Talk: Charart/Tweak Nominations

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TWEAK/REDO NOMINATIONS ARE CURRENTLY: OPEN/CLOSED, BARRING THE NOMINATIONS ALREADY POSTED (see the list below for images to tweak or redo)

Nominations

If you wish to nominate an image, you link the image (like so - [[:File:image.png]]) underneath the appropriate subheading, and list the reason(s) you wish it to be redone/tweaked. Project members with the ranking of warrior or above can vote, and only five votes are necessary for the vote to pass or fail.

Tweaks

Littlebird (E) - Tweak Nomination

File:Littlebird.elder.png Shading makes it look shiny, I still have the original file for this when I redid it, and I'd like it. -Ducksauce 02:37, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}3:52 Mon Aug 18

Ehh, sure. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 17:12, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

ehh I don't think it makes it look shiny Brick 18:29, August 18, 2014 (UTC)

Idk how to side on this, if it gets approved maybe just blur where the shading ends? It doesn't really look shiny, but if there's a highlight on the unshaded spots, especially that leg, blurring would help. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:47 PM, Mon Aug 18, 2014

Highlights aren't mandatory, Rocket. Voting yes since I'm the one that suggested it. —Jayce(15:06, 8/19/2014)

I meant if there is currently a highlight, not add one. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 4:43 PM, Tue Aug 19, 2014

The stripes are iffy to me, but the shading looks fine to me. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 03:41, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

-- ~ Breezey ~ ^{Gaara Forever ♥☻} 04:37, August 22, 2014 (UTC)

Rainlegs 23:35, August 25, 2014 (UTC)

Queen Beebs 12:12, August 26, 2014 (UTC)

Flametail (A, MCA, MC, Star) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Flametail.apprentice.png, along with the MCA, possibly the MC and star. I think the shading could be defined on these a bit more, I can't really see it. I'd like the StarClan and the MCA, if that's possible, if the OA's don't want them. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 21:10, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'll take the MC and the Apprentice if the OA's don't want them. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:20 PM, Wed Aug 27, 2014

Paleh shading. It's intentionally like this. I can see it just fine. I have the file for the MCA/App though (for colors), due to me redoing the kit, so if it passes, ask me for the files for the MCA and App. They're the exact same thing, one just has herbs. —Jayce(21:24, 8/27/2014)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:40 Wed Aug 27

david ^🌈 11:42, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

-- ~ Breezey ~ ^{Gaara Forever ♥☻} 15:40, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

I agree the shading needs to be more visible. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 02:07, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Petalfur (Ki) ~ Tweak Nomination

File:Petalfur.kit.png That white is preeettty gray. Queen Beebs 21:02, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 21:14, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}22:01 Sun Aug 31

I'll take it, if the OA doesn't want it. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 12:59, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

—Jayce(16:18, 9/1/2014)

Redos

Cinderheart (Q) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Cinderheart.queen.png The colors are off and the tabby stripes are barely visible and don't match. The base pelt is mingled in with a bunch of colors and she looks more brown than gray. I made the shading way to dark and it really has not much depth in it. Lately this image has been bothering me and since I am the OA, I would like to redo it. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}18:18 Wed Aug 27

It's your image; and she does look rather brown. The shading is also a bit dark. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 18:34, August 27, 2014 (UTC)

Go for it. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:21 PM, Wed Aug 27, 2014

Sorry, but I think it matches pretty well and I like this. —Jayce(21:27, 8/27/2014)

-Ducksauce 02:36, August 28, 2014 (UTC)

