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Rosepetal (W) - Declined
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[[File:Rosepetal.warrior.png]] She needed to be brought back to the color she was before to match her other images, and actually be dark cream. I need to fix some shading, I know. I'll do that in the next upload. Breezewhisker 21:26, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Make the ear pink smaller, define it, and make it more triangular. ☀Iciloo☀ 22:16, June 29, 2012 (UTC)
Maybe tinge the shading browner/redder. She looks kinda ashy/gray. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:15, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I redid the shading. (Yes, the highlights are tinted green.) Breezewhisker 00:56, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Can you lighten the base just a tad? It doesn't quite match the other two images. —Garrus ღ 01:01,6/30/2012
Make the earpink more triangular and a tad smaller. Dazzle~♪ 01:03, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Darken/redden the ear-pink ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:47, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. That's all I'm going to do with the earpink. Breezewhisker 17:37, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading, and perhaps make it thinner around the back area. ☀Iciloo☀ 21:01, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
I think the shading along her back looks fine...but maybe define the shading on her legs a tad? —Leggo QuailXStoat 01:18, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Breezewhisker 04:30, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
Could you add a bit more shading to the back of her head and ears? --Cinder Real or Not Real? 16:22, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
I think it looks fine. Breezewhisker 05:32, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
I know you said that's all you were going to do with the earpink, but I can barely see it. Can you at least define it a little? Iveh Yo! 15:23, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading a smidge. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:45, 08, 07, 2012
Sorry, but this has been up for far longer than a week. Declined. oblivionAudience? 05:53, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Mapleshade (Lo) ~ Declined
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[[File:Mapleshade.loner.png]] Needed ragged fur (Changes may not be showing yet) Ohgawd I killed it Comments? Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 01:26, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Define the stripes. --Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:21, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Can you tone down the ragged-ness? O_o Maybe make it match her queen? oblivionAudience? 16:22, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Actually, wouldn't her fur be a bit more ragged as both a loner and rogue, probably from the fighting, and all of that? —Garrus ღ 17:17,6/30/2012
True, but I think it could be toned down just a tad. XD Skt Omnia vincit amor 20:18, June 30, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink. :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:47, 01, 07, 2012
Blur the tail shading. Nice job, Stoner. ☀Iciloo☀ 21:00, July 1, 2012 (UTC)
Wait - should I tone down the furriness or not? I dunno...but I kinda think that the queen has a little bit of raggedness... Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 23:11, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
I don't know, but it makes more sense for her to be fluffier when she's outside a Clan and doesn't care about her appearance. I think it should stay... oblivionAudience? 23:14, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
I think you should tone it down just a tad. Yes she'd be more ragged outside the Clan, but this is going a bit overboard. Paleggy Ship it 22:10, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
I personally think the fur looks fine, I've even seen strays that look like that. --RavenBeeeeeees 18:22, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
It should be toned down. This is very ragged-y. xD RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:32, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
I agree; the ragged-ness should be toned down. Even if she IS outside the Clan, it's far too much. ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 01:49, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
This has been up for a week too... Sorry, but I have to decline it. oblivionAudience? 05:58, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Sagepaw (Kittypet) ~ Declined
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[[File:Sagepaw.Kittypet.png]] He was a kittypet for part of his kithood. So, comments?
--♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 16:37, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
He was never said to have a collar, and there was no mention of any collar needing to be removed when he and his family joined SkyClan. Besides, if anything, this would just be a tweak to the kit. Declining. oblivionAudience? 16:53, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Rainstorm (W) ~ Declined
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[[File:Rainstorm.warrior.png]] Tweaked the pattern to be more mottled. The colours and shading are all the same :3 Comments? Berry ...now what? 06:45, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Also, all I did was dodge the shading away and made the mottles smaller :3 Berry ...now what? 06:47, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
After discussing this with the other senior members, we have deemed (with valid proof) that this image was redone, without necessity, and therefore will be declined. Berry, you don't lie about whether or not you tweak or redo an image. If you'd like to redo one, please, ask the senior members for permission next time. —Garrus ღ 07:17,7/8/2012
Archiving. SplookSweet serendipity. 15:13, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Leafstar (Lo) - Auto-declined
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[[File:Leafstar.loner.png]]Seeing as I'm doing this... comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:20, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
This is beautiful <3 Add earpink and eye color, define the shading and thee's waste by her face. Oh, and blur the stripes a tiny bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 03:23, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Thin out the stripes as well. The ones on her leader aren't that thick. —Garrus ღ 03:26,7/9/2012
Erase the waste ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:47, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
This is not 80% done. The stripes don't match the leader/rogue, the pattern isn't even the same, the cream is the wrong colour, there is no shading to speak of, the cream is overblurred, and there's waste. You have a week. oblivionAudience? 07:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
I'm actually going to suggest an auto-decline on this. Part of the criteria for it even staying up is you need to actually //have shading//, and know how to use it. There isn't any visible shading on this. None at all. —Garrus ღ 07:07,7/9/2012
Agreed. There's also waste and white pixels, the cream's overblurred, and the stripes don't really match. Auto-declining. Paleggy Ship it 07:08, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:11, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
No, Storm. The point of an auto-decline is it's actually declined, and you need to repost it....>.> —Garrus ღ 15:15,7/9/2012
Pinestar (Alt. L) - Withdrawn
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[[File:Pinestar.leader.alt.png]] Oh... That looked so much better in photoshop... Anyway, shading and highlights needed to be tweaked. I also added depth in the eyes. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:14, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Tone down the highlights. oblivionAudience? 04:59, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on his legs, maybe? Breezewhisker 05:07, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 18:02, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
blur the shading on his tail and chest. —Roxy wonk wink 19:32, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Tone down the face "highlight". RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:27, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the chest and haunch highlight. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:47, 09, 07, 2012
Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:18, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
The highlights should be toned down more - they could also be blurred. Also, the shading needs to be blurred and darkened. ☀Iciloo☀ 02:33, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Withdrawing this because a) It's driving me crazy, b) I hate it, c) photoshop hates it, d) There are other things I wanna work on ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 18:22, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Ratscar (Alt. W) ~ Declined
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[[File:Ratscar.warrior.alt.png]] All I did was add the torn ear and scar, of which came from the warrior. OA was Silver. Comments? Berry Is Awesome 11:13, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the earpink and make it more pinkish? It looks gray right now. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 15:36, July 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Berry ...now what? 07:53, July 4, 2012 (UTC)
I hate to complain about something that you just fixed, but could you redden the earpink? It looks too pale to me.... but the rest of this image is positively beautiful, really! :) ❄ Sunnyfrost ❄ 00:01, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
If it gets anymore red then it will be hard to see against the base coat. I think it's fine. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 03:24 Thu Jul 5
Re-uploaded Thickened the scar...I thought it didn't match the warrior's very well o3o Berry Is Awesome 11:10, July 5, 2012 (UTC)
Can you thicken it a bit more? :3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:30, 06, 07, 2012
Enlarge the earpink and possibly make it the same color as the scar? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:44, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
