Talk: Charart/Declined Art 7

Berrynose - Declined[]

Hi, this is my first entry! I hope you like it. I did it on corel painter essentials 4.-- Thornpath^togehodou [[File:Berrynose2.gif|thumb|left|I added some shading ]]

I know Berrynose is cream, but it looks you just gave him a bunch of orange lines on a white background. Plus there needs to be shading and that means tons of that.-- ♪Shimmer^♫ 04:32, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

The tail certainly needs fixing. Badly. The outline is also very thin. --Mal ^lin ois 14:34, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Update:Okay, I took some advice and added some shading. Also, I took someones advice and changed the coloring a bit. What do you think--Thornpath^togehodou 21:05, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

Can you please explain how the tail needs fixing?--Thornpath 20:07, 15 February 2009 (UTC)Thornpath

It doesn't. G B 57 20:31, 15 February 2009 (UTC)

I think the fur coloring is -extremely- well done! My only crit is that I think the eyes should appear more amber in colour; right now it looks a little black. --Melonlemon 02:46, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Isn't Berrynose's nose supposed to be a stunning pink (via the name and Firestar's Quest)? --MUMBLE785 18:27, 16 February 2009 (UTC)

Um, well on these blanks it doesn't give you the choice to color in the nose.--Thornpath^togehodou 05:29, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

I know about the fox trap and how his tail died, but I mean use the short-haired blank's tail to make it shorter. --Mal^linois 00:23, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

NOW it looks good. Just need to fix the blurred outline. --Mallinois^{The Puppy's Crib} File:Silvercat.png -Ui! 19:03, 21 February 2009 (UTC)

Okay, I did use the short haired blanks. Leafpool might not of cut it that short. And she bit it off when he still had kitten fur. His tail fur could of grown unnaturally.--Thornpath^togehodou 05:33, 17 February 2009 (UTC)

I really like it, but the lines on the throat are slightly colored brown.--Darkhallows 01:25, 2 March 2009 (UTC)

The needs to be more shading, and the tail is long haired while the body is short haired, which looks weird to me. I also find the stripes weird.They all end so adbruptly, and I think you need to blend them into the belly. Also, I think that they need to be blended into each other as well, because they look so unnatural. Either blur/blend the stripes, make wider, tabby stripes, or get rid of the stripes completely. Dawnfeather 06:27, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Tail fur usually gets like that if the tail is missing (http://www.pictures-of-cats.org/images/japanese-bobtail-cat-picture.jpg) but yeah, the stripes could be blended more. --DarkHallows ^Lair 23:04, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Declined; gotta work on those images, people. G B 57 15:31, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Leader pixle - Declined[]

[[File:Leaderpixal_shecat.gif]][[File:Leaderpixal_tom.gif]]

Hey, I have another leader pixle. Here it is. It's really simple. Just seeing if these will do. I also have a girl medicine cat somewhere. I'll put it up later. thanks guys! --MERLOCK 23:26, 9 March 2009 (UTC)

Fixed the coding. They are alright, but there is really not much detail, not even whiskers. There will need to be long-hairs as well. The head is a little to small and the eyes look weird at that angle, especially on the female. --Darkhallows 05:38, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

First off, I don't think it's fair that you are doing this because Melonlemon is. About the image, these kind of look like Egyptian cat statues I would find in a museum. ZZ Top Get Your Wings This House Is On Fire 12:14, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

Oh, sorry if I crashed Melonlemon's party! Hee hee, I've had these made for about a month, or longer, and my parents had to think about me making an account, so I had them for a long time. But hey, do you need new pixels of the warriors? I can make some. (or attempt to. ;) --MERLOCK 13:32, 15 March 2009 (UTC)

You can have more than one up for approval from different users, but these look like egyptians and the canvas needs to be fixed. --Mallinois ^{F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g} 13:20, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Ya, I know, they do look funny. How do become an official member of project character art? Do I just ask and that's that, or does someone have to like approve? Thanks! --MERLOCK( The Dragon Rider) [[Merlock.jpg| 70px | ]]Fantasy is real, who believes me? 19:48, 17 March 2009 (UTC)

