 02:44, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

you still working on this? Paleggy Ship it 03:01, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Jayce ( 03:51,4/20/2012 )

Snake (BC) (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Snake_(BC).rogue.png]]Woo lost her reservation, comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:06, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

This needs to be named Snake (BC).rogue.png. You can re-upload over this file. Also, define the shading. Jayce ( 03:10,4/18/2012 )

Blur the tail shading a little bit. Ivyheart =P 03:12, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Also, as I'm re-doing the loner image to match Ice, please make the pelt color this hex code --> #505050 . Jayce ( 03:18,4/18/2012 )

Never mind, ignore that. Jayce ( 03:20,4/18/2012 )

Okay, reuploaded changes might not be showing Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:28, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur all of the shading more please? Iveh Yo! 19:32, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:29, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

is it just me or does the color look blurred near the bottom e.e --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 01:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I thought we decided these guys had a false description? Paleggy Ship it 03:00, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

What do you mean by "false description"? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:02, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

It means it's not a real description. Dazzy 08:15, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Meaning they're not really gray. So I'm declining this. Paleggy Ship it 14:05, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Duke (KP) ~ Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Duke.kittypet.png]] Woo 8D I know the earpink is weird, I'm fixing it in a moment...the collar, ears, and eyes are the exact same, so I'm not changing them. Comments? :3 User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 17:12, 04 11, 2012

The eyes look kinda pixily, make the eye gradient smooth Iveh Yo! 17:16, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the nose pink, I can't really see it.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 17:17 Wed Apr 11

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 17:37, 04 11, 2012

Maybe make the black on the haunch curve a bit more? :3 Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 10:04, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I fixed the tail stripe to make it flow with the pelt more. Skt, I can't, because I'd have to paint over or remove what's on the haunch now, remember how I blurred so it looked the same, and then it would curve...I tried, and it looked unnatural. Sorry Dx User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 12:00, 04 12, 2012

Psssh, no apologise, twas just a suggestion. ;3 Make the nose pink a little less neon, and define the earpink a smidge? Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 12:39, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 13:32, 04 12, 2012

Define the shading towards the end of the tail Iveh Yo! 00:30, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 20:36, 04 15, 2012

I just noticed that the tag looks out of place with the studs coming out of the collar, could you remove it and add another stud? Iveh Yo! 23:50, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

This is optional but the ears look too straight cut not like a cat clawed them maybe make them more natural... I don't know how to explain. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:35, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black patch on the tail reach the actual sides, there's a thin piece of white between the top of the tail and the patch. Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 10:44, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

I lost all of my charart files on my -withdraws- ene User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:14, 04 19, 2012

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:29 Sat Apr 21

Feathertail (A) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Feathertail.apprentice.png]] She needed a plumy tail. 8D First tweak~ *is failed* Dazzy 23:39, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Oh, and the OA was Maplefern, with a tweak by Rainwhisper, a redo by Mounty, and another redo by Leaf-storm. Dazzy 00:57, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Smooth out the lineart, make the "bristles" (don't really wanna use that word, but I can't think of anything better) smoother and more flowing (think Squirrelflight but smoother; or maybe like a very silky, fluffy fox tail), and round the tip and make it "arch" a bit. It kinda looks like her tail got very surprise/scared xD ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 01:01, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. So, something like this? :3 Dazzy 09:53, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me, or does the lineart on the tail look thicker than the rest of the image? If so, could you thin it out one pixle. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Dazzy 07:29, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Could you make it match the warrior a bit better? Paleggy Ship it 14:10, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Curve the tail a bit more to match the original apprentice blank and have most of the pluminess on the bottom of the tail instead of the top. I think this will help. Shelly For a limited time only 21:00, April 16, 2012 (UTC)

Withdrawing. I lost the old .psd and the new lineart I made won't open in art programs. Dazzy 07:36, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:31 Sat Apr 21

Minty (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Minty.rogue.png]] Okay, I'm rusty at this, and fail at shading, and feel like I'm about to do somethinf wrong, I will add shading after I'm done testing with it, seeing which seems more normal, and yes there is shading on the tail, and yes, I tried to get as close to the original image as possible, and yes, I suck XD, please don't hurt me *hides* Because I'm sure I'm doing this wrong XD. I amYour worst nightmare 23:16, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Btw, added note, someone might have to help me with the shading XD I amYour worst nightmare 23:18, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading more, make the ear pink less neon, and lighten/blur the highlights. Not bad ^^. Silverhmm 23:19, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lol what shading, the only shading on the charart is the tail XD, and by less neon you mean darken? And alright, going to blur the highlights now XD. I amYour worst nightmare 23:21, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I added shading I amYour worst nightmare 23:26, April 3, 2012 (UTC)

Rename it File:Minty.rogue.alt.png? <3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:26, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

I think that's what it is. I amYour worst nightmare 00:29, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Oh wait, alright, nvm XD I amYour worst nightmare 00:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded I amYour worst nightmare 00:33, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

It's not an alt..... rename it just plain Minty.rogue.png Paleggy Ship it 00:55, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I amYour worst nightmare 01:01, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

No capitalization. Minty.rogue.png exactly. Paleggy Ship it 02:34, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Well you could have said that the first time. I amYour worst nightmare 21:38, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Not bad, Birdbrain. Blur the highlights. Jayce (  ) 23:06, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded blurred highlights, but now the shading looks seriously messed XD. I amYour worst nightmare 23:30, April 4, 2012 (UTC)

You can redo the shading if you want, but blur it too, and the highlights. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:14, 05, 04, 2012

Alright, I'll have to redo the whole image then, because this was made on Pixlr X3, I'l have to do it after the weekend though, because I'm going to my trailer. --I amYour worst nightmare 23:49, April 5, 2012 (UTC)

Ugh, can someone help me with the shading? I'll do the rest x3 I seriously suck. I amYour worst nightmare 00:08, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I think.... I think if you let someone take over or help you... you can't call the image yours anymore? You'll get it with practice... maybe look over the shading placement thingy in the apprentice tutorials. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 00:12, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

I've tried that, nothing works, I'm just naturally sucky at shading I amYour worst nightmare 00:14, April 9, 2012 (UTC)

Hmmm... try redoing it, and maybe... the shading placement is your choice, but try to replica the highlight/shading placement on another cat. Blur the highlights, and define a light source. Maybe doing a quick check over the Apprentice Tutorials would help, even if you don't think so. Keep trying ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:21, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

The shading placements don't work for me, plus, Pixlr is weird, and I have no idea on why Gimp isn't liking me at the moment, and I was never good with shading, and I've been doing chararts for awhile (Not on this site, other wikis in general) shading is not, and probably never will be my strong suit X3. But fine, I'll try to redo it. I amYour worst nightmare 22:57, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, I think the shading looks fine the way it is, maybe I should brighten the highlights instead of stressing myself over shading, what do you guys think x3? I amYour worst nightmare 16:42, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

I think it looks fine, just smooth out the edges and blur it a bit more--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:26, April 11, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

The shoulder highlight seems to be in the wrong spot, I would move it a tad to the right. Also brighten it just a tad.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:34 Thu Apr 12

I don't think the highlight on the end of th' tail is supposed to be there. It's not there on any of her other images. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:11, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Back when I was still here, tail highlights were also supposed to be part of the image (Even though, that might have been at another wiki, but still, or someone told me to do that, I forget.) It's a habit, and habits are hard to get rid of. And Mountain, it used to be in the right spot, until I blurred the shading. I'll just brighten it, because it is in the right spot, just doesn't look like it I amYour worst nightmare 19:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this, Birdbrain? xD Jayce ( 03:13,4/18/2012 )

Declined due to lack of work Iveh Yo! 00:23, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:10, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Stick (Ro) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Rogueshortmale2.png]] This is Sticks (rogue) charart BluSkye~The Only Girl in the world 16:11, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

-Waste so much waste.

