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I'm withdrawing this, becauese I'm gonna be on vacation starting tomorrow, and I know I won't have time for it. x3 -Ducksauce 21:12, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
May I take over, please? c: Bbunlegs 21:13, June 9, 2013 (UTC)
Re-up. Okay, taken over this. Comments? Bbunlegs 19:01, June 11, 2013 (UTC)
She's looking gray. Perhaps add some highlights on the white? Also, try shading with a layer of shading on the white, /then/ the layer with solid gray, then shading on the gray? That's what I've done before for bi-colored cats and I've found it's sorta easier to work with. —Garrusღ 02:56, 6/13/2013
Don't know if I'm repeating Are her back paws meant to be grey or is that shading? RavenDark as the Night09:42 Thu Jun 13
No, that's shading. The hind leg isn't hit by light at all, and I'll lighten the shading on the foot, since it's too dark for this shading. I'll try out Cloudy's suggestion, while I'm at it c: Bbunlegs 19:25, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
Re-up. How's this? Bbunlegs 19:43, June 13, 2013 (UTC)
Define the gray. ☀Iciloo☀ 12:23, June 14, 2013 (UTC)
Lighten the shading on the white. —Garrusღ 15:10, 6/14/2013
Re-up. I honestly think the gray's defined enough. However, if people disagree, I'll define it as much as I can. Bbunlegs 18:22, June 14, 2013 (UTC)
If you're not going to define the gray, may you at least define the shading? ☀Iciloo☀ 22:34, June 14, 2013 (UTC)
Re-up. Defined the shading on the gray. Bbunlegs 01:11, June 15, 2013 (UTC)
I can't really tell he's mottled? Looks like a texture to me...perhaps define the mottles? —Garrusღ 20:31, 6/16/2013
His mottles are no less defined than, say, Lakeshine or Applefur - just tighter together. I can edit them if I really need to, but I personally think they look fine. *shrug* -Raelic Non temete l'obscurità20:38 Sun Jun 16 2013 20:38, June 16, 2013 (UTC)