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I think there should be two clear stripes on her neck-chest area, according to the warrior and apprentice versions. This is nice, btw Silver Sail on the Steel Breeze✼ ~07:59,8/30/2015†
Oh and, mind if you tell me which side is the light source coming from? I'm seeing it at the right on the tail, but from left on the head and one of the paws... Silver Sail on the Steel Breeze✼ ~08:00,8/30/2015†
Can you lighten the shading all around? And maybe define the stripes on her back? Iciloo bad cop 14:33, August 31, 2015 (UTC)
I think if she lightens the shading, she'll get asked to define it (or darken it) again. For now, I think it's fine, as we don't want to send Splook into a circle of endless shading tweaks. —snowednightwalker«19:47, 8/31/2015»
Sorry, but I disagree with you, Icy. If she doesn't tweak it now, someone else will. White should be white, not pale gray. She's looking like she has a gray base (Like Stormkit has. —snowednightwalker«06:19, 8/31/2015»
reuploaded. pre-last reupload i added a white layer on top, and i brightened it some more. let me know if you need me to brighten it even more. SplookGood cop.19:00 Mon Aug 31
hey splook i still have the file (it's a sumopaint one) so like i could just darken it and do this really fast if you'd like Rainlegs 22:31, August 31, 2015 (UTC)
thank you so much for your offer but really i live for shading tweaks, lol. adding a layer of shading is really simple for me! but thanks for the offer, i appreciate it :] SplookGood cop.23:12 Mon Aug 31
oa was david, tweaked to make him reddish brown. i added a little bit of extra shading to the scar because it looked out of place after i changed the colour but i can lighten/remove it if people dont want it there Berry dirge of cerberus01:40 Tue Sep 1
Given it wasn't especially visible in the original, and it's in shadow due to the light source and angle of the face + the inside of the ear, I'd rather not touch it. If someone else thinks it should be defined, though, I will. tysm btw Berry dirge of cerberus11:35 Tue Sep 1
Could you lighten it a little bit? The medicine cat looks lighter. BCPrincess73 (talk) 14:44, September 1, 2015 (UTC)
I think you should lighten the earpink. Iciloo bad cop 17:25, September 1, 2015 (UTC)