Declined due to lack of work. G B 57 05:13, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Mistyfoot - Declined[]

I know that I'm not technically a member yet, but I made Mistyfoot. (This is my first try. Criticism well appreciated)[[File:Mistyfoot2.gif|thumb]] --Nightgaze ^{Iceberry’s Den} 03:11, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Not bad, I like her eyes a lot. But I would suggest using a more grey colour instead. Not to dark a grey though. The shadings good but you'll need it in more areas. And ad a pink for the ear. (they should really draw the outline of the inside of the ear. That would help all of us.--Thornpath^togehodou 05:27, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

The lineart seems messed up, it may be from saving it as gif.--Darkhallows 05:40, 12 March 2009 (UTC)

You don't have to be a member to make art, but Mistyfoot is a deputy, and we need more current pixels. Brambleclaw was a warrior when he was made, so he's really a deputy. --Mallinois ^{F l u f f y i s W a t c h i n g} 00:37, 13 March 2009 (UTC)

I think there needs to be a lot more shading. It seems to be a solid blue/grey colour, with a little bit of shading.

I don't think we need a deputy blank. But we do need medicine cats, leader, queen, and elder ones. Deputies are still warriors, but I guess you could say the same thing for leaders. Dawnfeather 02:24, 28 March 2009 (UTC)

I disagree Dawnfeather. If we're going to have seperate blanks for apprentices, kits, leaders, medicine cats, rogues, kittypets, elders (you get the picture...) then why not for deputies? As for this image - I agree that the colour is too blue and needs to be more cat-coloured. The shading also needs to be increased and worked into the pelt to look more natural also. --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 18:52, 31 March 2009 (UTC)

You gotta point. I agree with everything written above. Dawnfeather 21:40, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

I think this should be declined, GB Dawnfeather 04:40, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Done. G B 57 05:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Sedgekit- Declined[]

[[File:Sedgekit.gif|left]] Had some free time, drew Sedgekit, feel free to judge it's bad T.T ..::Applestar4904 17:35, 2 April 2009 (UTC)

Can it be zoomed in more? I can't tell anything about it (Other than the colour, sort of) when it's so small! Looks good though, i think Dawnfeather 05:04, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Dawnfeather, what do you mean "Zoom it in"? G B 57 05:21, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Make it bigger? Dawnfeather 11:55, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

This is te size of the lineart though... Applestar4904 12:00, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Really? That's strange. Maybe make it larger using GIMP. Dawnfeather 22:39, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

Actually, no. Don't worry about it. They just come out this small. Try putting more shading into the gray areas. Also put a little tiny bit of shading in the white areas. So cute! Dawnfeather 22:45, 3 April 2009 (UTC)

I would also suggest stronger shading. Darkhallows 21:34, 6 April 2009 (UTC)

I really hate to decline this, because it's beautiful, but this hasn't been worked on for a month. G B 57 14:26, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Darkstripe - Declined[]

[[File:Darkstripe2.png]]

Voila. Two sections. --Mallinois^{The Puppy's Crib} [[File:Himatsu.PNG|50px]] -Ui! 00:00, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Needs blending, and Darkdtripe is gray and black, not brown. His eyes should be either blue or pale yellow. That's what he's been mentioned with. --Mallinois^{The Puppy's Crib} [[File:Himatsu.PNG|50px]] -Ui! 00:00, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

Updated to be gray and black. I originally made it as a Dustpelt, but one's already submitted. I alway thought of Darkstripe as brown (bad, bad me). He's gray/black now. Flamefeather 20:23, 23 February 2009 (UTC)

I would add more shading to it, he looks a little plain. Also the eye color doesn't show through very well. Darkhallows 23:06, 24 February 2009 (UTC)