She does look for brown than gray, now you mention it. Go ahead. ☞ⓢⓦⓐⓝⓕⓛⓤⓣⓣⓔⓡ☚ the fault_{in our stars} 23:45, August 28, 2014 (UTC) (User is not a warrior and cannot vote)

david ^🌈 11:42, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Your image. I agree that the color does look a bit off.-- ~ Breezey ~ ^{Gaara Forever ♥☻} 15:39, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

in addition to my comment, I think that the stripes are actually fine as they are. ❄Sorrel _{It's everything I dreamed} 20:17, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

looks fine to me ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 20:39, August 29, 2014 (UTC) The shading could be lightened up, definitely. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 02:09, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Brook (Lo) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Brook.loner.png ok this is honestly a god awful blurry mess. I can do so much better w this than I did the first time around and be able to actually distinguish the stripes from one another. Wanting it if it passes david ^🌈 14:45, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

I like it, honestly. Although it could be tweaked, because the tear in her ear is on the top of her ear, but in the other images, it's on the side ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 15:13, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

honestly, that pattern is really pretty and unique. I think its fine. ~ Breezey ~ ^{Gaara Forever ♥☻} 15:37, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

I say go for it, dear. I know you can make it match even better. —Jayce(16:10, 8/29/2014)

I'm not really sure how to side on this one, so I will not vote. First off, it does match quite nicely and I think it it perfectly fine, but on the other hand, it is your image, and if you want to make it match even better, by all means, do as you please. ☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}16:18 Fri Aug 29

Rocket agrees with Hawk again. User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 7:18 PM, Fri Aug 29, 2014

It's fine. -Ducksauce 22:22, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 02:10, August 30, 2014 (UTC)

Fritz (P3) (Lo) ~ Redo Nomination

File:Fritz (P3).loner.png I goofed so badly when I tried to tweak this, and I seriously want to give Leggy's pattern some real justice. I don't think I can tweak this, and it's got some issues (that I messed up doing in the first place), so I'd really really love to redo this. The shading is bad, the white looks grayer than it should be (again, my fault for trying to tweak when sick), and I ruined her pattern. If it passes, I'd love to take this. —Jayce(21:18, 8/29/2014)

User:Notquiterocketwildbokan/Sig 9:20 PM, Fri Aug 29, 2014

☽➸ Hawky ^{Void Shadowshot}21:23 Fri Aug 29

The pattern looks the exact same as it did before, and the white does not look gray, actually the only thing "wrong" with this is that the shading could possibly be defined a tad bit. -Ducksauce 22:22, August 29, 2014 (UTC)

Looks perfect to me. ~Shinx ^Blitz and _Melody 22:26, August 29, 2014 (UTC) I do agree the shading could use a bit of a fixer-upper, yet it could be fixed with just a tweak even if that. Atelda _{insert vague subtext here} 23:13, August 30, 2014 (UTC) Brick 14:17, August 31, 2014 (UTC)

Skywatcher (Lo) - Redo Nomination

File:Skywater.loner.png - the shading is flat and his scars need to be smudged and pointed. He needs a saggy belly and his ragged fur doesn't even come close to matching that of his other images. To top it all off, some of his colors look off, especially the ear-pink. I'd like this. ~Scarletwind^{"Time to go home Flap."} 16:21, September 1, 2014 (UTC)

Approved Tweaks

Once an image is under this heading, it may be reserved on the project main page and crossed out with a <s> and a </s>. The image may only be removed from this list when it is approved and archived.

All project leaders are to keep track of the number of images on this list, including those that are crossed out. Should the number rise above 50, nominations will close and remain closed until the number of images on the list is down to 40.

Tweaks

1. File:Cinderfur.apprentice.png - flat shading (Reserved to Shinx until September 8th)
2. File:Dustpelt.warrior.png - needs a graying muzzle (Reserved to Hawky until September 8th)
3. File:Frostclaw.kittypet.png - sourceless shading (Reserved to Brick until September 8th)
4. File:Honeypaw (SC).kittypet.png - shading issues (Reserved to Snowman until September 5th)
5. File:Ratscar.warrior.png - needs to be darker and have more scars (Reserved to Skt until September 8th)
6. File:Whitethroat.star.png - blotchy shading (Reserved to Rocket until September 3)

Redos

1. File:Fircone.rogue.png - needs to match new pattern