You still working on this? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 04:19, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Yep, re-uploaded Berry ...now what? 04:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Make the tear on his ear match the warrior. oblivionAudience? 16:42, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but this has been up for a week. Declining. —Garrus ღ 21:21,7/10/2012
Rowanfur (W) - Declined
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[[File:Rowanfur.warrior.png]]Redone for shading, and the tabby markings didn't go all the way. You guys said you like the markings on the old one, so I tried to make the stripes sort of blur together as the coat got longer. I don't think I did it quite right. .-. Breezewhisker 17:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
As always, you never fail to amaze, Breeze. However, the shading at the bottom of the tail could use some lightening to benefit the picture, and the back shading overall could be lightened. ☀Iciloo☀ 17:56, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
The back shading seems fine. It shows lots of depth like this... Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 17:57, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Thanks. <3 Breezewhisker 18:52, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Please don't be mad, and since this is just a suggestion you can choose not to, but this doesn't really look like the old pattern at all and we all expressed interest in keeping it. Is there any possibility of you doing that? Iveh Yo! 20:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm inclined to agree with Ivy.. I quite liked the older pattern, and there really wasn't much wrong with the older style. I respect the choice if you want to keep it how it is, though. ^^;; —Garrus ღ 20:07,7/9/2012
Define the eye values. oblivionAudience? 21:14, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Wait, how? Do you want me to get rid of more stripes? .-. Or if you're talking about it being long haired, I did that so that the fading stripes would make more sense. Breezewhisker 03:56, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, basically make him a pointed tabby like before. Paleggy Ship it 04:28, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Oh. I'd rather not. I'll blend a few more stripes together and stuff, but I'd rather not make him an actual tabby point. Breezewhisker 18:24, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
That was one of the conditions when this was nominated, Breeze. We asked that you keep the pattern the same. —Garrus ღ 19:28,7/10/2012
One of the reasons why I nominated it in the first place was that the tabby pattern needed to cover all of him. Heck, that's the main reason I nominated it. If you really wanted the pattern to stay the same, it could have just been tweaked for blurred shading. I also cannot find a cat with genuine ginger tabby point markings (not just stripes blurred out on the back due to long hair) that is not white or that creamy Siamese color. Breezewhisker 00:44, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Then perhaps this should have been just a tweak. It was requested that the pattern stay the same though. If you don't want to comply with that, this may be declined. Paleggy Ship it 01:31, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
A request doesn't mean it has to be done. That's why it's call a request and not a command. Whatever. Decline it if you like. I'm not going to argue any furthur. Breezewhisker 04:30, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Fine. Declining. —Garrus ღ 04:32,7/11/2012
Achiving. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:16, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Mistystar (Alt W) ~ Declined
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[[File:Mistyfoot.warrior.alt.png]] Describe as gray in ADP and TDH. Comments? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:15, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Hold on...this was a plain gray alt. We've agreed that they only get the pale/dark alts. I think this will have to be declined... Dazzle~♪ 18:18, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Dazzle, you would be correct. This is not two shades of color. If this were a dark or light gray alt, it would stay up, but this is not. Declining. If any other lead thinks it should stay, feel free to speak up. —Garrus ღ 18:21,7/12/2012
Archiving. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:13, 13, 07, 2012
Blossomfall (Ki) - Declined
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[[File:Blossomfall.kit.png]] I have tainted the Mounty epicness!! Please PCA Goddess, forgive my hanus crime!! xD Darkened the shading. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:01, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
- heinous c: Define the earpink on the shaded side a tad, it gets lost in the shading. Skt Omnia vincit amor 03:04, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
You derp...this one was never nominated. You're thinking of Blossomkit, not Blossomfall...xDDD —Garrus ღ 03:07,7/14/2012
Blahh... I clicked on the link in the list and this is what came up, but no biggie. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:11, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Petalnose (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked
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[[File:Petalnose.warrior.alt.png]] Needed to darken shading, define earpink, and blur facewhite. OA was some crazy person. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 23:45, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur and define the shading. SilverThe Glee Project 23:46, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink. Dazzle~♪ 23:47, July 6, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading. ☀Iciloo☀ 01:05, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur/smudge the white on the muzzle some more. SplookSweet serendipity. 18:50, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I hate the shading with a firey passion. I miss GIMP :( WildfireMistystar's Omen! 21:39, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the highlights(?) and the shading looks flat, try defining it more. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 22:41, July 7, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:41, July 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the highlights/shading since they seem blotchy. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 00:47 Mon Jul 9
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:59, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Make the shading slimmer, blur it more, darken it, define the white patch, and make the edges smoother. ☀Iciloo☀ 23:00, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded WildfireMistystar's Omen! 19:08, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
The shading still looks blotchy. Make it smoother and blur it more into the pelt, and make the white patch smoother. ☀Iciloo☀ 22:23, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Wait, is that^ for the current because the changes aren't showing yet and I redid the shading. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 22:35, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
The changes are showing now. WildfireMistystar's Omen! 00:47, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch highlight and there seems to be a "darker strip" on the head, unless it's ment to be there blend it. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:35, 13, 07, 2012
Reuploaded' WildfireMistystar's Omen! 20:28, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
It looks like there is blurred line art at the top of the face. SilverThe Glee Project 22:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry, Wildfire, but it's been a week. Declined ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 03:31, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Rainfur (Alt. Ro) ~ Declined
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[[File:Rainfur.rogue.alt.png]] For being called plain gray in FQ. Comments? ouo Berry ...now what? 07:19, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
It doesn't say solid gray or plain gray, just gray. That's a partial description and doesn't get an alt. Declined. Paleggy Ship it 13:37, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. Skt Omnia vincit amor 03:15, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Ratscar (Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Ratscar.kit.png]] He gets a kit, check the talk page. I didn't know if I should put the scar on him so I didn't, but I'll add it if it's needed. Comments? Sweetflower02:34 Mon Jul 16
Darken the shading and define the light source. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 19:46, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Saturate the earpink on the left ear. -.0 Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:52, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
I think enough of the project agrees that these two should'nt get images. Declined. oblivionAudience? 15:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:59, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Snowbird (Ki) - Declined
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[[File:Snowbird.kit.png]]She gets a kit charart. Eeeee, I haven't uploaded anything for approval in ages. Comments? Breezewhisker 04:08, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Ummm, I had this reserved. owo -Ducksauce 04:22, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Nevermind, I don't mind this is wonderful, blur the chest shading a tiny bit. -Ducksauce 04:38, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the flank shading a little Iveh Yo! 04:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Why does she get a kit image? I see nothing in her history about her appearing in a gathering as a new apprentice like other characters did. She was never even an apprentice at all. And there's no cite on her name in the charcat. Where was she mentioned as a kit? Paleggy Ship it 06:02, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Nevermind, I just saw the discussion. However I disagree with them getting kit images, but I'll leave that in the discussion. Paleggy Ship it 06:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Whoops. Sorry Ducksplash. I did the Cntl+F thing and only Appledash's resevations for the queen popped up. Looking through the edit history, I can see you did. Go ahead and take it, you need the approved images, if they do get one. Breezewhisker 14:50, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
See above. Declined. oblivionAudience? 15:37, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:59, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Mintfur (SC) (Alt Ki) ~ Declined