Also, the ears pink needs blending into the pelt - it's too bright and stand-out-ish at the moment. --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 19:59, 6 March 2009 (UTC)

This looks really nice! I love the colours you used. The only thing that needs fixing is the shadowing (which needs to be put in between the leg and front leg and under the ear. Also, and some stripes on the tail and then your all set!--Thornpath^togehodou 05:38, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

thanks everyone! Updated to have more shading, blended ear, striped tail. Flamefeather 12:53, 21 March 2009 (UTC)

It's an improvement but still more shading needed I think. Try adding some on the head, back and legs--Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 14:40, 7 April 2009 (UTC)

Declined. Work on your images, peoples! G B 57 05:57, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Eaglekit - Declined[]

[[File:WikiaEaglekit.png|left]]

I colored Eaglekit of Windclan because i wanted to do SOMETHING. it's my first not junky one. --brambleberry 16:19, 24 April 2009 (UTC)Brambleberry

Okay. Firstly the ears need some pink in them but be careful not to make it too bright and stand-out-ish. Then you need to work on adding some shading into the image to make it look more 3D and realistic. Around the head, chin, legs and sides would help. --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 17:27, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Nose is too pink, ears aren't pink, no shading. It can be difficult, but find a pink for the ears and nose that is bright enough to be at least pink-ish, but not so bright that it stands out or looks un-natural. Welcome to Charart! Dawnfeather 11:50, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Hasn't been worked on for over a week. G B 57 23:53, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Tumblekit - Declined[]

[[File:WikiaTumblekit.png|left]] i colored Tumblekit of Riverclan. Feel free to say how bad it is. brambleberry 16:32, 24 April 2009 (UTC)Brambleberry

Firstly, the ears and nose are waay too bright and are making the image very unnatural. Secondly you need to add shading as with your Eaglekit image. Make sure it's blended thoroughly. Also - something about the colours you've chosen is strange to me...I think it might look better is the cat was a lighter colour and the tabby stripes slightly darker than the rest of the fur. There also needs to be stripes on the whole body not just the sides--Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 17:31, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Isnt he a tabby, and a plump face? This isn't very good....- A PERSON.

"A PERSON" (Your IP address can be viwed by the way) that was an incredibly rude comment to make to anyone, especially to someone who is new to charart. Him having a plump face is not really something that can be put across in the image as we're not allowed to change the lineart as such. As for the tabby stripes, he does need them but you didn't have to be rude. --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 12:18, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

Hasn't been worked on for over a week. Declined. G B 57 23:53, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Bumblekit - Declined[]

[[File:WikiaBumblekit.png|left]] Bumblekit of Thunderclan. brambleberry 17:21, 24 April 2009 (UTC)Brambleberry

Shading again and the ear pink needs adding--Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 17:32, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

Shading, much more realistic tabby markings, and ear colour all need to be done. Dawnfeather 10:02, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Hasn't been worked on for over a week. G B 57 23:58, 6 May 2009 (UTC)

Medicine Cat Blanks - Declined[]

I'm back! This time I'm trying to contribute with these medicine cat blanks. I made them look as realistic as I could, and tried to stick with the style of the previous blanks. And, as trivia, the herb that the medicine cat is carrying is coltsfoot! Well...if one were to color the flower yellow. XD But either way, constructive criticism is welcome. I hope these are fine! C: --Hazelflower 04:43, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Me likey! --Spottedleaf x firestar 11:10, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Cool! The coltsfoot was definately a nice touch!--J K O 13:13, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

First of all, there already are medicine cat blanks up for approval. The coltsfoot was nice, but these blanks look a bit manga-ish. Good effort though. --FxC **^{The Waterfall}** 13:48, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

I didn't know there couldn't be more than one up for approval at a time!! I'm sorry. D: Also, do you have any suggestions, perhaps? It'd be more helpful if you were to tell me how to make them look more realistic, rather than just saying they look mangaish, ya know? But I really appreciate the honesty. :D --Hazelflower 20:36, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

