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Ravenpaw ~ Withdrawn by User

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Did I spell the title right? Anyway, I tryed Ravenpaw once, but I withdrew him. Now, I'm trying again. And I did do Brightheart as an apprentice, but my stupid computer at her up!!!! UGHHH!!! For now, what do you guys think of ravenpaw? --MUMBLE785 16:54, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Looks great, but I can barely see the back shading.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 17:37, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

kk. I'll fix it.

I think he needs to be a bit lighter so we can see the shading better, but not too much, as he is black. The wite patch needs to be bigger. -- Dawnfeather  22:45, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


Oh, and Ravenpaw has yellow eyes, not green eyes.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 17:03, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

OK. SInce you guys have med cat blanks now, I'm withdrawing him to do Mothwing. --MUMBLE785 21:13, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Poppyfrost - Declined

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Hehe, I love Poppyfrost to death! So, comments anyone? --Heraldstar 17:49, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


It looks like you took one of Dawnfeather's Sorreltail's (She uploaded mabye 6) and changed the eye color. --Mallinois Herding Talk 17:50, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

hmm... I was thinking that Mal... Did you?  Sandy Talk! 17:52, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

This is declined, and I'm furious. Images made by other users shouldn't be changed by people. As seen in the picture I've provided, this is a changed version of Dawnfeather's Sorreltail. Heraldstar, you may not edit Project Character Art until December 1st. GB57 18:25, 12 June 2009 (UTC)
File:Sorreltail-Poppyfrost.png

Also, it seems Heraldstar changed the Brambleclaw picture to a Tigerstar one. GB57 18:32, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Mintfur Withdrawn

[[File:Mintfur.png]] What do you think? Eh.. nothing worth say besides that I have way to much time on my hands.-- Darkhallows  Lair 23:35, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

I think he/she (too lazy to look up Mintfur's gender) looks amazing! I love him/her! Only think that catches my eye is that the tabby stripes need blended in some parts. And make the ear pink a little wider. -- Goldencloud  00:16, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah.. I think the stripes are blended now, are they? The ear is fixed too, I think. Oh, and Mintfur is a he ^^.-- Darkhallows  Lair 01:04, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

I think the end of the tail needs to be blended more to make the colour transition more natural and the tip of the ear needs blending in too.  Sandy Talk! 09:04, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


Blended more. -- Darkhallows  Lair 09:23, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

That's better :) He looks really good Darkhallows!  Sandy Talk! 09:50, 12 June 2009 (UTC)


What I think Goldencloud means is that the stripes chnges from light to dark, sio the dark parts need more blending. --Mallinois Herding Talk 15:06, 13 June 2009 (UTC)
I tried to fix that. Is it better?-- Darkhallows  Lair 04:52, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


I think that this needs a bit more shading. There is something bothering me about the markings too. Maybe just fiddle around with them a bit. -- Dawnfeather  12:29, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


I ran into some issues with him. I might put him back up later though.-- Darkhallows  Lair 20:54, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Jayfeather withdrawn

[[File:Wikia_Jayfeather.png]] Not much to say, what do you think?MinnowclawMinnowclaw

I like your tabby marks, but add some on the chest as well. Also shade the herbs. But he looks great! --Bramble My Realm 02:25, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Afterthought; the eye needs to be a tad more blue with a pale pupil. I know he's blind but he still should look alive. :) --Bramble My Realm 02:26, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

He also needs ear pink (or more ear pink) :)  Sandy Talk! 11:31, 17 June 2009 (UTC)


I looked on the reservations page. Shim reserved Jayfeather before you. Plus, I am against those markings, because they are triangle-Garfield style markings, aka cartoony. --Mallinois Timberwolves inc. 12:26, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Silverstream - Withdrawn

Silverstream is one of my favorite characters, so I decided to do her. Is this any good? Sparrowsong 07:06, 17 June 2009 (UTC) [[File:Silverstream!.png|thumb]]