This is nowhere close to 50% complete. Declining and if another lead agrees, it will be archived. Blue, you need to practice more and then re-post him. And in the future, he should be named File:Stick (Ro).rogue.png. oblivionAudience? 17:03, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Shelly For a limited time only 17:04, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I agree with them. Maybe you should consider getting a mentor? --RavenBeeeeeees 19:39, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Icewing (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Icewing.rogue.png]]'Teldy told me that she does get a rogue images, so here she is! Comments for improvement?—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:06, April 24, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Um, I don't know where Atelda's getting this information from, but Icewing most definitely does not get a rogue image. We've agreed that only the cats who have betrayed their Clan by going against it get one. Icewing was unaware of the intentions of the Dark Forest cats; she thought she was doing it for the good of her Clan. Doesn't sound like a rogue to me. Declining this and anyone who disagrees, feel free to speak up. Loonie 19:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Agreed. Icewing was against the DF before the battle even began. She shouldn't get a rogue image. Only those cats that we know sided with the DF. Shelly For a limited time only 19:14, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

This is what she said Atelda: Oh, wait, yes. Nevermind, I wasn't aware that we'd agree to that but then yes, Clan cats who went to the DFs get rogue chararts.--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 20:19, April 24, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

No, Icewing doesn't get one. She was being manipulated by the DF cats into thinking she was helping the Clans. The same could be said for Beetlewhisker and Ivypool. She doesn't get one. The rogue thing is for those who were actually part of the Dark Forest, like Snowtuft, Redwillow and Antpelt. Jayce ( 20:27,4/24/2012 )

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:58 Wed Apr 25

Moss (Lo) (KP) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Moss (Lo).kittypet.png]] I couldn't tweak that. Heck, I couldn't even get the lineart on another layer without taking half the image with it. OA was Ashshadow. Jayce ( 23:44,4/22/2012 )

Blur the highlights and define the earpink. Mistypebble 01:16, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. The highlights are fine, imho. Jayce ( 01:55,4/23/2012 )

This was redone by me Skye, you know that right? I redid it about a month ago, it was just under the wrong file name. Silverhmm 10:49, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Then explain to me why in the world the old file is still on the character page? No, I didn't know. Seems someone didn't upload under the correct file like they were supposed to. Jayce ( 14:33,4/23/2012 )

I tried to make the file name the same one as the one on her character page, but it wouldn't let me. So then someone said they would fix it, and never did. Silverhmm 20:03, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

All you had to do was re-upload, Silver. It's not that hard, honestly. Added to the fact the image sat around for at least a month without anyone doing anything with it and you didn't even have the image on your user page.... <sigh> I'll be asking Scarlet what to do about this, since technically, you (or whoever took care of that image issue) didn't follow the proper instructions... Jayce ( 20:06,4/23/2012 )

Withdrawing 'cause I'm not in the mood to fight over a silly pixel. Silver, just re-upload over this file. >.> Jayce ( 17:24,4/25/2012 )

Archiving. Paleggy Ship it 15:59, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Jagged Rock Where Heron Sits (Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

First one. *Crosses fingers* =P ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 18:58, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...not bad, apprentice. Darken the shading, define it and blur it, as it's a little blotchy. I'd say this is 80% done. Changing heading to "For Approval", and I'll make you an apprentice. Jayce ( 19:03,4/27/2012 )

Upload it over the old file. File:Jag.rogue.png  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:21 Fri Apr 27

Fixed the file link for you, Mounty. =P Jayce ( 19:22,4/27/2012 )

Umm...I guess this has been done already. I tried to upload it after I fixed the title, but then this popped up... ϚίĿʋεʀϝƪσώȅƦ Live like there's no tomorrow! 20:14, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Yup, it's been done. Looks like somebody forgot to add it to the page. This'll have to be declined, sorry Silver. Paleggy Ship it 20:38, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tangle (Ro) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Tangle.rogue.png]]It feels awesome to have another charart up for approval. ♥ Comments? Thistle. 06:14, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

8D Thistly~! You're finally uploading again<3 Define the shading on the legs and tail~ Dazzy 08:46, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Thistle. 08:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistly<333 Define the earpink a bit. I love this<3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 10:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thistley <3333 8D. Smudge the stripes a tad more? Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 12:53, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

This is so much btter than mine <3 Define the earpink. Silverhmm 15:18, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thansks guys. :) Re-Uploaded Thistle. 17:45, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Do you think you can make it match the older rogue a tad more? Just a tiny bit? But that's your choice. Silverhmm 19:48, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

I will have to say no, sorry, As the aritst this was just my way of trying to making it mine, as yours was to you. :3 Thistle. 21:28, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Very good Thistley! Define/sharpen the stripes a bit, and make the earpink color match the elder image. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:42, 14, 04, 2012

Nicely done. Darken the shading some more.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:20, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Well I was actually wanting to ask if the elders' earpink could be tweaked...because it's sort of an un-natural color. And Re-uploaded. Thistle. 22:09, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the face shading. (If you do nominate it, I can do it because I have the .xcf/.pxd file.) Silverhmm 11:40, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Dang, forgot this. I'll Re-upload later today or early tomorrow~! Thistle. 17:55, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Uh, are you going to re-upload? It's been 10 days... o3o User:~Leafy~/Sig 13:37, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. Sorry, Thistle. =( Jayce ( 14:07,4/24/2012 )

May I take over this image?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:33, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

You don't need to ask. Just go for it and remember to reserve it. xD Jayce ( 00:35,4/26/2012 )

Okay, taking over.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:53, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry to be a bother, but Stoneclaw's already doing Silverhawk, and Fallow reserved it first so... ignore me if I'm wrong but yeah... Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:44, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Silverhawk is an original so it doesn't count as a redo for a rogue, which you can only have one at a time, but Fallow did reserve it first. Sorry Stone :c  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:00 Thu Apr 26