Well, the eyes need to be a bit bigger, and maybe even out the facial features, so the forehead isn't so big? --FxC **^{The Waterfall}** 00:02, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

There can be more than one of a certain blank for approval at a time; just because one is already p, doesn't mean that another can't be posted.––Σulãlíã⁴⁵⁹ ₆₇₈ 00:07, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

I think Kitsu is going to deal with this problem soon, that way there won't be any arguements. G B 00:22, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

And also I would like to tie in with Eu, the person said they'd like to decline the art themselves so really its ok for another blank to be up. Kitsu just hasn't been up to update it so I see nothing wrong with it all. Also GB and FB I know you guys are helping out alot while Kitsu is away, but you don't have to act like you guys are the leaders of this. I'm just saying how it feels to me. Anyway...I personally love the blank Hazelflower. Great job and they do seem realistic. Maybe you could even redo some of the other bases, you know? -- Shim-Shim^{Shimmering Crystals} 04:33, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for the advice, FC. I really appreciate it! C: And I hope it didn't cause any controversy...? I just wanted to make some blanks. XD~ And thanks, Shim-Shim. I appreciate the compliment! :D -Hazelflower 04:38, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Update! Okay, so I made the foreheads smaller like you (sort of) suggested, FC. I tried to move the facial features around, but it just looked really weird to me. Either way, I hope it looks a little better now. -Hazelflower 00:54, 9 November 2008 (UTC)

Okay, Let's get this party started... Very nice work. But not 100% set for approval, as I have a few tweaks. They all probably stem from what I think is a usual Anime-style of drawing that you have. It's not necessarily anything bad, just some tweaks I'd like to see to get them to fit a bit more with existing blanks and amp up the realism a touch. You've got a great start, though. I like the head as it is now. You might want to raise the eyes a pixel or so, but I don't know if that would acctually help deal with the high cranium. It might acctually be best as it is now. Now... Something about the far-foreleg is weird to me... I'm not 100% sure, but I think it's just that it starts so far forward compared to the other. You've acctually got the same effect happening on the far-hind, also. And the tail seems... a tad long. You've got a stellar start, however. OH! And for the longhairs... Can we get a touch of shaggy on the head and legs? Not too much, just a bit! Like at teh elbow and knee and between the ears. Not too much, just a little so they look less sleek. Kitsufox ^{Fox's Den} 15:33, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

All right! :D I worked really hard on improving these, and I hope that they're to everyone's liking. I even moved the eyes up a pixel (and the cat's left eye closer to the other just a bit) and I quite like the result. C: -Hazelflower 22:29, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

They're looking great. I still have one thing I think needs work. It's more pronounced on the shorthair... But there's just something a little weird about the connection of the neck to the body. You're getting there, and it's looking excellent. Kitsufox ^{Fox's Den} 17:40, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks, Kitsu! Sorry I haven't said anything in, what, a few days? School was busy this week, but now it's the weekend! I'll give an update as soon as I've fixed it. C: -Hazelflower 20:25, 15 November 2008 (UTC)

Update again!! Okay, so, I finally found the time to tweak it just a tad. I brought in the back neckline a bit on the short-hair bases, and I moved down the long-hair back just by about a pixel (but I'm debating on just moving it back up). So, I hope this update is all right! -Hazelflower 02:47, 19 November 2008 (UTC)

Looks great to me!--Jakko 123 21:49, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

If you shift the shoulder-blade you added in back a bit, I think it'll be perfect. Putting it in kinda... got my brain around what was off about the shoulder area. Also, keep in mind you'll need to scale the image, also, so that it's in scale with the Warrior Pixel. Great work! Kitsufox ^{Fox's Den} 16:28, 25 November 2008 (UTC)

How do you tell the difference between the male and female blanks? They all look like females to me. User:Mallinois/Coyote=background:Black>Coyote The Doghouse 00:03, 1 December 2008 (UTC)

The eyes - the females have more pointed eyes where as the males have rounded edges.--Sandy 20:15, 2 December 2008 (UTC)