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[[FIle:Mintfur (SC).kit.alt.png]] Just blurred the shading a tad. OA of the most recent was Skye. Comments? Berry ...now what? 05:21, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading just a bit and define it. Oh, and I wasn't an OA. I just changed the lineart, since part of the cite was false. —Garrus ღ 07:46,7/14/2012
Vlur the sahding on her front legs. —Roxy wonk wink 16:39, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Lol vlur Define the shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:34, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Lol sahding Make the shading closer to the lineart. ☀Iciloo☀ 22:37, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Also add more shading. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:06, 15, 07, 2012
Lighten the shading Sweetflower23:56 Sun Jul 15
Re-uploaded Thank god for the dodge tool~ Berry ...now what? 09:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink? :3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 16:57, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Just a question. Why isn't this image on her page? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Good question... it's not in her trivia either. If a cite can't be found within a few days, this will have to be declined. oblivionAudience? 22:15, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
It was deemed as a partial description. Declining. —Garrus ღ 17:03,7/18/2012
Archiving ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:55, 19, 07, 2012
Clovertail (Q) ~ Withdrawn
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[[File:Clovertail.queen.png]] Just darkened it to match the other images. Latest change was made by Misty. Comments? ^^ --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:07, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think Misty already did this tweak. It doesn't need to be done again... Paleggy Ship it 01:29, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Nope. Misty's tweak was declined due to the one week limit, but it was never reverted. Cinder, blur the stomach shading, please. —Garrus ღ 01:42,7/11/2012
Oh, Ok. I just thought it was approved since it was never reverted. :P Darken the highlights a tad. Paleggy Ship it 04:26, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
@Paleclaw what do you mean by darken it? XP Sorry I'm not very good with vocabulary. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 19:13, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
I believe Paleh means to dull the highlights and blend them in with the pelt more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 01:25, 12, 07, 2012
Re-Uploaded --Cinder Real or Not Real? 00:40, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
If it doesn't make the white look grey, could you darken the shading a little? Breezewhisker 04:20, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Blend/dull the highlights a bit more. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:37, 15, 07, 2012
Sorry guys I'm withdrawing. I have to get ready for my grandparents. You can decline or someone else may take over. --Cinder Real or Not Real? 21:50, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
Mothpelt (Kit) ~ Declined
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Here's Mothpelt's kit.[[File:Mothpelt.Kit.png]]
So, Comments? --♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 10:19, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
Rowan has this reserved...why have you put it up? Berry ...now what? 10:21, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
Does she? I've only just come back on the wiki. Sorry. ♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 10:49, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
Feathernose, you need to actually reserve this. And even if you had, the title should be "Under Evaluation", as you are a kit. I believe this'll be declined...o3o Dazzle~♪ 13:03, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
I don't care if you "just came back on the Wiki" the rules never change. And you know you cannot just do a charart without reserving it. Consider this a warning: Follow the rules. Declined. oblivionAudience? 15:02, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:31, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
Dovewing. Apprentice (Alt) ~ Declined
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She was shown with a lighter gray muzzle and darker ears on the cover of The Fourth Apprentice.
[[File:Dovewing.Apprentice.Alt.png]]
So, comments?
Feather, you've failed to reserve this image. It will most likely be declined, sorry. Berry ...now what? 09:19, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
I've reserved it. My name wasn't added in before. ♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 09:28, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Lighter muzzle isnt so big change, she is still gray, so I think it will be declined still Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪, 11:02, July 22,2012 )UTC)
Yeah, it's too similar, plus we don't know for sure it's her. Declining. Skt Now, you're really lying 11:36, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Birdsong (W) - Declined
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[[File:Birdsong.warrior.png]] Oi. This one was a pain to match... Anyway, she gets one. Check the cite. oblivionAudience? 01:31, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
I don't know...all she says on that page was "when we were younger." It doesn't say how long ago or even what rank she was. She could have been a queen or anything. But that's just my opinion. Skt Omnia vincit amor 01:37, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
She was hunting. I doubt queens go out hunting when there's dogs around... e.e oblivionAudience? 01:40, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
x3 True...but they could have been out hunting with their mentors as apprentices, since she said there weren't as many dogs around whenever this occurred. Or any one of a million things. I just think it's too vague. Skt Omnia vincit amor 01:47, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
I think I found something..."The barn!" Hailstar lifted his tail. "Of course. She took me hunting there when I was just a 'paw." pg 422. Now I think she should get one xD Skt Omnia vincit amor 01:50, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Well that works too xD -goes to change the cite- oblivionAudience? 02:02, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Wait, she could of been deputy. owo -Ducksauce 02:05, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
I don't think she'd be a deputy. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:07, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
But how do we know she wasn't a deputy and the mentor of the future Clan leader? Look at Shellheart. Oakheart's mentor and the deputy, then became an elder. Could have happened to Birdsong. I don't think she gets this as long as it doesn't specify what rank she was. Sorry. Iveh Yo! 17:05, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
And also, being a queen doesn't mean that she wouldn't be able to take Hailstar hunting. Queens are capable of leaving the nursery while they have kits, even if there are dogs. She could be a queen, warrior, or deputy, or even an elder that felt like leaving the camp, so she really shouldn't get one. Breezewhisker 20:51, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Considering it never specified her rank, by our current standards this will be declined. however, I do think a discussion about what requires a warrior image in cases like this should be brought up. But until then, I'm declining. Sorry loonie. Paleggy Ship it 21:38, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 21:41 Sun Jul 22
Blossomkit (Ki) - Declined
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[[File:Blossomkit_(SC).kit.png]]Ew, blotchy shading. Anyways, I just added a layer of shading over it. OA was Sandy, with a tweak by Ice and Leaf-storm. Comments? ☀Iciloo☀ 19:58, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading right over her left leg. Looks good! Breezewhisker 23:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded: Blurred shading over left leg. And thanks. :) ☀Iciloo☀ 03:07, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on her head and chest. —Roxy wonk wink 17:18, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Declined on request. Icy said she'll repost over the weekend. —Garrus ღ 22:55,7/19/2012
Icecloud (Ki) ~ Withdrawn
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[[File:Icecloud.kit.png]] OA was Frostheart, and I attempted to define the shading. —Garrus ღ 23:57,7/21/2012
Blur the shading —Roxy wonk wink 02:26, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define it a tad more? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:11, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. I hate white cats. e.e —Garrus ღ 19:22,7/22/2012
Can you lighten the shading? (Or blur it, whichever one you want to do.) SilverThe Glee Project 22:44, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Blur. And darken the highlight//lighter parts on face and chest. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:05, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. There aren't any highlights with this, and I think it's blurred enough. However, I did lighten it a tad, since it does look a bit dark for a white cat. —Garrus ღ 05:54,7/23/2012
Define the "highlights" on the legs and tail. Breezewhisker 00:26, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
This image is giving me a major headache. I'm withdrawing to work on something else. —Garrus ღ 00:28,7/24/2012
Leopardfoot (Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Leopardfoot.kit.png]] OA was Iceheart22, and it needed to be mottled. Comments? Odamn, this sucks x.x Berry ...now what? 13:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Changes aren't showing, [1] Berry ...now what? 13:04, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Can you try to make it match the queen more? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 23:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Mounty showed me how she made the mottles, I tried to get them to match x3 Berry ...now what? 08:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
I'm not sure but I think the mottles could be a bit more smaller and more "spotty". :/ ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 05:38, 11, 07, 2012
