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Comments? OA was mounty. idk if this is mottled enough -Ducksauce 19:11, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
Is he supposed to look dark grey instead of grey? I'm not sure if it's just the way the mottles appear i'm to tired to be on here right now but he is supposed to be pale gray, and looking at this, I'd probably mistake him for dark grey. Brick 19:34, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
I think it's fine, with the mottles and the thick classic tabby stripes, he's gonna look darker, but if another person agrees I'll change it. -Ducksauce 19:57, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
I honestly think it looks fine. I actually imagine him to be a dark gray tabby with cloudy blue eyes, so i really like how you portrayed him here. Perhaps define the shading on the four legs and the face? This is really good. =)~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:06, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
I'm afraid I agree with Brick. He's dark grey here, but he's described as pale grey. ShinxBlitz and Melody 20:18, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
Huh. I guess. Perhaps thin out the stripes, so the pale gray shows more?~Breezeheart~ (talk) 20:22, August 14, 2014 (UTC)
I'll slide in and agree with Brick as well. Perhaps maybe just lighten the opacity of the stripes just a bit? This is actually really stunning, Duck. o.o —jayceღ20:48, 8/14/2014
Thanks, I just lightened the stripes/dapples. re-uploaded-Ducksauce 23:36, August 16, 2014 (UTC)
Lighten 'em a bit more, and define/darken (your choice) the shading. —jayceღ23:57, 8/16/2014
re-uploaded-Ducksauce 02:39, August 18, 2014 (UTC)
I don't think he's pale enough. Pale is usually pretty light... —jayceღ15:05, 8/19/2014