These are great, I hope they get approved. Nice touch ith the herbs.--Redflare 19:40, 14 December 2008 (UTC)

Still, they all look like females, so I suggest adding a more masculine quality to the males. Warm Regards, Mal^linois 20:34, 21 December 2008 (UTC)

I like them, but go with what malinois said(make males more massculine), and the full sized blanks are way to huge... --Mumble785 23:05, 9 January 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in a while, but please take the feminine quanities out. Can you imagine Jayfeather in one of these? Frankly, I also think that the blanks are manga-ish, and they need to look more like real cats. Otherwise, they look good. Keep working! --Mallinois^{The Puppy's Crib} The Puppy then barked -Ui! 22:03, 28 February 2009 (UTC)

I think I know what you could do to make it less feminine, The point of the head in the side, if you make it less pointy they might look more massculine ..::Applestar4904 14:37, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Maybe make the shoulder a tiny bit wider on the male. Also, I don't know how good or bad this would look, but maybe make the legs and body a pixel thicker for the tom? Don't know how any of this would look, but I love your effort, and the nice touch with the coltsfoot. Dawnfeather 21:19, 1 April 2009 (UTC)

Much as I like these... they haven't been workd on in months. I don't want to mini-mod or anything but...--DarkHallows ^Lair 02:44, 24 April 2009 (UTC)

I'm sorry I haven't been on here for ages. But I'm here now, and I think what I'm going to do, taking all the critiques and constructive criticism I've gotten is either try to restore these or do them over completely. Thanks for the input, everyone! I hope you're all not too very mad at me. :C Hazelflower 17:35, 27 April 2009 (UTC)

Not mad at all! I hope that wasn't offensive, I just like it when the page is free of clutter xD.--DarkHallows ^Lair 03:24, 29 April 2009 (UTC)

It's been way too long since these were worked on. Declined. G B 57 23:35, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

Icepaw- Withdrwan[]

[[File:75px-Apprenticelongf.gif|left]]

I tried my hand on Icepaw- I hope it wasn't too bad. I might need some more shading, and I don't know exactly what happened to the size.

Remember to sign with the four tildes. And to get it the right size you need to click on it before using it on the main page. Also, you should probably save this picture as Icepaw.something, instead of what it is now. --Bramble ^{Bramble's Realm} 02:33, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Maybe this should wait until OoTS? Since it is VERY strongly suggested that they will be warriors in between series?Sandwich 989

We are doing them in all stges of life, right? I like this, but I think she could have a little more shading. -- Dawnfeather 05:51, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

hmm...the size is a problem. You need to try again on the larger sized blank I think. Also, Dawnfeather is right, more shading would make it a lot better Sandy ^Talk! 08:43, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Withdrawed- Firebird2102

Was this your's, Firebird? If you want to withdraw it, you can also change the title to make it more immediantly obvious. -- Dawnfeather 08:17, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Sandstorm-Withdrawn[]

[[File:Sandstorm1.PNG]]

I originally had this as Birchfall, but I decided it lokked more like sandstorm. I then changed the eye. --Ms ^T C 16:29, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

This does look more like Sandstorm than Birchfall. I think the ear needs to be blended more and more shading is needed. Also, I know she is a plae ginger tabby but perhaps the tabby markings could be slightly more visible? Sandy ^Talk! 16:57, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

It needs more shading around the edges? Sandy is right-- you need to make the tabby markings a bit darker because with them so close to the base colour of her pelt they just look like little bumps on her skin. -- Dawnfeather 08:19, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Oh yeah, I forgot to say something; I really like this! The colour shoice is really good. -- Dawnfeather 08:20, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Her description says her tabby markings are barely visible, so I won't darken them, but I'll work on the shading. --Ms ^T C 20:50, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

I still think they should be a little bit darker, because they don't even look like tabby markings when they are that close to the base colour. -- Dawnfeather 06:28, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