I'm sorry, but there is a Silverstream up already. Anyway, this one has no shading, and the markings are messy.-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:36, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes, there is already a Silverstream up for approval...  Sandy Talk! 13:17, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Whoops, I looked and there is another Silverstream. I'm so sorry, Shimmerpool! I didn't see your Silverstream! It looks good, by the way. Consider mine withdrawn. Sparrowsong 17:53, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Longhaired Female Leader-Declined

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I made it quickly, it's not that good, but it's just an idea. I'm sorry if someone made on already, I checked and here was none. You could color in the star with a color for the clan, like red for thunderclan, blur for riverclan, green for windclan, and black for shadowclan. It's just an idea. --Snowflurry 19:01, 17 June 2009 (UTC)Snowflurry

One problem. The background is black, but the star is a great idea! Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 19:22, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah, I didn't know how to make it white...--Snowflurry 19:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)Snowflurry


Declined. First off, you saved the wrong blank, it's too small. Second, the background is black. Third, we can't modify the warrior balnk for all of them! I suggest only modifying it for the deputy and medicine cats. If you want another go, first use the large scale base, as if ti's this tiny it can't be accepted. --
[[File:Cinderpelt (medicine cat).PNG|40px]] Mallinois Talk Page
19:30, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Birchfall- Withdrawn

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Okay, I'm really nervous about putting up art. You guys are a little intimidating. Here's my Birchfall. The changes are taking some time to come up, so the version you see might not be the most recent.

Dawnfeather, being my unofficial mentor, talked to me about it already. Hope this looks good to you! -Sparrowwing talk

More shading, and it might help to make it a little more brown.Sandwich989 16:47, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree. He looks like for of an olive green color than brown. Also it doesn't look like he has any eye color. I like this, though! ---- Goldencloud  17:12, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

Hey Sparrow, welcome to project charart! There's no need to be intimidated; the point of this is to make art, give advise to other users on how to improve their art and to have fun whilst adding to the character pages :) I personally agree with the comments Sandwich and Goldencloud have made and would like to add that blending the ear pink and shading into the pelt more will give it a more realistic look. It might help to remove the tabby markings whilst you get the shading and colour right, then add them on again - that's how I always attempt tabbies. Good luck :) [ps. please sign with 4 ~s]  Sandy Talk! 18:31, 7 June 2009 (UTC)

REUPLOADED Colored eye, fixed shading. -Sparrowwing talk

You still need to blend the ear pink and I think he needs more shading on the legs and head.  Sandy Talk! 11:28, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


Yep, he needs more shading. But I like the stripes. Nice Job!-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:38, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


REUPLOADED More shading. -Sparrowwing talk

The tabby markings sort of look like they were done with crayon. You know how a crayon leaves a mark but it's kind of scratchy on the outline and it leaves tiny marks of the background through the markings? Thicken the markings a little so they don't look like crayon and maybe get rid of that mark near his head, just past his eye. --Bramble My Realm 16:08, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


REUPLOADED Thickened stripes, More shading. -Sparrowwing talk

I can't fix my image if no one will tell me what to fix. -Sparrowwing talk

You need to not blur the stripes Sparrow - that's what's making them look so scratchy as the colour is being darkened and lightened in odd places  Sandy Talk! 17:45, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

If you have to, save some of the other approved tabbies to your computer and see how they tabby stripes lie on the pelt, and then make the changes to yours. And yes, I think what Sandy said is probably what's wrong. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree with bramble. Aren't tabby marks a pain?-- Darkhallows  Lair 08:53, 18 June 2009 (UTC)


I may put this up at a later time but I really don't have the time to work on this. Withdrawing. -Sparrowwing talk

Featherwhisker - Withdrawn

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Here is Featherwhisker, my first Medicine Cat. He was Spottedleaf's mentor, so he must be awesome! -Sparrowwing talk

He needs a lot more shading and it needs to be blended into the pelt to give a natural look. Also, the ear pink needs blending and is a very bright colour... Also try adding a transition of shades of grene to the herbs as Mal has done with her Cinderpelt.  Sandy Talk! 14:54, 13 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm in agreement with Sandy. TO Do that thin with the herbs, use the burn tool in patches, or maybe the dodge tool. Is pixlr still playing up? If it is, make sure that you give the computer a lot of time in between telling it to do things so it won' get worked up, and hopefully won't crash... -- Dawnfeather  12:49, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Get rid of that little horizontal marking jutting out by the neck; it looks strange. Shading needs to be added on the forehead, ears, and foreleg, and it all needs to be blended thoroughly. Make the ear pink a bit more pinkish, too. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