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:54 Fri Apr 27

Thornclaw (W) ~ Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Thornclaw.warrior.png]] Redone 'cause I hated it. And I'm actually quite happy about how he turned out w00t! Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:56 Sat Apr 28

Could you make him look less dappled? (sighs) I really likes his old images. I really love your style, Mounty, but... not every charart needs to be redone to look so hyper-detailed. This is nearly beyond the realm of possibility. I think you'd be fine with just going back to the old charart with a slight tweak to the stripes to suit your own preferences. I know you're the OA to the previous version of this image, but... Shelly For a limited time only 03:38, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

*sigh* I really liked it but whatever. I guess it didn't need it. I'll go revert it and take it off the list.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:53 Sat Apr 28

Archiving. Paleggy Ship it 04:18, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Honeyleaf (Lo) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Honeyleaf.loner.png]] Comments? ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:41, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a tad.Skt Knock knock 22:59, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

There's a bit of orange waste around the shoulder. Get rid of that. Sunnyfrost 00:03, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

It might just be my computer but could you define the stripes on the legs furthest from us? BerryGradients, gradients... 09:22, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think you already have an original charart for approval (shredtail) so... Correct me if I'm wrong, but yeah. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think it may be my broswer but the earpink seems a little neon. Tone it down a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:45, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Ivy's right, Scarlet. Regardless of whether Shredtail's a rogue or not, it's still an original image. Either this or Shredtail will be declined; it's your choice. oblivionAudience? 00:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

My bad <Derp Moment> I'll drop this one ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:01, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (Alt.MC) - DeclinedEdit

[[]] I'll take away the pale chest if needed. Redone for triangly stripes. I guess we aren't listing OA's anymore soo. Comments? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:54, 04 17, 2012

I thought Sky still had claim to this.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 22:18 Tue Apr 17

-sigh- If she does, I don't know. It wasn't reserved for her. I thought she was taking a break anyways? I could withdraw it. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:22, 04 17, 2012

Ha, I was planning to do it when I came back, but I'm not all that bothered. Have it if you want it. Skt Here. Yes. Right here. 22:56, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the shading? Also, add a stripe running down the back, just like the tail has one, and (if you want), can you move the first part of the stripe under the chin up, an connect it to the eye?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:37, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

When was she described as this? (just asking) And if you want her to have a paler chest, extend it at a top more. Mistypebble 02:09, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

make the earpink a bit bigger and blur it --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 02:31, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make this a lot brighter- she was described as pale gray. XD Ivyheart =P 02:49, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Added stripe, defined shading, lightened it...and I'll fix the chest and earpink now. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 10:09, 04 18, 2012

Make the stripe going down her back look less like shading. Silverhmm 18:16, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Still needs to be much paler Iveh Yo! 18:17, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:48, 04 18, 2012

Enlarge the earpink a tad. Silverhmm 22:15, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Make the stripes curve with the body more. Paleggy Ship it 23:19, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Is it just me or does the right front leg not have any stripes on it...? Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 10:38, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the stripes a bit? Ivyheart =P 01:42, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the pale belly and lower the opacity on it a bit. 11:37, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Redone...not much to say. :3 Comments? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 15:20, 04 22, 2012

This is just an opinion, but even thought we've approved images with this kind of tabby style, it looks more like mottled fur effects to me. Though, it might help if the stripes all didn't point in the direction of her tail Iveh Yo! 15:34, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Better? User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 19:15, 04 22, 2012

blur the shading on her back and neck --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:51, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Can you lighten her since was described as a pale gray tabby?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 19:55 Sun Apr 22

Re-uploaded. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:15, 04 22, 2012

Define the shading a bit and blur it. Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 01:30, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the gray more, and there's waste in the triangle between her hindleg and front leg, on the herbs, and on her chest. Also, can you make the stripes curve with her body a bit more, and make the zigzag down the middle less triangular? 05:09, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I can't change the stripes without remaking them...but I can try. :3 Also, I see the waste by the ears and tail. I'll clear it in the next reupload. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 23:56, 04 26, 2012

Make the earpink bigger. There's waste at the feet and back too.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 03:55 Fri Apr 27

darken the shading --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 22:49, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Erase the waste ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 03:58, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Changes aren't showing, I believe. User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 23:31, 04 28, 2012

If the changes are showing, clear the waste in the triangle between the legs...Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:46, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. This is beautiful, Mooneh! Sunnyfrost 00:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 20:20 Sun Apr 29

It's been two weeks since this was posted... :s Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 00:34, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

I'll have a try, if no one minds. C: Skt Like a baws 00:35, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Scourge (Ki) - WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Scourge.kit.png]] Redone because the shading and the paw was wrong (that's not why it was redone..x3) -gives thanks to my friend who watched and critiqued- ouo Comments? Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 21:24, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

-Feels special- lolz x3 I sorta missed the bell adding part, so can you add a highlight/shine to it and move it two or three pixels up a bit? ^~^

Make the white less grey, and define the earpink. Skt ANZAC day 22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Make the black a bit less pure black and define the earpink (Maybe... |D) Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 00:10, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Uh...maybe make the collar more curved towards the center. Dazzy 09:23, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I...have a bit of a history with losing files... x3 Yeah.......Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:41, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm...could I take over? Dazzy 22:17, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. oblivionAudience? 01:04, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? Jayce ( 09:35,5/2/2012 )

I'm withdrawing this...(again) to go find a different tweak. Whoever wants it can reserve it. Dazzy 22:12, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ro) ~ Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Blackstar.rogue.png]] Comments for Improvement? --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:20, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Could you define the highlights/shading so the white stands out? The entire pelt seems gray. Jayce ( 23:22,4/11/2012 )

Like that? Changes may not be showing though. --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:29, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Looks Wonderful! :3 There are a few areas of shading that you may want to blur (Around the belly area and around the shoulder) RavenBeeeeeees 11:42, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten up the whole image a tad. It still looks gray—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 11:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Define the scars. Silverhmm 17:59, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

D'awwww, I wanted this one Dx Darken the eye color a tiny bit, unless you took it from the leader '-' User:~Leafy~/Sig 21:44, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

And I think he needs a longer tail. User:~Leafy~/Sig 21:55, April 12, 2012 (UTC)

No he doesn't. Only cats like Tallstar, where it's a prominent feature, will get longer tails. Paleggy Ship it 14:08, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?20:23, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Define and smooth out the shading.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    06:26, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

@Paleh, his leader image was tweaked to have a longer tail. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:30, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

...... It was? e.e *facepalm* It shouldn't have been..... we discussed that before.... *sigh* Well if his leader image has it, I guess it should match... Paleggy Ship it 02:09, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

So I make the tail longer? --Cinder Real or Not Real?16:46, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Can you blur the shading too? Silverhmm 19:32, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the earpink a little bit, and define the shding on the back leg farthest away from us. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:42, April 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the back shading, and smudge the pelt up into the earpink. This is pretty! Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:08, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded DX this is terrible. --Cinder Real or Not Real?20:14, April 18, 2012 (UTC)