Re-uploaded Ikilledit Berry ...now what? 09:52, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Still doesn't really match. Also lighten it so you can see the lineart, and add/majorly define the shading. Paleggy Ship it 05:38, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the ear pink on the right. (Our right) Sweetflower01:33 Sun Jul 15
Still working on this? o3o ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:53, 16, 07, 2012
Yes, re-uploaded. o3o Berry ...now what? 09:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Still doesn't match. Take the eye and earpink color from her other images, add more mottles, and make them smaller. Paleggy Ship it 00:44, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a leedle bit. —Roxy wonk wink 02:34, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
She looks brown with black mottles...make her more black. Skt Omnia vincit amor 02:36, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
Are you still working on this? —Garrus ღ 20:59,7/20/2012
Regardless, it's past the two-week limit for redos. Declining and anyone with an empty slot may take over. oblivionAudience? 16:13, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
May I take over? SilverThe Glee Project 17:26, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Go ahead, Silv. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:29, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving this one so it doesn't get confused with the other when Silver re-uploads. —Garrus ღ 00:34,7/24/2012
Crowfeather (Alt. W) ~ Declined
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[[File:Crowfeather.warrior.alt2.png]] He was described with a black pelt in The Last Hope. Comments? Starry I will die for you Jul 23, 2012; 23:02pm 23:02, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
I thought we decided that he doesn't get this? It's too close to his current pelt description anyway Iveh Yo! 23:03, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
I'm not too sure if there was a discussion or not. Starry I will die for you Jul 23, 2012; 23:04pm 23:04, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, regardless.... I think you can have only one original image up at a time. You already have Mothpelt. So, this would have to be declined...? o.e Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:05, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Yes, this has been brought up and shot down multiple times. You also already have an image for approval. Declined. oblivionAudience? 23:05, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. SplookSweet serendipity. 00:42, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
Sweetpaw (Alt. Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Sweetpaw.kit.alt.png]] This is my first attempt at a tabby. And it's not so good, but here it is! :O She has the best Prefix ever ;3 Last OA = Leggy It needed to be redone because: Unrealistic pattern, shading, and blurred lineart. (Changes aren't showing, the first time I uploaded I relaized I forgot the mottles) Sweetflower
This is declined. If you were to read the nomination, Ivystripe specifically said that Rainlegs gets first dibs on this if it passes, and that's the only reason some of us voted yes. —Garrus ღ 18:29,7/26/2012
Oh, sorry, I didn't know that she would. I never saw that nomination. Oops. Sweetflower
Yeah, I don't think the person that archived it read correctly. <shrugs> Mistakes happen, Sweet. No worries. Thanks for being so compliant with this. ^^;; —Garrus ღ 18:36,7/26/2012
No problem, If I was Leggy I'd probably want my image too. ;) Sweetflower
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 21:45,7/26/2012
Mothwing (Ki) - Declined
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[[File:Mothwing.kit.png]]same as warrior and mc. Comments? —Roxy wonk wink 17:06, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste in between the tail and chest fur. SilverThe Glee Project 23:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink on our left a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 23:20, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
Still working on this? ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 03:45, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, Elo. It's been a week. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:27, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. SplookSweet serendipity. 21:59, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
Mothpelt (A) ~ Declined
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[[File:Mothpelt.apprentice.png]] My first original art; comments? Starry I will die for you Jul 19, 2012; 22:46pm 22:46, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
Since this is your first image, the heading is Under Evaluation instead of For Approval. As you've gotten the basics down, but it doesn't quite make it to 80%, you have the one week to get it up to 80%. Lighten the shading on the paws, and smudge the brown so it looks more like the warrior. —Garrus ღ 22:58,7/19/2012
Lighten the base colour and define the shading. oblivionAudience? 23:02, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded. (And thank you Skye for helping me with the heading thing, I didn't know)Starry I will die for you Jul 19, 2012; 23:18pm 23:18, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the earpink like the other images, blur the shading, and smudge the brown vertically with a smaller brush. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 23:42 Thu Jul 19
The black should have textre xP (unless I'm blind) Skt Omnia vincit amor 03:59, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
Add depth to the eyes. Dazzle~♪ 13:06, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
The black is textured. I'd reccomend using a size 1 brush to smudge the brown and black. Define the shading a little more. Nice job Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 18:20, July 20, 2012 (UTC)
If there is texture then define it. Define the overall texture of the fur, and the smudging of the fur - it doesn't match his other images. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 12:42, July 22, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded; I redid the brown patches. By the way, I apologize for the long delay; was on another road trip. Starry I will die for you Jul 23, 2012; 18:30pm 18:30, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Um... could you add more brown patches, and lighten these? Also, the texture needs to be defined (for lack of better word -.-) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:01, July 23, 2012 (UTC)
Also blur and possibly define the shading. Skt Now, you're really lying 06:22, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
I'm sorry, but this doesn't quite seem like 80%. The pattern doesn't match at all, and the shading is extremely blotchy. If another lead thinks otherwise, feel free to change the heading. ^^;; —Garrus ღ 04:23,7/28/2012
Archiving. SplookSweet serendipity. 21:30, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
Blackstar (Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Blackstar.kit.png]] I remember my first image. :3 I will somehow finda way to smooth out that shading e.e OA was moi and needed defined shading and the image needed to be lightened. Comments? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:53, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
Can you make his white a little more...white? xD I remember this image being put up for approval. o.o—Garrus ღ 23:47,7/27/2012
Lighten the shading a tad. ☀Iciloo☀ 23:52, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
Define the unshaded parts? :3 When we were still apprentices... x3 ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 23:54, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
Woaaah. I remember when this was put up for approval too~ :D Blur the highlight/light patch on the chest. SplookSweet serendipity. 05:24, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
8D Re-Ups^ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:06, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
The white still looks gray and blur the shading a bit. Atelda 23:55, July 28, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Lazy today. x3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:35, July 31, 2012 (UTC)
Smooth out the shading a little bit. ☀Iciloo☀ 21:05, August 1, 2012 (UTC)
And then define it a bit. Especially on the legs and belly. Breezewhisker 20:30, August 2, 2012 (UTC)
There's a bit of waste by the front paws. —Garrus ღ 20:25,8/3/2012
Sorry but this has been up for a week. Declining. oblivionAudience? 20:29, August 3, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 04:01,8/4/2012
Leafstar(Lo) - withdrawn
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[[File:Leafstar.loner.png]]I'm not really sure how an auto-decline works.... sorry if I've done something wrong. Comments? Changes aren't showing, but pretty much all I did was erase the waste. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:32, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
The eye color looks like cream. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 16:33, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Fill in the white pixels. SilverThe Glee Project 16:35, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Can you please try and make it match? The stripes are still off, and the cream is the wrong colour and in a different spot on her face than the leader. oblivionAudience? 16:38, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Well, she's facing a different way than the rogue and queen, and most of the leader is the other side of her. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:40, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
If your having troubles with the colors just try to take them from one of her other images. Just because she´s facing the other way I still think the stripes should be the same. But that could also be the artists opinion...Sandy I think Daddy's my slave!h 17:01, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
I'd rather not change them. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 17:10, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded, fixed the cream and teh eyes. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 17:21, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch shading and get rid of the waste. SplookSweet serendipity. 18:09, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes need to match. It doesn't matter what direction they're coming from, Storm. =.=;; —Garrus ღ 18:14,7/9/2012
