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Tweaking

Bluestar (Alt. Star 3) ~ Tweaked

Bluestar.star.alt3OA was Giaria, I simply removed the scar and torn ear, as the image this was based off of didn't have them. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 22:34, May 20, 2015 (UTC)

Could you define the shading a little bit, please? I can see it in most places, but I'm having trouble seeing the depth, imho. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:52, 5/22/2015 }

I'm hesitant to do so, as it wasn't nominated for that, and I can see the shading just fine; however, I'll do it if others agree. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:43, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

I've had to do things an image isn't nominated for, as has everyone else. I don't think that's a legitimate reason not to do a tweak. This and the "it's fine" things really do need to stop. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:57, 5/23/2015 }

Reuploaded. I understand. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 18:26, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

blur the shading ~ Fox ☁️🎶 Stay Beautiful 🎶☁️ 03:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think the shading is tad dark, can you lighten it a bit? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 14:15, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Leafstar (KP) - Tweaked

Leafstar.kittypet - ugghhh... so ugly... OA was me. Tweaked to match. I spent more time trying to get it to mach the queen, since both chararts show Leafy's back ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 22:25, May 21, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 02:45, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:55, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Define the cream and brown parts- I cannot tell them apart. ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 08:10, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 15:43, May 23, 2015 (UTC)

I think her stripes on her other images were more smudged than blurred? This could be smudged too as you know, I can't see things properly. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 13:44, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:24, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes are a tad darker on her other images, perhaps try sharpening them? ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 07:58, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 01:16, May 27, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (Alt W.) - Tweaked

Berrynose.warrior.alt Redid the shading and lord did that change the entire image way more than I thought it would. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:38, 5/22/2015 }

Define the depth and blur the shading more. ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 12:59, May 22, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. Instead of defining the depth, I darkened it (and blurred it), since I really don't think adding more shading is going to make this image any better.... except I think I blurred it too much on the tail... jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:54, 5/23/2015 }

Could you add stripes, since his other images are being nominated for it? ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 03:46, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Shading seems to be leaking a little bit along the back and towards the bottom of the tail. ~ Icebreeze The whisper of thewind 21:38, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I didn't want to add stripes to this. <sobs> jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:26, 5/25/2015 }

There's a point on his hind leg where the shading is kinda hard edged. Maybe smooth out the tail shading as well. Perhaps define shading on the front ear where it meets the back Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:49, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I did stuff. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 12:29, 5/25/2015 }

There's still no shading on the ear :/ is there not supposed to be shading? The leg shading is kinda hard edged still too. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 13:18, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

I've never added shading there before...? Also, it shouldn't be hard-edged... I literally smudged all the shading. Are you sure you're not seeing a stripe?? jayce Jiggy Hunter { 13:22, 5/25/2015 }

Does the stripes need to match his other images? Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

It's an alt ~ Fox ☁️🎶 Stay Beautiful 🎶☁️ 08:36, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I also don't mean to play "that" card, but I also had mine posted and reserved first. While Burnt reuploaded with the tabby stripes before I did, I still very much had Berrynose up for tweaking before she did. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:12, 5/26/2015 }

Bramblestar (K) ~ Tweaked

Bramblestar.kit OAs are a various number of people I can't remember, but the most recent was Breeze. Tweaked to darken. My computer has difficulty displaying dark colors, so I can't tell whether it's too light or dark or what. ~ Icebreeze The whisper of thewind 21:35, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

It's a little bit too dark imo, maybe lighten it a bit Storm 22:14, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped ~ Icebreeze The whisper of thewind 22:52, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

I have the file for this on my computer, would you like it? I think the shading kinda went poof in the process... Also, where's the pale underbelly...? jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:27, 5/25/2015 }

Re-upped Having issues with my email (please don't make me explain) so I can't take the file =( I tried to add a pale underbelly and I defined the shading but if I need to have the file to do this tweak I'm unfortunately going to have to withdraw. ~ Icebreeze The whisper of thewind 22:57, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Can I have it? Do I like reserve it??  so not sure how this page works, feel free to slap my head if I'm doing things wrong XD Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:30, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