D'aww... Cinder, this is awesome! White cats are hard, don't insult your art. Blur the shading more, and define the shading on the backs of his legs (if any) and preference but to give it a bit more realistic touch, smudge up where the black meets teh white and then blur. Nice work ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:08, April 19, 2012 (UTC)

It needs to match the other images, so please don't smudge the black. Jayce ( 03:53,4/20/2012 )

Awww! This looks wonderful, Maybe make the scars and earpink a bit less neon. --RavenBeeeeeees 22:57, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded thank you all for your kind words ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:14, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and try to make the scars longer and sharper. Mistypebble 02:46, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the haunch shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 05:17 Sun Apr 22

blur the shading on his back --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:10, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Blur teh shading. (steals) X3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:26, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm so sorry for not re-uploading. I've just been really busy 'cause of school, trips and other stuff. I will re-upload tomorrow. Please don't decline this. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Also...I don't know, but could you possibly make the scars a bit thinner? Dazzy 12:23, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

The shading sorta looks bloctchy to me. Blur it, maybe? He's puuurdy. X3 MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:48, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Define the haunch and tail "highlight". WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:23, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? Jayce ( 06:49,4/30/2012 )

Blur the shading. BerryGradients, gradients... 10:14, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Berry, please don't repeat what's already been said. Dazzy 22:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Uploaded Sorry I'll fix the blotchiness. DX --Cinder Real or Not Real?23:27, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. ♫Purplemoon♪ ♪Reduce, Reuse,Recycle!♪ 11:20, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, I've been working on this image for over a month now, and I'm getting no where. I know that someone better can fix this up and get it approved quickly so I am withdrawing this. Anyone with a free project may take over. --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over. Jayce ( 00:46,5/3/2012 )

Buzzardstar (D) ~ Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Buzzardstar.deputy.png]] Kay, I'm not feeling my best at the moment. Please tell me anything that's off, because I can barely tell for myself right now. I'd save it for later, but that list needs to be gotten through. Shelly For a limited time only 03:28, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

I think there is too little stripes on the haunch and near the chest area, since more are supposed to be overlapping the pale chest markings. Mistypebble 13:38, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the earpink a bit more pink?—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 19:09, April 30, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Blur the stripes a little bit, maybe? Breezewhisker 04:33, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but could someone take this over in my stead? I need to leave tonight, and I'll be gone until Monday. Sorry! Shelly For a limited time only 20:32, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowflight (Lo) ~ For Evaluation Edit

[[File:Swallowflight.loner.png]]My First! Comments?DuckSplash

04:32, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I don't think he gets a loner image. He's a rogue. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:46, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

But he followed Honeyleaf, so he gets a lonerDuckSplash

05:16, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

There looks to be little or no shading. Add or define shading BerryGradients, gradients... 07:45, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, he would get one. Honeyleaf has a loner image for the same reasons. He was one of the SkyClan cats that left with her. If she gets one, so does he. _-_ Jayce ( 08:10,5/4/2012 )

I fixed the heading, as Ducksplash is a kit. Fix the eye and earpink so that the lineart isn't covered by colors. Dazzy 08:20, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Dazzle, in the future, let the leads handle the heading, okay? oblivionAudience? 10:28, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 10:43, May 4, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Erase the waste in the back and at the front of the head. Silverhmm 10:56, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt up into the earpink. And blur the shading lots Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:16, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded If I forgot something just sayDuckSplash

13:32, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I'm not sure this is over 80% done. There's little to no shading, the eye's messed up, and there's miscolored and blurred lineart. SMs? Opinions? Paleggy Ship it 14:23, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'd like to withdrawl this, I'm going to practice a lot more and maybe in a month or two try again with another character, but right now I agree with you^.DuckSplash

14:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

That's a very responsible action, Ducksplash. :) you know if you need practice or not...But if you really want to withdraw, may I take over if it is fine with you?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    14:39, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Yes you can and thanksDuckSplash

14:42, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

I'll archive this to save space. Jayce ( 15:59,5/4/2012 )

Tawnyspots (W) ~ Redone Edit

[[File:Tawnyspots.warrior.png]] OA was Darkhallows. Redone to match the deputy and elder, I believe. Comments? This matches so bad ;.; Yes I know I forgot the tufted ears...I'll add them later. ene User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 21:11, 04 29, 2012

Nice ^^ Define the neck shading.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 21:16 Sun Apr 29

Re-uploaded. Tufted ears. -dies- User:.Moonehpaw/Sig 22:44, 04 29, 2012

This still needs to match more. Lessen the black and make the tabby pattern match. :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:46, 30, 04, 2012

Still working on this Mooneh? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:15, 04, 05, 2012

I believe it's been a week since the last upload; declined due to lack of work. Anyone with a free project may take over. :s Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 20:09, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

I can take over c: jack never let go, loonie ❤ 20:12, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce ( 20:31,5/6/2012 )

Birchfall (Ro) - Declined Edit

[[File:Birchfall.rogue.png]]Hope I got the image the right size this time xD Anyway, since we're adding rogue images for DFers, I chose Birchfall. I colorpicked the stripes and pelt color from his warrior, as well as the earpink and eye color. I tried to use the same kind of tabby stripes, but not too sure about how they turned out. Comments? Spark Grease is the word ~ 23:36, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Birchfall didn't turn over to the DF like Redwillow. Sorry he doesn't get one. I'm declining this.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:38 Sun May 6

Snowbird (W) ~ WithdrawnEdit

[[File:Snowbird.warrior.png]] Simple shading fix. OA was Ashshadow. Comments?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:12 Tue May 8

Lighten the shading a tad~ Dazzy 07:35, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 13:49 Tue May 8

Mounty...I said I wanted this on the nomination... RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:30, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Ahhh I'm so sorry Rowan *dies* Here you can have it I'm so sorry DX  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:22 Tue May 8

Thanks Mounty, I'm takin' over guys 8D RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:24, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Swallowflight (Lo) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Swallowflight.loner.png]] Bah...This sucks. Comments?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:29, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the pelt color a smidge? :3 Rainlegs 00:32, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? Breezewhisker 00:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:41, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the "highlights" a tiny tiny tiny bit (or don't do it at all O3o) <3 this is beautiful. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:05, 09, 05, 2012

Wasn't he a rogue? oblivionAudience? 18:53, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

[shrugs] I was told that he gets a loner because Honeyleaf got one. o3o  ☯Stoneclaw☯    19:44, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

But he turned against his Clan... Even years after his death, he tormented Leafstar, and (forgets who it was) threw him off of her. He didn't seem to happy with Swallowflight, either. I dunno, I don't think he should get a rogue and a loner; it should be one or the other. But I'd like to hear what some others have to say. oblivionAudience? 19:54, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