Reuploaded. Copied stripes to the best of my abilities... Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:50, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste all over the image. SilverThe Glee Project 19:53, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes and smudge them just a tad.. —Garrus ღ 19:56,7/9/2012
Reuploaded, blurred stripes and cleared...some waste. I'll get the rest soon. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:24, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink and there should be some y-stripes in there. oblivionAudience? 21:00, July 9, 2012 (UTC)
What art program do you use? I can give you a tip that will get rid of all the waste with just a click of a button in GIMP! Iveh Yo! 00:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I used Pixlr for this but I have GIMP. Thanks, Ivy! Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:48, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Blurred ears, added Y stripes and filled in white pixles, comments? Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 03:23, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the stripes a tad, and make them a tiny bit more rippley - like the leader. Also, they look tintet green... Could you fix that? Also, redden the earpink, erase the waste, and darken the shading a tad. =3 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 05:12, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
I'm waiting until my sister's computer's out of the shop (Tuesday, around this time) because her GIMP doesn't close on me everytime. I got everything but the waste, whcih I promise to erase tomorrow. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 05:21, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Hm... I think I erased it all. Just seeing what I can do before I'm allowed to use GIMP. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 14:53, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry I didn't reply sooner :S On your lineart layer, select the region on the outside of the lineart. Keep your selection, then go on the shading layer. Go to the settings at the top. Edit---> clear. It should clear out all waste. Then go to Select---> none. Iveh Yo! 16:41, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
Thanks, Ivy =) Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 17:03, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
ass more stripes and define the shading. —Roxy wonk wink 20:55, July 10, 2012 (UTC)
BAHAHAHHAHAHHZAHAHAHHAHA Ok I'm done xD...BBAHAHAHAHAH Make some of the stripes on the haunch y stripes too. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 21:03 Tue Jul 10
There's a little bit of waste under the front left paw. Breezewhisker 01:00, July 11, 2012 (UTC)
Add cream paws. Paleggy Ship it 02:20, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I um... aDDed some more stripes, Elo(xD) and made some Y stripes on the haunch, added cream paws, and I think I got all the waste. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
There's still waste, the white pixels are back, and blur the paws. oblivionAudience? 15:53, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded killed waste/blurred paws changes not showing e.e Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:14, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Make the stripes more brown...they look reddish imo. Dazzle~♪ 16:30, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
define the shading a tad. —Roxy wonk wink 19:00, July 12, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the shading and define the cream on her chest. ☀Iciloo☀ 16:46, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded/ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 19:00, July 13, 2012 (UTC)
There's some waste above her back. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 02:10, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the tail shading. If you don't want any waste, set the shading layer to multiply. oblivionAudience? 02:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the ear-pink Leafy ♫Absolute maniac♪,10:30, July 14,2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 16:32, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Define the belly shading and erase the waste. Dazzle~♪`
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:05, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading on the top of the haunch, add more shading on the hind leg, and define the depth in her eye ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 23:07, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:13, July 14, 2012 (UTC)
Smooth out the stripes. ☀Iciloo☀ 00:54, July 15, 2012 (UTC)
The stripes look still a bit reddish, make them more browner. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 02:50, 15, 07, 2012
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:27, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Y'know what I haven't done in a long time? It has something to do with this picture being really good <3 CBA? Iveh Yo! 04:49, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry, but the stripes seemed more blurred and then less blurred in some areas. Could you fix that. Also, define the "highlights" on the legs, and define the depth of the shading. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 15:05, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
.....Reuploaded v.v Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:39, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Re-CBA Iveh Yo! 15:45, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but can you make the color of the stripes match her other images more? Right now they look kind of dark reddish/brownish. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:13, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Okay, thanks! Reuploaded. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:40, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Continuing CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 21:32, July 16, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry again, but the color of the stripes still don't match. But other than that, this is pretty.<3 Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 07:52, July 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 22:23, July 18, 2012 (UTC)
-sigh- I can give you the colours from her rogue, since these really don't match. The base is #513017, the stripes #39210d, and the cream #cf9f6b. It's also shaded in black and the highlights are white, if yours aren't. oblivionAudience? 04:44, July 19, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded; please don't ask me to change the colors again, I used the EXACT hex codes Loonie showed me and I shaded with black. Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:18, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
Kill the waste and define the earpink. oblivionAudience? 01:40, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
ReuploadedStormy I'm messing with you ♥ 01:54, July 21, 2012 (UTC)
And CBA? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:21, 22, 07, 2012
I'm sorry, but these stripes still don't quite match. Try looking at the warrior version for an idea of how they should look. Also, define the shading and there's a tad bit of waste around the paws. —Garrus ღ 06:49,7/22/2012
Define the shading on the legs. SplookSweet serendipity. 17:45, July 24, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded ^^ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 15:34, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-CBA? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 15:54, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Sorry to interrupt, but there's still lighter pixels on her chest, the part of her eye that's supposed to be white is cream, and there's - for some reason - little green pixels all around her body. oblivionAudience? 17:23, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Oh, and I'm pretty sure cats can't have cream noses. oblivionAudience? 17:45, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded/ Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 20:54, July 25, 2012 (UTC)
Darken the stripes and define the earpink. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 14:58, July 26, 2012 (UTC)
-sigh- The nose should be the same colour as her other images. Cats don't have black noses unless their fur is black >.> oblivionAudience? 00:33, July 27, 2012 (UTC)
Please work on this or it will be declined. —Garrus ღ 23:17,7/29/2012
ReuploadedStormy I'm messing with you ♥ 23:40, July 29, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the tail. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 17:37, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on the paws/legs. —Garrus ღ 18:23,7/30/2012
Blur the cream transistion a little more. ☀Iciloo☀ 18:44, July 30, 2012 (UTC)
Please work on this or it will be declined. —Garrus ღ 01:08,8/3/2012
Withdrawing. Camrynn 00:11, August 5, 2012 (UTC)
Taking over and archiving. —Garrus ღ 00:26,8/5/2012
Snowfur (Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Snowfur.kit.png]]Do you like this kitty? Apple's Talk 21:37, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
Are you sure you've read the guidelines? Snowfur already has a kit image, and you're not allowed to upload over approved files. oblivionAudience? 21:47, August 4, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 01:33,8/5/2012
Mothwing.Kit (Alt) ~ Declined
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She was shown as a silver tabby with green eyes. (it won't let me upload images at all, so I'll give the iaza link)
http://www.iaza.com/work/120806C/iaza19904544534800.png
So, comments? (sorry for link) --♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 10:44, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
When was she shown with this description? Camrynn 11:52, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
On the cover of Return to the Clans. ♫Feathernose♫♥♥Rarity Lover♥♥ 11:56, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
We don't make alts from covers, this is declined. Also, if you're going to make a charart, make sure that everything has been cited first, of course, if the character does qualify for a charart. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 11:59, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
Besides, we dont know if that was Motheubx anyway. It could very well have been Hqwkfrist. Camrynn 15:07, August 6, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 15:38,8/6/2012
Crowfeather ~ Declined
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This is only like, 80% done.
Because I am a kit, and I have not done this before,
If someone will take this and fix it, I would be glad.
