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TWEAK/REDO NOMINATIONS ARE CURRENTLY: OPEN/CLOSED, BARRING THE NOMINATIONS ALREADY POSTED (see the list below for images to tweak or redo)

Nominations

If you wish to nominate an image, you link the image (like so - [[:File:image.png]]) underneath the appropriate subheading, and list the reason(s) you wish it to be redone/tweaked. Project members with the ranking of warrior or above can vote, and only five votes are necessary for the vote to pass or fail.

Tweaks

Moonflower (K) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Moonflower.kit.png The stripes appear to be darker and less "horizontal looking" on her other images. I'd like to redo the stripes. As I have the file + I am the OA, I'd like this. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:1, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

I was the one who told her to nominate it lel User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:27, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

—Ivy ☆ 21:11, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

They could use some smudging aswell ~ ☾Bramble ^{where's the hot sauce?!} 21:13, May 11, 2015 (UTC) User is not a warrior and therefore cannot vote.

only warriors can vote - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 22:44, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

Can we start archiving these nominations? It just grew overnight!Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:09, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

It's fine, imho. Also, they can only be archived with five supporting or against votes. —Jayce(07:45, 5/13/2015)

can we get a few votes on this? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Agreeing with Jayce on this one.~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:32, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 () 14:00, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:44 Thu May 21

—.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 00:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 03:45, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Hollowbelly (W) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Hollowbelly.warrior.png white looks grey. Shading could be defined. User:Burntclaw/Sig 09:47, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:59, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:25 Sun May 10

Just define the white a bit. Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:09, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

stop being so picky david ^🌈 07:43, May 13, 2015 (UTC)

—Jayce(07:44, 5/13/2015)

mine ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 04:45, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:32, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

—.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 00:33, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Bramblestar.apprentice.png etc. If he's dark brown he could be darkened, imho. User:Burntclaw/Sig 13:58, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Its fine, honestly. It doesnt have to be insanely dark, and i can still clearly see that hes dark brown.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 21:33, May 18, 2015 (UTC)

Briarlight was tweaked and her original images were as dark as these current ones. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:37, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

If he was described as very dark brown... but his not really. Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 03:31, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

He's actually described like Tigerstar, and him being dark brown is significant. If we've tweaked Briarlight for this, then Bramblestar is not exempt. This isn't dark brown. Leader image is still mine. —Jayce(03:33, 5/19/2015)

can I have the apprentice if this passes? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:37, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

the images i worked on are mine [as im forgetting at the moment] Queen Beebs 09:57, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

That would be the warrior and deputy for you, Beebs. —Jayce(10:00, 5/19/2015)

yeah based on what you've said above he could be darkened a bit. May I have the kit if this passes and the OAs (idk who they are) don't mind? —Ivy ☆ 01:50, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

If you pick on shades of brown, I wouldn't say Appledusk is light brown. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 () 13:55, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

I think he's fine, tbh. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:44 Thu May 21

Logfur - Tweak Nomination

File:Logfur.warrior.png Oh goodness, I think this was one of the first tabbies I actually did. I recently found the file, and I'd really like to redo the shading (there's no source- don't tell me there is; my old images from early 2012 did not have one) and slightly tweak the stripes so they don't fade in with the shading. I wouldn't be changing much of anything else, since I wouldn't want to redo it otherwise. —Jayce(08:17, 5/19/2015)

david ^🌈 08:19, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:20, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

It looks gray too - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:21, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

The shading can be defined too. Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 08:29, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Fox: it looks gray because I usually shade my dark brown cats with black- I love how it looks, and I'm not changing that any time soon. Stealth: Of course it needs defining, which is why I'm going to redo the shading altogether. —Jayce(08:36, 5/19/2015)

~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 () 13:59, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think this is fine.User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:49, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Bluestar (Alt. L) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Bluestar.leader.alt.png I Know this is being tweaked already, but now, looking at it, I think the shading could be defined, as well. I'd still like this, if it passes. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 22:43, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

It looks fine - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:36, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 00:25, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Frostfur ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Frostfur.loner.png I just noticed that the earpink is literally /outside the ear./ Storm^♫ 23:04, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

wth are you talking about - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:33, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

the earpink is outside of the ear. its supposed to be on the /inside/ Storm^♫ 23:35, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

It can go either side of the line. It's in the ear. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:36, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

^ ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:43 Thu May 21

Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 00:25, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

—.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 00:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Furzepelt ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Furzepelt.warrior.png Shading/light needs to be defined to match the apprentice Storm^♫ 23:19, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:24, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Shading style/darkness/lightness/ect is not required to match. —Jayce(23:27, 5/21/2015)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:43 Thu May 21

Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 00:25, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

—.neha ^{it's that gloom boy season.} 00:32, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Redos

