Warriors Wiki talk:Charart/Tweak Nominations/Approved 15

Diesel ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Diesel.loner.png File:Diesel.kittypet.png his description says black stripes. they're dark grey right now. david ^🌈 09:48, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take the loner if the oa doesn't want it. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:33 AM, Thu Sep 25, 2014

And I'll have the Kittypet, if the OA doesnt mind. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 14:59, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:25 Thu Sep 25

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:32, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(16:37, 9/29/2014)

Ivytail (Alt A) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Ivytail (SC).apprentice.alt.png This looks more golden-brown/tawny than normal brown to me. I'd like this if it passes. Queen Beebs 18:13, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:17, September 14, 2014 (UTC)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:28 PM, Sun Sep 14, 2014

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:49 Mon Sep 15

Looks brown to me. -Rustle _{it takes a leap of faith}15:47 Mon Sep 15 2014

-Ducksauce 03:41, September 20, 2014 (UTC)

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:28, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(16:37, 9/29/2014)

Snowdrop (KP) - Tweak Nomination

File:Snowdrop.kittypet.png - Flat shading and could define the depth in the eyes. Mine ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 01:28, September 22, 2014 (UTC)

I was gonna nominate it anyway Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:28, September 22, 2014 (UTC)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:30 PM, Mon Sep 22, 2014

I honestly think it's fine and I really love those eyes. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:07 Tue Sep 23

Agreeing with Hawky. Brick 05:34, September 23, 2014 (UTC)

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 14:19, September 23, 2014 (UTC)

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:32, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(16:37, 9/29/2014)

Birchfall (Alt A) - Tweak Nomination

File:Birchfall.apprentice.alt.png The shading appears flat. I'd like this if the OA doesn't want it. Brick 22:03, September 26, 2014 (UTC)

Tweak Nominations are closed, so we aren't taking any more nominations. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:24 Fri Sep 26

nudges Shouldn't this be archived if we're not taking nominations right now? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:12 PM, Mon Sep 29, 2014

I opened them up again so let's go. —Jayce(16:32, 9/29/2014)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:34 PM, Mon Sep 29, 2014

Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:39, September 29, 2014 (UTC)

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:11, September 29, 2014 (UTC)

I never actually voted... ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:32 Mon Sep 29

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:40, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

Beechfur (RC) ~ Tweak Nomination

A, W More for the apprentice then the warrior, but the warrior could use some work too. Shading is flat. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:25, September 18, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take both if no one else wants them. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:02 PM, Fri Sep 19, 2014

I'd like the warrior, if the OA doesnt want it? ^^' Unless Rocket wants both.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 02:59, September 20, 2014 (UTC)

The warrior is mine, please. -Ducksauce 03:41, September 20, 2014 (UTC)

I think they're fine, imho. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}14:23 Sat Sep 20

meh i just want the app. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 3:12 PM, Sat Sep 20, 2014

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:29, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(16:37, 9/29/2014)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:42, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

Rock (Healer) - Tweak Nomination

File:Rock.healer.png Just some slight shading/highlight definition is all I'm nominating this for. It seems flat and I think perhaps tweaking it might work. Nothing real big, just something that doesn't make it seem flat... if it passes, I want this. Rock is cool. —Jayce(16:37, 10/4/2014)

 ~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 18:09, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 18:10, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

yep ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:22, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:23, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

Gonna be fun shading on that pelt! User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:46 PM, Sat Oct 4, 2014

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:16 Sat Oct 4

Pebblefoot ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Pebblefoot.kit.png and all others. The shading on all three is flat, and I think it could use some definition. I also don't think they look very pale. If its alright, I'd like the set. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:11, September 29, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading on the kit is fine, but they could be made a bit paler. —Jayce(19:57, 9/29/2014)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:56 PM, Mon Sep 29, 2014

I was going to nominate these myself. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:32 Mon Sep 29

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:39, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

could I nudge this for votes?❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 17:18, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

yes you can. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 21:01, October 6, 2014 (UTC)

Dawnflower (A) ~ Tweak Nomination

A Same as all the other apprentices I've nominated. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:37, September 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think its fine. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:17 Thu Sep 18

Could use a highlight, again I'll take this if no one wants it. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:02 PM, Fri Sep 19, 2014

Brick 16:11, September 20, 2014 (UTC)

I think it needs just a bit of depth ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:30, September 25, 2014 (UTC)

Can i nab this if the OA doesnt want it?--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:41, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

I already said I wanted it, Breeze. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:13 PM, Wed Oct 1, 2014\

Oops, i missed that. ^^'.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 03:12, October 2, 2014 (UTC)

It's fine Breeze. :) (not trying to be pushy) Can the people who haven't voted please vote so we can get these out into the world? User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 11:01 PM, Sun Oct 5, 2014

I can see the shading on this one just fine. Overly defined shading on lighter gray cats like this can sometimes...be a bit messy....so leaving like this is fine. —Jayce(23:03, 10/5/2014)

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:22, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Mossyfoot ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Mossyfoot.warrior.png File:Mossyfoot.apprentice.png the white on these are grey as heck, id ike these if they pass. david ^🌈 03:28, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(03:32, 10/10/2014)

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:14, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:18 Fri Oct 10

Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 15:04, October 11, 2014 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:21, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Sunfish (A) ~ Tweak Nomination

A OK, I did a real crap job at tweaking this last time. Shading still looks flat, I'd like it if it passes and the OA doesn't want it. Got my keyboard fixed :DShinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:19, October 2, 2014 (UTC)

Light source could use a bit of work too, imho. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:57 PM, Thu Oct 2, 2014

^ ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:15 Thu Oct 2

—Jayce(16:37, 10/4/2014)