No, you don't need the file for it- I was just offering it to you if you wanted it. Also, Bramblesnow, no, as she did not officially withdraw the image. Also, he'll need a pale part on the underside of his tail. ^^ jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:41, 5/26/2015 }

I only said that because I thought she meant to withdraw it :P  this is the image I based on when I asked about the pale tail thingy Maybe define the earpink if you're allowed to change it? Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:47, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Re-upped No I didn't withdraw it Bramble, just said I might have to - sorry about the confusion. I added a pale underside of the tail, but using the pre-existing source, it's shaded so it may be hard to see. ~ Icebreeze The whisper of thewind 21:38, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (W) ~ Tweaked

Berrynose.warrior OAs are Bramble, Oblivion, Misty and Teldy. Tweaked to have stripes. The shading kinda went poof so I had to tweak that a little. Otherwise, I did not touch anything else on the image. ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 08:31, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The bottom stripes on his leg are completely hard edged :P Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:47, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 11:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Berrynose (A) - Tweaked

Berrynose.apprenticeOAs are Nightshine, Shelly and Skye. All colors from the warrior ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 09:14, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (L) - Tweaked

Bramblestar.leader Not removing the pale underbelly- his images should rightfully have it, as Duck's original kit version did in fact have one, and it got lost when it was tweaked back in September. I've already said something about it to Burnt, and I think the apprentice is going to be renominated, as I cannot see that pale underbelly at all, and the kit has a comment on it. OA of the original version is Shelly, and then I redid it. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:41, 5/25/2015 }

I'm so heart broken. Don't ask me why. The two ears' earpink look sort of different. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

What do you mean? You're gonna need to be a lot more specific. It can't be the color, as my ear pink is all on one layer, and these colors are from the original kit file that Duck sent me. These ears are also slightly shaded, but not too much. I honestly have absolutely no idea what you mean. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:47, 5/25/2015 }

Whoops, I mean one is kinda more smudged than the other one? Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼

Do you mean the fur isn't as smeared into the earpink as the (our) right one? Also, there's a little waste beneath the tail underside. Sorrel Boom, boom, clap ♫ 12:32, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded. I wanted an excuse to tweak that ear pink anyways. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 12:36, 5/25/2015 }

About the pale part on the bottom of the tail, I don't see it on some of his images, so gonna ask to make sure. Anyway, imo I think the scar should be darkened and make it more reddish sort, because it looks purple-ish which makes it look neon. Possibly just for me. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

His original kit version did in fact have a pale part on the tail, and that's what I'm matching. As for the scar, it's the same color as the ear pink. o.o jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:39, 5/26/2015 }

I can see it's the same shade :P but I think the earpink is slightly more transparent? (bc of the smudging) Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:45, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Then I really don't understand what you want me to do- as it's the same shade that's universally used across all of his images, I don't think I can change it, or else it'll get nominated to match again, thus putting me back to where I started. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:46, 5/26/2015 }

Bramblestar (A) ~ Tweaked

Bramblestar.apprentice Redone artist was Diablo. Tweaked for darkness. ~ Fox ☁️🎶 Stay Beautiful 🎶☁️ 03:43, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

You darkened the eyes. Brighten them up, please. ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 03:45, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Only the eye white was darkened a bit. ~ Fox ☁️🎶 Stay Beautiful 🎶☁️ 03:51, May 24, 2015 (UTC)

Restored back. Pale chest needs to be re-added. ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 11:41, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

The color for it is at about the range of #74553B. Yay for still having the files. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:43, 5/25/2015 }