Tornear (Ki) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Tornear.kit.png Firstly, it appears to be darker than his other images. And also, the stripes appear to be less orderly-patterned than how the kit looks. Also, he should have a pale chest, which I cannot see on the kit. The file is lost so it'd be impossible to tweak the stripes without making it look like as if it was redone. I'd like this as I am the OA. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:06, May 10, 2015 (UTC)

Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 23:09, May 11, 2015 (UTC)

~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 () 07:17, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

User:Burntclaw/Sig 08:59, May 12, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think it's that much different. It matches fine. —Jayce(07:44, 5/13/2015)

Sorry Fox but it looks all right —Ivy ☆ 21:13, May 14, 2015 (UTC)

can we get some votes on this? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:19, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:42 Thu May 21

Hootwhisker (A) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Hootwhisker.apprentice.png It's already up for tweaks, but it turns out I lost the file. In the tweaks, it was up for darkening - you'd say that's easy to tweak without the file, but the problem is, when I tried that on the png image the shading became blocky and a right mess. Since it's not got layers, I can't fix that. It's better off as a redo, and I'd like it if it passes. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 20:53, May 15, 2015 (UTC)

- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:15, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:25, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

What are you talking about User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:48, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

But it's way too dark - I can barely pick out the shading and light, and since I've lost the layers, it'll be an utter nightmare to tweak. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 11:59, May 17, 2015 (UTC)

And I can tell you, Burnt, that the image you just linked would probably get tweaked again- sometimes, darkening an image does ruin the shading and texture. I think it's okay to redo this time. If she had the file, then I say use that instead and tweak it, but she doesn't have the file. Sometimes when you save an image here and open it in PS or GIMP, it's not quiiiite the same as it should be on the wiki- images can and have been distorted before. —Jayce(13:18, 5/17/2015)

sorry to rush this, but there's someone trying to do the warrior image - it's unfair on them to try and match something that's being redone, so it'll be a waste of progress for them if mine is completely different. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 14:43, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:42 Thu May 21

Pikepaw (MO) (Star) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Pikepaw (MO).star.png To begin with, this is one of my older chararts from when i first joined. Looking at his markings, they could really be thinned out and smudged differently to match his other two images. As of now, they all look cluttered close together while his other images show more loose, evenly spaced markings. Hes also a bit darker in color, along with his shading being slightly flat and the source being off. I no loner have his file, so i feel it'll just be better off redone. If i havent made it clear, i'd like this.--~☯ Breeze ^{Five Nights at Freddys} 00:30, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

it matches fine - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:35, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

No. User:Burntclaw/Sig 00:40, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

the spots need to be smudged a bit more, and the lightsource is a little confusing. Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 03:35, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

Sorry but it looks fine, tbh —Ivy ☆ 20:19, May 19, 2015 (UTC)

—Jayce(06:23, 5/20/2015)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:41 Thu May 21

Brightsky (W) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Brightsky.warrior.png Doesn't quite match the queen and StarClan images. ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 () 13:57, May 20, 2015 (UTC):

id like this if it passes  Queen Beebs 16:25, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

The queen and StarClan images don't show the same side. It's very much possible for there to be less ginger on one side than the other, and I think the colors match fine. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 16:51, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

—Jayce(18:19, 5/20/2015)

lolno david ^🌈 18:27, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

I say the shading needs to be lightened, but that doens't need to be redone. Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 22:23, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 22:24, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

even if it faces a different side, it has a completely different style. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 22:57, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

The only thing that's completely different is the shading style, and that doesn't have to match o_o Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 23:05, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

after observing it again, I decided to change my vote. Sorry. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:08, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Mine. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}23:41 Thu May 21

Approved Tweaks

Once an image is under this heading, it may be reserved on the project main page and crossed out with a <s> and a </s>. The image may only be removed from this list when it is approved and archived.

All project leaders are to keep track of the number of images on this list, including those that are crossed out. Should the number rise above 50, nominations will close and remain closed until the number of images on the list is down to 40.

Tweaks

1. File:Berrynose.warrior.alt.png - shading is flat (Reserved to Skye until 20th May)
2. File:Brambleberry.star.png - flat shading (Reserved to Fox until 27th May)
3. File:Bluestar.star.alt2.png - remove nicked ear/scar (Reserved to Scarlet until 27th May)
4. File:Bluestar.star.alt3.png - remove nicked ear/scar (Reserved to Bluestar11796 until 27th May)
5. File:Bluestar.leader.alt.png - remove nicked ear/scar (Reserved to Bluestar11796 until 27th May)
6. File:Leafstar.kittypet.png- Needs to match (Reserved to Scarlet until 26th May)
7. File:Leafstar.kit.png- Needs to match (Reserved to Hawky until 26th May)
8. File:Longtail.elder.png - Brown looks orange, elongate tail.
9. File:Mudfur.mc.png- define shading/looks a bit greenish
10. File:Stonefur.apprentice.png - Color needs to match the warrior
11. File:Stonefur.star.png - Color needs to match the warrior

Redos

None