How is this for Crowfeather being called black?
[[File:Crowfeather.png|thumb|left]]
We agreed he should not have an alt. It's far too close to his main description. So.... Declined Camrynn 01:00, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
Storm, you do not decide if an image is declined. That is for the leads to do. Although, you are correct. It is declined because it's too close to his normal description. —Garrus ღ 01:03,8/11/2012
Sure, I see your point. It looks like a second warrior was made by accident.
WarriorLover1 (talk) 01:36, August 11, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 07:16, 12, 08, 2012
Bird That Rides the Wind (CG Alt) ~ Declined
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[[File:Bird.cg.alt.png]] For being called a gray tabby in the Dawn allegiances. Comments? Berry ...now what? 22:38 Wed Aug 8
Them stripes need blurring/smuding and blur the earpink too. Skt Now, you're really lying 23:04, August 8, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the chest shading a touch. :3 —Leggo QuailXStoat 04:16, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
Define all of the shading. Breezewhisker 05:13, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
Doesn't this need mud? Iveh Yo! 05:40, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
It does. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 05:57, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
Gray-brown to gray is no different than blue-gray to gray. This shouldn't get an alt, it's not two shades. Paleggy Ship it 07:40, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
Not to mention the fact it's technically a partial description. Yeah, this shouldn't get an alt. Paleggy Ship it 07:44, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
- Pardon me, Paleh, but if a grey-brown cat can't get a gray alt, why would a brown cat get a gray-brown alt? Brook having a gray-brown when she's brown is exactly the same as Bird getting a gray alt when she's gray-brown. I'm sorry if I sound ignorant or anything, but it doesn't really make sense to me why Bird can't have this, but Brook can have a gray-brown alt. Berry ...now what? 09:34 Thu Aug 9
Correct me if I'm wrong, but a gray-brown cat being called gray is a partial, while a brown cat being called gray-brown is not. Gray-brown and brown are two totally different things, I do believe. Don't shoot me, I'm not good with this stuff. —Garrus ღ 17:40,8/9/2012
A grey-brown cat is basically a grey cat with brown sprinkled throughout the coat, especially where the undercoat is showing, which pretty much makes grey a partial description. It's really the main coat color. Breezewhisker 19:58, August 9, 2012 (UTC)
-is not good with these things- I personally believe there is enough difference for this to get an alt. Gray-brown is a shade that is different from gray. Looking from this image to the other images it looks nothing like her other chararts. I suppose it depends on how you see it. e.e ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 04:44, 11, 08, 2012
Doesn't matter if the images look different. The color isn't different enough. It's not two shades, a partial description, and no different than making a gray alt for blue-gray cats. With out current guidelines, this is declined. Feel free to discuss, however I am declining since by the 'current' standards, it should be. Paleggy Ship it 06:34, August 12, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 07:19,8/14/2012
Henry (Ki) ~ Declined
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If Smudge gets a kit charart, shouldn't Henry?
[[File:Henry.kit.png]]
Comments? --KelseynoseBe the change 11:10, August 21, 2012 (UTC)
No. Why would he? He was never once mentioned as a kit. On the contrary, he was actually mentioned as being old. Declined. Paleggy Ship it 11:30, August 21, 2012 (UTC)
Declining/Archiving. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 04:04, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
Mousefur (E) - Tweaked
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[[File:Mousefur.elder.png]]I'm not sure if I like this or not -.- Anyways, added stripes. OA's were Sandy, Mintstar and Mounty. SplookSweet serendipity. 19:56, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
I think this is supposed to match the warrior. Also, Leggy had this reserved. owo -Ducksauce 20:03, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
Okay first, I'm a derp for not checking the other images. And second, I didn't see her reservation -w-;; I am just not together nowadays. She can take it over. SplookSweet serendipity. 20:24, August 22, 2012 (UTC)
I'll upload it sometime tomorrow. x3 and I love you anyways, Splook —Leggo QuailXStoat 21:21, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 21:25,8/24/2012
Dawnflower (Q) ~ Withdrawn
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[[File:Dawnflower.queen.png]] Defined shading, OA was Rainwillow. Comments? Berry ...now what? 13:05 Sat Aug 25
Blur the shading. :3 RowanOnly One Can Judge... 13:10, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded asdfghjkl I hate you, GIMP >.< Berry ...now what? 13:33 Sat Aug 25
Fill in the white pixel on the front paw closest to us. And blur the transition from the gray on her paws to her main pelt color. SilverThe Glee Project 15:11, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the belly shading. oblivionAudience? 17:56, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Fill in the nose. SplookSweet serendipity. 21:02, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Blur all the shading. ☀Iciloo☀ 21:40, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Can you darken her a bit to be more grey like the elder? Skt Now, you're really lying 22:25, August 25, 2012 (UTC)
Withdrawing xP Berry ...now what? 09:40 Thu Aug 30
Archiving Iveh Yo! 16:46, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
Willowbreeze (KP) - Declined
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[[File:Willowbreeze.kittypet.png]] I am half certain that this is going to be declined, but she's classified as a kittypet on her page and I'm not sure what happened in the old discussion. So... comments? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 17:16, August 28, 2012 (UTC)
I don't think so. It was agreed here that Willowbreeze was imprisoned, not kept as a pet. I've no idea why it's on her page but it really should be removed. oblivionAudience? 17:31, August 28, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I'm not sure if we ever came to an agreement but I think it was a general consensus that she does not qualify for a kittypet charart, just like the imprisoned Clan cats. I'm so sorry :( Iveh Yo! 23:40, August 29, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, I do believe we said they don't get one... Sorry, Scar. Changing heading, and if anyone wishes to discuss this, they may. —Garrus ღ 23:42,8/29/2012
Nah... I was pretty sure this was going to be declined. Just getting desperate to do an Original Art again xP ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:13, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
Toadstep (Alt. K) ~ Declined
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[[File:Toadstep.kit.alt2.png]] He was described with grey paws. So he might still have been described as black-and-white as well as solid grey. Comments? ♪♫Feather ♪♫ 09:12, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
I don't think this is grounds for an alt, sorry. It'd be partial description, since it's only a change of paw colour. Berry ...now what? 09:15 Mon Sep 3
He already has an alt for this...so..declining. Skt Now, you're really lying 12:09, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
Hazeltail (Alt A) - Withdrawn
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[[File:Hazeltail.apprentice.alt.png]] Evened out the shading. OA was Leafstrike. Comments? =3 -Ducksauce 06:25, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
There's waste on the back, some near the tail, and some near the leggs. SilverThe Glee Project 11:40, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 18:34, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
There's still some waste around the very edges of the back and lower parts..Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 20:25, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded: I think I got all of it. -Ducksauce 21:59, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the haunch/tail shading a little more. Dazzle~♪ 23:04, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