At first I thought that the rogue was going to get removed, but yeah, I actually think he's a rogue.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    20:00, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Good point... I completely forgot about that incident in SD. o.o Jayce ( 02:17,5/10/2012 )

So I guess this is declined... I'm really sorry, Stoney, this is beautiful <3 oblivionAudience? 02:20, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Fallowtail (Q) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Fallowtail.queen.png]]OA was Nightfall and it needed to be redone because it didn't really look light brown, and shading issues. Comments? :3 Mistypebble 21:37, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading a bit. Silverhmm 22:42, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Misty, when Paleh nominated these images, she said she wanted to work on them... Jayce ( 23:11,5/9/2012 )

Indeed I did. I had first dibs on this image, and it hasn't been anywhere near a week, so I had plenty of time to reserve it. And since I did call it, I believe this'll be declined. Paleggy Ship it 23:13, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it will be. Guys, please check the archives first. x.x Jayce ( 23:17,5/9/2012 )

Redtail (A) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Redtail.apprentice.png]] He needed a fluffy tail :3 Latest OA was Iceheart22. Changes probably aren't showing. I feel it needs to be floofier... Silverhmm 23:56, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, it needs to be more floofier and possibly a tad spikier. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:30, 02, 05, 2012

Also, make the lineart a bit thicker, if you can keep the floof<3 Dazzy 11:39, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Oh my word...I killed his tail ;.; Silverhmm 20:44, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

some of the floofy parts looks blockisk, make it...less blockish? i don't know how to phrase that owo --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 01:32, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Those are more likely the spiky parts x3. I'll fix that though. Silverhmm 10:44, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 20:03, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Separate the floofiness so it pokes out on the sides and add more spikey bits. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:34, 06, 05, 2012

Reuploaded I tried to make one side spiky, and I left the other floofy. Silverhmm 12:25, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tail curve more? Skt Like a baws 22:04, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the tail less spikey and more floofy? 02:25, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded IT started to become floofy, and then this happened.... Silverhmm 11:27, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

It still needs to match more.. Also try to make the lineart just a tad bit more thick. Mistypebble 21:37, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

I'm really sorry, but it's been long over the week limit. Since this is only a tweak, it'll have to be declined. Sorry Silver. Paleggy Ship it 09:18, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Marshstar (D) - Declined Edit

[[File:Marshscar.deputy.png]]Okay I know this was origanally supposed to be a tweak, but in chat Cloudy said that if it was impossible to tweak it could be a redo, not sure if this is what she meant but this is how I did it and if you want me to just tweak it then I will. But the shading needed to be fixed, the scars needed to be redone, and the earpink didn't match. The OA was... Scarletwind I think. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:44, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the scars a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:32, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. Dazzy 22:05, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:45, April 28, 2012 (UTC)

Redden the earpink. Sunnyfrost 00:13, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

And define it. ^^ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:07, 29, 04, 2012

Define the shading. Mistypebble 13:59, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:59, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the chest/shoulder shading a bit more. Dazzy 09:57, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:11, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink.... Sunnyfrost 22:09, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Define the "highlights." --Cinder Real or Not Real?00:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:51, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Define the shading a bit more. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:38, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Brighten the earpink and scars a tad ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:47, 05, 05, 2012

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:18, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder shading~ 03:11, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, but this has gone over the two week limit. Declining. Jayce ( 23:15,5/9/2012 )

Never mind. I'm sorry... I can't think straight today. You still have a few days left to get this done.. Jayce ( 23:16,5/9/2012 )

Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:30, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you define the shading? Mistypebble 18:15, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Sharpen the scars. oblivionAudience? 22:04, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a lot. And just an fyi, you have until tomorrow to get this done, or it will be declined. Jayce ( 02:18,5/11/2012 )

Okay, now this is declined due to lack of work. Two weeks for redone image, Wild. Sorry. Jayce ( 17:22,5/11/2012 )

Bluestar (Q) - Declined Edit

[[File:Bluestar.queen.png]]Uhhh... I forgot...I hate solid colored cats... >.< OA was Mousetalon, with a redo by Ivystripe, and then another by Twee... ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:38, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

The base coat doesn't quite look the right color still.... Paleggy Ship it 03:31, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

When I redid the leader, I took the color from her father, Stormtail, and I tinted the shading blue. That should help some :3 Iveh Yo! 03:50, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the leg and back highlights a bit. And maybe the tail a little, too. (I think they're highlights.)
Thistle Oh, the implications.♥♥♥ 13:02, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading a little bit. Dazzy 12:26, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Tone down the earpink and blur them higlights. x3 Mistypebble 21:24, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

There's a little waste below the stomach. Silverhmm 21:50, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 02:30, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Tear the ear. Dazzy 03:08, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading lots more. --Leafstrike-- 18:24, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Okay... I'm gonna have a huge quitter moment but a) I hate this image, b) my blur tool won't blur the shading anymore, c) this'll take me much longer then the two week timespan d) I hate this image! So I'm withdrawing this. Anyone who wants this may have it. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 23:55, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take this. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:12, 28, 04, 2012</big>

Make the earpink more red. Sunnyfrost 00:11, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Uploaded - Meh, this is a fail. And Sunnyfrost, if someone has volenteered to take over an image and they haven't uploaded yet, please don't comment. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:07, 29, 04, 2012

Blur the mid-shading a bit, and get rid of the white specks on the tail and front paw. Paleggy Ship it 04:06, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Add the torn ear.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 00:46 Mon Apr 30

Reuploaded - -dies- Ew this image. Oh and I'll soon fix that black line from the tail to the haunch. x| ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:28, 30, 04, 2012

<3 Darken and blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:13, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded -  :O How can you like it?! D'awww Thanks. I hate the shading on this. >:/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:16, 03, 05, 2012

How could you not like this? Blur the belly shading~ Dazzy 09:55, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the base pelt a bit to match her other images. 20:41, May 3, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes probably aren't showing. :/ Thanks Dazzly and um... I think I blew the shading. o3o ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:25, 04, 05, 2012

Still a tad bit blotchy. Blur it, please. Jayce ( 16:14,5/4/2012 )

Reuploaded - Hope this is okay. My Guassian Blur must have crashed. >8C ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:58, 05, 05, 2012

Blur the belly shading. 21:47, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - -dies- Why did I leave the shading layer locked to transperent pixels? xD >>>.<<< Oh, hope this is better. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:50, 06, 05, 2012

blur the tail shading ^^; jack never let go, loonie ❤ 20:02, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the belly shading too~ 02:11, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - -thinks this is good- changes might not be showing. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:31, 07, 05, 2012

Blur the belly shading more please :P --Cinder Real or Not Real?01:29, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Lower the opacity on the highlights a smidge and define the highlight on the foreleg closest to us. 02:06, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Meh. Also I didn't use highlights on this (OwO) and I didn't really do anything with them, but if I still need to fix them please slap me in the face. x| ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 10:08, 08, 05, 2012

