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Contents 1 Discussion 2 For Approval 3 Tweaking 3.1 Furzepelt (A) - Redone 3.2 Splash (PH) ~ Redone 3.3 Splash (Tb) - Redone 3.4 Pouncetail (E) - Tweaked 3.5 Smoketalon (W) - Redone 3.6 Pouncetail (Alt A) ~ Tweaked	Archives Declined [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30] [31] [32] [33] [34] [35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42] [43] [44] [45] [46] [47] [48] [49] [50] [51] [52] [53] [54] [55] [56] [57] [58] [59] [60] [61] Accepted [1] [2] [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] [8] [9] [10] [11] [12] [13] [14] [15] [16] [17] [18] [19] [20] [21] [22] [23] [24] [25] [26] [27] [28] [29] [30] [31] [32] [33] [34] [35] [36] [37] [38] [39] [40] [41] [42] [43] [44] [45] [46] [47] [48] [49] [50] [51] [52] [53] [54] [55] [56] [57] [58] [59] [60] [61] [62] [63] [64] [65] [66] [67] [68] [69] [70] [71] [72] [73] [74] [75] [76] [77]

DiscussionEdit

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For ApprovalEdit

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TweakingEdit

Furzepelt (A) - Redone Edit

OAs were Loonie and Shelly. Redone for multiple reasons. Comments? I officially now hate doing shading on apprentice blanks. Dx -Ducksauce 17:45, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

She looks really really gray. Lighten the base pelt, perhaps? Or try adding some highlights? —Garrus ღ  18:06, 6/5/2013 

Re-uploaded The base pelt is pure white and she has highlights, but I redid the shading to see if that helped. x3 -Ducksauce 18:20, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Not sure if I'm seeing the wrong version or not, but she still looks pretty gray. Maybe expan the highlights? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 23:33, June 5, 2013 (UTC)

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 05:11, June 7, 2013 (UTC)

She's looking rather grey - fix that? Berry ^{...now what?} 03:46 Sat Jun 8

Re-uploaded -Ducksauce 14:22, June 8, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading. -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}21:05 Sun Jun 9 2013

I'm withdrawing this, becauese I'm gonna be on vacation starting tomorrow, and I know I won't have time for it. x3 -Ducksauce 21:12, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

May I take over, please? c: Bbunlegs 21:13, June 9, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Okay, taken over this. Comments? Bbunlegs 19:01, June 11, 2013 (UTC)

She's looking gray. Perhaps add some highlights on the white? Also, try shading with a layer of shading on the white, /then/ the layer with solid gray, then shading on the gray? That's what I've done before for bi-colored cats and I've found it's sorta easier to work with. —Garrus ღ  02:56, 6/13/2013 

Don't know if I'm repeating Are her back paws meant to be grey or is that shading? Raven ^{Dark as the Night} 09:42 Thu Jun 13

I think they're supposed to be gray. Define the shading on them. Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 18:10, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

No, that's shading. The hind leg isn't hit by light at all, and I'll lighten the shading on the foot, since it's too dark for this shading. I'll try out Cloudy's suggestion, while I'm at it c: Bbunlegs 19:25, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. How's this? Bbunlegs 19:43, June 13, 2013 (UTC)

Define the gray. ☀Iciloo☀ 12:23, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Lighten the shading on the white. —Garrus ღ  15:10, 6/14/2013 

Re-up. I honestly think the gray's defined enough. However, if people disagree, I'll define it as much as I can. Bbunlegs 18:22, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

If you're not going to define the gray, may you at least define the shading? ☀Iciloo☀ 22:34, June 14, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Defined the shading on the gray. Bbunlegs 01:11, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Shading could still be defined on the white. Skt ^{Now, you're really lying} 12:27, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Re-up. Bbunlegs 21:56, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Splash (PH) ~ RedoneEdit

And for the first time ever Berry gets an official Tribe cat to work on wheee~ OA was Loonie with a tweak by Ivy and it was redone for multiple reasons. Berry ^{...now what?} 03:57 Sat Jun 15

changes are here if they're not showing. Berry ^{...now what?} 03:59 Sat Jun 15

Make the stripes more visible? ☀Iciloo☀ 16:13, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think you should crop the image, it looks kinda odd in the gallery. xD Also, I can't see any mud. Skt ^{Now, you're really lying} 02:42, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Add/define mud patches? ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 14:52, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Splash (Tb) - RedoneEdit

Okay, redone due to multiple issues. Latest Oa was Oblvion. Comments?Changes might not be showing Raven ^{Dark as the Night} 04:55 Sat Jun 15

I'm sorry if this seems a bit picky, but they were last tweaked for their tails to be shorter and I don't see why they can't be kept since they were fine? Iveh Yo! 06:45, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

Define the shading? ☀Iciloo☀ 16:10, June 15, 2013 (UTC)

I think you should crop the image, it looks kinda odd in the gallery. xD Also, I can't see any mud. Skt ^{Now, you're really lying} 02:42, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Withdrawing, I lost the file. Raven ^{Dark as the Night} 20:58 Sun Jun 16

May I take over?♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 21:28, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded I've taken over. Shading defined, image cropped. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 21:41, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Could you perhaps add/define the mud patches? c: Bbunlegs 21:48, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Reuploaded ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 21:58, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Just a suggestion, but smudge them to go along with the fur a bit? If not, cool with me. Bbunlegs 22:05, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Like I said before, can you use the lineart for the tail that it was tweaked for before, no sense in changing that. Iveh Yo! 23:20, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I think that the tail is fine, but if another person agrees I'll change it. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 14:34, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

I agree with Ivy. The lineart before was nice, and I think it was okay to keep it. —Garrus ღ  14:42, 6/17/2013 

Reuploaded ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 14:51, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

It's still not the tail lineart from before. :/ Paleggy Ship it 23:51,6/18/2013

Pouncetail (E) - TweakedEdit

Wuuutt.... Scarly editing at camp? xO Anyway, OA was me. Made the tail shorter. Comments? Scarletwind^{Wibbly _{Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff…}} 00:47, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

I know that this isn't what it was nominated for, but I think his front paws are bit on the gray side. ♞☮SorrelΩflower☯⛄ _{Believe in yourself...} 20:19, June 17, 2013 (UTC)

Smoketalon (W) - Redone Edit

Redone to be more mottled and such. Comments? -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}20:26 Sun Jun 16 2013

I can't really tell he's mottled? Looks like a texture to me...perhaps define the mottles? —Garrus ღ  20:31, 6/16/2013 

His mottles are no less defined than, say, Lakeshine or Applefur - just tighter together. I can edit them if I really need to, but I personally think they look fine. *shrug* -Raelic ^{Non temete l'obscurità}20:38 Sun Jun 16 2013 20:38, June 16, 2013 (UTC)

Just a little defining would be a good I think. Paleggy Ship it 20:40,6/18/2013

Pouncetail (Alt A) ~ TweakedEdit

OAs be Nightshine and Wildheart, tweaked to have a shorter tail. Comments? Bbunlegs 15:23, June 17, 2013 (UTC)