I want to withdraw this, because I'm finalizing Sunpaw, my first tortoisheshell, and don't want to work on this anymore. --Ms ^T C 22:13, 11 May 2009 (UTC)

Clovertail - Declined[]

[[File:Clovertail.png]]

A piece of artwok that I am throwing at you because I got bored, once again. I need advice! --Mumble785 17:50, 2 January 2009 (UTC)

You're adding a highlight down the back, instead of shading. As I have said, use Gorse's Weaselfur as a model for shading. --Mal^linois 21:23, 3 January 2009 (UTC)

You can add a highlight too, but I think you need a thicker band of shading behind it before the highlight--Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 16:14, 5 January 2009 (UTC)

Is that better? --Mumble785 00:20, 11 January 2009 (UTC)

I can see that the outline's blended. --Mallin^ois13 23:06, 20 January 2009 (UTC)

Better? I also added more shading. --MUMBLE785 18:20, 22 February 2009 (UTC)

It looks too dark. --Mallinois ^{B e w a r e o f F l u f f y} 22:20, 4 March 2009 (UTC)

ok. i need to put some of my images on hold, including this one. not able to be as active as I used to. :( --MUMBLE785 18:57, 7 March 2009 (UTC)

I don't think there is anything to fix in this. It's really good, I think it's the best one I've seen so far. Can someone please approve this? Please.--Thornpath^togehodou 05:54, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

-Gets excited- Thanks, Thornpath! --MUMBLE785 20:12, 14 March 2009 (UTC)

I love it, i really do, but i think that the shading under the chin is a little bit weird. Have a look at weasel fur, and try and make the shading there stick out a little more underneath the head? Dawnfeather 23:24, 9 April 2009 (UTC)

Ok. --MUMBLE785 17:10, 10 April 2009 (UTC)

Updated. Is that better? (P.S. Sorry for my absence...) --MUMBLE785 18:17, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

This is excellent Mumble. Any more comments before this is approved? G B 57 23:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Yes, this is really good. The only thing I can see is that the ear pink seems a little too big on the lower side Apart from that it's ready --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 16:34, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

The shading on the neck makes it seem as if there is no cheek/jaw bone (or the cat equilvalent). Make a small dip on the upper part to make it better. -- Dawnfeather 08:09, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

This hasn't been worked on in awhile, I say just approve it.--DarkHallows ^Lair 22:49, 12 May 2009 (UTC)

I am not part of Project Character Art, but I'd like to say that this matches the good quality of the other art on WWiki. -Sparrowwing talk 23:00, 12 May 2009 (UTC)

Oh come on, Darkhallows! Let us perfectionists have our fun! :D -- Dawnfeather 08:14, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

Lol, go ahead. I just hope Mumble comes on soon. [S]he has nice images. --DarkHallows ^Lair 10:07, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

It was good, now the ear pink is huge on the low side, and the neck shading stretches out too much. Plus, I just realized, Clovertail was never a warrior, she was a queen. --Ms ^T C 20:12, 13 May 2009 (UTC)

Well spotted Mallinois...in that case this should sadly be declined... Sandy ^Talk! 18:42, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

Sigh.. I agree. -- Dawnfeather 07:32, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, she became a warrior, but that neck shading is nagging me, and this hasn't been worked on for months, so I'm declining. G B 57 00:08, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Blossomkit - Declined[]

[[File:Blossomkit.png|left]] I took a stab at a tortoiseshell. The white spots aren't that good, though. --Gοlδεn ^pαω 23:54, 30 April 2009 (UTC)

Try to add a little more order to the patches. They all overlap and clash. Google tortoiseshell and see how some real ones look. Right now it just looks like she got splattered with paint(no offense, it's a cute vision in my mind ;) --Bramble ^{Bramble's Realm} 01:15, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Well, I own a tortie, and not a bit of her color is organized.=/ --Gοlδεn ^pαω 02:49, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, Bramble, I think the patches are fine. You don't want to organize the patches. That just makes the cat look...staged. Goldenpaw, if you could brighten the ears a little bit, this would actually be ready for approval. Nice job :). G B 57 04:05, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