Blur the tail shading and define the tail shading along the lineart because its edging away when you blur it. Also, enlargement the ear pink a bit? 00:01, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploading - >8D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:28, 09, 05, 2012

Define the haunch shading a tad. Skt Like a baws 01:39, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - Changes aren't showing. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:15, 10, 05, 2012

Blur the tail highlight/lighter spot. 00:51, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - I honestly think this won't get finished, but I tried. DI Changes are here ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:44, 12, 05, 2012

Enlargement the haunches highlight/lighter spot 16:57, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded - ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:20, 13, 05, 2012

Changes = [1] ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:22, 13, 05, 2012

Maybe define the non-shaded part on her haunch...maybe. :3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 02:34, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, DJ, but it's been over two weeks since you started this image. I'll have to decline it. Jayce ( 04:32,5/13/2012 )

Sharpclaw (Alt D) ~ Declined Edit

[[File:Sharpclaw.deputy.alt.png]]Not entirely sure if he should get this, but theres a pretty big difference between solid russet and russet tabby, so I thought I'd try. :P Comments? I'm back! Miss me? xD 12:02, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Define the chest shading a bit and blur it. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:29, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

This is an alt for the graphic novels right? He already got one for that. Sorry I'll have to decline this unless there was some other point in the books where he was described as solid.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:32 Sat May 12

Declined Skt Like a baws 00:54, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Stonepelt (W) ~ Withdrawn Edit

[[File:Stonepelt.warrior.png]] Changes aren't showing. This had shading issues. Latest OA was Flamingomom3. Honestly, I feel the whole thing needs to match the elder more. If a SW or two thinks so two, I'll redo it. Silverhmm 11:18, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur that shading =D <3, and there's waste inbetween the legs. o3o RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:27, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shoulder highlight, rotate the eye depth so its darker on top and lighter on the bottom, thin out some of the stiipes, and makes the ear pink less lop-sided. 00:07, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Maybe darken the shading a little? Breezewhisker 00:48, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Can you make the stripes sharper and smudge the tail stripes? Mistypebble 21:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

So, does anyone think I should redo this to match the warrior? I striked it out to make it seem somewhat hidden x3. Silverhmm 22:31, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

I have no issue with you redoing it. Jayce ( 23:13,5/9/2012 )

I thought it was nominated for a redo? 0.o I could of sworn it was a redo, not a tweak.... well anyways yeah, I think a redo would be fine. Paleggy Ship it 09:25, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

I did nominate it for a reso. (I hope it was me, my memory is horrendous) so yeah, redo lol. Skt Like a baws 09:35, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

All the info said was that the shading needed to be redone. I'll work on that later, since I'm slightly busy at the moment. Silverhmm 11:19, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Silverhmm 23:43, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading and add some more under the neck. Breezewhisker 03:33, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Darken the shading and blur the stripes and earpink. Also, maybe darken the base coat to match the elder better. Paleggy Ship it 04:38, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste in between the haunch and front paws - that triangle. Erase it. x3 Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 01:25, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thicken the stripes on his head a tad. Mistypebble 01:36, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Thinnen out some stripes to match the elder. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:42, 13, 05, 2012

I'm sorry, but I'm going to have to get this with-drawled. School's gotten really busy, and I don't have that much time to work on chararts. Silverhmm 19:57, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce ( 15:37,5/15/2012 )

Plumwillow (Alt. W) ~ Under Evaluation Edit

[[File: Plumwillow.warrior.alt.png]]In After the Flood, page 60 she looks like a pale gray or plain gray cat, not a dark gray cat. Comments?☛Ducksplash☚ 22:50, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded The earpink and eyes didn't look right, changes can be seen [here.]☛Ducksplash☚ 22:52, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink and shading? ouo Twee♫ It's baaaackkk! ♫ 23:04, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes can be seen here ☛Ducksplash☚ 23:16, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink, make it smaller, and blur the shading. Dazzy 05:56, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded changes can be seen here.☛Ducksplash☚

07:01, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink a lot more, and center it in the ear. Dazzy 07:33, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Add a pupil in the eye. Berry♫Your presence still lingers here...♫ 09:17, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the shading. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 18:11, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Berry, eye is artist's choice. She can do what she likes. oblivionAudience? 18:44, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, but Loonie, there's no pupil. o.O I thought there //had// to be one. It just looks like a solid color, with no white at all. Jayce ( 18:45,5/15/2012 )

Reuploaded and redone changes are here. Also there was a pupil it just wasn't showing.☛Ducksplash☚ 20:07, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Darken, blur and center the earpink a bit and define the shading slightly. Mistypebble 20:37, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Expand the lighter shading. Breezewhisker 22:30, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

ReUploaded Changes can be seen here. Tried my best.☛Ducksplash☚ 23:55, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Gaussian blur the shading, define the eye values (depth, pupil and white) and blur/center the earpink. Dazzy 07:32, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

I think this over 80% complete in my opinion, so Ducksplash can become an apprentice. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:00, 16, 05, 2012

Reuploaded I also darkened the earpink, I'll revert if it looks bad. Changes are here☛Ducksplash☚ 20:27, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste everywhere. oblivionAudience? 20:53, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry to go against what you said, DJ, but I really don't think this is quote 80% done...and in my honest opinion, it doesn't even seem 70% done... There's almost no shading (and you can't really tell it's doesn't seem like there's a light source), the highlights look like white blobs, and they really stand out, I don't quite know what should be done though... I think we should get the opinions of the other leads before this is changed to "For Approval".

I don't hate you, Duck. But, I'm just critiquing art. <shot> Jayce ( 21:02,5/16/2012 )

Sorry Duck, but she's right. oblivionAudience? 21:04, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

I would like to withdrawl this, because I feel that a another person would be better at it, also I'd like to leave PCA, because I need to contribute to a few other wikis more, and I feel I'm better at other things, besides chararts.☛Ducksplash☚ 21:44, May 16, 2012 (UTC)

I'll take over, archive this, and remove you from PCA. Duck, that's very mature of you to to dedicate yourself to what you really want to do. I'm proud of you for making such a choice without a fuss. Jayce ( 21:47,5/16/2012 )

Bluestar (Alt. W) ~ For Approval Edit

[[File:Bluestar.warrior.alt.png]]She was decipted as a gray she cat with thin fur in Secrets of The Clans. Comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:46, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Make the ear pink more triangular and blur it a lot. Darken and define the shading as well. Jayce ( 03:47,4/20/2012 )

Reuploaded Toned down earpink Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:53, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

If it's thin fur, shouldn't it be shorthaired? Skt Wibbley wobbly, timey wimey 04:33, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, I would think so... Jayce ( 04:34,4/20/2012 )