(Just wanted to add that the other way to do the herbs is siply to choose different greens on your colour selector thing)  Sandy Talk! 12:23, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Same as Birchfall, I just don't have the time to work on this. Something came up in real life, sorry. -Sparrowwing talk

Brackenfur - Withdrawn

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I don't think I like this one as much. But its your guys' opinions that matter.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 21:09, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

I think he needs to be more of a golden-brown colour rather than light brown and he needs more shading on the head, forelegs and belly area as well as increased shading on the back and chest.  Sandy Talk! 21:24, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Ok, im just gonna withdraw this. This took like Forever to finish, and I don't feel happy with it myself.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 23:19, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawn means like forget it was ever mad? I'm confuzed... ??? Lavastream, SunsetClan's Medicine Cat! 23:39, 18 June 2009 (UTC)

Yeah. I mean I don't think it was smart of me to do this. Im not experienced enough to do tabbys. Im sticking to plain colored.Summer is here!!!!!!!!!! 02:59, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Poppydawn - Withdrawn by User

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Strange yet awesome name. Only half fanfictiony. On the image - I admit to having not yet read CoTC. -- Dawnfeather  08:55, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


She was an elder, Dawn. (I think the name is too fanfictiony. Poppydawn, seriously!?) --Mallinois Cinder-Wolf 11:19, 19 June 2009 (UTC)


Oh, okay! Sorry! (I did say i haven't read it yet...) -- Dawnfeather  11:23, 19 June 2009 (UTC)

Wait. Isn't Poppydawn mentioned in Bluestar's Prophecy? You can view the first few chapters to see what I mean on harpercollins.com. She's a queen.

Brackenfur - Withdrawn

I've always liked Brackenfur and nobody else has done him from what I've seen, so I decided to try and make him. Sparrowsong 04:23, 20 June 2009 (UTC) [[File:Brackenfur!.png|thumb]]

Sandwich has reserved Brackenfur, sorry! -- Dawnfeather  04:54, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Raindrop - Declined

[[File:Raindrop.png]] I did Raindrop. How does she look? GB57 05:55, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


She has no shading, to start with. -- Dawnfeather  06:56, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Yes, she needs shading.  Sandy Talk! 13:21, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks cute! I can see shading on her, but it's really light, I can only see it when it's at the top of my screen (I have a weirdo monitor: more contrast at top) Darken it a bit. -- Goldencloud  17:16, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

She does have shading, and I can see it easily. But whatever, I'll make it darker. GB57 18:29, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Better? GB57 19:02, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

I still can only see the shading from the top of my screen, and when I can see it it needs to be blended some more. Also, the raindrop marking, instead of having a black line around it, can you just make it a gray marking like part of the pelt? --Bramble My Realm 19:47, 14 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I'll blend the shading more, but I see it fine. I don't know if it's your computers or what, but it looks almost too dark for me. Also, the black is part of the marking, because it says the mark is gray and black. GB57 23:43, 14 June 2009 (UTC)


GB, has it ever occured to you that it might be your computer? If no one else can see the shading unless it's at the top of the screen, I hate to break it to you, but they're probably right! About the black and gray, put the black through it randomly instead of as an outline. Maybe put it slightly lower, in make the shape slightly more raindrop-ish... -- Dawnfeather  06:47, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

I agree with what Dawnfeather said. The marking on the top of the head looks weird, almost like a straight line.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 13:13, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Okay, there's no point arguing. I would suggest you make the shading a little bit darker but not too much and then take Bramble/Dawnfeather's advice on the head marking.  Sandy Talk! 08:24, 16 June 2009 (UTC)

Declining only cause GB's on vacation, and this hasn't been worked on for almost a week. --Bramble My Realm 21:19, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Speckletail - Withdrawn by user