It looks messy. Not like you were discussing earlier, like how it is organised. I think that there are too many different shades of ginger, and the tranitions between colours are just smudged everywhere. Most of the body is covered in randomness (which i don't mind) and then on top of the head it is all dark. Also, I think there needs to be tabby markings in the ginger bits, from looking at my cats. Torties aer just ginger tabbys with black splattered iver them, and then sometimes white too. I can't remember, because this has taken me a few minutes to write, but I don't think there was much shading either. Dawnfeather 04:11, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Edited. Though, I think the colors I choose for the orange and cream seem a bit unnatural. I think I should change it later.=/ --Gοlδεn ^pαω 04:37, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Actually, this is very nice. Excellent job, Goldenpaw! Any more comments before approval? G B 57 04:52, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

I think the contrast is too high between the greys and the other colours. Maybe a brownish colour for the body? -FaRReR

Also, it doesn't look very 3-D, especially around the boundary between the neck and the head.

You added a bit of shading on the back, but the change between that and the lighter black is too sudden. Blend it some more. The needs to be more shading - on the other side. The oranges are still too bright and unnatural, and maybe use less different ones, just the one orange/ginger. Then put tabby markings on them. Dawnfeather 05:00, 2 May 2009 (UTC) I disagree, GB.

The only thing I see wrong with this is the small smudges that are out of the lines. Fix those, and this is ready. G B 57 05:10, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Hate to break it to you, but i just did a bit of research. Shadowclan blossomkit it white, and thunderclan blossomkit is a brown tabby with a dark stripe down her back. Neither are tortie. Dawnfeather 05:19, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Dawnfeather's right. FaRReR 05:25, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Dawnfeather was trying to post that for 15 minutes. She is really really angry. Whatever you are doing, keep it up ;) -Devestatorie, Older brother of Dawnfeather.

I guess you wouldn't mind if I smashed in this computer. You always hog the laptop. XP Dawnfeather 05:39, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Changed the ginger a bit. And the brown tabby thing is a mess-up. When she was born in Eclipse, she was tortoiseshell-and-white. --Gοlδεn ^pαω 06:31, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

but offically she is a brown tabby with a dark stripe down her back.. Dawnfeather 06:34, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Did they forget why they named her Blossomkit in the first place?=/ --Gοlδεn ^pαω 06:48, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

yeah, it seems so. But still, offically shes brown. Maybe we should wait for GB to use his authority to make a decision. In my opinion, she should be done brown, but if you continue to do her tortie, i would suggest following these steps;

1)colour a kitten a ginger pattern that you are happy with. If you feel like it, add tabby

2) add the (large) splashes of black

3) add the white 'petals' that Millie described.

don't forget the ears, eyes, nose, ec. Dawnfeather 06:54, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

The ginger patches are way too bright and unnatural, and I just noticed that there's no shading. -- Mallinois ^{Fluffy's Territory} 12:37, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Dawnfeather, officially she's tortie. Her first description is the true one. They even said they were naming her because of her pelt. She's tortie. Now, let's keep this conversation civil, or I'll have to ask that you don't comment in this section. Goldenpaw, this is lovely, I just need for you to clear up the smears that managed to escape the lines, and maybe a bit of shading on her. That'll be enough. :) G B 57 14:22, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Edited. At first, I was just using the burn for shading, but now I did it by hand.;3 --Gοlδεn ^pαω 15:46, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Whoa! I liked it at first, but now she looks like she fell in Kraft Mac & Cheese! Maybe you could change the colors back. G B 57 18:20, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

xD I'll get right to it. --Gοlδεn ^pαω 19:08, 2 May 2009 (UTC)

Whoa, this sure has caused some problems. I've been looking at the image for about five minutes just trying to decide whether I like it. I actually do - especially the head. The only problem I can see is that the ginger on the body just seems a little too bright. I'm not sure though. (ps. GB, What is Kraft Mac & Chesse out of interest?) --Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 16:44, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