You need to have a cite for this description in the trivia on Bluestar's page before you can make this. And there must be no question as to whether or not the cat in the image is Bluestar. In any case, if memory serves, most of the images in that book were grayscale anyway, and most didn't have captions explaining which cat was which. Declining unless you can provide the citation. Shelly For a limited time only 04:41, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but it wasn't a picture. Snowfur said something about her sister having thin gray fur in that story about Mosskit. Secrets of the clans, Page 77. No pictures, it specifically said she had thin gray fur. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

And I put a cite on the page before I made this. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:47, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

The cite was verified before she even had the image reserved. I checked myself. Changing heading back to "For Approval", since it was talking about Bluefur, and it had nothing to do with a picture. Jayce ( 14:07,4/20/2012 )

Blur the earpink, and make it less orange/reddish. Mistypebble 19:59, April 20, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:31, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Still blur the earpink. Dazzy 10:20, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:35, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. Nice Ivy ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:12, 23, 04, 2012

I don't know if it's just me but it seems that where the shading meets the highlights it looks blotchy. Blur it a bit please, unless anyone disagrees. --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:03, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm, I dunno if it's my browser, but it seems fine to me. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:39, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, it does look a bit blotchy to me too. Skt ANZAC day 23:00, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

Mossy like. X3 Blur the shading. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:30, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

It seems fine to me as well, however I would encourage you to blur and lighten the earpink. Atelda insert vague subtext here 22:20, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I think that we decided that Bluestar and all other bluish-gray cats wouldn't get alts. for being described as gray because blue is the scientific word for gray. Look at the talk page. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 17:04, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Though it's looking like the plain gray alts will be declined, yes, it's not decided yet Bluestar. Paleggy Ship it 20:51, April 27, 2012 (UTC)

Are you still working on this?--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:49, April 29, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Yes I am, thank you very much. Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:00, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading and enlarge the haunch and shoulder highlights. oblivionAudience? 23:34, April 29, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the earpink. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Make the earpink more gray. Dazzy 07:39, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:48, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Just take a blur tool and blur the's really hard-edged right now. Dazzy 22:06, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:08, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

You blurred some of the ear lineart instead of the earpink.... :S Sunnyfrost 22:19, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded that all? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:34, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

blur the highlight on her chest. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:07, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Define the light on the face, enlarge the flank highlight, and straighten out the ear-pink. ScarletwindFor the Glory of Humanity 22:37, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

You still working on this? oblivionAudience? 18:56, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:37, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Enlargen the shoulder highlight and make her less blue. oblivionAudience? 01:09, May 11, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the edges of the earpink. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 00:30, 12, 05, 2012

Blur all the places where it's blotchy. Especially where the shading meets the highlights. --Cinder Real or Not Real?20:01, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this Ivy? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:55, 15, 05, 2012

This is declined due to lack of work. Any user with the space may take over. Jayce ( 00:20,5/17/2012 )

I'll take over. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 00:44, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving. Jayce ( 00:50,5/17/2012 )

Tangle(Ro) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Tangle.png]]Here he is! I know there is waste. And, about the stripes, I wasn't sure how to do them .I blurred them and smudged them a bit. So, could somone help me if possible, Thanks!—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 21:56, May 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Rename this Tangle.rogue.png and make the background transparent. Blur the ear-pink, too. User:~Leafy~/Sig 22:00, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

There's a lot of waste from the stripes. Select the transparent part on the lineart layer, then go to the stripes layer and hit delete. oblivionAudience? 22:01, May 10, 2012 (UTC)

Is it me, or are the stripes //above// the lineart? o.o Jayce ( 22:03,5/10/2012 )

Sorry guys! I know it looks terrible. I will redo it. My mom shut down my computer this morning and I lost the .pxd file.--—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 22:06, May 10, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

I'm sorry, but this isn't 80% done, I think. The stripes are above the lineart layer, and they don't match his other image. But, you get the benefit of the doubt since you've gotten the shading down pretty well. You have one week to get this up to 80%, or it will be declined. Jayce ( 22:14,5/10/2012 )

Still working on this Moon? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:48, 15, 05, 2012

I am, but there is a problem. My computer crashed yesterday and now I can't work with images. All I can do is edit. I don't know when it will be fixed, possibly tomorrow but I am not sure. Please don't decline this! I had no control over my computer crashing. I am really sorry.—.neha it's that gloom boy season. 18:38, May 15, 2012 (UTC)Moonshine

Sorry, Moon, but this is declined due to lack of work. Anyone with space may take over. Jayce ( 00:45,5/17/2012 )

I'll take over and archive this. Jayce ( 00:50,5/17/2012 )

Dodge (Ro)~ Declined Edit

[[File:Dodge.rogue.png]]My first charart. Comments? If the picture isnt showing, its here. ~Fallen 23:23, April 10, 2012 (UTC)

Nice for your first charart. ^^ Blur the body shading a bit and slightly define the stripes. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 11:22, 11, 04, 2012

Define the stripes they are hard to see LeafyAbsolute maniac 12:18, April 11,2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Stripes defined and shading blurred more. Thanks, DJ :3 --~Fallen 20:30, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

Wow. This is pretty for a first. Define the earpink at the tips? Dazzy 22:47, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

The whole image has a yellow-green hue. Fix that?  ☯Stoneclaw☯    23:31, April 11, 2012 (UTC)

It doesn't look yellow-green to me ._.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:41 Thu Apr 12

I think it just looks yellow... Tone down the highlights(?) a bit. Mistypebble 00:07, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Fixed the ear pink. I did`nt use any layers, so I darkened the main color. --~Fallen 00:55, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights C: --Vitus Cheerful Murderer. 01:56, April 13, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Blurred shading, since I didnt have highlights, and blurred earpink a bit more. --~Fallen 03:03, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Desaturate the nose a little bit. It looks a little neon to me :P RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:59, April 14, 2012 (UTC)

Define the earpink, and I think if you darken or make the base color less yellowish, this could be just about 80% done, in my opinion. Mistypebble 03:18, April 17, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce ( 03:52,4/20/2012 )

Well, I don't know much about this but it's been over a week since Fallen's last upload, so I decided to take over. Comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 04:48, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

According to my clock, it hasn't been over a week...A few more hours.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    05:01, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Wiki time for me is 5:02 Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:07, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think it's been over a week, so this can stay. Lighten the earpink a bit to make it look less hot pinkish, there's waste under his belly, and I see a slash on his chest and his front leg farthest away from us, is that supposed to be there? And tone down the highlights a tad. Mistypebble 15:42, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

I think that slash thing maybe part of the stripes. Can you define the shading a little more?  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 15:53 Sat Apr 21

There is some waste in between the back left thigh and the under belly, Looks great! :3 --RavenBeeeeeees 20:36, April 21, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I redid the striping pattern. I might need to blur it some though :/ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:33, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Yes, please do. They're too sharp-edged, imho. Jayce ( 19:54,4/22/2012 )

