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This is the Project Character Art Tweaks Page
Place tweaked character art for approval here.
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Snowfur (A) - Tweaked

Snowfur.apprentice oa is snowdazzle with tweaks from duck and splook. expanded the highlights. comments? —kyle fallin' apart to half-time 23:40, 07/22/2014

yo so anyway i did have this on the table before i posted this it just wouldn't publish??? i hit publish on this page after i did on the main charart page but idk my internet is weird bruh but yah that's what happened —kyle fallin' apart to half-time 23:50, 07/22/2014

Shouldnt the eyes be blue? That looks like green. and her other chararts have blue eyes. It might just be my screen, though.--~Breezeheart~ (talk) 00:19, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

They are blue. I never touched the eyes. —kyle fallin' apart to half-time 00:39, 07/23/2014

Could you darken the shading just a tiny bit? I can hardly see it. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:07, July 23, 2014 (UTC)

Is this still being worked on..? jayce Reveℓation 17:18, 7/27/2014 

Maybe a tint would help? Rocket 18:59 Sun Jul 27

reuploaded also I can't tint on top of a layer of grey shading- I tried and it looks horrid. —kyle fallin' apart to half-time 22:17, 07/27/2014

Try lighting the shading. princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:58, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Antpelt (Ro) ~ Tweaked

Antpelt.rogue OA was Berry, tweaked for scarred back. I've not done scars before, and therefore had to guess how, so please excuse the ugliness. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 11:38, July 25, 2014 (UTC)

makes his back scars' color match the neck scars ~Duck simpler = better 17:52, July 25, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I colorpicked again, and then messed with the hue and saturation to try and get it right. Best I can do. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:15, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

There's a bit of waste on the back and under the tail. Also, is his other ear supposed to look black? Brick 12:48, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

dude look at his description. anyway can you like make the tips of the scars slightly sharper to match or something Skt doot doot 12:55, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Scars are hard o_o And yes, Brick. Antpelt is described with one black ear. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:57, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

can you smudge out the ends of the scars to give them a kinda pointed/sharp look. ~Duck simpler = better 16:04, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 13:00, July 29, 2014 (UTC)

Hollykit (NP) (Ki) ~ Redone

Hollykit (NP).kit Redone for multiple issues. Oa's are Bramble, then tweaked by Sandstar, then tweaked again by Snowed of Lightning, and then later redone by Scarlet. Hawkeh Blades of Blood17:26 Sat Jul 26

Umm, correct me if I'm wrong, but I think this is the male blank. Other than that, I don't see anything wrong. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 01:13, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Ahh way to pay attention Hawky. >:C Hawkeh Blades of Blood16:15 Sun Jul 27

Blur the shading just a little bit. jayce Reveℓation 17:15, 7/27/2014 

Re-uploaded. Don't know if that did much. Hawkeh Blades of Blood17:28 Sun Jul 27

Fallen Leaves (SP) - Tweaked

Fallen Leaves.softpaw Ah, there we go. I like this version much more- basically I smudged and smoothed out the shading and the OA is me. jayce Reveℓation 17:17, 7/27/2014 

IDK if it's just me being a derp but I'm naving a hard time seeing the shading. I can see it on <-- ear and one paw a little but nowhere else. feel free to ignore me you obviously know what your doing Rocket 18:58 Sun Jul 27

Re-uploaded. I darkened it ouo jayce Reveℓation 19:01, 7/27/2014 

Okay I can see it much better now. c; Rocket 19:02 Sun Jul 27

You could probably get away with darkening it a bit more. Atelda 04:28, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. jayce Reveℓation 04:39, 7/28/2014 

Mistystar (Alt. W) ~ Tweaked

Mistystar.warrior.alt My first approved image! OA was me, and she was tweaked for flat and hard-to-see shading. Look here if changes arn't showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:34, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Why is there pale markings on her? She wasn't described with those? Bbunlegs 18:48, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Are they highlights? Rocket 18:56 Sun Jul 27

Reuploaded. Yes, they were highlights. I didn't like how they came out, though, so I just removed them. Look here if changes aren't showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:59, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading. jayce Reveℓation 19:01, 7/27/2014 

Reuploaded. Look here if changes aren't showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:21, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs. Given the source you're using, which is the most common one (pretty sure of it), there would be at least some light on the legs, and it looks to be all in shading. jayce Reveℓation 19:24, 7/27/2014 

Front, back, or both? Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:27, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Mainly the front legs, but putting some light on all of them wouldn't hurt. jayce Reveℓation 19:28, 7/27/2014 

Reuploaded. It's about as defined as it will get. Look here if changes aren't showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:41, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I'm still seeing some paler parts on her front ~Duck simpler = better 21:56, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine. It's how I defined the light on the legs. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:08, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

it's not on the legs though, it's on her chest ~Duck simpler = better 22:21, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I don't know where it's coming from; I didn't do anything there. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:23, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Lighten up the shading and see what happens, then. jayce Reveℓation 22:28, 7/27/2014 

Reuploaded. I don't think changes are showing. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:36, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Bouncefire(Alt W) - Tweaked

Bouncefire.warrior.alt OA's were Iceheart and Beebs. Tweaked for Flat shading. ~Duck simpler = better 21:53, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Blur the shading just a bit and I fixed the heading for you. jayce Reveℓation 21:54, 7/27/2014 

re-uploaded why did I put that? ~Duck simpler = better 21:58, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

Can you lighten the shading please? princess twilight sparkle  let the rainbow remind you    23:57, July 27, 2014 (UTC)

I think it's fine, it's not overly dark and I can see the stripes under it perfectly clear. ~Duck simpler = better 03:32, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Agreeing with Duck on this one. If you lighten the shading, you won't be able to see it in places. Rocket 13:35 Mon Jul 28

Owlstar (Star) ~ Tweaked

Owlstar.star i also tweaked his eyes just to look slightly better as well as the shading. Skt doot doot 04:31, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Jayfeather (A) - Tweaked

Jayfeather.apprentice Tweaked for shading; last Oa was Ivy. Comments? —Diablo You must be Mr. Boggins! 09:45 Mon Jul 28

Lighten the shading a bit. Shinxy Blitz and Melody 12:59, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

Hawk Swoop (Star) ~ Tweaked

Hawk Swoop.star OA be me, tweaked for some stripe smudgin'. Comments? Bbunlegs 16:52, July 28, 2014 (UTC)

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