I'm withdrawing this. owo -Ducksauce 00:51, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Very well, declining ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 00:56, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Brindleface (Alt Q) ~ Declined
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[[File:Brindleface.queen.alt.png]] I swear on my life this is tweak. If anyone has any doubts, I'll email them the .xcf so they can see. All I did was go over the image with a small galaxy brush on GIMP for the mottled and defined the sjading. Comments? Berry ...now what? 08:41 Sun Aug 19
Changes aren't showing. e.e Berry ...now what? 08:41 Sun Aug 19
Waste. Waste everywhere. Skt Now, you're really lying 12:36, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded I'd removed it before...on the .xcf e.e -is a total derp- Berry ...now what? 12:40 Sun Aug 19
Can you somehow make the circles around the eyes a little lighter or darker maybe? It kinda looks like blurred lineart. SilverThe Glee Project 13:16, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading on her tail. --—Roxy wonk wink 16:17, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading. ☀Iciloo☀ 16:21, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading some more, if you can. -Raelic Non temete l'obscurità 23:50, August 19, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the earpink a bit. Dazzle~♪ 11:38, August 21, 2012 (UTC)
Still working, Berry? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:37, August 24, 2012 (UTC)
The earpink looks fine. However, can you make it larger (if you want to) Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 14:54,8/24/2012
Did you add stripes? I thought we agreed that her image didn't need them.... plus, it doesn't say that on the nomination page as to why it needed tweaked. o.o —Garrus ღ 18:51,8/24/2012
Declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. —Garrus ღ 02:03,8/27/2012
I can take this over. —Leggo QuailXStoat 02:04, August 27, 2012 (UTC)
Go ahead. I changed the heading to Tweaked. ☀Iciloo☀ 05:08, August 28, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. Looking at this again....I might blacken the shading some more and blur it a tad....I also wasn't sure if I should add stripes or not. If so, I can add those in on the next upload, too. —Leggo QuailXStoat 02:51, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
-edit- Here's the changes.... I'm gonna add some lighter colored mottles, too, and fix the transparent spots in her face and paws. GIMP is so confusing. e.e —Leggo QuailXStoat 03:02, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading and blur it. ☀Iciloo☀ 03:18, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. I added more mottles and such. (Changes are here) —Leggo QuailXStoat 04:00, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading a smidge more? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 08:24, 30, 08, 2012
I think the shading's fine. —Garrus ღ 16:26,8/30/2012
This image is gorgeous and I hate to suggest this..... but I don't think she should have this alt. For a long time this was our citation for her being mottled (might still be, too lazy to check). If it was an alt, we shouldn't have added mottled to her description. But we did. And she has since then been confirmed as a mottled tabby. So honestly, she really shouldn't have this alt... Paleggy Ship it 23:06, August 30, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah...really...so this is declined? (and, no, it's okay, I personally can't stand this x.x) —Leggo QuailXStoat 02:15, August 31, 2012 (UTC)
Let's wait till we get some more opinions. ☀Iciloo☀ 16:10, September 2, 2012 (UTC)
I think I'm going to have to say no. I remember something about this happening with Owl Feather, who's mottled/spotted and she was mentioned as flecked. It was note worthy enough for trivia, but didn't warrant an alt. ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:56, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Yup, that's correct. Honestly, I don't really think we need to get more opinions on this. It's already in our rules that partials don't get images, and we've said no to a mottled image on a speckled cat before (or was it the other way around... doesn't matter), so I think this should just be declined. It's taking up space. If anyone disagrees with the alt being removed, the can bring it up on the discussion page where it's not taking up space for other images. Paleggy Ship it 14:19, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Mhm. Declining. ☀Iciloo☀ 15:19, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Frostfur (Ki) - Withdrawn
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[[File:Frostfur.kit.png]] Most recent OA was Sweet, shading needed defining. Comments? =) -Ducksauce 20:32, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the shading from the chest shading and up. ☀Iciloo☀ 20:35, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the image in general —Roxy wonk wink 20:49, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 20:54, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
There is just the tiniest bit of waste in the top right corner..Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 21:35, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 22:48, September 6, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the overall shading. Awesomeness STONEY Fantasticness 02:29,9/7/2012
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 02:46, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
Can you define the shading more? I can really only see it on her chest. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:04, September 7, 2012 (UTC)
Also blur it too. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 03:04, 08, 09, 2012
Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 20:42, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading, lighten it, and lighten the entire image. She looks gray. ☀Iciloo☀ 14:57, September 9, 2012 (UTC)
I'm going to withdraw this.(I hate shading on white cats =3) -Ducksauce 20:46, September 9, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving Iveh Yo! 03:01, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
Mousefur (Ki) ~ Declined
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[[File:Mousefur.kit.png]] OA was someone amazing. Mousty sent me the .xcf for the kit and elder, I got the colours from the elder, and texture, shading, highlights, stuff like that, is from the kit's .xcf. (This fails so bad ;A;) changes are here Berry ...now what? 08:20 Sun Sep 2
Re-uploaded I tried to make it match better xP Berry ...now what? 08:50 Sun Sep 2
Can you make the earpink on ---> side a little bit more triangular. This is amazing o3o. SilverThe Glee Project 10:48, September 2, 2012 (UTC)
Since it came from the kit's .xcf, I'd rather not. But if anyone else agrees, I'll gladly do so. Berry ...now what? 10:49 Sun Sep 2
Please do so, if you don't mind. —Garrus ღ 17:19, 9/2/2012
Re-uploaded Here Berry ...now what? 06:25 Mon Sep 3
Can you define the shading a little? x3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:34, 03, 09, 2012
Re-uploaded Berry ...now what? 09:57 Mon Sep 3
Lighten the tail shading just a tad. SilverThe Glee Project 16:07, September 3, 2012 (UTC)
Still working, Berry? RowanOnly One Can Judge... 20:58, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Berry ...now what? 03:08 Sun Sep 9
Define -> side shading please. x3 ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:14, 09, 09, 2012
That's where the light's coming from...o3o Berry ...now what? 08:18 Sun Sep 9
Make the texture and color match the other images better please. Paleggy Ship it 18:30, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. —Garrus ღ 15:43, 9/11/2012
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 19:43, 9/11/2012
Icewhisker (MC) - Declined
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[[File:Icewhisker.mc.png]]Shading was blotchy and head shadin gneeded to be defined. The earpink fizzed out on me to I had to fix it too. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 14:26, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading a tiny bit. ☀Iciloo☀ 15:23, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Blur the shading on his chest and neck. —Roxy wonk wink 15:41, September 4, 2012 (UTC)
Define the ear pink. —Garrus ღ 16:20, 9/4/2012
Re-Ups^ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 19:07, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
Could you smooth out the shading on the front legs and neck? SplookSweet serendipity. 20:45, September 5, 2012 (UTC)
Re-Uploaded I forgot how much shading hates me. e.e RowanOnly One Can Judge... 12:30, September 8, 2012 (UTC)
It could just be me, but maybe blur the tail shading a bit? Dazzle~♪ 00:03, September 9, 2012 (UTC)
