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Dapplepelt (W) - Tweaked

File:Dapplepelt.warrior.png OA was me, tweaked to remove white. Not sure if this color looks ok but I'm not removing the patches. I think the eyes are also the wrong color (they were changed after I was done with them) so I'll fix that on this and the MC in my next reupload Iveh Yo! 03:46, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Could you add some more brown patches elsewhere to make these ones fit in better with the rest of the pattern? Paleh Send help 03:54,10/30/2015

Maybe make the patches black? If you don't want to, that's fine, though. I just think the brown color is a bit jarring. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 4:13 Fri Oct 30

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Same as the med. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:13,10/30/2015 09:13, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Hey ivy i have mfv right here and it says dappled pelt is an orange and white tortoiseshell. User:Winterflurry/Sig 12:41, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

It's probably just me or my monitor but the new brown patches look kinda green? ~ Cheryl _Champagne ^Problems 🍷 (14:25,10/30/2015)

There appears to be a bit of waste under her chin and around her tail. --Zootvine ^{the perzoot of happiness 18:02, October 30, 2015 (UTC)}

Snow, Dapplepelt isn't actually described as dappled anywhere? Plus, dappled is a word used in warriors on more than just torties, and a word rarely used to describe cats outside of the series at all. So basically all it has to do is fit the definition of "spots or round patches" if they're described as dappled. It doesn't have any "official" link with any color or genetics or anything. Paleh Send help 19:05,10/30/2015

Paleh, I think you misunderstood. She's saying Dappled Pelt is described as an orange-and-white tortie, not that she's dappled. Her name in Dawn of the Clans and Moth Flight's Vision is Dappled Pelt, not Dapplepelt. —Jayce(19:12, 10/30/2015)

Ohhh whoops, my bad. I thought that didn't quite make sense... but anyways, where's the cite? I don't see it on the page. I get that it's in mothflight's vision, but it's not currently on the page, so Paleh Send help 04:40,10/31/2015

Well, the book's not released yet, so we can't officially add it. Winter got her copy before the release date. —Jayce(04:42, 10/31/2015)

In that case, should we hold off her images then? I don't know when that's supposed to be released but if it's just going to be reverted, shouldn't the work not be put into it? Iveh Yo! 03:10, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Since she has a cite now for the white can we revoke the tweak nomination? Iveh Yo! 06:00, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

no because she's an orange-and-white tortoiseshell, therefore we need to get rid of the brown and reduce the amount of black, basically calling her a calico User:Winterflurry/Sig 13:13, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I think we can simply undo her tweak. She already has very little black on her, I don't think it matters. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 13:38 Tue Nov 3

It does matter because orange-and-white implies there's less black, and there was very little white on her to begin with User:Winterflurry/Sig 18:02, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

I can add more white but this tweak is to remove the white all together, totally different thing and from what I know we're not allowed to change what we were tweaking for initially. And this is a whole different tweak and my tweak time, as well as the others are nearly up Iveh Yo! 22:35, November 3, 2015 (UTC)

She was confirmed to be an orange-and-white tortie, so that nullifies the "removing the white" tweak- you'd be allowed to do what someone else suggests. Honestly, I also think you'd be allowed an extension, given that when this was put up, we were unaware of her description in Moth Flight's Vision. —Jayce(11:00, 11/4/2015)

Reuploaded I looked up orange and white tortie and this is what I'm sticking with because plenty of these came up in the search results. Imitating smudging without a smudging tool is difficult Iveh Yo! 07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the white. Also, the white looks gray - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 07:33,11/7/2015 07:33, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

But the shading has to be lighter on the white so that it doesn't look gray? I'm not really sure how to define it while at the same time, de-graying it? Iveh Yo! 07:40, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I actually think it's fine as it is... —Jayce(07:48, 11/7/2015)

I agree w/ Fox tbh. Please define the shading. The white only looks grey on the tail... User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:05, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

It looks good, but define the earpink a bit more? — Even the most simplest of lies can change everything. 20:03, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

I'm sorry, but I really, really cannot see the leg shading. Please define it. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I'm still not sure how to define it while making it less gray ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ any help? Iveh Yo! 05:57, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

I would say that you could add another layer of thinner, darker shading to define the shading on the legs a little more. Some highlights would also brighten up the white. Personally, only the white on the tail looks gray. perhaps you could possibly thin out the shading there, or reposition the white elsewhere. ~ Blossomstream^{The War Is Over} 06:00, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Dapplepelt (MC)- Tweaked

File:Dapplepelt.mc.png^Same as above Iveh Yo! 03:47, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 04:36, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Define the shading, especially on the paws - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 09:12,10/30/2015 09:12, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

her eyes should be gold. david ^🌈 11:38, October 30, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded Iveh Yo! 07:29, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Gray Wing (Ancient) ~ Declined

OA was me, tweaked to darken. It also killed the shading >_> Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Blur or smudge the highlights and shading - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:59,11/2/2015 10:59, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Still working?Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:54, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Declined. I'm sorry, a week without reuploads. User:Burntclaw/Sig 23:28, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Squirrelflight (Alt. Queen) ~ Tweaked

File:Squirrelflight.queen.alt.png OA was me, tweaked because the highlights were apparently throwing the color off. Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 09:05, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

There's waste - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:58,11/2/2015 10:58, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

And she still looks too light- Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 12:26,11/2/2015 12:26, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