I've worked it out. The ginger patches seem to stand out from the pelt as if they're 3D themselves on top of the actual coat...--Sandy ^{Leader's Den} 17:08, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

Also - the background needs to be transparent Sandy ^Talk! 20:08, 3 May 2009 (UTC)

More shading, and the ginger patches need to be less bright, as they standout at the moment. Make the tabby markings wider. -- Dawnfeather 08:11, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

I seriously think that we should leave Blossom until we know for sure what she looks l ike. In the fourth series she will be a warrior or an apprentice and will probably be a more major character. She will probably have a more definite desciption than what she has now. -- Dawnfeather 07:46, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Declined; lack of work. G B 57 00:06, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

Kittypet Blanks- withdrawn[]

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Can you say ew? I should stick to coloring. Oh well, here they are. With soooo many problems. -Sigh- --DarkHallows ^Lair 04:06, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

The females eyes are miles apart, and the heads are a little small. -- Dawnfeather 06:06, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

I changed the eyes, but the head size might not work. See the longhairs would by too big if I changed them, and then they'd be uneven...--DarkHallows ^Lair 09:42, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Okay. They just look a little.. weird. I can't put my finger on what it is, but i'll figure it out sometime, and then i'll tell you. :) -- Dawnfeather 09:48, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

On the (our left, their right) shoulder of the shorthairs there is a little indent, going in two pixels in two pixels of height. It needs to be wider when it meets the collar, so when you make the change to the next pixel thinner, only make it one thinner and conntinue that up until the collar. (Now it's my turn to not make any sense XD) -- Dawnfeather 12:53, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Taking them out for now, I might work on them and use them later though. --DarkHallows ^Lair 04:46, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Eaglekit - Withdrawn by User[]

[[File:Eaglekit.png]] I did Eaglekit, since Briarkit was finally approved. Criticism is welcome. G B 57 23:33, 7 May 2009 (UTC)

I like it, but the chin line could be a little thinner. --Ms ^T C 00:09, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

I have to agree. Cute though!--DarkHallows ^Lair 00:17, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Better? G B 57 02:43, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

I think more shading is needed on the sides and top of the head Sandy ^Talk! 13:17, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

The chin line where it connects with the right side of the body needs to be thinner. --Bramble ^{Bramble's Realm} 02:33, 9 May 2009 (UTC)

Lots thinner. Also, It looks rather flat because it is generally one colour (in the middle, the edges have shading so they look better). Too fix this, I would suggest a bit more shading between the front legs, and some highlights. -- Dawnfeather 08:14, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

How do you do highlights? G B 57 22:55, 14 May 2009 (UTC)

Like shading but not on the very edge where the shading is, and lighter than the base colour. -- Dawnfeather 06:00, 15 May 2009 (UTC)

If you meant on the tool to use, it should be called the dodge tool. Mine looks like a microphone. --Bramble ^{Bramble's Realm} 01:35, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

I don't even do that - I just get a lighter coour and then blend it in. -- Dawnfeather 10:36, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

Better? G B 57 23:32, 20 May 2009 (UTC)

Has it uploaded? i can't see any highlights. -- Dawnfeather 09:07, 21 May 2009 (UTC)

I can barely see the shading or the highlights, if you added any. I'm sorry if I sound harsh. ;)--Warrior^♥ 00:53, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

hmm...I think that by adding highlights you've lost the impact of the shading and he looks a bit...flat... Sandy ^Talk! 07:18, 22 May 2009 (UTC)

I think that it looks flat too, but I think that it can be fixed by putting in highlights a bit away from the edge, and making the shading darker. I also think that the shading beneath the chin is actually too low. There is a small gap between it and the chin! -- Dawnfeather 07:09, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

I think I'll stick to declining and approving for now. G B 57 19:59, 24 May 2009 (UTC)

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