Define the shading ;3 User:~Leafy~/Sig 20:06, April 22, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:44, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the stripes a lot. And it looks like they're on top of the highlights. Darken and define the shading as well. oblivionAudience? 19:00, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Hmm. If you're using layers I would suggest putting the shading layer on top of the stripes layer. o3o RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:21, 23, 04, 2012 20:21, April 23, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded I know there's a lot of waste Dx please cdoment on something other than that, and I know the eyes and ears are missing too... I'll reupload soon this afternoon. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 13:12, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

It's supposed to be named like Dodge.rogue.png So, basically, get rid of the extra .png =3 User:~Leafy~/Sig 13:34, April 24, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but those don't look like stripes....try looking at the tutorials for stripe ideas. Jayce ( 14:09,4/24/2012 )

Tons of waste around the art. Color in the eye and the nose. Add earpink. MossnosePeeta's #1 Fangirl 00:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I know there is waste, and I specifically asked if you would not comment on that since I stated I already knew about it and would be cleaning it up. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:59, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded That's better. I'll get the earpink and waste later Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:55, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

There's white specks on the tail, and the whole thing looks a little green. Paleggy Ship it 16:24, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

define the earpink c: --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 19:05, April 25, 2012 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but after discussing with another SM, we've agreed that this isn't 80% complete. You have a week to get this 80% done or it will be declined. Also, there's waste around the image, blurred lineart, and the stripes are triangle tabby stripes. Please fix that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:38, April 26, 2012 (UTC)

Also define the shading some. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:21, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Still working on this? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:20, 30, 04, 2012

Yes Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:25, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Reupload it then. Paleggy Ship it 12:29, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Redone Been practicing "Mountain tabbies" on my parents' computer, so hopefully this'll at least look decent. I looked at a picture of a real cat when I made this. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:53, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks mottled, please fix that. And I can't quite tell through the "mottles" but it doesn't look that much like a tabby right now.... it may after you get rid of them, I don't know. Paleggy Ship it 15:02, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

I'll change it if someone agrees with you, because it doesn't really look like mottles to me. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:31, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

The stripes don't, per se, but I think it's the grey underneath. He's just a brown tabby, so let's keep him that way, 'kay? There's also waste all around. oblivionAudience? 19:34, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

It looks gray cause of the highlights. I'll fix it c: Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:46, April 30, 2012 (UTC)

Actually, the stripes look like lines, and a bit mottled, I agree with Paleh. Please fix that.  ☯Stoneclaw☯    00:58, May 1, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit too. oblivionAudience? 11:16, May 2, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:40, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry; 'reuploaded trying a new pattern since the last one didn't look much like stripes... I'll revert if you disagree but I think this one's better. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:59, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

waste around the image c: --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 13:11, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Smudge the pelt into the earpink. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 21:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Evil waste around the image. Kill it? Dazzy 21:52, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

Gr. Vile, vile waste. Killed it... I hopes. reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:08, May 4, 2012 (UTC)

There's still some waste. Much better Ivy. :D ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:03, 05, 05, 2012

Still looks mottled... Paleggy Ship it 08:30, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded thanks DJ! :) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 12:40, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

There's waste all around the image. Silverhmm 13:08, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

define the stripes near the tailtip. --Eki A wonderful king ❤ 15:25, May 5, 2012 (UTC)

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:49, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

There's still waste all around. oblivionAudience? 15:51, May 6, 2012 (UTC)

It's still really dark. Try lightening the base coat.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 23:45 Sun May 6

There's smears of light brown everywhere on the base pelt. Dazzy 08:01, May 7, 2012 (UTC)

I'm having trouble telling the stripes apart. They look mottled. Please, change it. >.> Jayce ( 01:51,5/8/2012 )

Define the highlights.--Spottedstar42The WWiki vandals Must fall!!! 05:54, May 8, 2012 (UTC)

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce ( 02:20,5/10/2012 )

Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:09, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

There still waste. If your on GIMP, I suggest using the wand tool or setting that layer to "Multiply" or "Burn" so there isn't waste. 16:07, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Change the stripes, please. They look mottled, rather than tabby-like, and get rid of the lighter brown smudges. Dodge is a dark brown tabby. Dazzy 04:25, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

The light brown smudges are okay - most cats actually do have that, regardless of their pelt shade - but those mottles have to go. oblivionAudience? 19:15, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

The brown paws is going over the lineart, put the lineart layer above the lighter paws. (The front paws) ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:10, 15, 05, 2012

Please work on this or it will be declined. Jayce ( 00:21,5/17/2012 )

I'm sorry Ivy, but you've had to be asked if you're working on this way too many times. I believe we had a discussion before that if a user had to be asked if they were working on something too many times, it would be declined. SM's, second opinions before I decline? Paleggy Ship it 03:52, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Go for it. It would have possibly gotten declined due to the month limit anyways. This is just taking up space, since it's not being worked on constantly. Jayce ( 03:54,5/17/2012 )

Archiving.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary 04:00 Thu May 17

Onestar (alt.L) - DeclinedEdit

[[File:Onestar.leader.alt.png]] I'm pretty sure it was agreed on the talk page the the alt should be restored. Comments? ChanCharm 07:28, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

When I said that, I meant restore the image that was already approved... I don't think this is needed, sorry. Jayce ( 07:32,5/17/2012 )

Yup. No need to remake something that was already approved. Declined. Paleggy Ship it 07:33, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Archiving~ Skt Like a baws 12:31, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Snowbird (W) ~ DeclinedEdit

[[File:Snowbird.warrior.png]]:S Added darker shading. OA was Ashshadow. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:35, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a bit, define the highlight on the shoulder, and there's some blurred lineart/waste on the tail and in the ear :3 01:43, May 9, 2012 (UTC)

Blur the highlights. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 09:05, 09, 05, 2012

Re-Ups^ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:24, May 12, 2012 (UTC)

Could you blur the shading a bit? --Cinder Real or Not Real?02:07, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

Sorry, file changes weren't showing. here they are. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:42, May 13, 2012 (UTC)

If possible, try and blur the "middriff-ish" shading where it's darker than the rest. But it could just be my computer... ouo ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:38, 14, 05, 2012

Define the tail and haunch shading. Skt Like a baws 12:42, May 14, 2012 (UTC)

Is it okay if I upload on Thursday? I'm on vacation 8D (Rowan not logged in) 03:50, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Could you lighten the shading a tad and whiten the pelt? It looks kind of gray right now. Dazzy 07:35, May 15, 2012 (UTC)

Re-Ups^ Wait for changes. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 01:05, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

According to my calender, this has already had a week to get it fully tweaked. Sorry Rowan, but this will have to be declined. :c ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:51, 17, 05, 2012

Wait, I thought it was 2 weeks? o3o Skt Like a baws 12:35, May 17, 2012 (UTC)

Two weeks for redone images, one week for tweaks, Skt. Jayce ( 16:26,5/17/2012 )