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I'm really not sure about this one... -- Dawnfeather  02:58, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Her description is pale tabby in all the books, this is more like a cream-colored cat that got some brown sugar spilled on her. :) No offense. I think maybe make some tabby stripes of the same color as the speckles, and maybe add a few speckles in with the stripes on her tail, to authenticate. --Bramble My Realm 03:18, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

I don't like to back down from a challenge like this, but this isn't exactly the best picture I've done. It is a bit of a mess, trying to balance out the speckles and tabby stripes so they are both visible.... -- Dawnfeather  03:21, 21 June 2009 (UTC)

Oakpaw - Withdrawn by User

[[File:Oakpaw.png]]

Here's Oakpaw of SkyClan. He's my first tabby. I decided to go with the original tabby stripes.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 18:39, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

He looks good, but it doesn't look like you shaded him much if at all. Also he needs more tabby stripes. -- Goldencloud  18:57, 10 June 2009 (UTC)

Increased shading and markings.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 20:01, 10 June 2009 (UTC)


I don't think that the tabby markings are very realistic. They are very small. -- Dawnfeather  10:53, 11 June 2009 (UTC)


I tried making them longer, but it didn't look right to me. It looked like he had lighting all over his body.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 16:59, 11 June 2009 (UTC)

Besides the tabby markings, it looks like he could use some more shading along his back, hind legs, front legs, and maybe a bit more along the belly. Skyfeather '95 00:32, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

Fixed.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 16:36, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

He still needs more shading; make it bigger and slightly darker. Also, the marking - they do need to be bigger - look at some of the approved tabby apprentices for reference  Sandy Talk! 18:07, 12 June 2009 (UTC)

My computer would turn on for the last two days ( don't know why ), and sorry I haven't been able to edit this.--Warrior♥Warrior's Palace 23:48, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

It's been a while since you worked on this, Warrior. I understand if you're having cp problems, but please work on this as soon as possible. I'll repeat what Sandy said; to do some tabby markings a little longer, maybe add a few more, and if you need help to look at the other tabby apprentices. --Bramble My Realm 20:58, 20 June 2009 (UTC)

Will be declined tomorrow if no progress is shown. --Bramble My Realm 00:31, 22 June 2009 (UTC)

I'm going to withdraw this.

Silverstream-Withdrawn by User

[[File:Silverstream.png]]Insert non-formatted text here :Since I couldn't do my favorite warrior, I do someone who is very close to him. His first true love, Silverstream. Tell me what you think of her. Pixlr started acting funny near the end with her shading and blending so I'll get around to fixing that later cause its bugging the crap out of me.-- ♪Shimmer 03:07, 16 June 2009 (UTC)


Highlights sorta make this one all smudgey --Mallinois Timberwolves inc. 00:22, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

Her pelt sorta looks like a spider web. :) I think your tabby marks are a little too curved; unfurl them and straighten them out into the main pelt area some more. --Bramble My Realm 02:24, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

The dot underneath her eye makes her look kind of tired. Other than that, I think this is beautiful. Sparrowsong 20:15, 17 June 2009 (UTC)

She looks good, but to me it looks like you sharpened the highlights into the pelt rather than blurred them. Smooth them out quite a bit with the blurr tool, without messing up your tabby markings. K? This might just be me though...--MUMBLE785 00:55, 23 June 2009 (UTC)


Actually I never added highlights to her, just added lots of shading to the original color. Sorry Mumble you posted that comment while I was working on her so I can't do that now since I redid her all over. I wanted to try something different with tabby markings cause I was getting tired of my same old way with squiggly lines. I think she came out lighter than she was in GIMP for some odd reason. It kept messing up when I was shading her in some spots so that may be the problem. Anyway...comment-- ♪Shimmer 01:18, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Argh the image won't upload for some reason. I'll have to re add it later.-- ♪Shimmer 01:21, 23 June 2009 (UTC)
Withdrawing for now. I want to give her a rest till I can figure out whats the problem with her uploading.-- ♪Shimmer 01:34, 23 June 2009 (UTC)

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