I think the underbelly is pale enough tbh imho cuz it's paler than the base pelt color. The earpink seems to be going out of the ear please no more heartbreaking Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:46, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Um, Bramblesnow, it needs to match the other images. Right now, it doesn't. The original kit image did in fact have a pale underbelly that was actually distinctive, and it needs to be readded (on this and the kit) in order to match the original version of the kit's image properly. It was restored to the tweak page because it needed to be tweaked again. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:49, 5/25/2015 }

-*sigh* Okay. Good luck everyone, good luck my love Smooth out the shading where it meets the muzzle, define shading on the bottom of his tail. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:52, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

He also needs a pale part on the underside of his tail. Did no one try and match the kit image or something when these images were done or..? jayce Jiggy Hunter { 11:42, 5/26/2015 }

Hootwhisker (A) ~ Redone

Hootwhisker.apprentice the oa was me, and I had to redo this for darkening - I lost the file and darkening the image without layers resulted in a blocky mess. That isn't texture, it's how I smudged the shading. Sorrel Boom, boom, clap ♫ 14:37, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Darken him a bit more, as he needs to be dark gray. This is still bordering on neutral, imho. jayce Jiggy Hunter { 23:02, 5/26/2015 }

Reups Sorrel Boom, boom, clap ♫ 23:13, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Alt Q 3) ~ Tweaked

Daisy.queen.alt3 stripes, for whatever reason. Skt ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔ⊃━☆゚. * ・ 。゚ 18:45, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

Tansypaw (Ki) ~ Tweaked

Tansypaw.kitOA was me, and she was tweaked to have stripes. I also messed with the shading, because it hid them at first. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind 19:16, May 25, 2015 (UTC)

These appear to be triangular styled stripes. Could you try and match a certain style? ~ Burntclaw Let us fly ☽ 00:41, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the stripes should be lightened, as creams have faint stripes. Could be wrong :P Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 10:34, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded. I actually tried to make her a mackerel tabby. I didn't like it though, so I redid the stripes. She's now a pointed tabby. Bluestar Leaf flying in the wind

Daisy (Q) ~ Tweaked

Daisy.queen she needed stripes. I'm the OA of the redone blank, and the old blank artists were Misty, Ash, and a few other users for minor tweaks. The reason why it looks so different from Skt's alt Q is probably due to our different shading. Sorrel Boom, boom, clap ♫ 01:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

The dorsal stripe on the tail seems to be fading? Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 10:35, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm just going off the alt Q, since it was posted first. It looks alright to me, it's just how it's been smudged. Sorrel Boom, boom, clap ♫ 14:18, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Rosepetal (A) - Tweaked

Rosepetal.apprentice - OA was me. Added stripes and fiddled with the shading a bit too ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 02:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Dawnpelt (W) ~ Tweaked

Dawnpelt.warrior OA is Mousetalon, redone artists are Scarletwind and Mistypebble and tweakers are Rowanflight and Scarletwind. Tweaked to add stripes. The highlights are irritating, making the stripes look funny. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:02, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Make sure to add a layer of shading over the stripes; they look kind of flat ScarletwindWibbly Wobbly Timey Wimey stuff… 05:06, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload I already did it, but I lightened the solid colour then darkened the shading over the tabby. That should look better. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 05:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Define the light on the legs ~ Fox ☁️🎶 Stay Beautiful 🎶☁️ 08:37, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 10:26, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

The stripes look kinda gray-ish? I still can't see light on the legs >.> Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 10:32, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 22:55, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Longtail (E) ~ Tweaked

Longtail.elder OA is Mosswhisker, Redone artist is Paleclaw and Tweakers are Sandstar12 and Hawkmask. Tweaked to change brown and elongate tail. Stealthf🔥re ❤Warriors Forever!❤ 06:32, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

Daisy (Lo) ~ Tweaked

Daisy.loner  Itsy bitsy Daisy I think I can post this. Silvermistie Dream it Back to Future✼ 11:50, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

they need to be smudged some. Skt ʕっ•ᴥ•ʔ⊃━☆゚. * ・ 。゚ 15:31, May 26, 2015 (UTC)

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