Where is the waste? And also, unless my computer is screwing with colors or I need glasses, it's not too light. Which image are you comparing it to? Shinxy used Thunderbolt! 13:42, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

The waste is to --> side of the tail, near the top. Also, I think the image could be darkened just a tad more, as it is a bit lighter than the images you showed. —Ivy ☆ 22:12, November 2, 2015 (UTC)

its still lighter than the apprentice and such. david ^🌈 14:49, November 4, 2015 (UTC)

Still working? User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:30, November 6, 2015 (UTC)

Declined, sorry ;;;; User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:20, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reuploaded took over. if Shinx wants this ill gladly surrender this. User:Burntclaw/Sig 11:28, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Fernshade (W) ~ Tweaked

when yuo try your best but you don't succ

oa was scar, redone by night shine. tweaked to remove white ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:58 Wed Nov 4

could you define the shading? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:38,11/5/2015 08:38, November 5, 2015 (UTC)

still working? - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 02:47,11/8/2015 02:47, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Yes, I just haven't had time to do anything yet. I'll upload tonight. ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 03:19 Sun Nov 8

Re-uploaded im sorry night ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 11:57 Mon Nov 9

its still looking really white User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:47, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

unless you want it to not match this is the most i can do ★ Berry ★ ^{Midnight Monster's Parade!} 23:08 Mon Nov 9

Thorn ~ Tweaked

File:Thorn.rogue.png oa = skye - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 04:44,11/7/2015 04:44, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Is the ragged fur intentionally a lighter color than the lineart? Also, can you define the ear pink? I only just realized how badly I can't see it. —Jayce(07:44, 11/7/2015)

id probably get rid of the stuff on the ears, unless theres like a cite or something. theres not really enough fur to be messed up unless theyre like torn. david ^🌈 07:46, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded I thought I had to add ragged ears but whatever - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 08:50,11/7/2015 08:50, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

Oh, if it's part of the description, then keep it o.o Also, I'm still seeing some lighter ragged fur on the chest. —Jayce(08:54, 11/7/2015)

Re-uploaded Ok what I misread it was notched ears not ragged ears O.o - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 10:46,11/7/2015 10:46, November 7, 2015 (UTC)

This is the male blank. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 18:16 Sat Nov 7

Re-uploaded - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 00:04,11/9/2015

Sharpclaw (SC) (D) - Tweaked

File:Sharpclaw (SC).deputy.png Darkened. OAs are Stoneclaw and me. User:Burntclaw/Sig 02:46, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks kinda brown. Can you try making him more ginger? Appledash ^{the light of honor} 04:07, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Re-uploaded User:Burntclaw/Sig 04:13, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks too brown to me. Make him more orange, or maybe aim for a red sort of dark ginger like Russetfur or Flametail.Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:28, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

he looks perfectly ginger. david ^🌈 11:11, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

He still looks really brown. Appledash ^{the light of honor} 19:07, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

he looks pretty ginger to me User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:46, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Rain (Alt.E) ~ Tweaked

File:Rain.elder.alt.png OA is Iceheart22 and tweaker is Rowanflight. Tweaked for neon ear pink and scars and shading issues. I don't seem to have fixed it enough, the shading's so overblurred >< advice to fixing it?Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 09:15, November 8, 2015 (UTC)

Lighten the shading a lot. o.o It's really dark. —Jayce(09:27, 11/8/2015)

Reupload Argh it's even worse. Not sure how to fix it ><Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 05:12, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Can you dull the earpink/scar? The color still seems pretty bright. —Ivy ☆ 21:40, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Reupload Stealthf🔥re ^{❤Warriors Forever!❤} 21:51, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Spiderleg (A) ~ Tweaked

 OAs were Shimmerpool, Ivyheart, and SnowedLightning. Tweaked to restrict brown to underbelly only. --Zootvine ^{the perzoot of happiness 19:26, November 8, 2015 (UTC)}

define the shading User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:45, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

Larksong (Star) ~ Redone

File:Larksong.star.pngRedone to remove white. OA was Jayce.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  16:51, 09, 11, 2015

She needs ragged fur. bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 16:59 Mon Nov 9

Re-uploaded I totally forgot about the fur my bad  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  18:25, 09, 11, 2015

These both need some more black User:Winterflurry/Sig 22:44, November 9, 2015 (UTC)

I don't think the colors quite match. The darker ginger is #87441b and the creamy one is #cf8859. Would you like the file for the warrior? bcprincess ^{a giant woman} 2:15 Tue Nov 10

Sharpclaw (SC) (R) ~ Tweaked

File:Sharpclaw (SC).rogue.pngOAs were Shimmerpool and .DJAngelCandy, tweaked once by Hawkmask121. Tweaked to be dark ginger. --Zootvine ^{the perzoot of happiness 18:40, November 9, 2015 (UTC)}

Larksong (E) ~ Redone

File:Larksong.elder.pngRedone to remove white. OA was Jayce.  ʝΣηяѲ¢к   The Aftermath Is Secondary  19:06, 09, 11, 2015

Willowshine (Alt.) (K) - Tweaked

OAs were Frostheart and myself. tweaked for sourceless shading and earpink Splook ^{sweet  creature} 01:07 Tue Nov 10

I still can't see your light source. - Fox ^{僕たちはひとつの光} 01:25,11/10/2015

There also needs to be some depth on the tail and leg shading. Even if the light source landed both of them completely in the dark, they would still have shading to show depth, rather than being one solid color. Paleh Send help 05:20,11/10/2015