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Fircone (Ro) ~ Tweaked

Soo I lost the file for this. How the hell did I do the pattern before O_o OA was Rainlegs, Skt (I think?), and a redo by me. Redone because of the tortie vote. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 18:11, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Do you want the file? Some of the colors look a bit too orange/yellow. Rainlegs 19:30, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, please. Although I think some of the problem is the highlights. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 20:34, October 24, 2015 (UTC)

I think there is a tad more spacing between the markings, but I'm not so sure about that, given that this is facing a different side. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 07:16, October 28, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:23, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

Nooope, pattern hates me >_> Withdrawing. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:01, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded Took over. This was tweaked from the original. User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste by the paws. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 14:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 14:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I still see more waste on the paws - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 23:37,10/30/2015 23:37, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Any chance you could thicken the shading/add more on the tail, especially near the rump area? It pretty flat around there. Paleh Send help 07:20,10/31/2015

Smooth out the shading pls User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:17, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded @Winter: As much as i'd like to, I cannot without wrecking the whole image. I don't have the file, so smudging/blurring the shading will result in the torte markings getting wrecked. To add: it was approved this way. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:14, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Lichenfur (Lo) ~ Tweaked

OA’s are Iceheart22 Stoneclaw33 and tweakers are Mount Everest and Ducksplash. Tweaked to remove underbite.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 07:50, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

Lets see... Could you add more light on the main body? I don't know, it just seems really dark. Nice job! ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 10:03, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I think the light on the main body is fine. User:Burntclaw/Sig 10:04, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I still think it could be defined on the legs a little bit, if not on the main body. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 10:05, October 26, 2015 (UTC)

???...second...well...another opinion please?Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 01:47, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I think it's fine. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 01:51, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think the light on the legs could be defined- it looks like the entire thing is in shadow. —Jayce(01:53, 10/27/2015)

Reupload Wouldn't hurt to do it anyway.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 02:12, October 27, 2015 (UTC)

Can you define the overall shading a bit? It looks a bit flat to me...but that could be my iPad screen ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 03:39 Wed Oct 28

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:40, October 29, 2015 (UTC)

This might be an unpopular opinion, but I feel like doing a second tweak on shading is a bit too much for an image, and things start to lose their quality by then (unless the person has the file). Personally, I'd advise going back to the original image before the shading tweak (unless that tweak changed more than just shading), and modifying that instead. An image can only take so much shading/marking tweaks before it starts to just get a bit lost. If people aren't cool with this, I'd totally understand, I just think it would be the best option to end up with a good quality image. If you stick with this version, lighten up the shading and maybe add some highlights or something to recover the bits that have just gotten lost in the shading tweaks. Paleh Send help 02:24,10/30/2015

Alright, well I agree the shading needs to be darkened as I forgot to lower the opacity. The rest I'd like a second opinion please.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 06:59, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Why is everyone asking for a second opinion all of the sudden? Paleh knows very well what she's talking about- she used to be the project's deputy. It's not necessary to constantly ask for an opinion.... For all intents and purposes, I do agree with her though. Most of this image also appears to be in shading. —Jayce(04:45, 10/31/2015)

Reupload I was asking for second opinion because I didn't quite understand what Paleh mean't, and they seemed a but unsure themself. I've lowered the shading and I'm not sure highlights will bring up the spots in the shading. If the spots are still lost in the shading, can I have suggestions as to how to fix it?Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 01:20, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Well that's sort of the thing, at this point it'll be pretty difficult to bring out the parts lost in the shading, hence why I'd personally suggest using the last version before the shading tweak(s) were done if possible. Highlights run the risk of losing the markings, but they might be the best option if staying with this version of the image. Using a layer type like overlay might work a bit better than other options when it comes to not losing the markings though. Other than that, the best thing I can suggest is just to sort of thin the shading out, so it covers less of the image. But I'm not entirely sure what you're shading layer looks like, so I can't say whether that'll make the image flat again or not. But right now, the main parts that are getting a bit lost are the shoulder and the head, and to some degree both the far legs.