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 00:05, October 5, 2014 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:24, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Cinderpelt (MC Alt 2) ~ Tweak Nomination

MC Alt 2 The shading looks kind of flat, and the ear pink a little too blurred and indistinct. If the OA doesn't mind, I'd like to take this, if it passes. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:37, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

I was the last person to work on that and I might still have the file, so I'm gonna sneak in here and claim that. The shading's been bugging me for a while now. —Jayce(16:39, 10/8/2014)

She looks fine to me. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:25 PM, Wed Oct 8, 2014

❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 17:37, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:12 Thu Oct 9

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:24, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:14, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Rainwhisker (Alt A) ~ Tweak Nomination

Alt A The shading seems a bit directionless, with shadows being cast on both the top and bottom of the body. If the OA doesn't mind, I'd like to take this one, if it gets approved. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 16:49, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

It looks flat, too, and the earpink is a bit neon. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:07, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

ye User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:25 PM, Wed Oct 8, 2014

—Jayce(17:31, 10/8/2014)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:12 Thu Oct 9

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:23, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:15, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Blackstar (Ki, A, W) ~ Tweak Nomination

Ki,A, W Flat shading, which I honestly can't even see, and they look grey. I'd like the kit and apprentice if they pass and the OAs don't mind. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 17:13, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

I think the shading is fine but the earpink is a bit neon-ish User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 5:26 PM, Wed Oct 8, 2014

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 17:44, October 8, 2014 (UTC)

Can we also include the warrior in here? The shading on that one makes the image look really gray and flat and I'd love to redo it. —Jayce(21:44, 10/8/2014)

I'm sure we could. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}0:11 Thu Oct 9

Added the warrior for you, and the kit too since it looks kinda grey and flat. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 06:57, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:23, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:15, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Amberpaw (Alt Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination

Alt Ki White looks grey. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:51, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

I don't think it does personally, but if this passes, I'd like this. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 14:12, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 6:15 PM, Thu Oct 9, 2014

It's fine. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:31 Thu Oct 9

Looks a bit gray to me. Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 20:47, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

It looks more silver than white.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:20, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

I prefer the previous file with Nicholas Cage. C: Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:17, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Bird That Rides the Wind (CG) ~ Tweak Nomination

CG Flat shading, I'd like it if the OA doesn't mind. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 07:55, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

A little definition should be all it needs. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:25 Thu Oct 9

Nah, I think it's fine. —Jayce(20:35, 10/9/2014)

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 20:46, October 9, 2014 (UTC)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 8:59 PM, Thu Oct 9, 2014

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:21, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:18, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Turtle Tail (Ro) - Tweak Nomination

-> The tail doesn't match the other styles and I think could be retweaked to match a little better. I did ask Beebs if she'd mind that I retweak it a while ago, but I keep forgetting to nominate it. If it wasn't clear, I do want this, no ifs, ands, or buts about it lmao. —Jayce(21:04, 10/9/2014)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:53 Thu Oct 9

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:19 PM, Thu Oct 9, 2014

Jayie ^{Unwritten words~} 05:14, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 16:22, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:18, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

Grasspelt - Redo Nomination

W, Ki - colors don't match, they look green (moreso in the kit's case), and the warrior's looking plastic. These also don't seem to be very light brown, but instead looking more on the red color wheel..lol which is partially my fault, since when I tweaked the warrior, I messed up. I'd like both of these, since there are only two and it would be much easier. —Jayce(19:36, 9/30/2014)

I think these are fine, tbh. I think for the color they could just be tweaked, and the warrior could just use a shading tweak. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:45 PM, Tue Sep 30, 2014

I'm not sure if I can tweak the warrior- I don't have the file anymore, and it would just be easier to redo them. I've tried to tweak these in my free time before, and it didn't end well. lol —Jayce(19:48, 9/30/2014)

go for it. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 19:49, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

-Ducksauce 19:51, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:35, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

I think the warrior is fine but the kit could use some color tweaking. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:42 Wed Oct 1

The kit's fur is indeed greenish brown, it should be matched to the warrior's color.Tiger ^{Sunny days} 18:16, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

Tiger, you're not a warrior, you can't vote. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 19:23, October 4, 2014 (UTC)

I, however, can vote, and I guess if you //can't// tweak them.... Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:18, October 10, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing w/ shinx. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 20:00, October 13, 2014 (UTC)

david ^🌈 00:28, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Heathertail (Alt. A) ~ Tweak Nomination

Alt. A Flat shading. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:10, September 18, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine as it is, but that's just me. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:17 Thu Sep 18

Same comment as above. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 12:02 PM, Fri Sep 19, 2014

mine ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 21:09, September 19, 2014 (UTC)

it does seem a bit flat. And did you mean to say no, Rocket, based on your comment? ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 20:20, September 28, 2014 (UTC)

No I meant to say that I'd take it but Scarly wants it. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:37 PM, Mon Sep 29, 2014

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 20:40, September 30, 2014 (UTC)

Nope. —Jayce(23:03, 10/5/2014)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 18:13, October 12, 2014 (UTC)

alright this has been here for literally a month now; if there are no more votes on this, I'm archiving it as approved. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 14:45, October 18, 2014 (UTC)

it's had long enough - approved. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 16:42, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

Scorchfur (W) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Scorchfur.warrior.png needs other ear ripped, i want this one david ^🌈 03:02, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(03:07, 10/20/2014)

Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 08:53, October 20, 2014 (UTC)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 10:25 AM, Mon Oct 20, 2014

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}20:28 Mon Oct 20

Shouldn't his app also get both ears ripped? Brick ^{The Bite of '87} 18:52, October 21, 2014 (UTC)

no, its only described like this in bs. david ^🌈 02:53, October 22, 2014 (UTC)