I think the tail shading is fine, but could you blend and smooth out the midriff shading? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:18, 09, 09, 2012
Re-Ups^ RowanOnly One Can Judge... 17:56, September 9, 2012 (UTC)
Can you now define the overall shading? ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D 06:43, 10, 09, 2012
And then smooth it a bit. It's somewhat blotchy all over. -Raelic Non temete l'obscurità 20:53, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. I'll take over from here. —Garrus ღ 19:39, 9/11/2012
Archiving. —Garrus ღ 19:43, 9/11/2012
Ashfur (SC) (E) ~ Withdrawn
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[[File:Ashfur (SC).elder.png]] This is tweaked, all I did was blur the shading and earpink into non-existance and you can pretty much guess after that x3. I added texture, too, but if anyone doen't approve of it, tell me and I'll gladly remvied it. Comments? I fail at the shading on elders x.x Berry ...now what? 08:39 Mon Sep 10
Blur the shading. SilverThe Glee Project 11:02, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
Personally I think it's a bit mottle/dappled, and that it was fine plain, but that's just me.... Paleggy Ship it 14:05, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
I agree with Paleh. Remove it, please. —Garrus ღ 15:42, 9/10/2012
Could you define the earpink? SplookSweet serendipity. 20:35, September 10, 2012 (UTC)
Remove the lump on his back. ☀Iciloo☀ 20:05, September 11, 2012 (UTC)
Re-uploaded Guess who didn't save the .xcf? -points at self- .-. Berry ...now what? 06:56 Wed Sep 12
Define the shading on his back-haunchish area and a tad on his tail. -Ducksauce 12:36, September 12, 2012 (UTC)
...no offense, Berry, but this looks redone. I mean, nothing matches when compared to the original image, and even the pelt is a different shade of color. Regardless, define the overall shading, not just what Duck suggested. —Garrus ღ 15:10, 9/12/2012
I'm gonna withdraw this. Elder shading bugs me xP Berry ...now what? 07:14 Fri Sep 14
Archiving Iveh Yo! 15:56, September 14, 2012 (UTC)
Oceanbreeze ~ Declined
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BluestarXOakheart (talk) 21:33, September 17, 2012 (UTC)BXO
This isn't what PCA is for, Bluestar. We only make chararts for canon characters, not fanfiction ones. Declining and archiving. Please read over the Guidelines before posting an image for approval. —Garrus ღ 19:23, 9/18/2012
Mudfur (Alt W) ~ Declined
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[[File:Mudfur.warrior.alt.png]] Comments? Berry ...now what? 06:33 Thu Sep 20
My brain is kinda dead right now but…I don't see anything in his trivia about this. Why does he get one? MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 06:46, 20, 09, 2012
In the CP allegiances, he is said to be a light brown tom, no markings said. Berry ...now what? 10:48 Thu Sep 20
I'm pretty sure this would be a partial description, and he was light brown in all of the book's allegiances, but we decided that mottled would be added to his description, as once when he appeared, and was called mottled. -Ducksauce 12:10, September 20, 2012 (UTC)
This is a partial description. Declining. Duck is correct. —Garrus ღ 15:04, 9/20/2012
Archiving. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 21:06, 20, 09, 2012
Honeyfern Alternate - Declined
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[[File:HoneyfernAlt1.png]]
How's this for Honeyfern's Alternate for being called a braken colored tabby?
I'm not very good at tabbies yet so feel free to edit that, but other than that, what do you think?
Give me feedback below, and can I be an apprentice? Thanks! shimm-ymy tatalk 08:35, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
This is not two shades. Bracken and light brown are extremely close, therefore this gets no alt. Declined. Paleggy Ship it 09:30, September 22, 2012 (UTC)
Archiving. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 15:39, 22, 09, 2012
Scourge
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[[File:Scourge.....jpg|thumb|left|200px]]This was my first every charart i ever made. I am still wondering how to do the collar and dog teeth reinforcement claws. I think i did an okay job. A little too much shading i believe. But tell me what you think. --BluestarXOakheart (talk) 01:45, September 23, 2012 (UTC)BXO
Blue, we're not here to offer opinions on other people's art. If you want to learn to make chararts, go request a mentor. You can show your mentor your chararts and you can learn to do collars and that. Berry ...now what? 01:54 Sun Sep 23
Perhaps you are confused of the meaning on this project. You might want to read the guidelines again. You're supposed to post art for articles needing images. I'm going to decline this. Scourge already has a perfectly fine image. If you need critique, do what Berry said and request a mentor. SplookSweet serendipity. 02:10, September 23, 2012 (UTC)
Waspwhisker (KP) - Declined
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[[File:Waspwhisker.kittypet.png]] Darkened and defined shading. OA was DJ. Commentos? SplookSweet serendipity. 21:49, September 15, 2012 (UTC)
Define the earpink a bit please. SilverThe Glee Project 15:11, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. SplookSweet serendipity. 21:05, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
Blur it a little and maybe make the shoulder and back highlights connect to fit the light source better? -Raelic Non temete l'obscurità 04:37, September 17, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded. SplookSweet serendipity. 04:28, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
Define the shading between and on the legs and on the tail. -Raelic Non temete l'obscurità 21:36, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the back shading a bit. RowanOnly One Can Judge... 22:41, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. Sorry, Splook. .-. —Garrus ღ 14:33, 9/23/2012
Can I take this? ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:56, September 23, 2012 (UTC)
Go for it. I'll archive this. —Garrus ღ 23:01, 9/23/2012
Squirrelflight (A) ~ Declined
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[[File:Squirrelflight.apprentice.png]] Made her dark ginger. Now bask in it's glory failness :P OA was Shelly. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 16:41, September 16, 2012 (UTC)
Shush, not failness. De-saturate her a bit more. MΘυητɣ Sucks to your Ass-mar 17:55, 16, 09, 2012
Reuploaded Why thank ya :3 De-saturated her, hope it matches more now. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 20:05, September 19, 2012 (UTC)
Darken and desaturate her more. Paleggy Ship it 20:37, September 20, 2012 (UTC)
Reuploaded Changes made. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 00:15, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
This might just be my computer screen, but the shading kinda clouds around her eye so you can't see it. Can you fix it?--.Boos Dinosaurs on a Spaceship! 20:22, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
Well, it looks a bit dark to me, but not enough that I wouldn't be able to see the eyes. I think it is fine in my opinion, but if someone else agrees, I'll do it. ☯ Mistypebble ☯ 21:57, September 21, 2012 (UTC)
Thin out the shading some. ~DJCandyFun~ I do enjoy fun...8D ~01:16, 22, 09, 2012~
This is declined due to the one week limit for tweaks. —Garrus ღ 14:33, 9/23/2012
Millie (Loner Alt) ~ Declined
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[[File:Millie.loner.Alt.png]]
Here is Millie with her lighter colored belly, paws, and muzzle. What do you think? shimm-ymy tatalk 09:46, September 23, 2012 (UTC)
Do you even have a cite/source for this description? SilverThe Glee Project 12:47, September 23, 2012 (UTC)
....Did you simply put white over her current loner image? We do not simply colour over other user's art. That's stealing. And unless this has a source (if she was called grey with white paws, belly, etc, that would warrant an alt I believe.) It'll be declined. Skt Now, you're really lying 14:24, September 23, 2012 (UTC)
Yeah, no. What Skt said. Declining. —Garrus ღ 14:28, 9/23/2012
Sol (Ro) -Tweaked
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[[File:Sol.rogue.png]] tweaked to have mottles. changes may not be showing yet. I fail ;.; Stormy I'm messing with you ♥ 02:44, September 18, 2012 (UTC)
Lighten the mottles and blur the white on the front paw. —Garrus ღ 02:47, 9/18/2012
Please work on this or it will be declined. —Garrus ღ 14:32, 9/23/2012
Sorry, Storm. But declined due to lack of work ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:54, September 25, 2012 (UTC)