Also side note, can you add some extra shading to the bottom of the tail? It's pretty flat over there right now. Paleh Send help 09:48,11/1/2015

Fernshade (Star) ~ Tweaked

Fernshade is bae <3 Tweaked to remove white. OA was me.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  17:26, 29, 10, 2015

smudge/blur the pale part on her paws? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 23:41 Thu Oct 29

This is completely optional, just a matter of taste, but could you maybe tweak the pale colors hue to lean more towards orange than red, so it looks more cream rather than pink? Like I said, completely optional. Same applies to the other image if you go with it though. omg hi mounty Paleh Send help 02:16,10/30/2015

Re-uploaded Okie I think I got it. omg hi paleh  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  03:27, 30, 10, 2015

Hue's much better and I like this color, but it seems to have lightened up a bit, and I'm worried someone might mistake ot for white later and tweak it again. Maybe darken it just a couple shades to be on the safe side? If not, that's cool. Paleh Send help 03:56,10/30/2015

I personally have no problem with the color, just saying^^ ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (14:24,10/30/2015)

Maybe smudge the creamy part on the paw closest to us. It looks a bit hard-edged compared to her other markings. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 15:01, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  22:11, 31, 10, 2015

Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked

File:Dapplepelt.warrior.png OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload Iveh Yo! 03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern? Paleh Send help 03:54,10/30/2015

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:13,10/30/2015 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just me or my monitor but the new brown patches look kinda green? ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (14:25,10/30/2015)

There appears to be a bit of waste under her chin and around her tail. --Zootvine ^{the perzoot of happiness 18:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)}

Snow, Dapplepelt isn't actually described as dappled anywhere? Plus, dappled is a word used in warriors on more than just torties, and a word rarely used to describe cats outside of the series at all. So basically all it has to do is fit the definition of "spots or round patches" if they're described as dappled. It doesn't have any "official" link with any color or genetics or anything. Paleh Send help 19:05,10/30/2015

Paleh, I think you misunderstood. She's saying Dappled Pelt is described as an orange-and-white tortie, not that she's dappled. Her name in Dawn of the Clans and Moth Flight's Vision is Dappled Pelt, not Dapplepelt. —Jayce(19:12, 10/30/2015)

Ohhh whoops, my bad. I thought that didn't quite make sense... but anyways, where's the cite? I don't see it on the page. I get that it's in mothflight's vision, but it's not currently on the page, so Paleh Send help 04:40,10/31/2015

Well, the book's not released yet, so we can't officially add it. Winter got her copy before the release date. —Jayce(04:42, 10/31/2015)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked

File:Dapplepelt.mc.png^Same as above Iveh Yo! 03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:12,10/30/2015 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. david ^🌈 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (Ancient) ~ Tweaked

File:Dapplepelt.ancient.png david ^🌈 12:14, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Is that white pixel at the very top of the eye supposed to be eye shine/highlights, or did it just get missed when coloring? Paleh Send help 05:19,10/31/2015

i didnt touch the eye it was already there. david ^🌈 17:41, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Toadskip (W) - Tweaked

Darkened. OA was me. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:01, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Can you darken the base colour? It's very light.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:16, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Well, I don't have the file anymore, so the only thing I can really do is darken the imgae in general. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 21:22, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

I'd call the base dark brown, so I think it's fine anyways. Could you blur the shading on the shoulder (more specifically, the shading on the white)? Paleh Send help 04:29,10/31/2015

reuploaded Appledash ^{the light of honor} 15:25, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

The earpink is a bit too bright. Also, he needs blue eyes. Bluestar ^{Leaf flying in the wind} 17:36, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

reuploaded Appledash ^{the light of honor} 18:49, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

Smudge the white a bit more. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:10, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded: I blurred it instead b/c the white isn't supposed to be smudged ... Appledash ^{the light of honor} 07:40, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Bramblestar (W) - Tweaked

File:Bramblestar.warrior.png Fixed haunch stripes. OA was the lovely sandy, and Ivy, Bloo, Mounty, Ferk, and Beebs did stuff to it. I also redid it after. Comments? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 22:17, October 31, 2015 (UTC)

The vote didn't pass...? O.o - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:01,11/1/2015 04:01, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

I happen to be an idiot. Should I just withdraw this or wait until the vote passes? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 07:34, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

I think you should withdraw it for now, but feel free to repost it when the nomination passes. I don't think you'd lose your reservation on this - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 07:36,11/1/2015 07:36, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Hailstar (K) - Tweaked

Wrecked him. Lol. User:Burntclaw/Sig 03:09, November 1, 2015 (UTC)

Dappletail (A) ~ Tweaked

OAs were Nightshine, Raelic, and Iceheart. Tweaked for white patches - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 03:31,11/1/2015 03:31, November 1, 2015 (UTC)